TURNCOAT : A Star Wars Short Film

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  • Опубликовано: 28 авг 2024
  • On a distant planet in the Outer Rim, a group of Jedi track down what they believe to be a traitor to the Jedi Order. Their mission, to deal with the conspirator with whatever means necessary.
    (Disclaimer: This is a non-profit fan-film that is not intended for commercial use. "Star Wars" is owned by Disney and this fan-film is not a product of said company.)

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  • @skippyopolous
    @skippyopolous 5 лет назад +1008

    "We must be watchful"
    *Pulls on hood which obscures 80% of vision

    • @vladanm.1352
      @vladanm.1352 4 года назад +48

      Looking cool is much more important. Even for Jedi

    • @madmalkavian3857
      @madmalkavian3857 4 года назад +28

      "It's not obscuring my vision it's just improving it in a more concentrated area.

    • @Marcusjnmc
      @Marcusjnmc 4 года назад +18

      the eyes are not the only way to see, not in that universe

    • @cooleylogan5595
      @cooleylogan5595 4 года назад +5

      well..... One of them is BLIND

    • @wildshetentertainment1821
      @wildshetentertainment1821 3 года назад +1

      Force sensitives don't really need to see anyways, they can use the Force to sense all that's around them and more.

  • @KievanGoose
    @KievanGoose 4 года назад +269

    I love the amount of thrusts/pokes and a lack of just hitting the other person's lightsaber. These people are actually fighting each other.

    • @AaronEllisOfficial
      @AaronEllisOfficial 4 года назад +10

      Yes. Like real fighting would be. Not Al this fancy spinning and swinging to look cool.

    • @iyoaw4360
      @iyoaw4360 4 года назад +4

      This point was cool I liked it

    • @theflock4916
      @theflock4916 4 года назад +5

      Kimberly Stringer me looking at throne room: no no, *this isn’t how you’re supposed to play the game.*

    • @imatheistbut5789
      @imatheistbut5789 4 года назад +6

      @@theflock4916 that scene *was a joke to me* and everyone. Nobody can argue in that *disgrace's* favor.

    • @nybergsgarage
      @nybergsgarage 4 года назад +7

      @@kimberlystringer1380 I hate to bring this up, but all the fights in the sequel trilogy were ridiculous. they never attempted to hit one another, they actively aimed for the other person's lightsaber and threw away more chances than I can count to just win the battle.

  • @sethtaut7498
    @sethtaut7498 4 года назад +367

    8:55 "how could you be so blind"? said the blind guy.

    • @TheGamer-rq8oj
      @TheGamer-rq8oj 3 года назад

      @@kimberlystringer1380 Was that a avatar: the last airbender reference?

    • @TheGamer-rq8oj
      @TheGamer-rq8oj 3 года назад

      @Shawn Furstenau oh ok

  • @donchichivagabond1578
    @donchichivagabond1578 5 лет назад +716

    That leader seemed like a sith. He said there was no time for caution. If any words come from a sith those are at the root of their character.

    • @wackedsquirrel6284
      @wackedsquirrel6284 5 лет назад +28

      he is known as Darth Braces

    • @Knightshadowful
      @Knightshadowful 5 лет назад +26

      only a sith deals an absolute

    • @austinthomas8464
      @austinthomas8464 4 года назад +10

      That’s what I thought and he was rude he also covered most of his face

    • @jakubrogacz6829
      @jakubrogacz6829 4 года назад +6

      @@austinthomas8464 And looked exactly like sidious first appearence. So.. yup. looked proper sith to me

    • @NexusZ97
      @NexusZ97 4 года назад +5

      DONCHICHI vagabond Only a sith deals in absolutes

  • @TheUnnbreakable
    @TheUnnbreakable 4 года назад +503

    Dude in the hologram sounds more like a Sith

  • @zichithefox4781
    @zichithefox4781 6 лет назад +342

    I freakin' love that grey haired dude. I want to see him canon in the Star Wars universe. Or have more of him in future videos.

  • @alexolivera3151
    @alexolivera3151 6 лет назад +1110

    Notice the terrain...no high ground

    • @googlesucks478
      @googlesucks478 6 лет назад +21

      That's what they were actually fighting over.

    • @thesenate5291
      @thesenate5291 6 лет назад +23

      *An even fight then*

    • @daverichards9141
      @daverichards9141 5 лет назад +14

      And no sand

    • @obi-wankenobi5898
      @obi-wankenobi5898 5 лет назад +23

      That's impossible.

    • @Aidan-zc8wx
      @Aidan-zc8wx 5 лет назад +9

      Don't send Obi-Wan then, he will just use the force to elevate the ground he stands on.

  • @matninja123
    @matninja123 6 лет назад +769

    I like the use of the lightsaber-pike

    • @KickyFut
      @KickyFut 6 лет назад +31

      At least two of his moves would have actually hit the turncoat guy! The one with the pike's fighting style would have no trouble keeping him at range... I guess it was too hard to pierce Plot Armor. 😓

    • @corvus1253
      @corvus1253 5 лет назад +34

      What was Ordrin's lightsaber made from that he was able to block with the mid portion?

