Honestly people don't look at the talent it takes to make a story this interesting. People listen and enjoy and go about the day. But people don't take onto account how talented and smart you need to be to make something this good. He puts quality time into content that people enjoy and that's something that people look past but that's something I can respect. This guy could write books.
finally a creepypasta that has an interesting plot and doesn't throw blood and gore in your face all the time, been quite a while since I last heard one of these.
CreepsMcPasta If you had dat iPhone with that backlite flashlight, you've would've been good the whole time. Could've used that bish as a weapon to blind the monsters and errthang. And hold up hold up Wellstar, when that Don't Starve hittin' PS Vita tho?
"Don't be mindlessly heroic." Would she have gone to get help, it would have made a huge difference. She wouldn't die, and the next people, that try to visit, wouldn't have do die ether. (But yes, now they will.)
As someone who has worked at very successful haunted houses before, you seriously shouldn't leave the group. Not just for legal reasons, or for safety since most tours are super dark, but because the ones I worked at did have legitimate haunted items in it, things with history that the owners added for atmosphere...needless to say no one worked after dark alone in them because of it, and the room they were held in I flat out refused to go in to. You never know, so just don't try to find out.
I hate how the main character manages to escape but decides to go back inside to try to "help" even tho he has nothing to defend himself with and is badly wounded... He wanted to be a wanna be hero. Fucking dumb shit main character. Good story non the less
BlackSheepNara compassionate isn't the right word. navie and stupid are better terms. WHy couldn't he atleast find a weapon? atleast a stick. How the hell is he going to help anyone when he is weak, wounded, and pretty stupid. XD
Mondo Delatorre cant... if he atleast got a weapon or atleast tried fighitng back with his fists or something than I would have some respect, but he ends up dying a coward. This isnt bravery. Its stupidity
Hades Pham while I understand an individual's mind works differently in any situation. I guess I was so pissed off that I didnt really care. (also with characters in anything horror related are anything but smart) I just hate it. If I was the main character I would have left right away. I would feel guilt for not trying to save the people but if I was baldy wounded, survived a near death experience by almost getting killed by a super fast creature that is powerful and scary. Im sure my option would be to leave and call for help
RandomExplosions Are you saying when Creeps said "Here's on I've been writing and working for a while." he is lying? I think you need to read a little more dude...
+Applekations if ur gona be a memr u dont need capitals and stuf it makes it likke a grama who thinks theyre cool cathing on (not rely) with their kids
Also, since this video is a special one, I've made the downloads free on my Patreon- MP3- www.patreon.com/creation?hid=798680 RAW- www.patreon.com/creation?hid=798681
Your stories are something to fall asleep to! In fact, they are quite relaxing! Your voice is so soothing, the music adds ambient mystery and as you listen to them while you sleep, your stories can be incorporated into your dreams! Who knows what they may lead you to in slumber! Cheers to you and your clever talents! And most of all, thank you for inviting youtubers into your world!!
robloxgamereviewer2000k oooh hahah i think its just cause i listen to these so much almost everyday so i am used to them by now hahah c: plus that candle is just cute ^~^
Your stories are always so interesting and they give me that true feeling of pure fear. The way you read them, the emotion you put into them adds a special something to them as well.
I kept yelling 'FORGET IT! DON'T BE A HERO!' but I guess a CreepyPasta ain't really a CreepyPasta unless the MC has no commonsense lol. He could've escaped and came back with help instead of going back to his own death. And for what? To save people who might've or might not have existed in the first place. I know I'm years later (so sorry!!) but Creeps, I'm in complete awe. No wonder you're so talented. The writing was simple yet beautifully descriptive, and super spooky. I can't stress how much I *_loved_* it. I'd definitely buy your book, if you ever write one.
I was listening to "The Unseen" and saw the thumbnail of this video. The thumbnail made me feel so unease. I can't focus on the story because the eyes are STARING INTO MY SOUL!
creepsmcpasta I need to know. were did you get the idea for abandoned by Disney? It was sort of based off a true story and it gives me nightmares. And can you explain part to too me beter? I didn't really under stand that part. see you real soon. your pal MICKEY
It's rare that a creepypasta ever gets my heart beating a little faster but this right here, has done just that. I tip my hat to you good sir! Keep it up. :)
My man sounds like *gaaaaasp!* he just got done *gaaaaasp!* running a mara- *gaaaaasp!* -thon. Either your narrating, your editing skills in removing your constant gasps for air, or both, have gotten better over the years by leaps and bounds. Good job.
