Quietus | Horror Short Film

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  • Опубликовано: 6 сен 2024
  • Written, Directed, & Edited by Paul Khailo
    Shot on Black Magic Pocket Cinema Camera 4k

Комментарии • 219

  • @InstantOnyx
    @InstantOnyx Год назад +101

    Well done. Ok, but who in their right mind would actually go along with this? Not just into a stranger's house, but down into a dark basement?

    • @williebeamish5879
      @williebeamish5879 Год назад +17

      One always goes down into the basement in a creepy movie. Mandatory.

    • @EugeneSSmith
      @EugeneSSmith Год назад

      SUCKERS are very willing!

    • @adjuafrican2664
      @adjuafrican2664 Год назад +3

      @@williebeamish5879 of course. Lol

    • @joannewatts9892
      @joannewatts9892 Год назад +5

      Maby not you or me , but lots of people would 😳 that was a good short flick & a great name for it too 😭👍

    • @firerainchild
      @firerainchild Год назад +1

      Curiosity

  • @cindymorris2567
    @cindymorris2567 Год назад +9

    Great way to show how "Curiosity killed the cat!"

  • @user-bi5sq6ir1t
    @user-bi5sq6ir1t Год назад +6

    the only free cheese is in the mousetrap

  • @batgirlp5561
    @batgirlp5561 Год назад +3

    Yikes! They just waited for any random person to find the tin, come in and get killed. Tense and scary! Great job!

  • @sherryab3964
    @sherryab3964 Год назад +13

    Brilliant! The fact that it was so realistic . No Hollywood makeup or lights. This could actually happen. I can 100% say I would never ever even open the tin in the first place. Haha

    • @iamterriffic7041
      @iamterriffic7041 Год назад +1

      Only an idiot would actually go to the address from the get go let alone use the key if they were stupid enough to attempt the trip 😕

  • @Aqibali-jt7eg
    @Aqibali-jt7eg Год назад +5

    normally a small box is ignored.no body takes care.even found some instruction inside is ignored and taken as someone's joke.why he became so curious and went there is surprising

  • @richardhenry5961
    @richardhenry5961 Год назад +5

    Good flick! But I have rules, never go down into a basement when the light switch doesn't work LOL!

  • @taracollins5597
    @taracollins5597 Год назад +33

    This was really well-filmed! I liked how the music ratched up the tension. Wow, that was one stupid guy lololol....I would have left that note & key & dashed off! But this was a unique horror-short film, for sure.

  • @robyncohen3108
    @robyncohen3108 Год назад +4

    I'm not that curious,survival instinct alerted!

  • @user-lx9zt1zt3u
    @user-lx9zt1zt3u Год назад +6

    What a stupid man! It's funny.
    The plot is simple, but the atmosphere is cool)

    • @producer-san
      @producer-san  Год назад +1

      Don't let curiosity get the best of you I guess lol. Thanks for the comment

  • @taracollins5597
    @taracollins5597 Год назад +4

    4:15 WTH is with this guy?!! lol Joke or no joke, evil or no evil....he is still trespassing! Leave the key & the note & get your ass outta there! LOL

  • @dianecrawford2598
    @dianecrawford2598 Год назад +7

    Absolutely drew me in. The ending is breathtaking! More, please.

  • @cameshaburkes4770
    @cameshaburkes4770 Год назад +4

    Yes this was good but he was crazy for going in the house

  • @wistfulvista1020
    @wistfulvista1020 Год назад +4

    Well done. No question, a cautionary tale about dark basements. I liked it.

  • @Hypothic
    @Hypothic Год назад +5

    It was actually just a badly placed Geocache in the end.

    • @CCCC-lq7te
      @CCCC-lq7te Год назад +1

      That’s the first thought that came to my mind. Lol. Plus he forgot to leave something. Guess that’s the price you pay. Lol

  • @seanz6397
    @seanz6397 Год назад +9

    Really enjoyed this video. Short horror stories/videos can be quite a challenge compared to long drawn out ones. Best of luck on your next one.

  • @missironfist5771
    @missironfist5771 Год назад +5

    That was brilliant! I loved the shots and music. More, please!

  • @tonyhazaj0b
    @tonyhazaj0b Год назад +6

    Very cool short story! The fiancee and I were definitely spooked!

  • @vickimoran1349
    @vickimoran1349 Год назад +5

    Great job! Keep them coming!