    • @nicholashightower637
      @nicholashightower637 5 лет назад +10

      More than likely it had Pyrik plating

    • @kaitlynnnguyen8693
      @kaitlynnnguyen8693 5 лет назад +7

      @@nicholashightower637 Cortosis Ore, perhaps?

    • @louisstructure359
      @louisstructure359 5 лет назад +8

      I feel like it should be called the pikesaber

  • @angelomordini6779
    @angelomordini6779 6 лет назад +513

    Yellow lightsaber I see? Well now I love that character

    • @becksbenard
      @becksbenard 5 лет назад +1

      Wait that was supposed to be yellow?

    • @user-wr5yx8tk3r
      @user-wr5yx8tk3r 4 года назад +4

      rebecca benard What else would it be

    • @cerealcereal1280
      @cerealcereal1280 4 года назад +3

      PugLightning31 4 orange

    • @user-wr5yx8tk3r
      @user-wr5yx8tk3r 4 года назад +3

      Cereal Cereal except it’s yellow

    • @CEJRAID
      @CEJRAID 4 года назад +3

      It’s definitely Orange

  • @selfelevation7
    @selfelevation7 6 лет назад +351

    Not bad.. I like the overall story & the way it ended. .. My man went out like a G.. He said "do what you gotta do. I'm at peace with this".. I like that.. Plus whoever did the musical soundtrack, they hooked it up real decently.. That music sounds good..

    • @superretrobrosstudios4936
      @superretrobrosstudios4936 4 года назад +9

      No real sith would agree to death,and no jedi would agree to killing a unarmed wounded man makes you wonder lol

    • @Sithlords2
      @Sithlords2 3 года назад +1

      @@superretrobrosstudios4936 mace windu has entered the chat

  • @emperorholocron8278
    @emperorholocron8278 5 лет назад +57

    8:54
    “How could you be so blind?”
    Yeahhhh mate you can’t really talk there mate😂😂😂

  • @frankies1717
    @frankies1717 4 года назад +66

    Imagine seeing Jedi on the side of the highway walking to the woods

  • @caimbus
    @caimbus 6 лет назад +80

    Fight choreography was great...Better than most fanmade Star Wars films

  • @alancode2147
    @alancode2147 4 года назад +99

    *Guy lays dying in her arms.* "I'll be back with medical supplies....."
    *Seconds later while the guy is still dying.* "Master we've sustained two casualties..."
    *Guy hanging on to dear life in her arms* AM I JOKE TO YOU?!

    • @Michael_Chandler_Keaton
      @Michael_Chandler_Keaton 4 года назад +19

      Casualties don't mean they're dead. Casualty can also refer to injured.

    • @michaelwilliams369
      @michaelwilliams369 4 года назад

      😂 Right! "B*TCH DON'T YOU SEE ME DYING HERE? GET SOME HELP!"

    • @scitzoplaya1
      @scitzoplaya1 4 года назад +1

      Thats master kenshi from Mortal kombat. 😂

    • @u.v.s.5583
      @u.v.s.5583 4 года назад

      Doctor: - Nurse! Bring the patient to the mortuary!
      Patient: - But I am not dead yet!
      Nurse: - Doctor said to mortuary, so you go to mortuary.

    • @UnusualSuspect62
      @UnusualSuspect62 4 года назад

      Exactly

  • @wavecity7487
    @wavecity7487 4 года назад +181

    I do not take that Sith Lord seriously his voice sounds like he got bent over by his wife and got spanked

    • @HongFeiBai
      @HongFeiBai 4 года назад +3

      He looks like a traitor because his cheeks bulge out like Kylo Ren's.

    • @Marcusjnmc
      @Marcusjnmc 4 года назад +3

      the Sith was the one giving the Jedi orders

    • @izxnyl
      @izxnyl 4 года назад +2

      right! his voice is cringe, while everyone else has their tone and actually seems like they're good actors lmao.

    • @Marcusjnmc
      @Marcusjnmc 4 года назад

      @@izxnyl an accent does not make a person a bad actor

    • @izxnyl
      @izxnyl 4 года назад

      @@Marcusjnmc well if i wanted to act as as a sith, I would have at least tried to sound menacing right? lmao, obviously you are taking it too literal.

  • @mikef1125
    @mikef1125 3 года назад +2

    The quality of acting is incredible. The script, the conviction, and overall depth the each actor portrays is academy award worthy. Step aside Harrison Ford ! Wow - just wow. Greatest. Acting. Ever.

  • @thesweetembraceofnonexiste3740
    @thesweetembraceofnonexiste3740 4 года назад +7

    From the special effects to the acting to the realistic fight choreography to the lighting and so on, every bit of this is as perfect as I could possibly imagine. Definitely some of the best content RUclips has to offer.

