"I'm working as a night guard at a school. The rules will either save me, or kill me" Creepypasta
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- Опубликовано: 7 сен 2021
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60$ an hour as a night guard for a college student is without exaggeration the most unbeliveable part of this whole story.
Lol true
Idk man, that memory is kinda sketchy
I thought he said sixteen. Lol
@@wyntersteele1a CD c📠
I mean I'd take my chances with the monsters for 60 buck n hour
Rule #1 for surviving in the Rules Cinematic Universe: The rules are never a prank.
Fr fr
when will they learn
I've actually noticed something: A couple months ago to over half a year ago these stories always had protagonists ignoring the rules and thinking they're a joke. Now, they basically always go "is this a joke" but then still attempt following the rules. I like it, almost like they are a hive mind that learned to respect the fules
Except for that one story where there was two sets of rules and one was fake and a trap
Until they are lol
Sounds like this guy probably could have survived if he hadn't randomly stopped in the vents to write the story for all of us he could have just waited until after his shift to write this
Right lmoe
Agreed XD The story was decent, but the ending seemed inappropriate.
fax
Goddamn right 😂
The scariest part of this story is this guy's memory! Like, what the heck? How does one memorize a whole page of rules and recite them word for word over the course of 6 hours when you only read them once???
photographic memory enters the chat.
@@Chronicler9 Seems to be something all these protagonists have in these rule horror stories
He is so powerfull
How did the write all that in the last few minutes of his life inside a dark vent that's the real question
The issue with these kinds of stories is that there is never a reason for the job to exist and then never a reason for the list. Why does the guard have to make rounds or check the basement or why does the school need a guard?
Yea I noticed a couple plot errors in this story and several key elements that are important to making a reader invested in the story like world building, character background and though his motivation is touched on it could be built up on a bit more. This seems like a creative writing assignment outline. The writer has talent and I'm sure if they keep at it they will get better. If redone this story has potential to be really good but I was able to accurately predict every aspect of this story down to the cliffhanger ending. I hope to hear more from this author.
honestly they should just left it at him reading the list and leaving cause the story just was him going through everything on the list.
You know you make a very good point
$60 an hour 😂
Yea its not the best, but if an extended version with the employer explaining what the fuck just happened would be better
This sounds like it would be a pretty lit FNAF fangame.
Yeah it would
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Yup
i do like these rule stories but I want stories of the people who figured them all out! It would be so fun to go along with the person as he/she tries different things to stay alive and having close calls!
There’s one named something like “I write the rules lists you hear about” that’s really good.
But I totally agree, I’d love to see more of it.
@@NoArtisticLimitation ohhhh I’ll have the check it out! Thank you!
@@NoArtisticLimitation hey hey! do you know more of these types of stories? i love the whole premise of having to survive a monster playground
That would only be possible in a longer-form creepypasta.
The series on the guy being chased through the afterlife...dead man running, I think it’s called? Might bear some elements of that. Although those aren’t so much rules as survival tips.
The one thing I always wonder about these rulepastas is - why not hire more than one person? Surely, such places are safer in numbers near to the hostile beings?
Hell, is that not the rule in real life?
They mightve tried but how many people would 1. Quit after being asked those 3 peoples or 2. Quit the first night
Tune in next week for "A Wendigo Was After Me. But I Had The High Ground."
“Anakin no!”
I read that as wedding 😂😂
I almost spilled my drink 🤣
@Omar Hamdan Real Chads would play Twilight Imperium 4th Edition or Talisman Revised Edition with Wendigos.🤣
That actually sounds cool, I hope there’s light sabers.
this… wasn’t written in a way that I found enjoyable. it just felt like a list - I read the rules, I went here, I went there, etc. the premise could’ve been interesting, but the writing style just killed it :/
Need a guard so kids don't steal answer sheets for exams.
Did he vomit in this one? Isn't that a Creepypasta requirement?
The phrase "Tears streamed down my face," also mysteriously absent.
surprised i didn’t hear “blood-curdling scream”
Those eyes oh god those eyes
"And then...I saw it."
“I felt the bile in the back of my throat as I held back the urge to scream”
These are generally my favorite type of stories. The rule ones are always so interesting to me.
