IELTS Writing- Transform Band 6 to a Band 8 Essay
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- Опубликовано: 17 июн 2024
- Watch me transform an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay from Band 6 to Band 8 by making just a few simple changes.
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00:00 Introduction
00:30 Band 6 Analysis
32:56 Writing the Band 8 Essay
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Hi chris i want to prepare for IELTS, can you tell me about online course plan and how much it cost. I am from Pakistan
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How may I contact the teacher in the video?
Writing Task 2 Tips:
1. No need to write a background statement
2. Answer the prompt directly
3. Make things general, but keep them specific to the topic
4. Use vocabulary that you understand and accurate with
5. Write exactly what you think, and why you think it
6. Always pick the idea that is the easiest for you to write about
7. Make your essay parts related to each other
8. Provide one reason and an explanation for that reason, instead of providing a list of reasons
thanks
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Thank you
Ok
Depends if the questions said reasons with s you want to provide two of them at least
I just wanted to thank you IELTS Advantage, for being a big part in my prep for IELTS. I got band 8(S - 8/ L - 9 / R - 8 / W - 7) because of your guides , specially the writing.
Congrats!!
where did u take an exam at?
@@onlyforscience8255 It doesn't matter where you are giving the Exam.
Too good speaking
Can you help
He spent his precious time and demonstrated every point. I appreciate his efforts, thank you so much ❤️
You're very welcome, Devyani. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
*Precious. Sorry, had to do it on an ielts video
@@erudemudesu2595 thank you
Thanks so much, just a day to go to have my IELTS.
This is by far the most informative educational video I've seen on youtube.
Glad you found this video helpful, Jake. If you need further help, please do not hesitate to reach out to us.
Exactly
Totally agree.
I have always avoided to learn writing assignment as it is so hard, but you make it sounds enjoyable. Thank you!
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@@Ieltsadvantage hi how can I participate
There are many instructors who make youtube videos on IELTS writing. But they lack pedagogical skills & techniques. Your approach for this double questions eassy is extremely professional, extraordinary & effective. I have been able to identify my shortcomings from here. Please continue making such kinds of didactic lessons.
@@dangphuvuong6163 nice, if it is wrong, can you fix it?
@@dangphuvuong6163 ? you can't fix it? just xam lon?
@@dangphuvuong6163 what are the mistakes?
Your grammar mesmerized me.
Isn't it an agree disagree essay
Let's take a moment to appreciate him for pointing such things out that the examiner really wants from a test taker ..... thank god for letting me know such a teacher 🙌
I must say this is quite useful, and I’m learning more and more every day from these tutorials even though I have quite advanced knowledge of English. In addition, demonstrating others’ mistakes gives me that boost to improve me from falling into the same errors. I sincerely appreciate your help, Sir.
perhaps you are one of the most engrossing channels that I have ever seen before, wish the best for you !!
I highly respect your judgements and your ability to convince your audience of what you're saying.
It couldn't be clearer, thank you for this demonstration and friendly explanation! You are a great teacher :)
Glad you find it helpful, Ana. We are constantly adding videos to our RUclips channel, please subscribe and click the notification bell to get notified whenever we have new videos. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Thanks for all of these information ☺️ I'm glad to see your channel. Before I take an IELTS exam, i will be watch whole your videos 🙏🤗
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You are one of the best ILETS teachers I have ever seen. Wish we had you as our English teacher.
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Your writing lectures did help me get a 7.5. It was well worth it and fruitful. Thank you.
u got band 7.5 in writing?
How did you write your essay? Like it was plain and simple or you use a lot of fancy words,...
This was so helpful!! Your videos are a must watch for people appearing for ielts. I've finally got the desired score and I couldn't be happier :)
Congratulations, Rabani! If you ever need any help in the future, you know where we are.
Super! This is the video lesson that I've been looking forward to watching for such a long time!
Hi @Solijon Azizov, glad you enjoyed it. We are constantly adding videos to our RUclips channel, please subscribe and click the notification bell to get notified whenever we have new videos. We also have a range of paid and free courses to help you in writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email and we will be happy to assist.
