"My fiancé and I decided to do an ancestry DNA test" Creepypasta

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Комментарии • 457

  • @GrimReaping
    @GrimReaping Год назад +640

    Hopefully it doesn't turn out to be an incestry test. That would be really scary.

    • @MrBluntStonedGaming
      @MrBluntStonedGaming Год назад +9

      I love GrimReaping

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 Год назад +37

      That happens more often than people would think. Not even counting the fact every person on the planet descends from around 10,000 people. LMAO my parents divorced when I was very young and I have two half siblings (sisters) I've never met. When I was young I was terrified I would run into them at a party without knowing who they were.

    • @GrimReaping
      @GrimReaping Год назад +22

      @@markcarpenter6020 I believe it was said that you are no more than 50th cousins with anyone on this earth because of exponential growth. This is true no matter whether you believe in the bible or evolution.

    • @ChristopheRobyn
      @ChristopheRobyn Год назад +3

      😂 😂 scary awkward

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 Год назад +9

      @@GrimReaping well looking at genes we know that around 10-15 000 years ago something happened. We have no clue what that something was but humans were nearly wiped out. So everyone on earth is literally descended from the 10 000(give or take) people that survived whatever that event was

  • @edennis8578
    @edennis8578 Год назад +64

    Too many holes in the plot. For one thing, dead bodies don't start to smell immediately. Unless it's a really hot environment, it takes awhile. It could be days. That's a city-person mistake. And he smells a rotting corpse in the house on more than one occasion and doesn't say anything about it? Wtf?

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 Год назад +19

      Yeah a rotten corpse smells like nothing else on earth. It's not something you hand wave away.

    • @SniffiestHalo1
      @SniffiestHalo1 Год назад +4

      Real question is how would you know? 👀👀

    • @Kian_Riddle
      @Kian_Riddle Год назад +3

      @@SniffiestHalo1 Road kill. Or if you have lived in the country.

    • @SarenSiri
      @SarenSiri Год назад +5

      also the ancestry kit with amazon prime 😂

    • @designationc6042
      @designationc6042 Год назад

      Jesus give it a rest it’s still a good story

  • @Crowelephant
    @Crowelephant Год назад +117

    "I had a prostate exam done recently.
    What they found in there changed everything..."

    • @colinzink6487
      @colinzink6487 Год назад +2

      Now I only have a year left, it’s too late 😢

    • @Nanuks_Fun_Zone
      @Nanuks_Fun_Zone Год назад +7

      so thats where my car keys went

    • @Rexorazor
      @Rexorazor Год назад +2

      What the hell is my watch doing in there?!!

    • @lscorpiusl605
      @lscorpiusl605 Год назад +1

      That's where the smell waa coming from

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 7 месяцев назад

      @@colinzink6487cancer eh?

  • @darkmoon_dawg
    @darkmoon_dawg Год назад +332

    The first red flag was him going from not wanting kids, to "both agreeing to have one", after they get in an ugly fight. His fiance was a literal serial killer but lowkey his voice is written very co-dependent >>

    • @KorilD
      @KorilD Год назад +55

      That's actually pretty common in emptionally abusive relationships - one partner makes the other entirely dependant on them and their approval, usually through a mix of social isolation and love bombing, and witholds affection until they get what they want. It's really cruel to see in action.

    • @BlackBinderGames
      @BlackBinderGames Год назад

      @@KorilD Thats just called a normal relationship dingus.

    • @fartherboot3730
      @fartherboot3730 Год назад +16

      @@KorilD bruh this was literally what it was like with my ex- im so glad im out of that relationship now lmao

    • @Unregistered.HyperCam.2
      @Unregistered.HyperCam.2 Год назад +5

      It kinda became way too obvious at that point that it was either going down that route, or horribly written. I ended up stopping listening and went to read through really quick instead. Then I saw the full title of the story and was immediately like, "Oh, yep. No need to even read further. The cliche is in the title."

    • @monstersaint
      @monstersaint Год назад

      Yeah, the guy is a simp.

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor Год назад +106

    my fiance and I decided to do an IQ test. she immediately left me 😕 😞

    • @consuela771
      @consuela771 Год назад +6

      💀💀💀

    • @KorilD
      @KorilD Год назад +2

      Funnily enough, the gene the fiance has is real and can cause low IQ!

    • @JimmmyRaynor
      @JimmmyRaynor Год назад +4

      @@consuela771 😢 😭

    • @JimmmyRaynor
      @JimmmyRaynor Год назад +3

      @KorilD ikr!!! I hadn't even listened to it yet, I was just trying to come up with a clever thing to say 😢 😭

    • @Dark_Angel..
      @Dark_Angel.. Год назад +3

      🤣🤣

  • @sarahw598
    @sarahw598 Год назад +56

    It bothers me that they keep going on about how it's weird that their name is Kira despite not being Japanese. I had a friend called Kira back in the 90s who definitely wasn't Japanese. In fact the name is pretty common in Europe and India, not just Japan. It has roots in Hindi, Hebrew and Russian, as well as possibly Greek and Irish.
    Edit for clarity

    • @lufsolitaire5351
      @lufsolitaire5351 Год назад +17

      The authors probably a weeb with a very surface level understanding of Japanese naming/culture. Probably a deathnote fan who didn’t realize Kira in a Japanese sense is an English loan word from “killer”.

