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    Story: 72 Days: The Word Is Lodestar | Sci-fi Creepypasta | Space Horror
    Author ► Christina Holland
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    ► Magnetar
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    Hello, I am Magnetar. I reside within the Void where space and time become indistinguishable. It is here, too, where I can hear tales from all across the multiverse. Tales of horror, future technologies, AI, Aliens, cosmic horror, world-ending catastrophes, apocalyptic events, space, and more.
    So, if you're brave, join me in the Void. Listen to their screams, their pleas, and their stories.
    But remember - Astrophobes be warned
    ----------------------
    What is a Magnetar?
    Magnetars are some of the most mysterious of all heavenly objects and only one in ten supernovae create these dense cosmic dynamos. Out of more than 3,000 neutron stars discovered to this date, only 31 total magnetars have been confirmed, making their strange existence extremely rare.
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    Astrophobes be warned. #Scifi #creepypasta #space
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Комментарии • 189

  • @SpamMusubi308
    @SpamMusubi308 2 года назад +8

    150 lbs !? That's a super-efficient machine! 🤣🤣🤣

  • @daneyal7162
    @daneyal7162 2 года назад +23

    I'm glad that Crisp pissed his pants from fear. I hate people who think that they can do whatever they want and get away with it.

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 2 года назад +1

      Me, too.

    • @foxxy46213
      @foxxy46213 11 месяцев назад

      It really is a natural reaction...saw a car crash a really bad one luckily no one hurt but both the girls in the back had pissed themselves an was extremely embarrassed. I gave them my coat an top to wrap around there lower half

  • @adaragotzone1407
    @adaragotzone1407 Год назад +4

    I give my thanks to the few people who exposed what happened for us confused individuals. I kinda wanna listen to the whole thing again and re-process that

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX 2 года назад +26

    So I'm confused on the ending did they run out of food and the main character fix the food prep machine to grind everyone in his crew to food and then once he remembered what happened he ground himself into food?

  • @melvizcarra1086
    @melvizcarra1086 2 года назад +9

    Finally! I found a space worthy crew

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      Welcome aboard. 👾

    • @melvizcarra1086
      @melvizcarra1086 2 года назад +1

      Someone recommended MAGNETAR to me and now I can SPACE out during my free time

  • @williamfawkes8379
    @williamfawkes8379 2 года назад +7

    This would be the opposite of a happy meal. And the supply ship had the best name.

  • @DidYouSayEllo
    @DidYouSayEllo 2 года назад +32

    This was oddly normal (scenarios, not environment obviously) and that's what makes this horror.
    I'm really enjoying your narrations. A lot of the time, I can only tolerate hearing things due to health issues so I am near constantly listening to something. I am always watching out for good content that I haven't heard already. Sci-fi horror is my favorite.
    Thanks for helping me stay sane. :P

    • @DidYouSayEllo
      @DidYouSayEllo 2 года назад +5

      Oh and based on an educated guess, since January 2020, I have listened to approximately 13,680 hours of narrations.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      So happy your enjoying my content. Thank you for your support and kind words! 👾

    • @DidYouSayEllo
      @DidYouSayEllo 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT Of course
      😊🥰

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy 2 года назад +12

    That was an outstanding story filled with a lot of detail and description. The plot was well developed and and the ending was indeed a shocking one. Thanks to to the author and and you the narrator for a job well done. Have a marvelous Monday. 💖

  • @jendubay3782
    @jendubay3782 2 года назад +5

    WOW!! I DID NOT SEE THAT ENDING COMING 😯

  • @DodgeTheGraveYT
    @DodgeTheGraveYT 2 года назад +6

    Thanks for making my hour long ride back home exciting!

  • @jill3343
    @jill3343 2 года назад +12

    Wow, what a good story! I was not expecting that kind of twisted end . Well done. and thanks.

  • @redraven7948
    @redraven7948 2 года назад +15

    Absolutely AMAZING channel! Stories telling phenomenal! When a narrator makes you laugh..or go WTF?.... AND leaves you wanting more during/after a story because of the WAY they tell the story is one in a million. You my dear are one! 💯👍

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      So glad you enjoy it. Thank you for your support! 👾

  • @oscargarcia2364
    @oscargarcia2364 2 года назад +4

    I was astonished to hear the phrase "Double Secret Probation" at 31:00. I laughed out loud. Narration is awesome by the way.