Omg. Great story but it took me AGES to figure out that the paper background in the video said "loving moments" and not "Mooing moments." Can't unthink. Can't stop laughing.
Well, I've listened to 97 of these so far and I think that if you don't make bank with youtube stardom you should check out reading professionally. I would kill to hear all my audible books in your expert narration.
this is a impressive one creeps it gives a atmosphere that feels so dread filled and it gave me chills at several points i really love the way you do you readings your accent really adds a strange yet really effective emphasis on just the right spots KEEP THE TERROR COMING MAN
I think that the ones you write are top notch Creeps. Very well written and atmospheric. And as always, wonderful narration. Keep it up, you're doing great :)
Enjoy your writing CreepsMcPasta. I’m so happy you are in this work still years after this particular McPasta was produced. Your voice could read the phone book very proper😽
This is an excellent story. It's brilliantly written, perfectly paced, very original and creative, and terrifying. You've certainly got talent, and I'm not just saying that, I'm not one of those people who give out false compliments.
Not bad, your a great writer. Love your videos, especially the penal ones (even though you didn't write them I respect the fact that you have the time to narrate it)
I think that's the very reason he should. The suspense is rad in a good, long Creepypasta. Summarizing this Creepypasta and making it shorter, wouldn't have been the same.
Holy heck this was always one of my favorites, these are the glory days of creepy pastas, 100k+ views on average. Hats off to @CreepsMcpasta for still giving us fresh uploads daily. You are an absolute legend and I’ll listen to these until you decide to move on from this(hopefully never 😂) remember your OG fans still love and follow your channel 🖤🫡
Ya did good. I like this one. I enjoy the variety of longer and shorter stories. I especially like the fact 1/3 of it wasn't backstory and how the grass smelled and looked on his 2nd birthday like Stephen King does, which is still my favorite author.
That was one of the best creepy pastas I've ever heard I wasn't exactly afraid but captivated completely and constantly hoped the man would escape the ending was amazing and I agree you should totally write more often you have a real talent +creepsmcpasta
Sequel To Gameboy; I'm Alone. I ended up here. In this place. To my point of view, I see... "The Dark". I'm not in California or Tennessee... But I'm in a loacaition that, doesn't seem to show up on " Google Maps". I am not seeming to get ANY Messages from my friends and,... I don't seem to,get any answers from calls I try to get to,them. I'm just gonna stop talk....oh no.... (Crying) Please! Please! Ah!!!!!!!!!!!
The first 2 minutes of this CP explain *EXACTLY* what we all here think about CreepsMcPasta's narrations and the type of things we do while listening (ie roadtrips and going to sleep) Great Story Tho!!
Dude not even kidding this is my absolute FAVORITE creepypasta you should write more they actually have good stories wich others really lack lately except for 1999 that has a pretty good story but yourse is the best:)
It creates a nice, claustrophobic, creepy mood. But, some things do bother me. 1. Did he forget his phone, when protecting the candle? Even older phones produce enough, stable, light, to not fall down the stairs. 2. Hadn't he mindlessly tried to be a hero (and thinking, that he alone is better than a whole group), he wouldn't have to die AND he could have saved dozens, maybe hundreds of people! The people who will come to the house in the future. It was so stupid, to be honest, (a minute before he hoped for medical help for his barely functioning body, but then he runs back..) that it smells a bit like "because of plot". ^^'
i love the little mushroom candle lol
lol yeah stiil iwas yelling use youre phone dumbass xD
thanks you Kayla :3
Am I the only one who thought it was a weird shoe
I love u ❤️
i want it it's adorable!!!
and what was the real lesson: Follow the tour guide
Redem10 but if he did he would have got stuck In the basement as well
least he wont be stuck in the basement alone...and he wouldn't be cut and bruised :/
:/
bump
Actually, it was, “Don’t leave things in the fridge.”
Oh wait, no, that’s Cowboy Bebop.
