How I Got a First Class in EVERY Essay at University (Part 2) | The Best Essay Technique
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02:05 Writing the Introduction
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10:25 Writing the Conclusion
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Whats up guys! My name is Kenji and I am currently a medical student at King's College London after graduating from the University of Birmingham with a Bachelor's degree in Medical Science (BMedSci). In this video, I take you through how to write an essay at university or college.
If you enjoyed the video, please give it a like and a comment so I know to make some more! Also please show support by sharing it with a friend who's also interested in Medicine :)
Thank you so much! 
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Essay notes:
Can I marry you?
Essay:
Can we become husband and wife?
Can we tie the knot?
Can we be bonded by the sacrament of marriage?
Can we be united by consensual and contractual relationship recognized by law?
Just practicing my rephrasing skills, don't worry.
unless...
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I just started my Masters and was so lost with the first assignment and wanted to do some research to understand how to do my assignments/essays better. Love your videos, I am relieved that I know what to do and not to do now. Thank you for explaining clearly and beautifully ♥🙏
This, and the first part of this video has helped me so much! These videos should be mandatory for everyone in Uni haha :D But seriously, I wish I had seen these ages ago! Thank you so much for your tips :)
I'm glad! You're welcome 😁
Thank you so much :-). Watching both essay tip videos has eased my anxiety with regards to essay writing. You're already saving lives !
You’re very welcome! :)
Phenomenal video, mate! Thank you a million times.
I have been searching for more than 2 years for some clear instruction on essay writing. Without a doubt, I'm buying your book.
As a fellow 1st Class Biomedical Graduate, I definitely see this being a super useful video if your not scoring into the first class category on your essays !! Also big love Kenji !!
Thank you so much!!
You might want to check this out ruclips.net/video/2FYSXvtEbcc/видео.html
Wow, thank you for sharing! I am struggling with my first essay and I found your instruction and it helps me a lot. Wish universities taught us this. Again thank you very much.
You're welcome! Please do share it with anyone you think will benefit 😁
Only in high school and this helps a ton, and it seems like i will need this for the future, absolute legend
You're welcome! 😁
Thank you so much. I watched both parts and they were a great help. Thanks to you I got an A on my research paper.💯🙏
This was amazing! I'm in the middle of writing my thesis now and I have been so stuck on how best to get it to 1st class standard. Both of your videos were so helpful, thank you so much
You're welcome! 😁 Do check out my free Skillshare class for more on essay writing. Link in the description!
please I am at the beginning of my studies. May you provide materials on how to improve my writing essay to order it online?
Thank you Kenji, I have been really struggling with my essays. I will be using these techniques. Fingers crossed will get better marks.
You’re very welcome! :)
This video was really useful, thank you so much!
You're welcome! I also just released a free Skillshare class on essay writing that you can access here: skl.sh/35YAILp
So helpful! Thank you for sharing this important information!
Glad it was helpful!
Just what I was looking for, thanks a lot
Thank you for your great explanation and this video is helping me a lot.
This video was sooooo good, thank you so much !
You’re very welcome! :)
Thanks you so much. The lecturer has so much to do with how knowledge is received.
You’re very welcome! :)
You're a legend, really needed this.
This is just what I need!!
I'm glad!
Many thanks, this is very helpful, happy to watch these videos. Really on time 😊😀
You’re very welcome! :)
Dr Kenji, I can't thank you enough for your help and direction. I have subscribed to your essay writing course and would recommend this fully, amazingly useful to me
Thank you so much for your feedback!
Honestly you've saved me - thank you ! ☺️
You’re welcome 😊
I'm only three minutes in and had to express in these comments how much of an absolute angel you are for this!!! :'D I could genuinely cry I hate assignments never get more than 50-60% but that's hopefully going to change this year all because of you! Thank you so much xxxxxxx
You're very welcome! Please share it with your friends 😁
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Life saver thank you !!!!
You are a life saviour 😭 Thank you man✨🌞
You’re very welcome! :)
Thank you SO much. You are a KING!
You're welcome!
Heyyy just got into bachelor degree and this has really help me to write more Critical in my report writing.Thankk youu so muchhh.God bless!
You're welcome!!
Thank you so much Kenji, you don't know how much this has helped me. I wish I met you earlier
Glad I could help!
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After 4 years of med school, def forgot so many grammar techniques and proper essay writing
Hope this helped!
Thank you! Very nice and useful!!
You're welcome!!
Hi Fabio,
If you are struggling with writing your essays or handling your assignments, I would love to help. I'm a professional freelance writer with a vast knowledge in tackling essays and assignments in general. Feel free to email me at lohanwilliams25@gmail.com if you interested with such a service.
Thank you for your help!
You’re very welcome! :)
Thank you for another valuable video (the same as part 1). Definitely your new subcriber 🤩 Wish you the best
thank you so much!
