@@G11111AAA.M setting the examinerss up, story one - elephant mating story 2 - a twisted version some kid makes up story 3 - a ridiculous attempt at it that gets the person cooked, bro will quit her job as an examiner bhahahah
bro cooked up a storm with this story icl this is actually going to help me with passing my exam i really appreciate all your hard work when creating this story.
HEY GUYS! If anyone's up for it, here's a practice Q5 I did for you guys to mark. Marking always helps you improve! :) The rickety frames of the old house looked as though they were about to fall. There was not a single plank of wood on that unimpressive roof without some type of damage. Tapping my wet boots on the dry concrete path, I made my way towards the shed. The lacklustre appearance of the shed contrasted with the sprawling fields in every direction. The lackadaisical lump of dirt, directly next to the house, lay carelessly as the gentle wind breathed through it. The rain had stopped for the last few days allowing the sparse sunshine to illuminate the prairie. Every flower, which was once gulping for breath under the merciless onslaughts of constant rain, had now blossomed. The mountains were as colossal as ever, like snow-capped guardians watching over the peaceful prairie. Every object in view seemed at harmony - except the house. The wooden structure, which showed signs of once being an ornate and well-decorated building, looked empty. It seemed as if the previous owners had taken away every item alongside the memories and moments shared inside it; leaving it barren. Frighteningly, the two large windows on each end coupled with the wide, steel door in the centre made the house seem like an indignant creature. A creature who had been abandoned and forgotten. The long forgotten house was covered in years and years of 'art' left by reckless teenagers but the steel door looked impeccable (as if it had just been installed). Carefully prising the door open, I stepped in. After taking some seconds to register my surroundings, I began walking to the centre of the room like a moth to the flame. The insipid features of the empty room contrasted heavily with the masterpiece lying directly in the centre. It was a piece of art like no other. Its ornate framing glinted in the few rays of light which shone upon it. The vibrancy of the paint, the detail of the shapes and the flawless composition left me absolutely dumbfounded. Carefully, I used the tips of my fingers to feel the frame which was engrained with floral patterns and encrusted with what seemed to be gold. It was gold. Possibly the purest gold I had ever seen. This gold was not just on the frame but every little detail on the luscious painting was made with gold. I took five steps backwards and stared at the painting in awe. It was an angel, bright with the light of its candour, surrounded by a blissful darkness. It truly was a masterpiece.
Yo , I’m not an examiner so don’t take my mark to heart, but this story sounds a lot like description and it’s quite short for smth ur meant to writ In 45 mins, so I would give it like 26 ish because it’s doesn’t flow too well, however there is great use of vocabulary so well done man , it’s not that bad yk
Good use of extensive and ambitious vocabulary with conscious use of a wide range of punctuation with high level of accuracy. However, try to ensure that each sentence within each paragraph flows better to create a compelling description. Level 4 for AO6 Lower level 4 for AO5 33 - 34/40
"Napoleon is the alpha there is no way anyone else is going to get the action that he demads because he is going to repopulate the savannah"... currently watching this in 4K
Dear Mr Salles, your AIC videos and Macbeth videos made me love studying English Literature, and find Macbeth and AIC FUN. To say that I regretted not watching your videos sooner, is an understatement. Thank you for all the help, not only in my exams but for reigniting me with passion for this subject. Also this is an optional: The question we got for our exam board was 'What type of mother is Sybil Birling presented as in the play?'. It seems like an interesting question, and I've been dwelling on what a perfect response would be. I wonder how you would have tackled it?
sir i don't know about the elephant mating part apparently according to my teacher most of the examiners are retired teachers they might find that discomforting
Inshaallah Ameen. I just finished my AQA english language paper 1 and I found the question for the story really hard 😢 May Allah bless us with good results.