My question is, how do they know her name? Like did she just scream it out at some point or did they just start calling her that, if so...why? Its so, normal. Not Bloody Mary or the Vent Crawler, just Max
@@king81992 which is why I asked did she say it at some point cause as far as our narrator is concerned he never heard her speak. It seems unlikely that anyone would know for 2 reasons, she doesnt seem to be the talkative type lol and also seems like she is the most dangerous since even other monsters run from her so not many people would survive an encounter let alone learn a name out of no where.
Now that I think about it more its possible she is the ghost of someone known at the school possibly who became that monster, that would make sense.
Probably, he hid right away so she never “appeared normal” and tried to play with/speak to him. It sounds like as he described her initially Max’s normal tactic is to play with her prey by posing as a normal human, speaking to them for a bit, then morphing into a monster and eating them. Just a guess. Y’know, “Hi, I’m Max. :) … *crunch*”
@@lexinicole4317 That would imply someone who encountered the "normal" Max survived and wasnt lured in to a false sense of security. Our guard already knew better and had a head start to hide and he still is assumed dead lol.
@@gazblackheart4596 It sounds like from the way the rules are written that some people DO survive though, right?
Tune in for the next episode of: I went to work at Wendy’s. They gave me a list of rules…”
Bruh... good one. Lol
Rule 1: Don't shit in the fryer.
Rule 2: Do not punch customers during your shift. If you do, they will summon an entity called 'The Police'. You must evade them.
Rule 3: Entities called 'Customers' may appear regularly. When they order food, ensure that they get it.
Rule 4: Don't call the manager a "stinky ass McDonald's munching dipshit." This got the last guy fired.
Glad I’m not the only one getting tired of “rules” stories
@@chrisraymond4804 Yep! I am new to them and already hooked. Listening to them on the way to and from work.
@@pancake4061 💀💀
The fun thing about these rules stories is trying to figure out who figured out all the rules and how.
I’ve actually seen a few stories where you meet the writer of the rules. They’re all pretty unique.
That’s a damn good question, and point. It would take dozens of deaths to get the rules down, but if the person who figured out the rule is dead, it’s a ????
"I guarded an insanely guarded school"
Although I enjoy rules stories, and it is nice to have someone who read them first, the reasoning was better. Is he prey? What is the purpose of this job, exactly???
That's all I could think the whole time, "why is there even a guard there?" Doesn't seem like any 'would-be' thieves or trouble makers are gonna be able to do much if they broke in..
There was one story saying it was so the creatures have something to hunt and not venture out and hunt on the streets
@@trumalicee5061 That it along the lines of what I was thinking (hoping?). Thank you!
He’s food. That’s what.
Ive never been this early. I watched a lot of your videos yesterday. I really appreciate everything you are doing. You do amazing work and your care and dedication for your viewers REALLY shows. Keep up the great work!
Ye this my first time being first but it’s not a big deal I kinda get mad when ppl say there first when there not but I enjoy watching these
i wish time went as fast while i’m in class as it does for this guy at his job
The most magical thing there was the ductwork that was strong enough to support an adult human.
All of these rukes creepy pastas always make me think two things.
1. Is this a FNAF mod?
2. Why in the world does this place need a security gaurd?
I imagine that the protagonist is trapped in purgatory. Some could say he's a lifeless object, but he's no less alive, awaiting reprisal. At least, he was like that when the sky turned red.
Hey CreepsMcPasta! I just wanted to let you know that i love your videos and have been subscribed for years. Keep up the good work man, you’re awesome!!!
I feel like I've been spoiled by pastas having satisfying endings lately…Odd, as I remember a time when I used to complain that every pasta I listened to ended on a cliffhanger when there was no reason to do so other than to annoy the audience. In this case, the cliffhanger ending works and makes sense, so I shouldn't complain. I feel like I can complain about Max, though…Dude said in his letter that "this has never happened, but just so you know, it could", and it just felt so out of left field when it did happen even though I kinda knew it was coming (you don't foreshadow something like that unless it's going to happen). Protag was screwed anyway, though, since he was going to stay in the panic room when the letter made it clear that the janitor would only vanish for half an hour before reappearing and finishing him off, and you can only make him go away once.
the mc was just over an hour from being able to escape, it could have ended with them finding out the answers to questions the audience will have. instead we got an eye-rolling cliff hanger
Honestly would've been funny if max didn't appear
Why do night shift guard rules stories sound so similar like the plots were written by one person? I hope someone would write something more unique.
