FAQ: Q: "oh i dont like x i prefer y from v1 it should do z" A: This is a work in progress, meaning we are still developing it! As stated in the description, we value your feedback as long as it is constructive :) Q: When is this releasing? A: When it is ready. My role in development has temporarily halted due to personal reasons on my end, so it is up to the other two co-directors to keep people working. Q: Why is this unlisted? A: Same personal reasons as I am on a break from working on the mod. I decided to keep this unlisted instead of privating it outright due to the video being so popular, and that I can use it when applying to mods.
Makoto's note section shouldn't appear at all until he actually starts singing, and when he does, his notes abruptly appear out of nowhere (or he steals your notes you were originally going to press, cutting you off), so it gives the player the feeling this song doesn't have an opponent, until you see him.
The song already does give you the feeling of someone being there, this is a nmi mod. And plus cutting the kid off and getting some random notes out of nowhere is already too generic, I'd imagine it'd be a cluster fuck of code just to add one detail to the first 30 seconds of the 4 minute song. Both note section being on stage makes a lot more sense, as long there is a feeling of "who is there?" Rather than "WHAT is there?". Based on my experience, I believe...
everything about this is so good at reflecting such a strong feeling of fear and panic. great work to all of you. i like the corridor perspective effect you added when the song transitions. it helps add to that feeling, like you're looking into a bottomless pit. maybe you could exaggerate the depth of the room on the zoom-in so it feels more intimidating during NMI's lines? or maybe you could animate the spiral effect or make it more like the giygas battle in Earthbound so it feels more like your eyes are being sucked in and the world is melting around you also i think the note contrast could be improved slightly, would make it a bit easier to read them while the bg is also dark-red
@@usb_port_2 i think the note art looks cool. just making the png brighter might make them pop more. if you need help though i'd love to offer. i've done haxe coding, animation, noteskins, etc. so feel free to reach out and i can send examples. i am pretty busy atm but this is so awesome no pressure though. i wish you luck
The timer seems a wee bit pointless in this, but a thought does come to mind. Either around when NMI is revealed, or at the end of the video, the clock starts slowly ticking backwards counter-clockwise to symbolize how you're slowly running out of time. I dunno, a dumb idea, but could be good.
When I originally started redoing the original Deathbed code I had that, I didn't do it here since this isn't the full song and I cba to time the clock perfectly for a small WIP
@@usb_port_2might I suggest adding this clock as a sort of fake out thingamajig? Like at the start of the song the clock seems like it's near the end, but when NMI eventually stops disguising as Makoto, the clock hands suddenly spring back into the actual length of the song
if I can be honest I think the vhs effect should stay for the rest of the song. The way the screen effect increases as the bip of the heart monitor happens only to shrink down really adds to the visual. Also how it moves slightly with the lyrics. Makes it as if our vision if getting distorted from the effort of us singing and from our heart beating. Idk just think it looks cool. Also in v1 of this song NMI would only be distorted visually as it zoomed in. That looked really cool and with the whole like spiral effect behind him I think it would look very cool here as well.
ehhh, the vhs effect works for the beginning cuz u just woke up from a sickness so ur vision is blurry. Ig because of the protag facing a literal demon, the blurry vision goes away cuz of the adrenaline kicking in
kinda a terrifying situation, imagine being almost killed by a sonic game and then being transported to the hospital, only for the entity to change its exact looks to one of a loved one, perfectly doing so as it tries to trick you.
"Things will change according to your feedbak" IT'S ALREADY PERFECT WHAT DO YOU MEAN?! IT GIVES THE SAME VIBES AS THE V1, I LOVE IT!! Seriously though, as someone who gets attached to V1s and usually prefers them to future versions, I have to say that "Flatline" seems incredible so far
I think the new transition is nice but i did like how the old one made it feel like you were fading in and out of consciousness also the v1 timer looks better than the clock imo
This is what got me to drawing creepy stuff cuz that looks so cool and fire, also the alts between the notes are just too good. Other mods HAVE to do that (oh and also someone should add lyrics)
@@senbicheMakoto didn't exist until a fan was a little concerned, like, "nah, this bald human form is ugly, I will make one better" And then Makoto appeared, even the creator itself of NMI liked, so he did it canon
About the song. I love how this sounds. The beginning feels like such a huge improvement compared to V1. Surprised how that got topped in the first place. Im curious to see how the final product will sound like.
