Insanity: A Jeff the Killer Fanfiction
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- Опубликовано: 23 сен 2024
- Well, if you’ll excuse me, I ought to be walking home now.
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The skeleton from candle cove and instead of a real skeleton he’s like a tall skinny guy with attractive swoopy hair - / jennynicholson
The scary mickey mouse suit from Abandoned By Disney but really just to throw the author a bone because he could really use the validation - / jennyenicholson
A possessed Barney doll but he’s tall and skinny with attractive swoopy hair - / spider_jewel
The Dionaea House - / spiderjewel
Every single test subject in the Russian Sleep Experiment - / jennynicholsonvids
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Hi everyone. I still get a lot of comments asking about the next book in this series.
Due to the age of the story and inactivity of the profile I had assumed that the story was written by someone when they were young, mostly forgotten about, and whenever an Amazon payment would come through she'd go "Oh, haha, that." It seems like this had mostly been the case.
Unfortunately, after the release of this video some of my viewers tracked down the author's socials and harassed her to the point that she felt the need to issue an apology for writing the books, and suggested that she may remove them from the marketplace. I'm not sure if she has yet, but she is uncomfortable with the attention and I'm not going to review a book that was taken off the market.
I had thought it went without saying, but this is why, in subsequent videos, I've specifically asked people not to harass authors. I see a lot of people leave Amazon reviews on books as soon as I drop videos on them, clearly not having read it themselves, and I don't know what they're getting out of that. The 2nd book was much longer and more unique and I was excited to cover it, but this is why we can't have nice things.
I had no idea that's what people were doing. Tragic, poor author. She was just a kid when she wrote it
I'm just revisiting this gem of a video. That's so sad. So, and adult wrote this book? Or?
Wow. All the harassers: please submit your original stories/fanfics to Jenny so we can -laugh at- admire your work. Only then can you be redeemed.
Ah it's bad to hear that. I hope the author doesn't beat herself up for this.
It is very sad to see people do that... I hope the author is okay.
“What do you have?!”
“A KNIFE!!”
“No!!”
Enfys Best crap you got it before me
_"Why does she have a knife??"_
You won the internet
most underrated comment
is this a satina reference?
"I want revenge but my mom said no"
mom said it's my turn on the revenge
Buuuuut moooom all the other lazy characters can have there revenge so why can’t I
golly gosh gee willickers i hate it when that happens
less irony for the price of more This is it. The perfect meme, thank you for making me actually laugh out loud
We have revenge in the fridge
absolutely lost it when Naomi was playing Kingdom Hearts music and Jeff's immediate reaction was "wow! can you play something else? :) "
This was a sign that Naomi is in a bad relationship
Rose the Love fox or bad at piano. Or competent at a bad piece of music
naomi: plays a random kingdom hearts song
jeff: thanks! i hate it
Naomi: *plays kingdom hearts music*
Jeff: Wow great can you play something else?
Naomi: *plays more kingdom hearts music*
Jeff: Am I a joke to you?
Honestly, if someone I liked didn't like KH, I would stop liking them
Mallory: pulls out a knife
Naomi, an empath, sensing that she’s in danger:
LMAO
🍋
LMAFAOOOOOO
Mallory: **stabs Naomi**
Naomi: "Hmm something tells me you mean to do me harm... 🤨"
Naomi's Spider Sense is just strong enough to distract her from whatever is endangering her.
“one of them was skinny as a twig, one was huge, and the other was just normal sized”
oh, cute, it’s like a goldilocks assortment of boys
Don't forget that he also had a hat.
i love that
This is a different kind of 3 bears
And one was *JJUUUUUUSSSSSTTT RIIIIGGGHHHHT*
Jeffery Locks and the 3 killer bois
the most unrealistic part of the fic is that mallory had a skirt with pockets
Jean skirts sometimes have pockets. Sometimes.
I have a floral skirt with pockets. I am truly blessed
@@autumneatspant86 WHERE DID YOU BUY IT PLEASE TELL US
Or at the very least, I expected the story to skid to a halt while Naomi expresses surprise that the skirt has pockets. For a brief moment, two arch-enemies come together and commiserate about the general lack of good pockets. Then right back to stabs.
Custom made since she's rich.
"i would hug you, but it would bring more pain to my wounds" -me being handed a bandaid after getting a papercut
big mood.
I use that quote regularly
Okay, so when I was little I fell off the roof and broke a rib to the point it was sticking out.
Very recently, I had a paper cut in between my fingers.
The papercut hurt worse.
@@beanieguitarguy4070 ok first of all OW. second of all ive never broken a bone, much less broken one to the extent you have, but i dont doubt for a SECOND youre right abt that not being as bad as papercuts
Deadass, this almost made me choke on my food.
I'm a Malory apologist. She saw Naomi's evil vibes coming a mile away. Jeff never killed before Naomi turned up, Malory knew she was a bad influence
sparkly pink pocket knife matching her skirt which has pockets… icon
Malory is like an anti- hero Regina George and she has my permission to personally victimize me
Malory did nothing wrong.
I mean... He didn't kill anyone before Malory turned up either.
Mallory and her mom knew what was up. They tried to warn everyone.
I love how Mallory being a romantic rival was only a relevant plot point for about 30 seconds
I enjoyed that the author's impression of what a popular normie mean-girl might do to impress a boy is to brutally slash another girl right in front of him.
