Thank you for another great narration brother. I really do appreciate you. It's been 6 years listening to you and I always get a tad excited when you drop a new story. Hope you are doing well. Stay safe
I've been listening to you since I was in high-school. I'm now 30. Wow how the time flies. Thanks for always being that creepy, soothing and familiar voice in my ear all these years! Endless entertainment! You are the OG CreepyPasta channel and always will be my favorite.
Imagine being a decapitate head stuck in a hall for all eternity and then a bunch of bumbling scientists burst in on you. Yeah I can't blame them for laughing.
@@peachesrambo4037 Yeah at least strangers will feed you flake based food or if you are rich you can get a robot body or at least arm and leg like things that come out of the jar.
Christian wallis always writes bangers. I wish someone would make a playlist with his stories, so i wouldn't have to skim through all of your old videos, but oh well
@@andyfamasdon't get me wrong. I would have been screaming like a baby. I'd just like to think I'd at least put the person out of their misery. Plus, I wouldn't be haunted by..." You coward! You're killing me! Save me!" Sounds harsh but it's better than the situation he was in.
@@pocadon I mean at this point were in hell what makes you think you’re getting put out of your misery? I’m assuming if you get got you’re down there for eternity to be fair
I think imagination can fill it in pretty well. He was holding a book with *every* one of his sins, passed and those he’d commit in the future. My first thought, was that there was something pretty abhorrent that he had mentally been pushing away that he was faced with a physical recording of. The idea that others might learn his specific brand of sin, or the reality of it being a cosmically recorded thing, pushed him to commit the last sin he would commit: “testing fall damage”.
Is it really a sin to run away when there is absolutely nothing you can do? It gets more complicated since he probably knew he couldn’t survive or escape even if he ran away. Taking his eyes was a bit harsh in any case, a mark of shame/ the damned would have been more fitting.
Your stories have been helping me push out gargantuan turds for a long time, my dear friend. 🍺 Here's to all the dumpers you've helped slip and slide from my bhole dear brother
At first I was thinking, a neverending library doesn't sound like hell to me, but then they wandered off and i knew they weren't smart enough to just stay put
The story revolves around a group of scientists and soldiers who discover a massive copper door deep within a cavern. The door depicts horrifying images of human suffering and evokes a strong sense of dread. Upon blasting the door open, they find a seemingly endless labyrinth of shelves filled with books that document sins in every language, past, present, and even future. As the group explores further, one of the scientists, Grant, becomes obsessed with the books, believing they record every sin, including those not yet committed. His mental state deteriorates, leading to his tragic death. The team encounters a corridor lined with severed heads that mutter in various languages. One head communicates through blinking, confirming the books document sins. The situation spirals into horror as the team faces a monstrous force, losing a member and barely escaping, only to find themselves deeper in a nightmarish labyrinth.
This was a very interesting story, and I'm always interested in Hell stories. I could see this being a really cool movie if paced properly. I'd love to play one of the characters. But I don't QUITE understand the ending. And I feel as though the "Old Man" needed to be a bit more mysterious and menacing, without as much dialogue. But that's just my opinion, and it's still a fantastic story. And if anyone can help explain the ending more clearly, it would be much appreciated.
He left that guy to die in the dark so the entity took the protagonists eyes so he will always see dark too hence him saying nobody can say he doesn't have humour I think.@@incisorboy
A really creative story made utterly ridiculous by their very first decision. They find a library 1000 feet underground, and completely unprepared except for a radio (and 10 kilometres of wire wtf!), their first action is to walk for 6 hours into the unknown?!!!
A lil confusing ngl, how did they go from head corridor to entrance to being chased by wall and back at the head corridor. Also what implied he had no eyes..... i thought he knew he was blind
I thought he did that to himself over losing his sanity. But another commenter said that the creator was somewhat of a collector, and he just took his eyes because he has a dark sense of humor or something.
Is that what happened? I was wondering why the guys eyes were missing. I thought he might have done that to himself over losing his mind, but the story clearly states that he was the only sane one that returned.
answer starts @ 53:00 "left fellow traveler to die in the dark" can you see light without eyes? the old man couldn't help himself to he took the guys eyes
Looping myself in in case this gets an answer, i don't get it either. What's the correlation in punishment between being a coward (in an incredibly horrific situation let's be fair here) and being blind? "scared blind" or something?
just a thought: because he left his fellow man to die by being a selfish coward, he chose the wrong path. choosing the wrong path by being a selfish coward resulted in the loss of his eyes. maybe because he was unable to lead himself down the correct path, he lost his eyes? or maybe it’s supposed to be funny because the old man left no physical damage on anyone who died, but took the eyes of the only man who lived because he was a selfish coward who couldn’t choose the right path. i’m not totally sure tbh, just throwing out my thoughts
@@GlazedUpKittenon the note the spirit described the protagonist as leaving his fellow mortal to die in the dark .. so he took his eyes so he will always see the dark too as punishment.. that's my thoughts.
