Adding Supporting Characters to Your Story: 10 Tips

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  • Опубликовано: 26 дек 2024

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  • @sploogecarp814
    @sploogecarp814 6 лет назад +24

    Tip #2 is actually really relevant nowadays because of how common of a mistake it is. Like in a web comic called "Homestuck" tons of characters are introduced, but are forgotten quickly because the story needs to focus on this other group of characters. This creates a huge problem if your favorite character gets forgotten, especially in the fanbase.

  • @Merisu_Sheep
    @Merisu_Sheep 6 лет назад +90

    I think this series is very helpful to me since I wanna write a comic as well. So THANK You

  • @jQ_theeNHK
    @jQ_theeNHK 6 лет назад +19

    As a budding artist/novelist, I just wanted to say much much I appreciate this video series and how invaluable I find your insight. Your video on composition inspired me to pick up Brody's Ghost and you have been ordained my obi wan! Keep up the amazing content!

  • @ArtbyGalen
    @ArtbyGalen 6 лет назад +43

    Thank you so much for making this series, Mark. It's my absolute favorite series on your channel, and quite honestly, to me, has been one of the most useful series of videos that I've encountered on youtube. So much appreciation!

  • @equesdeventusoccasus
    @equesdeventusoccasus 6 лет назад +24

    Isaac Asimov, once admonished would be writers that if you want your supporting character to swing his large heavy tail at a bad guy in a fight on page 200, be sure the reader trips over that tail before page twenty, otherwise it will seem too Deus Ex Machina.

  • @ggj2
    @ggj2 6 лет назад +17

    Steve Urkel is also a supporting character who became more popular than the main cast.

  • @kestune352
    @kestune352 6 лет назад +25

    "Have them actually doing things in the story, you don't want them just being a sort of mouthpiece, someone who just gives information and does nothing else that's essential to the plot." *looks at Fi from LoZ Skyward Sword*

  • @StarshipMinglePRODS
    @StarshipMinglePRODS 6 лет назад +55

    Wilson was a volleyball man 😂

    • @pandaartz862
      @pandaartz862 6 лет назад +1

      AsteroidBlue lol I was just thinking that 😂

  • @varuntulsyan2558
    @varuntulsyan2558 6 лет назад +5

    Your videos are VERY much appreciated Mark! They make me a better artist, and they make me happy!!!☺

  • @esthers5876
    @esthers5876 6 лет назад +3

    Great points about storytelling,. It explains why your stories are so tight and captivating. Thanks for sharing! And I'm looking forward to your new book!

  • @theberrby6836
    @theberrby6836 6 лет назад +1

    Last one? Not the last one!?
    Thank you so much for this continuous series Mr. Mark Crilley. It's so helpful, and will continue to be.
    As well as your other tips & tricks.~
    Thank you!

  • @hamdan8516
    @hamdan8516 6 лет назад +5

    Beautiful drawing

  • @brockenjuckbox3481
    @brockenjuckbox3481 6 лет назад +1

    love your vid man, the combination of your chill voice and the drawing its really calming

  • @Zaxnafein
    @Zaxnafein 6 лет назад +1

    Congrats on the new book! Excited for the reveal:)

  • @Mesco-yw9gi
    @Mesco-yw9gi 6 лет назад

    I ordered your new book and can't wait to get it. Good luck Mark.

  • @autumnparks
    @autumnparks 6 лет назад +1

    I just want to thank you for your videos! I only recently discovered your channel. I appreciate the practicality of your advice as well as your sense of humor. You come off as a person who just genuinely enjoys what he does and wants to help others out.
    Cheers! God bless!

  • @umiutani9073
    @umiutani9073 6 лет назад +1

    Mark, could you do a video on hair movement? I know you're probably like "HAIR. MORE HAIR." But like how do you do hair in motion? Like a hair flip or a hand moving through it, or wet hair too. I'm really struggling with this with how much detail to put and where to out it.

  • @johnnycarrasco1249
    @johnnycarrasco1249 4 года назад +1

    Love ur work dude. Keep it up. This helps me in my storytelling. Thks

  • @FilipOutOfNowhere
    @FilipOutOfNowhere 6 лет назад +6

    I alwas wait for the new advices from you. You're the best.

  • @statelessfgc1069
    @statelessfgc1069 6 лет назад

    My comic has a cast of 1 main character' 1 sidekick type character, and 6 supporting characters so I'll make sure to keep these tips in mind as I continue to write them!

