Damn, it’s been so long. I revisit some of MCP’s videos from time to time for the hell of it, and honestly I miss the “golden age” of Creepypasta’s from 2009-2012, when I was just a braindead kid who had nothing else to worry about.
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My old town's urban legend was about this long and very narrow alley near the beach. People said that a person was brutally murdered in the alley and that if you ever went through there late at night on your own, the two wooden doors that reside at the two entrances/exits would shut and lock you in. Nobody knows what happens after that except that the people who get locked in there are never to be seen again. Apparently if you walk past the entrances/exits during the day, you can hear someone whimpering.
I think this is my favorite story out of all that you've read (that I've listened to so far). It's so well-written, the characters feel so real. And you read it really well.
Nino Small It's a good idea for a story but It's too deep... If anyone was old enough listening to this story they might have horrible flashbacks and make hate to the certain channel
This was one of the best stories I've ever heard you read, MCP. I loved it. The story itself was extremely well-written, and the way you read it and put it together was excellent. Great job! :D
Whenever I hear story it reinvigorates my desire to go there, find this place, and get those kids out of there. Either this place really does exist or this writer is absolutely fantastic.
This really freaked me out because I live like less than an hour from Broken Bow, and spent a ton of time there too, while I know it's fictional it's still enough to freak me out 0.0
Mitchell Mcalpine and thank you for the insstant paranoia. I hope it's fictional but honestly if it's not doesn't surprise me NE is full of crazies so, yea.
Mitchell Mcalpine damndude :( I saw all 3 parts yesterday night before going to "sleep".that didn't help xD If you see the the showrs 2.2 and click the pasta in the description you can see the comments of a guy who lives in NE and has a friend in the city of that story. guess what? It looks like there are stories about that shit...omg if its real man...my theory is that the liquid is some substance that creates hallucinations. i hope...
there's a creepypasta about the Bunny Man Bridge which is a real thing, a couple minutes away from where I live. I guess that's our urban legend here in Virginia
When I was listening, I kinda dosed off when I closed my eyes, half conscious. When I was half awake, I was like, " hey Greg what happened to your voice". Then, I was like " wait, that's not Greg, that's mrcreepypasta". Greg is a guy who usually tells people stories so, yeah. Got confused.
This sounds like my life. Moving from place to place collecting ghost stories and unnerving experiences. The only reason I listen to these is because I relate.
I think the use of sound effects really added to his content back in the day, like this legitimately gave me a jittering feeling in my chest i use to get back in Highschool with these stories. Hope he uses sound effects again.
dude he's the best to me easy to understand he makes you feel like you're in the story I hear this creepypastas all day at work and my day goes by fast like if I'm watching a movie you just imagine everything real cool stuff another one of my favorites it's corpsehusband check him out
To address everyone, I mean the narrator within the story. I've been subbed to Pasta for a while now. He's the best. I mean the guy who, in the beginning of the story, tells us that he likes to exaggerate stories.
+Adrian Adams I feel like we're getting a double unreliable narrator here, since this is a retelling of a story told by another person, and both seem prone to exaggeration.
Dude you really are truly good at this,you never have let me down,everytime I listen to you I get the chills and I get so intrigued about what you talk about,you truly are a master.
damm ive listened to a lot of his stories and cant quit listing to them i wish i could meet this guy in real life and give him an award or some thing he telles the storys so good calm and clear
Read more pastas like this. Also im realizing that I was probably around the age of 11 when I started listening to your channel, I'm 20 now. 😅 its nice to listen to an old pasta like this but it really makes me reflect on how your voice has pretty much always put me to sleep or just gave me something interesting to listen too. Kind of weird, anyway keep it up bro thanks. Maybe I'll catch you at a comic con sometime. ☺
Just love these stories... I've listened to almost of them, and of course I've listened to my fav's over a dozen times... just put my phone above my head when I lay down for the night, and I can't say how many times I've spooked myself. Lol just the stories and the way the creepy pasta narrating them. Classic story telling...
Why I don't get, is why didn't mr.Maze contact the police and so a full on investigation could be initiated? Why didn't the protagonist contact the police? So weird...