  • @Calbenmike
    @Calbenmike 4 года назад +48

    For a yellow lightsaber wielder, that Jedi was extremely lackluster.

    • @saulgoodman4451
      @saulgoodman4451 4 года назад +4

      Calbenmike it’s orange

    • @rogue7100
      @rogue7100 4 года назад +5

      @@saulgoodman4451 that would make him the wielder of one of the only orange lightsabers in the galaxy, since there are only 8 orange kyber Crystal's. Moreover, they arent actual kyber Crystal's, they are something called Fools Kyber, which looks like and performs just like a Kyber Crystal, but is not exactly a Kyber Crystal. Kinda like Gold and Fools Gold. One behaves and looks similar, but isnt exactly the other.

    • @saulgoodman4451
      @saulgoodman4451 4 года назад

      Rogue 71 sure why not

    • @fredericktay9968
      @fredericktay9968 4 года назад +3

      Orange lightsaber are for people who swear not to use their weapon unless they absolutely have to

    • @senseirazor737
      @senseirazor737 4 года назад +1

      @@fredericktay9968 Makes sense, he was the very last one to draw his saber, and chose to run his clone down instead of fight it.

  • @captaingman8583
    @captaingman8583 6 лет назад +1

    I don't care how corny the story was. This was a damn good film. Good music. Good editing. And good job selling it. This was awesome

  • @JohnCachero
    @JohnCachero 6 лет назад +2

    Wow! That very well done. By the end, I was sucked into the world of this story you all created. I want more!

  • @BlakPanthaa
    @BlakPanthaa 6 лет назад +131

    This was amazing, make a part 2 plz

  • @Bad_Ewok
    @Bad_Ewok 5 лет назад +128

    So at the end when she was screaming master, did anyone elses mind just start playing Metallica?

    • @TheOnlyHollywood1
      @TheOnlyHollywood1 4 года назад +3

      *"MASTER"*
      *"MASTER"*

    • @u.v.s.5583
      @u.v.s.5583 4 года назад +1

      Obey the Master! Master!

    • @arcanusvtuber
      @arcanusvtuber 4 года назад +1

      MASTER OF PUPPETS

    • @imatheistbut5789
      @imatheistbut5789 4 года назад +1

      I have no idea what that means because idk what Metallica is but I just want to be the 100th like so you're welcome

    • @CCD05
      @CCD05 4 года назад

      Think so

  • @alexanderarmageddon1467
    @alexanderarmageddon1467 6 лет назад +2

    Am I the only one who would LOVE to see more of this story unfold?

  • @soleo1493
    @soleo1493 6 лет назад +1

    I come back to this video time and time again specifically for how cool the lightsaber pike is used in this video. Awesome work!

  • @vitalitylimited
    @vitalitylimited 6 лет назад +27

    0:33 Converges binoculars into single lens; still viewed as double-lens when looked through. #binocularlogic #binogic

  • @KyleJordanGaming
    @KyleJordanGaming 6 лет назад +25

    Dag, yo... Jedi girl just straight up bodied that dude. She don’t play, man... But yeah, I dig it. The twist was a little predictable- the second I saw that dude at the beginning, I was like “Yeah he’s the traitor.” He was wearing a hood! Dead giveaway. That said, the choreography was fantastic. It didn’t feel overly scripted, and the kind of frantic, highly mobile, keeping the opponent at maximum range approach is much more plausible than the typical “let’s stand two feet away from each other and lock our blades together for five minutes while monologuing” nonsense. I also really, really dig how you gave each character their own style instead of just aping the standard ‘beige kimonos for good guys; black cloaks for bad guys’ routine. My favorite was definitely Captain Silver Hair Funky Eyes (everybody knows dudes with silver hair are awesome)... kinda reminded me of Raiden from Mortal Kombat (don’t hate... Mortal Kombat is a timeless classic...). And the yari/naginata style saber was perfect. Did you get that from my boy Emory at Ultrasabers? If so, you should seriously get in touch with him- I know he’s posted links to fan-videos that feature Ultrasabers on the website and forums- would be a great way to get some much deserved views. Just a thought. Anyway, excellent work. I’ll definitely be looking forward to the next one.

  • @thatgeekwill8263
    @thatgeekwill8263 5 лет назад +2

    If Game of thrones and Star Wars had a baby it would be this fan film. 10/10

  • @Ritercrazy
    @Ritercrazy 6 лет назад +1

    We'll done Mr. Mathew and all others involved. Your hard work yielded a well made piece.

  • @stardustworlds1493
    @stardustworlds1493 4 года назад +7

    "Why do I get the feeling we are watched?"
    Me: That must be the camera

  • @bobozinkermanlives9553
    @bobozinkermanlives9553 5 лет назад +3

    One of the best fan films I have watched! Excellent score and tone, as well as the acting!