@@shafiuppal ao1 1 a02 q2 and 3 a04 q4 ao5 and 6 q5. ao2 isnt just getting a uote and finding a language or structure device. explain how it makes the reader feel and maye a tone it may create and idk just revise
I also did sth similar for my GCSE two years ago where I prepped a story. I took inspiration from one of your stories in your book that had many stories (can't remember which book it was, but it was the story about the dog with green eyes meeting a man) Really really useful book btw 100% recommend. I modified it and changed it to a story of a man meeting a cat that turned into a tiger and ate him (got 9 in the end). I feel that prepping a story that is simple with very little plot like that is way more helpful and enables plenty of space to write descriptions and use linguisitc techniques. I feel that this story about elephant might have too much plot going on (with all the characters and the relationship between the characters and the background). Whilst it is a very interesting story, unless you are a very able candidate, you might not be able to write this much in the short time frame given to explain the entire plot whilst still filling in your techniques.
quick question sir some of my teachers have told us to plan an opening where i as the main character describe myself going into the attic to find some christmas lights or something and then find a small box, describe the box and then open it only to find whatever picture they give. and then describe it. i wasnt too sure about that cos its kind of both a description and a story in one. i was just wondering if it is a good strat for aiming for a 6
I did the story which was write about a disagreement and I did the elephant story but I made the disagreement in the rangers mind on whether to save the elephant and risk his own life or not
Apparently before people got marked down because too many people used an essay plan someone on RUclips said. What if that happens again if I use your essay plan?
Hi sir can you please review this story? The sun cast its glow over Kruger National Park, casting long shadows across the golden savannah. In a rugged jeep, two park rangers, Daniel and Leon, bumped along a dusty track, the vehicle's tyres kicking up small clouds of ochre-coloured dust. Daniel, the seasoned veteran with a grizzled beard, glanced over at Leon, his young and eager protégé, gripping a rifle loaded with a tranquiliser dart. “Remember, Leon,” Daniel said, his voice steady, “Maximus is the key to saving our elephants. He’s a massive bull, and we need to move him to a safer part of the park to ensure the future of the herd.” Leon nodded, eyes wide with a mix of excitement and nerves. “Got it, Daniel. But I don’t feel good about this.” Daniel chuckled softly. “That’s why we’re a team. We handle whatever comes our way.” Their target was Maximus, a colossal bull elephant whose reputation was as grand as his stature. His tusks, long and curved like ancient scimitars, gleamed in the dappled sunlight. His ears, as large as the sails of an old ship, flapped gently, warding off flies. The ground seemed to tremble beneath his weight as he moved with the grace of a dancer and the power of a goliath. Today, Maximus's heart was not in his usual leisurely stroll. He was on a mission, driven by an instinct as old as time. The scent of Josephine, a beautiful female elephant, was intoxicating, drawing him like a moth to a flame. She was the Juliet to his Romeo, and her presence made the younger elephants restless and eager to prove themselves. Yet, Maximus, the undisputed alpha, would brook no challengers. Daniel and Leon watched from a distance; the jeep parked beneath the shade of an acacia tree. The air was thick with tension. Leon, his hands trembling, took aim. The rifle's scope framed Maximus perfectly. He exhaled slowly, trying to steady his nerves, and then squeezed the trigger. The tranquiliser dart flew true, embedding itself in Maximus's thick hide. For a moment, the great beast staggered, his colossal form swaying like a tree in a storm. Then he caught the alluring scent of Josephine once more and, with a bellow that echoed across the plains, charged after her, scattering the younger bulls in his wake. Josephine, coy and capricious, led him on a merry chase towards the river. Normally, Maximus would have revelled in the pursuit, but today, the tranquiliser began to take its toll. His strides grew laboured, and his vision blurred. As he reached the river's deepest part, his legs gave way, and he began to sink. “Daniel, he’s going to drown!” Leon cried. His heart pounded in his chest. Without waiting for a response, Leon leapt from the jeep and sprinted towards the river. The water was cool, biting at his skin as he plunged in. With Herculean effort, he reached Maximus, whose trunk was slipping below the surface. Leon grabbed the trunk and heaved it above his head, his shoulders quivering with the strain. “Hold on, big guy,” Leon grunted, his voice a mere whisper against the roar of the river. Minutes felt like hours as he stood there, chest-deep in water, keeping Maximus’s trunk aloft. The tranquilliser’s grip tightened on the giant, but Leon’s determination did not waver. Finally, Daniel arrived with a makeshift stretcher and a team of rangers. Together, they hauled Maximus to safety, the enormous elephant breathing deeply but steadily. Leon, exhausted, collapsed on the riverbank, watching as the tranquilised titan was loaded onto the stretcher. As they moved Maximus to a safer part of the park, Leon glanced back at the river. Crocodiles, previously lying in wait, slithered back into the depths, denied their prize.