As you lay on your hospital bed alone... A strange figure appears in front of you... You don't know who it is, but you feel something is off from him. ... Wait... That face... That face appeared while i was playing Sonic 2...
okay so heres my critique, deathbed v1 is way better then this imo cause of giving a better vibe of almost dying and being in panic as well as being more a specialized at being frightening then at being a banger which i loved alot. This Song absolutely got the "the end" treatment from marios madness. Both the end v1 and deathbed v1 are my favorite fnf songs to ever exist. I as a playtester of games and fnf mods also wanted to say to the v1 that it was absolutely perfect and didnt need anything making it better besides: the border around the notes and the health system ui, the border around the notes was just well a singular red line which is easily fixable but here in v2 it got removed and the background of the fight is also now a hypno thingy which really doesnt make it seem scary at all and also destroys the atmosphere, the health system has the problem of it being just some rectangle thats moving which looks kinda bad imo, this is fixable by making the rectangle one color on one side and another color on the other side (i would recommend black on the corrupted side and red on the normal side). And from what i read deathbed v1 will still be in the freeplay which doesnt really make me more happy as i want a good atmosphere playing a mod and not just some song thats not scary at all cause of the goofy background and the music that sounds like its some extreme dubstep going through the story mode. I hope you read through this and maybe take some of my critique as a playtester Wish you good luck with your mod and have a nice day :) UPDATE: looking at the v2 a lil closer i somehow just now noticed that nmi's notes are visible now making it more fnf which i dont find to be that good in a horror mod like this where the atmosphere is to be frightened. I like the v1 more cause of not being able to know what nmi is going to drop next making it seem more scary and mysterious. UPDATE 2: i also somehow forgot to mention that the song itself also seems more broken then remixed. compared to the v1 it makes it seem missing something (NOTE: that could just be me) UPDATE 3: i love the zoom and the silence while zooming before the transformation the background is the only thing making it seem goofy
I would also love to be a playtester in your mod seeing that you have so much amazing ideas of songs which may completely flip over the fnf horror mods again. I already looked over all songs of the mod i could find here and yt and omg i love them so much including this one despite the v2 being kinda meh
Idk if this is it, it’s good but the original felt so much better in my opinion. The original had an amazing feeling that went with its original instrumental
Can you guys pls bring back the time thing when NMI changes to demonic form. It adds up the tense kind of feeling, its like you should be dead now, but this Demon will never let that happen. Not even death can save us
I enjoy the effects whenever nmi speaks, but I really feel this is a slight downgrade to v1, don't get me wrong, its very clear that it simply isn't my cup of tea, I don't like the instrumental having more of a slow feel, although the new instruments added in makes up for it, and then it doesn't have the same intensity in terms of the instrumental, and I am quite sad about nmi's transformation during the blackout being leftout, but its still a wip so who knows, but onto the good stuff, y'all killed it with the new vocals, they have more emotion, loving nmi new vocals, and oh man the effects whenever its nmi turn, makes him a lot more overwhelming and intimidating.
This is a WIP of the song's audio too (only what is shown here is done so far), and the transformation was left out due to it looking awkward in game But we will definitely aim to perfect this in the future!
i liked it better when you could consistently see the kid at the beginning and *then* starts with the face twisting. therefore the question of "who is this guy" and "what is this guy" are spaced out more instead of just giving the twist a second after the guy is shown
Mediocrity the mod that keeps getting better Alright now fix his 2nd phase sprites, the down sprite looks amazing but i think the rest could use some work (left can use it the most)
In my personal opinion, a TINY bit of bass would add so much, not too much to the point where its like a regular fnf song, and he should sing a little bit deeper sometimes. Thats just me tho
@@mistorbear i see what you mean but I meant like either the heart monitor having a different beep, like the GSAF having a lower pitched distorted noise when you die in the full version
Honestly, I think i vastly prefer V1 currently. I just really liked the sort of slow and eerie vibe of the first one. Either way it still looks beautiful.