The same template for the essay is taught to the student's by the coaching institutes here in India and that's the reason for a band 6 score . Thanks to RUclips algo for recommending your video. I hope your channel will help me in getting the score of band 8 in IELTS writing😉
Your way of teaching is so different from others and always impacting meaning. Keep it up sir, many rewards awaits you.
Your way of teaching is reality-based and conceptual rather than templates provided by other tutors. In my last test, I scored 6 in writing modules by exactly making the same mistakes. I hope the future brings success under your guidelines. Thank you 🙌
You are most welcome! If you need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to hearing from you!
Writing is very hard for me until i find this video it’s helpful thank you so much! I will study hard
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I am really grateful for your hard work and easily understandable teaching, Mr.Pell! Keep it up!😃
I will! Thanks.
Takeaways:
1. there's no need for a background sentence
2. take a firm stance on the questions
3. make specific references to your main points in the introduction
4. Use more authoritative examples
5. fully elaborate an idea rather than touching on many ideas briefly
Okay, first things first - thank you for the ton of work you guys go through to help us here. It's impressive how much patience you have with us))
To the point I want to make half through the video.
I feel more comfortable when I write down a bg sentence, it becomes a starting point from which I can develop the essay itself. It is a good instrument for people who are not used to writing essays, not because it's supposed to impress someone, but because it's actually a helpful starter. For me it's always a pain in- i mean, it's hard to phrase and formulate my thoughts, so some common phrases can save me some time, which I can spend pondering about other parts of the topic.
Also, about the "straight answer without beating around the bush". Yep, we get the idea of a clear and straightforward answer. But the topics in the tests actually are controversal, aren't they? Otherwise it would be impossible to have diffirent opinions on them. And yes, most of the time when my opinion is asked about one of such topics, I do sincerely try to bring light evenly to every side of the problem. Being radical about things like digital phones is kinda rare, isn't it? And if we're supposed to just choose one side and suupport it, then. ugh. That's hard, to lie purposefully just to get a better mark on an essay.
Might be a personal problem though, I'm not trained in debates and/or used to such things. I know some schools dedicate time to such skills and it's great.
You are the best online teacher so far..Love Keith too!
Thank you so much, Sir. I really appreciate your help.
Great lesson! Love it
Thank you for your tips! You explained us in a clear and easy way how to improve our score :)
Thank you so much for your devotion, Sir! I always wish you and your beloved ones the best and lasting happiness.
You are most welcome!
I was struggling with understanding the essay format, despite attending regular classes. However, after reading the content on your website, I now have a clear grasp of it. As a result, I can confidently write essays scoring 7 or higher. Thank you for your invaluable assistance!
Mark my words; you all are never going to see such straightforward, no-nonsense, and professional videos on other channels, unlike IELTS Advantage.
By the way, thank you so much, IELTS Advantage, for such a quality analysis video.
the best video ever! I admit that this teacher is a great teacher
this channel has been saving my life on a daily basis. thank you so much
You are most welcome!
thanks for creating this channel. There are so many useful advice.
You're most welcome @Luong Vu. We are constantly adding videos to our RUclips channel, please subscribe and click the notification bell to get notified whenever we have new videos. We also have a range of paid and free courses to help you in writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email and we'll be happy to assist.
I am rewatching this video rn 😭 noting the details to get at least a 7 in writing in my next attempt. Thank you for sharing this with us ^^
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How much did you get in the first attempt??
thanks, man!!!!!!
This is a video I watched just a few hours before my IELTS and literally I didn't know that I needed one even for writing.
You're welcome. We'd appreciate it if you can share your result with us once available. Best of luck with it!
share your results
Thank you, sir. You enlightened me and got me through toughest parts of the ielts writing criteria (TR and CC). Appreciate your work. hopefully, I will get a high score for writing this time.
You're most welcome! If there's anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck!
Your teaching style is second to none. Thank you for your lessons and hard work!