@@gordonscott6180 Maybe normie mean girls should fucking step it up, then! I mean, it'd get *my* attention...
@@gordonscott6180 it worked with Joffrey Baratheon
Better or worse than "Lew's perspective"?
@@gordonscott6180 she's a yandere
Jeff wore his dress pants and fifty dollars grey shirt
There NEEDS to be a crossover. If Anisha and That Vampire Chick don't get together to do the sequel I'll do it myself. I'm willing to make that sacrifice for the greater good
this birthday party scene walked so parasite could run
This comment made me wheeze out a lung
oh my gOD
Underrated comment
HOW COULD YOU 💀
hi fellow na(u)dia
I really like the repeated reminders that Jeff is wearing black dress pants, as opposed to black jeans. The kid's in slacks, don't you forget it.
It’s band kid crossover appeal.
These are the slacks of a killer, Bella
But, WHY is he in black dress pants?
@@henryapplebottom7231 If i remember correctly, in the original pasta his mom made him dress nicely to go to a little kid's birthday party
@@ohno8064 So I guess the bit where Naomi dresses up for a little kid's birthday party can be blamed in part on the source material.
"My sweet girl has no enemies except that one girl who lives next door to us"
I don't know why, but that line REALLY got me.
777 likes! Good fortune ahead!
Also I love that she says, on live television, basically that mallory deserved to die and that warranted no further investigation by the police.
i read this at the EXACT moment Jenny said it and choked on my water
love how the three bully kids introduce themselves with their names like they're team rocket
I see Randy as Jessie, Keith as James, and Troy could either be Meowth or Wobbuffet
@@daneroberts1996 I can see the Pokemon weight categories now, small, medium, huge and normal and had on a hat
@@masync183 perry the platypus?!
To protect the world from devastation, to unite all kingdoms in our nation, Randy! Keith! Troy, that's right!
@@inkfae9916 😢î
The most unrealistic part of this is that Mallory had a pocket in her skirt.
I like to think she was wearing one of those knife holsters that wraps around your leg like a garter belt, pink to match of course
Not to flex too hard, but I actually have a skirt with TWO pockets. 👌
@@andrearupe8094 Obvious Lies. We all know pockets aren't made for women.
@@andrearupe8094 g i m m i e
@@andrearupe8094 I have TWO skirts with a total of FOUR pockets. Weirdly enough they're both made of mostly wool...
"It's the way I dress"
"No, not really"
Oh my god that is fucking golden dialogue. I cant stop laughing
such a power move tbh
It's like shenmue dialogue
"you made one of my imaginations come true"
I'm only 10 minutes in but I'm scared. I asked my dad to come in the room with his gun to help me get through this chilling tale.
no one boi its a joke👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Silly tantryl, your dad is out of town! Otherwise that's a pretty solid plan, maybe you should walk to your neighbor's house and borrow their gun-dad.
He could try, but me and my posse of large, small, and hat bullies will be lying in wait.
wolfspam "gun-dad" lol I'm dying
Did you get a bad feeling while watching this?
“Are they serving us lunch first?”
Jeff has his priorities straight.
The author goes out of her way to name Naomi's friends, who are literally there for one scene. I wonder if her irl friends wanted a cameo in her self-insert fic
"Fangs to Raven for halping me with that chapta"
Fangs to Raven!
Fangs to raven :)
Actually all of those names seem to be after creepypasta's.
So it maybe just a cute little reference she did, I used to do it all the time in my writing when I was younger, I'm really sad people where so mean to her after the review
@@whatteamwildcats4033 wait those r creepypastas? :kaneki_ken:
I love how the book glosses over the fact that Jeff killed like 7 girls in the first 2 chapters of the book. Yeah, it was totally the bullies disfiguring him that caused Jeff to go insane, not the fact that he's just always been a crazed murderer.
i think its just taken as a given in this books universe that most people enjoy stabbing and have stabbed or shot a few people in their lifetime
That's how you know that event wasn't in the original version, it's a very faithful retelling with some extra bits (that just make it weirder).
it’s because the camp part wasn’t even included in the original story, the author just added it without considering the implications
Yes, Mae (above me) is correct.
The OG story has NO camp opening; Jeff becomes Jeff the Killer because he was driven to insanity by his disfigurement (which has some...problematic undertones) and the bullying he faced.
@@colt9836 ''pRoBLemAtiC uNDErTonES". No, Jeff is just shitty version of the Joker. Its literally the same backstory, beat by beat, just with a teen boy instead of an adult man in his 30s. How did the internet collectively like that creepypasta so much, when its just a cheap rip-off, is beyond me.
Then again, the internet has a shitty taste, so no wonder.
Jeff the Killer’s hoodie and black dress pants have got nothing on Josh Hutcherson’s 50 dollar gray shirt and jeans
Understand
Ricky Darragh Ricky you are absolutely CORRECT
50 dollarS grey shirt!
😂😂😂
@@aeddiefarmer the exact comment I came here to make
Honestly, I'm kind of surprised, based on how much Mallory is into knives and unwarrantedly stabbing people, that she isn't Jeff's type.
I think she chose the wrong aesthetic is all
Good point
it’s bc she looks like a prep
If only they meet a little later, after he went off the deep end, it could have been true love.
I think she wore too much pink for his taste
The thing I love about this story is that when it comes to conflicts the protagonists and their rivals are all unrestrained id, stabbing, shooting, and murdering as they please, but when they're feeling romantic they timidly kiss each other and say "I like you." They're hardcore serial murderers but they're also anxious about their budding relationship.
