How I wrote 1st class essays at Cambridge University (how to write the best essay)

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  • @DoctorShaene
    @DoctorShaene  4 года назад +1658

    Timestamps
    00:46 Structure
    01:16 Introduction
    03:52 Main Body
    06:59 Conclusion

    • @Lucky-jw2cu
      @Lucky-jw2cu 4 года назад +7

      Doctor Shaene how would you allocate the word count between the sections?

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  4 года назад +53

      Intro try to keep it to 3-4 sentences. Main body should be the bulk. Then 3-4 sentences to finish the conclusion.

    • @flyingdana2317
      @flyingdana2317 4 года назад +2

      Please , around how many words should my CLT be ?

    • @houcinehoucine9432
      @houcinehoucine9432 4 года назад +1

      @@jeffreign513
      نحب ح0شخص ذ

    • @luftim
      @luftim 3 года назад +6

      Can this method be used in like a history essay? e.g. "discuss the Italian unification and the German unification, what are the similarities?"

  • @TheHolyBoink
    @TheHolyBoink 3 года назад +4038

    I never believed those memes about that one guy on RUclips being better than most of your teachers until now.

  • @maisadwal3689
    @maisadwal3689 3 года назад +2753

    I learned more about how to properly write an essay in the 10 minutes of this video than I did in 2 years in school.
    That's just beautiful, isn't it.

    • @zacharyadams7721
      @zacharyadams7721 3 года назад +19

      SO TRUE!!!!!

    • @dedguywithnolife3576
      @dedguywithnolife3576 3 года назад +10

      I haven't felt so powerful by having the power to make this comment 1k

    • @clickprofileimage
      @clickprofileimage 2 года назад +3

      Lol! If you ever need help with your assignments, reach out to me.

    • @YourXellency
      @YourXellency 2 года назад +7

      I have been teaching a version of this at my previous school for MLA papers and they began hating how strict I was about introducing writing formulas because children complained about not wanting to follow an organized structure.
      That school is currently shut down. I work for a writing company that allows me to promote my formulas ;)

    • @MySinglemom
      @MySinglemom 2 года назад +1

      i know right?

  • @Cocorose117
    @Cocorose117 4 года назад +2215

    I finally found a bloody essay video that gets straight to the point omg everyone that has talked on this topic waffle about a bunch of nothing !

    • @wendysloane2461
      @wendysloane2461 3 года назад +33

      Omg I agree! Too many hours I have wasted watching people waffle on! This is amazing

    • @dukedex5043
      @dukedex5043 3 года назад +10

      I searched how to write an essay and this was the first video I clicked.. Lucky me.

    • @PitOfDepression
      @PitOfDepression 3 года назад +7

      @@dukedex5043 lucky you, the first video I found was this one gut that mumbled a hour on the introduction

    • @orezioreo9342
      @orezioreo9342 3 года назад +1

      @@PitOfDepression lol. 100% This was a good Video. It's really helpful.

    • @langpar6587
      @langpar6587 3 года назад

      @@dukedex5043 yeah me too

  • @mcdoj2763
    @mcdoj2763 2 года назад +376

    This showed me how important a good primary school is. I learned this exact "formula" in my 6th grade english class. I've received an A on almost every single essay in school with minimal effort. I always wondered why so many people struggled with writing, but now I realize it's because they weren't taught how to write.

    • @loricusina
      @loricusina 2 года назад +9

      facts

    • @alexandermarbun4453
      @alexandermarbun4453 2 года назад +1

      yeah

    • @assianeu197
      @assianeu197 2 года назад +35

      It's not so simple. People don't always understand the question, or choose a good way to formulate a clear concise question. They also get lost in their explanations, don't choose best examples, don't have good knowledge and understanding of some key concepts they are talking about. So it's not just about having a good structure, and being good at writing

