That fact that I predicted the part where the allspark Explosion leads to Energon Crystals sprouting in the earth is insane. Well predicted isn't quite the right word
Something I find ironic is that Phoenix Studios rewrote Revenge of the Fallen and had the characters go to Peru instead of Egypt, which coincidentally was where the Maximals where in Rise of the Beasts
I come back to this rewrite a lot to listen to at work and I think “there won’t be enough left of your human to fill a gas can” has to be one of my favorite megatron lines ever. It’s just so good
I was rather proud of it. The Lord of the Decepticons should be a threatening presence, and toying with mechanical terms is one of my favorite elements of Transformers
@@KnightsRealm98 In my completely honest opinion I think this rewrite is up with Skybound with how well made it is. I genuinely think you’d make a phenomenal writer for hasbro. Maybe one day!
@@KnightsRealm98If I made a Megatron for a Transformers story, Megatron would be an abusive leader, with his subordinates cowering at his very presence, with Soundwave being most loyal, though his creation of the Vehicons would be so dark it would make Bayverse Optimus look like a teddy bear, with this Megatron turning any fallen Autobot and Decepticon body and turning them into Decepticons, with Thundercracker having found out the truth but was “let go” and turned into a Vehicon during the war, with Megatron lying to Thundercracker’s brothers, Starscream and Skywarp, that he fell at the hands of Optimus Prime, but the lie would soon be exposed by Starscream with him, Skywarp, Barricade, Soundwave, and Shockwave forming a rebellion and joined the Autobots, though Starscream would be killed, Skywarp, Barricade, Soundwave, and Shockwave would tear Megatron to pieces, having let out there rage and anger upon the one that had used enemy and ally parts for his twisted creations
YO can't believe I'm see this again! Thank you! Energon crystals being born from the All Spark's remains is smart since energy is always change, but also wonder if the Energon in raw form could be cause mutations that can affect organic life, humans or animals.
A detail that I learned after watching a video about the forest fight, is that after Megatron pulls his sword out of Optimus Primes chest, some of Primes Energon falls onto Megatron’s left leg
Great retool that should have been the movie that was made! Here is the cast of the characters in my 2007 rewrite! Autobots: Optimus Prime: The heroic leader of the Autobot resistance who transforms into a red and blue 1987 Freightliner FLA semi truck. Bumblebee: An Autobot scout who transforms into a modified yellow and black 1977 Chevrolet Camaro with all-terrain extensions. Arcee: An Autobot communications officer/sharpshooter and Bumblebee’s cousin who transforms into a white and pink Ducati 916 motorcycle. Elita-1: Optimus Prime’s Conjunx Endura and emotional support of the Autobots who transforms into a pink and silver 1994 Peterbilt 379 semi truck. Ratchet: An Autobot medic who transforms into a white and red 1984 Nissan Vanette ambulance. Wheeljack: An Autobot scientist/engineer and Arcee’s Conjunx Ritus who transforms into a white, red and green 1976 Lancia Stratos Turbo race car. Jazz: An Autobot spy who transforms into a white and blue Porsche 935 Turbo RSR with red stripes. Ironhide: An Autobot weapons specialist who transforms into a red 1992 Hummer H1 Wagon. Cliffjumper: An Autobot lieutenant who transforms into a red and gray 1972 Dodge Challenger. Humans: Mikaela Banes: A teenage mechanic from Tranquility, California who enters the Autobot-Decepticon war when she acquires Bumblebee at a car sale. Mikaela forms a bond with Optimus Prime over their shared uncertainty about the future (Mikaela is uncertain about her future after high school, Optimus is uncertain about leading the Autobots after defeating Unicron and Megatron at the cost of draining Cybertron of its life). Sam “Spike” Witwicky: Mikaela’s best friend who aids her in repairing and hiding the Autobots. William Lennox: An agent of Sector 7, a government agency of human allies to the Autobots. Decepticons: Megatron: The evil leader of the Decepticons who transforms first as a gray Abrams M1A1 tank/MH-53 Pave Low helicopter and later into a white and black Sector 7 hovertank. Starscream: The treacherous leader of the Decepticon Seekers who transforms into a gray, red and blue F-15 Eagle. Thundercracker: A Seeker brute who transforms into a blue and red F-15 Eagle. Skywarp: A Seeker spy who can teleport and transforms into a black and purple F-15 Eagle. Soundwave (Ravage and Laserbeak are Minicon cassettes): A Decepticon communications officer who transforms into a blue and white 1983 Ford F-350 pickup truck. Shockwave: A Decepticon scientist/engineer and Soundwave’s twin brother who transforms into a purple and gray 1985 Chevrolet G20 van. Slipstream: A Decepticon sharpshooter who transforms into a purple and blue F-15 Eagle. Blitzwing: A Decepticon triple changer who transforms into a purple/beige F-15 Eagle and Abrams M1A1 tank. Airachnid: A Decepticon baroness who transforms first into a black and purple 1993 Dodge Viper RT/10 muscle car, and later an experimental Sector 7 hover bike.
