When I first heard this fanfic, I came up with an idea for my own. Quite a few fics have Naruto being the only team 7 member work the D-Ranks but getting reprimanded because of villagers & Kakashi's neglect. This is done as part of Naruto crummy backstory BUT what if it is a key detail? What if someone blows the whistle, someone new to the village or perhaps (if Kakashi isn't unintentionally neglectful like this fic, but willfully neglectful, feeling that Naruto took his sensei away even before his birth) Tazuna & family. Good news, the investigation gets Naruto justice and competition, bad news, this happens too near the time of the Chuinin exams too join a new team and misses them.
This is a good story, but his too much exposition and explanations. The first 17 minutes is used just to explain characters and their background and who quickly get forgotten. Seriously, so much of this information was not needed or could have been shortened.
For the life of me, I can't understand why people that write these what ifs are thinking by giving Sakura any kind of dialogue. It makes my ears wanna puke! Even describing her facial features is a waste of space on a clean paper. Putting anything Sakura related on paper automatically turns it into used toilet paper by someone with extreme diarrhea. 🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
Please make a part 2
When I first heard this fanfic, I came up with an idea for my own. Quite a few fics have Naruto being the only team 7 member work the D-Ranks but getting reprimanded because of villagers & Kakashi's neglect. This is done as part of Naruto crummy backstory BUT what if it is a key detail? What if someone blows the whistle, someone new to the village or perhaps (if Kakashi isn't unintentionally neglectful like this fic, but willfully neglectful, feeling that Naruto took his sensei away even before his birth) Tazuna & family. Good news, the investigation gets Naruto justice and competition, bad news, this happens too near the time of the Chuinin exams too join a new team and misses them.
part 2 pls
Part2 please 🙏 thank
Requesting all parts + a link &/or name for the Fanfiction.
Pt2 plssss
This is a good story, but his too much exposition and explanations. The first 17 minutes is used just to explain characters and their background and who quickly get forgotten. Seriously, so much of this information was not needed or could have been shortened.
Awesome love it next part please 🙏 ❤❤❤
Don't talk or explain things in the middle of the damn fight
What is name of fanfic
what is the name?
For the life of me, I can't understand why people that write these what ifs are thinking by giving Sakura any kind of dialogue. It makes my ears wanna puke! Even describing her facial features is a waste of space on a clean paper. Putting anything Sakura related on paper automatically turns it into used toilet paper by someone with extreme diarrhea. 🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
Part 2 please
Part two please