Huh. Kinda like shonen anime characters.
Imperial Larch 😂
Imperial Larch meanwhile in Resident Evil 7, the guy who had a chainsaw fight with the most dangerous Baker family member was trusted with the experimental bullets to shoot at Evie
CaptHawkeye You cross the line when you bathe in the blood of virgin babies.
Imperial Larch finally, realistic content
For some reason, my favorite detail in this story is the fact that Naomi decides to impress Jeff by playing Kingdom Hearts songs, which, in case you aren't familiar, were all composed by Yoko Shimomura, a genuine piano virtuoso, and are thus often incredibly complex and difficult to perform. "Vector to the Heavens" in particular features all sorts of wild finger gymnastics and tempo changes.
And Jeff responds by playing a song that's about as complex as "Chopsticks."
I never played any of the KH games, so I had to look it up after reading this comment and you are right, this is hilarious.
Naomi; plays Rush E without breaking a sweat
Jeff; plays hot cross buns
I love the flow of this fanfic. “The classroom was empty when he approached me. I grabbed a nearby crowbar and bashed his skull in. After that we all went home and ordered Chinese food. I got a chewy piece of chicken.”
Most writers struggle with pacing, but some people are just prodigies.
You know a book is good when it reads like a statement one gives the police.
Slenderman is actually a wacky waving arm inflatable tube man.
Slenderman is one of the most horrifying thing on planet earth a car sale man
*tube dude
I fucking love this. Someone please animate this
@@jaebby9695 done!
darth brunn LET ME SEEE
Ah yes. The three male body types:
Fat kid, skinny kid, and regular sized kid with a hat.
Halle Albino i imagined the hat to be a tophat.
I imagined a cowboy hat.
The stick, the apple, and the m'lady
Tag yourself I'm regular sized with a hat
Nicolas Young I’m the hat
"It's the way I dress."
"No. Not really."
What a power move. Establish dominance upon first interaction.
Aw, yes. The famous emo singer Katy Perry.
It's called dark that means it's emo.
She should've put in mc ride because he's a cutie ❤
and my little pony
Famous Goff singer Katy Perry
Tara Jones dont forget kingdom hearts
I love the fact that Mallory just had a knife with her. We stan a queen who is always ready to fight
A murderous queen with _style_
We can’t forget the sparkles and the PINK
Never know when you might have to defend yourself from Goblins.... In the early 2000s.... At summer camp....
Mallorie is objectively the best character in the book.
stan twitter jumped out to RUclips
Mallory really is the only important character. To the plot; everything.
"They have done no structured camp acticities yet"
What else would you call Switchblade Saturday?
@Corvus Morve I like that Tuesdays just get to be chill, unlike the others
@@sargecad3t Tuesday is the day when camp disposes the bodies of unfortunate one's.
@@crescento7002 aww man, so we've got a Hannibal/Sweeney Todd situation?
I will only accept Wednesday as "Hump Day."
I will never forgive the soulless psudo intellectuals that harassed the author. I wanted to enjoy some embarrassing fan fic and the sequel, I didn't want some girl to think she's done something wrong.
Thats one of the worst things about the internet.
A lot of people are weirdly offended by cringey things and outright militant bullies all because they saw some stupid thing that doesnt hurt anyone.
Some people cant just live and let live.
"Ah yes, and to demonstrate my raw unmatched intellect I will proof read a teenager's novel pfnah pfnah"
Like if they want to look smart maybe they can just write their own novel instead of bullying a child?
@@lucalinadreemur9448 ah but you see, it's faster and a lot easier to bully obviously bad writing than to write well
@@lucalinadreemur9448 yeah literally, like wow you're smarter than a 13 year old congratulations that's an achievement /s
I heard the sequel was better too!
(She was 15, guys. Stop being so high and mighty jerks.)
Can't stop imagining Slenderman wiggling his arms and singing Be Our Guest to any murderer who walks up.
I would animate that but I can't animate
And I can't spell
Thanks for making me wheeze at 6am lmaoooooo
I can't stop imagining Slendy as a wacky inflatable arm-flailing tubeman
I cant believe it's not butter.
I can't stop imaging him as the wacky inflatable tube man, and now I can't stop laughing.
12 year old me woulda really identified with emo starter naomi but now me is really jealous of that sparkly pink knife
Marleigh Flowers big mood
If you're gonna murder, murder in style.
I mean... if you want a knife, get a pink sparkly knife. Murder the best man, but only with a pink sparkly knife.
I’m really jealous of her skirt with pockets
If you can get a blade with no handle but an intact tang, it should be fairly easy to make a mold of a handle you like and use that to throw a cast of the handle in resin with pink glitter mixed in. Use some E600 to secure the tang and you're groovy.
Maybe 'easy' was the wrong word ... I had bomb art classes in high school, but if you lack certain skill sets (say, if you didn't take bomb art classes), this wouldn't be super easy. Achievable, though.
IF ANYONE WANTS TO KNOW ABOUT THE SECOND BOOK:
Ohhhh boy oh my gosh so I checked it out on amazon and Naomi moved into the Slender mansion obviously and gets a tuxedo kitten and can play the guitar (she gets into a guitar battle) and joins a band and is AN ALL POWERFUL dark angel with powers ok I’ll leave u with that I am going insane
Oh almost forgot, in this book she slices lemons for juice and does NOT cut herself so people this is character development at its finest
She didn't cut herself? Definetly character development.
