A Very Lonely Road | THIS ONE WILL REALLY TEST YOUR NERVES!

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  • Опубликовано: 14 июн 2024
  • ‘‘And now, as I gazed past the steering wheel at the pitch dark and empty countryside, I knew my gut had been telling me something...’’
    Today’s phenomenal story is ‘A Very Lonely Road’, an original work by Jake Wiklacz, kindly shared with me via the Creepypasta Wiki and read here under the conditions of the CC-BY-SA license.
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    Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
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    00:00:00 Introduction
    00:00:45 Part 1
    00:23:31 Part 2
    00:40:06 Part 3
    00:55:56 Part 4
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  • @GarryDKing
    @GarryDKing Год назад +102

    The supernatural monsters always have a fun feel to their horrors, but the human ones.... have a real disgust factor to them. And the villains of this tale are no exception....

    • @poomop3750
      @poomop3750 Год назад +7

      Honestly stories with real humans instead of a generic monster are always the best

    • @Feind1918
      @Feind1918 11 месяцев назад +1

      Wonderful explanation I personally just call it awesome

    • @danielthemaniel7934
      @danielthemaniel7934 10 месяцев назад +1

      @@poomop3750 Idk. I think humans end up being generic too. A lot of monsters in stories are pretty unique, but the human antagonists tend to be more cliche in my opinion. And with a monster it's scary because it's something otherworldly that doesn't really exist. Stories like this are usually a bit more anger inducing than fear inducing. Again, just my opinion tho. There are definitely some really good stories with human antagonists, they just tend to be based off of others more often than not.

    • @poomop3750
      @poomop3750 10 месяцев назад +1

      @danielthemaniel7934 See thats the thing with monsters, you can only have so many "the creature had 4 arms and was starving covered in blood and screaming" type creatures before it gets old. Would it be scary to be in that situation? Heck yes it would be. But is it scary to read or listen to? Not really in my opinion. The unknowable is a good tool in literature when its used correctly, unfortunately many aspiring writers and 14 year olds on reddit don't use it well.

    • @williestreiff9314
      @williestreiff9314 3 месяца назад

      No, these slime bags are the lowest form of discust and it's really disgusting there real people like, ,, that makes me sad

  • @whatsawigwag2590
    @whatsawigwag2590 Год назад +17

    This was an spin tingling reminder of what happened to me without the death and gore but lured, fooled, robbed, beaten, ziptied, kidnapped, but they got sloppy and I waited till the odds got even...

    • @acewmd.
      @acewmd. 11 месяцев назад +1

      Sure, and I’m billy badass, I totally go talking about the traumatic things that have happened to me pretending that I’m a badass and totally “got even”.

    • @aaronsmith5947
      @aaronsmith5947 6 месяцев назад

      ​@@acewmd.Seeing how they didnt contest it means your probably right

    • @acewmd.
      @acewmd. 6 месяцев назад

      @@aaronsmith5947 I mean yeah, most victims don't go broadcasting themselves you know on account of it being a horrible thing to go through that they'd never try to paint in a positive light.
      Shame that people like them think its something cool to pretend to have experienced.

  • @turtlesage3709
    @turtlesage3709 Год назад +4

    Man that was something else. Gotta listen to a werewolf pasta now can't have that be the last story of the night

  • @thaLikeButton
    @thaLikeButton Год назад +21

    The thing that got me about this story, is the fact that stuff like this actually happens. Far too often too. Some people are absolutely sick. With that said though, this was a very intense story and your narration had me hooked

    • @derekbidelman2442
      @derekbidelman2442 Год назад +4

      Having a young daughter situation like this keeps me awake at night. My fear turns to anger. There are men capable of this everywhere, women just don't understand how dangerous men can be. For a father,husband grandfather, brother any man who would die before seeing any woman he loves ever hurt, this is pure terror. The only advice to give is make your stand and fight when you have your chance and go for the eyes.

    • @SeanWinters
      @SeanWinters Год назад +2

      Imagine how many times guys get falsely accused of this?

    • @thaLikeButton
      @thaLikeButton Год назад +2

      @@SeanWinters yeah? That's completely beside the point. Imagine all the women this really happens to

    • @SeanWinters
      @SeanWinters Год назад +2

      @@thaLikeButton1. Fewer than men, when considering prison
      2. Fewer than the number of false accusations
      3. Not everything has to be about women. What kind of person can't hear a factual statement about men's issues without spaszing out about women's issues?

