Writing Skills: The Paragraph

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  • Опубликовано: 21 июл 2013
  • The paragraph is the most important unit of a well-written essay. The paragraph has a specific structure and standards that make it effective and enjoyable to read. In this writing lesson we will look at how to construct good paragraphs and improve writing with better flow and clarity. After the lesson, take the quiz: www.engvid.com/writing-skills...
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    Hi, welcome again to www.engvid.com. I'm Adam. Today's lesson is about the paragraph. It's a writing lesson, and I want to show people what a paragraph is and how to construct one, what to do, what not to do so you can write very clear, very tight paragraphs. This is especially important for IELTS, TOEFL, SAT students but everybody has to follow the exact same rules. Now before I even begin, I must say that I'm talking mostly about academic writing or even business writing. Creative writing like novels or short stories, anything fiction, you can do anything you want. Only always remember: somebody has to read what you wrote so it has to be clear. But academic essays, for example, certain rules you have to follow; you have to be very careful about them. So let's begin.
    In terms of like the actual way a paragraph looks: you have to indent or skip a line. So let me just make sure you understand what an indent is. This is an indent, the first line a little bit pushed in or you can make sure you skip a line between paragraphs. But don't do both. If you skip a line, don't indent. Okay? That's the main thing.
    Now, that's in terms of the way it looks. In terms of content -- and this, I can't stress this enough -- very, very, very important: one central idea in one paragraph. Okay? I've seen many people, I've seen many essays where you start a paragraph talking about one thing, and then you go off on a tangent and talk about something completely unrelated. So for example: if you start a paragraph and you're talking about apples, continue to talk about apples. If you go to oranges, that's maybe okay because you're still talking about fruit. But if you start with apples, go to oranges, go to bananas, and then end up with monkeys in space there's a bit of a problem; the reader has no idea what you're talking about. One paragraph, one central idea.
    Now, make sure that you tell the reader what this central idea is. This is your thesis statement. Okay? It's a very general sentence. All it does is introduce the topic of the paragraph, nothing else. All the details comes after. So speaking of details, we'll talk about details in detail, but all other ideas, all the other sentences, all your sentences with the details must directly relate back to the main idea. So let's say here is your thesis statement; very general, every sentence after must relate back to that thesis statement. Okay? You can't go off to another idea. Everything must support this, must talk about the same topic. Very important. Okay?
    How long should your paragraph be? Technically, a paragraph could be one sentence, but in an academic essay that rarely happens. But it could be any length you want, as long as you're still on that one topic, as long as you still have things to write and things to say about that topic, say it. If you have four sentences, fine; if you have 10 sentences, also okay. Again, for IELTS, TOEFL, SAT students: four, five sentences should be your limit. You can't be too long because you don't have time and you're going to start making mistakes.
    So now, the details. Very important to have lots of details. Why is this topic important to your overall idea of your essay? Not only tell me what is the topic, what is the thesis statement of the paragraph, make sure you explain to me why this is important to the general idea of the essay. Give me your reasons. Now, why is it important? And then reasons, why you think what you're saying supports this idea. Examples, always use examples because giving me the reasons is okay; examples make me see exactly what you're trying to say. Very easy for me to understand what you're trying to say.
    Now, in terms of flow, in terms of the way the reader can approach the paragraph, you have to have bridges. What is, what do bridges mean? Basically, when you have one idea in this sentence, you must connect it to the next sentence, you must connect it to the next sentence. Every sentence must have a link to the next sentence. This creates flow, makes it much easier to read and understand, and it keeps you on the one topic.
    Now, key terms. If you're talking about something specific and you have to use a key term, use it as many times as you need to. Otherwise, avoid repetition. Try not to use the same word more than once in one paragraph. Okay? For example: if you're using the word "moreover" in the paragraph, don't use it, don't use "moreover" again -- use "in addition to", use "furthermore", "another", etc. Try to avoid using one word more than once, especially in the same paragraph.

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  • @rahulpujari5277
    @rahulpujari5277 4 месяца назад +183

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  • @adamfurst2025
    @adamfurst2025 9 лет назад +1536

    this guy is the best english teacher i have ever seen in my life.

  • @YanTaina
    @YanTaina Год назад +21

    Adam, I am an Eglish teacher myself and I have been watching your videos for years and I can undoubtly say you are MAGIC! One of the best teachers I have ever crossed.

  • @williamvalerio6831
    @williamvalerio6831 3 года назад +53

    I want to praise this teacher for the concise and good explanation about the topic. I'm from Costa Rica . I'm taking composition course and learned bunch of thing during this virtual session with Adam. Keep doing that good job!