  • @Fearsomehero
    @Fearsomehero 2 года назад +12

    Very intense story! Absolute banger

  • @mirandamanga9083
    @mirandamanga9083 2 года назад +8

    Did not expect the ending there. Amazing story, and of course, an amazing narrator. Thank you.
    Keep up the good work, but watch yourself as well. Thanks again.

  • @TheFox517
    @TheFox517 2 года назад +6

    That was... definitely a plot twist...

  • @bunygirl8138
    @bunygirl8138 2 года назад +9

    🙀Great story and narration! My teeth and stomach were not expecting that! The author did a great job inducing that unexpected physiological effect! 🤭👨‍🚀🌠✨

  • @joetrevino320
    @joetrevino320 2 года назад +13

    🖤🤍 im loving these story's. Glade I stumbled across MAGNETAR🤘

  • @GarryDKing
    @GarryDKing 2 года назад +10

    the most horrific part of this story isn't the mad scientist messing with memory or the possibility that the alien slim infected jackson and made him possibly omnom the rest of the crew, it's the fact there was an incel on the ship!

  • @juleswild9498
    @juleswild9498 2 года назад +20

    Wow that turn I didn't see coming 😮 really intense read!

  • @opinion-eater432
    @opinion-eater432 Год назад +2

    Plenty of detail without over doing it is hard to do! You're nailing this!!!

  • @TheAdministration
    @TheAdministration 2 года назад +36

    I'm digging it. You've got a voice that delivers.

  • @njbes_963
    @njbes_963 2 года назад +10

    Phenomenal! Keep it up dude!

  • @410cultivar
    @410cultivar 2 года назад +8

    The intro reminds me of love, sex, and robots

  • @laurelsilberman5705
    @laurelsilberman5705 2 года назад +4

    Finally getting a chance to listen to this!! I’ve been trying to find time all day and I finally did. So excited!!

  • @srmj71
    @srmj71 2 года назад +4

    Dude I love listening to stories on RUclips.. I just found your channel and it's the best!

  • @jazeenharal6013
    @jazeenharal6013 Год назад +2

    Ahhh, this is a well-written story right up my alley.

  • @onetwo5155
    @onetwo5155 2 года назад +5

    Excellent and intense story and read. The true horror though, was minesweeper...

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      Hahah agreed 😂
      Thanks for your support! 👾

  • @jimmywolfe4724
    @jimmywolfe4724 2 года назад +4

    Just found this channel and loving it so far, I need to find more channels like this.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      We are all that you need 👾

    • @nevasoba5953
      @nevasoba5953 2 года назад +2

      that is what I said when I found it.

  • @kristinacable
    @kristinacable 2 года назад +6

    That was a great story, and you delivered it superbly!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Thank you for the support! 👾

  • @ronway7280
    @ronway7280 2 года назад +3

    That was a great mystery! I loved it and I loved the ending.

  • @metalflame94
    @metalflame94 11 месяцев назад +2

    this story was remarkable holy moly

  • @TheNerdCorporation
    @TheNerdCorporation 2 года назад +3

    One of the best narrators and "story-chooser" out there! 😘

  • @timothywinn8776
    @timothywinn8776 2 года назад +2

    I got super excited because I thought the captain had the same name as me...only to read the closed caption, and realize that his name was Nugyen😏

  • @DD-74
    @DD-74 2 года назад +4

    tasty story... d/j :P many props on the sci-fi themed reads, was sorely lacking, great form sir :)

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Thank you for your support! 👾

  • @Iatr0s
    @Iatr0s 2 года назад +3

    Holy balls, great story! Also really enjoying your narration, keep up the great work sir!

  • @belinda35_77
    @belinda35_77 2 года назад +8

    Adding to bedtime playlist right now.
    Can't wait!
    Thanks :)

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Let me know what you think

    • @belinda35_77
      @belinda35_77 2 года назад +3

      @@MagnetarYT
      Definitely!
      It's all que'd up.
      You and @ ScayJUJU are my new favorite ch's and narrators!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      😅 Thanks

    • @bunygirl8138
      @bunygirl8138 2 года назад

      @@belinda35_77 Daaannnggg! 🤭🤭🤭

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 2 года назад +1

      @@belinda35_77 Me, too.

  • @alig5211
    @alig5211 Год назад +1

    The true horror is being trapped in isolation with only mine sweeper and Steven King.

  • @flappy7373
    @flappy7373 2 года назад +4

    this was a fun story!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Happy you enjoyed! 👾

  • @fredericramstedt545
    @fredericramstedt545 2 года назад +2

    Second time listening and you never disappoint, Magnetar baby. Great stuff!!

