When I first heard this fanfic, I came up with an idea for my own. Quite a few fics have Naruto being the only team 7 member work the D-Ranks but getting reprimanded because of villagers & Kakashi's neglect. This is done as part of Naruto crummy backstory BUT what if it is a key detail? What if someone blows the whistle, someone new to the village or perhaps (if Kakashi isn't unintentionally neglectful like this fic, but willfully neglectful, feeling that Naruto took his sensei away even before his birth) Tazuna & family. Good news, the investigation gets Naruto justice and competition, bad news, this happens too near the time of the Chuinin exams too join a new team and misses them.
This is a good story, but his too much exposition and explanations. The first 17 minutes is used just to explain characters and their background and who quickly get forgotten. Seriously, so much of this information was not needed or could have been shortened.
For the life of me, I can't understand why people that write these what ifs are thinking by giving Sakura any kind of dialogue. It makes my ears wanna puke! Even describing her facial features is a waste of space on a clean paper. Putting anything Sakura related on paper automatically turns it into used toilet paper by someone with extreme diarrhea. 🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
Naruto wouldn't be alive without her so please do not hate on her because of her because she was useless in classic Naruto, But in Shippuden she was actually strong, not as strong as Naruto or Sasuke, but strong enough to fight A FUCKING S RANK SHINOBI S RANK!!!! DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND!?.
I have no problem with Canon Sakura, but the way some of these what if writers write her character dialogue makes a box of rocks seem smarter. Although she is strong in Canon she is not an S rank Shinobi, she may have Tsunade's strengths and skills but lacks the mindset to be a Kage level Shinobi
When I first heard this fanfic, I came up with an idea for my own. Quite a few fics have Naruto being the only team 7 member work the D-Ranks but getting reprimanded because of villagers & Kakashi's neglect. This is done as part of Naruto crummy backstory BUT what if it is a key detail? What if someone blows the whistle, someone new to the village or perhaps (if Kakashi isn't unintentionally neglectful like this fic, but willfully neglectful, feeling that Naruto took his sensei away even before his birth) Tazuna & family. Good news, the investigation gets Naruto justice and competition, bad news, this happens too near the time of the Chuinin exams too join a new team and misses them.
Please make a part 2
Part2 please 🙏 thank
Requesting all parts + a link &/or name for the Fanfiction.
Pt2 plssss
Awesome love it next part please 🙏 ❤❤❤
Part 2 please
This is a good story, but his too much exposition and explanations. The first 17 minutes is used just to explain characters and their background and who quickly get forgotten. Seriously, so much of this information was not needed or could have been shortened.
What is name of fanfic
what is the name?
Don't talk or explain things in the middle of the damn fight
They didn't write the fucking fanfic.
For the life of me, I can't understand why people that write these what ifs are thinking by giving Sakura any kind of dialogue. It makes my ears wanna puke! Even describing her facial features is a waste of space on a clean paper. Putting anything Sakura related on paper automatically turns it into used toilet paper by someone with extreme diarrhea. 🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
Naruto wouldn't be alive without her so please do not hate on her because of her because she was useless in classic Naruto, But in Shippuden she was actually strong, not as strong as Naruto or Sasuke, but strong enough to fight A FUCKING S RANK SHINOBI S RANK!!!! DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND!?.
I have no problem with Canon Sakura, but the way some of these what if writers write her character dialogue makes a box of rocks seem smarter. Although she is strong in Canon she is not an S rank Shinobi, she may have Tsunade's strengths and skills but lacks the mindset to be a Kage level Shinobi
Part two please
part 2 pls