Looks really good, I can't do better anyway. But all the same, I noticed several mistakes that spoil a good idea. The first mistake is when you created a mystical atmosphere in the plot where the main character is crazy. Dynamic music and fast scenes, or something like how the movie Cars begins, would be better. And the second mistake is the wrong focal length of the camera, you did it very well in the first scene, and because of that I watched the video, but then everything started to look like a toy. And there's one more thing, maybe you're not a sound effects expert but you used the sound of an internal combustion engine for a rocket ship. It would be cool if your spaceship had an engine like this, and it just turned blades instead of wheels, which would help improve the concept art. Sorry for criticizing a lot, probably because I expected to see something like product animation. And if you have problems with a weak video card, I advise you to use light baking in EEVEE. I hope this helps you become a better artist.
I agree, not 100% but thx for the feedback anyway. The engine sound is there cuz that's a "prototype" and it makes it look more realistic then some sci-fi engine sound. The focal length with the city part, yeah I needed to make some Cars beginning type of vibe. But I this over all it turned out nicely and as I've said "it shows my model in an interesting way" Surely I could do better, and I will.
@@blender_face Everything you do is your choice, and only if you follow your own path will you be able to create something unique. I hope my comments will give you some idea to implement it. And by an internal combustion engine I mean it uses an explosion to create spin or torque, a rocket engine uses jet thrust which makes a typical sci-fi spaceship sound and you literally used that sound in this video 0:23. If you want to create a special sound, create something like a Cadillac F1 engine switching. ruclips.net/video/FqyGJTioXnc/видео.htmlsi=660ZslYLP1_38eiv Like I said it's all your choice. And thanks for the feedback😘.
@@blender_face can you please by any chance tell me what's the ps vita emulator/emulator website you used? and how you got wo2048? i wanna play it so bad
Amazing bro
thx bro
Looks really good, I can't do better anyway. But all the same, I noticed several mistakes that spoil a good idea. The first mistake is when you created a mystical atmosphere in the plot where the main character is crazy. Dynamic music and fast scenes, or something like how the movie Cars begins, would be better. And the second mistake is the wrong focal length of the camera, you did it very well in the first scene, and because of that I watched the video, but then everything started to look like a toy. And there's one more thing, maybe you're not a sound effects expert but you used the sound of an internal combustion engine for a rocket ship. It would be cool if your spaceship had an engine like this, and it just turned blades instead of wheels, which would help improve the concept art. Sorry for criticizing a lot, probably because I expected to see something like product animation. And if you have problems with a weak video card, I advise you to use light baking in EEVEE. I hope this helps you become a better artist.
I agree, not 100% but thx for the feedback anyway. The engine sound is there cuz that's a "prototype" and it makes it look more realistic then some sci-fi engine sound. The focal length with the city part, yeah I needed to make some Cars beginning type of vibe. But I this over all it turned out nicely and as I've said "it shows my model in an interesting way" Surely I could do better, and I will.
P.s. and I never gave EEVEE a chance, so I'll look into it, thx again.
@@blender_face Everything you do is your choice, and only if you follow your own path will you be able to create something unique. I hope my comments will give you some idea to implement it. And by an internal combustion engine I mean it uses an explosion to create spin or torque, a rocket engine uses jet thrust which makes a typical sci-fi spaceship sound and you literally used that sound in this video 0:23. If you want to create a special sound, create something like a Cadillac F1 engine switching.
ruclips.net/video/FqyGJTioXnc/видео.htmlsi=660ZslYLP1_38eiv
Like I said it's all your choice. And thanks for the feedback😘.
wipeout 2048 the goat
honestly the nostalgia is just crazy
@@blender_face can you please by any chance tell me what's the ps vita emulator/emulator website you used? and how you got wo2048? i wanna play it so bad
@@ramalshebl60 Sure, the emulator is called Vita3K and for the game you just have to figer it out for your self)
@@blender_face i see 😅😅
thank you man ❤️❤️❤️ great video i love the final render
@@ramalshebl60 thanks man I appreciate it
ps vita the goat fr 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