if i were to base my answer on say a tv show or book ive read recently and use similar characters with similar traits and loosely base the storyline from that show/book would this be okay? Just wondering because plagirism and things
Any opinion on aqa English boundaries or marking this year? I’ve read loads of students have got several grades below predicted. Ie predicted 7s got 4s
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish interesting! It seems that some went up considerably and some went down. Wonder if this was markers looking for different things or teacher assessment being out. Good to know there wasn’t a massive difference overall though
He has never written a story in his life. He usually goes for the description but is quite literal. Never normally gets more than a 2/3 in both lit and lang. He got 4s in both, almost 5s. Your videos helped him to have the confidence to just write!
Please please please please DO NOT do this - your mark will indeed be capped if you use a pre-written story. The many comments claiming the exam board will recognise this happening are absolutely correct. DO NOT WASTE YOUR CHANCE.
Hi Owain - I am open to persuasion. If you are an examiner who has been told to mark such responses down, I would love to know, and may alter my advice accordingly. Do let me know. My contact details are in the About section of my channel if you don't want to post here.
examiners when thousands of students talk about rommel and montgomery 🤔🤔
🤣
Do I have to mention the elephant and those two hunters or I can change the story a little and how?
@@nicee8009 yeah i suppose you can change the story a little
lmao 😂
The examiner report be like:
Students across the country have been reported of getting ideas from online sources.
Mr Salles casually telling us to write about elephants mating:
bro may have just lost the plot...
@@G11111AAA.M setting the examinerss up, story one - elephant mating story 2 - a twisted version some kid makes up story 3 - a ridiculous attempt at it that gets the person cooked, bro will quit her job as an examiner bhahahah
It's got action
AQA when thousands of students talk about elephants :
💀
YESSSIR LET HIM COOK, thank you for the help in Lit too. you are one Lit man 🔥🔥🔥
was that a pun? cause personally, i approve.
@@yoriichitsugikuni6317indeed it was, imagine I use that in my creative writing
the alpha skibid ohioooo nah this is good
bro cooked up a storm with this story icl this is actually going to help me with passing my exam i really appreciate all your hard work when creating this story.
Good luck
The examiner will be in tears😭😭😭
frfr
PLEASE MAKE A VIDEO ON HOW WE CAN PRE PLAN OUR OWN STORIES AT HOME
HEY GUYS! If anyone's up for it, here's a practice Q5 I did for you guys to mark. Marking always helps you improve! :)
The rickety frames of the old house looked as though they were about to fall. There was not a single plank of wood on that unimpressive roof without some type of damage. Tapping my wet boots on the dry concrete path, I made my way towards the shed. The lacklustre appearance of the shed contrasted with the sprawling fields in every direction. The lackadaisical lump of dirt, directly next to the house, lay carelessly as the gentle wind breathed through it. The rain had stopped for the last few days allowing the sparse sunshine to illuminate the prairie. Every flower, which was once gulping for breath under the merciless onslaughts of constant rain, had now blossomed. The mountains were as colossal as ever, like snow-capped guardians watching over the peaceful prairie. Every object in view seemed at harmony - except the house.
The wooden structure, which showed signs of once being an ornate and well-decorated building, looked empty. It seemed as if the previous owners had taken away every item alongside the memories and moments shared inside it; leaving it barren. Frighteningly, the two large windows on each end coupled with the wide, steel door in the centre made the house seem like an indignant creature. A creature who had been abandoned and forgotten. The long forgotten house was covered in years and years of 'art' left by reckless teenagers but the steel door looked impeccable (as if it had just been installed). Carefully prising the door open, I stepped in.
After taking some seconds to register my surroundings, I began walking to the centre of the room like a moth to the flame. The insipid features of the empty room contrasted heavily with the masterpiece lying directly in the centre.
It was a piece of art like no other.
Its ornate framing glinted in the few rays of light which shone upon it. The vibrancy of the paint, the detail of the shapes and the flawless composition left me absolutely dumbfounded. Carefully, I used the tips of my fingers to feel the frame which was engrained with floral patterns and encrusted with what seemed to be gold. It was gold. Possibly the purest gold I had ever seen. This gold was not just on the frame but every little detail on the luscious painting was made with gold.
