Cohesion & Coherence in Essay Writing

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  • Опубликовано: 29 янв 2025

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  • @elnzs
    @elnzs 3 года назад +2

    You were born to be an English teacher. I wish everyone was this good at their job.

  • @hyunchuljoo2078
    @hyunchuljoo2078 6 лет назад +18

    Adam, you made cristal clear how cohesion and coherence work in articles, by showing us *examples* which it took you a lot of time and effort to make. You are a dedicated teacher who deserves all our endless thanks. Many many thanks.^^

  • @shreyamuley321
    @shreyamuley321 7 лет назад +9

    THANK YOU SO SO MUCH ADAM, you have helped me a lot through your videos. I will be appearing for my college entrance test, next week. Prepared through your videos for it!
    BEST WISHES TO YOU. :)

  • @prashantmishra1994
    @prashantmishra1994 2 года назад +1

    Hi Adam! Even the word 'best' is not suffice to say 'how good your teaching video is!'.This is because,you simply surpass all the parameters and go beyond conceptualized ideas.
    Thanks & regards.

  • @justibe_213
    @justibe_213 4 года назад +11

    I can not thank you enough for this video...most of my university tutors have mentioned my issues surrounding cohesion and cohesiveness, an I have only come to realise this now...thank you 🙂

  • @ilhamam8018
    @ilhamam8018 4 года назад +22

    Cohesion and coherence are my tittle thesis to accomplish as degree bachelor's.

  • @infinitafenix3153
    @infinitafenix3153 5 лет назад +1

    I find this explanation the clearest I ever saw in this particular topic. Congratulations and thank you very much.

  • @Marwan.Abushanab
    @Marwan.Abushanab 3 года назад

    One of the top English teachers.. i toss and turn and always go back to your videos

  • @muhammadwaqasbutt3781
    @muhammadwaqasbutt3781 3 года назад +4

    Wonderful teacher, I have no words to appreciate your remarkable explanations. Thank you so much.

  • @biatamujuntu
    @biatamujuntu 8 лет назад +37

    God, you are so good at teaching! I'm so grateful for this video; I've learned a lot! Tnx Adam

  • @sureshdahal9747
    @sureshdahal9747 6 лет назад

    U have a very proficient way of teaching techniques which depicted from this lucid explaination . I have to meticulously watch all of your videos to enhance my writing skills.
    Thanks for your entire cooperation!!

  • @sorandom8846
    @sorandom8846 5 лет назад +4

    I am taking English class for the second time and these videos have helped me a lot in my essay writing. Thank you!

  • @user-lee00-20
    @user-lee00-20 3 месяца назад

    Your explanations are clear and simple ❤

  • @vinaykadam3897
    @vinaykadam3897 7 лет назад +5

    Very detailed explanation. This video really helped me to understand what I should write in my essay. Thanks a lot!

  • @raiprota
    @raiprota 7 лет назад +4

    I just LOVE all of your videos. Best English teacher ever

  • @DPC86100
    @DPC86100 7 лет назад +30

    Adam, you are the best!!!

  • @mojganpakrou7832
    @mojganpakrou7832 3 года назад

    Thanks for all the useful tips. I only started university recently and I need, to improve my writing skills and your videos are the best. Thanks!!!!

  • @manpreetmanpreetsingh2087
    @manpreetmanpreetsingh2087 6 лет назад

    I have been following several teachers of English but you are best

  • @Islam_makes_Peaceful_soul
    @Islam_makes_Peaceful_soul 6 лет назад

    Yes, you are correct!! It needs writing practice, I got across this lecture very well. I could able to clear writing confusion with your explained examples. Thanks!!

  • @thaunghtikesoe5405
    @thaunghtikesoe5405 3 года назад

    Thanks a heap for your best videos dealing with the exams for IELTS and TOEFL.

  • @LearnwithKrishna
    @LearnwithKrishna 4 года назад

    i love your methods and explanation very simple ,easy to understand and to the point.

    • @azzameli9908
      @azzameli9908 4 года назад +1

      Many thanks ,the noblest and greatest one ever!

  • @Mycooking1234
    @Mycooking1234 Год назад

    My appreciation, i don't understand what exactly means those words cohsion and coherence, but after i saw your video, I got it.
    Thank you, and keep going🎉❤

  • @maramezina1094
    @maramezina1094 5 лет назад

    The best teacher in the world.Developing writing skills is a challenging and laborious process to teach , but you make it easier for us to have an idea about how we improve our writing.My question is : what are the steps to write a good academic essay? Thanks in advance.