You're very welcome, Lemon! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Good job, Mr Chris. I hope I will get desired band by following ur lessons.
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Thanks to IELTS Advantage for making me feel relaxe and for being a huge part of my IELTs preparation 😌you are ❤
This is what I specifically looking for in IELTS writing, what i've learned from other youtubers are different and now i know that they are wrong. Thank you so much.
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very informative video Chris please provide more video like this writing all types of eassy please... good work ji ♥️♥️♥️
Hello, Chris. Had my exam on 5th October and scored 7.0 Overall. Even though I did not get satisfactory answers to the problems I was having that I sent you on email, I still managed to solve them on my own. By the way thank you very much for the informative videos that helped me to score this unexpected score :)
Nice vocabulary for improving thanks man!
Love and thumps up of your lesson. It is incredibly awesome for learning English.😍
Thank y sooo much for the detailed explanation!! Finally I understand what my mistakes are and how to correct them. Should have seen this channel earlier. My exam is on Jan 14! I will try my best! Thank u so much for the explanation!
You are most welcome. Best of luck with your test!
I'm obliged to you that you help us with your incredible skills of teaching and knowledge. Tonnes of love to you, Sir
You are very welcome. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
You’re an amazing person, Thanks for guiding us
Oh, it looks just like what i recieved from the introductions of my previous teachers. "Make it hard and you may get a high band score."
Thank you so much for your precious time !
thank you for helping me get a 6.5 in writing ❤
It was such an informative video, I guess by far the best one I had seen . Thank you so much for making it easier to understand what examiners want us to write
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Tuc meri help kr skde ho
Thank you so much for the lessons. I'm benefiting a lot.
This video is perfect! Thank you so much!☺️☺️☺️
thank you so much for your enthusiasm. Hope to see more B2->C1/C2 vocabs from you :)
More to come! Thanks for watching. We are constantly adding videos to our RUclips channel, please make sure to subscribe and click the notification button to get notified whenever we have new videos.
I always found the IELTS writing task more daunting than others, but after watching this video and reading all the comments, I now feel confidence that I can improve my writing score... thank you so much for this informative tips!
Glad it helped! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Great video and also detailedand Extraordinaryexplanation.thank you so much Chris
Appreciate your time and effort in creating this video. It clears much of my confusion about task 2. Thank you so much.
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I never felt this video is too long. After watching it I just saw it is actually 44 min long😁
Thank you for this powerful video. I applied most of the ideas and I got band 7.5 in my writing as against 6.5 in my previous test. Thank you so much.
Great job! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
Thank you for these tips sir! They proved to be beneficial to me :)
Thanks a lot for your effort. This lesson really helped me understand, how and why I should write an essay!
You're welcome. I'm glad you find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Extremely helpful video 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Your videos are so useful, thank you ❤
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I am taking the test tomorrow and on the weekend. Thanks for this!
Best of luck!
Thank you so much for this. It really helped me understand why I dont get marks and helped me identify my errors. Your a true hero I commend you!
You're so welcome!
I got access to EnglishExamPrep tutorials and they have direct written strategies to use for specific questions. The trash I have been following, got me only 6 band in writing. This video sums up my lacking in writing. Thank you chris! You are a unsung hero. And I will update to you how much I got improved once I have taken ILETS by the end of this month.
Thanks for sharing! Glad you find us helpful. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Where’s the update? Its been 5 months
The key here is being succinct in your writing
Thank you so much this video has given me a lot of motivation to face my upcoming exam courageously 🎉
It's my first time here in your channel and I'm so amazed on how you explain all the parts of the letter , thank you so much and this will be a great help for my exam tomorrow 🙏🙏🙏🙏
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It's really helpful. I can't thank enough
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Thank you for the video! It seems that on 9:35 we'd better look at the essay, not at the band descriptors :)
You're awesome 😎 Thanks for inform to us.
Sir u are the one who solve my ilets related problems
Extremely informative video for the ones who are stuck at 6-6.5 bands. It would be more generous if u make such a video of Agree/Disagree and Discuss Both Views as they are the more frequent ones to appear in exam.
