This was pretty well written. You're a good storyteller. I'm glad I found you! I think the way you present yourself while you're narrating is good. Having a set image, the one constant in the story if you will, is a good idea. Viewers will know what to expect and find comfort during the telling of a horrific story. Just my take. 😉 I'm a writer and editor, too. If you ever need a fresh set of eyes prior to publication I'd be glad to help.😊
Hey thanks for the kind note! I would actually love that, even just someone to talk shop with. What kind of stuff do you write? Drop me an email joe@historyhobbit.com and let’s talk more!
You're a great story teller. I think this channel will blow up at some point. Maybe you could tone down the colors on your own image though? Something about it seems a bit artificial.
@@autodidacticasaurus oh okay fair. I agree with you, especially for this type of story. Did you enjoy the background character development or would you prefer I go straight into the event?
This was pretty well written. You're a good storyteller. I'm glad I found you!
I think the way you present yourself while you're narrating is good. Having a set image, the one constant in the story if you will, is a good idea. Viewers will know what to expect and find comfort during the telling of a horrific story. Just my take. 😉
I'm a writer and editor, too. If you ever need a fresh set of eyes prior to publication I'd be glad to help.😊
Hey thanks for the kind note! I would actually love that, even just someone to talk shop with. What kind of stuff do you write? Drop me an email joe@historyhobbit.com and let’s talk more!
Man, I’m spooked and I’ve only started listening
You're a great story teller. I think this channel will blow up at some point. Maybe you could tone down the colors on your own image though? Something about it seems a bit artificial.
Thank you! Like just the still images or the B roll video clips too?
@@historyhobbitofficial I mean where you're talking into the mic.
@@autodidacticasaurus oh okay fair. I agree with you, especially for this type of story. Did you enjoy the background character development or would you prefer I go straight into the event?
@@historyhobbitofficial I thought that was great! You're very creative and compelling. Something different in this genre.
@@autodidacticasaurus thanks for that! That’s definitely the goal, there’s so much of this type of content out there wanna be a little different :)