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  • How to write a task 2 essay, from understanding the task, to planning, to writing the introduction, body, and conclusion. See proper essay structure, sentence and vocabulary variety, and good support. Two versions of the essay are presented.
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  • @finefunke
    @finefunke 3 года назад +59

    I saw this video 30 mins to my exam, adopted the approach and got 7.0. Thanks 🙏🏾

  • @Ligmaments
    @Ligmaments 7 лет назад +725

    You are simply the best English teacher on RUclips with a focus on writing.

  • @relaxing_sensual_erotic
    @relaxing_sensual_erotic 7 лет назад +22

    Thanks Adam for these suggestions and recommendations!!!
    Each video made by yourself is so useful.

  • @sheenashah1054
    @sheenashah1054 6 лет назад +7

    Very clear, comprehensive, and objective for non-natives. Great volunteering!!!
    Best Rewards

  • @nadrah294
    @nadrah294 8 лет назад +120

    I stumbled across this video after following your EngVid. As a self-learner I wanted to say thank you for creating all of these helpful IELTS videos!

    • @inesmartinez2119
      @inesmartinez2119 7 лет назад +4

      Adam, I'm taking the CPE Cambridge at the end of the year and there's a compulsory essay which is a nightmare at times!! It's an essay of evaluation and opinion of two texts which present similar or opposing views. I found your paragraph video very useful. Could you explain this kind of essay in another video? Thanks a lot.

    • @mariacassel9402
      @mariacassel9402 7 лет назад

      is that a video on transitions? you are so good at them.

    • @mabubakartalal7563
      @mabubakartalal7563 7 лет назад

      hahah i think you writing skills are already outstanding, so i think there is no need of other video for you ines Martinez

    • @POPULARTKO
      @POPULARTKO 7 лет назад +1

      Your explanation is simple to understand and put to practice. I am sure my score will improve when I seat for the exam.

    • @inesmartinez2119
      @inesmartinez2119 7 лет назад +1

      M Abubakar Talal haha thanks but believe me writing a good essay for CPE takes a lot of practice and involves different skills. For example, paraphrasing is quite challenging in some cases and adding examples when you don't know a lot about the topic haha.

  • @ameliaa9554
    @ameliaa9554 7 лет назад +21

    This is the perfect IELTS lesson I have ever seen ,I swear ,I really really really help me a lot ,before this,I was totally frustrated .You are the best teacher!!!

  • @TheBrowniemusic
    @TheBrowniemusic 7 лет назад +5

    Badass. I've been following you for almost a year, you got very strong teaching skills

  • @danbisengo319
    @danbisengo319 7 лет назад +1

    The best English teacher ever seen with incomparable skills of teaching essay writing!

  • @elsapiuux
    @elsapiuux 7 лет назад +93

    Let me congratulate you Adam. Your videos are great tools to try to conquer our fears writing essays in English. You made it easier for me.

  • @giorgitvaltavdze5525
    @giorgitvaltavdze5525 7 лет назад +10

    actually, this is the most complete explanation of writing part I have ever seen

  • @cohallel.7
    @cohallel.7 7 лет назад +2

    Adam, you are the best English teacher I ever saw, I love your focus and concentration!
    You just start from scratch and help us to draw the right picture on the right moment!
    attention and atitude are the best qualities that save us from pseudo- selective-learning!

  • @essoumbapaola8765
    @essoumbapaola8765 7 лет назад +2

    this guy's video is exactly what i was looking for. he literrally gives all in detail. great

  • @MrHamood021
    @MrHamood021 7 лет назад +179

    As I'm preparing for IELTS exam, I've watched too many videos about the writing section. Your way of teaching how to write is indeed the best! Thank you.

    • @oresmaa6656
      @oresmaa6656 6 лет назад +3

      what is IETLS exam

    • @xcalcovarze6000
      @xcalcovarze6000 6 лет назад +2

      is this a joke?

    • @mshklh2099
      @mshklh2099 5 лет назад +1

      laila H اختبار يحدد مستواك باللغة الانجليزية
      Exam that test your English skills such as listening, speaking, reading and writing.

    • @marcinprzewocki3313
      @marcinprzewocki3313 5 лет назад

      Let us know how that goes :)

    • @Gerard_2024
      @Gerard_2024 4 года назад

      @@@oresmaa6656... If you google IELTS you will get the answer. I have done it for you...International English Language Testing System .

  • @delisadabney7538
    @delisadabney7538 4 года назад +8

    This tutorial is so straight forward and clear, very helpful.