Honestly people don't look at the talent it takes to make a story this interesting. People listen and enjoy and go about the day. But people don't take onto account how talented and smart you need to be to make something this good. He puts quality time into content that people enjoy and that's something that people look past but that's something I can respect. This guy could write books.
True. People often don't acknowledge that content creators are still regular people.
finally a creepypasta that has an interesting plot and doesn't throw blood and gore in your face all the time, been quite a while since I last heard one of these.
The reason is because he was the one who wrote them.
Do you really think this happened, he narrated it and he wrote it
Ron DaBoss it says in the description
So you don’t like hotchip?
If he had his phone why was he worried about the candle going out?
You've obviously not seen my phone... XD
CreepsMcPasta An old nokia?
CreepsMcPasta If you had dat iPhone with that backlite flashlight, you've would've been good the whole time. Could've used that bish as a weapon to blind the monsters and errthang. And hold up hold up Wellstar, when that Don't Starve hittin' PS Vita tho?
CreepsMcPasta if you were in that situation, you could just sooth the monster to sleep with your voice.
This is not sorta scary it's just the timing is perfect that I'm crapping my pants
I would've just nope'd out of there.
Seriously.
I would've guessed the people would be dead.
Yeah escape and then get help for everyone. Now he's stuck there
Plus, the next group will die too. He didn't even help those.
Yup! Nope nope nope 👎🏻 nope nope
This one is one of the best CPs I've heard in a while! Haven't had a good high-action pasta like this since Fenton Woods and The Skin Walker!
Cp is not the best term
best CP? i'm calling the cops
so the moral of the story is "don't be a hero" ?
Throgdar The Brute Don't enter sketchy old houses
XD
The moral is to stick with the tour guide
"Don't be mindlessly heroic."
Would she have gone to get help, it would have made a huge difference. She wouldn't die, and the next people, that try to visit, wouldn't have do die ether. (But yes, now they will.)
As someone who has worked at very successful haunted houses before, you seriously shouldn't leave the group. Not just for legal reasons, or for safety since most tours are super dark, but because the ones I worked at did have legitimate haunted items in it, things with history that the owners added for atmosphere...needless to say no one worked after dark alone in them because of it, and the room they were held in I flat out refused to go in to. You never know, so just don't try to find out.
I FRICKIN LOVE IT WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR OWN.
scariest part is that he's out 10 dollars.
DexterousCobra 10 pounds
$12.90 = £10
@@kacihill4643 3$ is quite the sum 😏
@@kacihill4643 no actually $18.25 = £10
Or $17.94
I hate how the main character manages to escape but decides to go back inside to try to "help" even tho he has nothing to defend himself with and is badly wounded... He wanted to be a wanna be hero. Fucking dumb shit main character. Good story non the less
Spoiler alert...
BlackSheepNara compassionate isn't the right word. navie and stupid are better terms. WHy couldn't he atleast find a weapon? atleast a stick. How the hell is he going to help anyone when he is weak, wounded, and pretty stupid. XD
give him credit he was brave but stupid still brave though
Mondo Delatorre cant... if he atleast got a weapon or atleast tried fighitng back with his fists or something than I would have some respect, but he ends up dying a coward. This isnt bravery. Its stupidity
Hades Pham while I understand an individual's mind works differently in any situation. I guess I was so pissed off that I didnt really care. (also with characters in anything horror related are anything but smart) I just hate it. If I was the main character I would have left right away. I would feel guilt for not trying to save the people but if I was baldy wounded, survived a near death experience by almost getting killed by a super fast creature that is powerful and scary. Im sure my option would be to leave and call for help
You really should write more, this one is incredible.
He doesn't write these. He merely reads them.
RandomExplosions Are you saying when Creeps said "Here's on I've been writing and working for a while." he is lying? I think you need to read a little more dude...
RandomExplosions look at the descriptions, he did
When ever he said "Welcome stranger are you here for the tour?" did anyone secretly wish for the voice that goes with "What're ya buyin?""
+Applekations "Ahhhh, I'll buy it at a high price"
Taylor Bivens Yeaaaaah Boiiii!
+Applekations if ur gona be a memr
u dont need capitals and stuf
it makes it likke a grama who thinks theyre cool cathing on (not rely) with their kids
Applekations yas
+unnamed lol okay but I have to be honest, I didn't understand what your last message was trying to convey.
this title should be
"Don't be an idiot and go exploring in haunted houses"
I could imagine a chav version of this.