Narrator: "It was raining blood."
My brain: *Slayer starts playing*
Why do I love these rule stories? Like the movie “It Follows” or the story about the woman ghost that haunts a family that kills them if they react to her presence.
100% my favorite thing about this channel is the fact that it is not narrated in that same downward inflection toward the end of every sentence that so many other channels do in this genre. Like It always reminds me of the kid who was put in a group for a project, did nothing, then stood and read the report at the end in front of the class. Like it screams "I couldn't care less about this" which is really disengaging. However this guy actually puts decent fluctuations to his voice, and even does differing voices for characters which some people will chide as childish and even insensitive (usually the same people that say you are or aren't allowed to say certain words, talk about certain subjects, or even go the same places as others solely based on pointless things, like skin color.) Yet I find the it to be well done and tasteful if done in a manner that does not inherently promote or detract from a certain character in its portrayal, but then again story telling is a dying art
I've done plenty of night jobs in large empty facilities. I even worked in a medical lab as a custodian. The only rules for all of them were get there on time, don't fall asleep and no drinking. Never had to carry a gun and dodge demons. I'd have demanded better pay.
Man literally told us to vent, smh, that's kinda suspicious
My preference is for stories featuring a protagonist who lives to reflect on their experience and us to ponder cozily about the lore.
There ought to be a reason for the creatures’ existence and a reason why a night guard is needed in the first place.
Had I been given this story to edit, I would consider multiple nights, the first few without incident providing insensitive for the narrator to continue the job and finish the story by adding “....I could feel it....then nothing? I looked at the watch and it was 6:00. I had made it! I snuck out of the ventilation cautiously and felt the overwhelming silence; I noticed the peaks of down subtly lighting the halls. The school now felt oddly safe...” meets employer from before, receives pay cheque and signs out, with a Well done and an invite to resume work at 10. Final lines being a warning about taking mysterious jobs without explanation.
The janitor thing was essentially,” Swiper no swiping! Swiper no swiping!”
“Ooooh Man!”
I often wonder as I listen to these: "What if The Postal Dude was given a job at one of these establishments? what sort of mayhem would he bring upon it?" I would honestly love to see a Postal 2 mod where Dude finds a job at a haunted location, like an absurdly sized restaurant or hotel complete with map, and a large list of silly, ritualistic type jobs to perform.
"Sign my petition" *Pisses on a wendigo, which is cowering in a corner*
Another banger from the best creepypasta channel on RUclips!
wow good story and the fact they are always lured by that FAT paycheck without questioning it make theses story's so damn good keep up he good work CreepsMcPasta!!
$60 an hour for a night guard pffffft. Why even go to college
we need more rule based survival games on steam. drop some recommendations below
@Bekky Darling true. we need more games based on them tho
Rule 10: If it starts raining blood, you may encounter Slayer
That's too much noise even for the demons. 🤘
Yes
Okay, just curious... who passes out just from something being outside the stall door? Dude hasn't been running, hasn't mentioned having asthma or anything like that... I know terror can make your body do some weird stuff, but that's just a bit too much.
Wooohooo!!! That was another classic!!
Hopefully he makes it out before she finds him, great story as always, thanks Creeps!😊❤💯👍
Im willing to bet that after he read those rules he wished he'd put in an application to flip burgers.
I’ll definitely take on the job and leave the school before the shift begins, only returning in the morning. Why guard a school when the horrible creatures can guard it for you?
Rules for the night guard
NIGHT GUARD: RULES!? Nonesense.
Press F to pay respects to the security guy
Sounds like when I worked for the state.
These are so good
This actually sounds like an interesting horror game.
You're the best, creeps! Thank you!