This is really cool, but I actually kind of perfer V1. V1 had a sense of sadness and as if your life was at its final moments. the timer especially reflected this with the text saying "time left" I'm not really sure why it needed a V2, i think V1 perfected deathbed and everything about it.
FAQ:
Q: "oh i dont like x i prefer y from v1 it should do z"
A: This is a work in progress, meaning we are still developing it! As stated in the description, we value your feedback as long as it is constructive :)
Q: When is this releasing?
A: When it is ready. My role in development has temporarily halted due to personal reasons on my end, so it is up to the other two co-directors to keep people working.
Q: Why is this unlisted?
A: Same personal reasons as I am on a break from working on the mod. I decided to keep this unlisted instead of privating it outright due to the video being so popular, and that I can use it when applying to mods.
I'm pretty much the only one listening to this song on the daily now
It's got me in a chokehold help
@@Mrflinflock thats the copius amounts of heroine we put in the mod
@@usb_port_2if this song is heroin then call me a drug addict cus I'm doing this all day
>oh i dont like x i prefer y from v1 it should do z
no way ppl think this
@@s_capenoisetbh i don't mind what the devs change
They be cookin and I'll eat it up straight away
ain't no way you are gonna make me rap on my death bed bruh💀
LOL THATS CRAZY
i love mods that have alts for each arrow
Yeah, also the chance of Makoto having an alt animation increases throughout his section
Makoto's note section shouldn't appear at all until he actually starts singing, and when he does, his notes abruptly appear out of nowhere (or he steals your notes you were originally going to press, cutting you off), so it gives the player the feeling this song doesn't have an opponent, until you see him.
genius idea. Do this.
The song already does give you the feeling of someone being there, this is a nmi mod.
And plus cutting the kid off and getting some random notes out of nowhere is already too generic, I'd imagine it'd be a cluster fuck of code just to add one detail to the first 30 seconds of the 4 minute song.
Both note section being on stage makes a lot more sense, as long there is a feeling of "who is there?" Rather than "WHAT is there?". Based on my experience, I believe...
Holy fuck I love his voice
And the way his human form twitches between normal and disturbing is awesome
yeah dude his vocals and sprites are genuinely amazing
The healthbar being a heartbeat monitor is a pretty clever detail
The suspense at 1:05. gave me chills. The mod looks great so far!
'' You are not fighting to win. You are fighting to survive. ''
happy almost half a million to the original deathbed video and fnf 4th birthday
still wondering why i cant join the server for it,
everything about this is so good at reflecting such a strong feeling of fear and panic. great work to all of you.
i like the corridor perspective effect you added when the song transitions. it helps add to that feeling, like you're looking into a bottomless pit. maybe you could exaggerate the depth of the room on the zoom-in so it feels more intimidating during NMI's lines? or maybe you could animate the spiral effect or make it more like the giygas battle in Earthbound so it feels more like your eyes are being sucked in and the world is melting around you
also i think the note contrast could be improved slightly, would make it a bit easier to read them while the bg is also dark-red
Yeah we have literally no noteskin artists rn 😅
@@usb_port_2 i think the note art looks cool. just making the png brighter might make them pop more.
if you need help though i'd love to offer. i've done haxe coding, animation, noteskins, etc. so feel free to reach out and i can send examples. i am pretty busy atm but this is so awesome
no pressure though. i wish you luck
The timer seems a wee bit pointless in this, but a thought does come to mind. Either around when NMI is revealed, or at the end of the video, the clock starts slowly ticking backwards counter-clockwise to symbolize how you're slowly running out of time. I dunno, a dumb idea, but could be good.
When I originally started redoing the original Deathbed code I had that, I didn't do it here since this isn't the full song and I cba to time the clock perfectly for a small WIP
@@usb_port_2might I suggest adding this clock as a sort of fake out thingamajig?
