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    Story: We Built a Gateway to Another Star: Full Story | Sci-Fi Creepypasta
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    Hello, I am Magnetar. I reside within the Void where space and time become indistinguishable. It is here, too, where I can hear tales from all across the multiverse. Tales of horror, future technologies, AI, Aliens, cosmic horror, world-ending catastrophes, apocalyptic events, space, and more.
    So, if you're brave, join me in the Void. Listen to their screams, their pleas, and their stories.
    But remember - Astrophobes be warned
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    What is a Magnetar?
    Magnetars are some of the most mysterious of all heavenly objects and only one in ten supernovae create these dense cosmic dynamos. Out of more than 3,000 neutron stars discovered to this date, only 31 total magnetars have been confirmed, making their strange existence extremely rare.
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    Astrophobes be warned. #Scifi #creepypasta #space
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  • @healyf52
    @healyf52 Год назад +5

    Nice bedtime story

  • @albertcardenas9756
    @albertcardenas9756 9 месяцев назад +4

    Excellent variation of "Stargate", thoroughly enjoyed this story!

  • @johannageisel5390
    @johannageisel5390 Год назад +10

    I really liked this one. The plot point of finding a destroyed civilization reminds me a little to "The Astronauts" by Stanisław Lem. Also known as "The Silent Star".

  • @Inbaroush
    @Inbaroush Год назад +13

    This is such great storytelling! Easily commensurate with the old, classic radio shows I loved as a child. 💛

  • @johncastille8849
    @johncastille8849 9 месяцев назад +2

    Wow what a great story. Imagine being such an advanced civilization and you’re wiped out by.. those things. How simple and horrible.

  • @abasis.baruti9819
    @abasis.baruti9819 Год назад +8

    Holy shit this was good. Terrifying, grotesque, and absolutely good.

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

      Fastfood for the mind. Most creepypasta stories are as cohesive and creative as highschool essays. That's because the same people write them.

  • @noxoneatxall1208
    @noxoneatxall1208 2 года назад +16

    Just listened to this the other night but it's worth another go. Btw I'm glad to see the channel growing you deserve more subscribers.

  • @MantraHerbInchSin
    @MantraHerbInchSin 2 года назад +5

    Mass effect flashbacks at the intro there, great stuff. Man, that always gets to me. I am going to listen to this now when I go to sleep. Having not smoked weed for 2 weeks, I get really lucid dreams, so I am not sure if this is wise. 3/4 times I get nightmares after all :D

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

      Mass Effect had a good story. This just sounds like written by a highschooler.

  • @AnomalyINC
    @AnomalyINC 9 месяцев назад +1

    Those Prothean visions in the beginning looks like a closeup of a hamburger being made.

  • @_Nephaelim
    @_Nephaelim 2 года назад +10

    In a very short time, you've become one of my top creepypasta narrators, mate. Keep up the great work... dood!

  • @ryannutton1704
    @ryannutton1704 Год назад +4

    This was the very first story of yours I ever listened to. You are now by far my favorite Channel on RUclips. Criminally underrated. You should ha ve more than 1 million subs.

  • @evelynberrios8164
    @evelynberrios8164 2 месяца назад +1

    I’m happy to hear your stories. They are thought provoking as well as eerie. I’ve been telling my friends to listen to you. Today I’m listening to everything Magnetar. Love your voice. 🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • @BLACKSTAR-xn3vh
    @BLACKSTAR-xn3vh Год назад +9

    This was a good one. My imagination ran along with the words of this story. It would be cool to see this as a movie or a short story in a anthology movie or show. Good work 👍

  • @carbide1968
    @carbide1968 Год назад +2

    that's about as scary as it gets.

  • @mastertek383
    @mastertek383 2 года назад +6

    Magnetar! F&%# YEAH!!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      It's literally credited in the description. Just like I told you the last 8 times you commented. Nothing I'm doing is illegal. So can you please fuck off already your troglodyte on

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +1

      Lmfao

  • @denniswoods3716
    @denniswoods3716 2 года назад +37

    You know I just recently found this channel and god I love it I've always been a huge fan of space and sci-fi stories

    • @mastertek383
      @mastertek383 2 года назад +4

      Same here. After I ran across Magnetar I unsubbed from the others. This guy picks really good stories.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      Thank you both for your support 👾

    • @denniswoods3716
      @denniswoods3716 2 года назад +3

      @@MagnetarYT ofcourse ofcourse, I'm always down for a good narration and so far I've really enjoyed the ones I've heard 😁

