IELTS / TOEFL Essay: Body Paragraph Development

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  • Опубликовано: 26 дек 2024

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  • @Gustavo-lz5mi
    @Gustavo-lz5mi 5 лет назад +83

    Adam, you are the best!!! I've followed your videos since 2014 as a beginner, and now I'm quite proficient in the English language. I have to say that you were the first native speaker who I could understand, thank you for being so empathetic and slowing down your speech while sharing your vast knowledge and tips :) I wish you all the best!

  • @Ammaalrrufaye
    @Ammaalrrufaye Год назад +3

    This is really great lesson, I'm a new CELTA graduate from Oxford and still struggling with writing, I hope if all English learners watch this video, it's perfect.
    Thank you very much.❤

  • @pheno_1
    @pheno_1 Год назад +1

    I had been struggling to get my work done on Writing untill I watched your really useful video. The task used to seem totally dull and complex to accomplish and it lowered my overall score in ielts, I try to make it possible with the help of yours.
    Thank you so much🙏🏼

  • @yasinekici8146
    @yasinekici8146 Год назад +1

    What a lovely and informative lesson it is. Adam is best at what he does, he does not just teach us what we should do, but he also elaborates more on what we should not do so that we understand the main points.

  • @Mmm.5255
    @Mmm.5255 4 года назад +3

    Insightful, organised, and clear overview of pros and cons. One of the most useful presentations possible on the subject.

  • @omonsharopov565
    @omonsharopov565 5 лет назад +22

    Hey Adam,stop bombarding my mind with this kind of cool tips.God bless you & your family man.Great job☝️

  • @vietasha9539
    @vietasha9539 4 года назад +3

    I am struggling with my budget to afford a good English tutor, but thankfully I found your channel. It is very helpful to me that I soon will take the TOEFL test. God bless you, Teacher Adam!

    • @renassalahudden9520
      @renassalahudden9520 4 года назад

      How did it goes?

    • @vietasha9539
      @vietasha9539 4 года назад

      @@renassalahudden9520 Hi!! It went well though my score not passing my target. Yet, I really am grateful that I have improved my writing skill. ✊😆

  • @worldinyourhand3585
    @worldinyourhand3585 4 года назад +2

    Sir,
    You are the best.
    I've seen almost 20 different teachers' classes
    You are the best.
    Thank you very much sir.

  • @creatorattractor4189
    @creatorattractor4189 2 года назад

    The best explanation I've seen so far, in depth.

  • @mendie4008
    @mendie4008 5 лет назад +5

    it has been more than a week since you last posted, I'm dying for more

  • @harryseptember4338
    @harryseptember4338 3 года назад +1

    About 3 years later I will come back and tell you my score. Your videos are really helpful

  • @researchanalysisbroadcast
    @researchanalysisbroadcast 3 года назад

    My favourite English teacher, Adam, thanks a lot for this lesson .

  • @s.carmen
    @s.carmen 2 года назад

    Honestly, you are the best at this!!

  • @anahilucerogonzalez7703
    @anahilucerogonzalez7703 3 года назад +1

    Thank you so much Adam! It was a useful lesson to prepare myself for IELTS.

  • @safaijazno126
    @safaijazno126 5 лет назад +2

    Zero unlike that's great
    ....... My one of the fvrt teachers 👏

  • @johnconnor9787
    @johnconnor9787 5 лет назад +23

    Hi Adam. Great video, as usually
    Please, can you make a series of videos on each type of essay questions
    Thank you!

  • @dellapriyeshsebastian9246
    @dellapriyeshsebastian9246 5 лет назад +8

    Dear Sir Adam,
    As always great ...
    U R the best teacher...👏🏻👏🏻

  • @fikrzelalem5070
    @fikrzelalem5070 3 года назад

    you are the best one lecturer!!!!!keep it up!!!!!!.........

  • @MariaMaria-qc1nc
    @MariaMaria-qc1nc Год назад +1

    Thank you so much Ms. Adam ! You're the best. I got better in writing and organizing my ideas, but I still have a problem my language isn't too well . My sentences are weak due to my languag. Even simple and important words I cannot understand them 😓
    That's my biggest problem.