  • @vivylenora1606
    @vivylenora1606 Год назад +8

    I really loved it! maybe a teen would be a better fit for falling into curiosity... Nonetheless, you guys did a great job. Keep going!

  • @SporeMonke
    @SporeMonke Год назад +14

    Holy shit thats amazing! I love the sound, your amazing shots and angles. Love to see it

    • @producer-san
      @producer-san  Год назад +1

      wooo thanks,

    • @noahroad6577
      @noahroad6577 Год назад +1

      @@producer-san such a lovely location…can I ask where? (I think the location is as much of a character as anyone in the film, beautiful)..

  • @mz1130
    @mz1130 Год назад +1

    When he turns the key in the lock, the music certainly adds to the suspense. Nicely done.

  • @demijour1234
    @demijour1234 Год назад +5

    Loved the music, from one of the classic horror movie, The ending was terrific, the perfect gift, eternal life with God.
    Great job.

  • @sameepsingh4095
    @sameepsingh4095 Год назад +4

    It would have been much more realistic if you had shown the man yawning in the beginning or smthing which will show that his curiosity was due to him being bored and not having to do anything this way it wouldn't have looked that strange to follow a note you found in random place
    Btw sound effects and camera work is great

  • @elenakhailo6053
    @elenakhailo6053 Год назад +9

    I liked sound affects , music and content! Well done!

  • @sherryab3964
    @sherryab3964 Год назад +1

    I forgot to mention that it also leaves some viewers thinking initially (at least I did) that if he’s that curious or that his greed as overriden his common sense, that he deserved it. Only for a second I thought this though. As shortly after, I was left with a sickening thought: who is the monster here? I love these types of films.

  • @gregorybrice2096
    @gregorybrice2096 Год назад +6

    Nobody in there right mind would fall for this lol

  • @msursa
    @msursa Год назад +1

    Minimalist low-budget black humor. My favorite, Drill Sargent ; ) !

  • @michellechapman8738
    @michellechapman8738 Год назад +1

    Bruhhhhhh!!! If there's no $$$ in the box..throw it back!!

  • @philipmeckley5154
    @philipmeckley5154 Год назад +1

    Well, okay. The music was really loud and distracted from the narrative. This probably would have been more effective if it had been totally silent.

  • @duchesserickson4069
    @duchesserickson4069 Год назад

    You know when you're watching a scary movie and you say to yourself. "Don't go down in the scary basement!" Well this is why.

  • @erinconroy9813
    @erinconroy9813 Год назад +1

    But he had a cell phone. We saw it. It was how he found the plastic container. Why wouldn't he use the phone's flashlight in the basement?

  • @DarthExecutor
    @DarthExecutor Год назад +2

    I laughed out loud ad the ending. It felt more like a looney tunes gag than horror. Or a Joan Cornella comic.

  • @EugeneSSmith
    @EugeneSSmith Год назад +2

    "We all want to go Heaven! But no one wants to die!"

  • @Ingothnia
    @Ingothnia Год назад +2

    The "voice" sounded like the narrator of the Christmas Story. Well done!

  • @RamzesTheImmortal
    @RamzesTheImmortal Год назад +1

    big man out here making master pieces

  • @dippydoo3918
    @dippydoo3918 Год назад +1

    Love the music to add to the suspense. I had to watch until the end. Good suspense

  • @stevenhulbert7540
    @stevenhulbert7540 Год назад +3

    Was a film student way back in college. Looked like Maine or New Hampshire, interesting approach. I didn't know how it was going to end but I didn't expect a religious overtone, well shot and curiosity plays its part!

    • @LisaNC832
      @LisaNC832 Год назад +1

      I grew up in NH and i agree, it defintely looks like NH or Maine

    • @iamterriffic7041
      @iamterriffic7041 Год назад

      It kind of reminded me of upstate NY

    • @iamterriffic7041
      @iamterriffic7041 Год назад

      Read in the comments it's in Dundee Illinois ..beautiful non the less

  • @Bichonben1963
    @Bichonben1963 Год назад +1

    Great atmosphere, loved the music, really added to the mystery of the story 😱

  • @scottharvey5146
    @scottharvey5146 Год назад +1

    As a Realtor I always wonder why I go into dark basements alone. Half the time friends and family don’t know where I am…

    • @PunchBuggyDreams
      @PunchBuggyDreams Год назад

      Perhaps it may be a good idea to start doing just that.

