This was really well-filmed! I liked how the music ratched up the tension. Wow, that was one stupid guy lololol....I would have left that note & key & dashed off! But this was a unique horror-short film, for sure.
Brilliant! The fact that it was so realistic . No Hollywood makeup or lights. This could actually happen. I can 100% say I would never ever even open the tin in the first place. Haha
normally a small box is ignored.no body takes care.even found some instruction inside is ignored and taken as someone's joke.why he became so curious and went there is surprising
It would have been much more realistic if you had shown the man yawning in the beginning or smthing which will show that his curiosity was due to him being bored and not having to do anything this way it wouldn't have looked that strange to follow a note you found in random place Btw sound effects and camera work is great
Was a film student way back in college. Looked like Maine or New Hampshire, interesting approach. I didn't know how it was going to end but I didn't expect a religious overtone, well shot and curiosity plays its part!
I forgot to mention that it also leaves some viewers thinking initially (at least I did) that if he’s that curious or that his greed as overriden his common sense, that he deserved it. Only for a second I thought this though. As shortly after, I was left with a sickening thought: who is the monster here? I love these types of films.
FIrst off, I would've just ignore the box under the bridge thinking it was just trash and move on. Even if I did retrieve it and open it and found a note with key, I still would've just thought it was a gag and discard the whole thing or..............take it to the police station.
Love the shots and the creepy soundtrack, it goes with the Christmas winter look. Just a dumb character though that follows unrelated actions, could’ve gone another direction after he delivered the note and key, but overall pretty great film.
Great piece of cinema. The pace kept me going. As for the foolhardy finder of the key and note, dumb is what dumb does. No way I go further than opening the box. Not sorry.
Well done. Ok, but who in their right mind would actually go along with this? Not just into a stranger's house, but down into a dark basement?
One always goes down into the basement in a creepy movie. Mandatory.
SUCKERS are very willing!
@@williebeamish5879 of course. Lol
Maby not you or me , but lots of people would 😳 that was a good short flick & a great name for it too 😭👍
Curiosity
Great way to show how "Curiosity killed the cat!"
the only free cheese is in the mousetrap
Yikes! They just waited for any random person to find the tin, come in and get killed. Tense and scary! Great job!
Don’t go in you fool! Damnit...
A real Head Scratcher.🧐
This was really well-filmed! I liked how the music ratched up the tension. Wow, that was one stupid guy lololol....I would have left that note & key & dashed off! But this was a unique horror-short film, for sure.
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Brilliant! The fact that it was so realistic . No Hollywood makeup or lights. This could actually happen. I can 100% say I would never ever even open the tin in the first place. Haha
Only an idiot would actually go to the address from the get go let alone use the key if they were stupid enough to attempt the trip 😕
4:15 WTH is with this guy?!! lol Joke or no joke, evil or no evil....he is still trespassing! Leave the key & the note & get your ass outta there! LOL
Good flick! But I have rules, never go down into a basement when the light switch doesn't work LOL!
good rule to follow
I'm not that curious,survival instinct alerted!
Holy shit thats amazing! I love the sound, your amazing shots and angles. Love to see it
wooo thanks,
@@producer-san such a lovely location…can I ask where? (I think the location is as much of a character as anyone in the film, beautiful)..
Bruhhhhhh!!! If there's no $$$ in the box..throw it back!!
LOL...right!!
normally a small box is ignored.no body takes care.even found some instruction inside is ignored and taken as someone's joke.why he became so curious and went there is surprising
Really enjoyed this video. Short horror stories/videos can be quite a challenge compared to long drawn out ones. Best of luck on your next one.
Absolutely drew me in. The ending is breathtaking! More, please.
What a stupid man! It's funny.
The plot is simple, but the atmosphere is cool)
Don't let curiosity get the best of you I guess lol. Thanks for the comment
Well done. No question, a cautionary tale about dark basements. I liked it.
I liked sound affects , music and content! Well done!
thank you!!
Me to
Great job! Keep them coming!
I really loved it! maybe a teen would be a better fit for falling into curiosity... Nonetheless, you guys did a great job. Keep going!
Very cool short story! The fiancee and I were definitely spooked!
When he turns the key in the lock, the music certainly adds to the suspense. Nicely done.
That was brilliant! I loved the shots and music. More, please!
Love the music to add to the suspense. I had to watch until the end. Good suspense
Yes this was good but he was crazy for going in the house
Nobody in there right mind would fall for this lol
you're probably right lol
The desperate people might.
Excellent...like Oliver I want more..
Loved the music, from one of the classic horror movie, The ending was terrific, the perfect gift, eternal life with God.
Great job.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
It would have been much more realistic if you had shown the man yawning in the beginning or smthing which will show that his curiosity was due to him being bored and not having to do anything this way it wouldn't have looked that strange to follow a note you found in random place
Btw sound effects and camera work is great
big man out here making master pieces
The "voice" sounded like the narrator of the Christmas Story. Well done!
"We all want to go Heaven! But no one wants to die!"
But he had a cell phone. We saw it. It was how he found the plastic container. Why wouldn't he use the phone's flashlight in the basement?
I laughed out loud ad the ending. It felt more like a looney tunes gag than horror. Or a Joan Cornella comic.
