We understand that some scenes may not make logical sense. The film was created with a passion for filming and the post-apo world. We are beginners in this, not professionals. We don't have good equipment. We are aware of the mistakes we have made. Anyway, thanks for the positive comments. Thank you!
If trees and bushes grow, you can grow... But I understant a whole season, or weather pattern, or location can't be changed... Oh ...uh But they can, says me... This was etty good, so keep it up, says the stranger 4 years later, lol. But still, great job
I know this is over a year ago but just wanted to say, this is a great piece of work! Although I can see a lot of improvements when it comes to sound design. Some scenes feel a tad bit lackluster because some of the Foley are a little bit to loud, and in some cases to quiet, with the music overwhelming it. But besides that well done! Hope to see a lot of these kinds of short films! I'm sorry for my criticism and if it offends anyone.
pretty cool but only critique i have is iwish more dialog about whats going on and also didnt understand why the main character is wearing a gas mask when it doesnt look super hazy or foggy or like chemicals in the air but if there was more dialog could of explained that but the cinematics are clean and the way its put together is nicely done with the music as well good work
Maniera wspolna dla prawie wszystkich filmow z tego gatunku: idzie czlowiek przez ruiny albo pustynie. Ma maske gazowa i plecak. Spotyka drugiego czlowieka. Jeden zabija drugiego. Ocalaly idzie dalej i tak dalej...Dlaczego zabijaja sie zamiast sie rozmnazac?...
Anyone remember a short film of a lone soldier where it's a montage of them just running across fields etc (a lot of running if I recall, "So I run" is a phrase I think narratively)., coming upon a house, maybe being bit, and then being killed by another survivor?
People who say there's no morals because the capturers had mercy but got killed, missed the reason why he was held captive, in a world with "no food": CANNIBALISM. Chains are the preservation method, the "fridge" in every post-famine apocalypse. Read a little more about the genre before commenting on it in ignorance.
Great idea, love it. I feel though in those dyer situation, if you kill people who were trying to do what ever to you, look what they got and take what you can/need. The only other critic I noticed, was the sound, some times all the sound would go to my left earphone, I have turtle beach head set and my sound system as well, but music sound fx would be all around, which was kinda weird when trying to pay attention....
A technically relatively well-made film! But without morals! So typical of most of these films! The "hero" is himself ambushed and knocked out at 6:12 - But NOT killed!!! However, he then kills these two attackers without mercy! And he also kills two other people without mercy, although these two people could easily have killed him themselves without much effort... So HE is the killer and the monster without mercy! Is this supposed to be the moral!? Because then the two attackers at 6:12 should have killed him instead of just tying him up...
im afilm macker and im wondring how actors wering gas mask ....and the show flowers and tress on the scean ..if you will mack (Post-Apocalyptic) with gas mask that mean that air is toxic and every thing should be dead grass flowesr trees
le titre oublie "There is no electricity and no means of displacement". Il ne faut pas oublier qu'un homme peut "survivre sans boire ni manger" pendant 20 jours maximum, au delà on meurt très vite de soif et de faim !!!
Nice music but a Survivor? Not the way he was acting anyway. Letting people get the drop on you once is bad enough but twice? BTW this is NOT Cyberpunk. To be Cyberpunk it would have to involve advanced computers and technology, possibly even mechanical enhancements to the body, or even bioware. No sign of any of that. Just ten minutes of not much which the undeserving survivor survived.
I hate to say it but these are all exactly the same! I’ve seen nearly a dozen just like this so it has become monotonous and not worth watching them anymore.
Lacks continuity. Some very punchy graphic board type scenes. Update: Honestly I think this is good in ways I'm just not well equipped to appreciate. My sound sensitivity make the artistic audio stylings painful and distracting. I wanted to like it more.
A total waste of time and energy. No plot, no nothing. Guy fights and kills four people, after wandering about in what looks like a derelict and crumbling monastery and a factory. What was he hoping to find in such places in a post Apocalyptic world, as they would have been picked clean long ago? I know... He was looking for a half decent script! 😂😂😂
the short film is good but in a survival situation the main character made so many mistakes, I`m surprised he was not killed within the first 30 seconds of the film.
We understand that some scenes may not make logical sense. The film was created with a passion for filming and the post-apo world. We are beginners in this, not professionals. We don't have good equipment. We are aware of the mistakes we have made. Anyway, thanks for the positive comments. Thank you!