  • @susanhorn6401
    @susanhorn6401 2 года назад +2

    Wow, wow, wow, did not expect that ending! Gross! Great job, loving your stories!

  • @MrJoingi
    @MrJoingi 2 года назад +5

    excellent story

  • @0therun1t21
    @0therun1t21 2 года назад +2

    Excellent story! Thank you

  • @loismcdonald3518
    @loismcdonald3518 Год назад +2

    So he realize he had turned his colleagues into food, so he turned himself into food?

  • @geraldsantora9968
    @geraldsantora9968 2 года назад +4

    Great story!

  • @jimhusselman4012
    @jimhusselman4012 Год назад +1

    So the maint. Tech lost it and made the rest of the crew breakfast, lunch, dinner and a late night snack ! Hmm well that is an excellent reason to be kind to one and other!! Wink

  • @Folkpunkemojunk
    @Folkpunkemojunk 2 года назад +1

    Narration and background ambient sounds were on point. A good story too, though I wish it was first person.

  • @mouldybread9454
    @mouldybread9454 2 года назад +3

    Hell yeah a long one

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      That's not the first time that has been said to me. 👾

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 2 года назад

      @@MagnetarYT Roflol

  • @TheDevadiva
    @TheDevadiva 2 года назад +4

    Lawnmower man becomes the Director of the Solent Green factory, “An you must eat all of your meat if you want your pudding!”

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Devadia - just wanted to let you know I deleted one of your early comments because it contained story spoilers!

  • @xties
    @xties 2 года назад +3

    WoW that was great

  • @risc19
    @risc19 2 года назад +3

    I really enjoyed that. Well done.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Appreciate the support 👾

  • @bassface5983
    @bassface5983 2 года назад +3

    This was awesome!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Thank you! Appreciate the support. 👽

  • @blowitoutyourcunt7675
    @blowitoutyourcunt7675 Год назад +2

    I had to listen to this story again because not only is it magnificent but I love the update at the end! The jump from 1K subscribers to 30k subscribers in a year is amazing! Love your channel and content! Keep up the great work! Cheers mate!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  Год назад +3

      I'm not at 30k :(
      But yes 18k is amazing!

    • @blowitoutyourcunt7675
      @blowitoutyourcunt7675 Год назад +2

      @@MagnetarYT Lol, I looked at the view count for the video and got sooo excited for you! 18K is still totally an amazing achievement! Keep up the *most excellent work* and you'll be at 30k in no time! Cheers!

    • @bluesirius1
      @bluesirius1 9 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@MagnetarYTnow you're at 34k, congrats!

  • @crushone1
    @crushone1 2 года назад +3

    Very good! You did well, your future is big! Thank you.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Thank you! 👾

    • @crushone1
      @crushone1 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT 💙🙏

  • @mohithkondaveeti7766
    @mohithkondaveeti7766 2 года назад +7

    Great story, great narration, I liked your little commentary at the end, I think you earned yourself a new subscriber. I look forward to watching you for years to come and see your channel grow.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Thank you for your support! 👾

  • @padraics
    @padraics 2 года назад +2

    Subbed. Awesome!

  • @mjskinner9288
    @mjskinner9288 2 года назад +3

    Thanks for sharing, 🖤 your channel 👽🤙

  • @tifKh
    @tifKh 2 года назад +6

    I was excited for this 😬 Have you thought about patreon/early uploads?

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      I have a Kofi account which is linked in description. I hope to have things to offer in the future, but nothing is set yet.
      I don't have a backlog of videos, which I'd want to have before doing "early access". I don't have a lot of time, especially consistent time, to record videos. Which makes my upload schedule vary wildly. I can't possibly promise something to paying donors just yet.

    • @tifKh
      @tifKh 2 года назад +2

      @@MagnetarYT Well, it’s deffo something to consider down the line- your growth is starting to pick up (you went from under 1k to over and beyond pretty quick, it looked like!) and you’ve found a really good niche! People seem to look forward to your content, and I know I tend to join Patreons for channels where $5-$10 gets access to videos 12-24 hours ahead of time- even channels with irregular or infrequent posts- it’s almost more worth it in those instances!
      I thought I had left a comment on one of your early videos with a suggestion of short sci fi stories in the public domain that are awesome (I either forgot to leave it, or maybe bc of the link it didn’t post, but if you’re interested, I’ll totally send it your way!)
      Thank you for the time you put into your channel- makes my own work day go a little better.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      I'd love to hear your suggestions! Email me at magnetar.yt335@gmail.com

    • @tifKh
      @tifKh 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT sent!