    • @ElectricGlowSkull
      @ElectricGlowSkull Год назад +4

      Yoshikage Kira

    • @swargpatel7634
      @swargpatel7634 Год назад +2

      You know Indian is Asian right?

    • @sarahw598
      @sarahw598 Год назад +2

      @@swargpatel7634 Yes. That sentence is just very badly worded.

    • @Suguri
      @Suguri Год назад +2

      @@lufsolitaire5351 It's this. "It's so weird I'm named Kira because I've never killed anyone???"

  • @conservat1vepatr1ot
    @conservat1vepatr1ot Год назад +147

    So, I’m not the only one that thought they were gonna be siblings lol…

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 Год назад +15

      Don't joke that was a HUGE fear of mine as a teen. My parents had divorced when I was very young and I had two half sisters I have never met. I was utterly terrified I would accidentally hook up with them at a party or club.

    • @conservat1vepatr1ot
      @conservat1vepatr1ot Год назад +5

      @@markcarpenter6020
      My guy. I am so sorry. That is horrifying.
      So did you ever do it?
      (I mean, find them. Of course).

    • @markcarpenter6020
      @markcarpenter6020 Год назад +5

      @@conservat1vepatr1ot nope. I hope they are doing well.

    • @veil9326
      @veil9326 Год назад +4

      @@conservat1vepatr1ot I laughed at this

    • @armak7774
      @armak7774 Год назад +1

      I started laughing for this reason the moment I read the title lmao

  • @maximk9964
    @maximk9964 Год назад +38

    [Spoiler Warning]
    How long was this out if the dead dog began to smell? A week? I thought it was the same day.

    • @KorilD
      @KorilD Год назад +3

      Right??

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Год назад +20

      Yeah it doesn't make any sense. Also, what kind of serial killer just keeps bodies laying around their house? It's implied she did it previously, too. Like that's not at all the behavior of someone who gets away with multiple homicides. Tbh, I don't usually say this, but there're kind of a lot of plot holes/issues with this story in general.

    • @maximk9964
      @maximk9964 Год назад +6

      @@vanessaashford9203 I lived in a rural area for a while so dead animals were par for the course, and not only does take a few days for them to start smelling, once they do it gets strong really fast, you wouldn't be able to be "oh well, I guess I'll ignore it". I feel like this story needs some editing

    • @biblemansings
      @biblemansings Год назад +7

      @@vanessaashford9203 I agree. I don’t know why writers don’t have others read their text before they post it to get feedback on mistakes like the “American gene”, above dog issue, and multiple others.

    • @-Cellucor-
      @-Cellucor- Год назад +3

      May have been more of a smell of blood or or guts rather then a smell of rot

  • @gazblackheart4596
    @gazblackheart4596 Год назад +145

    Unless you are native american, "american" wouldnt be a thing on an ancestry test. Thats probably the least believable thing in the story lol.

    • @lufsolitaire5351
      @lufsolitaire5351 Год назад +45

      Yea they:
      -don’t understand how genetics work or of ASPD. Very few if any sufferers become serial killers. Plus like you said unless you’re indigenous we’re all from somewhere else.
      -Very surface level understanding of Japanese culture. Probably a weeb and deathnote fan who doesn’t understand Kira isn’t a Japanese name, and it’s an English loan-word from “killer”.

    • @sighthoundlady15
      @sighthoundlady15 Год назад +14

      Lol I laughed at the “American” part too 🤦🏻‍♀️😆

    • @chronospammer2073
      @chronospammer2073 Год назад +7

      This story overall is honestly really weak. Definitely feels like someone's first attempt at writing horror LoL

    • @kabo2246
      @kabo2246 Год назад +8

      The atuhor clearly hadn't done any research on anything they were writing about - from ancestory tests and police to basic human interactions and even protagonist's name.

    • @maggiedk
      @maggiedk Год назад

      They also don't understand how the American justice system works

  • @jmt8029
    @jmt8029 Год назад +58

    I haven’t seen anyone bring it up yet, but I don’t think the baby was his. Maybe this is super obvious and it just seems subtle to me lol but when he says that this was the only murder that happened while he was out of town, that there was a smell of rot in the bedroom, and that she wanted to start trying for a baby right away after he got back, it seems to me that she actually lured this guy back to their apartment/house, ended up getting pregnant by this guy before killing him, and then to cover her tracks wanted to “try for a baby” with her fiancé even tho she was already pregnant.

    • @KorilD
      @KorilD Год назад +6

      Oooh, I hadn’t even considered that! Good catch!

    • @anitacharron9153
      @anitacharron9153 Год назад

      I think either it's monster baby maybe Demon or Vampire????