  • @CD12338
    @CD12338 6 лет назад

    Thank you Mark. This is very helpful as I am working on a story myself. And I really want to focus on the character development of main character and supporting characters. So later on, the death of them can be more impactful. Wanna make the readers cry.

  • @linzertube
    @linzertube 6 лет назад

    Great writing tips! And, Woohooo! Congratulations on your upcoming book release, Mark! It looks fantastic!

  • @hollyfortier3731
    @hollyfortier3731 6 лет назад

    Thank you so much for providing so many tips throughout ur RUclips videos. U rock Mr. Mark Crilley!

  • @neonrogueee
    @neonrogueee 6 лет назад

    Another video apart of the creative process,I like it

  • @mrmarshmellow843
    @mrmarshmellow843 6 лет назад +1

    I luv your videos my art teacher is a huge fan, so am i and he uses your videos to help us out and to push us from our expectations! :D

  • @The_Burning_Sensation
    @The_Burning_Sensation 6 лет назад

    I really enjoy your episodes on writing.

  • @NKSProductions
    @NKSProductions 6 лет назад +3

    Even before I watch your video, I know it's going to be good!

  • @ghostofcanidstheinnovator4275
    @ghostofcanidstheinnovator4275 6 лет назад

    Thanks a lot Mark Crilley. This is what I waited for, I am currently trying to figure out how my comic/manga/graphic novel have interesting characters since most of the story focuses on the main character.

  • @gavinjustement1217
    @gavinjustement1217 6 лет назад +5

    These are always my favorite videos! Thank you for being a true Crilley😃

  • @MisterCastro5
    @MisterCastro5 6 лет назад +1

    Great video, another great example is Space Odyssey

  • @PochotheEntity
    @PochotheEntity 6 лет назад

    This is great advice mark THANK YOU!!

  • @daddyike5676
    @daddyike5676 6 лет назад

    Haha, in the ways I'm doing my plot and story, almost all of the characters are destined to die.
    It's fun to be an author, and it's also fun to keep your audience guessing who will die.
    Oh the joy!
    Oh, and great video Mark. I kinda stopped drawing stuff years ago but seeing you draw kinda makes me want to get back on to it.

  • @scrap8660
    @scrap8660 6 лет назад +1

    I just realised I made the perfect support character for my comic after watching this

  • @FloatingSunfish
    @FloatingSunfish 6 лет назад +1

    Can't wait for the sequel to your awesome book, *"The Two Asparagus Method."*

  • @Cantrona
    @Cantrona 6 лет назад +8

    How many times did you include the phrase "trusty black prisma colour" in your new book Mark? hahah
    Congratz on announcing it!!

  • @theberrby6836
    @theberrby6836 6 лет назад

    Wow, can't wait for that book!

  • @yesshuayarrden777
    @yesshuayarrden777 6 лет назад

    Thank you for all the tutorials markcrilley
    I learned to draw better and even wrote a book
    Keep up The good work

  • @daydreameraesthetic7639
    @daydreameraesthetic7639 6 лет назад +2

    Can you make a video describing what certain terms mean in drawing? Such as foreshortening?
    And thank you for all the great videos they sure make learning a lot easier.

    • @thepochade5992
      @thepochade5992 6 лет назад +2

      AnimeloverKyoko Shimizu .. Foreshortening is drawing something in perspective. Making what's close to you look larger in respect to the part of the person or object that is further away.
      Example is if you draw an arm and hand that is pointing at you it will have been foreshortened in order to look correct in perspective with the hand large and the shoulder small in the near distance. I hope that makes sense 😊👍

    • @daydreameraesthetic7639
      @daydreameraesthetic7639 6 лет назад

      April Marie Art Thank You! Do you know any other terms used in art? I'm pretty new to learning about those kinds of things.

    • @thepochade5992
      @thepochade5992 6 лет назад

      AnimeloverKyoko Shimizu ...Best thing I can suggest is to buy yourself a 'learn to draw' book and you should find all the terms as well as the'how to's ' there 😊 or you can always Google 👍

    • @daydreameraesthetic7639
      @daydreameraesthetic7639 6 лет назад

      April Marie Art Ok Thanks 😀

  • @hamsnub
    @hamsnub 6 лет назад

    I want to read Brody's ghost, I read a few panels from one of your mastering manga books (I think it was 2) and I already like it.

