As I already commented in the Deathbed gameplay showcase video you should add a part where only NMI will sing, for example after Kiddo death, and also, will there be dialogue in V2?
In the version catmania played in the second form, he kinds of repeats the move like in his up move he kinds of closes his mouth multiple times, But I think its better to be like the second teaser Grinch teased(I hope you understand lol)
i love this. i think you nearly perfected the pacing, there's catchy motifs, and especially at the end the combination of the shrill off-key piano, booming drums, heart rate monitor, and NMI's grisly chromatics all work together with the high-contrast grotesque art to have this tone of intimidation and fear that builds up and climaxes really well. genuinely fantastic job, i don't even care about EXE stuff and this is one of my favorite FNF songs now. i think it could be improved a little bit by slightly reducing the choppiness and sheer density of the vocals/charting at the end, and shortening the instrumental section before the crescendo (possibly just by adding a very slow and solemn vocal section over half of it to keep the player engaged) but overall this is excellent
Genuinely one of the best songs to come out this year. To preface this, Ive never listened to any other stuff on your channel, my interest in FNF has declined 99% in the past year, and I barely listen to videogame music in my spare time. The production on this is amazing, the strings have a very unique style, that goes beyound what was ever seen in this community, even comparing to sturm. The piano and drums work so well toguether, making the song have various high and low intensity moments. The emotion of dread, of something being deeply wrong, the intense rise of horror, and the last nostalgic moments of this song elevate so much the ambience of this piece. Truly amazing work. Dont give up
@@ivoneo2806 my Spotify playlist is over 700 songs of hip hop, indie and jazz, I'd say I listen to my far share of "normal" music. I only listen to fnf music in gym nowadays.
My only downside to the song's instrumental is how echo-y it can get. Making it echo-y IS great for atmosphere, but it's a bit much and takes it down a bit for me.
I disagree, honestly. Even if it's not technically the best option, I'd say thematically and aesthetically it is. Given you're playing as someone literally fading in and out of consciousness in a hospital bed, the audio being so distant and strange sounding only adds to the song, imo.
@@retroblade8818 Nothing a little tightening up and re-balancing can't fix, I'm sure. I just think care should be taken to preserve the ambience in the process.
Assuming there will be a v2 version of this song, I honestly do enjoy this song a lot, but I wish there less “notes” overall, but still keeping the intensity of the songs. The chromatics are SUPERB, but I dislike the choppiness of the vocals that occur due to the abundance of notes throughout the song, it works in some areas but some others not so much, and it also lead to a lack of any distinct melody I can cling onto or recall back on, I can only really remember the first two minutes of the song perfectly while the rest kinda just blends in together. One part that’s fast and intense that I don’t mind not getting changed much, is actually the section that starts at 4:07 after the “no vocal” section, it’s works really well but it doesn’t stand out due to the already abundant notes in the rest of the song. Still a great ending tho, I love this song to death despite all the gripes and I hope it only gets better(if I’m not gaslighting myself about a v2 of this song)
@@joechristo2I’m aware of that, there are a lot of songs I enjoy that have about the same amount of notes or even more, it’s just with this song specifically, that wasn’t the direction I was really hoping for but at least there could’ve been a hook or more distinct melodies rather than just for intensity’s/difficulty’s sake yknow?
There's something oddly mesmerizing about the first minute about the song. In like, a good way. Maybe it's the way it's just all slow and somber sounding with the monitor's beeping. Nevertheless, you made something incredible, and I'm excited to see what touch-ups you make for the V2 of this song!
idk what everyone else is yapping about i really like this song, only thing in v2 i’d like to see is at the end where the dude you’re playing as is dying, it does another slow part like the beginning, like a struggle to hold on or smth, maybe repeating the first couple of turns or something, or maybe erratic, spaced out hold notes
This will def and has already gone down as one of my favorite fnf songs of all time, and i hope it's like that for everyone else. I cannot overstate how good this song is. I just wish the drums/percussion was a liiittle more intense or bass-y and louder for that real primal sense of pure terror
If I were to suggest something to have to fill in the instrumental section in the middle, I'd actually suggest a short, limited, storyboard-esque animation. Slow panning shots with the deep blacks shaking slightly--sorta like in Fakebaby from Hit Single--showing the child has flatlined and NMI's reaction, ending with something to show that he's literally bringing them back from brink of death for one last round of pain.