It was actually just a badly placed Geocache in the end.
That’s the first thought that came to my mind. Lol. Plus he forgot to leave something. Guess that’s the price you pay. Lol
Loved the mean little slap-in-the-face ending
*What a killer short!* 👹👍🏼
Was this filmed in Dundee, IL on the Fox river??
Excellent job! Can't wait to see more!!
Wow good eye. Yes this was
@@producer-san Tell her she won a prize & send her a key! (I was waaay off, guessing PA)
great story line, loved the video quality, definitely kept it interesting!
You know when you're watching a scary movie and you say to yourself. "Don't go down in the scary basement!" Well this is why.
Minimalist low-budget black humor. My favorite, Drill Sargent ; ) !
Great atmosphere, loved the music, really added to the mystery of the story 😱
Fantastic! Loved it 😎
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it
Was a film student way back in college. Looked like Maine or New Hampshire, interesting approach. I didn't know how it was going to end but I didn't expect a religious overtone, well shot and curiosity plays its part!
I grew up in NH and i agree, it defintely looks like NH or Maine
It kind of reminded me of upstate NY
Read in the comments it's in Dundee Illinois ..beautiful non the less
Great little Shocker, Brilliantly executed,,,,,, No Pun Intended!
This is why a person should travel with a dog...for common sense
I forgot to mention that it also leaves some viewers thinking initially (at least I did) that if he’s that curious or that his greed as overriden his common sense, that he deserved it. Only for a second I thought this though. As shortly after, I was left with a sickening thought: who is the monster here? I love these types of films.
Great job! I enjoyed it
Well done. We enjoyed the character's realistic reluctance to give in to his curiosity.
I guessed what he prize was before it was revealed! A great video. Thank you.
Very good. Thank you.
"If it looks too good to be true, it probably is." Yikes!
Where was this filmed, it looks like a peaceful town.
This was filmed in West Dundee, Illinois. It's a nice small town
Reminded me a little bit of Nutley, NJ
Simple, Straightforward and Brutally superb Ending. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing 🙂👍🏽
hey, great short film. i def wasnt expecting that. good job
How to do you pronounce the title co-itus?
3:00 That would have been something I discarded PDQ!
As a Realtor I always wonder why I go into dark basements alone. Half the time friends and family don’t know where I am…
Perhaps it may be a good idea to start doing just that.
Well, okay. The music was really loud and distracted from the narrative. This probably would have been more effective if it had been totally silent.
Great story. Where was this filmed?
Where was this filmed?
East Dundee, Illinois
@@producer-san Thanks!
Well shot - but who in their right mind would follow such instructions?
Nice job. Love the soundtrack, very fitting. Was this filmed in the Midwest, Wisconsin- Minnesota???
curiosity kills!!! nice short
Thanks
Crazy crazy
Great story creepy
This was very good!!
I like how it’s shot, great job
Thanks! it was fun shooting
That was really good.
hey! thank you
dope film. I like the story line
Thanks!
Really great. Congratulations from Bogotá Colombia
Creepy music sets the scene. Bravo.
Qual o problema desse cara deixa a chave e carta e "pica a mula"
Não devemos entrar em casas q não somos convidados...
Adorei 😍👏
Ah... curiosity killed the cat.
This is the horror version of a 419 scam. Excellent.
Well done!
Theres 8 minutes of my life I won't get back.
Your welcome 😂😂
I really enjoyed it!! The musicalization is great :) the guy wasnt really smart, but it reminds me of some kind of fiction. Great job!!
lol, he was a bit too curious I guess
I like the idea, though, of a scavenger hunt style prize with notes. Maybe not all over someone's house, but around the city or something.
good one :)
FIrst off, I would've just ignore the box under the bridge thinking it was just trash and move on. Even if I did retrieve it and open it and found a note with key, I still would've just thought it was a gag and discard the whole thing or..............take it to the police station.
lmaoooo this is insane. well done man
Curiosity always kills the Charles.
Predictable from start to finish.
LOVE THE PLOT TWIST. DEFINITELY BETTER THAN A SHYAMALAN MOVIE 🔥
You're kidding right?
This was pretty cool😉
Great job 👏🏻
Ol' Charlie shows the symptoms of someone suffering from decreased levels of vitamin Ohellno.
Beautiful snowy scenery and disturbing sound. Certainly, men should be more cautious, but I understand the feeling of worrying about what's going on.
Of course your going to bring a half dozen well armed friends with you...
Shane F Well, there's a lot of people out there that are NOT
" in their right mind "
It's hammer time
Haha, reminds me on MC Hammer "U cant touch this".....
👌👌👌👌👌
Yes, police? I found this note telling me to open a random back door with a key to claim a prize. Want to check it out?
If you sit in the killin' chair you kinda asked for it.
Love the shots and the creepy soundtrack, it goes with the Christmas winter look. Just a dumb character though that follows unrelated actions, could’ve gone another direction after he delivered the note and key, but overall pretty great film.
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Amazing movie
Great piece of cinema. The pace kept me going. As for the foolhardy finder of the key and note, dumb is what dumb does. No way I go further than opening the box. Not sorry.
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