  • @davidtheartist8179
    @davidtheartist8179 6 лет назад

    Awesome work always Mr crilley

  • @happydaysforme7160
    @happydaysforme7160 6 лет назад +1

    I feel bad Markcrilley's channel is dying. He has been around helping artists for so long and still makes really amazing tutorials. It is very sad to see all the filth that's popular now, but really neat stuff like this is completely overshadowed.

  • @kendall2148
    @kendall2148 6 лет назад

    You should do a challenge where you have to draw and color a picture but the coloring is inverted.

  • @artistyogeshsingh
    @artistyogeshsingh 6 лет назад

    Lovely work

  • @dmsside5385
    @dmsside5385 6 лет назад

    I have been watching your videos for a long time thanks for making this RUclips video

  • @Zakei_Allen
    @Zakei_Allen 6 лет назад +4

    My first thought was “Why is he drawing Jessie?”

  • @americandragon8612
    @americandragon8612 6 лет назад

    I went run errands with my mom and I happened to find one of your books shout out to you because I love drawing anime and manga and it would really help me with my anatomy practice it's called Mastering Manga the books I bought I already skimmed through some pages and they are really Internet 😄

  • @xxzvdogxx
    @xxzvdogxx 6 лет назад

    Wilson was a WILSON brand volleyball not a soccer ball but love the vid!

  • @shrinerleek9458
    @shrinerleek9458 6 лет назад

    thanks! it works fast

  • @yoon215
    @yoon215 6 лет назад

    Thank you! It's good and very helpfull

  • @theneed80g
    @theneed80g 6 лет назад

    Mark would you ever stream while making these videos?

  • @jumpyJadon
    @jumpyJadon 6 лет назад

    hey Mark my friend bought mastering manga and I think I might to

  • @bhaveshkoul3027
    @bhaveshkoul3027 6 лет назад

    Sir can you please do a tutorial on Misa amane from death note

  • @jocelyncordeiro4870
    @jocelyncordeiro4870 6 лет назад

    Can you give advice on characters who change from bad to good? I have this character who kind of works for the main antagonist, but I think I want that character to change sides at some point. I know it should be slow and progressive, but I don't know how to make that change.

  • @OwliSketches
    @OwliSketches 6 лет назад +1

    love this, love you and your work so much!! i had to unsubscribe and re subscribe to get your notifications!!! oh well, least I'll get them now, even though you upload regularly.

  • @dkcartstudios3778
    @dkcartstudios3778 6 лет назад

    Thanks I liked and subscribed

  • @MarshallMania
    @MarshallMania 6 лет назад +4

    The first rule is true unless your telling a tale about an insane person for instance I did a story about a man who only spoke to some manifestarions of his insanity that hunt him during the story

  • @NuclearNuke41
    @NuclearNuke41 6 лет назад

    Tempting to take a writing class in college. I do want to draw and illustrate manga's, but writing class's in college i heard, can be literal hell.

  • @sannylad9204
    @sannylad9204 6 лет назад

    YESSSSSSS, RIGHT ON TIME, HOW'D YOU KNOW???

  • @sushilkoul7040
    @sushilkoul7040 6 лет назад

    sir can u pls do a how to draw on misa amane from death note

  • @arunam8219
    @arunam8219 6 лет назад

    I can t draw I see my sketch book nothing I n my mind?but when I have something that is totally good where to get inspiration from?.

  • @worldpedia4231
    @worldpedia4231 6 лет назад

    i have a story in my mind by your tips i am ready to plot it on paper mark there is a question which type of comic is best colourful or black an white like brody ghost plz answer me early

  • @elisabethrodas
    @elisabethrodas 6 лет назад +1

    That Loooks awsome!!!!!!!

  • @artofjessirenee2617
    @artofjessirenee2617 6 лет назад

    Excellent advice! Also I gotta say Jessie is probably my favorite Toy Story character 😀

  • @derekcavin7665
    @derekcavin7665 6 лет назад

    You are amazing!

  • @camkiranratna
    @camkiranratna 6 лет назад

    Mark can you please make a tutorial on how to draw kylo ren from Star Wars??? I would love to draw him,......

  • @scrap8660
    @scrap8660 6 лет назад +1

    Mark Can you do a video on anatomy not just human but manga anatomy and if there are any others I have a lot of problem making the characters in panels look ... well “human”

    • @johnconor8698
      @johnconor8698 6 лет назад +2

      manga anatomy? i don't think that exists.