Just curious, who would your voice cast be for these films with the impressions you do and such? Aside from P.C. and F.T. - Peter Cullen and Fred Tataciore
Phil Lamarr for Jazz, Peter Cullen for Ironhide as well as Optimus, Steve Blum or Charlie Adler for Starscream, Tony Todd for the Fallen, Frank Welker for Soundwave, Corey Burton for Shockwave (though he's not here yet), John DiMaggio for Skywarp and Stratosphere, David Sobolov for Blackout, Thundercracker, and Barricade, Will Friedle and Nolan North for the Twins, also Steve Blum for Scrapper, Troy Baker for Skids and Jetfire, Kevin Michael Richardson for Scavenger, and Jim Cummings for Ratchet. Ideal Arcee would probably be Sumalee Montano reprising her role from TFP. Either her or Laura Bailey.
Rampage is going to serve as Bonecrusher's replacement, so still six. I like the idea of Constructicon as a class of Decepticon, so they have a few reserve members.
I think that for the next Transformers rewrite: Dark of the Moon, and this is just my idea, you can use it or don't, that's fine, you should have Hot Rod as a hesitant Deception into a heroic Autobot and help them take on Sentinel Prime and Megatron. Again, you don't have to use this idea, but just throwing it out there.
Personally, I would’ve used Jolt, and have Jolt speak unlike the film and be more relevant, with him using his electrification powers to build things and for weaponry, with I want to say Sam will ask “How is he able to do that?” with Optimus saying “Jolt was a creation of the Primes. Alpha Trion saw a great purpose within him, and had him given the power of electrification.” this would flesh Jolt’s character and show him that he had a deeper connection with Alpha Trion, with there being a flashback showing Megatron killing the old Autobot, with Jolt unable to stop Megatron
I mean, cool, I guess, but that doesn't really fit with the story I'm telling. It would add a bit too much of an extra aside to the film that would bloat the storytelling. Major plot points like that can be brought up in comics or TV shows because the writers have the time to do so. It's harder to do that in films, unless you're creating a sprawling cinematic universe like Marvel (and even that dropped the ball a couple times).
@@KnightsRealm98And that’s fine, after all we all have different ideas, but maybe one day will get some spotlight, also how come in the Bayverse do Ironhide, Ratchet, and Sideswipe (before the events of the fourth movie) are killed off while as shown by the Cemetery Wind kill cards do Skids and Mudflap get to live?
@@KnightsRealm98 Yeah, and personally I would’ve preferred if those two were dead, since they somehow outlived Jolt (yes he has a card which is number two), Sideswipe (one of the two Aces with Optimus), Ratchet, Jazz, Ironhide, and Leadfoot
@@KnightsRealm98 same here. Btw, what’s your thoughts on Josh Keaton as Bumblebee? I’ve always figured that as god-tier casting. That and Keanu Reeves as Optimus Prime
i recently started my rewrites i just finished tf1 and working on tf2 and ive been taking alot of infermation from u pheniox and several other creators
@@UtahRepublican2024 he's not Liege. The thing I wanted to do is make it so that his name was literally forgotten by everyone except the last of the Thirteen, Alpha Trion. Thus, his true name is a secret.
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That fact that I predicted the part where the allspark Explosion leads to Energon Crystals sprouting in the earth is insane. Well predicted isn't quite the right word
"Whos cocky, im just that good" feels more like it should come from sunstreaker, the literal sociopath.
Something I find ironic is that Phoenix Studios rewrote Revenge of the Fallen and had the characters go to Peru instead of Egypt, which coincidentally was where the Maximals where in Rise of the Beasts
OH! I NEVER REALIZED THAT UNTIL I READ YOUR COMMENT!
@@TheMahaChannel Wait it did?
@@LordBumblebee1238 YEAH!
@@TheMahaChannel I see
I come back to this rewrite a lot to listen to at work and I think “there won’t be enough left of your human to fill a gas can” has to be one of my favorite megatron lines ever. It’s just so good
I was rather proud of it. The Lord of the Decepticons should be a threatening presence, and toying with mechanical terms is one of my favorite elements of Transformers
@@KnightsRealm98 In my completely honest opinion I think this rewrite is up with Skybound with how well made it is. I genuinely think you’d make a phenomenal writer for hasbro. Maybe one day!