    • @jupitercoyote348
      @jupitercoyote348 Год назад

      @@anitacharron9153no

    • @mle9810
      @mle9810 9 месяцев назад

      How would she have known she was pregnant if he was only gone for a week? They had the fight right when he got back. So she had to of been cheating and killed him before the trip. Idk this story has a lot of plot holes but it’s still good.

    • @notrelatedtobacon1282
      @notrelatedtobacon1282 6 месяцев назад +1

      Yeah that's what I thought, the police reports all mentioned a bar being involved and they were all abusive men so it's very likely that it went from bar to the guy dogging her to go home and her playing hard to get
      Imo she was cheating each time ,I'm curious to know her motives at least, abusive bf that made her have a vendetta? a friend kill herself over it?
      Serial killers usually have some motive that makes their actions more understandable (though not justified by any means)

  • @nooneatall4895
    @nooneatall4895 Год назад +64

    any psychology student will recognize the MAOA gene. and no, it doesnt actually make anyone a serial killer (necessarily). low MAOA activity is linked to aggressive behaviour which may cause a predisposition to violence, but isnt a direct cause. interesting story but has plotholes

    • @cave___
      @cave___ Год назад +2

      no plot holes. MC is a pretty dull dude. it's not surprising he would see the moniker of the gene and be terrified. and yes the gene doesn't make people serial killers but it's very common for convicted serial killers to have the gene.

    • @PitterPatter20
      @PitterPatter20 Год назад +5

      That's not a plothole. It's stated in the story that the main character doesn't really understand the science, so it makes sense that when he sees it's nicknamed the "serial killer gene" he would assume it actually means you're a serial killer, and that assumption drives the plot forward towards him starting to put the pieces together. It might be a faulty assumption, but it's an assumption that a layperson such as the main character would make.

    • @Th3Kingism
      @Th3Kingism 7 месяцев назад

      @@PitterPatter20 And in this particular case his assumption wasn't wrong

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 7 месяцев назад

      Also, the high and low activity influencing aggression varies based on male or female.

    • @notrelatedtobacon1282
      @notrelatedtobacon1282 6 месяцев назад

      Isnt that gene suspected to be a factor in predisposition to antisocial pd?

  • @s.v8125
    @s.v8125 Год назад +52

    The dog tried to warn him.

  • @EternityUnknown
    @EternityUnknown Год назад +124

    At the end he treats the test like it's what turned her into a killer. That darn test kept me from having a long life with a maniac.

    • @Robin93k
      @Robin93k Год назад +5

      "Ignorance is a bliss"
      It's easy to be happy if you don't know about the evils

    • @alexandriav3956
      @alexandriav3956 Год назад +3

      I wouldn’t care if my husband turned out to be a serial killer who only killed bad people like Dexter. I mean, I wouldn’t be thrilled, but I also wouldn’t go running off to the police to tell them.

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown Год назад +1

      @@alexandriav3956 Aren't you cool.

    • @jalapenocheese6839
      @jalapenocheese6839 Год назад +3

      @@alexandriav3956It looks fun in fiction but wouldn’t you freak out even a little like you never know if they might turn on you when you know their secret.

    • @alexandriav3956
      @alexandriav3956 Год назад

      @@jalapenocheese6839 That's true! You could never truly know what they might do.

  • @enoshman
    @enoshman Год назад +187

    Can someone let the author of this story know that Kira is not just a Japanese name

    • @Bexebeche
      @Bexebeche Год назад +54

      Yeah, Kira is a russian (female) name. But it's also main character's of the anime Death Note nick name. Which is the transliteration of the english word killer (kinda ironic in this story). Maybe protagonist's parents were just anime fans? Also don't confuse protagonist with author. Protagnist's ignorance doesn't mean author's ignorance.

    • @silveri7712
      @silveri7712 Год назад +23

      @@Bexebeche More specifically, it is how native Japanese speakers pronounce the English word "killer". Sine they don't use 'L' sounds in their language, so they come out phonetically as 'R's. Killer, Kirrer, Kira.

    • @leftylizard9085
      @leftylizard9085 Год назад +22

      ​@@Bexebeche it might not mean author's ignorance, but in this case I feel like it does. The author probably watched Death note and came away with idea that Kira was a traditional Japanese name, when it isnt.

    • @Limayyy
      @Limayyy Год назад +8

      @@Bexebeche Don’t forget Yoshikage Kira from JJBA

    • @levonford9780
      @levonford9780 Год назад

      Why😂

  • @were2baby134
    @were2baby134 Год назад +74

    I did an Ancestry DNA test 10 years ago. I just found out that I have a half brother this year. 50 years old and I have a 44 yo baby brother

    • @jenniferhodge8515
      @jenniferhodge8515 Год назад +3

      Hope it turned out well! Maybe he wasn't a serial killer 😜

  • @rebekaheastman3279
    @rebekaheastman3279 Год назад +138

    Okay so there’s a story, I forgot who even narrated it but it’s about a kid being raised by serial killer parents and has the same thirst for blood. One parent gets killed, one escapes and the kid ends up in foster care waiting for the one parent to come get her. Anyways I feel like that could line up with this story to make a super nice serial killer family story❤️‍🩹😁

    • @rickb4933
      @rickb4933 Год назад +13

      Oh man I remember that one wish I knew what it was called

    • @CheshireCheese5737
      @CheshireCheese5737 Год назад +24

      I know the one you're referring to, I believe it's called "My Parents are Serial Killers." Shocking, I know...