I like it but im not convinced explosives would be used to open the door dear author. Theres a whole variety of rock cutting or copoer cutting equipment out there.
I think you skipped a few paragraphs by accident before 19 minutes when the professor kills himself . Theres also a double sentence a bit before that but that wasn't a problem
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Thank you for another great narration brother. I really do appreciate you. It's been 6 years listening to you and I always get a tad excited when you drop a new story.
Hope you are doing well.
Stay safe
Great narration, AND a great story. Everyone should check this book out!
Oooh that was a good one!!!! Ty Creeps!!
I've been listening to you since I was in high-school. I'm now 30. Wow how the time flies. Thanks for always being that creepy, soothing and familiar voice in my ear all these years! Endless entertainment! You are the OG CreepyPasta channel and always will be my favorite.
Nice been listening for over a decade now.
Similar for me, I started watching in late 2012 or early 2013, that's when I was in the 5th or 6th grade.
Been a while, and I keep coming back
Been listening since I was in middle school, now I’m married with kids, time flies
@Liliththelizard Thats around the same time I discovered him
Haha! I have too, and I’m 24!
Imagine being a decapitate head stuck in a hall for all eternity and then a bunch of bumbling scientists burst in on you. Yeah I can't blame them for laughing.
Yeah, Futurama did it better.
@@peachesrambo4037 Yeah at least strangers will feed you flake based food or if you are rich you can get a robot body or at least arm and leg like things that come out of the jar.
I would be happy to sing to a new audience lol
They could have at least knocked 😡
Poor Bender.
Dude ran off the edge and no one cared lol "happy that happened he was freaking me out"
Finally someone who can say "Man it was hell at work today"
For me work was hell today go figure.
😂. For real!
Christian wallis always writes bangers. I wish someone would make a playlist with his stories, so i wouldn't have to skim through all of your old videos, but oh well
Don't know if I jus stating the obvious, but just search for Christian Wallis creepypasta... 😮
That was actually pretty good. Usually the hell stories are edgy and cringe. This was a pretty cool concept.
If you're 13, maybe
Didn't expect to be so engaged with this one. Well done!
I was definitely drawn in to this one!
I wouldn't be able to live with myself after leaving someone behind and hearing him plea just to shoot at it!
Idk after what has been witnessed at this point I have zero guilt
@@andyfamasdon't get me wrong. I would have been screaming like a baby. I'd just like to think I'd at least put the person out of their misery. Plus, I wouldn't be haunted by..." You coward! You're killing me! Save me!" Sounds harsh but it's better than the situation he was in.
@@pocadon I mean at this point were in hell what makes you think you’re getting put out of your misery? I’m assuming if you get got you’re down there for eternity to be fair
Creeps, as a fan for over 10 years I just wanna say thank you.
Did nobody react to the guy testing fall damage...took me out a bit because it feels like we skipped some dialogue
I think imagination can fill it in pretty well. He was holding a book with *every* one of his sins, passed and those he’d commit in the future. My first thought, was that there was something pretty abhorrent that he had mentally been pushing away that he was faced with a physical recording of. The idea that others might learn his specific brand of sin, or the reality of it being a cosmically recorded thing, pushed him to commit the last sin he would commit: “testing fall damage”.
Yes think it was mistake
The AI who wrote this forgot humans have emotions
The 13 year old that wrote this probably forgot.
Garbage teenage writing
Omg this was creepy af. I always get excited seeing a new video because every one is a gem.
I agree. Never a bad one on this channel!
This is my favorite type of creepypasta when people just go exploring
I also like the rules ones
Yeah same, no other type of creepypasta can hold a candle to exploration ones
@@kingcyrusrodan6772 got any recommendations although I'm pretty sure I've heard them all at this point
Most of the creepy stories are entertaining but mediocre. This one was not just original, but genuinely disturbing. Well done sir.
One of the best Hell creepypastas of all time!!!
Usually I hunt for horror stories based on category not author but this guy is an exceptional exception! 😁 Absolute GOAT!