Thank you for this great helpful content
You're welcome 😁
Hi Snow,
If you are struggling with writing your essays or handling your assignments, I would love to help. I'm a professional freelance writer with a vast knowledge on tackling essays and assignments in general. Feel free to email me at lohanwilliams25@gmail.com if you interested with such a service.
Just bought your essay guide! Hope it helps. Keep it up:)
Thank you so much for the support! Hope it helps 🙂
Kenji, hi …this is VERY IMPORTANT …. can you please pleas please make video on how to understand science essay titles? Its so hard to understand them and figure out what the heck you supposed to focus on in the first place ! thank you
this is amazing thanks
You're welcome! 😁 Share it with someone who you think would benefit too please!
I am currently doing B.A Hons in teaching and this video has helped me so much with writing my essay. Thank you 🙏🏼
You're welcome!
dr kenji is very helpful ;)
This channel is recommendable for real
Thanks so much! Please recommend it to your friends 😁
Great video 👍 thanks
You’re very welcome! :)
very informative thanks
You're welcome!
thank you for this its really helpful! i'm in my final year and have been struggling getting top marks in my essays so im excited to try this out...
You're so welcome!
You're so welcome!
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This video could not have come at a better time for me😊I’m currently in my 2nd year at kings studying biomed and I actually learnt about the gut microbiota today,! Thank you for sharing your tips!
You're very welcome 😁
@@DoctorKenji which word software you’re using on your Mac?
I have learned a lot from your videos in the shortest time .
I’m glad!!
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Kenji thank you so much it really helped me can you please do more videos on compare contrast and critical writing :)
I'll be doing a Skillshare class on this, study tuned 😁
@@DoctorKenji great will be tuned :)
Hi Jones,
If you are struggling with writing your essays or handling your assignments, I would love to help. I'm a professional freelance writer with a vast knowledge in tackling essays and assignments in general. Feel free to email me at lohanwilliams25@gmail.com if you interested with such a service.
Thank you so much for this ,future Odp.
You’re very welcome! :)
Thank you very much :)
You're welcome!
Thank you so much 😊
You're welcome 😊
Thank you so much
You’re very welcome! :)
Thanks man
Hopefully I pass tomorrow as this has helped
Good luck!
@@DoctorKenji Thank you
The video helped a lot so thanks so much!
I do not miss writing essays for uni. In fact I hated it so much 😅, now, you know I don’t hate? Getting a video notification of my favourite doctor. 😍🥰
Awww thank you!!
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hi Kenji... Your video has been very helpful....thank you very much.. could you please do an essay on how to critique a research article especially qualitative or either quantitative
Great suggestion! I'll add it to the list. You can also check out how I critique papers on my e-book, link in the description
Wonderful video, can you do a video on case studies or share some tips on doing same.
Great suggestion! Will add it to the list
I'm doing my foundation year for Civil Engineering and this really helps. Never had to write more than 400 words on a subject before, and it's the first time I've had to do my own research. I have to write between 1350-1650 words on any subject[s] in the construction industry. I chose Visual Computing, Automation and Green Construction. This video really has helped, and honestly I was struggling before watching this but now I'm confident that I can very easily reach the 1650 word limit without breaking a sweat. Cheers!
I'm glad it helped! All the best!
Hi Ashley
you are the BEST
It's really helped me,but I'm really struggling to write my first investigation report
Also tell us how to choose topic which can meet all the criteria of essay especially research and conclusion.. Tq
Hi
I have watched your first and second videos ,it is very helpful. I am struggling a little bit, because this is my first time of writing a primary research essay. I am in my second year Nursing (Adult).Thanks and God bless
You can do it!
Amazing! I was looking for some guidance on writing essays because mine is due soon and this popped up at the perfect time! Very detailed and insightful, thank you so much!
You're welcome! All the best and please do share it with anyone who might benefit too 😁
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legend!
Can u pls make videos about getting good grades on dissertation
I'll definitely add that to the list!
Could you do a video how to write the "open book exam" please?
I'll add that to the list!
Do you have any essay videos where you discuss how i write a table of contents for research reports you must create instead of an essay formate? for mine, we have to write how own hypothesis, then test it, then results and how it could have been better or worse ect. I find these incredibly difficult because i am better at essay style. Especially when them word limit is low and writing the report being specific but still tell enough in it is so hard. thanku and so far have binged your whole page i think i love u lol.
Thanks so much! I don't have any videos on that but I just released a free class that might help which you can check out here: skl.sh/35YAILp
Everything is perfect thank you. But can you please get a better mic?
This is so helpful, thank you.
You mentioned about creating your own figure, how do you do this, which program do you use?
I just use Powerpoint! Have a look at my skillshare class for more info (link in description)
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Can't thank you enough for these videos!
You’re very welcome! :)
This video is a year ago. And here I am thinking I was the only adult student who made so low on essays.