God the first minute of this song is genuinely perfect. This song has my favorite first minute out of every FNF song ever. I love the feeling of melancholy behind it and how it somehow sounds calm but yet also has a hint of it being sinister. The rest of the song is really good but I don't think it hit the same highs the first minute of this song did for me. If I have any suggestions for V2 it's that you somehow make more of the song like the first minute of this song (hopefully it makes sense what I'm trying to say, I'm not a musician so I'm not the best at trying to express constructive criticism). Also I would suggest trimming down the sections of the song that aren't filled with vocals especially after 5 minutes in, I think around a minute of basically ambience is too much even for a song like this
Hmm I really like the instrument but the note overall at mid and at the end of the song doesn’t emotionally for much. I think maybe some high note for NMI or some lyric will do a great job. This instrument is already a banger so you really should keep it or change / remake just a bit 😅❤
Well that’s cool, I respect wanting to improve stuff. All I suggest is keeping this version around too, since there’s been quite a few times that remade or updated FNF songs haven’t hit the same way as the original for some people (Incident and Infinite come to mind) so don’t nuke this off the face of the earth. Honestly tho, I’m just content vibing with this. Maybe others have constructive suggestions for V2, but I dunno.
That final section is absolutely beautiful, if it's not too much could I have the bpm and key for it? Seriously this section is so good I want to make a whole song based around it
DUDE I saw this in the first teaser and then i loved it SO MUCH, the piano feels mysterious, the music by it self make me remember of fight or flight. Are you gonna publish the FLP?
@@mshadreal8011not anymore, there are 4 new songs from garn that include other composers, as well as a scrapped song exclusively composed by Joey for the mod.
I heard this song and it's so freaking wild, but my question is will there be a cutscene for deathbed when v1 releases? Like what person that is in the hospital bed and what caused it to be in the hospital?
Me gustaría que se notarán más los cambios de ritmo y que las notas tuvieran mas melodia, sobre todo en la mitad de la canción que se siente un poco repetitiva Además creo que le quedarian bien que en el climax de la canción se oyeran campanas y cuervos para indicar la muerte y modificar la voz de nmi, para que no sea opacada por la instrumental
I was wandering around and i found this song I dont really care about nmi in fact i dont care about exe But i like the sturm nmi in sonic.exz 3.0 But in the final render of fakebaby im kinda sad about the song bcz there are some probleme (Like to much vocal) But i saw this song i fall in love bcz i touch my earth for a things than i will keep private But the song have some probleme i will tell (in my opinion) Vocal mixing like some time nmi a to much loud a the end But instrumal are prefect bu i will give some tips i learn for music school chinease. In chineas music they very love add flute or wind instruments so maybe add this for a main melodie in the apparition of nmi for give this song a oriental apparition. You can also add bells and taiko for add some punch a the end And secret tips a tremolo strings at the end for a very cool end Also if you can give this to coder For the start i have to idea. I know youre using CNE engine so pretty easy to modding and powerfull. At the start maybe reduce the creepy pose for make him more mystic like at the start make the alt pose like a imagination. And the pc live (idk how tell this in english) Maybe add a flx backdrop to make in like a real one because it look like a vizulasizer And for the artist is cooking to hot for him very banger at all my only request its make the animation return at the idle like massacre stages from MCM or all vs gorfield sprite or all yoshi sprite in mario madness Also have a very good luck and fun with this mod! (Sorry for my bad english im french)
![Deathbed [RETAKE] - Mediocrity UST](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/_nXHhfLsNwI/mqdefault.jpg)
![Petrified [IM F****NG PETRIFIED OST]](/img/1.gif)
"Honey, I forgot to take my schizophrenia pills. Could you pass them to me please... Oh wait."
_"I don't have a wife"_
"my wife,is dead,who's that?"
Your deathbed demon
deadbed
Da bed Is dead
@@wO_o-O-o_OwIt is good day to be not bed
@@lorddumb21POW! You are bed!
@@GunSlingerPomson "I am bed!"
@@lorddumb21 you truly are bed in this videogame
Hi i made the album art :)
Your art alone itself is fucking awesome nice work yo
thank you so much for the peak art
Peak, looks fire🔥
freakin awesome!!!!
Nice
Deathbed V2 is in the works and that stuff so if anyone has an opinion on something tell it here so I can make v2 much better 🕊
As I already commented in the Deathbed gameplay showcase video you should add a part where only NMI will sing, for example after Kiddo death, and also, will there be dialogue in V2?