    • @miraclemoments23
      @miraclemoments23 Год назад +12

      The struggle with those struggling people is due to the fact that they had been hiding from the professors when it is time for them to attend classes. Or some of them fall asleep after going to the late night hangouts with friends.
      I appreciate the effort the creator has put into this video. Wholeheartedly I do, but it is not still up to university standard even if this is somewhere at Oxford/Cambridge. On the spot, we know that he didn’t put any references and citations which is a sign of lacking academic integrity. Secondly, there is no linking sentence between paragraphs. Third, there is no vivid examples provided in support of his statement.
      And some people here be like ‘10 minutes has been worth more than 3 years at a university’. Guys, you have wasted your parents hard-earned money😅

    • @aullennessef
      @aullennessef Год назад +3

      it may not be the only reason but yes, we weren't taught a thing abt writing essays 💀💀

  • @ozinnias
    @ozinnias 3 года назад +652

    This has helped simplify so much of essay writing and I've seen a big grade jump in my essays compared to my first year in university, thanks for making it so digestable !!

  • @liliriri9730
    @liliriri9730 3 года назад +86

    i always go back to this video whenever i feel stuck and unconfident with my essays. and it constantly reminds me that i am on the right track and i should go on in building it!

  • @cleo.butterflysflyinthesky1637
    @cleo.butterflysflyinthesky1637 2 года назад +104

    Introduction:
    Define - Define the key points in the question and use those key points to create an introduction. [Ex. 1:33]
    Outline - Mention what the essay will cover or what the argument will be to allow readers to know what they’ll expect [Ex. 3:07]
    Main Body:
    Select the best 3 key points to create 3 separate main body paragraphs on those 3 key points.
    First Sentence - use the first sentence of the paragraph to convey the key point [Ex. 4:29]
    Second sentence - provide important evidence that backs up your key point
    [Ex. 4:41]
    Third sentence - Critically analyze the piece of evidence such as talking about how good the study was that lead to the evidence, how valid and reliable it is, or what improvements could be made.
    Fourth sentence - relate back to the question [Ex. 5:21]
    2 More ways to highlight evidence in a main body:
    Diagrams - Diagrams convey a lot of information very quickly which is easier for examiners to see rather than writing many details about how it works. [Ex. 5:55]
    Active Subheadings - A heading that’s a Alsentence that summarizes your whole paragraph, it tells the examiner what the paragraph is going to be about. [6:39]
    Conclusions:
    The conclusion summarizes the whole argument, bring it to a nice end, and lastly gives a verdict. [Ex. 7:12]

  • @frida8826
    @frida8826 4 года назад +197

    I've gone back to this video so many times, I love how clear and to the point this video is, and the formula is great. Thank you loads!

  • @liamgray4087
    @liamgray4087 3 года назад +1267

    I'd rather have paid him my uni fees since I've learnt more from him than I have at uni in the last 3 years...

  • @adaora2851
    @adaora2851 4 года назад +281

    This video came at the perfect time, thank you!

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  4 года назад +10

      Hope you found it useful! 😀

    • @aslurpeewithnostraw8055
      @aslurpeewithnostraw8055 3 года назад +1

      Yeah I hate Google doc essays. The wall of text confuses me I prefer slides

  • @denisro33
    @denisro33 4 года назад +168

    Haha, entering a Cambridge essay competition right now. Could not have discovered you at a better time.

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  4 года назад +18

      Best of luck!

    • @juno965
      @juno965 3 года назад

      @@clickprofileimage "ever again"

    • @galacticcuber2058
      @galacticcuber2058 3 года назад

      @@clickprofileimage ASK JOE MAMA.

    • @haniahashmi9268
      @haniahashmi9268 3 года назад

      howd it go?

    • @denisro33
      @denisro33 3 года назад

      @@haniahashmi9268 highly commended lol. Like a year ago.

  • @TedsVlogs
    @TedsVlogs 3 года назад +90

    It is very generous of you to share this information. So helpful, and so undertaught in schools / at universities.
    Some people don't like sharing their secrets to success, I always have love and admiration for those who think about other people before aggrandizing themselves as genius essay writers or genius anythings.