@@KnightsRealm98If I made a Megatron for a Transformers story, Megatron would be an abusive leader, with his subordinates cowering at his very presence, with Soundwave being most loyal, though his creation of the Vehicons would be so dark it would make Bayverse Optimus look like a teddy bear, with this Megatron turning any fallen Autobot and Decepticon body and turning them into Decepticons, with Thundercracker having found out the truth but was “let go” and turned into a Vehicon during the war, with Megatron lying to Thundercracker’s brothers, Starscream and Skywarp, that he fell at the hands of Optimus Prime, but the lie would soon be exposed by Starscream with him, Skywarp, Barricade, Soundwave, and Shockwave forming a rebellion and joined the Autobots, though Starscream would be killed, Skywarp, Barricade, Soundwave, and Shockwave would tear Megatron to pieces, having let out there rage and anger upon the one that had used enemy and ally parts for his twisted creations
YO can't believe I'm see this again! Thank you!
Energon crystals being born from the All Spark's remains is smart since energy is always change, but also wonder if the Energon in raw form could be cause mutations that can affect organic life, humans or animals.
This is so good, can’t wait to see the next part!
A detail that I learned after watching a video about the forest fight, is that after Megatron pulls his sword out of Optimus Primes chest, some of Primes Energon falls onto Megatron’s left leg
I was hoping Optimus Prime would be blasted through the abdomen and before he would go into stasis he would tell Sam "Sam, Run..Run."
I wanna see this man voice starscream in a show, it’s so good!
Voice acting is my dream job. I love doing voices, have since I was a kid.
@@KnightsRealm98 you have a real talent for it!
Great retool that should have been the movie that was made! Here is the cast of the characters in my 2007 rewrite!
Autobots:
Optimus Prime: The heroic leader of the Autobot resistance who transforms into a red and blue 1987 Freightliner FLA semi truck.
Bumblebee: An Autobot scout who transforms into a modified yellow and black 1977 Chevrolet Camaro with all-terrain extensions.
Arcee: An Autobot communications officer/sharpshooter and Bumblebee’s cousin who transforms into a white and pink Ducati 916 motorcycle.
Elita-1: Optimus Prime’s Conjunx Endura and emotional support of the Autobots who transforms into a pink and silver 1994 Peterbilt 379 semi truck.
Ratchet: An Autobot medic who transforms into a white and red 1984 Nissan Vanette ambulance.
Wheeljack: An Autobot scientist/engineer and Arcee’s Conjunx Ritus who transforms into a white, red and green 1976 Lancia Stratos Turbo race car.
Jazz: An Autobot spy who transforms into a white and blue Porsche 935 Turbo RSR with red stripes.
Ironhide: An Autobot weapons specialist who transforms into a red 1992 Hummer H1 Wagon.
Cliffjumper: An Autobot lieutenant who transforms into a red and gray 1972 Dodge Challenger.
Humans:
Mikaela Banes: A teenage mechanic from Tranquility, California who enters the Autobot-Decepticon war when she acquires Bumblebee at a car sale. Mikaela forms a bond with Optimus Prime over their shared uncertainty about the future (Mikaela is uncertain about her future after high school, Optimus is uncertain about leading the Autobots after defeating Unicron and Megatron at the cost of draining Cybertron of its life).
Sam “Spike” Witwicky: Mikaela’s best friend who aids her in repairing and hiding the Autobots.
William Lennox: An agent of Sector 7, a government agency of human allies to the Autobots.
Decepticons:
Megatron: The evil leader of the Decepticons who transforms first as a gray Abrams M1A1 tank/MH-53 Pave Low helicopter and later into a white and black Sector 7 hovertank.
Starscream: The treacherous leader of the Decepticon Seekers who transforms into a gray, red and blue F-15 Eagle.
Thundercracker: A Seeker brute who transforms into a blue and red F-15 Eagle.
Skywarp: A Seeker spy who can teleport and transforms into a black and purple F-15 Eagle.
Soundwave (Ravage and Laserbeak are Minicon cassettes): A Decepticon communications officer who transforms into a blue and white 1983 Ford F-350 pickup truck.
Shockwave: A Decepticon scientist/engineer and Soundwave’s twin brother who transforms into a purple and gray 1985 Chevrolet G20 van.
Slipstream: A Decepticon sharpshooter who transforms into a purple and blue F-15 Eagle.
Blitzwing: A Decepticon triple changer who transforms into a purple/beige F-15 Eagle and Abrams M1A1 tank.