  • @chefcocoa9890
    @chefcocoa9890 2 года назад

    had accidently watch your lesson, its changed whole structure of my brain. thank you

  • @misbahatta5760
    @misbahatta5760 3 года назад +1

    Thank youuuuuuuu thank youuuuuuuu so much sir Adam I don't know how to thank you I mean you are absolutely a fantastic teacher you have cleared all my doubts through this video May Allah give you tremendous success !!May Allah bless you !!

  • @maianhvu8212
    @maianhvu8212 7 лет назад +2

    Really enjoy your videos! You have such a clear and well-arranged teaching technique!

  • @nadeemqasmi2262
    @nadeemqasmi2262 4 года назад

    I have no words to introduce you. Simply amazing! All videos

  • @aadamahmedmohamud4452
    @aadamahmedmohamud4452 7 лет назад

    Hi Adam, thanks you very much you are best teacher,I have ever seen and you are honest for teaching us.

  • @rickylan5664
    @rickylan5664 5 лет назад

    Thank you so much for your clear, detailed explanations. Way better than the writing class I took in school for a whole semester lol

  • @ghassanhero
    @ghassanhero 5 лет назад

    Thanks for your efforts in helping students write better.

  • @lovepreetdahliwal93
    @lovepreetdahliwal93 7 лет назад

    adam your lessons are outstanding, I want you to clear my doubts on how to be partly agree in essays and how to make body paragraphs and what should be the planing.Could you please write a full essay on this type ???

  • @nassimmahfoud8832
    @nassimmahfoud8832 3 года назад

    Thank you very much. The simplest explanation.

  • @vergineharutyunyan287
    @vergineharutyunyan287 5 лет назад +2

    I love you Adam, thank you so much! All your videos are effective and really helpful

  • @sriramapriyar6745
    @sriramapriyar6745 7 лет назад

    Hi Adam,
    I do extend my warmest greeting to you.
    I have studied about if classes in grammar book.They have mentioned if you use past perfect in if classes the result should be
    past tense of auxiliary verbs+have+past participle; in the ex, started with Terracotta warriors, if clause has been written in past perfect and the result has just had 'could +verb'..It is really a very good sentence and you are an excellent teacher.So please clarify the structure.
    Thanks in advance.

  • @laudalassan109
    @laudalassan109 Год назад

    just to let you know, i got 8.5 band 2 times. Second time, i didn't even practice. Just watched your videos to revise. You are a great teacher.

  • @invariablyliveliness8278
    @invariablyliveliness8278 5 лет назад

    Mr. Adam I don't know How I adapted your style. But I have been so. Watching you at least once a day🤗

  • @m.sakthidevi7952
    @m.sakthidevi7952 3 года назад

    Thank you sir for explaining this coherence in brief manner

  • @gabinsights
    @gabinsights 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you for this.

  • @alizashoukat7821
    @alizashoukat7821 4 года назад

    Sir, you are the best teacher ever 👌 well done and keep it up 👍🥰 lots of love from Pakistan 🇵🇰💖

  • @pratikk2519
    @pratikk2519 6 лет назад

    Thank you Adam.. I am learning a lot from you for my exam .. you are an amazing teacher 😊

  • @KhushbuTheDoctor
    @KhushbuTheDoctor 4 года назад

    Amazing overview sir.. watching a week before my ielts exam.. thanks abundantly

  • @SirEleven2022
    @SirEleven2022 6 лет назад

    I have learned a lot about this topic. Needed so much for my teaching. God bless you!

  • @jamilehchasebi3309
    @jamilehchasebi3309 6 лет назад +4

    Best teacher ever

  • @sana4954
    @sana4954 8 лет назад

    that was very clear and helpful, thanks Adam you're the best teacher ever.

  • @nickrobinson938
    @nickrobinson938 2 года назад

    Adam for president! Thanks for this tutorial.

  • @phanminhquan1285
    @phanminhquan1285 4 года назад

    This is absolutely what i am looking for. Thank you

  • @congosrevolution8625
    @congosrevolution8625 8 лет назад +17

    That lesson was so helpful. Thank you Adam !!

  • @chuksjosiah343
    @chuksjosiah343 Год назад +1

    Thanks Mr Adams

  • @wasefashrafTheranger
    @wasefashrafTheranger 8 лет назад +3

    a very important lesson...to write a good essay...