NOW I WANT SOMEONE TO READ THAT
@@yamaslushy9461 Someone did
@@SuperStar-ss1pn Where :0
@@yamaslushy9461 gimmie a sec
"Oh snap!" is such a funny response for an adult to have to an armed gang showing up at a children's birthday party
"Naomi murdered my daughter, that crazed psychopath!"
"No, I didn't! I've got cuts on my arms from the other girl's pink knife"
-"Did she really have a pink knife?"
"... Yeah?"
-"Guess Naomi didn't do it after all, well, so much for that lead, sorry for the trouble, we'll be going now!"
dracocrusher lmao 😂 yeah its like only one person can be in the wrong at any given time
I liked how they focused more on the "her sparkly pink knife" and less on the "she stabbed me with". Good priorities, reporters!
And surely the fact that Mallory had attacked naomi with a knife would give naomi some sort of motive to kill Mallory out of fear or anger or something.
But no one follows that up. Hahaha
X doubt
@@lizzieAC2109 exactly what I was thinking lol
I've gotta be honest, I think calling him "Jeff the Killer" was a bad move by the parents.
I don't know... Killer Mike turned out okay.
A fifty percent rate of being a murderer if you have killer in your name still isn't great.
true but what they don't tell you is the 73% rate of being a murderer if killer is NOT in your name
Oh. Well I guess it was a pretty good move then. Makes their deaths even more tragic, in a way.
"So, Mrs The Killer, what would you like to name your son?"
“I would hug you, but that would bring more pain to my wounds”
*”Wake me up inside” plays*
why is this comment section comedy p l a t n u m
The song is called Bring Me to Life.
I mean she does have a tendency to listen to a lot of Evanescence
CROOOLININ MAISKIIIIIIN
@Maeve Mullen wake me up when september ends.
i know this probably isn't what happened but i love to imagine that when the bullies "jumped over the fence with skateboards" they full on ollied that shit in sync and made a dramatic entrance
They did, I was the fence
i wish they did
Honestly, Mallory is a fashion ICON. Not only was everything she wore pink, but even her very real, usable knife was also custom-made to be sparkly and pink.
I want a sparkling pink knife
Trisha Paytas vibes minus the icon
YEAH like her outfit was coordinated and her skirt had a pocket big enough for a knife?? mallory kinda cute ngl
@@cyc_lorama I kinda want to cosplay as her because she’s got a look
i fully support mallory in everything she does
I love how you can tell how old someone writing fanfics is because they include the exact name of the song and artist the characters are listening to
YEAH. And the weirdly unnecessary specifics of what the heck they're eating.
@@envyq00 George R. R. Martin
This is Mallory, she was a girl whom liked pink lived next door but now is dead, and THIS is Numb, the 3:07 song by Lincoln Park released on their second album, Meteora, in March of 2003.
I think that it's because they secretly want to be writing screenplays and they don't know how to express the specific mood they want for a scene.
I don't know if you're aware, but at the end of Stephanie Meyer's The Host, she includes a playlist of songs she listened to or was inspired by, for specific chapters and scenes in the book. It's a helpful list so the readers can know the exact mood for those scenes and she doesn't have to write in a way that evokes said moods.
Some of y'all never googled creepypastas on your fourth gen iPod when you were supposed to be asleep in fifth grade and it shows
boneless books mood except it was my 2ds
Mood except it was a kindle that was constantly on the verge of dying
boneless books oh my god me
Juan Schwartz ok boomer
ME BUT ON GOOGLE AND X READER AHAHADY- this is so late but im callin myself out 💀💀💀
I imagine the birthday party to be like a high-brow cocktail party with a bunch of eight-year olds in tuxedoes standing around mingling while servers walk around with plates of Hors d’œuvres
And those hors d’œurves are cheezits and gushers
There's also vodka
@@marwankhalifa5327 being in kindergarten can be tough, man. You gotta learn spelling AMD math!
Trapped in a Island with Jeff the killer
Make it 'Trolled in an Island' and I'm onboard.
With Josh Hutcherson playing the part of Jeff but it will not be the same until the author insertion persona character is replaced by a literal author avatar.
Yeah, if that happened, he would've died from the infections he had from burning his eyelids and cutting his mouth.
Graknorke trolled in a island
Eric MacMillan Lmao with Josh Hutcherson still trapped in the island
Summary of Insanity
Jeff: I have to tell you something serious.
Naomi: Is it lemon and lime juice serious?
*someone dies*
Naomi: Called it
Not gonna lie, fanfics got good one-liners
*People are being sliced open, attacked with vodka bottles, threatened with guns, and lit on fire*
"Happy birthday, Billy!"
As you do at a birthday party
it's typically not a party until all that stuff happens.
Pretty rad birthday
arlo stein ITS BEEN A YEAR ARLO
omachao whatsoever gude my dood
Can we give Troy some kudos for surviving the book? Naomi may trash-talk his weight but he tangled with them on multiple occasions and made it out alive
Technically he only got out alive by virtue of Keith somehow taking his place to get a knife thrown into his head. I can only assume after the ice cream truck incident that Troy was so embarrassed he tagged Keith out of jail and swapped places with him
Reading this comment pretty early into the watch time is a very, very funny thing I just experienced.
man, no wonder why Jeff killed his family. His brother gets send to juvy and his mother is just like "wow that sucks, remember Billy's party tomorrow :D"
Yeah, but he also stabbed Lou for some reason, even though he arguably was the only person he cared about. (Other than Naomi, but i'm pretty sure he stabs Lou in the original creepypasta too).