  • @Lavie_Azure
    @Lavie_Azure 6 лет назад +1

    This is some 10/10 Star Wars Legends material

  • @bullseye4886
    @bullseye4886 Год назад +2

    Funny how short Star Wars fan films are better than almost all star wars projects

  • @elsecaller9619
    @elsecaller9619 5 лет назад +3

    Top 10 Best Fanfilms. The Editing Was Amazing The Acting Was 10/10 And The Effects Are Just Awesome! This Is Probably Number One Of Top Ten Best Fanfilms.

  • @michaeltruthson6262
    @michaeltruthson6262 4 года назад +54

    I could see their "master" was a Sith practitioner considering his whole disrespectful countenance and ordering the killing of a enemy on sight is not at all the Jedi way. This is very good and I especially like the actress who gave me a glimpse at a darkside jedi Padme. Her threat to break every bone in the traitor's body one by one I intensely erotic.

  • @spacesaiyan2512
    @spacesaiyan2512 6 лет назад +1

    I appreciate that yellow lightsaber staff. Adds to the variety of lightsabers. Also the choice of a staff was unique.

  • @nigeuldemby1313
    @nigeuldemby1313 6 лет назад +1

    OUTSTANDING!!!! The lightsabre duels were great and the story was well written!! Great plot twist too!!! You guys got Something... keep the story going!!

  • @charlescernoch7686
    @charlescernoch7686 4 года назад +8

    This small fan film was better than the entirety of the last Jedi

  • @paesanellis5720
    @paesanellis5720 4 года назад +3

    I appreciate the not over-choreographed fight like a lot tend to do and like the prequels did. I like weight felt while you guys swing the saber.

  • @tbyrd9772
    @tbyrd9772 5 лет назад +2

    this is damn good . i'm not easy to please when it comes to these fan films . MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU .

  • @charles-olivierdenis6633
    @charles-olivierdenis6633 4 года назад +3

    "I do not *care* for a weather update."
    Honestly the slightly annoyed delivery of that line is really great.

  • @TennesseeAnderson
    @TennesseeAnderson 6 лет назад +191

    That was actually really well played out. The effects were really cool. and I enjoyed my relaxation of watching this fan film. I Love Star Wars a lot and have all eight so far on digital. I love watching these Fan Films of the Star Wars Universe. They are awesome to watch especially when you get the cravings to wanna watch Star Wars and just think Star Wars for a while and day dream stories of Star Wars like I do :).

    • @cobaliufloof4198
      @cobaliufloof4198 6 лет назад +1

      Well, do you count the Clone Wars animated film? The one that was turned into a TV series?

    • @topnarwhal8318
      @topnarwhal8318 6 лет назад

      I know it was two months ago but plz don't tell me you mean rouge one

    • @notgray88
      @notgray88 4 года назад

      Seriously how does this have over 1k dislikes? The acting and costumes are all fantastic.

  • @KrystalcKobra769
    @KrystalcKobra769 6 лет назад +17

    Do my eyes deceive me? An actually great "Star Wars" fan film? No no it can't be, it's impossible! My god. I actually LOVED this! Great work!

  • @darkscorpion6534
    @darkscorpion6534 5 лет назад +2

    ever since the shameful past few star wars movies, I've just been watching fan film after fan film. This was awesome!!!

  • @zacharymcochran
    @zacharymcochran 6 лет назад +1

    Well done guys. Wow, loved the yellow sabered character, eyes, hair, lightstaff. The holographic master seemed a little too dark and suspicious and terse for a Jedi, so the ending was not too surprising. All in all, I want another Star Wars film from you guys!

  • @robertuknowxip9953
    @robertuknowxip9953 6 лет назад +20

    Love he used a pike saber. Keep it up. You are doing good

    • @MT-UK
      @MT-UK 4 года назад

      RobertUknow XiP Do you know and can u explain how he was able to block and lock up with the green blade using only his hilt? Wouldn’t it just slice in half like Mauls did in TPM ? Not a complaint and if it’s obvious or something in legends I’m missing then my bad but just curious as it’s so well done and thought out I’d guess that they wouldn’t make such an amateur mistake or continuity error such as that.

  • @nateg364
    @nateg364 6 лет назад +18

    That lightsaber fight was amazing! You guys did an excellent job with that. Wow.

  • @xanderwilliams8400
    @xanderwilliams8400 4 года назад

    Way better then anything Disney has put out. It makes me feel hope for what star wars means to me and what it could be if given the right team. You can see the love of star wars in this. Thank yall for this really

  • @killianbrown7280
    @killianbrown7280 7 лет назад +77

    Bravo!
    I loved how the first thing you notice is the photography/music, both of which are highly effective in setting tone. Then of course, the original-yet-fitting costumes were lovely to see. At this point I was worried that the cast might over play accents or something but nay! They all seem quite immersed and motivated, not to mention attractive! As the story played out I was really invested and enthralled by the expert pacing. This left the fight scene, and what a fight it was! Kudos to the choreographer(s) for knowing how a sword fight works; especially in a 2v1!
    This is easily one of the best fanfilms I've seen, and I've seen a bunch over the last 6 years! 5 stars, A+, 10/10: will watch again! And now to your war films...

