The Man in Black | I CAN’T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE THIS ONE!

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  • Опубликовано: 4 июн 2024
  • ‘They look just like us. They walk amongst us unnoticed, blending in so perfectly that no one will recognize them for who and what they actually are…’
    UPDATE: There is a sequel to this story: • The Man with Black Hor...
    Today’s phenomenal tale of terror is ‘The Man in Black’, an epic work by Taxi Dancer, kindly shared directly with me via my sub-reddit and narrated here for you all with the author’s express permission.
    user/Taxi_Dancer/
    Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
    / dr-creepen
    / dr-creepen-vol-2
    Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
    Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
    Thumbnail image created using Adobe Spark, under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
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    00:00:00 Introduction
    00:00:23 Part 1
    00:17:47 Part 2
    00:35:55 Part 3
    00:57:57 Epilogue
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  • @foxrecon19d
    @foxrecon19d Год назад +96

    Good Lord! The one story which I predicted that the Good Doctor wouldn't narrate... he actually narrates! Then... THEN!... you guys comment that you actually like the story! WTF is wrong with you folks? LOL! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story... I guess? Cheers! T_D

    • @cathrinewhite7629
      @cathrinewhite7629 Год назад +9

      TD; everyone here is addicted to your writing! The only problem is, we are an insatiable bunch😅. When you put out quality stories like this one, all we can do is clamor for sequels!💛🙏🏼 "Moar!!"😂z

    • @scrappydoo7887
      @scrappydoo7887 Год назад +4

      Dude I love your work.
      It's a damn shame we don't hear more.
      I honestly wish I had your insight and creativity.
      Long make you stories continue
      *May

    • @adam-bf8li
      @adam-bf8li Год назад +5

      I'm suing you for breaking my ribs from laughing.

    • @DarkPixxie
      @DarkPixxie Год назад +3

      TD, you are an incredibly talented author bro. I can’t wait to hear or read more of your brilliance. I love visualizing every little detail like an awesome movie playing in my minds eye I just can’t take my eyes off of. I’m in the works of making a channel here to narrate horror stories as well however I honestly think no one else could have given your masterpiece of a story a better narration then The Doctor 🙌🏼

    • @tnjrcfl1
      @tnjrcfl1 Год назад +1

      Loved it!!!

  • @Chicken-Noir
    @Chicken-Noir Год назад +186

    The Man in Black fled across the desert and the Gunslinger followed.

    • @kenwinger7989
      @kenwinger7989 Год назад +21

      Why couldn't that movie have been better

    • @schadow1979
      @schadow1979 Год назад +11

      ​@@kenwinger7989 cause they always screw up the books made into movies🙄😕

    • @schadow1979
      @schadow1979 Год назад +14

      ​@@kenwinger7989 Idris did a wonderful job with what he had to work with script wise

    • @mistydevillier2197
      @mistydevillier2197 Год назад +12

      @cole curtis Yes!!! Exactly. I've loved the gunslinger and two towers ever since I read them 30 years ago. I was so excited for that movie. What a disappointment 😞

    • @Obi_Wil_Kenobi
      @Obi_Wil_Kenobi Год назад

      Brilliant books fuck the movie could have been soooo good if they just followed the books. Brillant cast and crew shit script..

  • @mmmanzoeillo
    @mmmanzoeillo Год назад +23

    I knew something was up with the name Fisk...thought it was just an Easter egg. So gooooood!

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 Год назад +112

    That dude blasted spiderman. Excellent story and narration as always.

    • @scrappydoo7887
      @scrappydoo7887 Год назад +16

      And torched aquaman lol

    • @mrallen3725
      @mrallen3725 Год назад +8

      @@scrappydoo7887 I didn’t put that together till now lol

    • @abimaelmontesguardiola2774
      @abimaelmontesguardiola2774 Год назад +9

      I couldnt help but chuckle at the realization and the guy's one liner afterwards. Like dude you literally asked him who he was lmao

    • @ItsAndOddWorld
      @ItsAndOddWorld Год назад +1

      I was thinking this the minute he mentioned the eyes I was like wait a second is he tracking Peter

    • @PheeblePhilosopher
      @PheeblePhilosopher Год назад +2

      That dude was Wade Wilson aka DEADPOOL

  • @triflingbadger7989
    @triflingbadger7989 Год назад +33

    This was the most badass deadpool story i have ever heard hands down. Omg it didn't even occur to me until parker said "im your friendly neighborhood" holy crap

    • @megagundamva2694
      @megagundamva2694 Год назад +6

      I know in thought it was a monster story till that even then I wasn't sure till he checked...tough are we sure it's DP and hit Deathstroke they have the same last game and this one isn't cracking jokes