    • @shanelwhite3700
      @shanelwhite3700 2 года назад

      see this ruclips.net/video/Oy7R6ticmag/видео.html

  • @JoJo-qy2ob
    @JoJo-qy2ob 3 года назад +182

    Thank you so much for this video, I went back to uni after 17 years to do a MA. I had no idea how to write essays. I have got distinctions in my first two essays partly because I followed this guide. This is simple straight forward and better than any book I've read about structuring essays. N.B This is a great essay structure for any discipline and gave me the confidence to use diagrams.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 года назад

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    • @shanelwhite3700
      @shanelwhite3700 3 года назад

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    • @SaraAlexi
      @SaraAlexi Год назад

      I'm just about to be in this same position! You comment gives me hope! Thanks to both you and Dr S!

    • @Khadija-ub9gn
      @Khadija-ub9gn Год назад

      Me too! Is there any tips you can give for making it easier to write essays

  • @khaleahl7826
    @khaleahl7826 3 года назад +65

    OMGGG, I needed this so much. This allowed me to finish an essay in 2 hours, as opposed to 1 whole day!! Thank you!

  • @yeetocheeto9901
    @yeetocheeto9901 3 года назад +41

    Found this video looking for a helpful guide, and I'm so grateful honestly! I wrote and submitted my essay with the help of this video and i got first place among my age group in a national level competition. Thank you so much! ✨

  • @adrianasimcock8937
    @adrianasimcock8937 2 года назад +9

    As a mature student struggling to write essays, this has helped me so much. Thanks a million!

  • @thelazyartist421
    @thelazyartist421 2 года назад +24

    I'm doing my Cambridge O Level IGSCE this year and English is my weakest subject. So watching this is really helpful. Keep up the good work 😃

  • @kanicarajamohan1657
    @kanicarajamohan1657 Год назад +4

    You helped me go from 53 to 70 all just because of this video. You're more than amazing!

  • @estherwilsongilbert7683
    @estherwilsongilbert7683 4 года назад +52

    I’m so glad I found this towards the start of my EPQ. I was unsure how to do it effectively as I’ve never really had to do something like this before but this has really helped. Thank you

    • @Reeldiverge
      @Reeldiverge Год назад +1

      Hey what did you get for your epq and what was your question?

    • @estherwilsongilbert7683
      @estherwilsongilbert7683 Год назад +1

      @@Reeldiverge I got an A* and did mine on the viability of electrification of the aviation industry. Are you doing EPQ?

    • @rubiksworld2170
      @rubiksworld2170 Год назад

      @@estherwilsongilbert7683wow nice I’m doing an EPQ over the summer, glad to know that this technique works!

  • @Zahra-ub6zt
    @Zahra-ub6zt 3 года назад +28

    This video has helped me so much! For someone that struggles with structure a lot this was very straightforward and easy to understand.

  • @mihajlomihajlo74
    @mihajlomihajlo74 3 года назад +54

    This deserves to have millions of views.

  • @DarknessQueenish
    @DarknessQueenish 3 года назад +20

    amazing video!! straight to the point and no waffling, perfect !!

  • @starsintrash9218
    @starsintrash9218 3 года назад +32

    I learnt more in this video than my entire 6 hours at online school.

  • @J3anstar
    @J3anstar 4 года назад +15

    I’m nowhere on any you all’s level as I’m planning to complete get my GED so I can go into a project management program. For years I’ve struggled with ADD, this video is straight to the point and very helpful. Thanks!

  • @FloydTaylor
    @FloydTaylor 2 года назад +1

    i have downloaded over 15 books on essay writing. this video tell yous how to precisely and critically analyse . thanks doc

  • @Iron-Bridge
    @Iron-Bridge 3 года назад +8

    As a post graduate engineering student, your video was of very high quality and informative in a very relevant way. I'm not surprised you were making A's. Thank you.

  • @jarrettetal.1680
    @jarrettetal.1680 4 года назад +33

    Your videos are amazing I'm binging them now. The conciseness, how informative they are and the explanations. I need you as my friend for my final year of studies!! 🥺🥺

    • @davidpage411
      @davidpage411 3 года назад

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  • @Nicole_F9
    @Nicole_F9 3 года назад +8

    THIS IS GOLDEN. Thank you so much for the breakdown of how to write an essay!