I took five steps backwards and stared at the painting in awe. It was an angel, bright with the light of its candour, surrounded by a blissful darkness.
It truly was a masterpiece.
Love the plot, just try add different sentence starters than "the" and "it". Good luck tommorow fr
@@User4328 Thanks bro 👊
Yo , I’m not an examiner so don’t take my mark to heart, but this story sounds a lot like description and it’s quite short for smth ur meant to writ In 45 mins, so I would give it like 26 ish because it’s doesn’t flow too well, however there is great use of vocabulary so well done man , it’s not that bad yk
@@jhsharsh12 fair enough bro I’ll always take feedback. But it is meant to be a description and Yh I was thinking of writing more your right
Good use of extensive and ambitious vocabulary with conscious use of a wide range of punctuation with high level of accuracy.
However, try to ensure that each sentence within each paragraph flows better to create a compelling description.
Level 4 for AO6
Lower level 4 for AO5
33 - 34/40
aren't we all gonna be marked down if examiners are marking the same stories each time lmao
yeah same thing happened with the priest story last year, got capped at 20/40
@@snraza313wait really do u have a source for this cuz that's crazy lol
"Napoleon is the alpha there is no way anyone else is going to get the action that he demads because he is going to repopulate the savannah"... currently watching this in 4K
this gave me a well needed laugh to calm me down before tomorrow, thank you sir x
Dear Mr Salles, your AIC videos and Macbeth videos made me love studying English Literature, and find Macbeth and AIC FUN. To say that I regretted not watching your videos sooner, is an understatement. Thank you for all the help, not only in my exams but for reigniting me with passion for this subject.
Also this is an optional: The question we got for our exam board was 'What type of mother is Sybil Birling presented as in the play?'. It seems like an interesting question, and I've been dwelling on what a perfect response would be. I wonder how you would have tackled it?
What exam board do you do?
Great idea. I might make a video on that!
It's AQA, I did the same@@ukstudent1
Yeaaa I was like aaa looking at that question but luckily there was a super good themes question as an alternative
3:20
It’s Bernadotte, Marmont and Masséna
sir i don't know about the elephant mating part apparently according to my teacher most of the examiners are retired teachers they might find that discomforting
That is hilarious - I am sure every English teacher knows about the birds and the bees, and indeed the elephants.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglishMr Salles you are genuinely hilarious and after GCSES are over I will genuinely miss watching your videos
I'm praying inshallah we all do good in English lang tomorrow. Inshallah,Inshallah we will get the grades we want to get 😍🥰ameen ya rab
Inshaallah Ameen. I just finished my AQA english language paper 1 and I found the question for the story really hard 😢 May Allah bless us with good results.
@@Maryemarabee Ameen,ameen
@@denoali9222 How did the exam go?
@@Maryemarabee wallahi idk🤣i did what i could
@@denoali9222 Samee!!! May Allah bless us both with good grades inshaallah.
exam's tomorrow and my lack of revision and preparation is concerning
u dont need to revise for language bro
@@liamfinn9709 regardless, idk how to answer questions so im royally screwed
@@shafiuppal ao1 1 a02 q2 and 3 a04 q4 ao5 and 6 q5. ao2 isnt just getting a uote and finding a language or structure device. explain how it makes the reader feel and maye a tone it may create and idk just revise
@@triharders2456 alr tyy :)
LET HIM COOK🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I used this plot and secured a grade 7 when my teacher marked it, thank you Mr Salles
Thank you so much Mr Salles !!!
I think I’ll genuinely miss watching your videos when all my gcse’s finish 😄😄
I also did sth similar for my GCSE two years ago where I prepped a story. I took inspiration from one of your stories in your book that had many stories (can't remember which book it was, but it was the story about the dog with green eyes meeting a man) Really really useful book btw 100% recommend. I modified it and changed it to a story of a man meeting a cat that turned into a tiger and ate him (got 9 in the end). I feel that prepping a story that is simple with very little plot like that is way more helpful and enables plenty of space to write descriptions and use linguisitc techniques.
I feel that this story about elephant might have too much plot going on (with all the characters and the relationship between the characters and the background). Whilst it is a very interesting story, unless you are a very able candidate, you might not be able to write this much in the short time frame given to explain the entire plot whilst still filling in your techniques.