  • @SumedhaManabaranaKandy
    @SumedhaManabaranaKandy 4 года назад +18

    Adam, I've watched your lessons many times, you're brilliant!

  • @all_sushhhka
    @all_sushhhka 2 года назад +1

    Thank you, Adam! I’m not preparing for english exams but your lessons helps me to write about the things i care in a proper and understandable way. Thank you for your work!!

  • @ramtha2978
    @ramtha2978 7 лет назад +33

    Adam , you and Liz are the best in IELTS teaching.Great teacher..

  • @satyaakshayp975
    @satyaakshayp975 5 лет назад +8

    I highly appreciate your work. You're really making it easy for the students to actually understand what this test is all about, and yeah you're an awesome teacher. The way you explain, you're killing it.

  • @ameliakovalenko5556
    @ameliakovalenko5556 4 года назад +3

    The best walk/through the writing section so far.

  • @ramutemikelskiene4975
    @ramutemikelskiene4975 7 лет назад +2

    Amazing, I wish I have ever had a teacher like you . Thank you indeed!!!

  • @laithhaddadin8318
    @laithhaddadin8318 7 лет назад +20

    I have done three exercises at the same time in one video; Listening to you as a native speaker, reading that well-structured essay, and of course all writing tips you have mentioned especially the planning part.
    Simply Amazing! Best Teacher.

  • @GanijonRahimov
    @GanijonRahimov 5 лет назад +3

    Adam, you are top ESL teacher ever! The way you explain the writing is easy to follow and it gives us an idea that writing is "a piece of cake"

  • @michaelgameel5584
    @michaelgameel5584 7 лет назад +1

    That was seriously amazingly perfect,incredibly accessible and so focused...You've got such an easy simple way of explanation that really covers every point a learner needs to know...Perfect job,sir!!!

  • @Bassoomamor
    @Bassoomamor 7 лет назад +5

    This is the best lesson i have ever found on writing essaies.
    I'm your fan now.

  • @andrescanseco4949
    @andrescanseco4949 4 года назад +5

    It really looks so complicated. However with this kind of teacher that he have everything is easy possible. You always explain everything in details. I love the way you teach specially because you always give examples and states the meaning of these vocabulary' s words. Thank you so much for you lessons.

  • @josecontreras7153
    @josecontreras7153 7 лет назад +529

    You're the man! Best English teacher ever!

  • @ParthivDesaii
    @ParthivDesaii 4 года назад

    This is the best video for essay writing on youtube. There are many videos on same topic but no one was as precise as him. Thankyou :)

  • @andrewshatnyy
    @andrewshatnyy 6 лет назад +3

    This is the most easy delivered essay writing tutorial by far

  • @falcons9659
    @falcons9659 4 года назад +5

    Such a passionate teacher, you speak clearly and eloquently with great notes. God bless you for your efforts and passions

  • @quranwithishfaqnasreen2145
    @quranwithishfaqnasreen2145 6 лет назад +4

    You,Liz,Ryan ,Chris Pell all are extremely extraordinary to deliver the outstanding explanation for the students .Thanks a lot Adam 😍

  • @chibuzoukegbu2968
    @chibuzoukegbu2968 4 года назад

    You're a good teacher in essay writing. The way you dissect the various parts of the essay makes it even more useful for an essay writing but also for understanding a comprehension; by knowing the themes, topic sentences, linking words etc. Those would help one to fish out the author's tone, purpose and main point of the essay. I hope to follow up your tutorials henceforth. What brought my score down the last time I sat for a TOEFL exam was the reading section. I got 22 in writing, which I hope to improve upon,a 23 in speaking and a 22 in listening. I hope to see a spike in my scores when next I'll redo the test. Thank you! Thank you!

  • @peterhenry778
    @peterhenry778 5 лет назад +2

    you have actually helped me how to figure out essay writing .thank you

  • @mr.zakariaabdulhameed7636
    @mr.zakariaabdulhameed7636 8 лет назад +40

    Appreciate ur efforts to help us improve our English skills.

  • @sidharth-singh
    @sidharth-singh 4 года назад +3

    This video really helped me to become able to use the tools in my arsenal. Thank you so much.

  • @dotman7791
    @dotman7791 5 лет назад +2

    Really, it's​ the best video for writing an essay on youtube.

  • @LinkaParka
    @LinkaParka 7 лет назад

    Adam, i have never seen such great teacher as you. You were born to be a teacher...