  • @karencahill4798
    @karencahill4798 Год назад

    Don’t go in you fool! Damnit...
    A real Head Scratcher.🧐

  • @RubabJaffery_CuteSagittarius
    @RubabJaffery_CuteSagittarius Год назад +4

    *What a killer short!* 👹👍🏼

  • @Paversongs
    @Paversongs Год назад +3

    "If it looks too good to be true, it probably is." Yikes!

  • @paulcowell7588
    @paulcowell7588 Год назад

    Excellent...like Oliver I want more..

  • @000aleph
    @000aleph 8 месяцев назад

    Loved the mean little slap-in-the-face ending

  • @fanaticat1
    @fanaticat1 Год назад +4

    great story line, loved the video quality, definitely kept it interesting!

  • @myyoutubechannel1502
    @myyoutubechannel1502 Год назад

    Simple, Straightforward and Brutally superb Ending. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing 🙂👍🏽

  • @58christiansful
    @58christiansful Год назад +1

    Well shot - but who in their right mind would follow such instructions?

  • @kategleason6481
    @kategleason6481 Год назад +1

    This is why a person should travel with a dog...for common sense

  • @PunchBuggyDreams
    @PunchBuggyDreams Год назад

    FIrst off, I would've just ignore the box under the bridge thinking it was just trash and move on. Even if I did retrieve it and open it and found a note with key, I still would've just thought it was a gag and discard the whole thing or..............take it to the police station.

  • @marielle136
    @marielle136 Год назад +2

    Qual o problema desse cara deixa a chave e carta e "pica a mula"
    Não devemos entrar em casas q não somos convidados...
    Adorei 😍👏

  • @actorwriterdca
    @actorwriterdca Год назад +1

    Well done. We enjoyed the character's realistic reluctance to give in to his curiosity.

  • @twelveouncetrance4034
    @twelveouncetrance4034 Год назад

    Nice job. Love the soundtrack, very fitting. Was this filmed in the Midwest, Wisconsin- Minnesota???

  • @adorablydysfunctional1613
    @adorablydysfunctional1613 Год назад +3

    Was this filmed in Dundee, IL on the Fox river??
    Excellent job! Can't wait to see more!!

  • @louisemurray9282
    @louisemurray9282 Год назад

    Great little Shocker, Brilliantly executed,,,,,, No Pun Intended!

  • @cassidee1473
    @cassidee1473 Год назад

    This is the horror version of a 419 scam. Excellent.

  • @candycorn3287
    @candycorn3287 Год назад +3

    Fantastic! Loved it 😎

  • @angelaavery4264
    @angelaavery4264 Год назад

    Shane F Well, there's a lot of people out there that are NOT
    " in their right mind "

  • @pommydiva1
    @pommydiva1 Год назад +1

    hey, great short film. i def wasnt expecting that. good job

  • @bonniealvarez5510
    @bonniealvarez5510 Год назад +1

    Ah... curiosity killed the cat.

  • @johannemilsom7503
    @johannemilsom7503 Год назад

    I guessed what he prize was before it was revealed! A great video. Thank you.

  • @taracollins5597
    @taracollins5597 Год назад +1

    3:00 That would have been something I discarded PDQ!

  • @noma4133
    @noma4133 Год назад

    Beautiful snowy scenery and disturbing sound. Certainly, men should be more cautious, but I understand the feeling of worrying about what's going on.

  • @melissawelch-mosley
    @melissawelch-mosley Год назад

    Crazy crazy

  • @thecottageatwoodlandcorners
    @thecottageatwoodlandcorners Год назад

    I like the idea, though, of a scavenger hunt style prize with notes. Maybe not all over someone's house, but around the city or something.

  • @SwampCityRadio1974
    @SwampCityRadio1974 Год назад

    Curiosity always kills the Charles.

  • @marciavaleria856
    @marciavaleria856 Год назад +3

    Coloca legenda ou tradução Em PORTUGUÊS 🙏

  • @julieandrea318
    @julieandrea318 Год назад

    Anybody else notice the FedEx truck disappear?

  • @johnnyx53
    @johnnyx53 Год назад

    Great job! I enjoyed it

  • @dukelee3964
    @dukelee3964 Год назад

    Of course your going to bring a half dozen well armed friends with you...