Fair comment! Glad the guide was useful
This actually links really well to the question which was do a description of a hot environment
Perfect
never knew Mr Salles took art GCSE (bro got a 9)
Why is Mr Salles lowkey a decent artist? Better than half of the GCSE Art students in my school I'd say
Also, thank you so much
Just done this for my exam cheers big guy
POV your teacher starts drawing after they say theyre not an artist
Rommel in africa with big guns is awfully familiar... OH WAIT
Sadly, not many people will spot the generals
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Sir do we have to write a title for the story?
@@aamaalechrish1439i wanna know too
@@wowiehowiethatscrayzy he replied to me in another video, he said "No"
@@aamaalechrish1439No that wouldnt make u gain any marks
IT WORKED! I made rommel and Montgomery disagree over whether he should go and save napoleon! Thank you
Superb
Bro Mr Salles should have Art videos as well
Your standards are low!
quick question sir
some of my teachers have told us to plan an opening where i as the main character describe myself going into the attic to find some christmas lights or something and then find a small box, describe the box and then open it only to find whatever picture they give. and then describe it. i wasnt too sure about that cos its kind of both a description and a story in one.
i was just wondering if it is a good strat for aiming for a 6
Totally good
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish cheers
I did the story which was write about a disagreement and I did the elephant story but I made the disagreement in the rangers mind on whether to save the elephant and risk his own life or not
Perfect
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish I did the same thing. Will i get marked down?
i often go for describe but this story is 🔥. if we get 2 narrate questions tho, im using this. 🙏
u helped me so much w lit i cant thank u enough
Apparently before people got marked down because too many people used an essay plan someone on RUclips said. What if that happens again if I use your essay plan?
That’s just a rumour with no basis in fact, just fear
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish oh ok sorry didnt mean to be rude just was a bit nervous
Sir thank you so much for this video! Imma cook on that English language paper 1
Hi sir can you please review this story?
The sun cast its glow over Kruger National Park, casting long shadows across the golden savannah. In a rugged jeep, two park rangers, Daniel and Leon, bumped along a dusty track, the vehicle's tyres kicking up small clouds of ochre-coloured dust. Daniel, the seasoned veteran with a grizzled beard, glanced over at Leon, his young and eager protégé, gripping a rifle loaded with a tranquiliser dart.
“Remember, Leon,” Daniel said, his voice steady, “Maximus is the key to saving our elephants. He’s a massive bull, and we need to move him to a safer part of the park to ensure the future of the herd.”
Leon nodded, eyes wide with a mix of excitement and nerves. “Got it, Daniel. But I don’t feel good about this.”
Daniel chuckled softly. “That’s why we’re a team. We handle whatever comes our way.”
Their target was Maximus, a colossal bull elephant whose reputation was as grand as his stature. His tusks, long and curved like ancient scimitars, gleamed in the dappled sunlight. His ears, as large as the sails of an old ship, flapped gently, warding off flies. The ground seemed to tremble beneath his weight as he moved with the grace of a dancer and the power of a goliath.
Today, Maximus's heart was not in his usual leisurely stroll. He was on a mission, driven by an instinct as old as time. The scent of Josephine, a beautiful female elephant, was intoxicating, drawing him like a moth to a flame. She was the Juliet to his Romeo, and her presence made the younger elephants restless and eager to prove themselves. Yet, Maximus, the undisputed alpha, would brook no challengers.
Daniel and Leon watched from a distance; the jeep parked beneath the shade of an acacia tree. The air was thick with tension. Leon, his hands trembling, took aim. The rifle's scope framed Maximus perfectly. He exhaled slowly, trying to steady his nerves, and then squeezed the trigger.
The tranquiliser dart flew true, embedding itself in Maximus's thick hide. For a moment, the great beast staggered, his colossal form swaying like a tree in a storm.
Then he caught the alluring scent of Josephine once more and, with a bellow that echoed across the plains, charged after her, scattering the younger bulls in his wake.
Josephine, coy and capricious, led him on a merry chase towards the river. Normally, Maximus would have revelled in the pursuit, but today, the tranquiliser began to take its toll. His strides grew laboured, and his vision blurred. As he reached the river's deepest part, his legs gave way, and he began to sink.
“Daniel, he’s going to drown!” Leon cried. His heart pounded in his chest.