They did, it's just that the police said that they were drunk, and it didn't happen, so no investigation was held. Mr. Mays said that when he met the protagonist again at the bar.
I completely forgot about this until the 10yr stream. I never knew therr was more than one part and I got so excited because this, the first part, is so exceptionally good. So excited to relive this story again.
creepy is more accurate. it feels wrong and you get a deep down"i don't want this to exist"feeling. you don't just know it doesn't exist, you are very happy it doesn't exist. sometimes a story triggers a fear someone has. if mirrors unnerve you then a story about a story about one will tug that fear. that's the folks who say a story is scary. people messing with things they don't understand bother me irl. thus the ritual how to stories get me as I get curiousin a"what if I was doing that". the eyeless maiden story affects me a bit... though that ffffn visual used helps.
I loved this story. Most of it is hype and building tension, without much of a payoff, but somehow the author makes it work and keeps me enthralled. I'm looking forward to the follow ups.
I live 30 minutes away from broken bow Nebraska. I am not shitting you. That fucking creeped me out. It's alright place aside from the many feedlots that make it smell, but what are the fucking chance's.
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Oh my god, this is so old that his voice is audibly younger. That's actually kind of adorable.
It's crazy when you listen to it now. 7 years....wow I remember listening to this when he first uploaded it on my old account.
It is absolutely adorable!
Wanna be friends
I like it better then now
Sit the fuck. Wrong with you
the golden age of creepy pastas..... awwwwh the memories
Damn, it’s been so long. I revisit some of MCP’s videos from time to time for the hell of it, and honestly I miss the “golden age” of Creepypasta’s from 2009-2012, when I was just a braindead kid who had nothing else to worry about.
Seriously this is THE most underrated Creepypasta I've ever heard...simply masterful.
>teacher's name is "Mr. Mays" and there's a part 2
BUT WAIT THERE'S MORE!
MR. MAYS HERE TO SHOW YOU THIS *AMAZING* CREEPYPASTA!
***** He said both :3
Spoder Men He was a good mlg bloke..
Shamwowooowww
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I’m so old. I remember listening to these stories like it was yesterday. Good times
My old town's urban legend was about this long and very narrow alley near the beach. People said that a person was brutally murdered in the alley and that if you ever went through there late at night on your own, the two wooden doors that reside at the two entrances/exits would shut and lock you in. Nobody knows what happens after that except that the people who get locked in there are never to be seen again.
Apparently if you walk past the entrances/exits during the day, you can hear someone whimpering.
*BRIGG* IT ON! I'm sorry... ;-;
That's a good fuckin story
Where is this
You're very good at storytelling!
This story is so sad as much as it is weird and dark.
This and NoEnd House are my favorite series' out of all creepypastas
Ditto!
I remember this one being really good, so here I am 7 years later to listen to it again
Listening 11 years later as well I loved this one
I think this is my favorite story out of all that you've read (that I've listened to so far). It's so well-written, the characters feel so real. And you read it really well.
I honestly thought this would be an Auschwitz creepypasta
Nino Small is there any concentration camp creepy pastas I wonder?
Nino Small
It's a good idea for a story but
It's too deep...
If anyone was old enough listening to this story
they might have horrible flashbacks and make hate to the certain channel
Same .......
What a gas.
@@davedildo698 old enough to remember the chamber's?
1. They'd be dead
2. They'd have to be at least 75 to even remember that time
Honestly.
This is still the Scariest, and most Well Written Creepypasta i've ever listened too.
When I looked at the title "The Showers" and heard you say "teacher", I said to myself, "Well this can't be good."
This story is so good I had to come around for another go. I really like this story. Good job as usual MCP.
Over three years later and this is still one of my favourite pastas and my favourite narration. Just wonderful work.
This is one of my favorites of yours. I keep coming back to it whenever I need to work. Both the writing and the way you read it are perfect.