  • @yvonne3583
    @yvonne3583 Год назад +2

    this literally saved me! i got perfect scores in my essay exams ever since i watched this❤️

  • @mdanesh623
    @mdanesh623 3 года назад +11

    Doctor Shaene, thank you very much for sharing your idea about writing an essay. From the last two weeks, I have been writing and deleting because I was not satisfied about my writing. Now, I am going to try your method and hopefully it will work.

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  3 года назад

      Best of luck!!

    • @sujasajit4541
      @sujasajit4541 9 месяцев назад

      @@DoctorShaenecan you please help me with my essay. It’s synthesis.

  • @halloweengiraffe
    @halloweengiraffe Год назад +1

    OK why is this more helpful than the SEVERAL years of university I've had... Thank you!!

  • @Spencerlayne
    @Spencerlayne 3 года назад +6

    You're life saver mate. Thank you so much. I'm doing open university. And things like this should be set out as simple as you have done right here. I got it. I now have an introduction and my body draft after scratching my head for days.

  • @AkshithS-k8o
    @AkshithS-k8o 8 месяцев назад +1

    Thankyou Bro. It really helped me out in my recent highschool essay competition where I used this format and got selected for top 3. Ii will further be using this format for my next round of essay too. Once thanking you from the bottom of my heart.

  • @wendysloane2461
    @wendysloane2461 3 года назад +19

    This is AMAZING! I have watched so many help videos on this subject and yours is head and shoulders above them all. Thank you so much I am going to put this into practice and will let you know. It will be my very first essay year 1 of my ODP degree!

    • @jonathankiles6148
      @jonathankiles6148 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/4BpagjxjapM/видео.html

    • @davidpage411
      @davidpage411 3 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/ZUcubs3Oocs/видео.html

  • @hotpotato561
    @hotpotato561 Год назад +1

    I still come back to this video at the beginning of every semester. Always a helpful refresher!

  • @thabangcj4498
    @thabangcj4498 2 года назад +7

    I'm glad my English facilitator at university taught me this exact essay technique. This worked out well for me as I managed to score an "A" in my final grade mark. 😁

  • @jenny8330
    @jenny8330 4 месяца назад +1

    Thanks for the video, got me A’s/B’s in all my college courses (had never even written an essay before taking them).

  • @monkeysheep
    @monkeysheep 3 года назад +4

    Thank you for this video, I followed your structure, and for the main body outlined key points, provide evidence to back it up, critically analysed it and then related it to the question and bagged myself a distinction for my essay which I managed to write in a day. You're the man Dr Shaene. Anytime you're in Cambridge and want to go for a coffee let me know its on me.

  • @grisscortes3871
    @grisscortes3871 3 года назад +1

    can we all appreciate how clear he was and the editing.

  • @alexi_mo
    @alexi_mo 3 года назад +6

    Thank you for this !! I got an A in my exam because of you ahh, so grateful

  • @fairy32-r6s
    @fairy32-r6s Год назад +2

    Thank you very much DR. They tell us to always include citations in our essays but they don’t even tell us how to properly write an essay.

  • @dorothyb.
    @dorothyb. 4 года назад +4

    Such an amazing description of how to structure and be analytical. But what’s more, it was not over lengthy and concise. I’ll be using it with my students!

  • @n01_ask3d4
    @n01_ask3d4 3 года назад +2

    Wow! Absolutely spectacular video. Long story short! I have been thinking the whole f*** time about how am I gonna write a bloody essay. Now it seems I got exactly what I needed.
    You make me feel writing an essay is just a piece of cake Thanks, mate

  • @JadeLeahPilling01
    @JadeLeahPilling01 4 года назад +12

    my lecturer showed me this, thank you for the wonderful advice ❤️

  • @ligareimane5307
    @ligareimane5307 5 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you so much for this, I graduated from uni with a first thanks to your advice

  • @arohachanuwu9504
    @arohachanuwu9504 3 года назад +15

    oh wow, the structure is basically how i write essays! i love writing essays.. but it just takes me forever when im not in the mood;-;

    • @alexchege4242
      @alexchege4242 3 года назад

      Hello, I assist students with their essays and online classes. DM or reach me on my email: alexchege13@gmail.com