  • @MultiAntalya07
    @MultiAntalya07 8 лет назад +7

    It is a very analytical approach to writing. It will help me so much. Thank you for your cordial effort.

  • @TBC1599
    @TBC1599 7 лет назад +2

    Fantastic teaching! I benefitted greatly from this.

  • @aakashsoni2199
    @aakashsoni2199 4 года назад +1

    Learning so much from you. Thank you sir!❤

  • @yunmiao7619
    @yunmiao7619 4 года назад

    good teacher and effective ways to repeat and more practise! thanks!

  • @fadygergis9737
    @fadygergis9737 8 лет назад +3

    Admittedly these videos very useful. Thank you so so much.

  • @nimraarshad31
    @nimraarshad31 4 года назад

    Even your speech has coherence 🌷
    Good teaching way..❤

  • @vulaiminh8135
    @vulaiminh8135 5 лет назад

    damn, nothing to complain about your lecture. Best one ever, you must deserve more than 1 like button.

  • @MarjaniK
    @MarjaniK 7 лет назад

    Your way to teaching is the best.i like it very much.its really useful for me.👨💛💙❤💜💚

  • @ravibhushan1090
    @ravibhushan1090 3 года назад

    Excellent topic and excellent presentation

  • @tatyrun6438
    @tatyrun6438 2 года назад

    Thanks tutor .You well explained the concept

  • @chidoliro302
    @chidoliro302 4 года назад

    Hello Adam. Let me tell you I'm a big fan from you, I love your teaching methods, and I take some of them to my classes, I'm an English professor from Mexico, yesterday I did my OTCCC oxford certification for c2 , I got some Marks that I'm not prod of them. 85% Use of English 75% listening and 60% reading (idk why) but the problem is that my writing was terrible, I must have an inform based in charts, I have never written an inform even in my native language, I'd appreciate that you share a video where you show how to write an inform ... THANKS and greetings from Mexico

  • @bikbikthibou7262
    @bikbikthibou7262 7 лет назад

    Adam, you are an amazing teacher. I truly love style of teaching

  • @BharathKumar-rp5vf
    @BharathKumar-rp5vf 6 лет назад +1

    Thanks, Adam, you've very well explained about cohesion & coherence.

  • @minggarpanji
    @minggarpanji 3 года назад

    I've learned a lot. Thank yo so much.

  • @boxingproff7627
    @boxingproff7627 5 лет назад

    Thanks, for being detailed in your explanation. It really helped clarify things.

  • @pakaladora3273
    @pakaladora3273 8 лет назад +1

    Thanks for your response. I have another question I am making many spelling mistakes during writing is this effects overall score significantly. I am watching your youtube videos, in one lesson you said one thing that is " read lot much as you can", this finally resulted in a great success.

    • @Viselancecom
      @Viselancecom 8 лет назад

      Okay here is my take on the issue of spelling. I would recommend that as you write, do not edit your work. Finish writing your essay first, then come back and start editing. Take your time to edit. Go word for word. Use thesaurus if need be; to confirm the spelling of words.
      And then when reading, note down the words that excite you. Over time, you will see your spelling mistakes reduce. Practice and believe in yourself.
      I hope this helps, All the best.

  • @prudvinathmalepati3322
    @prudvinathmalepati3322 7 лет назад

    Hi Adam, around 10:00 mins, you suggested that using transition words is unnecessary in that particular context; however, can we use something like 'To add to the above, these benefits ...' ?

  • @aromiresolomonoluwaseyi2608
    @aromiresolomonoluwaseyi2608 3 года назад

    wow! so great.. thanks for the explanation

  • @shavinshamo
    @shavinshamo 3 года назад

    Well done 👍✅

  • @Viselancecom
    @Viselancecom 8 лет назад

    Hey Adam,
    I tend to take each paragraph with a new idea. Then create a topic sentence and elaborate. But at least all paragraphs must be related to the thesis statement. I think that when you use a thesis statement to guide your thinking, it is easier to have coherence. For cohesion that comes down to using transition word like Thus, therefore etc..what do you think?

  • @r.t.c1881
    @r.t.c1881 3 года назад

    I am doing my dissertation and my supervisor said my syntax is a bit problematic... so I decided to look for some help. I have to say I am on 7mins in but I have learnt so much... at this point I am not sure how I got a B in English back in High school... not even sure how I got this far in uni

  • @arbelokhan3485
    @arbelokhan3485 5 лет назад

    What a lucid explanation..
    GREAT..