  • @mitsyreid5924
    @mitsyreid5924 3 года назад

    I enjoy listening to how you teach......very clear!

  • @fatehalibalya7223
    @fatehalibalya7223 5 лет назад

    You’re doing good job for such students who are vulnerable in English

  • @rakeshkumarmadella7955
    @rakeshkumarmadella7955 5 лет назад +1

    Simple superb sir. I can't find better than this. Your teaching are really awesome.. Thank you so much. God bless you.

  • @flyprashant
    @flyprashant 5 лет назад +1

    Got 24 in writing!!! I am happy..thanks brother i followed your idea

  • @noraimahacmad8985
    @noraimahacmad8985 2 года назад

    i want to follow all your videos, i think this video is my way of success. i am poor grammar in english. i can follow all your videos as much i can. thanks a lot sir.

  • @user-gl4st3uo4v
    @user-gl4st3uo4v 3 года назад +1

    Your tips are of high value for me

  • @nuranismohdnor2638
    @nuranismohdnor2638 3 года назад

    Wow, this is a lifesaver! i always struggle with how to write and structure a body paragraph. I don't know how to elaborate my idea.! your breakdown of each sentence makes it so clear to me now..
    thankyou so for your free education!! i wish you success in all things you do in life :D

  • @omario1996
    @omario1996 2 года назад

    Mr Adam, Fantastic your explanations are

  • @zafarkurbonboev394
    @zafarkurbonboev394 3 года назад

    Thank you for useful lessons, You are one of the best teachers

  • @dayasrisakalasuriya7554
    @dayasrisakalasuriya7554 3 года назад

    Thank you Adam!!! I use your videos in my teaching.

  • @alexmon2334
    @alexmon2334 4 года назад

    My favourite teacher, Adam

  • @JP-pb1gv
    @JP-pb1gv 4 года назад

    Thank you for taking your time to create such valuable videos for english students. You are the best!

  • @paulusarcanjo8326
    @paulusarcanjo8326 4 года назад

    Hello Adam,you made me pride with your explanation. You are indeed a food tutor thank you.

  • @YunxiaoLi-i6h
    @YunxiaoLi-i6h 4 года назад

    What a wonderful video! I finally know how to write a body paragraph. THANK YOU!

  • @jewelscolombia4013
    @jewelscolombia4013 5 лет назад +1

    It s very useful topic for all learners, thank you for your endeavour to explain, keep it up, Sir . Love you from Thailand.

  • @thaunghtikesoe5405
    @thaunghtikesoe5405 2 года назад

    Thanks a lot for your valuable lecture.

  • @yasminemh8619
    @yasminemh8619 Год назад +1

    thank you so much Adam~~

  • @salamal-rubaye263
    @salamal-rubaye263 4 года назад

    Very helpful video. Exactly what my mistake points. thanks

  • @marylo6988
    @marylo6988 3 года назад

    Thank you very much Adam!

  • @icexyz8586
    @icexyz8586 4 года назад +1

    Very helpful 👍

  • @pujapuspa9039
    @pujapuspa9039 4 года назад

    I don't know which words I should use to express how grateful I am to you. So, simply I thank you lot for helping me get 27 in the writing section of TOEFL ibt. Your tips gave my writing a structure that was helpful in the test. Best wishes for you, Adam. I will always be your fan. A great teacher you are ☺☺

  • @rightpath5479
    @rightpath5479 2 года назад

    Adam, frankly speaking, you are a mega star. your tutorials are always excellent. The explanation is clear. Am a new subscriber but i really fine your videos helpful. Thank so so much.

  • @TMV1910
    @TMV1910 5 лет назад

    such an educational video. Clear and very helpful. Thank you for making this video!

  • @jaskarankaur6290
    @jaskarankaur6290 3 года назад

    extremely useful video, especially because the position and connection of the example with the last sentence is simplified. Gonna watch the whole video 👍👍👍 Thank you so much Adam

  • @mazharrazmian
    @mazharrazmian 3 года назад

    At 11:30 , It says "Discuss both points", doesn't it mean we have to discuss BOTH points and THEN give our opinion? Why do we just choose one in our first paragraph?

