TRAVELER-FEATHER [Complete Jayfeather time travel themed Warriors MAP]
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- Опубликовано: 30 сен 2024
- Traveler-Feather is about the never ending time loop of pain and revenge that Jayfeather and Fallenleaves are trapped in until one of them finally decides to make a change. In this AU, Fallenleaves lives in modern day thunderclan and it's Fallenleaves who falls through the ice!
The mystery of the tunnels, Fallen leaves, Rock, and time travel have always been my favorite subplot of warrior cats. But despite all it's potential to be an interesting and compelling story, I've always felt let down by the direction that canon Warriors took. So I've been messing around with these story elements and trying to piece together some narrative I felt would meet that potential. Song choice after song choice, plot theme after plot theme, script after script... nothing seem to hit right until 3 years later... I finally came up with Traveler-Feather!
SONG: Skeleton Song by Kate Nash
END CREDITS SONG: Windmills of Your Mind by Dusty Springfield
MAP part playlist: • Traveler Feather PARTS
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STORYBOARD: • Traveler-Feather // Sk...
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-PARTICIPANTS-
intro: Kittlet
1: Sundyr + Bregottski
2: Mochi Kohai + CheetehZ + OFUKITTY + SmellyTrashRat
3: senswii + Cante Skuya
4: Yeshika
5: IvyBall + Coffeely
6: DirtyNoodles
7: LenisLynx
8: Cameron Collar
9: ScooterScones
10: Dave + Tad + Riin
11:SolarSparky
12: Treeetooop
13: Sagutoyas
14: Shelly Key
15: LockandKeyHyena
16: EphemeralMoth + giingersnaps
17: Autumn Lynx
18: Koheina
19: Pandaa + CheetehZ + KuroFennek
20a: peacat
20b: Nettlefang
21a: Nuube
21b: Owlipoppen + Sparroet + Giingersnaps + OFUKITTY
22: kirikerise
23: CustradCrev
24: Kalublah Art
25: Bregottski
26: relli
27: TurnipStewdios
28: mobiusghost
29: Rookruff
30: Lucidcolors
31: ThatOnePerson
32: Rotriestre
33: draivysand
34: pokefan1241
35: Riin
36: Luyeshin + Ironyche
37a: CheetehZ + Sparroet
37b: CheetehZ + Loporidae + teekonu + darkpurplx + OFUKITTY
38: CheetehZ + Loporidae + SmellyTrashRat
39: Sparroet
40: teekonu
41: GiingerSnaps
42: Galaxy Mew
43: Aspen Shadow
44: chadisms + cante skuya + OFUKITTY
45: cinnabarlab
46: Thunder Streak
47: mossysprout + peacat
48: darkpurplx
49a: Shenkkazoo
49b: Roseshards
50: melowon_Z
51: aridarchen
52: Luyeshin + Dave + CheetehZ + raevei
53: rexasawrus
54: kratertot + Ashuribbon
55: Sqwid + CheetehZ
56: MuneAJ
57: outsock + Cante Skuya + Ashuribbon
58: HJ7 + sparroet
59: HYP3R-CHARG3D + Loporidae
60: roseshards
61: roseshards
62: CheekyTiger
63: Felitt
64: Nettlefang
65: CheetehZ + rookruff + sparroet
66: MANCHKIN!
67: Kiki Chaos
68: Eqqnoq + SolarSparky + CheetehZ
69: LunarTempest + FISHSOCKS +cerkowah + Erm + Sparroet
70: Sear + Galaxymew + Bolitamurcielago
Finale: Loporidae + Sunbird
c1: Jaytail
c2: Giingersnaps
c3: sparroet
c4: Vyrite
c5: Peacat
c6: elqato
c7: Relli
c8: HYP3R-CHARG3D
c9: ThatOnePerson
c10: Ashuribbon
c11: CheetehZ
c12: SmellyTrashRat
c13: Pigeocore + CheetehZ
Traveler-feather "Look, it's a bear!": Sqwid + CheetehZ
Thumbnail winner: illbringyoudown
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I’m not even joking this MAP brought me to tears. The concept of Jayfeather being Rock was outstanding and it worked so well, and the thought of the constant loop broke my heart. The seeking of vengeance from both sides bringing on the loop was such good storytelling, and the animators did so damn well portraying every emotion and scene. Well done CheetehZ, and well done to the participants, this was gorgeous, and I won’t be forgetting this.
i only read the first like two warriors series and even i teared up because thats how good the animation is
Same here!