Thanks!
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What do you think of the new studio?
Looks crisp.
I liked it😆
beautiful to see your new studio.
Looks cool eh!!
Inspiring
Precisely but accurately.
This is really pretty good. Thank you so much for your videos.
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Amazing 🤩
I'm pretty sure this guy used to be an examiner. I can tell from the first sentence he said about the essay.
Waited for this type of vibes👍👍
I love this video , it is really easy to unsderstand and do the things that you meantion in the video .
I wanna improve my writing in English Dear Chris I love your education programs about IELTS exam so much.😊😇🥰😍🤗
Hi Anil, here's a video that you might find helpful: ruclips.net/video/2gEzg-qHtE4/видео.html. This lesson will teach you how to improve your IELTS Writing. If you need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
This video is the best writing task 2 video of all time. Thanks :)
Yeah, the best I Like about this video is that the essay he wrote is accordingly set with band descriptors.Even though, this essay doesn't seem to be extraordinary yet it deserves 8 bands.
@@RS-wp7lt exactly, this video shows how we can improve our band score.
Not just by using advanced and inaccurate language.
I appreciate your help so much.
The most Stunning video i have ever seen.keep uploading this types of videos.
Wanted to say huge thanks to IELTS Advantage, for giving such amazing tips and advices during preparation! I got band 8
(L - 8.5, R - 9, W - 7, S - 7) because of your awesome videos!
Great job! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
Could you tell me about how you prepared for listening and reading?
Sir thanks to you 😊 i got overall 7.5 band. 🤩 in my first attempt .
Listening 🎧==8.5, Reading==8.0, Speaking 🗣️==7.0, Writing==6.0 ...... Thanks alot again to bestest and humblest teacher in the world 🌎🌍
Tips for reading?
Tips for reading pls.
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Reading Tips'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Reading Tips'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
amazing lesson thank you!
Your explanation is quite straight forward
Thanks, that’s what we aim for.
Today was my mock test at the institute...nd i m laughing here... after realising that these are the exact mistakes i have made today...😂...nd i m sure if someone knows my mistake ...his suggestions are surely gonna help me...thank u for being there sir
Thank you so much this really helps. I have a Q, is it OK to use metaphors as an example or supporting details in task 2?
thank you so much, i am so grateful for you!!!!
Thank you for providing valuable information on the writing test. I remember when I first took the test, my test score was very low, and the latter when I applied the mentioned skills, my writing improved substantially.
Well done! If there's anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you for your tips, I had my IELTS and I am satisfied with my results, I got all 6.0, except for writing 5.5. Because I am applying to university it is a good result!
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Just came back here to thank you so much .. I got a 7 in writing.. my overall band score is 8. L -8.5, R - 8.5, W- 7, S- 7.5
I practiced for 2 weeks using your videos
Thank you thank you 🙏🏾
Congratulations! If you ever need any help in the future, you know where we are.
BEST YOUTBE TEACHING ENGLISH CHANNEL EVER
Thank you so much IELTS Advantage team! I would say that your strategy, especially for writing and speaking, are super useful. I've got band 7.5 overall thanks to watching your videos !!!
Happy to hear that!
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 logan Paul example is the perfect one
Sir i have a little issue in tast 1 graphs could u pls make video on this module next time?
Already did. Check past videos.
I am here to thank you Chris. I finally got ‘BAND 7’ in writing. For those who are still finding a golden rule or cramming templates, unfortunately for you folks, the answer lies in simplicity of ideas and flow through.
Imagine yourself as an English expert, reading fancy vocab, complexed ideas leaving asides grammar and spelling errors, how do you expect to get a band 7?
Answer the ‘why, how and as a result strategy’ in an essay capturing simplicity in ideas but with better selection of words from the main topic. More importantly seek an expert who would guide you on the common and basic mistakes you may be making in your preparation. May you get there on the other side soon. Best wishes 🎉
Well done, Rohit! We put in so much work into making the best, free resources for students and we are always delighted when they let us know that the materials worked for them. Good luck for the future!