Is it really a sin to run away when there is absolutely nothing you can do? It gets more complicated since he probably knew he couldn’t survive or escape even if he ran away. Taking his eyes was a bit harsh in any case, a mark of shame/ the damned would have been more fitting.
Your stories have been helping me push out gargantuan turds for a long time, my dear friend. 🍺 Here's to all the dumpers you've helped slip and slide from my bhole dear brother
What
Been listening to you for years, bro! Great voice, and on point delivery! Keep up the great work!
🤜🤛
Draw this out with a couple more redshirts and you've got the potential for a great movie. Really interesting concept!
He left him to die in the dark so he will die in the dark that’s some kind of justice tbh
This was one of the best stories in a long while, hell in the whole channel! Fantastic. Gonna look up the authors book!
This story was amazing. Creepy and still wanting to know more. Loved every second of it.
At first I was thinking, a neverending library doesn't sound like hell to me, but then they wandered off and i knew they weren't smart enough to just stay put
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It's like they didn't even see guy run off the cliff??? 😂😂😂
He he killed himself and they were like " Is this the way out"😂😂😂😂
Limbo, lust...all gone... With gluttony soon to follow.
Very. Very Good.
This was beyond amazing.
Bravo to the writer and reader. Amazing!
nobody writes spookiness like reddit chad NeonTempo
If all the sins are recorded there, then they are predetermined, which means the individual shouldn't be held responsible for them
That's assuming determinism is the only means of knowing the future. Timeless beings are more satisfactory.
Yeah that's the only issue that I have with it.
Thats how it works in Islam
nobody is guilty for his sin since Allah caused the sin
Love getting to see new stories drop right as I’m getting ready to game! It’s gonna be a good day 🤩
What game are you playing?
@@CaseyGray58 stardew!!
@@savannahjolicoeur3630 wow a game I haven’t heard of. Interesting. I’m hooked on Warframe, another game I never heard of till last year
@@CaseyGray58 I highly recommend stardew valley! It’s such a sweet game!
The story revolves around a group of scientists and soldiers who discover a massive copper door deep within a cavern. The door depicts horrifying images of human suffering and evokes a strong sense of dread.
Upon blasting the door open, they find a seemingly endless labyrinth of shelves filled with books that document sins in every language, past, present, and even future.
As the group explores further, one of the scientists, Grant, becomes obsessed with the books, believing they record every sin, including those not yet committed. His mental state deteriorates, leading to his tragic death.
The team encounters a corridor lined with severed heads that mutter in various languages. One head communicates through blinking, confirming the books document sins.
The situation spirals into horror as the team faces a monstrous force, losing a member and barely escaping, only to find themselves deeper in a nightmarish labyrinth.
AI..?
oh man when the old man said he build the place. so good
I totally want to use this concept for my next D&d dungeon.
What kind of archaeologist finds an ancient door and immediately wants to blow it up? 🎉
British ones (Egypt comes to mind)
This was such a good story, and very well delivered!
Very well written, thank you 😊
Really loved this one Creeps! Great story great narration would love more like this
This was a very interesting story, and I'm always interested in Hell stories. I could see this being a really cool movie if paced properly. I'd love to play one of the characters. But I don't QUITE understand the ending. And I feel as though the "Old Man" needed to be a bit more mysterious and menacing, without as much dialogue. But that's just my opinion, and it's still a fantastic story. And if anyone can help explain the ending more clearly, it would be much appreciated.
That was the very definition of Hell for me. Great story.
Oh that was surreal. Love the ending
I actually didn’t understand the ending. Why did he have no eyes?
He left that guy to die in the dark so the entity took the protagonists eyes so he will always see dark too hence him saying nobody can say he doesn't have humour I think.@@incisorboy
@@incisorboy there was nothing about that. I was waiting for a burnt hand print on his shoulder
"I explored an abandoned wing of hell" proceedes to describe events that show that wing of hell was not abandoned
It was very literally Abandoned, mate. It was put out of commision cause it didnt work well, so 'current H-ll' wa established. You missed all that?
@@slevinchannel7589
You are still doing stories!! Hell yeah ❤
Wow, really liked this story.
Had a crap week. Listening to you to help me sleep for work the next day is always a win. Thanks my man!
Very well done!
Thanks for the upload!
Usually these stories get kind of lame when they get to the end.. this one actually had a pretty good twist 😈
Excellent story.
Wow man! That was a great story!