If I were to make my own image, a spider diagram, where would I place it in the essay? The introduction? or the first paragraph in the body?
hi kenji what do you mean by figure when you talk about it because i dont think ur talking about numbers
Thank you for the video!! btw I think it's just me but I couldn't stop staring at the orange in the back haha.
Hahahahah
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For the most part, this is a great clip with very useful information. However, would it not be more appropriate to write the limitations as part of your critical evaluation within the main body instead of the conclusion? Personally, I believe that makes more sense in terms of coherence. Furthermore, on the topic of limitations, I was marked down on an essay for writing the general limitations of the study according to authors limitations; markers argued that they wanted more originality in the critical evaluation - so I’d be careful here.
Besides this, I agree with the points you’ve raised!
I definitely see your point. I don't think there's a hard or fast rule, I think it depends on the type of paper you are writing and the context of things!
hi, i love you for this king
Ayy you're welcome!
Hi Khadija,
If you are struggling with writing your essays or handling your assignments, I would love to help. I'm a professional freelance writer with a vast knowledge in tackling essays and assignments in general. Feel free to email me at lohanwilliams25@gmail.com if you interested with such a service.
Hey Kenji thanks for this insightful tips! Im wondering what device do use to get clear voice for you videos? I am a lecturer and sometimes find it hard for my students to hear my voice during online class.
I just use the mic on the Logitech webcam HD Pro! It is different to the mic for my videos since the mic I use for that can only plug into cameras
@@DoctorKenji Many thanks Kenji. You know so many good deeds that you have done to help many students out there from all of your videos (even not from medicine field). As a lecturer I sometimes refer to your videos to aid me in my lesson too. Keep on sharing great contents to the world. God bless you brother.
The ultimate compliment knowing a lecturer finds your content useful!, well done Kenji and your channel is ace even for a non-medical student
thanks very helpful! quick question - a lot of people say/ recommend that in order to have a good intro its best to leave the intro to the end after you've finished writing the body, do you agree with this or do you just approach the essay from beginning to end?
I always do the intro first because it helps be understand my essay better and set the stage well
@@DoctorKenji great thanks for answering!
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Can u suggest me any sorry where I can get gov articles about business or marketing...to b particular for an essay on management decision making
Could you do a video on writing a literature review?
i shall try my best with that!
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I have an essay due 22/11/2020 I did all my research and I absolutely appreciate both of your videos. just wanted to ask how do I use the funnel method for the conclusion. including all the info you said is key for my conclusion .is long conclusion ok?
You can use the funnel method in the same way. And yes conclusions can be long depending on your word count!
@kenji will you be doing any new student discount codes for your essay writing e book?? 🙏
Drop me an email! I also just released a free Skillshare class on essay writing that you can access here: skl.sh/35YAILp
Nice video
i wanna ask , how do you link an essay or a topic to a scenario that's been given in your assignment after explaining what the topic is about.
I'd suggest having a look at the second part to this video and also my free essay course (link in description). I go into great detail answering your Q
For the first bit of the intro is it okay to cite websites for the simpler information or should it still be pubmed reviews?
I would stick to pubmed only for your entire paper
I'm about to do my first formative assessment for Nursing Studies (Adult), which is just the introduction of 200 words for my 2000 summative essay due in January. This is really helpful, thank you so much!
You're welcome, all the best!
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Instant wizard can't download please tell about that
Would this also work for a report?
How long do you give yourself to write an essay - great video - cheers
It depends but on average about 3 weeks
Hi, I wanna ask you. If we have citations on our essay so must we add referrences below? @kenji tomita
Definitely1 I explain it more in my free online class (link in description)
Do i need to follow the same for applying master's in university?or is it different?
I would say it’s more or less the same
Can we write in points and bullet points while writting main body.. rather than as wholw paragraph
Unfortunately it has to be sentences!
For the conclusion is most of that in your own words or would you still need to be citing references
It’s mostly in your own words but if you refer to anything specifically then you’d need to reference.
Can we get the link to the mic you use please?
Everything I used to film is linked in the description
Should I write an essay outline before finding the information for my essay
If you can then that would be great! New free Skillshare class is out now btw: skl.sh/35YAILp
can this be applied to writing a dissertation?
Definitely!
So I have a research paper due and I was wondering what viewpoint to write in. 1st, 2nd, or 3rd.
Usually third person but it depends
Hi Wendy,
If you are struggling with writing your essays or handling your assignments, I would love to help. I'm a professional freelance writer with a vast knowledge in tackling essays and assignments in general. Feel free to email me at lohanwilliams25@gmail.com if you interested with such a service.
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Can you send your e-book link here please?
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Currently writing an MBA, totally different subject but I love how you have structured your essay and the funnel method is astoundingly simple.
Cheers
Glad it was helpful! Just released a free Skillshare class on this that you may want to checkout: skl.sh/35YAILp
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Do you have any recommendations on research papers evaluation 🙏🙏🙏😊
U doing movember bro?
Haha I wish but this is as far as it grows 😂
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