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  7 лет назад +4

      Thank you Killian, we are very glad you enjoyed it!

    • @Urayuss
      @Urayuss 5 лет назад

      Excellently worded, my guy! You thought of a bunch of praises that I wanted to put words to but couldn't. My man.

    • @Butidontactuallycare
      @Butidontactuallycare 5 лет назад

      Acting and choreography could've been better though

    • @FenixFang
      @FenixFang 4 года назад

      This is the best star wars fan film I've seen. Will keep it in mind while making mine. The girl's acting could have been better tho

  • @spiritvdc5109
    @spiritvdc5109 5 лет назад +3

    I absolutely love the acting quality in this, a lot of fan-made short films tend to struggle with acting due to low budget but you guys knocked it out of the park ^.^

  • @emperorholocron8278
    @emperorholocron8278 4 года назад +21

    8:54
    “How could you be so blind?”
    Yeahhhh you can’t really talk there mate😂😂😂

    • @Riokv
      @Riokv 4 года назад +1

      X Drive I think he is not blind, he said “¡There, I see him!”

  • @mikegould6590
    @mikegould6590 6 лет назад

    Finally, a fan film on the weakness of the Republic. Well done!

  • @orbittyj9870
    @orbittyj9870 3 года назад

    Ah, the narcissus. Seeing only what they wish to see. How appropriate....
    Thanks for a wonderful film!

  • @longjawnsilva8877
    @longjawnsilva8877 5 лет назад +5

    Love how can films have more light sabers than the actual movies

    • @PACKERMAN2077
      @PACKERMAN2077 4 года назад

      Except the prequel cuz you know CG lightsabers

  • @patricks5478
    @patricks5478 4 года назад +6

    Im late to the party but i enjoyed this way more than i thought i was going to

  • @GimmieTheGaff
    @GimmieTheGaff 4 года назад

    Always nice to see a lady who can handle a sword. Brilliant! You guys are awesome.

  • @king_supreme1102
    @king_supreme1102 6 лет назад +1

    Great knowledge about the Star Wars universe. And for what you had to work with this was a very good original story.

  • @LiamJMWilson
    @LiamJMWilson 7 лет назад +11

    This was bloody cool guys! Well done!

  • @brandonmckenzie8445
    @brandonmckenzie8445 7 лет назад +15

    Would love a sequel! Great job!

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад +4

      Brandon McKenzie Thank you, we appreciate the positive feedback!

  • @kayoomcm4273
    @kayoomcm4273 6 лет назад +1

    nicely made one of the only fan films I've actually enjoyed

  • @cabbages647
    @cabbages647 4 года назад

    Very well made; incredible score and makeup. Nice choreography. I look forward to a follow up film.

  • @jdahl06
    @jdahl06 7 лет назад +64

    Uh...more please??

  • @MultiGunner56
    @MultiGunner56 4 года назад +16

    Saber pikes like that, man litteraly has my dream lightsaber, only I'm planning on using Aeon v5 for my top instead of V2

  • @iampotatogaming1686
    @iampotatogaming1686 3 года назад

    This film is underrated yet so fricken good that im watching this instead of doing my homework.

  • @sebbissland7273
    @sebbissland7273 4 года назад +2

    This is actually really good. Editing and story was excellent. Only problem was the lightsaber choreography, but apart from that it was amazing

  • @loganmanygo334
    @loganmanygo334 6 лет назад +21

    you should do a sequel someday that'd be so cool

    • @UnusualSuspect62
      @UnusualSuspect62 4 года назад

      Logan Man Ygo can’t do that Social distancing 😈😈😈

  • @barcotd
    @barcotd 6 лет назад +216

    9:24 impossible. It would cut right through the lightsaber like happened with darth maul

    • @FalconWindblader
      @FalconWindblader 6 лет назад +90

      Never know much about the deeper lore of the legends, eh?...

    • @ScottPhx
      @ScottPhx 6 лет назад +37

      Actually it would be made of Phrik not cortosis. If it was cortosis his blade would have shorted out on contact with it.

    • @MrEffectfilms
      @MrEffectfilms 6 лет назад +83

      BarcoTD actually saber pikes are made out of saber resistant material.

    • @barcotd
      @barcotd 6 лет назад +30

      Oh dang i didnt know that! Thanks for the info

    • @captainfiteer7360
      @captainfiteer7360 6 лет назад +9

      Scott Phoenix that is only a specific type, which is harder to shape than standard cortosis.

  • @xthiccc3562
    @xthiccc3562 3 года назад

    Amazing! Music, fighting, plot, just plain amazing!

  • @baldr259
    @baldr259 2 года назад

    *deep exhale* how do I convey such tension? That was so good! I held my breath almost the whole time. I still don't know who the bad guys are! Amazing! Well done! I loved it. Edge of my seat the whole time!!!!!