Like at the start of the song the clock seems like it's near the end, but when NMI eventually stops disguising as Makoto, the clock hands suddenly spring back into the actual length of the song
if I can be honest I think the vhs effect should stay for the rest of the song. The way the screen effect increases as the bip of the heart monitor happens only to shrink down really adds to the visual. Also how it moves slightly with the lyrics. Makes it as if our vision if getting distorted from the effort of us singing and from our heart beating. Idk just think it looks cool. Also in v1 of this song NMI would only be distorted visually as it zoomed in. That looked really cool and with the whole like spiral effect behind him I think it would look very cool here as well.
ehhh, the vhs effect works for the beginning cuz u just woke up from a sickness so ur vision is blurry. Ig because of the protag facing a literal demon, the blurry vision goes away cuz of the adrenaline kicking in
I just finished showing my friend the v1 song for the first time and then this comes out a few hours later on the same day. what are the damn odds
i love you markiplier❤🔥🧑🚒🧑🚒
wat. what's this meant to mean..
Wait you calling inoccence mark?
@@ReallastnameisHowardHe kinda looks like Markiplier in his first phase
@@MisterFazzy I'm seeing it now and he kinda does
I thinks its ment to be a joke about the image of mark in the hospital
@@ProjectJaxs🎉
honestly bro, it didn;t need a v2. V1 sounds perfect as it is. at least it'll still be playable
can't wait for the full release of this masterpiece
In 0:38, makotos note can be seen, make it so when he starts singing that first note doesn't appear so it doesn't ruin when he shows up 🙏
who is makoto?
@@senbicheguy in the suit
@@Contrastalits no more innocence dude
@@senbiche 😭🙏
@@whathow_122 sir are you BLIND
I love the new changes on dis song
Idc what anyone else says :D
Cat Zena
Friendship ended with deathbed v1.5 now Flatline is my best friend
kinda a terrifying situation, imagine being almost killed by a sonic game and then being transported to the hospital, only for the entity to change its exact looks to one of a loved one, perfectly doing so as it tries to trick you.
"Things will change according to your feedbak"
IT'S ALREADY PERFECT WHAT DO YOU MEAN?! IT GIVES THE SAME VIBES AS THE V1, I LOVE IT!!
Seriously though, as someone who gets attached to V1s and usually prefers them to future versions, I have to say that "Flatline" seems incredible so far
I think the new transition is nice but i did like how the old one made it feel like you were fading in and out of consciousness
also the v1 timer looks better than the clock imo
Is it me or is the fact that the way how they drew/made the guy in normal to creepy actually pretty good/fire
fnf fans when a mod has good art
@@usb_port_2 replace all sprites with jonkler pls 🙏
This is what got me to drawing creepy stuff cuz that looks so cool and fire, also the alts between the notes are just too good. Other mods HAVE to do that (oh and also someone should add lyrics)
you took my bbg makoto stare rizz section noooooo
who is makoto?
@@senbiche NMI's human form I think
bbg makoto rizz section
@@senbicheMakoto didn't exist until a fan was a little concerned, like, "nah, this bald human form is ugly, I will make one better"
And then Makoto appeared, even the creator itself of NMI liked, so he did it canon
God I love this kind of art style so much.
This is awesome!!
ive been non-stop listening to this ever since it was out, so peak...
0:38 still my fav part
Interesting. Some neat subtleties to the instrumental that I like. Curious to hear the rest.
how tf did yall make this shit more fire than it already was
The is like the second boss phase to v1. I am psyched to see it out in full.
The song is amazing, good job sopas
About the song. I love how this sounds. The beginning feels like such a huge improvement compared to V1. Surprised how that got topped in the first place. Im curious to see how the final product will sound like.
ooohh this gonna be sooo gooood
As you lay on your hospital bed alone... A strange figure appears in front of you... You don't know who it is, but you feel something is off from him.
...
Wait... That face... That face appeared while i was playing Sonic 2...