  • @oritsegbubemiadokpaye8356
    @oritsegbubemiadokpaye8356 6 лет назад +43

    where has this video been all my life?? this is a life saver. so easy to understand and easy to apply when you have the right informations. thank you thank you Adam.

  • @user-gl4st3uo4v
    @user-gl4st3uo4v 3 года назад +198

    U 've taught me more about making paragraph than many years of academic studies

  • @literature2430
    @literature2430 Год назад +78

    A teacher like sir Adam is rare. He's a gem for students who have the thirst to learn english.hats off to him.

  • @jaypapa4899
    @jaypapa4899 4 года назад +18

    I learned and improve my writing skills since I started watching Adam's instructional video. And for that, i want to thank Adam for sharing his wonderful knowledge to the world. Salute!

  • @alfonsomoser
    @alfonsomoser 6 лет назад +22

    Hi Adam I have listened to your lesson in one breath because you are so talented at explaining even difficult or wired stuffs that it is as if I had watched my favourite movie for the first time. You are absolutely one of the best English teacher I have ever met in my life. Hang in there! A mighty hug as big as your skills .. therefore infinite. Alfonso

  • @rosahernandez7169
    @rosahernandez7169 6 лет назад +6

    Looking at Adam's videos is a tremendous support on my writing skill. Each lesson is so explicit that I cleared up some of my grammar mistakes nevertheless I still need support.

  • @talaranreinnyzhelv.6924
    @talaranreinnyzhelv.6924 5 месяцев назад +3

    His teaching style makes him a great teacher, what a true educator he really is!!🙌🏻

  • @orthoguy1366
    @orthoguy1366 Год назад +5

    Paying attention to the information that you write is really crucial, especially if you wanna write a good essay. Adam thank you so much for sharing this knowledge. it makes me wonder how much more I don't know.

  • @afvlover92
    @afvlover92 9 лет назад +44

    Adam is an excellent English teacher! I love his tip about connecting ideas in sentences. Not only this is helpful in writing a powerful essay, but also it's really great for memorization. For my school, I have to tell summaries of several different stories, so I wrote the summaries first using Adam's technique - I connected important ideas in my sentences - and guess what, remembering the stories is 10x easier. Go Adam!

  • @morineagbor1716
    @morineagbor1716 Год назад +5

    This is so explicit and simple.
    I have been looking for someone like Adam.
    Thank you very much sir for this piece of work

  • @enobongthomas1138
    @enobongthomas1138 2 года назад +2

    This guy is very good. He didn't only teach paragraph but how to understand and connect thoughts.

  • @moon-ek1ot
    @moon-ek1ot 5 лет назад +13

    I want a teacher, like you Adam. Thank you.

  • @thalitadadda1459
    @thalitadadda1459 7 лет назад +4

    I've been watching some videos about writing skills, but yours is the best! Thank you for sharing your knowledge.

  • @hazimalshahin8877
    @hazimalshahin8877 8 лет назад +4

    I looked 20 video too many time to learning about ielts but you are different from all them so very thanks for your efforts especially when you said in writing part 'this is the English test not the intelligence 'this is the mile stone of the writing essay

  • @kasyapdharanikota8570
    @kasyapdharanikota8570 3 года назад

    He is the best English teacher I have ever seen. His pedagogy is great.

  • @mfarooq1981
    @mfarooq1981 4 года назад +2

    Really, a great teacher. He knows his subject very well. May God bless you!

  • @baharzangana9298
    @baharzangana9298 Год назад +12

    The best English teacher of all time! ♥️♥️♥️

  • @kruvmansweet2227
    @kruvmansweet2227 3 года назад +15

    I was watching this video at midnight 😂
    Because next day was the day of regional olympiad and i would say that this dude saved my ass to take the second place on it.i am sincerely grateful for him✌️

  • @alhassanaminu4826
    @alhassanaminu4826 2 года назад

    You are too great in your lesson delivery. You have indeed open up our understanding to the concept of paragraph development with so much wisdom. I'm much appreciated.

  • @vandanasharma7461
    @vandanasharma7461 4 года назад +2

    Very engaging delivery! Adam, you did not include the conventional approach but explained the concept so well that upon some practice one can comfortably develop a paragraph on his or her own. Thanks!