  • @sofiacornejo1056
    @sofiacornejo1056 7 лет назад +10

    Adam , you're very easy on the eye. Thank you for this teaching video. I had a very hard time with essays...this is helpful!

  • @liam12ful
    @liam12ful 6 лет назад +14

    I'm a self-learner and your IELTS videos are just perfect, they makes me improve my writting. Thank you for that! :)

  • @theaccountanthub
    @theaccountanthub 7 лет назад +2

    this is the amazing practice i had in my last 15 days preparation. thank you so much.

  • @josecarlosmartin20
    @josecarlosmartin20 3 года назад

    Just subscribed to your channel. I'm taking the TOEFL this month and have been practicing for it. I think you have provided me the best practice tips I have watched so far. In this video, when you presented the question, I decided to takle it in thirty minutes, as the test does. Just managed to end the writing with 305 words with no time to spare. Then I proceeded to watch the rest of your video and was glad to find that I come with the same themes and topics as you did. Just with poorer execution and only that amount of words. I keep practicing to improve my essay lenght with time to spare for the test day. Thank you so much for your tips!

  • @abdurrashad4395
    @abdurrashad4395 5 лет назад +3

    The same way we expect more lengthy essays from ur highness... Great teacher

  • @umasatrisha7563
    @umasatrisha7563 8 лет назад +3

    Really appreciate your videos. I've been watching all your vids on both task 1 and 2 for writing test. thanx :)

  • @anouluckphengvongsa2806
    @anouluckphengvongsa2806 2 года назад

    This is the best explanation video about writing essay I’ve ever seen before. So thankful to see this video on youtube.

  • @jacobtourey9509
    @jacobtourey9509 6 лет назад

    you are very focused and organized in terms of your teaching plan, i thinks evevry body can ezily tune in and understand your videos.

  • @kajalpawar1159
    @kajalpawar1159 3 года назад +3

    Very well taught after going through so many videos I finally found the perfect video.

  • @celtsking9447
    @celtsking9447 5 лет назад +42

    You're really my role modal of recognising IELTS exam. I feel so lucky to notice your teaching videos and get inspirations from yours before my real exam.

  • @muqirborjigin4845
    @muqirborjigin4845 6 лет назад

    Hi, actually this is my second time to watch this video. When I watched it at the first time, seems last year, I couldn't understand so much because of the lack of the vocabulary and listening skills but I knew this video was a very useful tutorial then I came again. Adam, Thank you.

  • @pedagogiaatwork
    @pedagogiaatwork 6 лет назад

    Agradecida infinitamente por tu trabajo en estos videos acerca del TOEFL. Bendiciones. Infinitely thankful for all the great work and effort you have put on these videos for the TOEFL preparation. Blessings. :)

  • @ephraimprof799
    @ephraimprof799 7 лет назад +3

    Thank you very much, it's great to be part of this English class.

  • @subraman9259
    @subraman9259 5 лет назад +3

    ADAM, you are one of the great teacher. keep it up buddy.

  • @zhamilyakussainova3038
    @zhamilyakussainova3038 7 лет назад +1

    Thank you so much for your lessons, Adam! Yesterday I sat IELTS, have a good feeling about the results, will see on the 25th) thanks to your lessons felt really comfortable and confident at writing part of the test)

  • @qukeyu
    @qukeyu 7 лет назад

    Really wanna improve my writing, glad I found this video~ thx and u really are a nice teacher!

  • @fabiocosta3003
    @fabiocosta3003 7 лет назад +3

    Very good explanation about argumentative essay! I really appreciate it!

  • @biatamujuntu
    @biatamujuntu 7 лет назад +9

    TNX a million, regards from Brazil!

  • @omneyatag6738
    @omneyatag6738 7 лет назад

    this is so efficient and inspiring and into the point, you are the best teacher. thank you!

  • @chanbunnara8854
    @chanbunnara8854 6 лет назад

    Thank you so much for all. I have followed your previous and current presentations and realize that you are helping my English and career.

  • @robinjoy123
    @robinjoy123 6 лет назад +14

    Adam, your level of English in the video is beyond words.. if this essay was written in the actual exam, you might have got some award from IELTS.. keep going..

  • @robelhaile2170
    @robelhaile2170 6 лет назад +7

    "they're testing ur english they're not testing ur intellegence" that put my worries at ease THANK YOU!

    • @matheus89555
      @matheus89555 4 года назад +1

      And you really believe on that?