@@thanatoast psychotic break
@@LilLexiVideos yep
Youngest child is charged with first-degree murder; oldest is sobbing about how he did it, running to his bedroom to vent.
"Damn that's crazy. Anyways, Naomi, make sure he's happy for Billy's birthday tomorrow 😁."
He didn't want Lou stuck in the foster system.
Considering the "lemons and limes for juice" incident, I just don't understand why Naomi didn't follow her instincts more.
🅱️IG 🅱️OEL
Who would win in a fight, Big Boel or Jig Joel?
Big Joel? More like... big.... swole?
Point of the matter is keep making those awesome videos sexy. And pls switch your shampoo it vibes wrong with my fung chi
The worst part is when she cut her eyes and the heart on her cheek? Same knife. Still stings.
I remember reading a fic where in every paragraph the author would include everything the character ate and someone commented “ok ratatouille” and I lost it
what was it called
It's been 11 months and this comment still sends me now
pls we need to know the fic
I’m desperate for a fic name please
PLS FIC NAME.
I love how Mallory's mom thinks that her daughter's entire cabin was murdered by Naomi over petty kid drama, rather than the much likelier explanation that the killer was an adult on a spree.
She's right, of course, but it's weird that she was right.
Wow this fanfiction about Onision is pretty intense
RubberTV omg lol
I fucking spat oh my g o d
RubberTV FUCK
RubberTV S H I T
Lolol
"I want to kill everyone that made my life miserable"
Goes after a 10 year old.
I am glad logic is this prominent in the Jeff fandom.
"This is because mom made me share the Playstation with you!"
Also his brother that was willing to go to jail for him and his parents that were presented as nothing but loving and caring people.
Not to mention the superpower Jeff possesses to conveniently make all the adults vanish into thin air as soon as danger emerges.
but you don't understand
she's CRAAAAAZY now, they're craaaaazy
it's crazier to kill the people who were absolutely kind and wonderful to you
psh amateur
Jessica Hoad as someone who has been around since creepypastas became a thing, i think i agree. it's kind of like writing about a dude that becomes your own personal revenge fantasy. it's not hard to see where the appeal is.
"I just wear this hoodie ok"
"No, not really"
"Oh ok. i guess i should just not wear hoodies ever again."
And so, the terrifying tale of Jeff the nudist began...
My favorite thing about this, is that the author gave an explanation about how this fanfiction became a physical copy. She made an amazon video about it. This is what she basically said:
"I wrote this when I was 15, so I understand if you guys hate it. I had no idea what I was doing at the time, I was just writing this for a contest. I won. If you want, I can try rewriting it. The second book has gotten some good reviews. Just disregard the first one, it's really bad, even I hate it."
I'm happy she outgrew it and honestly it must've been really cool as a teen to win an Amazon contest. But I'd be really worried if my daughter wrote this ngl immediate therapy
Winning a contest is impressive
No hate to her ofc but it think it’s funny she wasn’t even a tween when she wrote it
I have to know! I desperately need to know if this contest had a prompt? Or if when given the option to free write any story for publication, this author chose to write about becoming a parent and child murderer and it won
Honestly the fact she was 15 and managed to publish her own fanfic that also won an award is pretty impressive in its own right
Say what you will, but the fact Naomi’s cabin mates brought her pudding and a brownie is pretty darn cute.
Probably the only thing of note in this whole fanfic lol
Kermit The Tegan I just like how the food has so much detail,,,,,,, it’s sweet that’s IT
@@NinjaSox7 idk if it really compares to the time they got pizza but its very close in terms of intensity
This fanfiction had to have been written by someone who was chubby. Not judging but she really loves talking about what foods she and Jeff the Killer are fans of.
@@Nightman221k no that actually is a really bizarre assumption to make.
"I'm Slender Man, i'm here to talk to you about the Avengers Initiative"
"Mr. Killer, I don't feel so good..."
Big shot pasta putting together a spoop
ZIP ZOP ZOBBITY BOP
I would watch this movie
”You think you’re the only serial killer in the world? Mister Jeff you’ve become part of a bigger universe.”
Most fights in fanfics: they fought with their fists
Fights in this fanfic: the children wheeled out their 3 story tall dark ages model trebuchet to prepare for combat
It is cooler and way more unique you gotta admit
girl this is sending meeee
I almost think "wow tween girls have the weirdest crushes" then I remember I was literally crushing on the frosted flakes mascot at that age and I shut up.
I'd judge you but I currently simp for Jason todd- so
I had a crush on multiple Lego people 😭
If it makes you feel better I had a crush on the anime boy personification of the country of Russia
@@Kevin_Theadore1 is simping for jason todd a bad thing 😳
That's pretty adorable ngl.
I don’t understand Jenny’s power she makes me compulsively watch 50+ minute videos about tween fan fiction and I can’t stop it’s amazing
She's magic
I was eating some cold bowtie spaghetti and chicken with Greek yogurt dressing. I didn't notice this was 50 mins until it ended
oh my gosh - voice of my heart
I was pausing the video to laugh, and I realized that I had paused it multiple times before 4 minutes had even passed, she is a comedic genius and I don't know why
It's pretty great.