Omg hey Navi
@@BitterCyder omg hey 🥵
I like it but I didn't cry
One thing I didn't notice in the first time is the fact of the start of the MAP is actually an auternative final where Fallenleafs doesn't save Rock and leaves him to die in the mud, my mind is 🤯🤯🤯 now
That's probably the change mentioned in the desc. :3
I think it's meant to be flametail
@@Cloudywarrior1
It’s Fallen leafs, read the description
Oh yeah, so it’s like Fallenleafs is trapped in Flametail’s body and the same with Rock and Jayfeather?
I don’t think it’s supposed to be an “alternative” it’s just set up to show us fallens spirit
Damnnn I didn't watch the whole storyboard nor read the script and BRO Jayfeather being Rock just caught me SO off-guard, that was the plot twist of the century holy shit
The was honestly what caught me off-guard aswell. In the middle of it I was like "Oh my god, they are killing eachother over and over again".
Oh hi bloodmoon
That caught me so off guard too, I was speechless :O BUT it makes so much sense?? He had the stick, he was blind, he was connected to the past and to the tunnels... honestly, Warriors did a missed opportunity here!
@@HiHi-lt1cb TOTALLY!! Plus, they implied that Rock became hairless through the passage of time and still had patches of grey fur!
Same bro
Most AU maps are extremely hard to follow without reading paragraphs of context. This one is absolutely fantastic though, made sense all the way through and was gorgeous on top of it~
I think that Cheeteh is great at it in general
I just rewatched it a few times and I understood. I really love writing and I've seen many stories like this, but this one is really well written and pretty genius.
It’s Very easy to understand, while being both gorgeous and wholesome near the end.
it took me a few watches to realise what is going on :
Exactly
It's kinda crazy because I feel people forget that time travel was actually a thing in the series (not something made up with the whole Time Machine AU maps) And yes, it would have been cool to see more of it in the canon, but I suppose Jayfeather being able to go back in time was because he had the stars in his paws, he was an important cat of a prophecy.
The way Jayfeather looks around at 4:49 as though he's almost expecting someone to show up and stop him is so
YEAAHH
I didnt even notice that! I thought he was looking around for help.
@@jazzycat1309 hes still blind! the reason he looks around or even directly looks at fallenleaves in some scenes is because he hears fallenleaves. also blind people can look around lol
I forgot Jayfeather is blind. He literally can’t look around for help 💀
@@vixy2321BAHAHAHA
Ending the cycle, healing, hurting, revenge, the five stages of grief, everything about this map puts the greatest aspects of a cinematic masterpiece into a 2 minute work of art and I’m here for it
there really are undead zombie cats and time/space portals in the more recent series
Ima be ur 1k like
@@Nancyanime1 ooo nice
And the only reason it ended is because that one Jayfeather was clumsy
This is actually gorgeous. The animation, the smooth storytelling, and the way it portrayed Jayfeather’s panic/anger at Rock for not letting him risk himself for Fallenleaves was amazing. The fact Jayfeather’s blind and the frustration he must have felt to not be able to see Fallenleaves in the water, of how he must have dreaded him being so close to grab yet he literally couldn’t find him. And how he might have been able to save him had he not been dragged back up himself and the possible guilt, i can’t describe it but that part nearly brought me to tears. This MAP is definitely one of the best in Warriors animations.
I thought it was Flametail-
@@lum1nance In this MAP AU, it's Fallenleaves. Love the FallenFlame mash up though.