That’s awesome
Eating good wit this 🗣️🔥🔥🔥
you know its a good fnf mod when it has a teaser
This is somehow even Better than the V1, the vocals are so much better oh my gawd
FUCKING BEAUTIFUL MAKOTO AS USUAL
The look itself is to die for
Sopas cooked something amazing today 🗣🔥
This is so good I need it!!!
Hearing this song with headphone is really nice
This is what i feel like when signing terms and conditions
Is the mod actually cancelled? Saw it from tack’s title and description and now I’m sad :((
Yeah
dw something playable will be released though
I honestly think the player vocals sounded better v1 for the most part mainly bc some of the actual samples sound off
PRETTY COOL
HOT tbh
YO it looks and sounds better!
this is actually terrifying
I love this
Its awesome :)))
The clock could stop after the transition then spin like crazy during the last segment
okay so heres my critique, deathbed v1 is way better then this imo cause of giving a better vibe of almost dying and being in panic as well as being more a specialized at being frightening then at being a banger which i loved alot. This Song absolutely got the "the end" treatment from marios madness. Both the end v1 and deathbed v1 are my favorite fnf songs to ever exist. I as a playtester of games and fnf mods also wanted to say to the v1 that it was absolutely perfect and didnt need anything making it better besides: the border around the notes and the health system ui, the border around the notes was just well a singular red line which is easily fixable but here in v2 it got removed and the background of the fight is also now a hypno thingy which really doesnt make it seem scary at all and also destroys the atmosphere, the health system has the problem of it being just some rectangle thats moving which looks kinda bad imo, this is fixable by making the rectangle one color on one side and another color on the other side (i would recommend black on the corrupted side and red on the normal side).
And from what i read deathbed v1 will still be in the freeplay which doesnt really make me more happy as i want a good atmosphere playing a mod and not just some song thats not scary at all cause of the goofy background and the music that sounds like its some extreme dubstep going through the story mode.
I hope you read through this and maybe take some of my critique as a playtester
Wish you good luck with your mod and have a nice day :)
UPDATE: looking at the v2 a lil closer i somehow just now noticed that nmi's notes are visible now making it more fnf which i dont find to be that good in a horror mod like this where the atmosphere is to be frightened. I like the v1 more cause of not being able to know what nmi is going to drop next making it seem more scary and mysterious.
UPDATE 2: i also somehow forgot to mention that the song itself also seems more broken then remixed. compared to the v1 it makes it seem missing something (NOTE: that could just be me)
UPDATE 3: i love the zoom and the silence while zooming before the transformation the background is the only thing making it seem goofy
I would also love to be a playtester in your mod seeing that you have so much amazing ideas of songs which may completely flip over the fnf horror mods again. I already looked over all songs of the mod i could find here and yt and omg i love them so much including this one despite the v2 being kinda meh
I feel the spiral in the background should be spinning slowly or having separate images representing different stages of the spirals focus!
I'm going to be honest with you. I have never been so excited for an fnf mod until now.
Very awesome
Idk if this is it, it’s good but the original felt so much better in my opinion. The original had an amazing feeling that went with its original instrumental
It's called flatline now, dope
I dont know anything about innocence but shit im excited for this mod 🗣️🔥
I need to hear the full thing as soon as possible.
imagine being a doctor and you hear a patient making random beeps and boops
holy shit nmi is haunting here in the beginning
Edit: Hot take:
Scarier before 1:24
Lowkey the only thing I would change is the clock in the middle of the notes because that messes me up with hitting it
when ytou on your deathbed about to flatline from mediocrity (im a fan of the art personally, gg's)
Peak
Can you guys pls bring back the time thing when NMI changes to demonic form. It adds up the tense kind of feeling, its like you should be dead now, but this Demon will never let that happen. Not even death can save us
yeah i just didnt do it because a lot of math went into the fake timer and since this is a wip i didnt want to
@@usb_port_2 damn i understand that pain as well, since you said this is a wip does it mean the fake timer will be in when its completed?
Aw, the text says "Sick!!" in Japanese, I actually really like that.
ok i think this time my dad finally came to see me at my final momen- omfg it’s the same demon
very well
I really didnt know how v1 would improve... but this, this is absolute cinema 🙌
It'd be so cool if the heart was beating to rhytm and then burst at the last note
I just deathed all over my bed, I'm so sorry father.