  • @賴文茹-y1w
    @賴文茹-y1w 7 месяцев назад +1

    Keys
    1. response
    2.content
    3.delivery
    4.coheson and cohesive

  • @lorsholczk7329
    @lorsholczk7329 5 лет назад +1

    Do you have to paraphrase the background statement? Where should my opinion be? In the introduction or in the conclusion?

  • @AlexaHsu-oj5vk
    @AlexaHsu-oj5vk 5 лет назад +1

    thanks for an another upload! It is very helpful💓

  • @vuhanh2944
    @vuhanh2944 4 года назад

    Thank you very much Adam for great video

  • @josepinheiro292
    @josepinheiro292 4 года назад

    Best video.
    Thank you.

  • @sharonaguillon4376
    @sharonaguillon4376 5 лет назад

    Thank you Adam!!! I love the way you teach!

  • @crickett2081
    @crickett2081 5 лет назад

    Your teaching style amazing ! Love you sir .

  • @katherinnepairo6641
    @katherinnepairo6641 3 года назад

    Your lessons are very helpful. Thank you so much! :D

  • @harryflashman4542
    @harryflashman4542 5 лет назад +1

    you know what, I am a native english speaker and I have never been taught how to write. We just don't get grammar or writing construction in our schools! Thank you for putting this information out there for those of us that want to learn how to write!

  • @puneetsingh5607
    @puneetsingh5607 5 лет назад

    Is it correct?
    The key reason of traffic jam is more preference to private vehicle. A large number of people prefer to drive instead of travelling by a public transport for work. A lot of cars even two wheelers are congested on the road which lead to traffic congestion. Although many people due to it often get late for their work, they do not opt public transport. And the another factor for traffic problem is narrow roads.Due to the space of roads is less, automobiles can not be driven adjustably.

  • @Andy-cx1jh
    @Andy-cx1jh 5 лет назад +1

    14:44 in the last sentence "this student will be have greater..." isn't 'be' redundant? instead of it, can we write "this student will be having greater..."? thank you for your priceless videos, Adam, they are excellent for English learners

  • @uyiamadasun9017
    @uyiamadasun9017 3 года назад

    Thanks for your help sir

  • @bhuvansingh2717
    @bhuvansingh2717 5 лет назад

    Awesome to way to teach sir...

  • @elinaihnatsiuk
    @elinaihnatsiuk 5 лет назад

    Thanks! Very interesting and actually useful video!

  • @mustafasakhizada723
    @mustafasakhizada723 Год назад

    Adam, Excellent presentation and description. Can you please provide a video for cause and effective or advantage or disadvantage type of essay

  • @syedmuzammil1468
    @syedmuzammil1468 4 года назад

    Thank You Respected Sir ..
    Sir Now a days I have prepared IELTS test for further study to abroad. Your leacture helps me a lots to improve English within short time....,, Sir plz make a vedio in each part of easy such as Opinion Discussion problem solving etc....

  • @puneetmishra545
    @puneetmishra545 4 года назад

    Hi Adam,
    Thanks for this video. It's really helpful. As you mentioned in the video that in future you shall create videos about how to make different body paragraphs and explain about their functions. Please try to make one such video. I am eagerly awaiting for it. Once again thanks so much. You are amazing tutor for many of us.
    Cheers

  • @ИванКлименков-с6щ
    @ИванКлименков-с6щ 4 года назад

    This is a very helpful video.

  • @blackyrocky7438
    @blackyrocky7438 8 месяцев назад +1

    A student who is weak in mathematics may need additional assistance from his parents or a tutor to clarify textbook examples. Can we say his or her parents or their parents? What would be the agreement?

    • @WritetotheTop
      @WritetotheTop  7 месяцев назад

      Technically, 'a student' is singular, so you should say his, her, his or her. Many people avoid the 'his or her' because it's too long and over a whole conversation or piece of writing it becomes annoying. Better to choose one pronoun and go with that. However, these days many people simply use 'their' and it is generally accepted as a part of the language. In formal writing, though, use one of the singular pronouns.