  • @supervidere7
    @supervidere7 2 года назад +4

    The voice fits. Keep em coming

  • @manson9083
    @manson9083 2 года назад +4

    So glad i found your channel. These stories kick ass.

  • @issshanesmart8480
    @issshanesmart8480 2 года назад +2

    lodestone is a magnet lodestar would be a magnetic star which is all of them last I checked I guess I have to google stars that have no magnetic field

  • @cjsayers3346
    @cjsayers3346 Год назад +1

    This was dope! High five to the author.

  • @justindunlap1235
    @justindunlap1235 2 года назад +1

    when I hear the word lodestar I think of lodestone (magnetite) and star, which means that lodestar might just be an ancient Chinese name for a magnetar. great narration by the way.

  • @joearnold6881
    @joearnold6881 9 месяцев назад +1

    Pretty good but too much of a leap without more to connect it when you look back after the reveal.
    Nothing hinted at either them running out of food, or him being the sort who’d kill and cannibalize people.
    I was expecting it to be the slime mold and the (missing) brain in the jar, but that probably wouldn’t have been better😅

  • @dtoliver5
    @dtoliver5 2 года назад +2

    I need the ending explained to me, what happened to the main character? I know the air was used but by who.

  • @DrAsimov
    @DrAsimov 2 года назад +5

    FOR THE ALGORITHM!

  • @ryanmccullough4831
    @ryanmccullough4831 2 года назад +2

    You deserve more views

  • @salexume9622
    @salexume9622 2 года назад +3

    Do a crossover with Dr Creepen. You guys can do it!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      He's quite larger than I am, I'm sure he has better things to do 🥺

    • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
      @TheStuart-of-Cosby Год назад

      @@MagnetarYT That would really be awesome. The Good Dr. and your smooth voice. Just curious have maybe looked into this

  • @brianhallman6594
    @brianhallman6594 Год назад +2

    That don't make no sense. Because he made a choice to kill them and use them as foods, So he could survive. So when he got his memories back of what happened, He also should have got the mind set back that let him kill them in the first place. Not to off himself. But i still thank its a great story bec of the Twist ending and mystery.

  • @zacharyhorvath3615
    @zacharyhorvath3615 2 года назад +1

    This is a damn good story

  • @ilmosisk6063
    @ilmosisk6063 2 года назад

    Only thing I’d try to figure out or master more is guest voices in story’s are super super loud,compared to your normal reading volume so you have it turned up to hear your voice then it’s screaming when a new character voice is introduced

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 2 года назад

      I thought it was just the opposite.

  • @ayyutha
    @ayyutha 2 года назад +2

    I wanna know how the crew members died.

  • @jimmyshrimbe9361
    @jimmyshrimbe9361 2 года назад +2

    'Splodestar ☄️🔥🔥💥💥💫🌟☀️

  • @morrisminor56
    @morrisminor56 2 года назад +1

    OOH!

  • @donnageorge6506
    @donnageorge6506 2 года назад +2

    👍👍👍👍👍👍

  • @land3021
    @land3021 2 года назад +2

    Wonder how/why this guy stuffed himself into the food processing thing... or if he actually did that... or if he was some sort of ghost... Probably the latter...
    Well, turns out he did off himself... the text really hides stuff in plain sight, with it skimming over incredibly important details, begging to be looked into...

  • @BaldingClamydia
    @BaldingClamydia Год назад +2

    Hold on, she's protecting herself from unwanted touches and he says SHE "has problems getting along with people"? Uhm...that's not exactly how I see it

  • @beepboop9712
    @beepboop9712 Год назад +1

    Wait..... was the crew dead at the end?

  • @DrakeBarrow
    @DrakeBarrow 2 года назад +1

    Huh, didn't see that coming.

  • @jerrykim7777
    @jerrykim7777 Год назад

    why did jackson put everybody in the food processingemachine?