"Oi u wanna get botled m8?"
Pmsl😂😂
lmfao 😂
Holy shit I found the story again lol
Innit fam
"hastily made my way DOWNTOWN WALKING FAST FACES PASSING IM HOME BOUND!!!"
I was thinking the exact same thing!!! XD
"Nope-ing my way down town , running fast, because something is behind me.." (tm)
Bradley Bayer Use punctuation. Will help ya in the future, kiddo
And I’m running
something’s chasing
I think the title should be 'don't help people'
xD
I know if I'd of escape and I did not know those people I'd of left so fast lol.
The entire tour group and the tour guide weren't real.
That's the moral for most Creepy Pastas lol.
@G Robinson hehe
that final part "it has won" makes me shiver
Also, since this video is a special one, I've made the downloads free on my Patreon-
MP3- www.patreon.com/creation?hid=798680
RAW- www.patreon.com/creation?hid=798681
Hey creeps I'm going to start writing pastas how can u send some to you
I not u autocorrect sucks
I love all your story's :) some of them give me chills, I'm a fan of your channel :) 👌👍
The house will be the end of all of us
what time do you livestream?
Good job CreepsMcPasta! You should definitely start writing more often and continue sharing your talent with the world.
This is easily one of my favorite creepypastas, just from the feeling of tension that kept me on edge. Props to you, Creeps :)
Such an adorable mushroom candle ^^
this is brilliant but the thought of being in such an enclosed space scares me more due to being claustrophobic haha.
96 People were so frightened they panicked and pressed the dislike button.
111
112
115
Mya Luvalot you scared me!! I was reading a book i was on page 115 then your comment came up saying 115! I need to write a creepypasta about this..
Broken Doll Omg!! That's crazy! Lol!!
Your stories are something to fall asleep to! In fact, they are quite relaxing! Your voice is so soothing, the music adds ambient mystery and as you listen to them while you sleep, your stories can be incorporated into your dreams! Who knows what they may lead you to in slumber! Cheers to you and your clever talents! And most of all, thank you for inviting youtubers into your world!!
that lil candle is so cute :o
:33
i wish i could just think like you
robloxgamereviewer2000k sarcasm?
Madison Haley no cuz ur lik listening to a creepypasta and all you're thinking about is a candle lol and im here shitting myself
robloxgamereviewer2000k oooh hahah i think its just cause i listen to these so much almost everyday so i am used to them by now hahah c: plus that candle is just cute ^~^
lol how dafuq do u have so many views on google plus
Your stories are always so interesting and they give me that true feeling of pure fear. The way you read them, the emotion you put into them adds a special something to them as well.
thought you were gonna say "making my way downTOWN, WALKING FAST."
I kept yelling 'FORGET IT! DON'T BE A HERO!' but I guess a CreepyPasta ain't really a CreepyPasta unless the MC has no commonsense lol. He could've escaped and came back with help instead of going back to his own death. And for what? To save people who might've or might not have existed in the first place.
I know I'm years later (so sorry!!) but Creeps, I'm in complete awe. No wonder you're so talented. The writing was simple yet beautifully descriptive, and super spooky. I can't stress how much I *_loved_* it. I'd definitely buy your book, if you ever write one.
@ gave it another listen. I have no idea why I had such impression back then.
Love the way you read these, mad props Creeps.
I was listening to "The Unseen" and saw the thumbnail of this video. The thumbnail made me feel so unease. I can't focus on the story because the eyes are STARING INTO MY SOUL!
Livestream tonight, details here- LIVESTREAM + UPDATE
creepsmcpasta I need to know. were did you get the idea for abandoned by Disney? It was sort of based off a true story and it gives me nightmares. And can you explain part to too me beter? I didn't really under stand that part. see you real soon. your pal MICKEY
Keegan Schaner I meant part 2~
Keegan Schaner He doesnt write these, he reads them off of the creepypasta wiki
LegitAverageZombie1 he writes some, like this one, and hes really good
LegitAverageZombie1 description m8
It's rare that a creepypasta ever gets my heart beating a little faster but this right here, has done just that. I tip my hat to you good sir! Keep it up. :)
I like the candle, and the story.
i imagine the tour guy sounding like the merchiant from re4
***** I've got some GOOD things on sale stranger
That somehow put a dirty image in my mind. O_o
vargas mordor what are ya buying?
ahh i'll buy it at a high price
😂😂
I like that candle it makes the set look surreal
My man sounds like *gaaaaasp!* he just got done *gaaaaasp!* running a mara- *gaaaaasp!* -thon.