@@whoiam1172 yeah there will be dialogue, and i'll take note about nmi singing alone
Overusing singing section will be bad idea@@Landelsoup
Yo solo pido que tenga flp para hacer un cover ya que está es una obra de arte que has echo colega
In the version catmania played in the second form, he kinds of repeats the move like in his up move he kinds of closes his mouth multiple times, But I think its better to be like the second teaser Grinch teased(I hope you understand lol)
i love this. i think you nearly perfected the pacing, there's catchy motifs, and especially at the end the combination of the shrill off-key piano, booming drums, heart rate monitor, and NMI's grisly chromatics all work together with the high-contrast grotesque art to have this tone of intimidation and fear that builds up and climaxes really well. genuinely fantastic job, i don't even care about EXE stuff and this is one of my favorite FNF songs now.
i think it could be improved a little bit by slightly reducing the choppiness and sheer density of the vocals/charting at the end, and shortening the instrumental section before the crescendo (possibly just by adding a very slow and solemn vocal section over half of it to keep the player engaged) but overall this is excellent
This has the pacing of a sturm song and i mean that in the best way possible
I love this song
if it's sturm, it's the best way possible by default lol
and I agree, this shit bumping
@@kingenderdragona4791 Slingomingo
@@jomppidev1845 the fuck does the groomer nazi have anything to do with Sturm or this song
@@jomppidev1845Nah dudes homophobic transphobic racist and a groomer
Genuinely one of the best songs to come out this year. To preface this, Ive never listened to any other stuff on your channel, my interest in FNF has declined 99% in the past year, and I barely listen to videogame music in my spare time. The production on this is amazing, the strings have a very unique style, that goes beyound what was ever seen in this community, even comparing to sturm. The piano and drums work so well toguether, making the song have various high and low intensity moments. The emotion of dread, of something being deeply wrong, the intense rise of horror, and the last nostalgic moments of this song elevate so much the ambience of this piece. Truly amazing work. Dont give up
Well just listen to music that isn't related to video games , well I disagree on the part about comparing but alright imo
@@ivoneo2806 my Spotify playlist is over 700 songs of hip hop, indie and jazz, I'd say I listen to my far share of "normal" music. I only listen to fnf music in gym nowadays.
Poor child. Too bad your parents aren't here yet. But,just wait until they see you. Then, they'll truly care about you again.
Lovely song. 10/10
HOLY CRAP GUYS ITS NO MORE INNOCENCES!😱😱😱
That's depressing af to think about
My only downside to the song's instrumental is how echo-y it can get. Making it echo-y IS great for atmosphere, but it's a bit much and takes it down a bit for me.
I disagree, honestly. Even if it's not technically the best option, I'd say thematically and aesthetically it is. Given you're playing as someone literally fading in and out of consciousness in a hospital bed, the audio being so distant and strange sounding only adds to the song, imo.
@@xX_Thaddeus_Xx I know that's the case. But it gets so bad at times I can't hear the song as well.
@@retroblade8818 Nothing a little tightening up and re-balancing can't fix, I'm sure. I just think care should be taken to preserve the ambience in the process.
Assuming there will be a v2 version of this song, I honestly do enjoy this song a lot, but I wish there less “notes” overall, but still keeping the intensity of the songs. The chromatics are SUPERB, but I dislike the choppiness of the vocals that occur due to the abundance of notes throughout the song, it works in some areas but some others not so much, and it also lead to a lack of any distinct melody I can cling onto or recall back on, I can only really remember the first two minutes of the song perfectly while the rest kinda just blends in together. One part that’s fast and intense that I don’t mind not getting changed much, is actually the section that starts at 4:07 after the “no vocal” section, it’s works really well but it doesn’t stand out due to the already abundant notes in the rest of the song. Still a great ending tho, I love this song to death despite all the gripes and I hope it only gets better(if I’m not gaslighting myself about a v2 of this song)
abundant notes isn’t really the problem, you CAN make memorable melodies with lots of notes, but the more notes you add the harder it gets to do that
@@joechristo2I’m aware of that, there are a lot of songs I enjoy that have about the same amount of notes or even more, it’s just with this song specifically, that wasn’t the direction I was really hoping for but at least there could’ve been a hook or more distinct melodies rather than just for intensity’s/difficulty’s sake yknow?
There's something oddly mesmerizing about the first minute about the song. In like, a good way. Maybe it's the way it's just all slow and somber sounding with the monitor's beeping.
Nevertheless, you made something incredible, and I'm excited to see what touch-ups you make for the V2 of this song!
idk what everyone else is yapping about i really like this song, only thing in v2 i’d like to see is at the end where the dude you’re playing as is dying, it does another slow part like the beginning, like a struggle to hold on or smth, maybe repeating the first couple of turns or something, or maybe erratic, spaced out hold notes
I found another unexpected bop! The vocals are perfect and everything. I don't know much about the story behind this track, but it's freakin' fire! 🔥
i like this song way more than id like to admit,, especially the first part and "instrumental" segment this is really good
1:13 flight or fight (starved song) vibes
This art is *A* *M* *A* *Z* *I* *N* *G*
Im so glad i happened to find this. Probably the most amazing horror themed fnf song I've ever heard? So much damn passion went into it, you COOKED.