    • @thaLikeButton
      @thaLikeButton Год назад

      @@SeanWinters 1. I never took a factual statement about men and made it about women, you took a factual statement about women and made it about men
      2. I know you pulled that statistic out your ass
      3. You're only concerned with "men get falsely accused blah blah", and I know. Everyone knows it happens. It's happened to me. But that has nothing to do with anything, it's just a horror story. Go touch grass or something

  • @SleepyLeeeee
    @SleepyLeeeee Год назад +35

    Sometimes a story comes along that just seems to get it. It is well written. Very strong. Thank you for sharing. I'm sending each person who reads this comment so much love

  • @carlae5615
    @carlae5615 Год назад +21

    The Title is fitting and yes, I'm a survivor, but this was a good story.❤ I'm thankful for Dr. C's community to be on the road with me.

  • @punkinazz69
    @punkinazz69 Год назад +4

    Horrible bastards + two teen girls + alcohol + multi-tools = the sh1t has got real in the field! Thank you for narrating this story, Doctor Creepen!

  • @Biggestmac27
    @Biggestmac27 Год назад +9

    It was so satisfying to hear every time she injured one of those guys, amazing feeling!

  • @calebbenjamin13
    @calebbenjamin13 Год назад +15

    I can definitely see why some wouldn't like this one but as for me I absolutely loved it! Like watching a movie but better seeing as the good Doctor read it! Go Amy!

  • @michigandogman3060
    @michigandogman3060 Год назад +15

    My brother and I were driving in the Nevada desert when we came upon a car wreck, two cars tangled together and people sitting in the dark on the side of the road. We had to drive miles to get them help and it’s pretty barren out there, we both have that surreal feeling about it like it was a dream 28 years later.

  • @princessofhardrock3934
    @princessofhardrock3934 Год назад +17

    I think the human monsters are so much scarier than all of the other types of monsters! Creepy tale Doctor!

  • @FeenieVonKarma
    @FeenieVonKarma Год назад +12

    Well then. I think the antagonists probably should have suffered more than they did, but that's only because I'm a vengeful bitch, lol. Very good story as always!

  • @starclone4
    @starclone4 Год назад +3

    People can be even more terrifying then any monster.... That was disturbing, and excellent !!!!

  • @Sunshine-kp3xv
    @Sunshine-kp3xv Год назад +4

    I have to say I’m so glad that I stuck with this story. I loved the ending! Believe it or not this actually made me have not so good dreams! Thank you for sharing!

  • @FloridaMan0561
    @FloridaMan0561 Год назад +10

    I always have faith in the good Doctor,he never fails to bring us all such great content!

  • @alexwilliams9900
    @alexwilliams9900 Год назад +3

    Love the Go-Pro driving down the road.

  • @cadillacdeville5828
    @cadillacdeville5828 Год назад +17

    A full hour with Dr. Creepen makes my night 🌉😘

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад +1

      Sending Love ❤️...Cadillac...Are you single? 😊❤️

  • @alejandroestrella1234
    @alejandroestrella1234 Год назад +4

    Peter's final moments would've been filled with excruciating pain if it were up to me

  • @CLCinflorida
    @CLCinflorida Год назад +11

    Creepy and Morbid are two different things... I miss the Creepy... 👍👍👍

  • @r0ttenn
    @r0ttenn Год назад +14

    All I want to say is: the moment it ended, I felt like I had just woken up from somebody else's nightmare.

  • @JadedBelle
    @JadedBelle Год назад +1

    Thank you Good Doc! I can handle stories like this one as long as little children are not involved. Really enjoy the longer stories like this as they are great to fall asleep to. ❤

  • @falcongamingproductions9938
    @falcongamingproductions9938 11 месяцев назад +1

    This one was really hard to get through, but in a good way. Very well written with a mostly satisfying ending (I kinda wish the dudes had each suffered much more). However, still a great story and narration. Thank you as always!!

  • @CannabisDreams
    @CannabisDreams Год назад +4

    "I walk a lonely road, the only one I have ever known..."

  • @einienj3281
    @einienj3281 Год назад +3

    Great story, Thank You, Dr. ❤

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch 11 месяцев назад

    Thank you Dr Creepen. Loved this one.🖤

  • @CKlegion7272
    @CKlegion7272 Год назад +3

    Ooee this sounds like another good one, I'll save this for later. Thanks dear Dr.
    Greetings from Netherland

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Год назад +11

    I’ll make a note to everyone: if you ever find yourself in a kidnapping situation, and have any access to the driver, do all you can to wreck the vehicle. Kick the transmission shifter, steering wheel, anything that makes the vehicle go wild. Do Whatever it takes. And if/when you crash, it’s always going to be better than what was coming.