I think it was AMAZING, and me being a beginner too, it was very inspiring and the setting and costume design were incredible
You did a wonderful job. I can get the feel of every man for himself situation. Keep making films I’d like to see more
Living alone doesn’t make sense….
Great work guys. Great scene’s.
Stopped watching when I saw the character. Had no gloves.
You did well. I enjoyed watching.
for being beginners I can say that with this movie you have done a wonderful job . keep up the GREAT WORK.
thanks Kelly !
Woow mega dobrze zrobione, jestem pod wrażeniem 😱👏🏼
Very Well Done! 💯
Thanks !
Well done. Good light / filters, good costumes, film angles, sets, etc. Very grim . Would watch a longer film
Thank you! In the future, unfortunately I want to make films with a shorter amount of time, but more often.
And after all thats happened to us and the earth... We're still killing each other.. So sad but painfully true movie.😪😪
😂😂ในบ้านสิ😅
Gee, a true intellectual masterpiece.
Super produkcja, oczywiście łapka w górę. Świetny scenariusz i props dla głównego aktora. Czekam na kolejną część :-)
Dzięki i pozdrawiam ;)
If trees and bushes grow, you can grow... But I understant a whole season, or weather pattern, or location can't be changed... Oh ...uh But they can, says me...
This was
etty good, so keep it up, says the stranger 4 years later, lol. But still, great job
Epic .... loved the mood and lightening ... I think the storyline is leading to a series ... hope you make this !
Thank you very much! But I plan to make films in various genres on this channel ;)
ABSOLUTE PERFECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you very much I appreciate it ;)
I know this is over a year ago but just wanted to say, this is a great piece of work!
Although I can see a lot of improvements when it comes to sound design. Some scenes feel a tad bit lackluster because some of the Foley are a little bit to loud, and in some cases to quiet, with the music overwhelming it. But besides that well done! Hope to see a lot of these kinds of short films!
I'm sorry for my criticism and if it offends anyone.
Thank you very much for your opinion!
It's a very good start!!!👍👍👍👍
Thank you very much!
I loved it...
Thanks Armando ;)
finally a respirator...and great boots.
Cool film
Thx!
It seems like a proof of concept film. Which is a great start. I hope you get to flesh it out to a complete story.
This is proof we need people or mighty Lonely
Czuć Stalkera👍
Well done I love it and its rlly sad That it is so Underrated you have my sub
Thank you very much Cristian!
@@mateuszgraczewskifilms5079 :))))
I know this is 3 years old but could you please by any chance tell me what that respirator was used? I really wanna get one
Dam no hope I’m hooked
Thanks Paul!
Eu gostei muito do trabalho de vocês! Parabéns! Espero que vire filmes e séries com essa temática. Sucesso!!!
Estava boa
A little on the dark side,but pretty good anyway .Keep up the good work .Youll get better as you go along.
Thank you very much Mike !
Bleak and gray.
No communication.
Surviving
that's ALL you do.
+ Durasaxon +
Just a random question was the knocked over chair a reference to Tennet ?
I personally love the coloring of the movie I really like the dismal landscape
thank you Eric!
Emeğinize sağlık👏👏👏
well sure enough he is a survivor. and the movie was great
Thank you Steven!
Not bad at all actually. 👌
Thanks !
Good job!
Thank you Rick!
i like it👍👍
I appreciate it
pretty cool but only critique i have is iwish more dialog about whats going on and also didnt understand why the main character is wearing a gas mask when it doesnt look super hazy or foggy or like chemicals in the air but if there was more dialog could of explained that but the cinematics are clean and the way its put together is nicely done with the music as well good work
He was knocked out from behind without seeing his attackers, how did he know there was only 2?
Maniera wspolna dla prawie wszystkich filmow z tego gatunku: idzie czlowiek przez ruiny albo pustynie. Ma maske gazowa i plecak. Spotyka drugiego czlowieka. Jeden zabija drugiego. Ocalaly idzie dalej i tak dalej...Dlaczego zabijaja sie zamiast sie rozmnazac?...
Yeah, that chick with the gun was kinda hot...
The filter is literally just fallout 3. I love it
Thanks!
Anyone remember a short film of a lone soldier where it's a montage of them just running across fields etc (a lot of running if I recall, "So I run" is a phrase I think narratively)., coming upon a house, maybe being bit, and then being killed by another survivor?
Movie name with release date
Will you make a series?
There will be no sequel to this part, because there will be new movies in different genres, but I hope you like them !
The cinematography is amazing
I appreciate that! Thanks!
👍
Thanks!