  • @plaidpenguin1820
    @plaidpenguin1820 4 года назад +4

    They are all such bad duelers and weak in the force it’s like there asking for a real sith to kill them.

  • @Aidenrdl
    @Aidenrdl 6 лет назад +5

    This was very well done! So glad there are good creators who can make films, although not perfect, still enjoyable. Loved the effects and camera. Although, could use some coloring. Looking forward to seeing more. Subscribing.

  • @TotalACABReena
    @TotalACABReena 4 года назад +1

    I love the actor’s imitation of George Lucas’ faux British accent for the Jedi. It really brings the experience all together

  • @brendonhickok5755
    @brendonhickok5755 6 лет назад +1

    very good. I loved the graphics This could have been a legit Star Wars movie.

  • @rubeno.6969
    @rubeno.6969 6 лет назад +141

    Good work , but she threatened him with braking his bones one by one a jedi wouldn´t do that

    • @FalconWindblader
      @FalconWindblader 6 лет назад +61

      Look up "jedi sentinel"... & you'd be surprised how CLOSE these types often skirt the dark side due to their work, & threats like those, are child's play...

    • @KyleJordanGaming
      @KyleJordanGaming 6 лет назад +8

      But it was awesome. That’s what’s important.

    • @LVTHORAscending
      @LVTHORAscending 6 лет назад +5

      Falcon Windblade wrong saber color for a Sentinel

    • @jamesmonroe1538
      @jamesmonroe1538 6 лет назад +6

      Tyler Sephiran Technically, no. As I believe this is the old republic, so sentinals didn't technically exist at this point in time.
      Edit: I didn't hear them say the chip had all undercover sentinals. Perhaps they didn't have a saber color yet.

    • @TheTrueFeetMan
      @TheTrueFeetMan 6 лет назад +6

      Ruben O. Seeing that dryker was surprised to see 'she was a knight and all' it suggests that either he was taunting her with the idea of being a knight as she might have been looking like a knight but truly she was an padawan or she very recently became a knight which is very possible meaning that she could have more clouded vision in the force and since judging from her lightsaber colour blue she was a Jedi guardian making her more aggressive then other Jedi especially since two of her close friends master bahn and ordain were killed
      Rekt Star Wars logic style

  • @NerdJake
    @NerdJake 7 лет назад +36

    "I'm gonna break every single bone in your body. Please, it will be my pleasure." Well, that's the Jedi way! One of the few fan films which would actually be worth watching because of acting, quality and fight scenes. If only the characters would fit in to the Star Wars Universe :/ Jedi would never behaver like that.

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад +28

      Hey Jacob! First, thanks for watching our short film and giving feedback! And yes, in the post Ruusan reformation Jedi Order, this type of behavior would not be tolerated in the least. The idea we were running with was more reflective of Jedi order that had been fighting the Sith in open warfare for decades. As is shown in the expanded Universe, the Jedi were constantly evolving with policies and approach, due to dynamic changes within the order. Close contact with the republic made the now warlike Jedi far more aggressive and militaristic in nature. The idea of Jedi Knights not acting like typical Jedi when placed into unmonitored, isolated situations is one we found intriguing. Hope that clarifies a few things!

    • @lesterwashington715
      @lesterwashington715 6 лет назад +3

      Optio Productions That's a pretty cool idea! I think if you had started your film with the classic opening story crawl setting this idea up a bit it wouldn't have felt so out of place. Awesome work tho you guys!

    • @zacharymcochran
      @zacharymcochran 6 лет назад +1

      Optio Productions LOVE this

    • @dannymoontattoos
      @dannymoontattoos 6 лет назад +2

      Optio Productions only issue is she could get pulled into the dark side...perhaps foreshadow her turn to the dark side by showing consistent behavior like this

    • @FalconWindblader
      @FalconWindblader 6 лет назад +2

      In legends, there're a class of jedi called jedi sentinels, practically deep cover agents & spies & such--ninjas of the jedi order. these jedi won't get far if there're always serene & peaceful & very reluctant to make gruesome threats. so no, quite a handful of jedi DO behave as such.

  • @thekinglymantis4434
    @thekinglymantis4434 6 лет назад +1

    This was actually fucking awesome, especially the costume design!

  • @arrahjarchi4978
    @arrahjarchi4978 4 года назад

    Disney should get all of the fan made peeps together for any Old Republic project. Great work, loved the *snap* moment. Always wondered why more Force users never did this.

  • @ryanmartin4038
    @ryanmartin4038 6 лет назад +21

    Well done! Not “well done for fan fiction” just well done! Better cinematography than Bladerunner 2049, better acting than we saw in the Twighlight saga, and a better story than anything out of a mainstream studio in years. Please, do us all a favor and keep putting out films like this! Bravo!

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад +2

      Ryan Martin What high praise! Thanks for the feedback, we plan on putting many more films out! the current film production in the works is a Harry Potter short film set in the Edwardian era, stay tuned!