  • @user-rainbowgirl
    @user-rainbowgirl 3 месяца назад +1

    amazing points thank you Doctor Shaene

  • @zacharyadams7721
    @zacharyadams7721 3 года назад +3

    I have a FSA test tomorrow and this will come in handy. THANKS :)

  • @CosmicFrankie
    @CosmicFrankie Год назад +1

    this has helped me so much. I left an essay that was due the next day at the last minute lol. I got full marks this is such a lifesaver thank you so much

  • @jiren1453
    @jiren1453 4 года назад +4

    Brilliant video, always struggled with structuring my essays in first year. This has helped me a lot for second year, Great work!

  • @penguinz3438
    @penguinz3438 2 года назад +1

    This really helped for my Cambridge IGCSE English first language in a few hours :)

  • @eth4nfnbr
    @eth4nfnbr 2 года назад +3

    Thank you so much! I’m in grade 9 and all this English work just overwhelmed me so I did basically nothing in school my teacher noticed and allowed me to write an essay and if I get and 80% or more then I will pass and I got a 96% and no summer school yay

  • @ginanewman5330
    @ginanewman5330 Год назад +1

    Hi My name is Gina . I notice you are so good when it comes writing.

  • @sairahpreeth9584
    @sairahpreeth9584 3 года назад +505

    It’s kind of funny how in his introduction he says “this essay will discuss” my teacher says that you should never use this in your introduction 😂

    • @mahadhayat7440
      @mahadhayat7440 3 года назад +1

      @@herbertj3105 how much $

    • @marleyfrankenstein2167
      @marleyfrankenstein2167 3 года назад +92

      @@mahadhayat7440 Don't do it, the essays are most likely going to be plagiarized which could get you in major trouble.

    • @elsieogba2007
      @elsieogba2007 3 года назад

      Happy

    • @sophosophosoph
      @sophosophosoph 3 года назад +64

      thats why it's ironic because in so many academic papers and uni textbooks, they always say "this essay will discuss"

    • @jaydeedelacruz1922
      @jaydeedelacruz1922 3 года назад +33

      "This essay will discuss.." is his thesis statement. Readers must be guided as to what you are going to discuss throughout your essay. So, it is a MUST. However, I don't think it's a good idea that your thesis statement should be stated that way because it lessens the strength of your composition. There are other ways it can be expressed.

  • @QueeningChristian
    @QueeningChristian Год назад +1

    I am writing my first essay assignment and i definitely am going to use this essay writing style. Thanks, Doctor Shaene. Your work is brilliant.

  • @sanjanashah3776
    @sanjanashah3776 4 года назад +6

    Thank you so much. I loved how your video was straight to the point and concise. I've always struggled with idea gathering and filtering into my essays but your brilliant format has really cleared up things and I am now looking forward to get back to writing my essay. Thank you very much indeed, Doctor Shaene.

  • @unstabledefusion
    @unstabledefusion 2 года назад +2

    Of course I come across this video AFTER I had to submit my recent essay.
    Anyway, this a really good video. It’s helped me realize what I could have improved in my essay.

  • @soullezz801
    @soullezz801 3 года назад +3

    Dude, i have to take a SAT next week i appreciate you doing this.

  • @ainturboi
    @ainturboi Год назад

    this is beautiful and madness at the same time. you sir, literally saved my life

  • @darshgupta6276
    @darshgupta6276 3 года назад +7

    I'm a 5th Grader, and I've signed up for an essay competition tomorrow. These tips are really helpful. (I understand this kids are not dumb) Edit: the key words in the theme is literally the theme itself- I miss going to school

    • @ash457
      @ash457 2 года назад

      i wish i was that smart at 5th grade lol

  • @SAK11RA
    @SAK11RA 7 месяцев назад +1

    This video has been unbelievably helpful to me. You make the study skills department at my uni look like a joke!

  • @itznayem8441
    @itznayem8441 4 года назад +45

    Damn not gonna lie I suck at writing essays but after watching this video I feel a little confidence.

