Omg i love the designs!! So cute! And i love how you kept the story relatively close to original with just slight changes to make it make sense, amazing! You're so underated, new sub!
I'm personally a fan of Starlight. She's my favorite character in the show and while I don't mind her cannon backstory too much, I don't mind hearing the ideas of other people. I really like what you came up with! And the art is quite nice as well, also enjoy you rewriting Sunburst's backstory here, too! It gives both characters more depth, which I always enjoy. Very nice job!
I really liked your rewrite! It makes more sense than the original, honestly. Makes their actions seem more believable. Also, your art is very pretty! ^u^
I absolutely love your enthusiasm! You just popped up on my homepage and I'm so glad I clicked on it. I loved the edits you made to the original script. And yes, I get it's a kids show, but I wish the writers for mlp would have given it a bit more of a rocky road with more depth to the story, rather than mistake -> apologise -> Everyone happy. I can't wait to see more amazing content from you :D
This makes SO much more sense! For Starlight anyway. Sunburst’s background was somewhat ok because it seemed like he was afraid to go back home as a failure after everyone praised him & expected him to become a wizard. This in turn stops him from contacting Starlight. So yeah. A little believable. On the other hand, Starlight’s OG backstory was meh😒 Like you said, there’s trains, balloons & carriages in Equestria as well as postal service. She could’ve done any of that to contact him, but instead stays home & sulks & blames cutie marks for it. Before going super psycho on Twilight trying alter time & fuck all of the world up just to spite her. Lame. Your version gives it a meaning that helps us to better understand Starlight’s reasoning & makes Sunburst a much deeper character. I mean the show is all about friendship & making connections, but it seems they just wanted a rival for Twilight. Love this❤. Awesome😊
@@DragonessTiger OMG tysm for this comment! I’m glad that you think my rewrite makes sense for her. I really wish that their reunion was in their own episode cause all the stuff with Flurry and the Crystal Heart was very very cramped😅 but oh well lol
Oh cool! Glad to know I wasn't the only one who found Starlight's backstory a bit meh. Love the rewrite! Keep up the good work!
Omg i love the designs!! So cute! And i love how you kept the story relatively close to original with just slight changes to make it make sense, amazing!
You're so underated, new sub!
I'm personally a fan of Starlight. She's my favorite character in the show and while I don't mind her cannon backstory too much, I don't mind hearing the ideas of other people.
I really like what you came up with! And the art is quite nice as well, also enjoy you rewriting Sunburst's backstory here, too! It gives both characters more depth, which I always enjoy. Very nice job!
I really liked your rewrite! It makes more sense than the original, honestly. Makes their actions seem more believable. Also, your art is very pretty! ^u^
@@emd4361 TYSM!!! I’m really glad you enjoyed the video :3
I absolutely love your enthusiasm! You just popped up on my homepage and I'm so glad I clicked on it. I loved the edits you made to the original script. And yes, I get it's a kids show, but I wish the writers for mlp would have given it a bit more of a rocky road with more depth to the story, rather than mistake -> apologise -> Everyone happy. I can't wait to see more amazing content from you :D
Holy- you are insanely underrated- THE ART, THE WRITING, THE EVERYTHING- new sub btw
@@Cherry-soda-pop TYSM🥰
@@underbakedbeanieYou’re welcome! :D
This makes SO much more sense! For Starlight anyway.
Sunburst’s background was somewhat ok because it seemed like he was afraid to go back home as a failure after everyone praised him & expected him to become a wizard. This in turn stops him from contacting Starlight. So yeah. A little believable.
On the other hand, Starlight’s OG backstory was meh😒 Like you said, there’s trains, balloons & carriages in Equestria as well as postal service. She could’ve done any of that to contact him, but instead stays home & sulks & blames cutie marks for it. Before going super psycho on Twilight trying alter time & fuck all of the world up just to spite her. Lame.
Your version gives it a meaning that helps us to better understand Starlight’s reasoning & makes Sunburst a much deeper character. I mean the show is all about friendship & making connections, but it seems they just wanted a rival for Twilight.
Love this❤. Awesome😊
@@DragonessTiger OMG tysm for this comment! I’m glad that you think my rewrite makes sense for her.
I really wish that their reunion was in their own episode cause all the stuff with Flurry and the Crystal Heart was very very cramped😅 but oh well lol
First 16 seconds and you use a courage reference
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Thank you for fixing both backstories.
More videos like this please this was awesome
Starlight's backstory is not that good, but her character development is really good 💜✨