IELTS General Writing Task 1 - Semi-formal letters

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  • Опубликовано: 29 окт 2024

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  • @reham1411ify
    @reham1411ify 3 года назад +31

    Dear Mr. Franklin,
    I am writing to you regarding the valuable course that I am currently taking with you. I am afraid I cannot continue anymore.
    As you know, I am a physician with a full-time job at one of the largest hospitals in the city. My work starts at 7:30 am and finishes at 4:30 pm, with a huge workload. In addition, I am a wife and a mother of a one-year-old daughter who needs a lot of attention and care. To make it worse, my housemaid has left for an urgent situation.
    Although I am highly enjoying the course especially your way of teaching, I find it too much overwhelming to work, taking care of my family, and attending the sessions at the same time, which may reduce the benefit I am expecting from this course.
    To get the maximum efficacy of the course, I would prefer to postpone taking it to the next September. By that time, I definitely will be having a babysitter and I will be more clear-minded.
    Thank you in advance for your understanding and continuous assistance.
    Best regards,
    Reham

    • @dharmendrapandey9093
      @dharmendrapandey9093 2 года назад +1

      Excellent! You just destroyed the 28 minutes vedio . Honestly I learned better having read your letter
      It is awesome !

    • @reham1411ify
      @reham1411ify 2 года назад

      @@dharmendrapandey9093 Oh dear, thank you so much. So glad to hear that.

    • @kapoorekta4
      @kapoorekta4 2 года назад

      very well written

  • @BestMyTest
    @BestMyTest  4 года назад

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  • @melodyshaw7305
    @melodyshaw7305 3 года назад +19

    This is by far the best letter-writing explaination video I've seen on RUclips. It was easy to understand and the method explained was easy to apply as well. Thanks a million!

  • @Lastritesforfat
    @Lastritesforfat 4 года назад +3

    Thank you for explaining your approach to writing. The format, bullet points, writing down thoughts etc, It all helped. I dint practice writing till the test day and I think I could have done better had I practiced. Here is my score and thank you once again.
    IDP: Pen and paper based IELTS Test Result of 24 Oct 2020, is
    L=9.00,
    R=9.00,
    W=7.50,
    S=7.50,
    OverAll=8.50 Scores in TRF will be Final

    • @S.Ajju1214
      @S.Ajju1214 4 года назад

      Wow !! Congrats kushal, Would you like to give me a guidance ?

    • @Lastritesforfat
      @Lastritesforfat 4 года назад

      English isn’t my first language mate but I can help with whatever I can. I’m no expert.

    • @Lastritesforfat
      @Lastritesforfat 3 года назад

      @@haleandhearty7178 I found reading way easier to tackle as the answers were very clear and there was no ambiguity in any question.
      I prepared for the test 3 days in advance and I did not practice writing and hence the low band. However, my scores are at par with the requirement and so I’m satisfied with my band.

    • @Lastritesforfat
      @Lastritesforfat 2 года назад

      @Sulmary Gomez Ss meaning?

  • @Chefyscooking
    @Chefyscooking 2 года назад +4

    A great video indeed! Best video for those people who want to fulfill their dreams, and want to get job in countries like uk Canada Australia etc .

  • @poojashrivastava2722
    @poojashrivastava2722 4 года назад +9

    I followed your tips for letter and essay writing a day before my exam and got 7. Thank you.

  • @angelangel6832
    @angelangel6832 4 года назад +3

    Learnt a new word COHORT today, thanks to your video. Really helpful. I must say its a commendable way of writing Semi formal letter and very well explained from Start to End.

  • @guruchahal1990
    @guruchahal1990 Год назад

    It's really best IELTS class, I have ever taken...

  • @StumbleGuys-e7g
    @StumbleGuys-e7g 3 года назад +1

    I love how you are tidying the paragraphs 👍

  • @belso4619
    @belso4619 3 года назад +7

    Truly a great teacher indeed!
    You make learning interesting and simple. Weldone ma

  • @poornikajayasinghe2042
    @poornikajayasinghe2042 Год назад +1

    Thank you so much for your support to have my IELTS Score. It helped me to build up my vocabulary and writing task. Best of luck ❤

  • @pallavichadha5793
    @pallavichadha5793 4 месяца назад

    Thankyou so much for explaining it so well!!
    Kudos to you.

  • @AmanBains-fx9nj
    @AmanBains-fx9nj 2 года назад +1

    That is perfect way to understand writing pattern for letter. 👍 Thank u so much

  • @serenemaria5503
    @serenemaria5503 Год назад

    Best IELTS class I ever had. Thank you

  • @theoryspiritualartifacts5349
    @theoryspiritualartifacts5349 2 года назад

    Hello ma'am! I have IELTS test next month and I feel not brave enough to do the test due to the origin language English is not my official language! Anyway, I like your intonation. Thanks for this helpful video 😊

  • @adkuzwa8365
    @adkuzwa8365 3 года назад

    The course is wonderful. Why did u use both thank you for understanding and sincerely...?