  • @lustfulscholar1199
    @lustfulscholar1199 Год назад

    This 10min video better summerises my entire education than hours and hours of lectures. Thank you

  • @SaleemRanaAuthor
    @SaleemRanaAuthor 4 года назад +27

    Liked, smashed the subscribed button, and started thinking of my next essay! I feel as if you have just handed me the genetic code of essay writing. Maybe you should think of expanding this concept into a book. It's brilliant!

    • @achrafabid1541
      @achrafabid1541 3 года назад +2

      And that's exactly why I love the likes of u. So supportive and loving. The exact definition of a human being.
      Thank u so much sir, for these kind words. God bless ya. 🙏

    • @davidpage411
      @davidpage411 3 года назад

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  • @mariacalo7714
    @mariacalo7714 Год назад

    I love how you provided examples for every part of the essay! Thank youuu

  • @MilkTeaASMR
    @MilkTeaASMR 2 года назад +8

    Thank you, this is a very helpful breakdown that I intend to use for my next psychology paper. Also, I love the color-coding. The world needs a little more color and lightness these days. 💕

  • @janeenchambers3297
    @janeenchambers3297 2 месяца назад +1

    Very Helpful--Thanks!

  • @atealove
    @atealove 4 года назад +4

    Amazing explanation!! Thank you so much! So precise and clear! You helped me a lot

  • @vanecubides3923
    @vanecubides3923 3 года назад +2

    I am not a person of writing comments after watching a video, but I cannot go without saying thank you for this video. You don't know how much it helped me to understand how to formulate an essay and be able to have a potential good mark :).... Please keep sharing your knowledge.

  • @M__Amor
    @M__Amor 3 года назад +6

    Wow, I love you. Prevented a lot of stressed-out tears from me 🤣

  • @Kristielina
    @Kristielina Месяц назад

    I highly appreciate the writing outline; thank you for this video.

  • @deanjohn2543
    @deanjohn2543 3 года назад +8

    im in my final year of uni now and i used to do a lot of this like sub headings and diagrams i got marked down and told it wasnt academic to use subheadings and i shouldnt use diagrams i should write the information in a paragraph instead

  • @MedicCasey
    @MedicCasey Год назад

    This short video is phenomenal. Thank you!

  • @irlkittn
    @irlkittn 3 года назад +4

    bruh thank u sm you’re a life saver ;-; ♡

  • @natcat4023
    @natcat4023 3 года назад +1

    Ommgg... You literally made me a study guide for my AP test, THANK YOOOUUU!!!

    • @alexchege4242
      @alexchege4242 3 года назад

      Hello, I assist students with their essays and online classes. DM or reach me on my email: alexchege13@gmail.com

  • @charlieblah
    @charlieblah 3 года назад +3

    I've watched this video before writing every uni essay I've done and I've never gotten less than a first - also I do humanities so I don't even think I'm the target audience, but it's such a goood formula :))

  • @richardinman7180
    @richardinman7180 2 года назад

    Thank you so much!
    I really needed this support. I am currently progressing swiftly and I wish your channel even greater success in the future.

  • @mahaalahmad8546
    @mahaalahmad8546 3 года назад +3

    Thank you for this video,it just on time. My 1st essay deadline is on 23rd of March so I can write perfect one.

  • @soilaokworo6036
    @soilaokworo6036 2 года назад

    My God, Dr. Shaene, where have you been? I have literally just submitted an essay and how I wish I had watched this before! You’re on point! God bless you 🙏🏾

  • @nicolehennessy1295
    @nicolehennessy1295 4 года назад +15

    If you know anything about a statistics lab report could you do a video of that? This was super helpful so I subscribed to keep an eye on things ☺️

  • @botofwar6567
    @botofwar6567 3 года назад

    Saw the quality editing in this vid and straight away knew this was legit. Thanks 🙏🏼

  • @ionamccormick8525
    @ionamccormick8525 4 года назад +4

    this video is genuinely a lifesaver, any difference between how i should write for example the intro, if I'm doing a critical assessment of a policy or something like that (i do science geography). Honestly great video!

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      @haileyp.3874 4 года назад

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  • @foooysaaal
    @foooysaaal Год назад

    what a clear guideline! you are fantastic!