*_"My name is Eyeless Jack and I'm here to talk with you about the 'Killer Initiative'."_*
Duarte Vader I love this comment more than I should.
coming to you never
He's like Nick Fury but with double the eye patches.
@@TheAirBear2000 like Nick Fury but with one less eye
Duarte Vader is it bad that i would actually read this avengers parody
I love Jenny’s head cannon that slenderman moves like a wacky inflatable arm flailing tube man
I would love to see a scary movie or something about slenderman except he walks like that, and its not addressed at all
what do you mean? is that not how it's always been? 😭
And talks in a “Whoooooooooo!” accent
Tbh that's always been my head cannon. Never considered otherwise lol
Dee bird from It’s Always Sunny would make a great slenderman
This story makes a lot more sense if you pretend that it takes place during The Purge
But then where's One Direction?
@@timothymclean💀💀
@@jonarbuckle What about the other two?
True for most stories, really.
I need a podcast of you reading terrible fanfiction. Please.
I second This. Only issue is that she would not be able to keep a straight face.
Omg yes 😂
YES.
Try My Dad Wrote a Porno. It’s not Jenny, but it is a few guys reading one of their dad’s terrible erotica. It’s amazing.
There's also a podcast called Book Snub and it's just 3 girls making fun of bad books together. It's not Jenny but it's pretty good.
I am literally begging you to make a video about the sequel
Wait, there's a sequel?!
Can't wait for the 2000s remake :')
HW TheFoehammer the thing is she said on her patreon that the sequel was the funnier book and she only made the video about the first one to lead into the second one. and then she was working on it for a bit and i guess it never got finished :( still hoping for it maybe after she finishes the star wars land series
I loved that sequel reveal.
Less Harry Potter bullshit more books written by imaginative psychopaths aka the most prolific writers alive teen girls
"An idyllic upper-middle-class neighbourhood where everybody's got a knife and a gun"
.....is this set in Riverdale?
Sounds like florida.
That’s the southern US for you
Wisteria Lane, surely?
I'm just picturing Jeff doing the "I'm a weirdo" monolouge and it is hilarious
That would be an amazing crossover
I like how every character in this story can just stand in place where we last seen them, and patiently wait till the plot needs them again.
They're like Morrowind characters
Oblivion moment
Like a school play
Reminds me of this Simpsons gag where Homer leaves a bar and one of them is like “alright time to enter our state of suspended animation until he returns”
Vodka? Bringing knives to a gun fight? Knee high black boots? That sounds like MY birthday party when I was eight.
thetramp123 you and I have led very different lives
quit bragging
Oh shit 😂
lemme guess - russian?
I lost it at "The bullets missed her heart and brain by a millimeter."
Like it's a single, merged organ.
I know, WTF is a millimeter, use American units not that metric crap
culwin 1millimeter=0.0394in
culwin my dude America is one of three countries that doesn’t use the metric system, that’s not something to get riled up about
culwin that's not what was funny about it...
so....why do all kids disproportionately love the name “naomi” at one point in their lives?
It fits for everything.
@@NA-kz5po True, I loved it cause my great aunt's name was Naomi, sweet woman :)
@@cugu7562 Aw 💓
It suits the weaboo phase
I'm feeling called out since I just wrote a dark wattpad story with a character named Naomi -
"The (one) bullet missed her heart and brain by a millimeter" this is my favourite line from any fanfiction ever now :D
Also love how she’s ‘sitting up in bed bored’ after this like. There’s a lot of super important stuff in your body that’s near your heart and or brain. Even if it misses your heart the bullet still just go through a whole bunch of muscle and sensitive tissue that bullet is gonna put you down for weeks if not months.
@@kj6731 she's a jojo protagonist lmao
@@kj6731it missed her heart AND brain by a millimetre, clearly the arrangement of organs in her body is atypical enough that we can’t make any assumptions
List of story elements from most to least believable:
- Jeffs family moved into a new house the day before the start of camp which is the day before the start of the new school year
- An emo girl who doesn't even bother to front like she hates Katy Perry pop music
- An emo dude who's internal voice is supportive and offers him compliments about how hot he is
- The existence of skirts with pockets, let alone pockets big enough to hold anything useful - like your pink, sparkly, emo stabbin' knife.
hey hey hey hey i am the proud owner of an AMAZING knee-length skirt with TWO HUGE pockets that could hold a knife each so yes they exist but they also give you strong 13 colonies vibes which i don't mind but doesn't seem to be very much in fashion rn
I feel like camp ending early makes the next day being school a lot less plausible. Probably still more plausible than a self-accepting emo dude.
as someone with an emo boyfriend(ish), i can confirm that he doesn't see himself the way he really is, haha.
If I see a woman is wearing clothes with pockets, I don’t feel safe.
@@psixi2668 😍 I'm currently wearing my full length walking skirt with two pockets big enough to fit a chiuahaha in each as well!
Jeff the Killer's scariness is negated by the fact that he's named "Jeff."
'Maname Jeff' on page one.
Calum Syers Jeffrey the killer
Jeffrey Jefferton the Jiffer!
Larry the Murderer
Angus the Kill.....kilt maker. He's Scottish
Jack the Ripper is disappointed in his son’s scene phase
I laughed to much at this.
wdym son? jack had no son, his wife just gave birth to a baby that was later thrown in a dumpster and (hopefully) died
@@jockeyfield1954 sounds ike a emo origin story if I've ever heard one
@@jockeyfield1954 I'm so confused as to when we found out the identity of international mystery killer jack the ripper
@@pegsies. At least a dozen times, usually with different results. For a certain value of "found out" that doesn't rely on hard evidence, I mean.