  • @yourbrother3630
    @yourbrother3630 3 года назад +5

    Thank you very much! Beautiful way of explaining.
    How people dare to push the dislike button???

  • @muahidkhattak7060
    @muahidkhattak7060 9 месяцев назад

    Infact you are a great English teacher

  • @sabbirhossain114
    @sabbirhossain114 2 года назад

    I'm hugely benefitted by watching the videos on this channel.. It's one of the most greatest educative channels I have ever watched !
    Salute to the Chanel and those who are involved !

  • @ManpreetKaur-gk1vg
    @ManpreetKaur-gk1vg 3 года назад +3

    It was so informative.. very well explained and easier way to learn... thank you soo much🙏🏻😊

  • @anyibaba_re
    @anyibaba_re 2 года назад

    Dear Ms. Franklin,
    I am writing to you regarding the Computer Science program that I am currently enrolled in. Unfortunately, I can not continue anymore.
    At the moment, I am preparing for my Information Technology certification exams that are necessary to aid my promotion at my workplace. To pass these exams, I need to prepare for at least six hours each day for the next six months leaving me with no time for any other activity after I return from work. During the weekends, I would have to be involved in Zoom meeting sessions with my study group to work on our capstone projects.
    Even though, I very much hate to withdraw from this Course, I cannot continue the Computer Science Tutorials because I would need ample time to focus on finishing assignments and practicals that are requirements to passing the upcoming exams.
    In the meantime, I would love to defer my Computer science admission to next year May intake, which is about seven months from now, when I would have rounded off my exams.
    Yours Sincerely,

  • @guruchahal1990
    @guruchahal1990 Год назад

    Great to see you.. thanks

  • @paramvishal3086
    @paramvishal3086 3 года назад +1

    Finally I got what I was in need..thanks o lot

  • @judithshalwat1415
    @judithshalwat1415 3 года назад

    Well written letter
    Just a question shouldn’t we use a comma before the coordinating conjunctions in a compound sentence

  • @alvinsanchez7078
    @alvinsanchez7078 Год назад

    Wish me luck I'm now your subscriber ❤

  • @mishikasodhi1534
    @mishikasodhi1534 Год назад

    Dear Ms. Franklin,
    I am writing this letter with utmost regret to inform you that unfortunately, I would not be able to continue with the Computer Science course.
    I am currently working full-time as a Project Manager at Fraser Health, and we are almost at the end of completing the project assigned. Due to the same, the company requires me to have an open availability, which sometimes requires me to work overtime, and even on weekends, depending on the business needs.
    Since I have been working so much, it has been extremely overwhelming and daunting to juggle between work and school. In addition to this, everytime I have tried doing some course work, I have been unable to concentrate due to inadequate rest, which is further leading to additional stress, and causing me to burnout.
    I am hoping that you would understand my situation, and if it is possible, I would like to continue the course at a later date. I would also appreciate a partial refund of the tuition, or alternatively, if I could transfer a part of it when I continue the course, I will by highly thankful to you.
    I truly value your time and efforts and I am hoping to hear back from you.
    Sincerely,
    Mishika Sodhi

  • @mommyoftwo5672
    @mommyoftwo5672 Год назад +1

    Such an amazing lecture ❤

  • @ubahmohamed2746
    @ubahmohamed2746 Год назад

    Thank you so much you are a great teacher

  • @meepupumee3101
    @meepupumee3101 Год назад +1

  • @livewbliss5596
    @livewbliss5596 2 года назад

    Very well done every helpful video

  • @Chefyscooking
    @Chefyscooking 2 года назад

    I am planning to appear in the exam within the next two months, I hope I will be able to make it .

  • @travelwithsandesh
    @travelwithsandesh 2 года назад

    Please make a video for general task 2 writing tests

  • @ilovetrue2571
    @ilovetrue2571 3 года назад

    Hello dear teacher.Thanks.I would like you ask to show us please, how to draft a letter about hold conference.( inviting letter-offical letter from Embassy or company.)Or letter about offer.For example company engage in export or selling cars.And first we have to say about our company then we will say about our offer).
    Thank you in advance

  • @arinamendez8942
    @arinamendez8942 2 года назад

    Very efficient lecture indeed, helped me out a lot....

  • @robelhossain8659
    @robelhossain8659 3 года назад +1

    From childhood always learn semi pronunciation, but now learning pronunciation semai ⛑🤐🙈

  • @whkho6027
    @whkho6027 3 года назад +1

    A great example! thank you, madam

  • @alphonsaanthraose8849
    @alphonsaanthraose8849 2 года назад

    Very helpfull.....

  • @Victoriaruruechabvundura
    @Victoriaruruechabvundura 9 месяцев назад

    Hy some say you should write only 3 paragraphs in task 1 ..but 4paragraphs are they ok

  • @shakthissimplekitchen8035
    @shakthissimplekitchen8035 3 года назад +1

    Thanks. Really a good lecture. 👍

  • @Leland4646
    @Leland4646 3 года назад +1

    which app do you use for grammarly correction?