    • @ryanmartin4038
      @ryanmartin4038 6 лет назад

      Optio Productions binge watching your channel. You guys are amazing.

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад

      Ryan Martin That is very kind of you to say! There are many mistakes that we have learned from in our past films, especially the mini series, "The Shades of Our Folly" but mistakes are what make you grow and improve! Thanks for your support!

    • @seabass819
      @seabass819 6 лет назад

      Ryan Martin better then the last Jedi...

    • @nunchuckerz
      @nunchuckerz 6 лет назад +1

      better than blade 2049 u mad bro

  • @googlesucks478
    @googlesucks478 6 лет назад +277

    Good work guys. I'm a picky viewer, that was literally the 3rd fanfilm that I've been able to watch and enjoy. Every other film I've turned off part of the way through. Your visuals were beautiful, the costumes were good, and the lightsaber fight was decent. Keep it up. Some of the dialogue and acting, especially near the end, could use some work.
    Please, keep filming :) You guys have potential...

    • @Aidenrdl
      @Aidenrdl 6 лет назад +2

      Must say the same.

    • @hemophagecleric
      @hemophagecleric 6 лет назад +2

      Have you seen Final Lightsaber Battle 2? These 2 are in the same league. Not many other good ones out there

    • @theomcbane7711
      @theomcbane7711 6 лет назад +2

      what have u been watching...there are a lot of good ones

    • @mollysullivan3500
      @mollysullivan3500 6 лет назад

      Wow nice job good story and everything

    • @mollysullivan3500
      @mollysullivan3500 6 лет назад

      Captain Rex oh sry I didn’t mean for that to be a reply

  • @PeezyElijah-sq9xr
    @PeezyElijah-sq9xr Месяц назад

    And Then Naming it Turn coat. Hmhmhm, Y'all should make a whole series on this. Just Freaking Amazing.

  • @johnmcaulay5938
    @johnmcaulay5938 4 года назад

    Excellent. If only Disney could do Star Wars films like this.

  • @sebastianmueller501
    @sebastianmueller501 6 лет назад +24

    Actually a good film the only thing to complain about is the lightsaberblocking at 9.25 as this sort of blocking isnt possible with sabers as the saber would just cut through the hilt of the others saber

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад +17

      5T3V3_501 We're glad you liked it! The saber pike hilt is actually made out of cortosis, allowing it to block a light saber blow!

    • @KoogleKhrome
      @KoogleKhrome 5 лет назад +4

      If it was cortosis, it would short out the lightsaber. I'm assuming you mean Phrik alloy which is a more reliable material.

    • @Pokemonfanboy95
      @Pokemonfanboy95 5 лет назад

      The1Entity I think it’s been pointed out in other comments that only pure unrefined cortosis will short but no one could use it anyway as it’s deadly without a suit

    • @kawikacortes347
      @kawikacortes347 5 лет назад +1

      the pike handle is saber resistant. its legit as far as eu goes

    • @robbi5449
      @robbi5449 5 лет назад +1

      i saw some cartoons, The Clone Wars where they use pikes and can withstand lightsaber hits withoutbeing cut in two...
      Darth Mauls saber was probably a cheap product...Sidious had to make budget cuts where he could, he was building the Death Star after all.

  • @garethl657
    @garethl657 6 лет назад +72

    I liked it for amateur work. But I wanna see a short where the sith win. bc dark side way cooler

    • @user-in3pm9de9t
      @user-in3pm9de9t 6 лет назад +10

      gareth larsson technically they did here

    • @MOOFAZAA
      @MOOFAZAA 5 лет назад +23

      Have you seen the Darth Maul fan film? It’s amazing

    • @kennedyrickert8879
      @kennedyrickert8879 5 лет назад +3

      SamRagay I was just about to suggest that

    • @alteredbeast7145
      @alteredbeast7145 5 лет назад +3

      Watch the maul film

    • @matty9365
      @matty9365 4 года назад +2

      gareth L in apprentice maul wins

  • @AgentM79
    @AgentM79 4 года назад

    Great fight choreography. Well done, and fun to watch.

  • @jweissy
    @jweissy 6 лет назад

    I think every fan movie forgets the fact that Jedi don't just go straight attacking people unless they are attacked upon first or defending themself. This dude just straight up attacked that guy.

  • @Jtvvv
    @Jtvvv 7 лет назад +17

    awesome fan film cool

  • @Britton_Thompson
    @Britton_Thompson 6 лет назад +14

    Great work, pal. You took a disciplined approach to researching & rehearsing the lightsaber duels, which paid huge dividends. The costumes were superb; visual effects were of a surprisingly high quality; the pacing was stellar; and the suspense made it impossible to look away due to the thickness hanging over the air as a result of the mystery in play here- a mystery which can only be found by reading between the lines instead of the lines themselves.
    The only noticeable flaw is the inaccurate characterization of the Star Wars mythos. "Master Rayd" couldn't possibly be a Sith since the Sith abide by the Rule of Two. The Rule of Two states that there can only ever be 2 Sith lords in the galaxy at any one time- the master, and the apprentice. Rayd's conversion to the dark side is inconsistent with established Star Wars tenets since there are already 2 Sith in the galaxy at the time this story takes place. Otherwise this is a great effort you put forth. You should take pride in such a work.