  • @luciarojas8700
    @luciarojas8700 6 лет назад

    Nice video! Do you have any rubric to assess cohesion and coherence separately?

  • @tumukundechristine2885
    @tumukundechristine2885 2 года назад

    you are a coherent teacher

  • @nadirali8788
    @nadirali8788 4 года назад

    Adam.thank u..it very helpful lecturer

  • @samiuelmasudi6726
    @samiuelmasudi6726 5 лет назад

    Thank you for helping us you're a such great teacher and you know how to explain thank you from Kinshasa congo 🇨🇩🤚

  • @narcisacandol2690
    @narcisacandol2690 4 года назад

    Thank you so much' very informative. Now i know the difference of this two. 😇🤗❤👏👏

  • @hsbchsgdfbdhdbd8496
    @hsbchsgdfbdhdbd8496 2 года назад

    Thank you so much this was so helpful I appreciate this so much!!

  • @rekhavenugopal4673
    @rekhavenugopal4673 4 года назад

    Thnk u sir for ur clear explanation.

  • @illeile6935
    @illeile6935 7 лет назад

    thnks adam..i wish my country has same teacher like u ..

  • @Sports7-u6b
    @Sports7-u6b 3 года назад

    Thanks for sharing with us ☺️

  • @SadiqCreative7
    @SadiqCreative7 7 лет назад

    Sir,You are my iconic English-teacher.Your way of explanation is amazing.I download loaded around 95 videos ; but I need a English grammar book which is written by you.If it is let me know please.thank you so much .My love With you sir. On the otherhand ,give a some tips on how to speak English continuously/ non stop .

  • @poonamdhillon78
    @poonamdhillon78 7 лет назад

    Great Efforts ,Thank You Adam!

  • @margaretcokumu8546
    @margaretcokumu8546 7 лет назад

    I have benefited from the lesson on paraphrasing. Thank you.

  • @momohadetunji4143
    @momohadetunji4143 4 года назад

    I simply enjoy listening to your teachings. Old

  • @khaledmoussa2668
    @khaledmoussa2668 3 года назад

    Thanks for your efforts!

  • @bindujayahari1421
    @bindujayahari1421 3 года назад

    Excellent narration..

  • @clevanst.bernard5539
    @clevanst.bernard5539 3 года назад

    This was very helpful.

  • @yunnguyen9630
    @yunnguyen9630 4 года назад

    Is it good to use firstly, secondly sir? Does it affect our score? Thanks

  • @sweet8oo2
    @sweet8oo2 6 лет назад

    this is the useful vid I ve ever seen thank you teacher

  • @walideshanta3325
    @walideshanta3325 2 года назад

    why did you use comma after unexpected in the first sentence in 7:01min?

  • @moderndayhighpriestess
    @moderndayhighpriestess 8 лет назад

    your are a great teacher. keep up the good work. thanks

  • @Punjabwibes
    @Punjabwibes 7 лет назад

    dealing with mobility issue,and leading more citizen to depend on public transportation what kind of sentences are they ?

  • @wangbenson4265
    @wangbenson4265 5 лет назад

    From 6 to 7.5. Thank u!!!

  • @sujantamang9768
    @sujantamang9768 3 года назад

    It's more effective class for me .you're saying so, cleary about topices.

  • @marygrace7439
    @marygrace7439 7 лет назад

    Thank you Adam. And please post more video lessons.

  • @666ofabyss9
    @666ofabyss9 4 года назад

    Thanks for this, Adam! 💗

  • @jamalibaloch5611
    @jamalibaloch5611 4 года назад

    Does the same principle apply on introduction of an essay? Can you make a detailed video on Introduction and thesis statement of an argumentative essay?

  • @bpanoraia
    @bpanoraia 8 лет назад +1

    Adam, you are amazing! Very helpful! All beautifully explained!

  • @angesomgebregziabher19
    @angesomgebregziabher19 7 лет назад

    Thank you very much for your help, Adam!

  • @asifnawaz759
    @asifnawaz759 5 лет назад

    Hey, i found your lectures most knowledgeable, could you please tell me that what will be included in the body of an essay, ''Should the Government invest in Public Transportation''. Can we add examples from developed countries or any thing else in order to write a comprehensive essay of up to 2500 words. Please make a video on the BODY of an Essay, I shall be thankful to you.