  • @lauraportillo8193
    @lauraportillo8193 6 лет назад

    I saw like 15 videos before this and man, this is the only helpful at all, thank you!

  • @ps0923
    @ps0923 7 лет назад

    Loved it!! Thank you. Your tutorial is all well as your essay example. 👍

  • @josealbornoz2008
    @josealbornoz2008 4 года назад +6

    I don’t know why when this teacher speaks, I feel he’s speaking in my own language.

  • @felipeantoniovaldiviaaedo1150
    @felipeantoniovaldiviaaedo1150 7 лет назад +6

    So nice Adam.! I want to take Toefl test in April, I`ve been practicing with your videos and I feel more confidence thanks to your classes.

    • @akintoladebbie2587
      @akintoladebbie2587 4 года назад

      Thanks for this great video, please can you analyse task one as well?Thank you.

  • @arbelokhan3485
    @arbelokhan3485 10 месяцев назад +1

    On of the best instructors on RUclips.

  • @armandolara9673
    @armandolara9673 6 лет назад

    Thank you for all the details Adam. This channel is wonderful.

  • @nourah8442
    @nourah8442 8 лет назад +4

    This is really helpful. Thank u Adam.

  • @MRIBEIROSAX
    @MRIBEIROSAX 7 лет назад +3

    Thank you for this excelente lesson about the essay! Best wishes!

  • @ioanabatca4410
    @ioanabatca4410 2 года назад

    Thank you, Adam! Amazing content and many points of view explained plain and simple. You have excellent communication skills, best lesson delivered to me. I have now a great tool to use. Writing is a great tool nowadays. Thank you very much!

  • @sandeshkey3814
    @sandeshkey3814 5 лет назад +1

    Really Helpful !
    Got overall 7 band in my IELTS examination.
    Thank You 👏

  • @KorayCakir
    @KorayCakir 3 года назад +9

    "Learning how to scetch an essay is one of the common video topics in mediums, such as RUclips, and Adam is one of the best among many contributor according to a large database of user researchs. Even though, his lack of fashion sense that can be observed by merely looking at shirts that he wears in many videos may proves opposite to some, I strongly agree with mainstream opinion, as his skills in compartmentalization of essay is out of ordinary, so does his natural tendency regarding conveying a message."
    How was it, sensei?

  • @sepidehnikfarjam4359
    @sepidehnikfarjam4359 4 года назад +4

    Hello Adam! I have recently taken a TOEFL test (score: 105) and I got a lot of help from your videos about writing essays. Thank you! :)

  • @edward26022209
    @edward26022209 7 лет назад +1

    thanks, you're so clear on your speaking and explanations

  • @bikashpandey6510
    @bikashpandey6510 4 года назад

    I have watched at least thousands of videos for IELTS writing though none of them were as helpful as yours . Thanks a lot .

  • @matildaiilonga6002
    @matildaiilonga6002 5 лет назад +8

    I look at this essay and ask myself what on earth I have been writing my whole life! I mean, just look at this essay, so much planning and all that. From now on I'll start planning my work like you do. Thank you so much for the tutorial.

    • @anthonyjoshua6694
      @anthonyjoshua6694 4 года назад

      Trash

    • @mariekargbo4830
      @mariekargbo4830 2 года назад

      Thanks u sir for helping us 🙏 because as for me I never understood nothing in essay writing.but with the help of u and God ar understood a little bit, thank u sir for the support 🙏🙏🙏

  • @margiedaitol2349
    @margiedaitol2349 6 лет назад +4

    You're the best!!I've learned a lot from this video. This will also help my students to improve their writing skills. Maraming Salamat! (Thank You!)

  • @muhammadasimramzan5613
    @muhammadasimramzan5613 6 лет назад

    this is the most clear and easily understandable English lecture i ever watched online. job well done man

  • @powerofroses1670
    @powerofroses1670 5 лет назад

    Thank you. You are the best teacher in the world. I love learning something new from you. I need to improve my writing skills for the better.

  • @ahmedyaseen2966
    @ahmedyaseen2966 7 лет назад +20

    Thanks a lot for your big efforts

  • @wyllianottz4382
    @wyllianottz4382 6 лет назад +3

    thanks! good job!

  • @marcelagerez932
    @marcelagerez932 5 лет назад

    Adam, thank you so much!! I have an exam today and your videos were a great help!

  • @worldcitizen9102
    @worldcitizen9102 6 лет назад +1

    If only my teacher could have explained like this. Excellent, Brilliant!