    • @hal5699
      @hal5699 6 лет назад +3

      Britton Thompson well, wasn't there a time before the rule of two in which there was a sith empire and a Jedi republic? I thought that's what they were referencing, since they referenced leaving republic space to go to sith space, the capitol of their empire being corriban. I loved it, but I had difficulty placing the time period.

    • @macavitythenardier
      @macavitythenardier 6 лет назад

      Not to mention the whole host of Force-using Sith Inquisitors during the rise of the Galactic Empire.

    • @zacharymcochran
      @zacharymcochran 6 лет назад

      Joe Schmoe yep, rule of two was instituted with Darth Bane 1000 BBY. If Korriban is still in play, it suggests the film is set in the Old Republic Era, about 4000-3700 BBY. Good comment

    • @FalconWindblader
      @FalconWindblader 6 лет назад +1

      I won't say so. darksiders DON'T always equal Sith, & the Sith can be a bunch of assholes breaking the rule of 2 from time to time. for all we know, Master Rayd could've been a mere darksider corroborating with the Sith, or hell, a Sith promising him a place in the Sith order by deciding which disciple gets the job done better.

  • @keagboy3
    @keagboy3 4 года назад +2

    Master Rayd is a Sith without any doubts. Also, I love the use of different lightsaber besides normal hilts and double-bladed lightsaber.

  • @jcmohr
    @jcmohr 4 года назад

    Finally! A lightsaber pike in a fan film! Cool to see one of them

  • @Dave_thenerd
    @Dave_thenerd 5 лет назад +7

    10:36 Why did Green Light Saber Guy suddenly go from being an incredibly skilled swordsman to blindly whipping his lightsaber back and fourth one-handed like an idiot? This video was very well done up until that part. I call plot armor.

  • @BUILDSforDRIVING
    @BUILDSforDRIVING 5 лет назад +3

    When the blind guy points and says i see him over there....i laughed so hard i pooped a little bit

  • @jbennett1391
    @jbennett1391 6 лет назад

    I like how just about every single Star Wars fan film always takes place in the woods lol.

  • @hoovy2319
    @hoovy2319 5 лет назад +1

    I notice a mixture of Foil and Saber fencing techniques in this. Nice touch

  • @epcarter6
    @epcarter6 6 лет назад +10

    Great fan film guys, will there be a sequel????

    • @bullmoosefilms7331
      @bullmoosefilms7331  6 лет назад +3

      eric carter Thank you! As of now we aren't planning on one, but who knows what the future holds!

    • @bfettrulez6734
      @bfettrulez6734 5 лет назад

      Optio Productions good job guys

  • @maxgruber278
    @maxgruber278 3 года назад +3

    What is the lightsaber the Jedi Sentinal is using in this?

  • @MegaManOLantern
    @MegaManOLantern 4 года назад

    I love the choreography! Finally! They're dodging and only clashing their blades when they absolutely have to. Great take on how the fights might actually look.

  • @rylsahawneh3662
    @rylsahawneh3662 6 лет назад +2

    Very well done! The acting was good, the special effects didn't feel like effects, and the plot kept me engaged the whole way through. I would love to know what led up to this and what happened after. You made me care about the characters. Great work, all around!

  • @mitloppas3559
    @mitloppas3559 7 лет назад +97

    Only real problems were acting and writing. Neither was perfect, but not bad for amateurs by any means

    • @Axel_Kasai
      @Axel_Kasai 6 лет назад +3

      Tim Sappol you can just say you hated the whole thing instead of beating around the bush. -_-

    • @holdenb.huffman4042
      @holdenb.huffman4042 6 лет назад +4

      The actor who played Cesario Bahn won best actor in the Asheville NC 48hr film fest this year.

    • @daltonevans3412
      @daltonevans3412 6 лет назад +4

      Kiro maybe he actually didnt hate the whole thing and was just raising the complaints he did have.

    • @celticarchie
      @celticarchie 6 лет назад +1

      Wow... you really have no sense of fun.

    • @damobeck1
      @damobeck1 6 лет назад +1

      Axel Kasai chill dude.

  • @Beatfluencer
    @Beatfluencer 4 года назад +13

    The music isn´t a good choice for Star Wars films in my opinion. But all in all it is a good work you have done! :)

  • @percusseragentk3766
    @percusseragentk3766 6 лет назад +1

    amazingly put together

  • @cjtheprop-maker
    @cjtheprop-maker 3 года назад +2

    8:16
    Woah! Force Neck Snap... Why don't we see that more often?
    People forget how much FORCE the force is capable of exerting and what that force can do to the human body.