  • @elianaaguilar8359
    @elianaaguilar8359 6 лет назад +5

    It's amazing how you explain, I'm going to a college in Miami for 3 years and nobody has explained to me like you. I congratulate you

    • @shrekify429
      @shrekify429 3 года назад +1

      Three years later your finish right?

  • @TheZebraTribe
    @TheZebraTribe 8 лет назад +26

    Great video Adam! As a homeschooling mom I find your videos to be especially useful. You're much appreciated!

  • @Azrealon
    @Azrealon 5 лет назад

    hey I want to ask, is the sentence "My brother looks alike with our father." correct? and why?
    because im dabating with my teacher, she said "looks alike our father."
    thx

  • @malikaliawan423
    @malikaliawan423 2 года назад

    This Man make learning so easier to everyone, whoever learn English and polish their skills. I prefer this channel to everyone.

  • @_Kavika
    @_Kavika 8 лет назад +17

    Mann, I'm so thankful for Teachers like you. Because of what you do, my writing skills have improved drastically. I'm not quite sure exactly as to which video enabled me to be as creative in terms of writing; I decided to stop by here to say "Thank You" for your teachings. I have no doubt many of your other videos are as useful as this one. Thank you so much!

  • @glory5912
    @glory5912 6 лет назад +5

    You are the best teacher Adam. Thanks for taking your time to give this awesome lecture!!!

  • @ehlindah29
    @ehlindah29 5 лет назад +15

    I really appreciate you teacher. Love all the ways that you shared!

  • @ohuneneabdulrahman3792
    @ohuneneabdulrahman3792 Год назад

    Thanks Adam. This has taught me all I need to know about the two ways to paragraph my writing.

  • @WaelHmdesigns
    @WaelHmdesigns 8 лет назад +90

    Truly impressive, extremely smooth and organized. Thumbs up!

    • @rubaababneh4641
      @rubaababneh4641 5 лет назад

      very helfull, yet I was wondering if u could explain to me the difference between critiquing literature and the discussion in an analytical essay?

  • @MrGridStrom
    @MrGridStrom 10 лет назад +146

    This was amazing to watch. I am of a poor educational background, I did not learn much writing structures or writing flow. However now I find my self with a new found passion for writing. I find that when one engages in intellectual communication, such as politics or debates, others have the power to pull you down or invalidate your statements, by how you construct your writing. Thank you very much.

    • @chilledstudentvloggr4732
      @chilledstudentvloggr4732 10 лет назад +17

      We're in the same page. I also wanted to improve my writing skills. But there are people who are very skeptic when it comes to grammar. And It's a little difficult for me to think freely & creatively when I think about the rules in grammar.

    • @rimasaran
      @rimasaran 7 лет назад

      informative

    • @user-gq7df4zi6z
      @user-gq7df4zi6z 6 лет назад

      MrGridStrom I

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      @keyaghoshghosh7079 6 лет назад

      Peragrah

    • @keyaghoshghosh7079
      @keyaghoshghosh7079 6 лет назад

      My aimin life

  • @aamirhussainsolangi7916
    @aamirhussainsolangi7916 3 года назад

    Highly appreciated. The way you explained the techniques and methods of writing a paragraph were quite comprehensive.

  • @heinpetro7232
    @heinpetro7232 5 лет назад +1

    You're really good English teacher I've seen in my life

  • @sukanta47
    @sukanta47 6 лет назад +4

    Thank you sir...the way you explain is amazing. I must had a teacher like you in my schools

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    @raulmoat2570 7 лет назад +17

    this guy is the MASTER. thanks a lot buddy.

  • @dilnozarakhmatullaeva5399
    @dilnozarakhmatullaeva5399 5 лет назад

    Why would people dislike the video? Smh 🤦‍♀️ it’s so informative and helpful, and the guy speaks clearly and in a very understandable language.

  • @drarov91
    @drarov91 5 лет назад

    Adam, you are the master of essays! I don't understand how It is possible to manage all this things during exam, unbelievable!

  • @zooogzeoop7475
    @zooogzeoop7475 5 лет назад +17

    I hope you will do more videos like this one about essays.

  • @JD-ef4ii
    @JD-ef4ii 2 года назад +4

    Adam, you changed the form of how I understand written English. I was someone before of your classes and another person after of that. Your English lessons are excellent. I really appreciate too much your job. At this moment, I don't have a lot of money; however, when I get some of that, I'm going to give you a donation. I don't have more words to express the gratitude I have for you. Thank you so much, Adam God Bless you. (Sorry if I have misspellings, but I'm tired, it's almost 1:00 am hehe).