This was one of the best stories I've ever heard you read, MCP. I loved it. The story itself was extremely well-written, and the way you read it and put it together was excellent. Great job! :D
Whenever I hear story it reinvigorates my desire to go there, find this place, and get those kids out of there. Either this place really does exist or this writer is absolutely fantastic.
The writer is just good.
Or.. maybe it was written to cope with a real experience? Heheh
This was the very first creepy pasta I ever listened to, forever greatful
Mr Mays, expert in Oxi-Clean studies.
Janine Hosë *BILLY MAYS HERE*
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our stories are simply the best. they get better and better as you tell them!! keep them coming please!!!
Who thought this was about a haunted shower :D
SkyFox me!!!!!
SkyFox
Me
at first i thought it was like the shower place from the origional it movie
i literally thought it was some toilet bound hanako - kun spin off lol
I thought it was about a monster or a guy watching you while you shower.
This really freaked me out because I live like less than an hour from Broken Bow, and spent a ton of time there too, while I know it's fictional it's still enough to freak me out 0.0
How do you know its fictional..?
Mitchell Mcalpine and thank you for the insstant paranoia. I hope it's fictional but honestly if it's not doesn't surprise me NE is full of crazies so, yea.
Mitchell Mcalpine
no, you are not doing that shit right now...
Uchiha Madara oh yes I am (;
Mitchell Mcalpine damndude :( I saw all 3 parts yesterday night before going to "sleep".that didn't help xD If you see the the showrs 2.2 and click the pasta in the description you can see the comments of a guy who lives in NE and has a friend in the city of that story. guess what? It looks like there are stories about that shit...omg if its real man...my theory is that the liquid is some substance that creates hallucinations. i hope...
Remains one of the very best stories out there!
Greatest story ever told, thank you.
Geez, Mcp sure knows how to read a story. His voice can get intense and quick at one moment, then soft and slow in the next. Nice!
I laughed at the "Go upthe road a mile to the corn, take a right then go down to the other corn, n' there should be some wheat on your right" AHAHAHA
From someone who lives in the country. This is so accurate.
"Corn plains . . ."
"Porn planes?"
". . . And more corn."
"Oh."
Easily one of my all time favorites, S tier Pasta
So that's where they keep the Eternal Scouts.
And now, the weather.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand I'm dead.
Linz Hatter Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand it's gone.
hahaha yes
ShootingStarNeo Its going to be cloudy with a chance of rain. Now time for Sports, back to you Jill.
I'm going full screen. Cover me.
on it
laying down supressing fire!
Enemy coming from behind
william carlson fire in da screen
I got your 6 bro. :) *thumbs up*
"Oh no, someone decided to take a shit in the bathtub. Not again! Oh no, just spray some fuckin' KABOOM, it's gone." -Mr. Mays
Jaboody AF
+Medici Soldier really tho
there's a creepypasta about the Bunny Man Bridge which is a real thing, a couple minutes away from where I live. I guess that's our urban legend here in Virginia
i live in virginia to when i heard that story i wouldn go outside for a few days.
Whats the story
bunny man bridge i think
manuel casares The gist of the story is that a man dressed in a rabbit suit went around a certain area in Virgina and attacked people with an axe.
I live in Virginia too, not far from the bridge and it is pretty well known so I guess that would be our urban legend.
This young... young voice, brings back nostalgia from watching to your videos 3-4 years ago. You're one of my favorites ever MCP!
You know what's scary...when you are in prison and you drop the soap in the shower
Always been one of my favorite creepypastas
Glad I sub around the time you began.
the only person that i thought of while i listen to the teacher is bryan cranston or walter white
And yeah I know he plays Walter
+Stephone the jerk HOW DO YOU.... OMG.... HOW DID YOU KNOW?!!
SAME
One of my favorites ever, I basically grew up on this story
Right? This and Borraska, the Left Right Game - I fycking love MrCreepyPasta
Loving that little burst of Nox Arcana at the very start of the video
The knocking at 17:10 scared me , I had my volume up high.
I know me too
When I was listening, I kinda dosed off when I closed my eyes, half conscious. When I was half awake, I was like, " hey Greg what happened to your voice". Then, I was like " wait, that's not Greg, that's mrcreepypasta".