  • @originalcyclon9652
    @originalcyclon9652 2 года назад +8

    I’m really want to go this stem next year and i was worried about what materials i would need for the essays and what I would need to know. Then I saw tutoring options, and they were 60 dollars an hour, and thats too much. So i open RUclips and i search stem essay essentials and found this. This is so good, i feel like I’m ready for what’s next, great job, this is better than what i learned in school for that past 3 years! Just one problem, the examples you used are way, way to hard for me to understand, because I’m only in 8th grade, other than that, its amazing.

  • @Hdidbi_3049
    @Hdidbi_3049 3 года назад +2

    I’m studying for my IB exam in December and essays are tricky tricky, thank you!

    • @estebandeesteban4245
      @estebandeesteban4245 3 года назад

      I can be of assistance here. The right guy for your assignment help

  • @talhariyaz1731
    @talhariyaz1731 3 года назад +7

    Thank you so much, it has been really beneficial, I was wondering if you could give us some pointers on how to perform critical analysis

  • @pistachio2285
    @pistachio2285 Год назад

    I find myself watching this before writing any essay. Thank you!

  • @honeyoyinfalola6870
    @honeyoyinfalola6870 3 года назад +4

    I don’t know if anyone struggles with this weirdly enough orally or in my head I can think of an essay but I can’t write it out on paper and if I do it doesn’t match with my thoughts ?

    • @alexchege4242
      @alexchege4242 3 года назад

      Hello, I assist students with their essays and online classes. DM or reach me on my email: alexchege13@gmail.com

  • @tomphillips5513
    @tomphillips5513 11 месяцев назад

    Concise, understandable and logical. A nice video that really does boil down the characteristics of a good essay, I feel inspired to get mine done now

  • @valtracy7557
    @valtracy7557 4 года назад +4

    Could you talk about the importance of original arguements in essays. I think that helps get higher marks but I would just like to know how to not get distracted from the question

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  4 года назад

      Hey! Maybe check out the other video I have on scientific essays where I talk about using original points more 😊

  • @indometrium3822
    @indometrium3822 2 года назад +2

    He used the same structure of the essay for the video.... Genius

  • @sofiiakornatska1086
    @sofiiakornatska1086 4 года назад +5

    Thank you so much! Your videos are very helpful, concise and inspiring, even though I'm not a medical student:))

  • @jaydnbond4347
    @jaydnbond4347 10 месяцев назад

    thankyou very much, I have always found essays challenging, usually for last 2 years ranging from 55-64 in uni essay grades, I have followed this structure in my recent essay and obtain 78. this really works, thank you very much.

  • @enkh_kkkk6834
    @enkh_kkkk6834 3 года назад +5

    Im writing an essay for my scholarship . Wish me luck ✌️

  • @AlisonGianaRathbone
    @AlisonGianaRathbone 8 месяцев назад

    I love this video!! I have only noticed one punctuation error. " Whilst feedforward provides a mechanism to predict future changes and respond to them in advance based on current sensory input. Feedforward mechanisms are sued for rapid movement, whilst negative feedback is used for slower, automatic movement." Just put a comma between imput and feedforward and you will be golden. I am not an expert writer at all, I just think it is always important to know where you put your punctuation just so the reader can understand the information better. ☺ I hope you are having a great day!!! Thank you for your content!!

  • @randomperson1630
    @randomperson1630 3 года назад +3

    I have a 2,000 word essay due in 3 days which i haven’t even looked at LOL. anyways I’ll use this video as guidance now thank you🙏🏾

    • @DoctorShaene
      @DoctorShaene  3 года назад

      Best of luck!

    • @randomperson1630
      @randomperson1630 3 года назад +3

      @Go back to your country I got a second class actually. Thanks for your interest. Now fuck off😀

  • @Diane1Teresa
    @Diane1Teresa 2 года назад

    Why has no one told me this! Thank you so much. This is best!

  • @sumayaafrinmisti3161
    @sumayaafrinmisti3161 4 года назад +4

    Thank you for this! So concise and answered my confusions!!

  • @QueenofSadSongs
    @QueenofSadSongs Год назад

    Thank you for being such a life saver Shaene