Without waiting for a response, Leon leapt from the jeep and sprinted towards the river. The water was cool, biting at his skin as he plunged in. With Herculean effort, he reached Maximus, whose trunk was slipping below the surface. Leon grabbed the trunk and heaved it above his head, his shoulders quivering with the strain.
“Hold on, big guy,” Leon grunted, his voice a mere whisper against the roar of the river. Minutes felt like hours as he stood there, chest-deep in water, keeping Maximus’s trunk aloft. The tranquilliser’s grip tightened on the giant, but Leon’s determination did not waver.
Finally, Daniel arrived with a makeshift stretcher and a team of rangers. Together, they hauled Maximus to safety, the enormous elephant breathing deeply but steadily. Leon, exhausted, collapsed on the riverbank, watching as the tranquilised titan was loaded onto the stretcher.
As they moved Maximus to a safer part of the park, Leon glanced back at the river. Crocodiles, previously lying in wait, slithered back into the depths, denied their prize.
Reupload? Still pls respond to my previous comment on doing the same with the description. Your the best
I’m filming one now
i heard aqa does not like people using pre made stories from the internet
That’s because it proves their exam question is 💩
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish lmaoooo
mr salles im on a 4 i need a 5.Lets hope your story saves me.
if i were to base my answer on say a tv show or book ive read recently and use similar characters with similar traits and loosely base the storyline from that show/book would this be okay? Just wondering because plagirism and things
Totally okay
COOKING UP APLENTY 🗣🗣🗣
sir if everyone writes about elephants mating with each other will we all get got by the exam board can they deduct marks
plagarism!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As I said in the video - no
Bro cooked up a whole story for us
Can i write a story with a plot that doesnt make sense but is filled with ambitious vocabulary and language & structure techniques?
No
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglishthanks mate
Mr Salles, what’s your message to the people who wrote about Mr Birling by accident instead of Mrs Birling? (I nearly did)
Cooked
Lmao
montgomery might have to sort out rommel like in 1943
ur such an artist like wth😍
rommel and montgomery lol
I think you mixed up Rommel and Napoleon a few times.
This is my origin story
Please don't get me done for plagiarism😂😂
Any opinion on aqa English boundaries or marking this year? I’ve read loads of students have got several grades below predicted. Ie predicted 7s got 4s
National statistics for English as that there was about a 1% increase in grades 7-9, and a 1% decrease in grades 4-6.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish interesting! It seems that some went up considerably and some went down. Wonder if this was markers looking for different things or teacher assessment being out. Good to know there wasn’t a massive difference overall though
Ps thanks to your videos, in particular elephant one, I believe my son passed!
He has never written a story in his life. He usually goes for the description but is quite literal. Never normally gets more than a 2/3 in both lit and lang. He got 4s in both, almost 5s. Your videos helped him to have the confidence to just write!
I like the symmetry of the rescued elephant rescuing your son's exam!
bro is cooking
but y the reuploadd
Please please please please DO NOT do this - your mark will indeed be capped if you use a pre-written story. The many comments claiming the exam board will recognise this happening are absolutely correct. DO NOT WASTE YOUR CHANCE.
Hi Owain - I am open to persuasion. If you are an examiner who has been told to mark such responses down, I would love to know, and may alter my advice accordingly. Do let me know. My contact details are in the About section of my channel if you don't want to post here.
I should add that I get countless messages from students who have used this method and done very well.
Metaphor
Imagery
Simile
Humour/hyperbole
Alliteration
Personification
Sibilance
why do u have a spatula
Cuz he’s cooking
Didn't a load of students get disqualified for plagiarism last year for using Mr Everything English's priest story? Is this not the same thing?
Completely untrue! Priest is still not plagiarism
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thanks for clarifying 👍
thanks mate
Sir do we have to write a title for the story?
No
@@aamaalechrish1439 u can
Why did this get reuploaded?
idk either
I had to get rid of the 2023 June and November questions, so AQA wouldn’t come after me.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Ah ok!
cooking it up sir
YES WE ARE COOKING WITH THE ELEPHANTS
Me watching this again after the exam😅
I cant lie i havent passed english once i dont know how to write a story
Same bro
I love you my story is cold tho icl
is this even allowed due to plagiarism?
Yes
he cooked
are u allow to? aren't we just copying than
im crying. fortnite gameplay next please
Cryin
Fourth
First!