This will def and has already gone down as one of my favorite fnf songs of all time, and i hope it's like that for everyone else. I cannot overstate how good this song is. I just wish the drums/percussion was a liiittle more intense or bass-y and louder for that real primal sense of pure terror
WE ARE GONNA LOSE OUR INNOCENCE WITH THIS ONE 🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥
Goes quite slow and hard at first. Pretty fire🔥🔥🔥👍
When you in the hospital and suddenly mr marker pliers appears out of nowehre
Eneemei porque me tocas mi chilito
Que horror como siempre que entro al video este es el primer comentario que veo y me sigue dando risa
The start is just, MUAH Cheff’s kiss
Woah, this cover art feels like something I'd find at a record store
We dying with this one 🙏
Can't wait to see what you cook up for the remaster
If I were to suggest something to have to fill in the instrumental section in the middle, I'd actually suggest a short, limited, storyboard-esque animation. Slow panning shots with the deep blacks shaking slightly--sorta like in Fakebaby from Hit Single--showing the child has flatlined and NMI's reaction, ending with something to show that he's literally bringing them back from brink of death for one last round of pain.
God the first minute of this song is genuinely perfect. This song has my favorite first minute out of every FNF song ever. I love the feeling of melancholy behind it and how it somehow sounds calm but yet also has a hint of it being sinister. The rest of the song is really good but I don't think it hit the same highs the first minute of this song did for me. If I have any suggestions for V2 it's that you somehow make more of the song like the first minute of this song (hopefully it makes sense what I'm trying to say, I'm not a musician so I'm not the best at trying to express constructive criticism). Also I would suggest trimming down the sections of the song that aren't filled with vocals especially after 5 minutes in, I think around a minute of basically ambience is too much even for a song like this
I can’t wait to see the actual gameplay of this masterpiece!!!! Fantastic job:)
@TittleTattlerthats old
i like how in this cover art, NMI looks like one of those frilled lizards.
I really enjoy the first parts melancholic feeling, and the victims vocals reflect that.
Love songs like this, genuinely so majestic, atmospheric, very calming, the first part gives me the chills, reminds me of frostbite
wait what i didnt fucking know you made this good shit dude !!!!!!
Thanks 🕊
took me a while to realize this was an fnf song
me when i forget my pills
I really couldn't stop listening to this, and I know that there's going to be a second version, but still, this is too good.
The wait for this song was so worth
Hmm I really like the instrument but the note overall at mid and at the end of the song doesn’t emotionally for much. I think maybe some high note for NMI or some lyric will do a great job. This instrument is already a banger so you really should keep it or change / remake just a bit 😅❤
This is such a fire song, might be one of my fave FNF tracks…why is it getting a remake when it JUST came out tho? It sounds great to me.
The song got finished like 1 or 2 months ago lol, also there are some few things i wanna change
Well that’s cool, I respect wanting to improve stuff. All I suggest is keeping this version around too, since there’s been quite a few times that remade or updated FNF songs haven’t hit the same way as the original for some people (Incident and Infinite come to mind) so don’t nuke this off the face of the earth.
Honestly tho, I’m just content vibing with this. Maybe others have constructive suggestions for V2, but I dunno.
That final section is absolutely beautiful, if it's not too much could I have the bpm and key for it?
Seriously this section is so good I want to make a whole song based around it
Album art goes hard and so does the song too
Realmente me encanto mucho, el mod es solo para NMI o va a tener mas cosas?
"hey I know you're dying and all but could I interest you in some sonic content?"
oh hey i know the dude who made this art
so glad i can hear this song so soon, saw a preview and thought it'd be like another month. thank you for peak
I think the first part of the song should be a bit longer IMO, and I think the song should just be longer in general it's so good
This piece of music is amazing
i’m so excited for this mod omg it makes me wanna make a NMI song myself :)
this is insanely fucking good.
A nmi solo section at the end would be kind cool imo but that’s basically all I think is missing from this song
DUDE I saw this in the first teaser and then i loved it SO MUCH, the piano feels mysterious, the music by it self make me remember of fight or flight. Are you gonna publish the FLP?