But yeah, imagining the reaction a more experienced serial killer would have to Jeff's amateurish antics is hilarious.
This is nuts, I love it. “My daughter had no enemies except that one girl next door!” And the freaking news reporters just make a beeline to this kid’s house and immediately turn on the victim as soon as they find out she had a pink sparkly knife.
I love how during the entire time she's reading this the giant porg behind her looks like It's gonna have a breakdown
I feel like that porg
@@Calpsotoma personally, I don't feel like the porg, but definitely want to hug it
mood
This kid probably laughed at a fail compilation and then thought she was some kind of sadist
all the cool kids have personalized knives
Yeah, growing up I was never one of those kids. I got Mega-Bloks instead of Legos, I had to keep my outdated iPhone while everyone got new ones, I had a boring old kitchen knife when Alice Lyn got a sparkling pink one.
Pffft get with the times, nowdays everybody has a 1000 degree karambit they stole from the corpses of forgotten csgo compilation channels
I think it's pretty impressive that something clearly written by a kid was published. I know self publishing is a thing but writing a book to the end, feeling confident enough to publish that, and then doing so in a way that people will pay money to read it is quite an achievement.
Yeah regardless of what I think of the quality, I haven't published anything lol
We’re assuming this is a child and not a stunted adult woman with too much time on her hands.
@@Nightman221k what adult woman would write this 😂
@@lore6848 you’d be surprised
@@Nightman221knah i feel pretty confident saying this is a teen or younger. bad fanfic written by stunted adults usually has a different flavor, its not impossible but this seems like genuine tween literature here. an adult probably helped her publish ofc.
Mallory walked around threatening people with a pink, sparkly knife while wearing an entirely pink getup. What a damn queen. RIP
I pray that I can reach that level of aesthetic
Elle woods’ more stabby counterpart
Y2K Kween.
“Beauty Queen”, if you will
Police: Let's see, we have the names of the camper here. There's Naomi, Mayo, Jeff the Killer... Who could it have been?!
LOLLLLL
Probaly Mayo
Mayo, you lil' brat-
This comment is way underrated. 👍🤣😂🤣😂
It couldn't be Naomi, obviously. She was seriously wounded by Mallory. After Naomi showing her wounds made by Mallory and yes, she also blantantlly and in a nicer way calling her a psycho bitch on TV, that's when every suspicion dissappeared. Jeff, nah he's too emo to kill anybody. So it must've been that bloody bastard, Mayo.
HE gets a gun, SHE gets a gun, EEEEVERYONE gets a gun ...
except little timmy, he gets a folding knife
Poor little Timmy
This *has* to take place in the rural south
@@cottage-core_ 1/3 households in the US have at least one gun in them.
@@owlblocksdavid4955 And people here can have 10 guns a person. Sometimes more. Depends on the enthusiasm.
i have to imagine that the author intended that naomi _completed_ the kingdom hearts song before asking her to move on, but it is pretty incredible to imagine Jeff being like “play something else” after about maybe 5 seconds of the first one
the only music he listens to is royalty free creepypasta narration backing
"Deep black eyes, black hair, white skin." Creepy pasta killer or 200lb supine Porg?
*supine porg* should not be this funny to me
@@chichinn The Porg King!
@@lizabethhampton4537 Korg
Have your little laugh. The Porg Mafia will find you.
Why not both?
I like how Jeff just straight up murdered like 8 people and then suddenly everyone forgot about it.
JakeTakesTheCakes Your profile picture makes your comment even more perfect.
puffnisse It's how I felt when I watched this video.
Understandable.
When Jenny Nicholson engages with fanfiction you show up for it
I have a tendency to fall asleep listening to Jenny's stuff. NORMALLY it's totally fine, but words cannot describe the dream I just woke up from
Okay but please try to put it into words. I need to know now-
@@BlindStarLilyI need to know too 😭😭😭😭 it was two years ago I hope they still vaguely remember it
THIS IS LITERALLY THE PLOT OF THE ORIGINAL JEFF THE KILLER BUT WITH A LOVE INTEREST FBSGHJSBFJDSNKJFS
Like that´s the only thing wrong with this story?
@Rebekah Sicari RIGHT!?!? JUST SAAAAAME IM KIND OF DYING
Soo a self insert....
The one you're describing isn't even the original one, it's a fan remake of a fan remake of the original one story from 2008
I thought the original story was he slipped and burned his face with bleach. And then they mcfuckin changed it to be him disfiguring himself dhdbdb
"is it true?? does your daughter have a pink sparkly knife???"
sml I died
Krista Kannen if I had a daughter. They would have a link sparkly knife
Krista Kannen yeah, in her pants
In the pocket of her skirt that skirts absolutely do not have in real life
what does sml mean? suck my leg?
asking for a friend
@@Swaggerpede Maybe shaking my lizard?
Poor lizards
Slenderman: I've gathered you all here to fight a common threat. Welcome to the Avengers.
Matthew Sidewater omg Brooooo😂
Staring Jeff as Ironman
😂😂😂
i think i’d be on Thanos's side in this situation
Damn it all, I would read that.