Greg is a guy who usually tells people stories so, yeah. Got confused.
Thanks for lettin us know, man.
There is a better reason why not to go near Nebraska then the supernatural, it is Nebraska.
You have now seen all of Nebraska, please come again soon
Still one of the best creepypastas.
i hate it when you are just stuck driving past porn fields
~
+Luppy Shitn Well aren't you just a ray of sunshine!
That's what I heard too.
+LAUGHER CAKE hey he's covered wars you know
Hydra i covered mad wars
"Hi, Mr. Mays here, to tell you the scariest ghost story you have ever seen! or heard!"
Go on then
But first this line of coke!
........to soon?????
*calm through the whole story*
*jumps up when he says "Wisconsin"*
I live in Wisconsin okay.
I started to tear up and I don't know why...
This was one of the first stories I've ever heard from MCP and I always come back to it.
I like the subtle way the music and ambiance is brought in.
Damn it me! Why do I make myself listen to these right before I go to sleep?
Why? Don't you like nightmares?
***** After all dreams don't exist, only nightmares...
***** Some more than others
i had a similar experience...........
it was at my church..............
Waht.
that was me...
?
Tell me more.......*turns in to devil*
do u really want to hear it?
oh how i just love the long pastas :D
After all of the creepypastas I've listened to on your channel, this one is still my favorite.
This sounds like my life. Moving from place to place collecting ghost stories and unnerving experiences. The only reason I listen to these is because I relate.
And I came in here thinking that "The showers" was a prison rape story...
This is the best comment I've ever seen
Him: Mailwaukee, Wisconsin.
Me: Oh helllllllz naw. You best not be comin for mer.
oh, that's fine, i didn't want to sleep anyway...
Mr creepy pasta your videos are amazing. Much scarier than most horror films you can watch nowadays. Keep up the awesome work !
I think the use of sound effects really added to his content back in the day, like this legitimately gave me a jittering feeling in my chest i use to get back in Highschool with these stories. Hope he uses sound effects again.
"but you're all smart kids…except for jerry" XD
one of my teachers once said "shit"
Graceful Lynx I go to an alternate school and the teachers try to get along with the students and they cuss so much its kind of appalling
it's so difficult to choose if this is a reliable narrator or not.
He's the best to do it tbh
dude he's the best to me easy to understand he makes you feel like you're in the story I hear this creepypastas all day at work and my day goes by fast like if I'm watching a movie you just imagine everything real cool stuff another one of my favorites it's corpsehusband check him out
To address everyone, I mean the narrator within the story. I've been subbed to Pasta for a while now. He's the best. I mean the guy who, in the beginning of the story, tells us that he likes to exaggerate stories.
+Adrian Adams I feel like we're getting a double unreliable narrator here, since this is a retelling of a story told by another person, and both seem prone to exaggeration.
I know
Dude you really are truly good at this,you never have let me down,everytime I listen to you I get the chills and I get so intrigued about what you talk about,you truly are a master.
damm ive listened to a lot of his stories and cant quit listing to them i wish i could meet this guy in real life and give him an award or some thing he telles the storys so good calm and clear
16:15 whats the song, dont tell me read the description, I have and have been to all three places... I NEED TAT SONG ITS AWESHUM!
***** THANK YOU SHO MUCH
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Eddy Creato what language is that, I'd I may ask? It's very pretty.
***** thank you :)
***** tht isnt.Arabic. It's Bengali......
someone should make a movie about this
I second that.
I third that ( i know its awkward to third something but I'm an awkward person)
I 4th that
Fudge this man. Listened to like 10 of his stories right as I'm going to bed... In hindsight, probably should have stopped after 2 of them
fudge
Best nightmares i ever had
I ADORE these creepy pastas. And if he ever stoped making these forever and so did every one else my life would be lost
This is by far the best Creepy Pasta.
I wanna hear part 2 but I have to take a shower
Lime scale. Rust. Ground-in dirt.
cillit bang. Bang, AND OH JESUS THE GHOSTS AINT GONE
sounds like you need some CLR
Going full screen and turning the lights off!
rip
Ded.