    • @DavidMartinez-ce3lp
      @DavidMartinez-ce3lp Год назад +2

      It's all connected!

    • @rahkido
      @rahkido Год назад

      ​@@CheshireCheese5737 lmfa😅😅🤣🤣😅😅🤣😅🤣😅🤣😅😅🤣😅🤣😅😅😅🤣😅🤣😅

    • @ashs9673
      @ashs9673 Год назад +1

      "My mom and dad were serial killers"

  • @helmetmcbarin
    @helmetmcbarin Год назад +9

    13:24 everyone has the MAOA Gene it's nothing special just that low levels of it are associated with increased levels of aggression.

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 7 месяцев назад

      No, that varies based on male or female. Also, not everyone has it actually.

    • @helmetmcbarin
      @helmetmcbarin 7 месяцев назад

      @@YokaiX your wrong the MAOA gene is on the X chromosome everyone has it just there are multiple variants. (The different variants influence how much of the Enzyme is produced)
      Source: PubMed Central
      Since MAOA is an X- linked gene women can be classified as having high (H), intermediate or low (L) MAOA activity but men can only be classified by having high or low activity. The genotype frequencies for females were: LL: 16.6%, LH: 42.4%, HH: 41.0%; for males they were: L: 33.1% and H: 66.9%.
      There are twice as many men with low MAOA gene activity however there are more women with Medium to low activity than men. Women have two X chromosomes which is why they can have Medium levels of MAOA gene and men cant.

  • @IsolationLifts
    @IsolationLifts Год назад +9

    Honestly I wouldn't care if my Fiance was a serial killer as long as she didnt plan on killing me or my family I'd still marry her.

  • @gcDaydays
    @gcDaydays Год назад +11

    I just can't with this story, a gene got mc so concerned they had to "investigate" past interactions with their fiance? Bruh.

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 7 месяцев назад

      Well it’s the “Serial Killer gene”, that’s why lol

    • @notrelatedtobacon1282
      @notrelatedtobacon1282 6 месяцев назад

      ​@@YokaiXthat's not reasonable suspicion though, statistically there are 1/3 people with genetic disposition for psychopathy, that doesnt mean the every 3rd person to see deserves to be shot

  • @pyroclastixx6969
    @pyroclastixx6969 Год назад +33

    I really wish they would have done something with that spot in the park with the flowers. He went to it but didn’t do any digging or anything.
    Kinda a missed opportunity.

    • @keatonwallace1828
      @keatonwallace1828 Год назад +3

      THATS WHAT IM SAYIN

    • @Chrishy_Art
      @Chrishy_Art Год назад +5

      I was thinking she messing with the ants, possibly burning lense or whatever, usually serial killers will harm animals in their childhood

    • @notrelatedtobacon1282
      @notrelatedtobacon1282 6 месяцев назад

      I was expecting him to dig it up and find a body

  • @lordkuroneko3219
    @lordkuroneko3219 Год назад +6

    His parents were Death Note fans. Mystery solved.

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 Год назад +20

    It could have been worse, they could have turned out to be brother and sister 😨

    • @urbanobstacles
      @urbanobstacles 9 месяцев назад

      Thats worse than a bunch of dead ppl?

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Год назад +72

    It’s an exact example of “Love Is Blind”. You can love someone so much that even though you are fully aware of their faults no matter how bad, no matter what your friends say, you don’t even accept it until it either ends, or you fall out of love. Then it’s a landslide of feeling stupid, played like a fool, lied to, essentially that you never knew them at all.

    • @NoWr2Run
      @NoWr2Run Год назад

      100%, Everybody can see it but " YOU ". THE BITCH KILLED THE DOG, THAT REALLY PISSES ME OFF.

    • @-JaggedGrace-
      @-JaggedGrace- Год назад

      There were no friends in this story, and if anything this showed the opposite of blind, he went out of his way to find her out and accepted the negative view of her on circumstantial evidence.

    • @briancathey498
      @briancathey498 Год назад +4

      you never really know everything about anyone , even couples that have been together for 50/60 years never really know each other.

    • @NoWr2Run
      @NoWr2Run Год назад +1

      @@briancathey498 100%

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 7 месяцев назад

      No, that’s “Love blinds” or “Love is blinding”. Love is emotional and often irrational, so it does blind one’s rationality and logic. It’s what makes love scary and exciting simultaneously, as it’s often a leap of faith when you decide to be emotionally vulnerable to someone you love.