I have traveled so long.. trying to find a masterpiece.. looks like i finally found it! I honestly cant believe my eyes, this looks AMAZING! I have seen some of the parts and WOW, they all are so unique! Everyone should be proud of themselves
Im so HYPEDDD
AHHH IM SO HYPEEEEDDD
HYPE HYPE HYPE
I FOUND YOUHAHAHAHAHAH@@BitterCyder
IT WAS AMAZING
s/o to everyone got the special deluxe edition thumbnail i made
"HERE IT COMES"
Late, but I saw it, thank you for blessing my eyes. That thumbnail was beautiful in all it's tornadoey gorgeousness.
help- I can't see it-
@@WeeWoo_2 it was only there for a bit before it was changed
ohhh
I'm at a loss for words, every single part is just gorgeous and the editing and backgrounds AND LIGHTING AND ATMOSPHERE,, yet another masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!! All of these maps belong in warrior cat history
Wow this is so cool!
I agree :)
Indeed.
Never expected to see you here, But I agree!
Whoa ur here !!!!!
This ain't a map- No, this was a MOVIE
This was actually amazing, Ik a lot of people already said this but the idea of Jayfeather actually being Rock was amazing, and each and every part was amazing! Each part of this MAP was just great!
the part at 0:20 is my favorite bc of jayfeathers blank expression until he hears fallenleaves and gets all happy it’s so cute
And blushing too
The animation and artstyle looks so nice too!
thats not fallen leaves that's flametail
(They're both male💀)
@@MothimMovin00 man let us have this 💀
@@MothimMovin00what’s wrong with them both being male?
Was an HONOUR to participate in this MAP, I am SO SO EXCITED to see it all put together, I already knows its going to look flippin beautiful! That thumbnail too oh WoW ?!
The fallenleaves/flametail and jayfeather/rock is a really creative idea!! I absolutely love this MAP, the Valentines Day map thingie is so great. Your maps are my favorite!! This is my new favorite song C:
ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MAPS EVER!! Seriously the plot is so well thought out, all the sets and character designs are gorgeous... who knew that the battle cats could be this interesting?? Thanks so much for having me Cheetz!
You did SO well, your part was one of my favourites! You made such meaningful expressions and I could really see the emotion they were feeling
@@Bashfulhyena ahhh thank you so much!! means a lot
For a second I thought Fallenleaves was Flametail, did anybody else think that?
Yes, I watched it several times and until now I beleived it was FlameTail.
Wow. This might just be the best warrior cats map I’ve ever seen! The parts flow along so smoothly,,, the story was amazing and I wasn’t expecting that since I didn’t read the script for it. I don’t even need to now, this map perfectly portrays what’s going on and I don’t even need to read anything. You can tell how hard the hosts worked on this map and all the other participants too!! Outstanding job to everyone to participated in this map!!
Im crying over this. The transitions are so clean and every part is so perfect. This really makes you feel for the characters
I don't know if I have ever seen a Warriors MAP so creative and thought out, it actually made me think and analyze what was happening, and it was just an absolute gorgeous thing to watch. Thank you for all the talented animators who did so well to make this, and again kudos to Cheeteh for just making these stellar pieces of art. I hope to join one of these MAPs one day, but until then, keep up the great work!!
I’m generally most of a ghost follower but I couldn’t just watch this map and say nothing about it. It is one of the most beautiful and breathtaking map I’ve ever seen. All the animators did an incredible work, I can’t even express the emotions it brought me, and the host always has so great ideas, we can never be disappointed. Seeing this project take form and ending up so amazing was a real pleasure. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to watch this incredible work of art ! 😍
This MAP was very, very well done! Everyone who took part from the thumbnails to the animation, and the overall final product did a marvelous job and it is very impressive to see it all come together. To end off, I just wanted to give my congratulations to all who participated and say they should all be very proud of themselves and the work they have done. Never stop doing what you love cause your skills can contribute to more masterpieces such as this!!
I have no words. The amount of effort, passion & love put into this is amazing! the story kind of reminds me of a post by captain-lovelace that goes: A time loop story takes the fact that any story can be reread, rewatched, relistened to forever without ever changing the end, and makes that a literal function of the story, the infinite repeatability becoming the driving factor. And then the story says "but what if the infinite repeating cycles did change? What if it was possible to get it right, to break the loop, to free yourself from the narrative? What if the universe (the reader, the author) wants you to get it right, no matter the cost?"
i'm happy they got it right in the end
CHEEETZ it was such a great time being apart of this map and seeing everyone work on it and the progress has been so nice to see and seeing people work together is jsut a a a a athank you again for having me in the map
I seriously can not get over the cute interaction in the beginning, it was just too great! I just can't get over the creativity of this story! It's such a nice twist on things, that has both it's ups and downs! This was just so emotional, and it's truly hard to not shed a tear at the end! Amazing map everyone!