Oh jolly, my favorite type, and nice long too, thx a ton!!!!
Superb as always! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Wow this story was incredible!! Who’s the author?
How would the books work for languages spoken before the invention of writing?
A hell wizard did it
A really creative story made utterly ridiculous by their very first decision. They find a library 1000 feet underground, and completely unprepared except for a radio (and 10 kilometres of wire wtf!), their first action is to walk for 6 hours into the unknown?!!!
that was an awesome video man !
A lil confusing ngl, how did they go from head corridor to entrance to being chased by wall and back at the head corridor. Also what implied he had no eyes..... i thought he knew he was blind
I thought he did that to himself over losing his sanity. But another commenter said that the creator was somewhat of a collector, and he just took his eyes because he has a dark sense of humor or something.
That was really good
Best Narrator Channel.
Thank you Creeps and Christian! Yikes😳
Could always go cybernetic…
I don't think anyone deserves to be punished for a survival situation. Thats pretty stupid imo.
This reminds me of an SCP story
Anyone else think of Slartibartfast working in Hell at the end of this one?
The story is awesome
Very nice
Seems to me like that wizard guy or the last character was an opertunist.
Collecting body parts like his eyes at the end
Is that what happened? I was wondering why the guys eyes were missing. I thought he might have done that to himself over losing his mind, but the story clearly states that he was the only sane one that returned.
love it but i did not understand the ending, how can he see without his eyes and why he was all wrapped in bandage?
answer starts @ 53:00
"left fellow traveler to die in the dark"
can you see light without eyes?
the old man couldn't help himself to he took the guys eyes
I’d go nuts can’t move listening to the same people all day everyday. I’d be stuck with people I just absolutely hated can’t do anything about it.
We've got the abandoned wing of hell but where's the abandoned drumstick?
Excellent
I’m here already
Me too.
Great author
YES ❤❤
I explored an abandoned wing of heck. it was called vault 11 and you'll never believe what experiments they did
also this video came out just in time for my nap with the puppers. perfect timing 👌 😊
Jimmy Raynor
Hey wait a minute Heck? Isn't it supposed to be...
*Mouth gets covered*
Censors
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 ahHhHhHh!!! plz dun censor me Susan wachowski!
@@JimmmyRaynor
Rocko's Modern Life lol
Why do you need to substitute Hell for Heck?
What the hell was that ending?!
Looping myself in in case this gets an answer, i don't get it either. What's the correlation in punishment between being a coward (in an incredibly horrific situation let's be fair here) and being blind? "scared blind" or something?
@@RotalHenricssonyes, I didn’t understand this part either.
just a thought: because he left his fellow man to die by being a selfish coward, he chose the wrong path. choosing the wrong path by being a selfish coward resulted in the loss of his eyes. maybe because he was unable to lead himself down the correct path, he lost his eyes?
or maybe it’s supposed to be funny because the old man left no physical damage on anyone who died, but took the eyes of the only man who lived because he was a selfish coward who couldn’t choose the right path. i’m not totally sure tbh, just throwing out my thoughts
@@GlazedUpKittenon the note the spirit described the protagonist as leaving his fellow mortal to die in the dark .. so he took his eyes so he will always see the dark too as punishment.. that's my thoughts.
@@nathanielbird9552solid theory
Love you creepsmcpasta
Love the video!
Wow Just Wow
As if he would find his own book.
i am thinking what about languages without writing systems or people who have multiple native languages
so did the heads not have mouths what stopped them from talking wy did they have to blink?
Satan seems like a decent chap
More books than one in a lifetime? You severely underestimate a commited book worm lol
He either met god (who built hell) or a angel architect
Feels like this should be half as long. Loose the monsters and just have it as an eirie and abandoned area, no true resolution just ambiguities.
"Bass relief" LMFAO
Wonderful narration. Keep it up Creeps!
Excellent! :3
Id imagine it was on the left
We all know what's been going on. Homies been gettin friendly with the boys as usual. Get ready for the 50 "the boy" stories this mf gonna drop
I like it but im not convinced explosives would be used to open the door dear author. Theres a whole variety of rock cutting or copoer cutting equipment out there.
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
Yah darn rite.
Not bad, a little slow for my taste.. still,,,,,, a solid 7/10
I think you skipped a few paragraphs by accident before 19 minutes when the professor kills himself . Theres also a double sentence a bit before that but that wasn't a problem
What a banger
so the old man is god ? satan ? he is god/satan at the same time ?
No new uploads?
w upload schedule