"I could feel them breathing at the back of my throat" I think you mean neck my guy
The stories where you have to follow rules are the best stories in my opinion
Ok, so he has a gun. Good start! Ok, he’s actually following the rules, but I still cannot figure why there needs to be anyone there at all? Is he just a mouse for a life size game of cat & mouse? For what? To what end?
Fuckin government mandates, man.
To be honest, i like to think that the creatures would exit the school if not for the security guard.
There needs to be a pasta about how the rules were discovered lol
This was a really good one
You know, listening to this just made me realize that basically every set-of-rules-creepypasta is just a description of a Five nights at Freddy's fangame playthrough
Keep it up man
Schools whole budget blown on a panic room
Dude just ended up in Silent Hill
bro could had just went into the vent the whole time lol
I love " the rules" stories!!
Honestly the job doesn't seem that bad though, 60 dollars an hour. Just grab a few friends, load up on heavier weaponry, and just walk and gun any down that come at you. Since they provide a pistol guns clearly have some effect, and since they run to hide from Max, they can feel fear, just make them fear you as well.
Great story. Spooky
rule #1 for surviving these things: don't take high paying jobs if they are ordinary things like a desk job, or a dentist.
rule #2: NEVER accept ANY security position other than the police.
rule #3: If a buisiness doesn't have a no firearms rule, bring one.
*Finally, I understand what the gun is for*
guy hears rain: boss health bar pops up
Me after reading the rules: “welp -opens newspaper- Mc Donald’s is paying 14 dollars an hour!”
“Last Week A Vampire Bited Me On The Arse But We Made Friends And Went Paint-Balling Together…”
There needs to be a short movie or animated video for this.
Rules Creepypasta starter pack:
-Hire with short notice.
-"is this just a prank for the new guy?" Proceeds to go along with it*
-realization that it's not a prank.
-"i will never work here again."
I honestly want this as a movie
Damn this one is the most dangerous rules pasta I've heard lol
Thank you ❤️🔥
I'm liking these rules creepypasta. Like to hear some more of these. Keep up the great work 👍
I know. And this one he follows them. Not like the other people 😋🥰😍
I wish someone would make one of these that was an hour or 2 long that showed the rules being found out and why the position exists in the first place.
I do believe that there are a few like that, but I don't think they reach an hour or 2 in length.
first day at the job can be rough
as much as I like these rule pastas they are getting old I want to go back to how this channel used to be with a student perspective trying to escape something rather than the job
That sucks! I thought he was gonna make it out.
I typed in "creepypasta with rules" and every single I got an x job and there are rules creepypasta are being recommended. That's nice
I want a battle between all the boss creatures from all of these *set of rules* videos..
Good story but....why are they even hiring security guards? This sounds like a job for the SCP to seal the building.
I love horror stories with rules
Ain’t no amount of money in the world can convince me to work there.
This guy gets something almost no one gets in these sorts of stories, a gun, and never uses it.
Not going to lie, when I see stories that have any sort of weird “list of rules” I pass on them now. The trope is tired. Not sure on this story but had to say it.
No running in the halls detention for you...
OMG........my anxiety can't take it side the little dude make it out did he survive til the morning?!?!
Ok like I have to have a part 2 of this story!!!!!!!
This reminds me about that one mcdonald creepypasta. Kinda funny. I’d just try to call cops or bail out as fast as possible.
Damm that cliffhanger
Kinda sounds like fnaf except the creatures aren’t animatronics
18:57 SLAYYERRRRRRRRR!!!
I'm so tired of the same format rules creepy pastas
Me to. Specially when there isn't a reason as to why you need a guard at places like this.
I would have read the first rule and locked myself in the security office. They never get to the safe place first…
the moment the 10nth rule was introduced i knew it was going to happen
So...everything that can go wrong will happen on your shift. You have a 15 percent chance to survive. But dat paycheck tho, amirite?
This is screaming for a part 2!
If the school is full of monsters why does it need a guard?
bro is playing irl fnaf
Rules creepies are always so dumb. Why does the school need someone to patrol the school exactly? Seems like a lot of risk for no reward or practical value
After he gets back to the security Room for the first time i see no reason why he would get out again before 6h