  • @puppetville-bethobrien4139
    @puppetville-bethobrien4139 Год назад +1

    To use your words: "Wow, wow, wow!"

  • @teddydog6229
    @teddydog6229 Год назад +2

    I’ve been alive a long long time - too long some might argue - and I’ve had cars break down on the side of the road more times than I’d care to guess. Every single time I’ve gotten out and popped the hood. And you know how many times that’s resulted in me making a few judicious adjustments and heading off on my way ? Not one damn time. I frankly don’t know why I bother. I only mention it because I bet a discouraging number of people who’ve slogged through this post share my perfect score. Nice story Doc. Like a cross between Deliverance and Henry - Portrait Of A Serial Killer. Just the sort of yarn to soothe my bubbling moon juices.

  • @paulhammer4941
    @paulhammer4941 Год назад +1

    Does anyone else get the feeling that the Doc has read this one before? He’s the only reader I listen to and I’m 95% sure I’ve heard this before.

  • @W_R_A_T_H
    @W_R_A_T_H Год назад +4

    Not sure I can stomach this one

  • @dudditsdoo
    @dudditsdoo Год назад

    Loved it! Thanks Dr Creepen : )

  • @ReqLeBeax
    @ReqLeBeax Год назад +8

    Not a fan of these. I’m a survivor myself. I keep waiting for a skinwalker to pop out and do away with the sleaze balls.

  • @markclarkson7229
    @markclarkson7229 Год назад +2

    Perfect timing doc as usual same as always best bedtime stories to end the day appreciate all you work

  • @stevethomas6584
    @stevethomas6584 Год назад +2

    Ok that was excellent! thankyou x

  • @NicholeSmithBAPindustries1437
    @NicholeSmithBAPindustries1437 Год назад

    You are amazing! Love you Dr. C!

  • @charlieghostwolf6161
    @charlieghostwolf6161 Год назад

    Thank you good Dr this is one of the most well written tales you've brought to us, my thanks and compliments to the author as well

  • @MissBebe64
    @MissBebe64 Год назад +1

    Awesomr story and narration. It malkes my night when i see you post a story your soothing voice helps me relax since im going through alot right now. Thank you Doctor Creepen❤❤

  • @robertvanderhoof5283
    @robertvanderhoof5283 Год назад +1

    Hell ya !! That was great. Thanks Doc

  • @dustinryckman5118
    @dustinryckman5118 Год назад +2

    Always love your voice, and videos my guy!

  • @user-PuppyDan
    @user-PuppyDan Год назад +1

    Very well written, love a final girl moment.

  • @LuisaD93
    @LuisaD93 Год назад

    Hey Doc! Bit late with this one but loved it! Hope you and yours are having a fantastic holiday weekend!! 😃🌹✨

  • @kittyroars8758
    @kittyroars8758 Год назад +27

    Its a very sad fact that a huge percentage of women & girls have experienced some form of sexual assault at some time in their lives, myself included. Most do not report it.
    This story was exceptionally well written and as always... narrated to perfection.
    Thanks, Doc 💜

    • @CKlegion7272
      @CKlegion7272 Год назад +4

      Just like boys and men.
      Greetings from Netherland

    • @harrygrimley4352
      @harrygrimley4352 Год назад +1

      And that's why you should never look at or talk to them.

  • @catlover788
    @catlover788 Год назад

    OOOHHH I LOVE U DR CREEPEN!!!!

  • @TattooedPink
    @TattooedPink Год назад +1

    Cheers 😍

  • @celitacantrill10
    @celitacantrill10 Год назад +2

    A fair comeuppance eh Dr.? Great story, thank you.

  • @carolrohrer325
    @carolrohrer325 Год назад +3

    By the end I was kicking, clawing & stabbing those monsters along with her. It felt good that she won, sorry for her friend. I think we’ve all known guys who in our imaginations could’ve behaved like that if the circumstances were right & thank goodness never got to find out if we were fight. Anyway I felt good at the end & agree with the Dr, it was well worth the listen.

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️...Carol...Are you single??😊❤️

  • @enlightenmentworldunited8545
    @enlightenmentworldunited8545 Год назад +1

    Thank you 🙏🏻 DR ✔️🖤

  • @vash121086
    @vash121086 Год назад

    I’ve heard this story before from one of the many horror stories channels. Except hearing what you thought about this is something I was curious to hear.