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +3

      Same here 👽 between Magnetars narration and his pick of the stories it's definitely a awesome channel it's the only one that I'll donate to and help grow soon the void will consume all of creepypasta 😆

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +6

      @@GeorgiaPeachHolly well it's supposed to be a tribute to mass effect and honestly I love it that was my all time favorite game

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Год назад +3

    Hey my Friend thanks for another awesome narration. I really enjoy the Stargate kinda stories. One of my favorite movies

  • @dontforgetyoursunscreen
    @dontforgetyoursunscreen Год назад +2

    Signals not going through the gate way make sense if it is invisible as it being invisible means light passes through & radio is just a type of light

  • @Fallon-ux8qu6qz3e
    @Fallon-ux8qu6qz3e 7 месяцев назад +2

    This is a very good story..thank you doll face

  • @Maeshalanadae
    @Maeshalanadae Год назад +2

    Looks like we found the reason for the Tsar Bomba.

  • @DomBrownyo
    @DomBrownyo 2 года назад +2

    Good voice skill. REal. Enigmatic. Gravitas of the story in there. Or rather so far so good.

  • @lampmunchertv3861
    @lampmunchertv3861 2 года назад +46

    You should do a continuation of this. Perhaps from the aliens point of view before they were thinned out/forced to extinction or a continuation of the current plot on the human side of things. Since it's been left open with the dog dying (unfortunate)... I think this universe has some potential.

    • @RectorFilm
      @RectorFilm Год назад +6

      Second

    • @gregwunderlich4253
      @gregwunderlich4253 8 месяцев назад +3

      ​@@RectorFilmThoid

    • @jonathanhensley6141
      @jonathanhensley6141 3 месяца назад

      We do need a prequel on the civilizations back story and all they found as well as the world of the centipede also 2 parts on how earth contains the infestation.

  • @idlecount4335
    @idlecount4335 Год назад +2

    Excellent story,
    reminds me of Stargate.

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 2 года назад +10

    Great to see a channel dedicated to Scifi. Keep the stories coming and I'll keep listening. You have a pretty wide lane open to you.

  • @grnwhitewidow76239
    @grnwhitewidow76239 2 года назад +3

    Whoa that was a siccc intro love it !!

  • @jimmy3x216
    @jimmy3x216 7 месяцев назад +2

    Great story!

  • @IshijimaKairo
    @IshijimaKairo 2 года назад +2

    This is why we always send in a mech or 2, and if it's a space gateway, a small fleet.

    • @IshijimaKairo
      @IshijimaKairo 2 года назад +1

      by mech I do not mean manned robots, I mean mechanized divsions.

  • @ReturnToSender1313
    @ReturnToSender1313 8 месяцев назад

    Each of these tales would be the best Black Mirror episodes.

  • @ClonetrooperCaptain
    @ClonetrooperCaptain 2 года назад +4

    so star gate but far more dark.

  • @jonathanhensley6141
    @jonathanhensley6141 3 месяца назад

    Star Gate horror series would be awesome because the idea is how old are the star gates and how far is it reach.

  • @chadp363
    @chadp363 2 года назад +7

    I really enjoy this story. I love the Stargate movie/shows, this one hits all thise notes, but less campy and more terrifying

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +6

      Right Stargate was an awesome movie but I never gave the TV series a chance maybe I should try to watch a few episodes

    • @chadp363
      @chadp363 2 года назад +4

      @@Spectre1776 they're entertaining, but the movie was much more serious. Though, the lore and history is always progressing, throughout 3 series.
      Also, there is a lot of it, and during these times, lots to binge is always helpful

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      @@chadp363 which show would you recommend for me the entire series is on Hulu I was wanting to start on Atlantis just cause I love the Atlantis theory

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +4

      @@chadp363 it's hard to out act Kurt Russell lol The Thing is a masterpiece

    • @chadp363
      @chadp363 2 года назад +4

      @@Spectre1776 Stargate sg1 was first, it branched later with Atlantis. And then universe came out shortly after that. Plus there is movies for the series as well
      The Atlantis theory was fun

  • @halbellows8578
    @halbellows8578 2 года назад +4

    That is so good! The eerie music and the nice clear voice is perfect. I'm a believer..... oops..... I mean subscriber! Thanks.

  • @keithharris1672
    @keithharris1672 6 месяцев назад +1

    Good story, you got me.