  • @jaspreetaulakh5367
    @jaspreetaulakh5367 5 лет назад +1

    You're too good👍.

  • @nickbond85
    @nickbond85 5 лет назад

    Fantastic lesson! Thank you!

  • @guramritpalsingh6778
    @guramritpalsingh6778 5 лет назад +1

    Thank you Adam.

  • @foodpathwithrasel5218
    @foodpathwithrasel5218 2 года назад

    Thanks 💕💙💝

  • @santinochiok9791
    @santinochiok9791 4 года назад

    Very excellent

  • @israrullah5911
    @israrullah5911 4 года назад +1

    Sir can you please make a video on "how to introduce next paragraph in the last of first paragraph".

  • @abrahamadam8357
    @abrahamadam8357 5 лет назад

    Thank you so, much for your help

  • @onkar7473
    @onkar7473 4 года назад

    What is the alternative for To begin?

  • @shahidhussain8871
    @shahidhussain8871 5 лет назад +1

    Some videos on affixes that can go with any word unlike those are fixed prefixes..
    For example the suffix like can go with all words.. Also,
    In word power made easy I have read that one can add "ness" to any adjective for the formation of nouns. But the internet agrees to this book... Please resolve my problem..

  • @annilevonian5857
    @annilevonian5857 5 лет назад +1

    Hi Adam, do you have any videos for CBEST writing? Thank you

  • @Farid333
    @Farid333 5 лет назад +1

    Share your knowledge ❤️❤️ Sir

  • @haithamalsharjabi7647
    @haithamalsharjabi7647 5 лет назад +5

    Hi! Adam. Thank you so much for your efforts, they are extremely helpful.
    I have a few question that I hope you answer. In the advantage and disadvantage type.
    Where should I write my opinion? in the introduction or conclusion? And should I write the pros in the first body and the cons in the second one, or it depends on my opinion. Like if I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, I should start the first body by the pros.
    Thanks in advance.

  • @EzeamaChukwuebukaMarvelous
    @EzeamaChukwuebukaMarvelous 3 месяца назад

    How do I get to the edited one

  • @kaleababeje1986
    @kaleababeje1986 5 лет назад

    No body dislike this video, I think the negative people stop learning

  • @dayanidhi3128
    @dayanidhi3128 5 лет назад

    Very useful video...

  • @dileepa1901
    @dileepa1901 5 лет назад

    Thank you Adam ...

  • @charleszheng6184
    @charleszheng6184 5 лет назад

    Thank you, Adam, and I think you should open an Alipay account so students from China could make their donation.

  • @thearies10
    @thearies10 5 лет назад +1

    Is it your other youtube channel?

  • @A1N2A3L4U
    @A1N2A3L4U 5 лет назад

    Intéressant thank teacher! 👍👍

  • @shahidhussain8871
    @shahidhussain8871 5 лет назад

    Bring lessons on Advanced Grammar such as Intonation or stress.

  • @diegovictor3984
    @diegovictor3984 4 года назад

    How to plan a "to what extend" essay?