    • @jl8417
      @jl8417 6 лет назад

      I think you're thinking about proportion instead of anatomy

  • @hevakins4251
    @hevakins4251 6 лет назад

    Can you pls do a video on how to draw an anime girl with a violin

  • @travisherndon94
    @travisherndon94 6 лет назад +2

    I wanted to ask you or anyone in the comments to answer a question about coming up with panels/ pages when you come up with pages for your manga do you draw it by hand then scan to ink it digitally or do you do it all digitally? I'm asking cause I'm working on my own comic but I'm drawing it in a sketch book, then plan on scanning it to my laptop to work on it digitally so I wanted to ask you if that's a good idea or a bad idea to draw my comic in a sketch book (Master's Touch Fine Art studio is the brand I use)? Thanks i really would appreciate some feedback

    • @travisherndon94
      @travisherndon94 6 лет назад

      So it would be better for me to use manga paper or the kind of paper they use for comic books?

    • @ghostaccountlmao
      @ghostaccountlmao 6 лет назад

      I personally buy manga paper, draft it with blue pencil, then ink it and scan it into my computer. I use Clip Studio Paint as my digital app to edit my work, add paneling, dialogue, shading/tones, etc. I've found that to be the best way to go about making good looking manga with traditional art.

    • @dirtypagan5793
      @dirtypagan5793 6 лет назад

      It can be either done by hand or digitally, what I’ve seen commonly by artists is they draw and ink it by hand ,and colour it on a digital program(if you want to do that), it’s also good for small touch ups.

  • @aramilhernandez5515
    @aramilhernandez5515 6 лет назад

    Thank you for everything👍👍👏👏🤟🤟✊✊✊✊And for the video.

  • @towcat
    @towcat 6 лет назад

    If a machine or vehicle utilized by the characters plays a big part and developes it's own personality/role like a character, could introducing a new machine or vehicle in a similar manner do the same thing as a new side character?

  • @CherryStudios2
    @CherryStudios2 6 лет назад +1

    Elsa is another example of a character who is more popular than the main protagonist. Some consider her the main character of Frozen, which goes to show how much she stole the show. Anna is actually the main character of Frozen when you think about it. She gets more screen time because she is the hero and has a clear goal. We follow her journey throughout the movie, while Elsa is only shown during important events. She's the one who found out Hans was a villain and she is the one who stopped him. But she didn't have ice powers so nobody cares lol

  • @s4dnie
    @s4dnie 6 лет назад +6

    I came cause mark and drawing

  • @GlitterBot5000
    @GlitterBot5000 6 лет назад

    My issue is I make the background characters super in depth and then I fall in love with them and want to make them the main character

  • @jabarisafari5715
    @jabarisafari5715 3 года назад

    Steve Urkle also fell down the same path of a side character becoming the main character. Key and Peele actually made a skit about it.

  • @dzboy264
    @dzboy264 6 лет назад

    Perfect

  • @ValdemarDeMatos
    @ValdemarDeMatos 6 лет назад

    Ahhh Happy days :D Surprisingly his "real" name was Arthur Herbert Fonzarelli...

  • @jumpyJadon
    @jumpyJadon 6 лет назад

    also I love ur videos man

  • @RedKoopaPlumber
    @RedKoopaPlumber 6 лет назад

    Can the same logic apply to making an rpg. (I mean duh it can but would a comics narrative standards apply to an RPG with gameplay and stuff.) I wanted to add supportive characters without making them annoying and more loveable

  • @TheToneBender
    @TheToneBender 6 лет назад +5

    1:05 First of all it's called Football, not soccer (ruddy americans). Secondly it was a volleyball in Cast Away.

  • @shalymUSRN
    @shalymUSRN 6 лет назад

    Hi @markcrilley please draw the characters of attack on titan. Your vids really inspire me to draw again.

  • @DarkoFoxfire
    @DarkoFoxfire 6 лет назад

    Do Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai from Beyblade Burst

  • @360creative_education
    @360creative_education 6 лет назад

    nice
    #kkdrawing

  • @cancelled148
    @cancelled148 4 года назад

    I didn't understand the third tip.

  • @fluffy3355
    @fluffy3355 5 лет назад

    Kyano from assassination classroom is a good example for number 10

  • @delicatemindarts9786
    @delicatemindarts9786 6 лет назад +5

    Okay I have a question for you. They lost their memory when the story began so how do I make them interesting without revealing too much about them yet?