  • @arthurchadwell9267
    @arthurchadwell9267 8 месяцев назад +1

    "Chevron 7 locked!"

  • @cjtnegrete
    @cjtnegrete 2 года назад +8

    I like your channel. Good reads and loaded with scifi, which I feel is generally lacking in the creepypasta sphere

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

      For a reason. There is already enough mediocracy in creepyfastfood

  • @frederickwise5238
    @frederickwise5238 7 месяцев назад

    Thank goodness for the NUK U LER explosion of the the thermo NUK U LER bomb.

  • @paintingattiffanys8694
    @paintingattiffanys8694 2 года назад +3

    I love your channel! Thank you

  • @zyrxom
    @zyrxom Год назад

    The dog being a carrier wasn’t even a surprise. The whole time I’m thinking about the opening to the movie the thing. what kind of dog knows to run away from another animal?

  • @callummurphy6202
    @callummurphy6202 2 года назад +5

    Only been watching your channel for about a week, but have already gone through nearly half your videos, great narration and great choice of stories each time love listening when playing games or doing things around the house. I'll be keeping an eye on your posts for a long time I think

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Thanks for you support 👾

  • @dorothyb3303
    @dorothyb3303 2 года назад +3

    Thank you!

  • @Denziger
    @Denziger 5 месяцев назад +2

    Listening while doing some work at home. Brilliant stuff, Mags! Who writes these? You?

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  5 месяцев назад

      Some are me. This isn't.

  • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998
    @thenewadventuresofhenry6998 2 года назад +9

    Tobias Malm is a genius. You should do, "Something Happened 65 Million Years Ago" next.

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      That's a cool story I liked that one

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +4

      I plan to...when I WAS going to do it another channel I know a lot of my listeners frequent did it too. I didn't want to release it around the same time, ya know?

    • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998
      @thenewadventuresofhenry6998 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT Scary Juju? I suggested he do "The Last Safe Place in the World is an NSA Facility in Alaska" after I saw your video.

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +3

      @@MagnetarYT yeah juju is pretty cool I try to listen to all the creepiest of pastas lol and honestly Magnetar is killing it guy's between the background music and his narration it's my favorite channel 😄

  • @josephnewago3102
    @josephnewago3102 2 года назад +3

    This would make one good movie

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

      Fastfood for the eyes, that's what it would be. So many ppl here love mediocracy.

  • @pantarei8382
    @pantarei8382 2 года назад +2

    I FUCKING LOVE THUS STORY.. listebebd to it while i was falling asleep.... Gave me acid mdma dreams

  • @BYMYSYD
    @BYMYSYD Год назад +2

    8/10 creepy for sure, but not too original. Portals are now such a common trope that it reminds me of Stranger Things, Stargate, Contact, Half Life, Alien, and many more. Also, I feel the dangers in the story are very present day earth-like. If the story is about the exchange between two far away civilizations in the universe, then the real dangers should be barely unimaginable, but not impossible. I believe the experiences that can drive you the most insane are the ones that are highly improbable, but are still within the laws of nature.

  • @martinscholer5419
    @martinscholer5419 Месяц назад

    Nice story, thanks

  • @MrBashem
    @MrBashem 5 месяцев назад +1

    I so hope this is not how people will react to a world ending problem lol.

  • @jonny_gage
    @jonny_gage 2 года назад +2

    I love sci-fi horror stories

  • @damienmartinez7116
    @damienmartinez7116 Год назад +1

    Like tales of the crypt cabinet of curiosities some of these stories would make good sci-fi short films like the outerlimits

  • @killcode6717
    @killcode6717 2 года назад +1

    Wow interesting story

  • @dopplervocals
    @dopplervocals 2 года назад +3

    i noticed a little typo in this videos background with is “We Built a Gatway” instead of “Gateway” but it’s all good bro!!

  • @pattersonparkin7303
    @pattersonparkin7303 Год назад +1

    That was pretty pretty good, hi from sunny day in New Zealand

  • @jonathanhensley6141
    @jonathanhensley6141 3 месяца назад

    I wish we had a true military scyfy special ops series of star gate because that is what this feels like. Just imagine the power supply of the gateway.

  • @orlandoterte
    @orlandoterte 2 года назад +6

    How did the oversized, black centipedes built their own gateway in the first place? ✌️

    • @johnro5650
      @johnro5650 2 года назад +3

      It's obvious they didn't they were encountered.
      I broke down a wall and found an ant. Surely the ant can build a better wall!