I enjoy the effects whenever nmi speaks, but I really feel this is a slight downgrade to v1, don't get me wrong, its very clear that it simply isn't my cup of tea, I don't like the instrumental having more of a slow feel, although the new instruments added in makes up for it, and then it doesn't have the same intensity in terms of the instrumental, and I am quite sad about nmi's transformation during the blackout being leftout, but its still a wip so who knows, but onto the good stuff, y'all killed it with the new vocals, they have more emotion, loving nmi new vocals, and oh man the effects whenever its nmi turn, makes him a lot more overwhelming and intimidating.
also i fucking love sopas works keep it up
thank you, I'll keep that in mind.
This is a WIP of the song's audio too (only what is shown here is done so far), and the transformation was left out due to it looking awkward in game
But we will definitely aim to perfect this in the future!
@@usb_port_2I just got a thought rn, what was the inspiration for Makoto's design?
@@TheOverlymind idk, I know it wasn't Dumbie who drew it though
IT'S JUST A MAR...
MARKAPLIER: say that again boy or else ima turn bald and evil
very awesome stuff care
i liked it better when you could consistently see the kid at the beginning and *then* starts with the face twisting. therefore the question of "who is this guy" and "what is this guy" are spaced out more instead of just giving the twist a second after the guy is shown
I'm moving the mod off of Codename so I'll have to recode it all and will keep this in mind, thanks 👍
@@usb_port_2 thank you ^w^ you are doing great work with this mod, keep it up!
i lav u markpl
ong we need the full ver 🙏
this is all that is done
Oh no, please mr markplier don't pull my plug
"Sorry kid, the 1% duration is almost running out on my phone"
Mediocrity the mod that keeps getting better
Alright now fix his 2nd phase sprites, the down sprite looks amazing but i think the rest could use some work (left can use it the most)
yea Andor is redoing NMI's sprites
false advertising....smh
Hmm- instead of just standing there untill he transforms, maybe he could like snap his fingers or something.. i dunno-
he should twerk
@@usb_port_2lay down the beat, foolish child...
💀@@usb_port_2
markplier can't catch a break😭
In my personal opinion, a TINY bit of bass would add so much, not too much to the point where its like a regular fnf song, and he should sing a little bit deeper sometimes.
Thats just me tho
This gives off the vibes of GSAF. Demo and full version
not really but gsaf mentioned so im obliged to reply
@@mistorbear i see what you mean but I meant like either the heart monitor having a different beep, like the GSAF having a lower pitched distorted noise when you die in the full version
@@Bobby20099 i see
Me personally, idk bout u but i would pull the plug instantly if i saw that on my deathbed 😭
when is the full version coming out?
Honestly, I think i vastly prefer V1 currently. I just really liked the sort of slow and eerie vibe of the first one. Either way it still looks beautiful.
markiplier you have to juju on that beat markiplier come on do it mark
Now a rap battle where loosing actually kills you (exclude the exe modes like sonic/mario)
😂shagakerrrr🎉🎉🎉🎉.
oh shit this fucking rocks
I hope they don't throw away the animation when he transforms, it's really good.
It will return, but may be different. The composer can't work on the song because their PC broke so we haven't done anything with it in a while
This is really cool, but I actually kind of perfer V1.
V1 had a sense of sadness and as if your life was at its final moments. the timer especially reflected this with the text saying "time left"
I'm not really sure why it needed a V2, i think V1 perfected deathbed and everything about it.
well at least they changed the song's name
wdym 😭
@@usb_port_2 there's already a NMI song called Death Bed
@@-_WEB-DATA_- Ok, and? Plenty of songs share a name - especially in the fnf community
@@usb_port_2 ik i jst got kinda upset when i watched one of Flatline v1 gameplay
the name lied to me cuz i thought it was Death Bed by RandoHorn-
When did we go to sonic to A this
do yall have a discord server
im hype for this
deleted it for personal reasons
there is a twitter account tho