Either your narrating, your editing skills in removing your constant gasps for air, or both, have gotten better over the years by leaps and bounds. Good job.
"While making my way-" MAKING MY WAY DOWN TOWN WALKING FAST FACES PASS AND I'M HOME BOUND
Omg. Great story but it took me AGES to figure out that the paper background in the video said "loving moments" and not "Mooing moments." Can't unthink. Can't stop laughing.
The First Ever Creepy pasta character thats not a bitch.
There was a guy in one that was call Rick Steel one of the most bad ass names and then died like a bitch.
xGigaFootx Oh god. Don't remind me.
***** It has a Female dog in it?
Try "Fenter Woods"
Well, I've listened to 97 of these so far and I think that if you don't make bank with youtube stardom you should check out reading professionally. I would kill to hear all my audible books in your expert narration.
YES!
Oh gods yes, he's got a great reading voice and it could definitely be put to good use in audiobooks.
I really liked this one! You did a lovely job, well-done!
Great story! I love you work CreepMcPasta! This story was great. No gore- no violence. Just a good creepy story
That candle is so tiny! Awwww
I want 20
I WANT A MILLION OF THEM.
this is a impressive one creeps it gives a atmosphere that feels so dread filled and it gave me chills at several points i really love the way you do you readings your accent really adds a strange yet really effective emphasis on just the right spots KEEP THE TERROR COMING MAN
This story should be called "What Not To Do In A Haunted House"
that candle is awesome
Does anyone find his voice to be soothing like even though the stories are scary as heck his voice soothes me when im down. He is awesome
I think that the ones you write are top notch Creeps. Very well written and atmospheric. And as always, wonderful narration. Keep it up, you're doing great :)
You are an excellent writer. 10/10 would suffer nightmares again.
Hey, woah, this was one of the few pastas I refused to finish (but did eventually) and I have to say: GJ Creeps.
The thing is... The title says "don't go to haunted house tours" but it should really be "don't go away from your group in haunted house tours" lol
Everyone died...
Enjoy your writing CreepsMcPasta. I’m so happy you are in this work still years after this particular McPasta was produced. Your voice could read the phone book very proper😽
"Free the others" lmfao. Absolutely not lol.
this is my all time favorite creepypasta. i cant believe ive been listening to you for 7 years now. love you creeps
that candle is adorable
This is an excellent story. It's brilliantly written, perfectly paced, very original and creative, and terrifying. You've certainly got talent, and I'm not just saying that, I'm not one of those people who give out false compliments.
All I hear is the merchant from Resident Evil 4 when I hear the "hello, stranger!"
What're ya buyin?
That candle is just adorable
i like that mushroom candle. i want one.
That was amazing! It left me with chills XD great work! And amazing narrator skills too :)
Title should be why you follow the tour guide.
I absolutely love this, gave me chill and some dread while you read it!
yayyyyyyy keep up the good work man looking forward to the next video
Your brother is being burnt alive in the vid.
lets hope so ............. but wait im a only child
Not bad, your a great writer.
Love your videos, especially the penal ones (even though you didn't write them I respect the fact that you have the time to narrate it)
You probably don't write too often because when you do the story is half an hour long lmfao
Angelo Roessner Read the description .
Francis Lecouteur Okay
You think you're joking but it's actually true. Another one I've written will be about 40-50 minutes long :S
CreepsMcPasta O.O
I think that's the very reason he should. The suspense is rad in a good, long Creepypasta. Summarizing this Creepypasta and making it shorter, wouldn't have been the same.
Holy heck this was always one of my favorites, these are the glory days of creepy pastas, 100k+ views on average. Hats off to @CreepsMcpasta for still giving us fresh uploads daily. You are an absolute legend and I’ll listen to these until you decide to move on from this(hopefully never 😂) remember your OG fans still love and follow your channel 🖤🫡
"Taken to another world within the soothing voice of the narrator..."