  • @burquebandit7169
    @burquebandit7169 Год назад +9

    How to get a GF in 1 simple step:
    Best her bf is life or death combat

  • @somedumbgreymon4404
    @somedumbgreymon4404 Год назад +4

    The scariest thing is when you do an ancestry test as a serb and finding out not only are you 78% albanian but also you're 22% bulgarian

  • @thecassandraeffectvsperilo6754
    @thecassandraeffectvsperilo6754 Год назад +36

    I actually have the "warrior gene" 😂 I've NEVER heard of it being called the serial killer gene 🤔

    • @BlackBinderGames
      @BlackBinderGames Год назад +23

      Says the "probably a serial killer"

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Год назад +24

      I'll be honest, the way monoamine oxidase deficiency (and it's actually MAO *deficiency* that's relevant, not just having the gene for MAO, which literally everyone has) is portrayed in this story is extremely unrealistic, sensationalistic, and arguably kind of ableist. The main consequence of MAO deficiency from my knowledge is sometimes having issues with emotional control, like anger management and that kind of thing, but even that's far from universal, most people have no pathological symptoms from it at all. People who have it are *sometimes* more combative, but that's actually *not* a behavior that is very conducive to being a successful serial killer, like "good" serial killers are usually good at blending in and seeming non-threatening, someone who gets angry easily is going to have a lot more trouble pulling it off. This also doesn't at all fit with the image of Winter being shy and sweet. Also, MAO deficiency doesn't make people non-empathetic or sociopathic or whatever, in fact if anything it makes them *more* emotional. I too have never heard of any association between the gene and being a serial killer, and am fairly sure the author made it up.
      Given all of this and the various plot holes or other weird things in the story (like, wtf is "American DNA" if he's not talking about Native Americans? Which given the context I don't think he is), and the fact that I've never seen this author before, I'm kind of guessing they might be young and not very experienced at writing...at least, I hope so.

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Год назад +2

      granted, she did only target abusive men mostly, so I suppose that is kind of a pretty different motivation from your average serial killer, but it still doesn't really make much sense in the real world for MAO deficiency to factor into her behavior at all.

    • @iamthewatergod
      @iamthewatergod Год назад +9

      I have two copies of the "Warrior allele" and all I got was adhd and a complete lack of self preservation instincts.

    • @TheDapperTapper
      @TheDapperTapper Год назад +6

      ​@@vanessaashford9203 Also worth noting, but the Warrior Gene affects women very differently from men.
      I forget if it doesn't do anything, or if it just has a lower chance of making women violent, but I do recall that the Warrior gene caused women to be happier.

  • @shortbread9518
    @shortbread9518 Год назад +30

    thought there was gonna be a twist where he turned out to be the one with the serial killer gene instead, especially since he said he felt like killing jackson earlier

    • @ollehkacb
      @ollehkacb Год назад +3

      Its a woman. That why the whole pregnancy thing sounded strange.

  • @AKoj5
    @AKoj5 Год назад +84

    If I found out my fiance was taking out abusers I'm not 100% sure I'd really think all that negatively about it 😅

    • @WoozyCool
      @WoozyCool Год назад

      What about the poor doggo though? She "felt" he loved the dog more than a baby in future, hence she killed it.
      I'd have chopper her into pieces and sent to different parts of the world. Killing people is one thing, but dogs or cats? off with her head.

    • @stubones
      @stubones Год назад +19

      and if she decided you were abusive? hahahaha Bye

    • @gl8862
      @gl8862 Год назад +7

      @@stubones ummm just be a decent human being?

    • @xWriterclarenocturnexx
      @xWriterclarenocturnexx Год назад +17

      @@gl8862 That's not what they mean though.....what if she deemed him abusive because he dared to not agree with her in something?

    • @gl8862
      @gl8862 Год назад +4

      @@xWriterclarenocturnexx that's not what the op said.

  • @nooneknows1640
    @nooneknows1640 Год назад +55

    If creeps ever stops posting ill never be able to fall asleep again 😭 I swear these stories are the only way I can fall asleep

    • @teenamazingsquad.2042
      @teenamazingsquad.2042 Год назад +3

      Same 😌

    • @laytonfrance6051
      @laytonfrance6051 Год назад +1

      Same

    • @NaliTikva
      @NaliTikva Год назад +2

      "CreepyMcPasta stopped posting, i didn't sleep for a week and ended up in the hospital, i don't think i can trust the doctors...."

  • @vincentshadetree
    @vincentshadetree Год назад +5

    Doesn't sound like Kira would of been in any danger, I mean hey buddy, in the South we just call that you're woman is a fighter, you just ask her where to bury the bodies 🤣

  • @elisgemr5191
    @elisgemr5191 Год назад +4

    This one was a little cringe not gonna lie

  • @wilfredrainey1720
    @wilfredrainey1720 Год назад +40

    There is no such thing as American DNA 🧬 I wonder if it was just a mistake or something else. Maybe the creepy pastas are taking a toll.