@@weiyin8046 *furious finger snapping*
Honestly that’s what these kids think they’re doing, they think the cp characters are heroes or something and that they’re all part of their own edgy avengers team.
I'm really ashamed to admit that as you read the first page I was struck with the very vivid memory of reading this when I was like 13. Like I'm ten minutes into the video and realizing that this fanfic was so formative to my psyche that I remember the ending.
“Oh Jeff your skin feels like leather” wow Naomi I bet he REALLY appreciates that comment
“My favorite fan fiction is the kind you can buy in a book form.”
*Fifty Shades of Gray*
WAsn't the original title something like 'the rainbow prince' or some shit???
@@JadeAnnabelArt
Original title of the fanfic 50 Shades was adapted from? Pretty sure it was Master of the Universe or Masters of the Universe.
TechnoSquidgy
It's amazing how we went from He-Man to BDSM.
thought it was really cute when naomi and jeff had the urge to mutilate their faces at the same time separately. one time my boyfriend and i did the same thing except instead of facial knifing, we were watching john mulaney interviews on youtube. pretty romantic stuff
That's not a coincidence, he's justs so funny that he's on everyone's mind 24/7!
That actually is romantic tho. I'm just a big fan of John.
The first thing marriage counselors say is “find a shared activity.” They probably should have mutilated themselves together to get the full therapeutic impact but it was a good try.
I honestly can't tell if you are joking
i am joking about it being cute to cut up one's faces simultaneously, but that john mulaney thing did happen to me and my boyfriend
Andy Jett you and your boyfriend are goals lmao
Honestly this is cute. Like it's bad, but this author clearly loved what she was doing. Also she was almost certainly a tween trying her best. I hope she kept writing because if she had enough will power to write a whole book at 12 or 13, I'd bet she's incredibly talented now. Maybe not relying on so many stereotypes lol
Edit: commenters, I don't mean this in a negative way but I don't think some of you have spent a lot of time on AO3. First, this fic is *completely* normal for this fandom, some may even call it tame. Second, the reason creepypasta fascinates a younger audience is the same reason shows like Hannibal, or characters like the Joker captivate an adult audience. People who find those characters attractive are not romanticizing murder. Typically, what they are actually interested in is the idea of being completely in control or completely letting go. Same deal here, and those are especially captivating ideas for a young girl navigating the world around her.
Its the fact that she finished it is what I have respect for. I used to write fanfics just like this and I never finished a single one. I've always wanted to write a book, I get ideas all the time, but I always lose motivation and energy before I could finish so I've resorted to give up on even attempting to write any of my ideas down because I feel it just be a waste of time. I hope, if she has a passion for writing, has been able to learn and grow from this fic to an actual author, Im sure if she kept up the practice she could be amazing at her craft.
Also they were clearly skilled enough to weave the story into the original creepypasta without it being absolutely terrible
honestly its no worse than a lot of the iconic original creepypasta stories
Eh, I don't know if I can ever find an attraction to killing people "cute."
Not so sure about "cute". Fantasizing about a serial killer isn't exactly a cute little kid thing.
"heheheh I talked to malory for you" ;) "I used this knife when I *talked* to her IF you KNOW what I mean" ;) ;) "you could say... it was KNIFE to meet her. Get it!?!" "you might say I MURDERED MALORY with a KNIFE. IF you understand what I mean." ;) ;) "Malory is dead and I stabbed her."
Love the concept of an actually scary killer, but he just doesn't have any subtlety
"What have you done...? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!"
"I killed your family with a knife. It was actually pretty difficult, so if you could lower your voice, that'd be great. I'm a bit anxious."
"Knife-to-meat her," you mean.
";)"
Would pay for Jenny Nicholson audio books with commentary tbh.
Id pay to hear her say:"Im a guy. And guys need porn; fact!".
This needs to happen.
Please yes omg lmao
I know this is a 4 year old video and the era of Jeff the Killer is over but this is one of my comfort videos.
I love listening to Jenny reading it and honestly I respect the story.
I'm writing fanfic right now and it does not hold this level of love and edge. I'm so mad that a bunch of asshats went and harassed the author because she had so much drive. I will always hold her in high regard, she finished writing a story and it got published. That's more than I could ever do.
I hope she is still out there writing to her heart's content.
You go, babes.
Honestly, same here on all accounts. We can all pretend that we’re somehow better than her, but she got a book published at age fifteen, which is way more than I ever did at that age.
Also, good on you for being able to say that you write fanfic without shame. If you’re comfortable with sharing, where do you write? I’d love to read your work since I’m also in the process of writing a pretty lengthy fic and need some motivation.
i believe she is still writing! after hearing about the harassment she received, i searched for her online and found her instagram. she seems to be doing fine and had a few posts about writing something new. i think it's just this series in particular she swore off (but she also could've just outgrown it, too).
I bought her second book, and while it's still trite and pretentiously obnoxious, it's much better written than this book and I enjoyed reading it. She definitely improved, and if she wrote anything after this I would read it, though it seems like that is not the case or she's writing under a pseudonym.
Videos like these take me back to when times were a little simpler and everyone didn't thrive in the chaos of social media. The creepypasta era was a lot of fun, I miss it a lot.
I completley agree with you. Often, I can't force myself to write more than a few sentances, let alone a chapter. I honestly aspire to have the same amount motivation and confidence as this girl, and I unironically look up to her. Cudos to her for turning her fondness for a fictional guy into something that can both insire people, and get her money