  • @Maeshalanadae
    @Maeshalanadae Год назад +2

    Alright, let’s see what the doctor’s ordered.

  • @WtfYouMeanDude
    @WtfYouMeanDude Год назад +10

    "I walk a lonely road,
    The only one, that I have ever known
    Don't know where it goes,
    But it's home to me, and I walk alone.." 🎵

  • @rogerwilliams977
    @rogerwilliams977 Год назад +1

    That was Awesome!

  • @angelaverbowski995
    @angelaverbowski995 Год назад +1

    #904-✅👍
    If you find your self in a headlock being dragged backwards.. don't try to get arms off, grab his legs and trip him. Natural reflexes will make them let go!
    ✌️🎯😉✅

  • @amybishop666
    @amybishop666 Год назад +2

    Once I heard her name, I knew she would be the "final girl" 🤸🏼‍♀️🤸🏼‍♀️

  • @XionicAihara
    @XionicAihara Год назад +1

    Really enjoyed this one. Kinda had a for sure feeling of how it would play out though the second those guys showed up lol

  • @donnasuegaffron3696
    @donnasuegaffron3696 Год назад +2

    Close to home.

  • @roxanneweichinger9318
    @roxanneweichinger9318 10 месяцев назад

    Yyaaayyy, she got away from those crazy guys!

  • @astrosamurai789
    @astrosamurai789 Год назад +11

    This story got my blood boiling I hate cowardly disgusting men such these glad they got what was coming to them great story doc

  • @pamw5687
    @pamw5687 Год назад +3

    Love the long vids, it is what I fall asleep too. 💖

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️...Pam...Are you single? 😊❤️

    • @pamw5687
      @pamw5687 Год назад +1

      @@nickadams1519 why yes I am and in Minnesota, u

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      @@pamw5687 Erie Pennsylvania...Do you care to chat? 😊❤️

    • @pamw5687
      @pamw5687 Год назад +1

      @@nickadams1519 sure why not

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      @@pamw5687 nickadams2032

  • @kennimallinson2068
    @kennimallinson2068 Год назад +2

    The seriel killer and more realistic story's are way more frightening then any make believe Halloween creatures!

  • @ettasaintelle3296
    @ettasaintelle3296 Год назад +6

    This one is more realistic than the usual (in that vile, opportunistic predators take advantage of people in tough situations) but the attempt at a slight supernatural ending was out of place. Not much fun, but the narration itself was excellent as always!

  • @jasonbernard9012
    @jasonbernard9012 Год назад

    Wow…she went really off the rails!!! I can see why you don’t do them very often, however it was a phenomenal tale with great narration as always. She truly let her inner demon take hold of that situation

  • @EJS564
    @EJS564 10 месяцев назад

    It wasn't bad by any means, it's just I listen to these stories for paranormal and super-natural content. This was basically "Last House on the Left" and "I Spit on Your Grave." Unfortunately by the time I realized this I was aldready in to deep.

  • @christopher6339
    @christopher6339 Год назад

    That was intense!!!!

  • @sinner966
    @sinner966 Год назад +1

    Loved it 😍

  • @jennieward1607
    @jennieward1607 27 дней назад

    Magical ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

  • @codenamegordieray6541
    @codenamegordieray6541 Год назад +1

    Twisted. But damn. Good

  • @CKlegion7272
    @CKlegion7272 Год назад +1

    Excellent job! A bit different then what I'm used to from you but still good.
    Greetings from Netherland

  • @MrEthan101
    @MrEthan101 Год назад +1

    Stories like this make me somewhat irrationally angry, I know it’s a fictional story but I still get this feeling of rage not being able to kick the shit outta the frat boys for suck acts. I may need a therapist. Lol

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Год назад +1

    I’m only at 23:46 and my blood pressure is going sky high. I’m going to have to take a break for a bit and calm down. These types I have purposely gone after to teach them that they cannot do this shit. And then showed them why. Consequences can come in so many ways…

  • @joleenphillips2415
    @joleenphillips2415 Год назад

    Never get into a car with people you don't know or people you don't trust.

  • @WerewolfVampire625
    @WerewolfVampire625 Год назад

    Such a shame Peter never stood up for himself and the girls despite having many windows opened. He was young and confused but was old enough to make his own decisions. He lived as Keaton's slave and would die as Keaton's slave.

