It's always interesting to me when the main character isn't necessarily likeable, because Selena is...rough. It's keeping me engaged though, because I like that as a reader I'm being pushed to accept an imperfect lead that isn't the typical female character you'd find in most novels within this genre
I think the books are great. Just a gentle suggestion though. The main character only picks at salads and water repeatedly. For young girls listening, that's pretty disturbing. Maybe consider giving her a normal appetite.
IDK, the point is, this is fantasy, not real life. She is a supernatural. She wrote it that way. Kinda rude to ask, least for me. It's our worlds we write, and we tell a story. People reading those stories should know this is not reality. And they are not gonna spring supernatural powers like main characters, and especially copy them and what they eat. You can't blur and mix the lines between fantasy and reality. Suggestion from me, fantasy is not for you if you look making everything like the real world.
3:36. Didn’t like the female main character. Three hours of “i am better, i i am this, i am that”. She says she is selfless but all i get in three hours how selfish she is. There is this bitterness bit still don’t know the reason.
I'm 4 hours in, and I can't relate to the main character. My sister and I had a violent and unhealthy childhood, and I took care of her. I didn't push her away the minute we hit high school. It's hard to reconcile how the MC talks about herself and what her actions towards her family really show. Does it get better? Does she become less absorbed in self-pitty and angst and re-engage with her sisters?
@Meskarune I'm sorry they did that. Ours definitely praised and preferred my sister, but that didn't stop our father from trying to hit her. I did, though. He had to go through me to get to her. Since I wouldn't cry for him, he usually tired himself out hurting me and didn't touch her. No wonder neither of us shed a tear when he died. Hope Hell's been awful for the asshole. Anyhow, I knew they preferred my prettier, more obedient sister, but that wasn't her fault. It was all the abuser's fault. But maybe we're just lucky our parents didn't manage to ruin our relationship. I am so grateful to have her in my life as a sister and friend. I hope you're living your best life without abuse now, too. Here's to breaking the cycles.
Good writing. The main character is somewhat neurotic, angst embarrassing, victim mentality, immature. Adult writer missing the mark of a teenager's emotional neurosis.
I think it is very relatable for anyone who had a rough life, had to grow up young, and had responsibilities over others. Knowing but still trying to find herself. Very well written.
Please release an audiobook version on A mazon. My friend recommended your book but there was no audiobook version available on there. I'm glad you have it here but some of us would like to support you and not everyone will think to check RUclips for the audiobook.
Ok really good but 3 things 1. The description of the tall brown skin butler then the slave comparison was not needed in the story. 😢 2. The girls are realllllly young for sex. Bloody first time was last year but she was 15 thinking about it. Meaning the sister started having sex at 14? 3. The main character sounds like she only ever eats salads 😩
This book is intriguing enough to keep me listening, but It almost feels like it’s missing parts because it jumps around with little explanation about how we got from here to there. The characters aren’t very likable either. I understand teenage angst, but you have to have a few redeeming qualities.
Nah too fast that Lilly part should have broke her that was some amazing conflict but was wasted there's was no repercussions after being betrayed or is it just me.
The most unlikeable character I’ve ever seen n a book!!I tried and tried… but 3 quarters of this is as much as I could take!!! Good ol’ fashion southerners… what…
It's always interesting to me when the main character isn't necessarily likeable, because Selena is...rough. It's keeping me engaged though, because I like that as a reader I'm being pushed to accept an imperfect lead that isn't the typical female character you'd find in most novels within this genre
Omg loved the book. We need book 2 ASAP
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Having a powerful, broody female hero struggling to control the beast inside is a nice change :) ❤
Absolutely Brilliant. I really enjoyed this book . Keep up the good work.
I cannot wait to read more of your books❤.
I think the books are great. Just a gentle suggestion though. The main character only picks at salads and water repeatedly. For young girls listening, that's pretty disturbing. Maybe consider giving her a normal appetite.
Especially considering she's a fighter, she needs protein and whatever else fighters eat, I like that her sisters eat though
IDK, the point is, this is fantasy, not real life. She is a supernatural. She wrote it that way. Kinda rude to ask, least for me. It's our worlds we write, and we tell a story. People reading those stories should know this is not reality. And they are not gonna spring supernatural powers like main characters, and especially copy them and what they eat. You can't blur and mix the lines between fantasy and reality. Suggestion from me, fantasy is not for you if you look making everything like the real world.
Lucas says her favorite food is cheeseburgers that suggests that she does eat other things off scene
@@962thi You had me at "it's our worlds we write"
Some girls have eating problems... Sometimes showing them only sunshine and rainbows ain't the real world there...
3:36. Didn’t like the female main character. Three hours of “i am better, i i am this, i am that”. She says she is selfless but all i get in three hours how selfish she is. There is this bitterness bit still don’t know the reason.
Oh my gosh, this book is so freaking good!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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I listened to this entire thing in like two days. My heart broke when i realized none of the other books were on here 😭😭
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Are the AudioBooks on your Spotify read in English?
Amazon
Hopefully they will be on RUclips for free sometime soon
Me too 🙄
Excellent, loved the story, this is only the second book I’ve ever commented on!