    • @triflingbadger7989
      @triflingbadger7989 Год назад +1

      @@megagundamva2694 same here. When the realization hit me my jaw dropped. And that is a fair point but i feel like the mr. Pool leans more torwards deadpool. It could be an alternate universe where he doesn't get the mutant gene and therefore doesn't go insane

    • @djloukota
      @djloukota Год назад +2

      ​@@triflingbadger7989I also thought he could be Deadpool, but Deadpool isn't a "villain" so I did a Google search and found Deathstroke real name
      Slade Joseph Wilson.
      Based on the Wikipedia page his talents and training coupled with who his adversaries are I think Deathstroke is a better fit for Mr Pool.
      en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deathstroke#:~:text=Deathstroke%20(Slade%20Joseph%20Wilson)%20is,books%20published%20by%20DC%20Comics.

    • @einienj3281
      @einienj3281 Год назад +3

      Ikr? That "I'm your friendly neighborhood...", turned everything around in a split second.. bravo! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

    • @megagundamva2694
      @megagundamva2694 Год назад

      @@triflingbadger7989 possible

  • @Julian-bq9qv
    @Julian-bq9qv Год назад +16

    The extreme attention to detail the accuracy in description of weapons and tactics, make this a delight.

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️....Julian..Are you single? ❤️🥰

    • @ivorjawa
      @ivorjawa Год назад

      Too bad the author can’t write dialogue.

  • @dylang6432
    @dylang6432 Год назад +22

    Taxi Dancer stories are my personal favorite, just finished relistening to the marines in ancient Rome, a second part to that or a continuation of the navy seal stories would be great.

    • @PBrandonR
      @PBrandonR Год назад +2

      Absolutly love taxi Dancer's stories. Wasn't there a part 2 to the space marines story?

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  Год назад +10

      There is and I haven't gotten round to doing it yet because it's 3 hours long!

    • @scrappydoo7887
      @scrappydoo7887 Год назад +2

      @@DrCreepen lol if anyone can do it Doc it's you 😜
      Seriously though boss don't overstretch yourself. We are all always happy to have anything you can get to 👍👍

    • @averybaumann
      @averybaumann Год назад +4

      ​@Dr. Creepen 3 hours you might be able to split it to 3 1 hour sections, better for the algorithm and you could combine it later.

  • @jodijohnson5052
    @jodijohnson5052 Год назад +5

    Timing is everything. Thank you more than you know. Xoxo

  • @vivavamp
    @vivavamp Год назад +1

    Definitely did not appreciate the writer's story, but Dr. Creepen always narrates stories excellently.

  • @jamesblaylock6317
    @jamesblaylock6317 Год назад +5

    Great story. Taking out super heros. Waiting on the next chapter. Writing and reading top shelf

  • @TheCynthiahawkins
    @TheCynthiahawkins Год назад +2

    Oh, no! Poor Mary Jane!

  • @Nathan_golf
    @Nathan_golf Год назад +2

    Drink - check, time for some bedtime listening

  • @joefranks2356
    @joefranks2356 Год назад +3

    Excellent story! I had a feeling it was the nerd, but the Spider-Man part threw me for a loop. Loved it! Keep em coming Doc. 😱

  • @EveHyland-in8jb9ti9y
    @EveHyland-in8jb9ti9y Год назад +26

    Thanks. To The man, the myth the legend The Good Dr⚕️ Thanks for keeping my insomniac mind occupied for a good bit ❤ I hope you and your loved ones enjoyed your weekend? I really enjoyed this one especially the twist at the end. I appreciate your narration as always. Blessings to you and yours from across the pond, Scotland. 🙏⚔️🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿⚔️🌹

  • @idolhandz3946
    @idolhandz3946 Год назад +1

    Hell’s Kitchen? Fisk? I fully expected Daredevil to show up in this story.😂

  • @DopoOrochi
    @DopoOrochi Год назад +1

    The Legion of Doom has been busy I see. Amazing story Doc!!

  • @edacheson8540
    @edacheson8540 Год назад +9

    It's good. I haven't even gotten more than 1 minute in, heard you say Taxi Dancer, and hit like immediately. That's my level of confidence in this combination.

    • @scrappydoo7887
      @scrappydoo7887 Год назад +1

      For sure 👍 taxi is one of the very best story writers I've have seen on RUclips as a whole that has consistently written great stories

  • @crowking421
    @crowking421 Год назад

    The gears in my brain are throwing sparks! Bravo 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽

  • @hiromitsumoonblossom8682
    @hiromitsumoonblossom8682 Год назад

    That... Was... Hilarious.
    I did not expect this to turn into a marvel/DC villain introduction.