    • @kamalkannan3628
      @kamalkannan3628 2 года назад

      What was you doing at 1 am ? Is it the time of studying for you?

    • @JD-ef4ii
      @JD-ef4ii 2 года назад

      @@kamalkannan3628 Studying hard, nosy!.

  • @ekaeng3264
    @ekaeng3264 2 года назад +1

    Excellent for practice EAP and other styles, guys! Adam, you’re awesome

  • @javkhlanbatsaikhan658
    @javkhlanbatsaikhan658 Год назад

    Came for a guide on how to write a well-formed paragraph. Indeed it provided what I was looking for and more. Thank you so much.

  • @meisiewhor3952
    @meisiewhor3952 8 лет назад +7

    Thank you so much for your sharing. You are a great teacher!

  • @doaawagih62
    @doaawagih62 9 лет назад +5

    Thanks adam , your vids are really really helpful

  • @sayemrahmansiam4603
    @sayemrahmansiam4603 2 года назад

    At last I last I found my problem in paragraph writing. This teacher give us clear difenetion in 15 minutes about paragraphs.

  • @user-vq2zo1kg8p
    @user-vq2zo1kg8p 4 года назад

    Adam, you are the best native speaker I've ever met. You explain so clear, I understand everything you say. Good job!

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    @lyvinx9104 3 года назад +212

    School: teaches
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  • @maryemtesfu2238
    @maryemtesfu2238 9 лет назад +40

    Best English teacher ever. Thanks alot

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    @mavlyneugene2954 4 года назад

    This guy is the best teacher ever seen in my life

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    @farfaraway2265 5 лет назад

    I don't know why but I really like your education style teacher. Your accent is very clear. Thanks for your labor

  • @princegandomessi653
    @princegandomessi653 4 года назад +2

    Good job, Very clear lesson and easy to understand, keep it up💪🏽👍🏽

  • @diybysuwannee4908
    @diybysuwannee4908 10 лет назад +6

    Thank you very much Adam. That is very helpful for me. I hope everyone who watching this video like the way you teach :)

  • @adityasaxena58
    @adityasaxena58 4 года назад +1

    Sir, after watching several videos of yours and working upon your tips, I have found exponential improvement in my writing skills.
    I can Now easily glide from one para to another, shift between sentences and can even use inversions to make them more ornate and elegant.
    Sir, in a country like ours, where there are many to learn but few to teach, you have emerged as a ray of hope, guiding us away from the pit of darkness and towards enlightenment

  • @ziiziahmed7741
    @ziiziahmed7741 2 года назад

    best teacher i have ever seen in my learning stages

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    @lim10337 8 лет назад +497

    I want to have an English teacher like Adam.

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      @blitheixgaming1289 8 лет назад +7

      same...

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      @siddhantsharma6601 7 лет назад +7

      Yes he is great

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      @onelive993 7 лет назад +2

      i am from austria and i need help to improve my english language... give me any suggestion pleas ....

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      @blitheixgaming1289 7 лет назад +1

      +onelive 99 read books and learn new words especially the spelling..

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      where are you from

  • @zaherahmadi8133
    @zaherahmadi8133 5 лет назад +3

    Simple and comprehensive; many thanks 🙏.

  • @rosassanjose9476
    @rosassanjose9476 5 лет назад +1

    Thank you for highlighting this topic. :) Keep on sharing!

  • @bahadurkhan0022
    @bahadurkhan0022 3 года назад

    The best way of explaining is the only thing that makes him again the best.

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    @user-vh1jq7ug9f 7 лет назад +5

    thank you Adam this truly useful

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    @ujjwal3056 4 года назад +5

    This man really a great teacher having wonderful experienced of explaining the things.
    Thanks sir.

  • @demi1267
    @demi1267 Год назад

    best English Teacher I have ever seen. nice lessons. understand very easily ! thank you so much

  • @wilsonkennedy1530
    @wilsonkennedy1530 4 года назад

    This is my go-to video if I want to revise what is a paragraph.

  • @marketingdigest6884
    @marketingdigest6884 9 лет назад +4

    Thanks for these basic tips on paragraph construction. I found your tips very useful.

  • @darcythegreat0077
    @darcythegreat0077 5 лет назад +6

    Your paragraph instructions are very enlightening and straight forward. Thank you.

  • @tunab7603
    @tunab7603 5 лет назад

    all details about writing in 15 minutes, great job! thanks for your precious informations!

  • @jpeng9391
    @jpeng9391 3 года назад

    To be honest, Adam is the best teacher I've ever met. Even better than my University teacher in Australia.