  • @ScullyPopASMR
    @ScullyPopASMR Год назад +2

    Sweetness 🎧

  • @dapplegray6577
    @dapplegray6577 Год назад +1

    Love you, Doc😘

  • @verawalters6673
    @verawalters6673 Год назад +2

    That was disturbing.

  • @AdamSwiggitySwooty
    @AdamSwiggitySwooty 10 месяцев назад

    This kind of story boils my blood. Me and some close friends stumbled across a scenario like this but we ended up stopping it....the good old fashioned way. Luckily we stopped it before either of the girls were fully...well you know. I do often think about how that situation would have gone if we hadn't gotten there when we did. Small town police didn't even detain us for whooping those guys a$$es.

  • @IniquitousZ
    @IniquitousZ Год назад

    Soon as they said forget the multi tool in the beginning I was thinking chekov's gun lol.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Год назад

    You were right Dr., I can’t listen anymore. I suppose as it’s had such a profound effect on me that it is well written. Like an actor who plays a role so well that you end up hating the actor and not the character. It’s just blood boiling.

  • @nicwelch
    @nicwelch 9 месяцев назад

    The boys all got off a little too easy if you ask me.

  • @_P0tat07_
    @_P0tat07_ 11 месяцев назад

    I like it when bad people get what they deserve

  • @morgainnejade
    @morgainnejade Год назад

    There is NOTHING _"domestic violence"_ about this, it's flat out *murderous assault* by deranged psychopaths. Conflating the two helps the psychopaths out IMMENSELY.

  • @Travis-bl4gx
    @Travis-bl4gx 6 месяцев назад +1

    Dr. Creepen I'm going to tickle your leg if i ever get the opportunity to give you a car ride!!
    I hope you don't mind!!

  • @rickyhurtt5568
    @rickyhurtt5568 Год назад +1

    So they called 911 when the car broke down. That's a new 1 on me

  • @PedroApp
    @PedroApp Год назад +1

    Hey doc, how are you?
    Will this one be on spotify? I can't find some stories there to listen while working (driving)

  • @paulpoitras7496
    @paulpoitras7496 Год назад +2

    I was kind of hoping for a little more of an epilogue but a good story

  • @agravemisunderstanding9668
    @agravemisunderstanding9668 11 месяцев назад

    Peter had the chance to save them, he could have sped up when the cop car passed so it would have pulled them over. Instead he didn't do anything

  • @dirkbruere
    @dirkbruere Год назад +1

    OK - a technical critique. 16 minutes in and it doesn't grab me.

  • @Roland_Deschain_of_Gilead19
    @Roland_Deschain_of_Gilead19 11 месяцев назад

    Reminds me a little bit of I Spit on Your Grave

  • @amyplunkett6208
    @amyplunkett6208 Год назад

    It's been a hard day. I need you my Doc ❤

  • @carolduvall111
    @carolduvall111 Год назад +1

    I like the purple highlights in the video the purple is my favorite

  • @dylancampbell1165
    @dylancampbell1165 Год назад +9

    I can not stand abusive men this story makes me mad

  • @tinfoilskullcap7034
    @tinfoilskullcap7034 Год назад

    Couldn't hang Doc.
    Had an overwhelming desire to dispatch the lot of them. Only kidding...

  • @michelepruitt3145
    @michelepruitt3145 Год назад +1

    1st! 🤗🤣✌️Thanks Dr. Creepen, you're the Best!!! 🧡💚💙💜💔✝️☮️ Excellent, Excellent Story! 🥰

  • @mitchconnerandsometimesjlotoo
    @mitchconnerandsometimesjlotoo Год назад +1

    Half way through. I hope they get those bqatards

  • @mistydevillier2197
    @mistydevillier2197 Год назад +2

    Exactamundo Ray!!!!!

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 Год назад

    Whoop Whoop homie
    ✌🏻🐵💨✌🏻

  • @dirkbruere
    @dirkbruere Год назад +1

    Video is of UK roads. Just some trivia...

  • @A_Spatchula
    @A_Spatchula Год назад

    I walk a lonely road, the only one that I have ever known!!!!!

  • @juliannacolombo5584
    @juliannacolombo5584 Год назад +3

    Great. I'm a "Julie" who is about to pull off on an hour long drive at night. Should be extra interesting !

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  Год назад +1

      Sorry! I hope all will be OK.

  • @MichaelSchisler-jx3uc
    @MichaelSchisler-jx3uc 8 месяцев назад

    GREAT STORY I WISH THEY WOULD ALL END LIKE THAT❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY