Stand United - JohnnyPear's Original Song

Hey guys, this was a project that I've started on the last year to help out a group of youtubers in a video.
This is the very first original song that I am uploading on the internet, I would like to hear your opinion about it, whether it's good, bad, or where I should improve in it. This is my first version and I intend to continue on working in the song and maybe adding some lyrics. Hope you all enjoy it!
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[@WaveGTO]

German RUclipsrs!!!
Waiting so long for this song! thx :)

[@Echo_049.-.]

Nice Johnny :)

[@srplopgaming]

Johnny Pear, why u don't upload a cover of a Ill Niño's song? Like Finger Painting, or Aliby of Tyrants.
Ty, and sorry for my bad english :/

[@JohnnyPear92]

I appreciate your coment very much mate :D Although I think that I will be over with bands covers from now :) I want to try and focus on doing my own arrangement and playing a full track of a video game or maybe a TV show theme, so if you have any idea on that, it will be all welcomed ;)