Glad you enjoyed it!
I just finished, and i love it. Please, we need book number two
Great story, I’d love to hear the next book if there is a series
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Book 2 is on Hoopla
Great book book 2 please ❤
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I'm 4 hours in, and I can't relate to the main character. My sister and I had a violent and unhealthy childhood, and I took care of her. I didn't push her away the minute we hit high school. It's hard to reconcile how the MC talks about herself and what her actions towards her family really show. Does it get better? Does she become less absorbed in self-pitty and angst and re-engage with her sisters?
Exactly, she's so off-putting. I feel nothing for this character but annoyance.
My parents were abusive and they made me the scapegoat and pitted my siblings against me.
@Meskarune I'm sorry they did that. Ours definitely praised and preferred my sister, but that didn't stop our father from trying to hit her. I did, though. He had to go through me to get to her. Since I wouldn't cry for him, he usually tired himself out hurting me and didn't touch her. No wonder neither of us shed a tear when he died. Hope Hell's been awful for the asshole.
Anyhow, I knew they preferred my prettier, more obedient sister, but that wasn't her fault. It was all the abuser's fault. But maybe we're just lucky our parents didn't manage to ruin our relationship. I am so grateful to have her in my life as a sister and friend.
I hope you're living your best life without abuse now, too. Here's to breaking the cycles.
Thank you for the great book . More please 😊love the book and now I am hooked .
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Anyone know the name of book two??
Really enjoyed this book 😊
Please post book two soon i cant wait to listen
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This book was well written. Excellent story. The time taken to build this story line wa well appreciated. So waiting for book 2. Great job!!!!
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We NEEED book two!!!! Immediately!!! Please!!
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Please can we have book 2!!! This book is amazing!
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Well... yet another story I can't finish unless on yt
Book 2 please 😢 am starving for more, this book was "is" fantastic!
Yep, Great can't wait for book 2🎉🎉😂
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Book 2 Name please
I love this book. Thank you!!!
Need a second book asap.
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Such a lovely book ❤ I already want part two 😢
Good writing. The main character is somewhat neurotic, angst embarrassing, victim mentality, immature. Adult writer missing the mark of a teenager's emotional neurosis.
I wrote the book at 15 when I was the same age as the character. I think it's portrayed fairly accurately, but as adults struggle to relate the same.
I think it is very relatable for anyone who had a rough life, had to grow up young, and had responsibilities over others. Knowing but still trying to find herself. Very well written.
Please post book 2 here.
Thank you! You can grab book 2 at my store kelandaureliabookstore.com or on Spotify!
Book 2 please?
Hi! You can get book 2 here: books2read.com/daizleione
@@authorkelcarpenter Thank you
Thanks, got the entire series on Audible
7 hours in and still don’t know what in the hell the mc is
I need the second book I need more Lucas
Please, I need book number two!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing 🎉 more please❤
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Are you gonna upload the rest of the series. It's a great story
Please release an audiobook version on A mazon. My friend recommended your book but there was no audiobook version available on there. I'm glad you have it here but some of us would like to support you and not everyone will think to check RUclips for the audiobook.
Tell me when you do the second books
I love this book cover!
Wonderful😍😍🌹🌹🌹🌹😍😍😍😍
Nailed it kel
Love a strong female character, finally …someone to admire but also has faults.
I need the 2 book please; I loveeeeeeee this book ❤
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Please can you post book 2 of this series….
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Whats the title of the next book i hot the link but it just showed book 1
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Are their more shadow books? That was an awesome read ❤
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Are the sequel(s) available on kobo or audible?
Awesome job 🎉Such a good book
Thank you 🤗
This has been a great book 😊
Thank you!
Can we get the 2nd book, pleassseeeee????❤
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Book 2 please
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Love it 😍😍
Book 2 please! My library doesn’t have have it 😩
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sooo is this book one?
Ok really good but 3 things
1. The description of the tall brown skin butler then the slave comparison was not needed in the story. 😢
2. The girls are realllllly young for sex. Bloody first time was last year but she was 15 thinking about it. Meaning the sister started having sex at 14?
3. The main character sounds like she only ever eats salads 😩
Is it steamy or not?
This book is intriguing enough to keep me listening, but It almost feels like it’s missing parts because it jumps around with little explanation about how we got from here to there. The characters aren’t very likable either. I understand teenage angst, but you have to have a few redeeming qualities.
I agree with this
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3hrs already and I heared only whinning 😂😂😂 not for me this one
Is there a book two? I hope so!
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Nah too fast that Lilly part should have broke her that was some amazing conflict but was wasted there's was no repercussions after being betrayed or is it just me.
Book 2? When
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I found the entire collection on Amazon/audible I had free credits so it was free.
❤this book more plz😊
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it’s was so good 📖
Thank you!
@@authorkelcarpenter you’re welcome
She's such a hypocrite
The most unlikeable character I’ve ever seen n a book!!I tried and tried… but 3 quarters of this is as much as I could take!!! Good ol’ fashion southerners… what…
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Nonsense, waste of my time
Book 2 please
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So behind a paywall, nice 👌
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