  • @hellno7083
    @hellno7083 2 года назад +19

    "Dont hate me. It was written by a female" 😂

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +5

      I just don't want people to think
      1. I felt the same way the main character did
      2. The author truly felt the same way too
      Because neither are true lol

    • @MmmChipotle
      @MmmChipotle 2 года назад +8

      Pretty hard virtue signal at the end too

    • @aaabucus3104
      @aaabucus3104 Год назад +1

      Eww that's gross

    • @jazeenharal6013
      @jazeenharal6013 Год назад +9

      @@MmmChipotle yeah, I noticed that.
      It's literature.
      People (good writers) write about how people actually are, warts and all, not some college campus sanitized version of life.
      Nobody thinks you're a bad person because you read a non-PC-sanitized story. The end part is not necessary and makes me cringe; The disavowal is beyond unnecessary.
      You're a good VA, nobody thinks you're a bad person because you read stories with troubled characters in them.
      Imagine a world where authors wrote boring, sanitized characters so as to not piss off moral busybodies.
      You'd have the forgettable torrent of crap we get on Netflix, basically.

    • @MmmChipotle
      @MmmChipotle Год назад +3

      @@jazeenharal6013 well said.

  • @cativamusereacts9926
    @cativamusereacts9926 3 месяца назад

    Wait where did Jackson go at the end? Did he ration pack himself?

  • @lastofthe4horsemen279
    @lastofthe4horsemen279 2 года назад

    Did he see Momento?

  • @danieljeppe7981
    @danieljeppe7981 Год назад +2

    Great narration as always, but the story is more or less a direct copy of 'Colony' by Philip K. Dick

  • @issshanesmart8480
    @issshanesmart8480 2 года назад +3

    I googled have humans found any of the non magnetic stars yet my guess is yes anti matter vs normal matter which equals equal and opposite

    • @gingeranagram2467
      @gingeranagram2467 Год назад

      Anti matter cannot exist freely in the universe. Too many particles of normal matter to collide with

  • @dorothyb3303
    @dorothyb3303 2 года назад +3

    Yummy!

  • @Extraxi274
    @Extraxi274 2 года назад +1

    Comparing tech work to making a deal with the devil mde this too real

  • @thedayidied
    @thedayidied 2 года назад +2

    I don't get the ending at all. Can someone please explain it? Did the main character just kill everyone else or something?

    • @DaveQZ85
      @DaveQZ85 2 года назад +4

      They were apparently running out of food and the main character killed everyone else and processed them into ration packs and had been eating them the whole time. Right when the relief ship docked, he finally remembered what he did and it broke him so he out himself into the processor; the 150 lbs of new ration packs mentioned.

    • @thedayidied
      @thedayidied 2 года назад +3

      @@DaveQZ85 Ah. Thank you. For some reason, it just didn't process in my brain what exactly was going on lol

    • @DaveQZ85
      @DaveQZ85 2 года назад +2

      @@thedayidied I was confused to for a bit when the search party said that they didn't find anyone. I was expecting that the main character went crazy and thought "I might as well keep doing it" and was hiding from them just to suddenly jump out and turn them into more meals.

  • @eggsandwich3993
    @eggsandwich3993 2 года назад

    But why did he get headache and memory from the word "Lodestar"?
    Could "Lodestar" be the brand or the name of that Ratio Processor?

    • @matthewallen2273
      @matthewallen2273 2 года назад +6

      It was the recall word that Dr.Spencer used when he got his memories suppressed the first time. That's why he found the note in her office.

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 2 года назад +1

      @@matthewallen2273 Thank you .

  • @richardhamilton9223
    @richardhamilton9223 Год назад +1

    My brother 💯

  • @zalyxe
    @zalyxe 2 года назад +1

    yo dude, do you play destiny? i feel like youd like it^^

  • @MrGrandure
    @MrGrandure Год назад

    My screen name should be load warrior

  • @chadp363
    @chadp363 2 года назад +2

    This is very similar to another space story where a crew member eats the rest of his crew, minus all the other issues