    • @orlandoterte
      @orlandoterte 2 года назад +2

      @@johnro5650 possible, but not probable. 😀

    • @sinecron6684
      @sinecron6684 2 года назад +2

      They didn't, the tall humanoid creatures built gateways to multiple points in the galaxy in hopes of connecting with intelligent lifeforms, one gateway found it's way to the cent's world and they looked at it and said "ooooh...LUNCH!". By the time we got there the tall grey people were basically done and the cents saw us and our open gateway and said "ooooh...seconds!"

    • @orlandoterte
      @orlandoterte 2 года назад +1

      @@sinecron6684 nope, if you're going to listen to this again, they only sent the blueprint. I really am sorry to disappoint you. 😂

    • @sinecron6684
      @sinecron6684 2 года назад +1

      @@orlandoterte you're one of THOSE people, I see, I won't waste my time then, sorry to disappoint YOU 🤣🤣🤣

  • @macrograms
    @macrograms Год назад +1

    Tabby's star may be a binary system. It's great to hear stories built on real non-fiction speculations -- some theorized advanced technological structures may be causing their solar flickers. I want more stories like this. :)

  • @arnaudnicolas2782
    @arnaudnicolas2782 2 года назад +2

    great narration, i'm falling in love with this channel! Question tho, isn't the spelling in the background of the video supposed to be gateway? or is gatway a spelling i didn't know about?

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      You're correct. I fucked up and will fix it soon 😭

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      Lmao I never noticed 😂

    • @polincgoku6658
      @polincgoku6658 Год назад +1

      Lol nah its the GATway
      Bllllllllllllap!
      *Miscellaneous other battle rap gun sounds*

  • @scambonehambone7655
    @scambonehambone7655 Год назад +1

    New klee er
    Not nook yoo ler
    Nuclear
    Constructive criticism. Many of the characters in these stories are scientists and would pronounce the word correctly.
    Very much enjoying your work and i hope you continue to provide such entertaining tales for me to listen to on night shift.

  • @Don-QuixoteDoflamingo
    @Don-QuixoteDoflamingo 8 месяцев назад

    Bravo good job loved the story it had my toes curled the whole time. And I knew for a fact they dog was not ok I called it right before the nuke went off and look what Happen

  • @Beachhead13
    @Beachhead13 2 года назад +2

    Finally a narrator that doesn't sound like a 12 yr old boy unlearning english

    • @Beachhead13
      @Beachhead13 2 года назад +1

      Finished it while driving for a medical company at night. Great first listen. Good narration and kept me on edge. I like listening to these at the evening of my shift and I'm glad I found this channel.

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

      But a story that sounds like it was written by a 12 year old kid.

  • @alabastergreen7444
    @alabastergreen7444 2 года назад +1

    Generals: study it??? For what, we have guns. What chance does a civilization infinitely more advanced than us stand?

    • @johannageisel5390
      @johannageisel5390 Год назад

      There is an episode by "Well There's Your Problem Podcast" about "The Nedelin Catastrophe", in which a Soviet space rocket blows up because the project was rushed.
      That made the story about Russian generals pushing to insert the sphere into the space portal so damn realistic! 😄

  • @ainternet239
    @ainternet239 6 месяцев назад +1

    So let me see if I understand:
    Alien civilization sends blueprint
    Alien civilization sends space ball to activate gate
    Space ball arrives within a few years of building gate
    In the meantime alien civilization gets destroyed
    But not enough so that in the very moment humans go through gate a dying alien walks up to them
    Yeah, that’s a bit of „it happened like that cause the plot needed it to“ bad writing

  • @bradley772
    @bradley772 4 месяца назад

    Noice !

  • @captaindodge
    @captaindodge Год назад +1

    Basically a jumpscare when I heard nov 18, which is my birthday

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 Год назад

    Good damn eye eaters

  • @tknight6132
    @tknight6132 2 года назад +1

    Heard this before but much prefer your version 👍👍

  • @JensMorrison
    @JensMorrison Год назад

    The dog...

  • @lgregory1758
    @lgregory1758 Год назад +1

    Shoggoth

  • @Stardrivepaintings
    @Stardrivepaintings 3 месяца назад

    I'm halfway through this, but I swear I've heard it before.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 месяца назад +1

      Possibly from another creator

  • @Miles7955
    @Miles7955 Год назад +1

    ME Gheth flashback intro..?