  • @williamchandler2937
    @williamchandler2937 Год назад +1

    Ok the idea that spandex types are cryptic is cool. But yeah that dude would have been toast,period. Good alternative story.

  • @jasonbernard9012
    @jasonbernard9012 Год назад +5

    This just had chills running throughout my body…wowwwww what execution! I’m not a superhero-type story fan at all (I know a lot of people will throw shade at me for that and I accept it), but wow…this came in like a cryptid type story and came out as a superhuman story. Splendid work Doctor. One of my favorites that I’ve heard you tell thus far without question

  • @WtfYouMeanDude
    @WtfYouMeanDude Год назад +5

    This one sounds like its gonna be good - cant wait. Been waiting for a good story all day.. thanks!

  • @Zeus-kj7nn
    @Zeus-kj7nn Год назад +2

    Just tuned in! Thankyou Dr! Great timing! 😊

  • @Monbeasto
    @Monbeasto Год назад +1

    I hope one day one of these 1 hour long horror stories get animated with you narrating over it. That would be so awesome!

  • @maxhonneger2761
    @maxhonneger2761 Год назад +5

    "Are we the baddies?"
    (a la Mitchell and Webb)
    I suspected that the "creature" was that nerd kid; however, I had no idea that he was a "good guy" and that Pool's employers were the evil ones. And so, apparently, was Pool, as he was only in it for the money. An Alfred Hitchcock twist if ever I saw one.
    An excellent story, Taxi Dancer; and an excellent narration by our Dear Doctor. Thank you both very much!

  • @burliesanford1863
    @burliesanford1863 Год назад

    Now that was a cool story . Hell I guess he's going to take out the whole Justice League. Then what , the Avengers? Excellent story Dr. Creepen indeed . Keep it up .

  • @jackson0575
    @jackson0575 Год назад +2

    I'm here on time this time YAY🎉

  • @greanstreak04
    @greanstreak04 11 месяцев назад +1

    5 million for one cryptid! The Winchesters would be pissed...

  • @RavWillTree
    @RavWillTree Год назад +1

    Oooh Tony Stark is gonna get you now! Great story!

  • @Rebel9668
    @Rebel9668 Год назад

    Oh, that was simply brilliant, I've been waiting for years for someone to smash that spider-nerd, lol.

  • @kamalscorner2862
    @kamalscorner2862 Год назад

    YOU GOT ME DR CREEPEN 😂😂😂😂 I LOVE IT!!

  • @BrandyBeach
    @BrandyBeach Год назад +6

    Thank you for all you do, your such a great narrator, you help relax my mind at night and put me to sleep 👍🏻👏🏻💕

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️...Brandy...Are you single? 🥰

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  Год назад

      Wow, thank you!

  • @michaelcanan5794
    @michaelcanan5794 Год назад

    Great twist💯 Really didn't anticipate that. Fantastic narration 🤙

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 Год назад

    Very nice twist. Thanks for sharing this with us. More please.

  • @tomkloster1251
    @tomkloster1251 Год назад

    Great story! Thank you Dr Creepen and the Author.

  • @HomeandHearthHomestead
    @HomeandHearthHomestead Год назад +14

    Good Doctor, as always you never disappoint. Taxi Dancer, thank you for an amazing story!
    Holy shit! What a ride!

  • @TheChellybean85
    @TheChellybean85 Год назад

    This made me smile and snort and I really needed it today! Thx!

  • @adam-bf8li
    @adam-bf8li Год назад +1

    Omg hahahahahaha that ending 😂
    I can't breath. Hahahahaha
    My ribs are breaking. Help.

  • @TattooedPink
    @TattooedPink 11 месяцев назад

    Cheers 😊 looking forward to this!

  • @BenSS3
    @BenSS3 Год назад +6

    Awsome story! Did NOT see that coming at the end, let me tell ya that much. Great narration, as well, which I have come to expect from my favorite doctor.
    The Doctor is in, and will see you now...

  • @jamisondebolt5590
    @jamisondebolt5590 Год назад

    Was not expecting my favorite superhero to be the "cryptid." What a weird twist

  • @daltonwagster9360
    @daltonwagster9360 Год назад

    I always start a story when I get home from the nights I work until midnight. Start a new story and roll my night joint and sit on my porch while I get spooky. Then head to bead with a headphone in to not bother my other half and finish the story in the morning. You have quickly become my favorite. Over CGS. Over Creepypod. Top notch narration good doctor. Top. Notch.

