PAUL AUDITION

Paul is an attractive bartender who’s being set-up for a bar patron’s friend.
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[@corbincryer]

Good job 👍

[@real_benjammin]

@@corbincryer thanks bud 🙏🏻

[@ThePeterEffect]

Hey there Benjamin, not sure how I got here in YT but I thought that I would give my thoughts ( and my wife's) in lieu of just saying "good luck".
In general, I saw charisma that I could potentially see in a film. Your chuckle and smile felt very natural and looked good. You've also got a nice voice to my ears but consider working on your diction as there were speech affectations that made it difficult for an audience member to understand. Articulation would help you at the following places.
"I'm represented byah Pierre Patrick." & "You godda name?"
My wife seconded that you have charisma, that she liked your facial expressions, but that at the tail end of the clip, there was a bit too much eye contact and she found it off-putting.
All said in a positive spirit to help you. Good luck!

[@real_benjammin]

@@ThePeterEffect thanks 🙏🏻 I appreciate the feedback