I've been seeing everyone's parts and I knew that this map was going to be epic🔥🔥🔥
4:16 you have started crying and you know it
Everytime I watch that part it gets me
No I’m just cosplaying as a waterfall obv
this map was such a joy to be a part of, everyone was so supportive and it was amazing to see it come together under such a short span of time!! thank you for having me among this amazing group of artists!
No words, just awe and tears!!! 💖 "Windmills of Your Mind" was the perfect cherry! 👏
the time loop concept is absolutely ingenious and it's pulled off SO well by everyone!! I can't think of another MAP with as much wonderful & deep storytelling. A masterpiece!! 💖👏👏👏
5:41 I love how in this part it can look like they're both trying to reach each other on either side of their deaths. (Jayfeather trying to reach fallenleaves while he's drowning, but can also look like him falling from the cliff to the fire.)
Lemme just say this.
This is the most gorgeous Warriors MAP i have ever seen - and I've seen a few. It has probably the most creative and moving concept - focusing on Jayfeather/Rock and Fallen Leaves' relationship, and the neverending loop of revenge and death,,, it has stunned me to words. The fact that Jay is Rock is such an intricate concept that really should be explored more in the books. The whole aesthetic, the designs, the pace, the animation,, just so fluid and beautiful. I can't wait to watch this over and over again
2:42 The way Rock INSISTED on killing the poor butterfly
LMAO-
He’s was like: “ DIE “
Rip
The concept of the Map is already brilliant! The thumbnail is a masterpiece, I've seen some gorgeous parts, there's nothing to go wrong
Im gonna say it straight, i teared up a little. The only other maps that gave me chills were probably rory and poor george, this is god tier. (Not tryna compare maps, just saying this is up with my personal favorites that made me feel a certain way)
so exciting to be apart of such a big project with such rad people!!! so cool watching it all come together
Little details that, the cats, even when alive dont end up "paw-touching" each other, fallenleaves try to help jayfeather up, by giving him his paw, jayfeather takes it away. jayfeather tries to touch his paw, fallenleaves takes it away. this map honestly made me cry, by how they were stuck on this forever and ever loop untill one decides to make a change, ending it and taking them out of the loop.
THIS WAS SO HEARTBREAKING AND HEARTWARMINGGGGG, THE FRIENDSHIP GOING ON IN THIS IS ADORABLE! THE IDEA IS SO ORIGINAL AND I LOVE IT! THIS MAP WAS SO COOL!!!!! YOU NEVER FAIL TO I PRESS US WITH YOUR MAPS CHEETAH ❤️
I didn’t ever watch it to the very end- but 7:00
I can't wait! I've been looking at everybody's map parts, I'm very excited for the complete map! :D
this one like blew my mind cheetz
2:04 *Flashbacks to little nightmares 2 ending*
This is the first time I’ve rewatched it in around a year, and holy shit it has me in tears all over again.
Dang, I almost didnt think this would get done!! But goly this is such a massive project, it's incredible how quickly everyone has worked!!
This is going to be amazing
am i the only one who noticed that at 0:13 fallenleaves turned into a darkforest cat?
Its kinda apart of the story of this
Really amazing work from everyone who worked on this! I adore how the community can make such interesting stories with pre-existing characters come to life! it takes an incredible amount of talent and hard work! great job to everyone!
This map is beautiful, everyone did such a good job. The plot is easy to follow and just so emotional. I absolutely love the repeated scenes but every time it's shown there's a slight difference to it, it's amazing!!!
YESSSS LETS GOOOO I have been waiting for this to come outttttt when I saw the map call I was so excited Vaiagaisbajb
That final shot almost had me in floods of tears, the whole MAP is a complete masterpiece
GOD THIS MAP WAS SO STUNNING AND GAVE ME LITERAL CHILLS NO JOKE
The emotion was so well achieved by the animators and everyone did such an incredible job. The relationship between these two shown is incredible and the concept of jayfeather being rock is so interesting!!!