    • @kestrelsss
      @kestrelsss 6 лет назад +5

      d_man. sketchez Well, essentially you begin with a blank slate. Have the character's "new" personality be formed by things and events around them. For example, if there are a lot of people around them that they don't know and feel that they should, then that would likely be a distressing scenario and make the character a bit jumpy. This is a good time for character development, not only with the one who lost their memory, but those around them. Is there someone who was particularly close to this character that they forgot about? Maybe they'd be upset that they were forgotten and refuse to be of any help to the mc.
      I don't know your story personally, but I hope I can be of some help to you.

    • @delicatemindarts9786
      @delicatemindarts9786 6 лет назад +1

      SugarRoses thank you 😁😁😁 I'll keep that in mind

  • @tatarsauce6314
    @tatarsauce6314 6 лет назад

    Nice duwaing

  • @RekhaSingh-qv8nv
    @RekhaSingh-qv8nv 6 лет назад

    Please draw Kai beyblade

  • @SonGoku-ry7eq
    @SonGoku-ry7eq 6 лет назад +1

    Lite yagame

  • @theYeti1000
    @theYeti1000 6 лет назад +1

    Sorry Mark, but it is a volley ball not a soccer ball. it's just my OCD.

  • @JennaGetsCreative
    @JennaGetsCreative 6 лет назад +1

    *runs to Amazon to pre-order*

  • @Vona44
    @Vona44 6 лет назад

    Hey Mark, I've tried to find a way to contact you, however, that doesn't seem to be possible other than here. I really need your help. I am writing a children's book to sell and raise money to build our new church in this community. I need to know how to draw 3 characters...a little boy about 4 years old, a little girl the same age and a Mom. However, I need to know how to draw the same characters in different poses with different expressions. Can you help me? Maybe just lead me in the right direction? I do not want the characters to be manga though just normal cartoon. Thank you so much and may God bless you!

  • @eve_the_bean3246
    @eve_the_bean3246 6 лет назад

    Hi

  • @shinobiinu6920
    @shinobiinu6920 6 лет назад +6

    Notification squad! I'm learning a lot from you, sensei! I "THINK" my drawings are improving by taking your advices.... I guess... 😂😂😂😅 I upload them here in my channel 🦊 Please teach me some more tips, sensei! ✍🏼👨🏼‍🎨🙇🙇🙇🙇

    • @Idkidk-yt5tu
      @Idkidk-yt5tu 6 лет назад +1

      Emphasis on the 'think'😂

    • @shinobiinu6920
      @shinobiinu6920 6 лет назад

      Mini Hamzie I don't know how to score my drawings 😂😂😂😂

    • @Idkidk-yt5tu
      @Idkidk-yt5tu 6 лет назад

      😂😂Dont worry, neither do i, i just keep drawing and believe that im improving, that way i may actually improve

  • @andressa315
    @andressa315 6 лет назад

    Nossa

  • @bittersweet82
    @bittersweet82 6 лет назад

    Is that Jesse the cowgirl from Toy Story?

  • @kaybear1359
    @kaybear1359 6 лет назад

    Do you think I can draw like that

  • @Mykasan
    @Mykasan 6 лет назад

    I used to not like her particularly as a child because she was a complex character. She wanted Woody to quit being Andy's toy and being selfish and I hated that part of her because I couldn't understand why she would act that way towards him.
    Now I get it but I don't relate to the story of Jessie.

  • @darkmax4872
    @darkmax4872 6 лет назад

    Still no dislikes wow 😮

  • @daya-kuracy3539
    @daya-kuracy3539 6 лет назад +4

    I HAVE BEEN SUMMONED

    • @s4dnie
      @s4dnie 6 лет назад

      Me too

    • @Spooky799kil
      @Spooky799kil 6 лет назад

      "i'm being summoned. What happened in this town? If I take the elevator down i might find it."

  • @agentawesomeness7705
    @agentawesomeness7705 6 лет назад

    Can you find a way to make me draw better anime?

    • @TheToneBender
      @TheToneBender 6 лет назад

      Firstly, start calling it manga, not anime.
      Secondly, practice. A lot. Just copy characters, follow tutorials, make your own (however bad). Keep going. Draw at least 1 character a day, preferably as much as possible. Literally every waking moment (but don't sacrifice school, sleep, eating, exercise, etc.)

    • @agentawesomeness7705
      @agentawesomeness7705 6 лет назад

      Ricky thanks dude!😎