  • @goodfriday692
    @goodfriday692 Год назад +1

    If the author were up for revisions, I'd like to submit the following: the protagonist, if you could call him that, seemed too wimpy. Moreover, I don't think that the situation with the terrarium was adequately explained, or the low power settings. To be fair, I had this playing in the background, so maybe I missed it.
    Crisp seemed like a proper prick, but the assault should have been more subtle and built up. Casual grazes perhaps, followed by perhaps hacking her terminal and finding out about the unsanctioned experiments. Or by hacking the Captain's terminal and finding out about an unnamed directory, or by noticing that certain that there were discrepancies with the Spencer's daily logs, after hacking the Captain's terminal. A break in pattern that prompted him to run a script to find where there was recently reallocated disk space that hadn't been overwritten yet.
    Maybe Spencer would have made some formal complaints to the captain, and the captain would have started to document such actions, but was pleasantly surprised with Spencer's tone shift? Saying that she wanted the complaints withdrawn and that Crisp made a heart felt apology, and maybe cabin fever was getting the better of him given their time in isolation. Only to find out in later logs that she was absolutely being blackmailed and that she was miserable with her new arrangement with Crisp.
    Just casually dismissing a sexual assault by the captain as "unprofessional," seems the high end of unreasonable and unbelievable. However, a sneaky prick of a low tier computer hacker easily cracking an unimaginative Captain's terminal seems absolutely possible.
    The details of this story are honestly pretty good, and the blend of familiar and science fiction was done surprisingly well. The twist was completely unexpected, and the ending was wonderfully executed.

    • @joearnold6881
      @joearnold6881 9 месяцев назад

      Never be a writer.

    • @goodfriday692
      @goodfriday692 9 месяцев назад

      @@joearnold6881 keep being a winner

  • @mcsalty8869
    @mcsalty8869 2 года назад +1

    Feature not a bug hmm I suspect this author plays Bethesda games.

  • @loubowen8082
    @loubowen8082 2 года назад +3

    A lot weird

  • @joearnold6881
    @joearnold6881 9 месяцев назад

    Bird

  • @dragonback6075
    @dragonback6075 8 месяцев назад

    Good.. very long winded though

  • @Outcast-0033
    @Outcast-0033 2 года назад +2

    You didn't need to leave a disclaimer at the end about the way the men treated the female character in the story. The main character didnt commit a crime by asking her about her relationship status and the captain wasnt in the wrong for thinking that she was taking things a bit too far when she threatened a mans life by shoving him in an airlock for actions that were not worth such a response. The female character proved to have her own issues that caused her problems in social situations and instead of blaming others or calling one of them a creeper for flirtimg with her she could have focused on her own skills to better handle it. Remember that when you label women victims even when they are not victims you are essentially saying that you don't think they are capable of making their own decisions or handeling things for themselves. Additionally in a case like this she was also equally responsible for the way situations regarding her were being handled and that she be acknowledged as well.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      "Jackson is a harmless enough creeper minus the blackmail thing, but Crisp straight up grabbed me from behind today and... went for the goods. I managed to shake him off but he kept coming back "
      The guy was literally sexually assaulting her and you think no one committed a crime? I'd be scared to be a woman around you.

    • @Outcast-0033
      @Outcast-0033 2 года назад +2

      @@MagnetarYT yeah Jackson is a harmless enough creeper and Crisp is a jack ass. The story doesnt glorify his behavior but you felt the need for a disclaimer however my point is why? Is it ok to threaten someones life for being grabby? Why dont you do a disclaimer against that then? Is it wrong for her to be toxic when speaking about the harmless creeper? So why not make a disclaimer about that? Or what if someone reads too much into the story and asks what else might have gone on between the characters to cause Crisp to think what he was doing was acceptable should you speculate and try to reason it out or should you say its just a story? Do you get where I'm going with this? Anyone can find anything offensive but your a story teller. Your disclaimer should be at the start of the story where you say "this story contains violence and sexual content so listener discretion is advised" as for what your audience takes away from it you cant control that so dont try. I didn't see a one sided scenario between the doctor and Crisp. She was talking crap about the main character for doing nothing which suggests she is two faced. Not to mention the questionable nature of the rig she was enthusiatically using on him. Now she is saying Crisp got grabby (which may or may not be true because we have already seen how she can blow things out of proportion) so she thru him in the airlock thus threatening his life and she got mad because the captain told them to cut the crap and act like adults. Personally if the captain reprimanded her for "threatening murder" then that wouldnt have been unreasonable especially since its her word against his when it comes to being grabby but we do know what happens if you throw someone out of an airlock without a suit.

    • @joearnold6881
      @joearnold6881 9 месяцев назад

      @@Outcast-0033you’re the reason that disclaimer needed to exist, creeper

    • @Outcast-0033
      @Outcast-0033 9 месяцев назад

      @@joearnold6881 naw. Its whiny cry babies like you that can't stand opposing opinions which are the reason people feel the need to give ridiculous and out of touch disclaimers and trigger warnings. Not only that but people like you are hypocrites when it comes to which disclaimers you would approve of.

  • @juliemunoz2762
    @juliemunoz2762 3 месяца назад +1

    Magnatar don’t virtue signal.