Art imitates life, I suppose?
I remember the Haunted House Tour at Disney World. I loved it so much, and it was pretty creepy.
12:24 turn on captions
dude that's gold
ikr
lol
Actions don't work for me what did it say
XD
Ya did good. I like this one. I enjoy the variety of longer and shorter stories. I especially like the fact 1/3 of it wasn't backstory and how the grass smelled and looked on his 2nd birthday like Stephen King does, which is still my favorite author.
that mushroom candle doe o3o
I'm addicted to this channel
I love your voice Creeps, I'm not even kidding XD
+Mittens Loves MC your wired
WILLIAM HARDIN *you're
I know right!!!
@@williamhardin4699 yes hes wired :/ haha 3 years later and this comment and how u spelt weird wrong still made me laugh. That takes skill
This is a splendid job, great story to start off the day for me.
That's one cute ass candle
I love the candle you have for light.
Tell me why I was eating Takis and listening to this and suddenly they got much hotter.
Your brain
Dude where do you get those?
Ugh I look for them all the time and I never fine them -_- and thanks
Don't worry just look for them in any place that looks Mexican I know because I'm Hispanic
Kaylee Ann dollar tree sells them
I love that mushroom candle
Pretty good story and in my opinion if I was in that situation I would have left instead of gone back
0:55 Listening to CreepsMcPasta, MrCreepyPasta and CreepyPastaJr be like
Really good story, but couldn't he have used his phone for light? lol
That was one of the best creepy pastas I've ever heard I wasn't exactly afraid but captivated completely and constantly hoped the man would escape the ending was amazing and I agree you should totally write more often you have a real talent +creepsmcpasta
I would never pay 17 dollars for a haunted house tour, haha. Went I went to Salem MA, they had some good ones though.
the candle is SO TINY aaaaaaah its so smol creeps, but it don't never melt
Sequel To Gameboy;
I'm Alone.
I ended up here.
In this place.
To my point of view, I see...
"The Dark".
I'm not in California or Tennessee...
But I'm in a loacaition that, doesn't seem to show up
on " Google Maps".
I am not seeming to get ANY Messages from my friends
and,... I don't seem to,get any answers from calls I try to get
to,them. I'm just gonna stop talk....oh no....
(Crying) Please! Please! Ah!!!!!!!!!!!
24:20 Battered and bruised and he still wants to save these silent douchebags?! He must have had a heart of gold...fool's gold!
that ways the best creepypasta EVER!!! I LOVE YOU!!XD
Quite an unnerving story. You're quite the storyteller, Mr. Pasta.
Grey house? Lady Grey? COME ON
Definitely keep up the writing! Awesome story.
I got out im okay I should go back for the rest he says *FUCK THAT SHIT RUN RUN FOR YOUR SKINLESS KNEE LIFE*
The first 2 minutes of this CP explain *EXACTLY* what we all here think about CreepsMcPasta's narrations and the type of things we do while listening (ie roadtrips and going to sleep)
Great Story Tho!!
i love your voice creeps
Dude not even kidding this is my absolute FAVORITE creepypasta you should write more they actually have good stories wich others really lack lately except for 1999 that has a pretty good story but yourse is the best:)
Hi I speak proper grammerz. When mommy make potato I be happy.
DIE POTATO
"Potato" "nooooooo"
+Ben 21 NUUUUUUUUUUE!!!!!
+Festive Kitty 224 not today
+Festive Kitty 224 You english good. Want to hiking?
BOi
It creates a nice, claustrophobic, creepy mood.
But, some things do bother me.
1. Did he forget his phone, when protecting the candle? Even older phones produce enough, stable, light, to not fall down the stairs.
2. Hadn't he mindlessly tried to be a hero (and thinking, that he alone is better than a whole group), he wouldn't have to die AND he could have saved dozens, maybe hundreds of people! The people who will come to the house in the future.
It was so stupid, to be honest, (a minute before he hoped for medical help for his barely functioning body, but then he runs back..) that it smells a bit like "because of plot". ^^'
i work at a haunted house, so this is perfect for me
One of the best I've heard so far. Love it!