    • @vanessaashford9203
      @vanessaashford9203 Год назад +11

      yeah I too wondered wtf that was supposed to mean, like unless they meant he was indigenous American, but it seems unlikely he'd have that much indigenous ancestry and not mention anything more about it (given that usually there are government benefits and shit).

    • @AW27007
      @AW27007 Год назад +4

      Maybe it could mean something like Anglo-American or British American? But again Americans isn't really a ethnicity

    • @schwartd
      @schwartd Год назад +2

      It actually is on most DNA tests meaning a lot of European DNA mixing to the point "American" is the most accurate. Think Appalachians or Deep south. Alternatively, could have meant Native American which seems more likely.

    • @sadcow93
      @sadcow93 Год назад

      Yeah I used ancestry myself and thought it was odd the used “American” since America is a land of foreigners other than the indigenous people, but even those are broken down on the site as well. My guess is they chose to make it sound less interesting since they wanted the focus on Winter and her DNA

    • @NaliTikva
      @NaliTikva Год назад

      yes there is wtf, there lived people in america before europeans came there you know?

  • @berry7usagii
    @berry7usagii Год назад +16

    Kira is not a Japanese name, but it is similar to the way we pronounced the English word “killer”, as depicted in Death Note. Akira is a Japanese name, so they could’ve taken it from that maybe.
    Edit: btw, the word kira in Japanese actually means sparkle ✨☺️✨

  • @ZaZa-oo3dw
    @ZaZa-oo3dw Год назад +7

    Aaaaye female Dexter 😂

  • @finnigankhjurich8150
    @finnigankhjurich8150 Год назад +5

    13:06 ... American? Lol yep

  • @nabcunion
    @nabcunion Год назад +5

    I really dislike the protagonist.

  • @laurasohn8332
    @laurasohn8332 Год назад +9

    Tell... Me... How was I supposed to know that we were both related 🎶

  • @MrEmperorApples
    @MrEmperorApples Год назад +3

    This is the weebiest beginning ever?

  • @TaylerBootz
    @TaylerBootz Год назад +2

    There is one thing that makes me give a story an F rating. As in a big F-u to the writer. This story has it. That and it was predictable.

  • @rryyaannkkookkeell
    @rryyaannkkookkeell Год назад +5

    Creepsmcpasta, if you would just tell us how much $ you would need per person to make a new pasta every day, you may be surprised at how many people would be willing to pay it.

  • @sovelissfiremane
    @sovelissfiremane Год назад +11

    Was her boyfriend actually an asshole or was it just the main character's desire and jealousy clouding their judgement? The lack of any examples makes me believe the latter

    • @LicoriceLain
      @LicoriceLain Год назад +1

      The story should have had a twist that the serial killer is engaged to a sociopath. The set up was there in how much empathy Kira did not have for anyone.

  • @okMizu
    @okMizu Год назад +6

    Went in a bit of a other direction than I thought it would, but I enjoyed the story

  • @merihimsolomon2331
    @merihimsolomon2331 Год назад +13

    These stories mess me up and induce thinking 🤔
    An amazing story and impeccable narration

  • @CheshireCheese5737
    @CheshireCheese5737 Год назад +11

    I just finished watching one of your older videos, you've come so far...

    • @BlackBinderGames
      @BlackBinderGames Год назад +1

      I bet you 20 bucks I can come farther than him

  • @Whomping
    @Whomping Год назад +7

    Ignorance is bliss, eh?

  • @achaudhari101
    @achaudhari101 Год назад +11

    My theory is she never really loved him if she was keen on murdering him eventually.

    • @WoozyCool
      @WoozyCool Год назад +4

      She loved him, only if he was able to love her endlessly, in her point of view, that means to never doubt her, just trust her, etc. He didn't, naturally, he went stealth mode and snooped around for secrets. Unfortunately he was a terrible liar and couldn't maintain proper routine in front of her. Hence she found out that he found out, came off as him being "disloyal" and off with his head.
      She loves people, just in her own way.
      I couldn't care less about this dumb guy dying tbh. I've seen ELEMENTARY kids spin insane lies without breaking a sweat. He can't even do that, how tf is he gonna lie to his future kid(s) about Santa and shit...
      I only got mad about her killing that poor doggo. All cuz she thought he loved the doggo more than their future kid.
      Whatever fear I would've had if I were him, would've went away the moment she admitted to killing the doggo.
      I would've went Dante's Inferno on her MAOA ass.

  • @GWERBYCAT
    @GWERBYCAT Год назад +3

    not her boyfriend dying and she immediately dates someone else 😭

    • @NaliTikva
      @NaliTikva Год назад

      I think the bf might have been abusive and an ahole, that said ... spoilers:
      She was a serial killer and actually killed her bf so that's probably the reason

  • @thomasklein1135
    @thomasklein1135 Год назад +3

    The whole thing was an Amazon prime ad

  • @Scavenger82
    @Scavenger82 Год назад +10

    Sounds like it'd be a good marriage.