  • @shariarahmed8936
    @shariarahmed8936 2 года назад

    Great mam

  • @Freyal_twinkle
    @Freyal_twinkle 3 года назад

    Very well explained... Thnx a ton

  • @physicswithtony3102
    @physicswithtony3102 2 года назад

    Your voice 😍❤

  • @ranafarah7132
    @ranafarah7132 3 года назад

    thanks a lot , this example helped me a lot

  • @mdisteyak6898
    @mdisteyak6898 3 года назад +1

    thanks

  • @saniaaroramann99
    @saniaaroramann99 3 года назад

    very well explained mam

  • @zahraretalo9934
    @zahraretalo9934 4 года назад +2

    I love so much all your presentation. It was so informative

    • @traviskyson296
      @traviskyson296 3 года назад

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    • @joeleugene9735
      @joeleugene9735 3 года назад

      @Travis Kyson Definitely, have been watching on Kaldrostream for since november myself :)

    • @dukearthur2473
      @dukearthur2473 3 года назад

      @Travis Kyson yea, I've been using KaldroStream for months myself :D

    • @ismaelalessandro7408
      @ismaelalessandro7408 3 года назад

      @Travis Kyson Definitely, I have been watching on kaldroStream for months myself :D

    • @adriendakota6136
      @adriendakota6136 3 года назад

      @Travis Kyson yup, been using Kaldrostream for since november myself :D

  • @robkhanrobkhan39
    @robkhanrobkhan39 3 года назад

    Love from Bangladesh...

  • @nadiasamir7894
    @nadiasamir7894 2 года назад

    Thank you so much.

  • @Blogs966
    @Blogs966 Год назад

    GT WRITING TASK 2

  • @mlquintinita
    @mlquintinita 4 года назад +2

    Do you have overview lessons for General Writing for Task 2?

  • @theepan5254
    @theepan5254 10 месяцев назад

    i like it from sl

  • @hoppingm5027
    @hoppingm5027 4 года назад +2

    Your letter is excellent please make more letter.

  • @princessdooc26
    @princessdooc26 3 года назад

    thankyou....

  • @vicksonplayz7100
    @vicksonplayz7100 Год назад

    cant i use jargons

  • @charanthebond2
    @charanthebond2 4 года назад

    Increasingly long or increasingly longer?
    Is there any difference here?

  • @uleanyangozi7089
    @uleanyangozi7089 3 года назад +1

    Hi good afternoon from Nigeria, please how will I know if the letter is formal, informal and semi formal

    • @tolahenry-oni5957
      @tolahenry-oni5957 3 года назад +1

      Formal: people you don't know. Informal: Friends/family. Semi-formal: people like ur boss, supervisor

  • @vedprakashthakur
    @vedprakashthakur 4 года назад

    Plz mam make videos for general task 2

  • @theoryspiritualartifacts5349
    @theoryspiritualartifacts5349 2 года назад

    I pretty like and love your voice much pretty..❤️

  • @EmekaMbah
    @EmekaMbah 4 года назад +1

    Is regards capitalized in Best Regards or Best regards

  • @StumbleGuys-e7g
    @StumbleGuys-e7g 3 года назад

    What is the meaning of as such??????????

  • @zinebmaha1744
    @zinebmaha1744 Год назад

    I don't think I agree that this letter should be semi-formal. The semi-formal letters are addressed to someone you have close relationship with (as a friend) about a formal or a serious situation like work.

  • @StumbleGuys-e7g
    @StumbleGuys-e7g 3 года назад

    Thank you this is very informative
    But I don’t see a big difference between semi formal and formal 🤤

  • @abhishektrustme
    @abhishektrustme 4 года назад

    Thank you Mam! I swear to god English is such beautiful language to communicate.

  • @thomsonthadathil8484
    @thomsonthadathil8484 4 года назад

    Useful

  • @arnmalikallah5447
    @arnmalikallah5447 3 года назад

    👑Congratulations👑 Best of luck! জীবনের প্রতিটি মুহূর্ত রঙিন হোক 🌈💖

  • @dynessnachande1490
    @dynessnachande1490 Год назад

    There is nothing like putting the date

  • @berk4415
    @berk4415 3 года назад

    some channels do not separate the first paragraph (starts with I am writing.. ) and the second one (starts with November ..) they prefered writing together
    Is it available though?

  • @manwinderbrar4579
    @manwinderbrar4579 4 года назад

    Thank you so much madam

  • @StumbleGuys-e7g
    @StumbleGuys-e7g 3 года назад

    Cohort I never heard this word

  • @JaspreetSingh-ox8tf
    @JaspreetSingh-ox8tf Год назад

    Hello baby i love love miss you

  • @raghadalsaqqa7154
    @raghadalsaqqa7154 2 года назад

    Thank you so much