  • @The_SCPFoundation
    @The_SCPFoundation 2 года назад +4

    You're on a role sir.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +4

      I'm having trouble getting time to record a lot so I'm at least trying to give you all SOMETHING 😭👾

    • @The_SCPFoundation
      @The_SCPFoundation 2 года назад +4

      @@MagnetarYT I appreciate you and your considerate dedication to your fans. That's adding to our reasons to remain loyal.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +4

      Just like I told you the last 8 times you commented. Nothing I'm doing is illegal and it's credited in the description. So can you please fuck off already you troglodyte

    • @The_SCPFoundation
      @The_SCPFoundation 2 года назад +5

      @@GeorgiaPeachHolly most, if not all creepypasta narrators reuse available art for the genre. If you are not new to the creepypasta community, you will also hear the same story from at least 3 different readers. It's only certain cover art that is legal to use without copyright laws force channels to pull videos down. You'll even see notice background music used by multiple channels on different stories as well. You need permission to use art from the artist unless it's open source. Musicians like Myuu have carved out a niche in the creepypasta music space to allow a background setting to come alive for readers. I hope this eliminates your feeling of being cheated by seeing cover art repurposed lol. And that shock shouldn't stop you from subbing and enjoying mags work.

    • @The_SCPFoundation
      @The_SCPFoundation 2 года назад +4

      @@GeorgiaPeachHolly I mean, you didn't think that the art on creepypasta videos were created by the narrators right? Graphic designers are highly paid for their work it's not just something that any old person can throw together with their videos. You also know that narrators are usually not the author's of the stories. One of my favorite authors is Tobias malm which is who writes alot of space pastas used by scary Juju.

  • @user-wt9ve1cf6x
    @user-wt9ve1cf6x 2 года назад +8

    Awesome! I have only one minor "complaint" if you can call it so - nucLear, not nucElar :) Sorry for me complainig, keep up the good work!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +4

      One if the last remnants of the south in me that I'm trying to fix 😭

    • @user-wt9ve1cf6x
      @user-wt9ve1cf6x 2 года назад +3

      @@MagnetarYT well I'm not from the US and I'm not really familliar with the regional differences in the language, so sorry once again for me bitching about it. It just caught my attention :)

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      Haha no biggie

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      🤣

  • @primearsenal
    @primearsenal 4 месяца назад

    Heard this story on another creepy pasta channel

  • @bubasa87
    @bubasa87 2 года назад

    The monsters seem inconsistent with their intelligence.

  • @Spectre1776
    @Spectre1776 2 года назад +4

    This was a favorite I really liked this story there's another one out there it's like this one but the worms 🪱are in the ocean I can't remember the title

    • @chadp363
      @chadp363 2 года назад +4

      @@GeorgiaPeachHolly dude, chill out. Did you create that sequence?, and do you feel it a deep personal disrespect that he uses and credits it in his video?
      I just don't understand your problem. It's just not something a person should spend their time stressing over. There's a lot more to life that white kniting mass effect. It's just visual entertainment, it doesn't care either way

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +4

      @@chadp363 couldn't have said it better myself 👏

  • @donnageorge6506
    @donnageorge6506 2 года назад +1

    👍👍👍👍👍👍

  • @patrickbyrne5070
    @patrickbyrne5070 Год назад +1

    Gatway?

  • @Kcburnit
    @Kcburnit 2 года назад +1

    28:20.... No mouth or nose

    • @Kcburnit
      @Kcburnit 2 года назад +1

      30:00 ....forced itself out through the mouth. I always catch inconsistencies in your stories magnetar. This particular one was pretty blatantly obvious but there are many in almost every story I listen to of yours. Most of which relate to physics in general fact that there's just no f****** way

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +2

      Idk why you're telling me. Tell the author.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Also in terms of physics, I think a lot of stories force you to suspend rational thought. It's science fiction after all.

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      @@MagnetarYT dude Magnetar is right it's sci-fi so it's all fake and he's just narrating a story written by some other unknown author but I'm curious lol what inconsistencies are you talking about

    • @TheBaconStrip
      @TheBaconStrip Год назад

      @@Kcburnit 👈🏼 doesn't understand what fiction means.
      I bet you are a hit at all the parties.