  • @thrivedru
    @thrivedru Год назад

    Yes, police? I found this note telling me to open a random back door with a key to claim a prize. Want to check it out?

  • @10kgent68
    @10kgent68 Год назад +1

    Great piece of cinema. The pace kept me going. As for the foolhardy finder of the key and note, dumb is what dumb does. No way I go further than opening the box. Not sorry.

  • @arcb1201
    @arcb1201 Год назад

    Predictable from start to finish.

  • @zero_bs_tolerance8646
    @zero_bs_tolerance8646 Год назад

    Very good. Thank you.

  • @honeymrinal98
    @honeymrinal98 Год назад +1

    curiosity kills!!! nice short

  • @jeffreyzain
    @jeffreyzain Год назад +1

    LOVE THE PLOT TWIST. DEFINITELY BETTER THAN A SHYAMALAN MOVIE 🔥

    • @SC-gp7kt
      @SC-gp7kt Год назад +2

      You're kidding right?

  • @furmal86
    @furmal86 Год назад

    How to do you pronounce the title co-itus?

  • @SwampCityRadio1974
    @SwampCityRadio1974 Год назад

    If you sit in the killin' chair you kinda asked for it.

  • @SC-gp7kt
    @SC-gp7kt Год назад

    Theres 8 minutes of my life I won't get back.

  • @marychristinenewell8780
    @marychristinenewell8780 Год назад +1

    Great story creepy

  • @rosannacellini2158
    @rosannacellini2158 Год назад +1

    I would of, returned to sender, address unknown. No such person, no such zone. Lol

  • @raulcarmello1163
    @raulcarmello1163 Год назад

    Amen

  • @SMaamri78
    @SMaamri78 Год назад +2

    That was really good.

  • @tmanicc
    @tmanicc Год назад +2

    dope film. I like the story line

  • @walteralbertoruiznieto7281
    @walteralbertoruiznieto7281 Год назад

    Really great. Congratulations from Bogotá Colombia

  • @Lex-hu4nm
    @Lex-hu4nm Год назад

    This was very good!!

  • @lorrainelowes2070
    @lorrainelowes2070 Год назад

    Creepy music sets the scene. Bravo.

  • @HowDyaYouLikeMeNow
    @HowDyaYouLikeMeNow Год назад

    Some would call this "murder". I would call this "social Darwinism".

  • @melina-co4dc
    @melina-co4dc Год назад +1

    I really enjoyed it!! The musicalization is great :) the guy wasnt really smart, but it reminds me of some kind of fiction. Great job!!

    • @producer-san
      @producer-san  Год назад

      lol, he was a bit too curious I guess

  • @anniebananie7887
    @anniebananie7887 Год назад +1

    Where was this filmed, it looks like a peaceful town.

    • @producer-san
      @producer-san  Год назад +2

      This was filmed in West Dundee, Illinois. It's a nice small town

    • @CCCC-lq7te
      @CCCC-lq7te Год назад

      Reminded me a little bit of Nutley, NJ

  • @juanguillen9409
    @juanguillen9409 Год назад

    Love the shots and the creepy soundtrack, it goes with the Christmas winter look. Just a dumb character though that follows unrelated actions, could’ve gone another direction after he delivered the note and key, but overall pretty great film.

  • @michaellyczak9337
    @michaellyczak9337 Год назад

    Ol' Charlie shows the symptoms of someone suffering from decreased levels of vitamin Ohellno.

  • @ladyg7796
    @ladyg7796 Год назад

    Uh, I could never be that curious…

  • @kylerubedo3823
    @kylerubedo3823 Год назад +5

    I like how it’s shot, great job

  • @AndrewSmith-jm4sq
    @AndrewSmith-jm4sq Год назад

    Where was this filmed?

  • @pepleatherlab3872
    @pepleatherlab3872 Год назад

    Well, people ARE actually pretty dumb. If you disagree just browse the news a while.

  • @brendaalicia8698
    @brendaalicia8698 Год назад

    👌👌👌👌👌

  • @frankserpico6785
    @frankserpico6785 Год назад

    Curiosity killed the cat.

  • @xyro3633
    @xyro3633 Год назад +1

    It's hammer time

    • @TheFireline
      @TheFireline Год назад

      Haha, reminds me on MC Hammer "U cant touch this".....

  • @nealdmiller
    @nealdmiller Год назад +1

    good one :)