Screenwriting Masterclass | Masters of Dialogue

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  • Опубликовано: 4 авг 2024
  • 00:00 | START
    01:25 | Jack Brislee
    01:47 | Robert McKee - 3 Rules
    04:08 | SILICON VALLEY (1)
    06:13 | Idiosyncrasy - A dialogue matrix
    07:36 | SILICON VALLEY (2)
    10:07 | V FOR VENDETTA - Alliteration
    10:42 | Robert McKee - Don't chase quotability
    11:44 | Movie Quotes
    13:55 | Qualities of Quotes
    14:35 | BETTER CALL SAUL
    16:07 | NETWORK
    18:08 | COOL HAND LUKE
    18:44 | TOY STORY 3
    19:07 | NORTH BY NORTH WEST (script + clip)
    22:40 | Tell, Don't Show
    23:34 | CHARLIE WILSON'S WAR - Dialogue Structure
    27:51 | Aaron Sorkin about the scene
    29:44 | THE SOCIAL NETWORK - Dialogue Structure
    38:32 | Aaron Sorkin about his process
    39:16 | The Dialogue Checklist
    In your view, who are the masters of dialogue for the screen?
    Quentin Tarantino? Phoebe Waller-Bridge? David Mamet?
    Here at The Story Department we have our own favourites, and we'll talk about them in this one-hour masterclass.
    We watch some great dialogue scenes, reminisce with some classic quotes, and you'll learn a few dialogue tricks along the way. We'll also analyse a few dialogue scenes for their structure, and read along with the script.
    Enjoy!
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Комментарии • 36

  • @SyvilMedia
    @SyvilMedia 6 месяцев назад +12

    I found that it's also good to note how long it took Sorkin to write The Social Network. Impeccable dialogue. Not written in a week. If you are studying and you want to write, Don't underestimate yourself. These films are not written quickly AT ALL.
    I'd imagine he went over much of the dialogue and ironed out a lot.

    • @TheStoryDepartment
      @TheStoryDepartment  6 месяцев назад +4

      100% agree with you. Beginning writers underestimate this and often deliver 1st draft dialogue.

  • @leverage3089
    @leverage3089 Год назад +12

    This is extraordinarily helpful and deserves more attention. Thank you!!

  • @landofthesilverpath5823
    @landofthesilverpath5823 11 месяцев назад +2

    When you said "let's look at some famous film quotes," I knew immediately it was going to be Arnold!

  • @SoCreate
    @SoCreate 3 года назад +5

    Great to remember that page dialogue runs longer than it's spoken. Great tips!

  • @nextinstitute7824
    @nextinstitute7824 Год назад +2

    I think this is a beginning of a beautiful friendship... Round up the usual subjects... Of all the gin joints, in all the towns, in all the world, she walks into mine... Nothing beats Casablanca 😍

  • @stealthven2352
    @stealthven2352 11 месяцев назад +1

    This was AMAZING. By far, the best video, on dialogue, on the internet

  • @AWinkAndASmile
    @AWinkAndASmile Год назад +1

    For a moment there, I was wondering which was the "bizarre" scene in Casablanca, haha, before realizing it was "bazaar." Interesting video-- thanks!

  • @nizaralzain4504
    @nizaralzain4504 Год назад +2

    amazing work!

  • @writernightly2397
    @writernightly2397 2 года назад +2

    This was incredible

  • @johnphares3358
    @johnphares3358 9 месяцев назад

    Love your classes

  • @rhaysimbana9205
    @rhaysimbana9205 3 месяца назад

    The BEST ❤

  • @impenguinpete
    @impenguinpete Год назад

    Great information and examples

  • @feeer5013
    @feeer5013 Год назад +1

    How could I get a manual on dialogue by Jack Brislee ?

    • @TheStoryDepartment
      @TheStoryDepartment  Год назад +1

      I can email it to you. Please get in touch via this page: www.thestorydepartment.com/contact-us.

    • @feeer5013
      @feeer5013 Год назад

      @@TheStoryDepartment Thanks

  • @BrianThomas
    @BrianThomas 3 месяца назад

    I realize that this is screen dialogue, but how does this apply to novel dialogue or short story dialogue? Are the techniques the same?

    • @TheStoryDepartment
      @TheStoryDepartment  3 месяца назад +1

      Thanks for your question, Brian.
      I'm not a literary expert (I do have a masters in literature and linguistics, though). But from reading great novels, I would say that novelists get away with dialogue that would be unspeakable by real people! I find it easier to make a line work in my mind than in the mouth of an actor. LOL
      You're not bound by matters of meter (rhythm and tempo) as much as you would in the dramatic arts.
      I'm keen to see if anyone else can comment with greater authority than me....
      Cheers,
      Karel

    • @BrianThomas
      @BrianThomas 3 месяца назад

      @@TheStoryDepartment Thank you so much. Your words are gold IMO. I'm curious if anyone else might be willing to chime in.

  • @markothwriter
    @markothwriter 5 месяцев назад +1

    Phoebe waller-bridge -- and I'm out.

    • @TheStoryDepartment
      @TheStoryDepartment  5 месяцев назад +1

      You mean - it's not for you?
      I get it. I have to counterbalance it with ample amounts of Yellowstone. ;)

  • @martins.muleya5742
    @martins.muleya5742 Месяц назад

    Please don't ever put phoebe waller-bridge in the same sentence as Billy wilder.

    • @TheStoryDepartment
      @TheStoryDepartment  Месяц назад

      Fair request! 😂
      It’s just for her fans who have never heard of BW.
      Cheers,
      Karel

  • @gianthills
    @gianthills Год назад +5

    the less dialogue, the better. It's not a play.

    • @oliverford5367
      @oliverford5367 9 месяцев назад +1

      Social Network would work as a stage play, but it's still a great film. Not everything is an action movie

    • @gianthills
      @gianthills 9 месяцев назад +2

      @@oliverford5367 might as well be a radio play. If a film is just talking heads there's no reason to film it.

    • @ssssssstssssssss
      @ssssssstssssssss 8 месяцев назад

      oliverford5367 Social Network was overwrought. It was all style and no substance and a big reason for that was the dialog.

    • @KSmith-pu2ge
      @KSmith-pu2ge 5 месяцев назад +1

      Not true. Depends on the scene.

    • @gianthills
      @gianthills 5 месяцев назад +2

      @@KSmith-pu2ge no matter the scene, you have to be economical with dialogue. If your scenes become to wordy it will drag the story. Film is primarily a visual medium.

  • @yaboydolphin
    @yaboydolphin Год назад +2

    I will not tolerate profanity!