  • @kath3832
    @kath3832 Год назад +14

    I watched a video where two identical twins did a load of these types of ancestry tests, and they were all bogus. Came back with different results for each of them.

    • @Here_is_Waldo
      @Here_is_Waldo Год назад +1

      That's a shame. They sounded pretty interesting if real.

  • @NoWr2Run
    @NoWr2Run Год назад +4

    DON'T BE A DOOR MAT TO ANY ONE, ESPECIALLY YOUR GIRL FRIEND OR YOUR WIFE.

  • @phildicarlo2526
    @phildicarlo2526 Год назад +13

    This is so weird! My fiance just got the results from her ancestry test this morning. So, we went over them for a couple hours this afternoon.

    • @robynsmith4164
      @robynsmith4164 Год назад +2

      Was she surprised by any of the results? Was there anything cool about her family’s history? Just wondering! 😁

    • @chadhansen5057
      @chadhansen5057 Год назад

      I'd do it but there's probably nothing suprizeing already know my family names and immagrations

  • @VbombzDaBomberman
    @VbombzDaBomberman Год назад +7

    The MAOA "warrior gene" does not express the same way in women, in women it is not associated with violent or anti-social behavior.
    Also "American" is not a recognizable ethnicity (at least on a genetic level). Unless he meant "Native American".
    All this just shows the authors ignorance in regards to this topic. A little more research would have made for a good story. The real scary story could have been: the husband and wife have a son, the son is normal, maybe slightly troubled, and the Dad (knowing his son inherited the "warrior gene") is convinced he will be a serial killer and goes insane himself.

  • @annasherosky
    @annasherosky Год назад +42

    That was a great story I know the husband said he wishes he never tried this DNA test but maybe it's better he did cuz if his wife murdered others who's to say she wouldn't be that kind of abusive mother I feel if you can before marriage and kids are involved try to find out whom your signing up to be with 😁

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter Год назад +3

    Wait Kira? The famously Irish name?

  • @LeahLish
    @LeahLish Год назад +32

    Honestly still love every upload you do. Appreciate the time and effort you put into these 👍🏻💙

  • @aimeeprincessofpower
    @aimeeprincessofpower Год назад +28

    Always look forward to your uploads. Your narrations are second to none.

  • @CT-nb5lm
    @CT-nb5lm Год назад +7

    What a perfect couple.

  • @nab7745
    @nab7745 Год назад +8

    The title alone makes it scary enough

  • @DBrokeMillenial
    @DBrokeMillenial Год назад +8

    It's called deleting your computer history fellas lol

  • @rain-cy6ve
    @rain-cy6ve Год назад +2

    I like this story but it s not neceesarly so rare. 33% of the human population has it and it doesn t mean much, it doesn t make you into what this story is about.

  • @vodyanoy2
    @vodyanoy2 Год назад +2

    Yeah this story was pretty bad. Good narration though. I thought it was hilarious that he was freaking out so bad over his fiance having the warrior gene. As if it just guarantees her becoming a serial killer.

  • @chillyundead
    @chillyundead Год назад +3

    I'm mad she killed the dog

  • @mikaylagoodwin960
    @mikaylagoodwin960 Год назад +1

    I love the story! but just to clear up something the MAOA or MAOA-L gene isnt a "serial killer gene" but is linked with a predisposition to agressive behavior. (Though its commonly associated with serial killers as they obviously tend to be more agressive)

  • @KorilD
    @KorilD Год назад +7

    "I told the police everything." Somehow this feels like a bigger betrayal than the stabbing. But then, I *get* why she did that.

  • @lewismierka5917
    @lewismierka5917 Год назад +2

    have you thought of writing another creepy pasta?

  • @DamionCarr-ux2jj
    @DamionCarr-ux2jj Год назад +5

    hey i have seen 56 videos of yours love the vids they help me sleep!!

    • @SunTzuMedia
      @SunTzuMedia Год назад +3

      Those are rookie numbers, you need to pump those up!

    • @DamionCarr-ux2jj
      @DamionCarr-ux2jj Год назад +2

      @@SunTzuMedia Ive mostly seen his 3h ones

    • @SunTzuMedia
      @SunTzuMedia Год назад +1

      @@DamionCarr-ux2jj 😆 no worries bro! It's just a quote from "wolf of Wallstreet". I was just messing with you

    • @DamionCarr-ux2jj
      @DamionCarr-ux2jj Год назад +1

      @@SunTzuMedia oh ok

  • @kristenhlady4079
    @kristenhlady4079 Год назад +1

    7 minutes and 28 seconds in and the reason it smells is THE EX BOYFRIEND IS HIDEN IN THE HOUSE ! this is just a guess so far

  • @andrewryndin4812
    @andrewryndin4812 Год назад +2

    Winter started off being nice, but got more and more unlikable as the story went on. She killed her own dog over an argument about a baby, for goodness sake!

    • @gdtestqueen
      @gdtestqueen Год назад

      Thank you…you saved me! I had to know if the dog lives before I kept going.