This is probably one of my personal favorites I’m so excited to see the next project!!
2:20 is my favourite.. goes so well with the music the timing so good... love it!!
Everything about this is legendary!! Atmospheric, breathtaking and emotional, easily one my favorite maps. Even the credits are beautiful. Fantastic work!!
i honestly would LOVE a movie like this, the fact that so many emotions are packed into such a short video is incredible, everyone did so well!! the story is AWESOME :0
Actually managed to keep myself from watching ALL of the parts beforehand, so this'll be partially a surprise :0
good job honestly i like I’ve seen every map part at least three times lmao, idk how ppl can avoid it. Im still so excited for this though!
Bro saaaaaame. I’ve only watched part 16 every day this map doesn’t come out so I have at least something to watch
dude, it's so beautiful.. all the authors are in this map.. simply.. in general, it's just a MASTERPIECE!!! I already cried out of sentimentality at the end
im so honored to have helped out with this wonderful project!! everyone put so much hard work into their parts and it truly paid off, the final piece is absolutely stunning! i'm so proud of everyone!!! and thank you so much for having me
How many times have you watch this? Me: 👾
Wow everyone finished their parts fast now that is some speed, it never felt that long and it’s a perfect valentines gift. Can’t wait for the premiere ^^
*edit: legit almost cried I love this au it’s so nice and just crying ^^ everyone did so great. Congrats on another successful map*
1:21 this scene bring the fallen leave from the first scene and the dead fallen leave, as if old fallen leave was the reason the cycle ended
Fun fact Number One: whether intentional or not, at 0:35 you see a bit of foreshadowing 🦋
Is it because jay feather tries to hold fallen leaves hand?
Omg....
This is... AMAZING this is so creative and cool, the best way to change the story, and I absolutely love this time loop, its amazing! And the end cradits were so cool too! Perfectly synchronized with the music! And the pictures are cool too! I love it when people who host MAPs include those at the end, this is so cool!
Watch after credits pls, omg i laughed out loud!
6:46
this is so cool :o!! the colors were so pretty and everyone’s styles looked great together! these new maps are so creative,,,
actually, this is one of the most beautiful and meaningful maps i’ve ever seen. the message in it is amazing.
Cheetah, I am very happy to have participated in this MAP! It was such an honor to have been in this MAP with many great artists through and through! To see the finished result really captured my heart and I'm thankful to have helped!! I definitely look forward to joining your future MAPs!!
Soo excited omggg!
So, I'm rewatching all the maps and I realized there's technically two jay Feathers, this one from here which turns into Rock, and the other one with the Hollyfawn map, but now I have a major question, what importance does this Jayfeather Rock and the Fallenleaves Flametail have to do with the whole timeline? Is it just that they stopped Jayfeather from dying in the future or is there more to it?
I don't think this one is in the same timeline, in the last map(serpent and the starts) at the end of the script there is the order of the maps that creates the timeline and it's this "Cowboy Mapleshade > Pirate Scourge >Werewhisker > Serpent Sol > Sharpen Your Teeth > Coda: Sol’s Trust > Hawkstorm > Bramblefur > Coda: Bramblefur’s Ashes > Hollyfawn > Codas: Resignation, Friends, March, Humanity > Serpent and the Stars" so i don't think it's part of it
@@Reddy_Hakai i guess it is just another alternative universe
I truly love how chaoic yet organized this is, Ive spent like an hour trying to orginize these
The dedication required to get this map working really paid off. Everyone’s parts came through awesome in all the key points of the story and was Brought together by an amazing map artist cheetz. A seriously good work to be proud of.
i LOVE this animation and he creativeness with three characters. But i have to ask, how do we know Rock was Jaytheather
God I love this map, the concept behind it is amazing and the whole thing is gorgeous. Cheeteh z has never made a bad map, everything is so touching and beautiful I love it! The concept of Jay being Rock is so so cool and I'm in love with it, amazing work! All of the animators came together to create something amazing guided by one of the most creative and cool members of this community. Stunning work.
me: bro these always got me sobbing on my keyboard
Mom: walks in*
Mom: what u cryin bout
me: crys harder*
It's butterfly's fault 0:44
Grr.. mean butterfly!
