The action could have been a little more intense. And the delivery on lines was stale but aside that the production quality was better than you'd expect from a fan film. Work a bit more on the emotion with the characters and planning out the fight scenes and you'll have a set film.
yeah agreed. We didnt have too much time to plan this one but we actually plan on making 2 more. Thanks for your feedback and we'll take it into consideration
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Hotline Miami in present time, i love that music in house fight.
Thanks man!
Someone SHOULD do a present time hotline Miami.
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The action could have been a little more intense. And the delivery on lines was stale but aside that the production quality was better than you'd expect from a fan film. Work a bit more on the emotion with the characters and planning out the fight scenes and you'll have a set film.
yeah agreed. We didnt have too much time to plan this one but we actually plan on making 2 more. Thanks for your feedback and we'll take it into consideration
no problem. you've got potential I can see that. Maybe add some corn syrup and red food coloring put some blood in there to add some effect.