I disagree on your talking speed, I think it fits this kind of content well. The only thing I would like to see is what each item does, like the ring in the skeleton hand. Would have been interesting to know if it was a unique ring or a randomly generated one. All in all, great video.
I disagree on your talking speed, I think it fits this kind of content well. The only thing I would like to see is what each item does, like the ring in the skeleton hand. Would have been interesting to know if it was a unique ring or a randomly generated one. All in all, great video.
Very good video. You do however talk very slowly, to the point that I listened at 2x speed. The script is good, and dit not need any changes
even just 1.2x makes it feel much smoother, but yeah still a v solid video and script
@thequestionwhy3827 the fact that it sounds so smooth also speaks to the script and well it is