@AlexFDR this was insanely impressive writing especially since it was your first pasta good work man
You uploaded this on my birthday, awe, thank you!
This still doesn't answer who was phone
I just came out the shower G R E A T T T T T T T
CreepsPIL me too 0_o
Children of the Corn!
Read more pastas like this. Also im realizing that I was probably around the age of 11 when I started listening to your channel, I'm 20 now. 😅 its nice to listen to an old pasta like this but it really makes me reflect on how your voice has pretty much always put me to sleep or just gave me something interesting to listen too. Kind of weird, anyway keep it up bro thanks. Maybe I'll catch you at a comic con sometime. ☺
This is seriously the best creepypasta you've ever read.
Is this... Is this Dylan Sindelar as in Michael/Patrick Andersen actor Dylan Sindelar
Because if it is
Holy crap
That's freaking awesome
I'm pretty sure it is. :3
I'm pretty sure it is. :3
I know I'm late but are you talking about MLandersen? The slender man series?
Random Guy yes indeed ^u^
+Hannah Bellamy cool
Steven King jizzed on a computer, and creepy pasta was the result.
Zeroxylon wtf? Lol
What's the intro music?
Erik Satie - Gymnopédie No.1
This is my favorite creepy pasta hands down.
Just love these stories... I've listened to almost of them, and of course I've listened to my fav's over a dozen times... just put my phone above my head when I lay down for the night, and I can't say how many times I've spooked myself. Lol just the stories and the way the creepy pasta narrating them. Classic story telling...
Why I don't get, is why didn't mr.Maze contact the police and so a full on investigation could be initiated?
Why didn't the protagonist contact the police? So weird...
Because fuck the police. But no seriously. Every story has the same cliche. They usually die.
They did, it's just that the police said that they were drunk, and it didn't happen, so no investigation was held. Mr. Mays said that when he met the protagonist again at the bar.
Mr Mays DID contact police...
Because it's a bullshit story that could be you know... Made up...
He was an o.g gangsta, never cooperating with da law
His voice sounds different in this video
Its his "female" voice :3
oh nvm xD
i like to say part of a sentence (Pause)
and then finish it half a minute later
I completely forgot about this until the 10yr stream. I never knew therr was more than one part and I got so excited because this, the first part, is so exceptionally good. So excited to relive this story again.
Revisiting this series and man oh man you sound so young
Billy maze, the best teacher ever!!!!
Mr. Mays is really Billy Mays before he became famous!
lol?
that made me laugh harder than i should have.
These are entertaining and all, but do people actually get scared by these?
It's more just something soothing to listen to when your about to fall asleep
creepy is more accurate. it feels wrong and you get a deep down"i don't want this to exist"feeling. you don't just know it doesn't exist, you are very happy it doesn't exist.
sometimes a story triggers a fear someone has. if mirrors unnerve you then a story about a story about one will tug that fear. that's the folks who say a story is scary.
people messing with things they don't understand bother me irl. thus the ritual how to stories get me as I get curiousin a"what if I was doing that". the eyeless maiden story affects me a bit... though that ffffn visual used helps.
listen to it at night
Jacob Debon I _only_ listen to these at night.
+Hexx with your closet open
That was exhilarating! Your narration is just perfect. I could see everything and feel it too.
one of my favorite creepypastas, great narrating
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Was my comment deleted..? Lol.
Pretty sure it's been said 800 times but...Don't drop the soap.
Why not?
Dropping the soap. sounds anal
0_o wwwhhatt... ttthhee... fuuuuckkk...
I loved this story. Most of it is hype and building tension, without much of a payoff, but somehow the author makes it work and keeps me enthralled. I'm looking forward to the follow ups.
truth fully one of the best creepy pasta ive heard in year grats to you mr.creepypasta keep up the hard work
I live 30 minutes away from broken bow Nebraska. I am not shitting you. That fucking creeped me out. It's alright place aside from the many feedlots that make it smell, but what are the fucking chance's.
Skullomadness ever go looking for the place?