Is Evolution A Conspiracy Theory?
POV: you're playing S.T.A.L.K.E.R.
Dopiero włączyłem i wiem że jest 👍🤘
Gdzie nagrywane?bo widzę znajoma poniemiecką wieże ciśnień👍
People who say there's no morals because the capturers had mercy but got killed, missed the reason why he was held captive, in a world with "no food": CANNIBALISM. Chains are the preservation method, the "fridge" in every post-famine apocalypse.
Read a little more about the genre before commenting on it in ignorance.
May I please have some MORE
MS?
Filmed on location in Detroit.
It was filmed in Poland, couse I'm from Poland ;)
Great idea, love it. I feel though in those dyer situation, if you kill people who were trying to do what ever to you, look what they got and take what you can/need. The only other critic I noticed, was the sound, some times all the sound would go to my left earphone, I have turtle beach head set and my sound system as well, but music sound fx would be all around, which was kinda weird when trying to pay attention....
Yes you are right.. we made a mistake with sound, but we'll correct this in next movie. So thx for your comment!
@@mateuszgraczewskifilms5079 Can't wait till the next movie, it'll be awesome AF!.
It is "dire" situation.
Get a real education.
Thank you.
If there were No Food an More Importantly, No Water, There Would be NO STORY.
Apparently, there's still a typewriter.
Really good film! But I’m not sure if you would call this cyberpunk.
We are so aware of this. It was just a little clickbait ;) thanks for your opinion!
No gun?
they must have good barbers in the apocalypse cos my man has a good trim
Take the labels off your food cans folks, ain't hot dogs and tapioca a winner?
Not bad, would be better with a narrator though.
Thanks!
this is literally S.T.A.L.K.E.R.
Really wanted to watch this ... actually HEAR it. No CC, mono sound? Sound Engineer, try again and do better 😎
i feel you i had to stop a minute or two in because of the audio
@@revosfts I put the headphones on right to left and the sound was a little better. Not great, but somewhat ok.
A good short but most of the time I couldn't see anything.
Little does he know that was the last female on earth.
Nice job, stalker
thanks ;)
"There is no food...
There is no water...
Except for the billions of canned goods and bottles of water produced before the nuclear disaster..." 🙄
Everyone should prepare a little, enough supplies for a month at least. Buy a gun and plenty of ammo. Good luck everyone, it's coming
A technically relatively well-made film!
But without morals!
So typical of most of these films!
The "hero" is himself ambushed and knocked out at 6:12 - But NOT killed!!!
However, he then kills these two attackers without mercy!
And he also kills two other people without mercy, although these two people could easily have killed him themselves without much effort...
So HE is the killer and the monster without mercy!
Is this supposed to be the moral!?
Because then the two attackers at 6:12 should have killed him instead of just tying him up...
Zombies make no sense to me😮.
im afilm macker and im wondring how actors wering gas mask ....and the show flowers and tress on the scean ..if you will mack (Post-Apocalyptic) with gas mask that mean that air is toxic and every thing should be dead grass flowesr trees
le titre oublie "There is no electricity and no means of displacement". Il ne faut pas oublier qu'un homme peut "survivre sans boire ni manger" pendant 20 jours maximum, au delà on meurt très vite de soif et de faim !!!
👁️👃👁️
Nice music but a Survivor? Not the way he was acting anyway. Letting people get the drop on you once is bad enough but twice?
BTW this is NOT Cyberpunk. To be Cyberpunk it would have to involve advanced computers and technology, possibly even mechanical enhancements to the body, or even bioware. No sign of any of that. Just ten minutes of not much which the undeserving survivor survived.
I hate to say it but these are all exactly the same! I’ve seen nearly a dozen just like this so it has become monotonous and not worth watching them anymore.
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Pointless. Tomato meter: 2
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Too dark. Can't see vidio.
Lacks continuity. Some very punchy graphic board type scenes.
Update: Honestly I think this is good in ways I'm just not well equipped to appreciate. My sound sensitivity make the artistic audio stylings painful and distracting. I wanted to like it more.
🐎💨💩
A total waste of time and energy.
No plot, no nothing.
Guy fights and kills four people, after wandering about in what looks like a derelict and crumbling monastery and a factory.
What was he hoping to find in such places in a post Apocalyptic world, as they would have been picked clean long ago?
I know... He was looking for a half decent script! 😂😂😂
the short film is good but in a survival situation the main character made so many mistakes, I`m surprised he was not killed within the first 30 seconds of the film.
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