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    @nancyhesham6889 9 лет назад +6

    such a great teacher , thank u so much

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    @malayasiaagario2662 8 лет назад +3

    thanks, i be professional in english because of you really i like you

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    @cosmasladusaturnino4097 4 года назад

    What a teacher! Adam is a great English Teacher.

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    @martaluciacamachobello6273 4 года назад

    I cannot thank you enough for your priceless lessons. You are the best....thank you, thank you!!!!

  • @anitablanco7309
    @anitablanco7309 7 лет назад +5

    Excellent explanation!

  • @asserlikius4363
    @asserlikius4363 3 года назад +4

    Good teacher, I love your lesson

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    @shafiqasarwari5471 15 дней назад

    He is the best English teacher .I have ever seen.

  • @zemedkunmersha2103
    @zemedkunmersha2103 2 года назад

    A lecture with an example makes things clear. Many thanks.

  • @muhammadyoqubov837
    @muhammadyoqubov837 3 года назад +4

    This lesson is excellent! Can you make more videos like this, please?

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    @roasyalrasiah4243 3 года назад +19

    I like this teacher from inside my heart .he is fantastic .

  • @mz6367
    @mz6367 2 года назад +1

    Thanks teacher for everything you do to help us to improve our English I hope all of us can remember these days and with happiness

  • @rayharkins14
    @rayharkins14 5 лет назад +1

    That was the most powerful writing and linking I have ever seen. Congratulations.

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    @rijalulhusny576 3 года назад +17

    I"m a new comer here Mr. i'm indonesian

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    @jackobmuktar2159 7 лет назад +18

    wow...it was really nice and smart lecture to be honest...thumps up from #africa

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    @mariamaissatomansaray4665 Год назад

    He speaks clear enough for someone to understand...

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    @abdishakorhirsi2990 3 года назад

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    I convinced that,I get the teacher I am looking for.

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    @mohammedalameen7366 6 лет назад +5

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  • @antoy5276
    @antoy5276 9 лет назад +4

    Thank you for helping me to gain my English language. :)

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    @fermion634 2 года назад +1

    Thank you so much. I found the video really useful and easy to understand👌🏻 also the actual example you provided at the end of the video and the fact that you reviewd the points you taught us using that example was interesting.

  • @valeriafreiberger904
    @valeriafreiberger904 5 лет назад

    So many useful information. Thanks Adam! This is a must seen video.

  • @mildlyinteresting1000
    @mildlyinteresting1000 7 лет назад +215

    So nice, that you say "excuse me" every time you cough 😊

  • @MsOstos
    @MsOstos 8 лет назад +5

    The video was quite helpful. Thanks!

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    @akashasewwandi5778 4 года назад

    he's english is so clear, EASY to understand

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    @fayeabdoukarim985 8 лет назад +25

    you such a wonderful teacher

  • @stilesstilinski5343
    @stilesstilinski5343 3 года назад +9

    I’m watching this before 10 mins of my English exam

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    @IrfanAli-gg3od 2 года назад

    زبردست ایڈم صاحب۔ ماشااللہ۔ مزہ ایا

  • @rahulbhagat6486
    @rahulbhagat6486 4 года назад

    Sir , you're a great teacher . I wish I have a teacher like you !!!

  • @LeonRajJesuarulraj
    @LeonRajJesuarulraj 8 лет назад +24

    I am a Ph.D. Scholar, and I would like to say thanks for this excellent lecture.

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      @adwanalshammari4087 8 лет назад +5

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      @barbie8973 8 лет назад +3

      how rude and uncalled for, childish

    • @LeonRajJesuarulraj
      @LeonRajJesuarulraj 8 лет назад +1

      adwan alshammari More than you I can speak, but this is Adam Sir's lecture. Why are you crying about Adam Sir's growth.

    • @adwanalshammari4087
      @adwanalshammari4087 8 лет назад

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    @gunamgunamtv9608 7 лет назад +3

    I love this man, and James.

  • @yousifelmaghraby8712
    @yousifelmaghraby8712 4 года назад +1

    i am from egypt and i relly love your way in teaching this lessone thank you so much

  • @murtadhaali4977
    @murtadhaali4977 3 года назад

    I love you Ms Adam. I am from Iraq, but I live in USA. And I love your lessons, they are so helpful to me. I learned alot from you.

  • @LaoSopheak
    @LaoSopheak 10 лет назад +4

    Very clear. Thanks.