Airachnid: A Decepticon baroness who transforms first into a black and purple 1993 Dodge Viper RT/10 muscle car, and later an experimental Sector 7 hover bike.
Awesome though I would change Ironhide to a red Nissan Vantte like Ratchet
Interesting
Just curious, who would your voice cast be for these films with the impressions you do and such?
Aside from P.C. and F.T.
- Peter Cullen and Fred Tataciore
Phil Lamarr for Jazz, Peter Cullen for Ironhide as well as Optimus, Steve Blum or Charlie Adler for Starscream, Tony Todd for the Fallen, Frank Welker for Soundwave, Corey Burton for Shockwave (though he's not here yet), John DiMaggio for Skywarp and Stratosphere, David Sobolov for Blackout, Thundercracker, and Barricade, Will Friedle and Nolan North for the Twins, also Steve Blum for Scrapper, Troy Baker for Skids and Jetfire, Kevin Michael Richardson for Scavenger, and Jim Cummings for Ratchet.
Ideal Arcee would probably be Sumalee Montano reprising her role from TFP. Either her or Laura Bailey.
@@KnightsRealm98Why not have Jeffrey Combs as the voice of Ratchet and why not keep Jess Harnell as Ironhide?
@@LordBumblebee1238 I like Texas-accent Ironhide more than British/Australian. And Jim Cummings sounds like G1 Ratchet.
@@KnightsRealm98 That’s nice
@@KnightsRealm98 James Arnold Taylor was supposed to be the Fallen in the movie but he voiced him in the tie in video game.
so is devastator only going to be formed of 5 members. Or are you going to have a sixth member since bonecrusher is dead.
Rampage is going to serve as Bonecrusher's replacement, so still six. I like the idea of Constructicon as a class of Decepticon, so they have a few reserve members.
Cool
I think that for the next Transformers rewrite: Dark of the Moon, and this is just my idea, you can use it or don't, that's fine, you should have Hot Rod as a hesitant Deception into a heroic Autobot and help them take on Sentinel Prime and Megatron.
Again, you don't have to use this idea, but just throwing it out there.
I find funny how a big a deal with the fallen forgotten name, its literally megatron with additional us
Personally, I would’ve used Jolt, and have Jolt speak unlike the film and be more relevant, with him using his electrification powers to build things and for weaponry, with I want to say Sam will ask “How is he able to do that?” with Optimus saying “Jolt was a creation of the Primes. Alpha Trion saw a great purpose within him, and had him given the power of electrification.” this would flesh Jolt’s character and show him that he had a deeper connection with Alpha Trion, with there being a flashback showing Megatron killing the old Autobot, with Jolt unable to stop Megatron
I mean, cool, I guess, but that doesn't really fit with the story I'm telling. It would add a bit too much of an extra aside to the film that would bloat the storytelling. Major plot points like that can be brought up in comics or TV shows because the writers have the time to do so. It's harder to do that in films, unless you're creating a sprawling cinematic universe like Marvel (and even that dropped the ball a couple times).
@@KnightsRealm98And that’s fine, after all we all have different ideas, but maybe one day will get some spotlight, also how come in the Bayverse do Ironhide, Ratchet, and Sideswipe (before the events of the fourth movie) are killed off while as shown by the Cemetery Wind kill cards do Skids and Mudflap get to live?
@@LordBumblebee1238 Cemetary Wind is full of plot holes, I've noticed.
@@KnightsRealm98 Yeah, and personally I would’ve preferred if those two were dead, since they somehow outlived Jolt (yes he has a card which is number two), Sideswipe (one of the two Aces with Optimus), Ratchet, Jazz, Ironhide, and Leadfoot
I can't wait for part 2 and Dark of the Moon
Who’s your voice for Bumblebee?
I was always a fan of Johnny Yong Bosch's portrayal in War For Cybertron
@@KnightsRealm98 same here. Btw, what’s your thoughts on Josh Keaton as Bumblebee? I’ve always figured that as god-tier casting. That and Keanu Reeves as Optimus Prime
What they were thinking with those designs
For what I understand, they just wanted to go with alien not functional just alien
i recently started my rewrites i just finished tf1 and working on tf2 and ive been taking alot of infermation from u pheniox and several other creators
now i know why it took you so long im having a hard ass time trying to figure out the full plot for Tf2 im completely overhauling the script
Is the Fallen still Megatronus in this rewrite, or is he someone else like Liege Maximo?
@@UtahRepublican2024 he's not Liege. The thing I wanted to do is make it so that his name was literally forgotten by everyone except the last of the Thirteen, Alpha Trion. Thus, his true name is a secret.
Your Megatron voice sounds like Clancy Brown 🤔