Yeah I will release it soon
deaath deathbed haha deathbed? more ike haha deathbed more like bed like deathbed? more ike bed lol
Lifechair
@@Landelsoup YES!! yesss Oh Yes!! yss UEES
honestly I love this song completely as it is, I’ve got more to say about the sprites and other stuff
If you can, could you upload this to Spotify?? I would non stop listen to this and the instrumental
This is so good that you should be on Hit Single or Sonic Legacy
this song's for a completely different mod :laoo:
@@mshadreal8011 ik
@TittleTattler yeah ok cool but why would they be in hit single, that mod's literally just a compilation of sturm's songs
@@mshadreal8011not anymore, there are 4 new songs from garn that include other composers, as well as a scrapped song exclusively composed by Joey for the mod.
@@AspenFalls0907 I thought the garn songs were by sturm too, crazy
When the innocence is no more
outstanding performance
Oh cool
I heard this song and it's so freaking wild, but my question is will there be a cutscene for deathbed when v1 releases? Like what person that is in the hospital bed and what caused it to be in the hospital?
es perfecto🎉
Me gustaría que se notarán más los cambios de ritmo y que las notas tuvieran mas melodia, sobre todo en la mitad de la canción que se siente un poco repetitiva
Además creo que le quedarian bien que en el climax de la canción se oyeran campanas y cuervos para indicar la muerte y modificar la voz de nmi, para que no sea opacada por la instrumental
Is the beeping in the bg a heart monitor, if so I think that’s a really clever addition
this song gives off the feeling that you would get while watching a loved one solowly die in front of you
Dammmn
NMI ate the ghoul :(
PEAK ALERT ‼‼
will this or v2 be on streaming? it sounds amazing
i love deathbed fnf!! i love mediocrity!!
Please, PLEASE make the flp for this public, i absolutely adore this song graaahhhh 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Hold on
Are you adding the flp later or when V2 release?, just curious 🦈@@Landelsoup
Efectivamente es musica🗿
deathbang
this is death in my bed
Bro when is this coming out I want to play it 😭
No way
I was wandering around and i found this song
I dont really care about nmi in fact i dont care about exe
But i like the sturm nmi in sonic.exz 3.0
But in the final render of fakebaby im kinda sad about the song bcz there are some probleme
(Like to much vocal)
But i saw this song i fall in love bcz i touch my earth for a things than i will keep private
But the song have some probleme i will tell (in my opinion)
Vocal mixing like some time nmi a to much loud a the end
But instrumal are prefect bu i will give some tips i learn for music school chinease.
In chineas music they very love add flute or wind instruments so maybe add this for a main melodie in the apparition of nmi for give this song a oriental apparition.
You can also add bells and taiko for add some punch a the end
And secret tips a tremolo strings at the end for a very cool end
Also if you can give this to coder
For the start i have to idea.
I know youre using CNE engine so pretty easy to modding and powerfull.
At the start maybe reduce the creepy pose for make him more mystic like at the start make the alt pose like a imagination. And the pc live (idk how tell this in english)
Maybe add a flx backdrop to make in like a real one because it look like a vizulasizer
And for the artist is cooking to hot for him very banger at all my only request its make the animation return at the idle like massacre stages from MCM or all vs gorfield sprite or all yoshi sprite in mario madness
Also have a very good luck and fun with this mod!
(Sorry for my bad english im french)
Thank you for the tips, and i'll tell the coder about that
will you upload the FLP? dying to make a cover of this ngl
Actually im about to 🤓
@@Landelsoup :D
If you saw that in the middle of the night (The sonic with the mouth open).
*What would you do?*
if i were to say what i'd do to that thing i would be locked up in prison
let's just say it'll look more white
sir gtfo my room
Im dying
Dedbeath
@@TheUnReal_Pumpkian thebDaed
dedbeb
Imagine if instead of NMI it would be sukuna in song.
i would like to ask for an flp for this, if not it is fine
あはは！もう子供に会うことはできないでしょう！トロールドXD
WE’RE PLAYING AS A KID PEOPLE-
man i wanted to play sonic 2 man wtf dude.. like,,, not cool dude...
Can i get some context on this song? Lol
Kiddo(the player) after the second song of the week he gets hospitalized, nmi appears, they battle and he dies
@Landel1689 I didn't know there was a full mod for this lol I thought it was a one off. Def checking it out
i think the song should be more off putting and less upbeat, more slower and something tells me a music box should be added too,,,
4:07
What even is the lore anyway
i made art for this and wanted to post the speedpaint with the music? is that ok with you? id credit/@ u and everything!!
Yeah go for it
@@Landelsoup thank you!
RIP deathbed_wip8_lyricsconcept.mp3
Or whatever the fuck i called the file when i made it in like 2 minutes