  • @hannahlafave3086
    @hannahlafave3086 Год назад +11

    I’m at 24:08 and just waiting for the shoe to drop any second, I’m soooo excited omg. I really enjoyed listening to this story so far. Thank you creeps much love

  • @kikikungfukakes6639
    @kikikungfukakes6639 Год назад +2

    another ancestry test ruining families omg

  • @tnwtr7097
    @tnwtr7097 Год назад +3

    Creepily very good. Thanks

  • @TheChrisLeone
    @TheChrisLeone Год назад +1

    20:53 did she say a _cold_ case? Maybe I misheard; if it was ruled as an accident it would be closed, not cold. Cold cases are cases that hit a dead end, no more leads to chase, evidence to examine.

  • @mrfriendhorror
    @mrfriendhorror Год назад +3

    Damn. I can just see where this is going... gonna enjoy this!

  • @nothinghappens9811
    @nothinghappens9811 Год назад +3

    Dude, never be the guy who knew too much. Nothing ever works out for that guy.

  • @Anti-Villain-Wolf
    @Anti-Villain-Wolf Год назад +2

    Poor puppy :(

  • @imagine778
    @imagine778 Год назад +2

    When your dog doesn’t like someone you’re with, it’s time to leave them. Dogs have good senses about people that we always overlook

  • @alymara8898
    @alymara8898 Год назад +2

    Definitely did not go in any of the directions I thought. Perfect build up. This was just absolute perfection

  • @jakebonnett1675
    @jakebonnett1675 9 месяцев назад +1

    Wow, this entire creepypasta has so many anime tropes, it really ruins the story as a whole.

  • @SuperAmytha
    @SuperAmytha Год назад +1

    WHERE ARE WE SUPPOSED TO CRY WHEN THE LIVE FEED GOES DOWN? I would think its the last video. IS THERE SOMEWHERE ELSE? I litterally use 24/7 instead of heavy sleep meds. 🥺 I love all of you, our conversations, and of course, the good lord, MR PASTA HIMSELF. 😢 😿 😭

  • @isa-ah
    @isa-ah Год назад +2

    a real man would support his wife while she's doing the world a service 😌

  • @cadillacdeville5828
    @cadillacdeville5828 Год назад +3

    Well I bet that didn't turn out well 😲

  • @person80
    @person80 Год назад +3

    hey thanks for uploading

  • @ATrippyCow
    @ATrippyCow Год назад +2

    This story is awful

  • @Mikoto13
    @Mikoto13 Год назад +1

    Why are people smart enough to figure it out but too stupid to get out of it on these stories 😡 good narration tho!

  • @christophernoble76
    @christophernoble76 Год назад +1

    his parents just liked jojo pt 4 diamond is unbreakable

  • @mebansharaisantasticokhong7312
    @mebansharaisantasticokhong7312 Год назад +1

    Lesson is never be a SIMP

  • @o.5command
    @o.5command Год назад +3

    Spooky for chilly times

  • @mexluis5484
    @mexluis5484 Год назад +1

    Did he say 20% American lol

  • @LuisaD93
    @LuisaD93 Год назад +2

    There he is !!! 😊

  • @brerfox3694
    @brerfox3694 Год назад +2

    The timing and erie accuracy of this story is hauntingly delightful 🥀

  • @hoppersauce8750
    @hoppersauce8750 Год назад +1

    So their kid’s gonna be named Yoshikage right?

  • @traceyjadeboyer5181
    @traceyjadeboyer5181 Год назад +3

    Loved this one!

  • @FettyWaffles0420
    @FettyWaffles0420 Год назад +2

    Not the dog

  • @Stardust_7273
    @Stardust_7273 Год назад

    Those ancestry kits aren’t accurate. They don’t test your genes so specifically, as they compare them to populations in the world with similar genes. They can’t pin it down so specifically as to say you have blood from certain countries or anything. And certain races of people have, over the centuries, moved all around. The commercials, of course, don’t explain it like that and make you think you can pinpoint your ancestry much more accurately. Like they can’t say, “7% French” etc

  • @lukebarroso449
    @lukebarroso449 Год назад +1

    What is the song at the opening of the video? Also great vid.

  • @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551
    @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551 Год назад +6

    Wow that was crazy. I love twist endings.

  • @seyyidasarahh
    @seyyidasarahh Год назад +1

    when the turk finds out he’s 20% greek should be scary enough. (i’m turkish btw🇹🇷☝🏽❤️)

  • @JINX-The-Writer
    @JINX-The-Writer Год назад +2

    I literally read 'Incestry' 🤦‍♀️

    • @lynxfang3352
      @lynxfang3352 Год назад

      I mean that's part of it so...

    • @JINX-The-Writer
      @JINX-The-Writer Год назад

      @@lynxfang3352 wait.. I listened and really liked it but do you know where abouts it mentions that cause I kept dozing off

  • @tanyalee5458
    @tanyalee5458 Год назад +2

    Amazing story! Loved you narration! Thank you