ok so where you messed up is you didnt analyze the script, and you didnt look at your audience which is the camera. Remember 3 things. 1) read the script like a book first dont try to just remember the lines be interested in it 2) analyze the script, read each sentence and print an emotion chart and match the expressions with the words and google the word like for example the first line of the script was"i dont know what to say", that means she in confused so then you google the word confused read the definition and then click images and thats the face your face should be making. then memorize by the time you get to the this last step you already broke the script down so it should come natural.
ok so where you messed up is you didnt analyze the script, and you didnt look at your audience which is the camera. Remember 3 things. 1) read the script like a book first dont try to just remember the lines be interested in it 2) analyze the script, read each sentence and print an emotion chart and match the expressions with the words and google the word like for example the first line of the script was"i dont know what to say", that means she in confused so then you google the word confused read the definition and then click images and thats the face your face should be making. then memorize by the time you get to the this last step you already broke the script down so it should come natural.
That's my cousin
So raw and natural, beautifully done 👏👏
good job!