  • @bigsko05
    @bigsko05 Год назад +1

    Great story with an awesome twist that i didn’t see coming!

  • @leavoda3791
    @leavoda3791 Год назад

    @Taxi dancer and @Dr. Creepen THIS WAS AN AMAZING SPINOFF!!!
    Could you imagine if this was made into a Marvel/DC coop movie and all the Marvel and DC fans losing their minds over it!!??!! Could you imagine if it was filmed as a monster slasher, having this suspence and reveal at the very end!?! Like if all the trailers portrayed the main character as a good guy fighting monsters, without revealing in any way how the story ends?!? IT WOULD BE EPIC!!! Taxi dancer, you did something incredible here!! I really hope thia gets used as a script for a movie!

  • @rogerwilliams977
    @rogerwilliams977 Год назад

    Way cool twist, would love to see the continuing of this story!

  • @w4shep
    @w4shep Год назад

    BEST TWIST EVER !!
    Thank you for this amazing story !!
    Absolutely loved it !!!
    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @jonathanporter5223
    @jonathanporter5223 Год назад +1

    Hahaha I knew it! As soon as he thought the "creature" had a sense it was in danger, I thought, imagine it's Spiderman he's after. LOL! And then that ending really shined the light on what had happened in the past, and what what was going to happen in the future, too. This story was truly a unique perspective on some popular comic book franchises. Well done.

  • @gerpir
    @gerpir Год назад

    HAHA! Brilliant :D Now I need to hear it again with the new perspective in mind :D Love it!

  • @grumpy2388
    @grumpy2388 Год назад +1

    Nooo way bro killed Spidey🤯, what the heck they sending him after the justice league🤯🫣😀, Awesome!!

  • @annettew5740
    @annettew5740 Год назад +1

    Great story! Loved the ending!😂

  • @gettyro7390
    @gettyro7390 Год назад

    Oh this was soooo good!

  • @funandgames7847
    @funandgames7847 Год назад +16

    Hands down one of my favorite authors the Great Taxi Dancer and the best narrator the good Doctor I hope you are feeling better.

  • @KingJim97
    @KingJim97 Год назад

    Hey doc, been a while since i had my dose from you. Glad to see your stories are as interesting as they were when i subbed keep it up!😊

  • @mattmaddox6417
    @mattmaddox6417 Год назад +1

    Doc in the house!🎉

  • @charlieghostwolf6161
    @charlieghostwolf6161 Год назад +2

    Thank you Taxi Dancer this was an outstanding story, I look forward to more
    Thank you good Dr for another excellent choice and another excellent narration

  • @thevillageblacksmith8550
    @thevillageblacksmith8550 Год назад +1

    Well that was certainly a heck of a plot twist

  • @jumierjordan7167
    @jumierjordan7167 Год назад

    That was Dope bro

  • @jraz1714
    @jraz1714 Год назад

    Please give us more of his stories!! This was so good!

  • @morgancaughlin5298
    @morgancaughlin5298 Год назад

    I just have the old Spider-Man theme going in my head the whole time I am listening to this.

  • @merihimsolomon2331
    @merihimsolomon2331 Год назад

    Beautifully imagined and delivered

  • @mommymommy915
    @mommymommy915 9 месяцев назад

    My jaw was on the floor when the pieces came together

  • @turtlesage3709
    @turtlesage3709 Год назад +2

    That was a awesome story I hope it's a series great reading as always

  • @hamburglar1978
    @hamburglar1978 Год назад

    The hints were subtle but that's what made them amazing. "This one may be from a different universe than the aquatic one." Because Aquaman and Spider-Man are from the DC and Marvel universes!

  • @ronaldcheatham1321
    @ronaldcheatham1321 11 месяцев назад +1

    This isn't fiction.
    ☝🏾😳
    THIS.
    Is a TRUE STORY.
    Written under the guise of fiction.
    There's more to this than people realize.

  • @mrcavanaugh42
    @mrcavanaugh42 Год назад +1

    This was phenomenal! Reminds me of the Clancy's splinter cell books.. My absolute favorite.. Please tell this author, MORE!
    THANKS

  • @reesagames
    @reesagames Год назад

    I really enjoyed this one. Will definitely be listening to part 2.😊

  • @AdragusJames
    @AdragusJames Год назад +3

    Look out😂

  • @doughovious5317
    @doughovious5317 Год назад

    That was awesome!!!

  • @Tara-tp4km
    @Tara-tp4km Год назад

    Fantastic love this one can't wait for the rest !!!