  • @jesmoon3588
    @jesmoon3588 Год назад

    TIL, Dyson Swarm :)

  • @Simmodamoscott
    @Simmodamoscott 2 года назад +1

    Please change your into, I come here to help myself sleep, but that's made harder by getting jumpscared by the earrape. It gets me every time lmao

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      I'll consider it 😈
      Seriously though, thanks for the feedback, I'll come up with something soon

    • @Simmodamoscott
      @Simmodamoscott 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT awesome, could you please also refrain from the loud noises in the middle of videos too, I was just drifting off when the radio/intercom went off in the story and made me jump out of my skin ahahaha.
      Other than that, your videos are perfect, music is nice and low and doesn't drown you out like some others, you've a great voice, have no weird pronunciations of words ect (some people do, and that's worse than the jumpscares), keep up the awesome work!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      I just developed a new intro, lower tones and hoping the glitch effects aren't to harsh. Please give me your feedback on the vid going out later tonight

    • @Simmodamoscott
      @Simmodamoscott 2 года назад +1

      Wicked, thank you so much!

  • @jimmyshrimbe9361
    @jimmyshrimbe9361 2 года назад +1

    ⚡🤖⚡

  • @patrickdavis9566
    @patrickdavis9566 Год назад +4

    Lots of this story is based on actual quantum physics. We have already done part of this in the late 90s. We super froze material to absolute 0. Cut it in half keeping it at 0. The two halves could result in same. Like hit one the other would respond. They actually sent one piece to space. Still responded as if both halves were one. But it couldn't transport anything. This is just Intel I was allowed back in the 90s also. I'm sure this technology has increased beyond my current understanding. 🤔

  • @MrJack556
    @MrJack556 Год назад

    The most fictional part about this story is that it was Russians exploring space lol

  • @EarthCitizen3
    @EarthCitizen3 4 месяца назад

    The largest black thing came out of the alien's mouth. It had no mouth. He pulled the guy in the wheelchair, who was in front of him. What?

  • @RichardNathanHolloway
    @RichardNathanHolloway 2 года назад +2

    First viewer, cool!

  • @warplanner8852
    @warplanner8852 Год назад

    What's a "GATWAY"? (In the title shot for the video.)

  • @richardtibbitts3841
    @richardtibbitts3841 Год назад

    Good story, well read. But one of her eyes WAS missing, not WERE. And it's NU-CLEAR, not NU-KYU-LER.

  • @schedulingfarmfresh3054
    @schedulingfarmfresh3054 Год назад +2

    This story had me right up until the guy stated "its obviously a doorway" after learning or knowing absolutely nothing about the object. I haven't seen that much stretching since 10th grade P.E. class! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂💀

    • @bifrostbeberast3246
      @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад +1

      Ikr?
      And the civilization was in ruin for a long time, but conveniently the last surviver survived long enough to shoo them away in a very human way, when they arrived.

  • @ThugShakers4Christ
    @ThugShakers4Christ 2 года назад

    It goes both ways....like a bisexual

  • @traviswilliams2535
    @traviswilliams2535 11 месяцев назад

    I enjoyed the story, but for the love of all that is holy. It's nu-kle-ar not nucular.

  • @exsanguinateds
    @exsanguinateds 6 месяцев назад

    My one and only critique; the intro is just a touch too long.

  • @bifrostbeberast3246
    @bifrostbeberast3246 Год назад

    They collapsed 1000s of years ago but the last one waited amidst the apocalypse so he can shoo them away just after they arrived.
    How convenient... for the author of this crappy story.
    Are there only teenagers writing stories on reddit or also people with writing experience? I bet Chat-gpt would do a better job than this.

  • @peaotter8332
    @peaotter8332 2 года назад +1

    How unoriginal.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +3

      You know another story where a civilization sends gateways to multiple planets and them when humans travel there they've been killed by Gian centipedes?

    • @johannageisel5390
      @johannageisel5390 Год назад

      @@MagnetarYT Don't listen to that person. The story was good.
      Btw. not quite space portals, but: The short story "The Crystal Egg" by H. G. Wells has a little bit of a similar premise. The civilization there apparently sends crystal eggs to other worlds as probes, so that they can look at them.

    • @patrickbyrne5070
      @patrickbyrne5070 Год назад

      @@MagnetarYT Stargate? Plenty have similar ideasAdd some insect monsters and the ‘tabby’s star mystery’ stuff and yeh…. It is unoriginal. It’s very derivative. Not badly narrated tho 🤷‍♂️