  • @lilianaonica6223
    @lilianaonica6223 3 года назад +8

    You are 100 % a highest level teacher! Thank you so much for all your brilliant explanations!!!

  • @bojanaboskovic8841
    @bojanaboskovic8841 7 лет назад +4

    Thank you sooo much :) Your ideas are so logical and smart, they have really helped me in the reading part, I think you`re gonna save my writing task, too :)

  • @raza8822
    @raza8822 4 года назад

    you are the best teacher so far on RUclips I found..... thank you

  • @InvisionHopeHealthyLiving
    @InvisionHopeHealthyLiving 4 года назад

    Thanks. I like your transition words. On many tests like TOEFL, CELPIP or IELTS, using those words make your sentences flow smoothly and shows mastery of the language.

  • @febasaju2587
    @febasaju2587 7 лет назад +12

    Thank you sir...

  • @saraeftekharazam8000
    @saraeftekharazam8000 7 лет назад +10

    Thanks for your sharing useful videos🌺🌺🌺🌺

  • @jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj0
    @jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj0 2 года назад

    As someone that grew up very unfocused and uncommitted to all academia, this has been a life saver. Thank you

  • @reemkhalifamohammed5070
    @reemkhalifamohammed5070 4 года назад +1

    It's really very useful ,thank you very much, I wrote the whole details and steps and now I can follow them to write essays.

  • @MuhammadUmar-jo4qj
    @MuhammadUmar-jo4qj 5 лет назад +3

    Could u make a short video on "synthesis " i have to prepare it for my final exam which is imminent.

  • @natavan286
    @natavan286 8 лет назад +3

    Very helpful video! Thank you a lot!

  • @obioraonyedili892
    @obioraonyedili892 3 года назад +1

    I want to express my gratitude to you for the guide provided through your RUclips video especially on Essay writing. I just sat for a TOEFL(iBT) test on October 31,2020. I followed your guidelines and I did very well in TOEFL. Infact in the Writing part I got 25 out of 30marks,& a total score of 82marks out of 120. This was just 3days preparatory with your video.. Thank you so much. I’ll recommend your video to my friends & family who wish to sit for TOEFL or IELTS.

  • @amiraalsaghir5195
    @amiraalsaghir5195 2 месяца назад

    I’m speechless .. you are the best teacher I’ve seen online ever .. chapeau ❤

  • @camisand324
    @camisand324 3 года назад +5

    Thank you Adam!!!, I got my TOEFL high score. It helped me a lot to improve my essays.I am so happy with my TOEFL score.

  • @sallyred4347
    @sallyred4347 3 года назад +4

    i am aware of most of the words used in the essay. However, these rarely ever come to mind while writing the essay :(

  • @artinstructor6352
    @artinstructor6352 6 лет назад +1

    You and liz are best teachers on RUclips 😍😍 stay blessed. I enjoy your lessons and love everything about it your organizing brief way, your balanced expressive voice and your clarity 😍😍❤️

  • @maramalsakkaf5332
    @maramalsakkaf5332 Год назад

    I have been studying English my whole life and this was the best lesson I have ever taken. Thanks a million.

  • @yuliiahavrylova7041
    @yuliiahavrylova7041 7 лет назад +5

    thank you sooo much!!!

  • @sukhdhaliwal00
    @sukhdhaliwal00 7 лет назад +32

    Superb..... Thanks 😍....i m so nervous ....my exam date is 21 jan.

    • @mansurjonturobov8215
      @mansurjonturobov8215 7 лет назад +1

      SUKH DHALIWAL assalam alaikum the same here

    • @mansurjonturobov8215
      @mansurjonturobov8215 7 лет назад

      SUKH DHALIWAL may i ask you how to comminucate with you?

    • @bouz44
      @bouz44 7 лет назад

      hope that you did well

    • @Tammisettysaivenkat
      @Tammisettysaivenkat 7 лет назад +1

      how did the test go?

    • @henoksol
      @henoksol 7 лет назад

      hello I'm gonna take IELTS tomorrow can I communicate with you

  • @nahidnmhra5035
    @nahidnmhra5035 4 года назад +1

    Thank you So much Sir, you are really extremely kind and teach the most helpful topicts on TOEFL and IELTS!

  • @HereAndHereafter
    @HereAndHereafter 2 года назад

    Thank you very much Adam.
    I've watched this video, among others, and I am happy to get a 7.5 in IELTS in 2020, and 28 in Toefl last weekend.
    Thanks to Adam and to Rebecca in another video. You guys are the best, especially in the writing tasks.