Day 3 of watching Traveller feather 😍
oh man , cheetz rocks up to the party with their insane concepts and then the warriors animators are quick to follow to bring something so incredible to life, everyone should be so proud , all the little details shown in each part is just , mind blowing!!
can we talk about how cool those credits are aswell ? it’s wicked !!
Except that in the MAP, it’s not Flametail, but Fallen Leaves
I'm in love with Jay's fur! right under his eyes, it's so amazing. This whole story is so beautiful. The scene at 1:44 where Jay is looking at the portal (made by Turnip Studios) is so incredible! We need that in a movie!
Oh man this was a pleasant surprise to see in my recommendation this morning!! Wonderful job everyone!! This was 101% worth the wait!
Out of joke, everyone forgets that three events of this map happend in the books :v
1. Jayfeather forced to give up saving Flametail
2. Jayfeather almost drowns in The Last Hope
3. Flametail hold resentment for Jayfeather not saving him
Flametail is replaced with Fallen leaves tho
5:24 oh god the portals growing hands
ALSO THE PARTICIPANTS YALL ARE WAY TOO GOOD LIKE WTH
The parts are so smooth/flow so well together and also the backgrounds are SO good
Now like I’m just gonna watch this like 100 more times
i swear every map concept CheetehZ makes feels like a short movie.
0:54 really has a lot of emotion to it, the fear and imidiate response
This will definitely go down in Warrior Cat history. Mark my word, this is amazing! Everyone did an amazing job!
This is a masterpiece! The outcome is spectacular, the plot and the animation is amazing. The animators and you have put a lot of hard work into this.
Eu adorei ver personagens indo para o futuro e para o passado e para o presente e cada uma noção de tristeza e raiva e angústia acabou aparecendo muitas vezes nessas animações Eu adorei fez até chorar lágrimas❤❤❤
It’s Jayfeathers canon event
0:11 ,I SAW THE EXACT SAME BUTTERFLY NEAR MY GLASS FRONT DOOR(anyone here in 2024?)
OH MY GOD- I AM SO EXCITED FOR THISI MAP, I CANT BE,IEVE I DIDINT DO MORE FANART
Woahhh! This is genuinely one of the best maps I’ve ever seen! I love the idea of flametail trying to get revenge on jayfeather and then jay getting revenge for that and so on, this is so creative! -Sun
There is SO MUCH in this MAP! The story is so enthralling, and each part tells it beautifully. Everyone involved (especially the host) clearly put a lot of time, thought, and talent into this. Cheers, this is awesome!
Ahh so I see, in the beginning Fallen Leaves lets Jayfeather die in the pool and the breaking of the cycle is when he decides to save him at the end. Plus his turning from a blue outline into a red outline showing that he's gonna show his younger self the portal to the fiery caves! And after Fallen Leaves leaves those caves after killing Jayfeather 2:13, it shows how it cycles back through from Fallen's parents, to him as a kit, to him and Jayfeather as it reaches that moment again.
This was so thought through!
Fallenleaves has amoungus eyes 4:23
Warning:this may make you cry
Btw this is a MASTERPIECE it’s so amazing and all the artists did such a good job!
I have been waiting for this!
Oh,and the waiting was worth it...CheetZ,your maps are always so gorgeous and perfect! Your such a big inspiration for me and for this comunity!
Thank you for everything!
crying over silly little cats ...
OMG I CAN'T WAIT! AAAAA THIS IS GONNA BE AMAZING!
Кхем, русские.. тоесть Воробей это Утёс, который давно забытый и преданный Огнехвостым? А САМ Огнехвост, это ЛИСТОПАД!? или я чего то не поняла..
FAVORITE MAP BY FAR!!! Everyones part were amazing and beautiful, the choice of music and storyboard just tied it all together
I love how 0:37 mirrors 4:26 where jay try’s to touch fallen leaves paw. It’s such a cute detail.
when they were fading together it just so warm and so heartbreak at the same time…
oh my god i had to watch it twice to understand the story and GOD when darkleaf and rock started fading away i actually started tearing up 😭 this was so beautiful !!!! i think this is the most peoplve ive seen work on a MAP project and everyone did fantastic with the sets and colors and just everything!!!