  • @XXX-sz5lt
    @XXX-sz5lt 5 лет назад

    Hi, Adam. I wrote the essay below and would really wish to hear your opinion about it. I followed your indications step by step.
    Some people say that private schools should not be allowed to exist. Why do people believe this? What is your opinion?
    Introduction
    1.General statement. Private educational system has been experiencing a long existence during centuries, starting as exclusive institutions lead by wealthy rulers or clerics and ending nowadays by being spread all over the world. 2. Question. While there are disadvantages to existing private schools, (3. Opinion) I rather believe that individual educational institutions are beneficial and should be encouraged.
    Body paragraph 1
    1.Topic sentence. The vast majority of people pleads against private schools due to two valid reasons. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. One of the most significant consideration against exclusive schools is in terms of high annual costs for attending it. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. This cost is prohibiting for pupils who come out of families with less financial resources, leading to an exclusively admission of students with wealthy backgrounds. 4.1 Example. The annual price for American School in Bucharest is, for instance 12,000 Euros/year, way too high for a Romanian family to afford. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Moreover, high fees do not guarantee certified-teachers, who do not have a teaching degree. 3.2 Expend/elaborate Having a certification does not always entitle a professor to be the most suitable for a teaching role, but proves the schoolmaster’s ability in working with children in a proper way. 4.2 Example For example, last year in Romania a math teacher from a private school became a controversial topic after he was fired due to his lack of abilities in working with young persons, abilities which are normally measured throughout these certifications.
    Body paragraph 2
    1.Topic sentence. While the point above may be justified, there are other arguments to sustain private schools. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. The most valid or plausible point is that private schools are able to offer a better understanding of kids’ needs and interests. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. In exclusive institutions, children are divided into small classes, which allows teacher to be more focused on what students are talented of, what they like to do, and things to be improved for each individual. These kind of schools could grant access to theatre, music courses, language lessons tailored on specific needs. 4.1 Example. For example, if a kid is talented on languages or music, school is able to offer real professionals like native speakers teachers or musicians, aspects impossible to fulfil in a public system. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Another important argument is that private schools have their own international alumni network which enables their students to have more professional opportunities after graduation in finding better jobs or following a greater career in an international environment. 3.2 Expend/elaborate These networks are in constant contact with schools, participating to events held by exclusive institutions, where companies already can find potential employees. 4.2 Example According to Economical Journal specialists, the employment grade after graduation is higher for private educational entities (60%), compared to 30% for public schools.
    Conclusion
    Selecting the right educational path for your kid, either private or public, is a very personal and important task for a parent who has to carefully weigh the advantages or disadvantages of both systems and implications in the future professional life of a young person. In conclusion, the benefits of private schools overcome public systems advantages, especially from the point of view of better professional opportunities in the future thanks to their alumni network and individual tailored system.

  • @moulmour
    @moulmour 5 лет назад

    Thanks a lot teacher!

  • @elsynapararem6296
    @elsynapararem6296 4 года назад

    Thank you so much Sir. Very helpful :--)

  • @mendie4008
    @mendie4008 5 лет назад +1

    thank you soooooooooooooo much for this

  • @NA-jb5mp
    @NA-jb5mp 5 лет назад

    Really helped! Thx!

  • @ashusharma8515
    @ashusharma8515 4 года назад

    Is it write to use idioms like killing two birds with one stone etc. In essay writing??

  • @alperaltun2279
    @alperaltun2279 4 года назад +2

    Thanks Adam:) I'm preparing for IELTS and I need someone for checking my essay so is there anyone who needs IELTS writing buddy? :)

  • @اميرةأحمد-ظ2ك
    @اميرةأحمد-ظ2ك 4 года назад

    thank you for your efforts i follow your instructions and I hope to raise my writting skills accept my greetings

    • @yohannesseifu8559
      @yohannesseifu8559 3 года назад

      adama it is fine and i follw your program but some tines intrente break down my country pls down load in my email

  • @rebarsalahaddin1115
    @rebarsalahaddin1115 5 лет назад

    You are amazing.

  • @mahsa7722
    @mahsa7722 4 года назад

    Hi, I love how you teach and explain very well, but it is difficult for me to understand because it is almost two years living in the United State. Second-year of college and ESL class is dangerous with essay writing. :((

  • @maansaabmaansaab8223
    @maansaabmaansaab8223 5 лет назад

    Sir how we can make linkage of each point please make video

  • @rexysa8287
    @rexysa8287 5 лет назад

    very good lesson, thank you so much. am looking for your website but i cannot find that essay correction service details as you mention in the video.

  • @bngocoanh2001
    @bngocoanh2001 3 года назад

    This is very great. Could I use this for my students? Thank you so much for your reply.

  • @SantKumar-yu1rb
    @SantKumar-yu1rb 2 года назад

    Sir,Please upload a video on emotive language in english.

  • @amandajanuariadesiqueira6
    @amandajanuariadesiqueira6 5 лет назад

    I have a question !
    We learn about to be clear in our essays . We can’t suppose that the reader knows something. We have to give details. However, we can do inferences in your essay , right? If it is right , what is the right way to do that ?