  • @antreynolds9775
    @antreynolds9775 Год назад

    Wow I hope this becomes a series I'd love to hear more thank you Dr great job

  • @iamnoone9041
    @iamnoone9041 Год назад

    I was definitely not expecting the way this story ended. Very interesting indeed.

  • @nicoleperry1157
    @nicoleperry1157 10 месяцев назад

    He kills Spider-Man! Oh Lord have mercy!😂😂

  • @strideknight
    @strideknight Год назад

    LOL, Well that was a big ol' plot twist. Wow. Cheers Doc, thanks for the great stories as always.

  • @davidbuskohl1028
    @davidbuskohl1028 Год назад

    Omg I got to hear more of this story ASAP it's going to kill me until it drops😂😂😂 and as always great job doc

  • @TheWarriorz90
    @TheWarriorz90 Год назад +1

    We need more of this series 🤙

  • @petergrant7767
    @petergrant7767 Год назад

    Great story would like more of this needs more parts for sure cheers doc

  • @dottie2557
    @dottie2557 Год назад

    Excellent! This made my day! OXOXO

  • @Timenaught
    @Timenaught Год назад

    Quite a twist. Very, very good.

  • @Riddledred
    @Riddledred Год назад +1

    Oh my that was yummy! Like a superhero/cryptid version of Wicked! Thank both you and the author for a very satisfying bedtime treat!

  • @mrGunRu
    @mrGunRu 2 месяца назад

    😂absolutely loved it!

  • @danieltriplett3616
    @danieltriplett3616 Год назад

    Loved it !!!

  • @mattwood7158
    @mattwood7158 Год назад +8

    Love when they throw true facts about our shady government into these stories 😅

  • @adamepps6136
    @adamepps6136 6 месяцев назад

    AMAZING!

  • @shado7418
    @shado7418 Год назад +1

    Great twist ending, fun story👍

  • @AestheticWaif
    @AestheticWaif Год назад

    That was fantastic!

  • @emperor002002
    @emperor002002 Год назад +1

    Slade Wilson? 😂 Good twist.

  • @kendraharer5753
    @kendraharer5753 Год назад

    I can't wait for the next one!

  • @graemefeeney9678
    @graemefeeney9678 Год назад

    Brilliant

  • @BiornBear
    @BiornBear Год назад +16

    I can tell this will be a series and I can’t wait lol. Loved it.

  • @tracyweekley5577
    @tracyweekley5577 Год назад

    That was an interesting twist on the present narrative. 👍

  • @SaltToes
    @SaltToes Год назад

    Definitely going to be following this. I love story’s where they follow the bad guys that win. Definitely was shocked that this was Spider-Man

  • @Byrdstar6423-un3me
    @Byrdstar6423-un3me 3 месяца назад

    The second I heard Fisk law firm and the hells kitchen name drop and the description of the creature in black I knew what I was getting into....blew my mind when it came into fruition as a marvel creepypasta

  • @Sunshine-kp3xv
    @Sunshine-kp3xv Год назад

    Awesome story- I fell asleep so had to start over this morning.

  • @shadowcaster9839
    @shadowcaster9839 Год назад

    Omg! Death to the avengers!! Excellent narration, you made me love this! Seriously the best avengers story ever!!

  • @leegreene186
    @leegreene186 Год назад +2

    Yay

  • @_P0tat07_
    @_P0tat07_ Год назад

    DUDE😂😂😂. AWESOME

  • @MaskedRiderChris
    @MaskedRiderChris Год назад

    Whoa, whoa...he just shot SPIDER-MAN?! Daaaang. Interesting idea. Got a chuckle out of "She looks Israeli to me," because we know why. :) That ending was awesome!

  • @johngolden3714
    @johngolden3714 Год назад

    Spidey!! Noooo!!! LOL! A great story with a great twist. So, many name drops in this story. Loved it. Too bad the current MCU/DCEU can't come up with anything half as good as this and they've got tons of material to work with.

  • @SgtRocko
    @SgtRocko Год назад

    THAT is AWESOME

  • @foxrecon19d
    @foxrecon19d Год назад +3

    Hello, wonderful Creepy Doctor listeners. Yes, I hear you. You would like more to the story. HOWEVER... with the cat out of the bag, so to speak, it would be extremely difficult to write a follow on story which will have such a shocking ending, a subversion of expectations, as this one. Having said that, I have begun writing a story that is actually more evil than this one called The Man In Black Horns, which will make this one seem like a Sesame Street bed time story.

    • @ravenconnors8573
      @ravenconnors8573 Год назад

      That would be phenomenal, hell of a twist. Well done.

    • @JadedBelle
      @JadedBelle Год назад

      Looking forward to it!