From what i understand, the main character has a loved one that disappeared, seems to me like his wife and baby, might just be the baby though. Hes completely shut down and has developed delusions, one being that the loved one is in that room. So he sits and waits, im assuming thats his sister on the phone.
@@willevert It's a nice change compared to modern horror, the buildup and increasing tension was great! I really like the fact that there wasn't a cheap jumpscare I look forward to more!
The call makes the short self-explanatory unless you werent paying attention. If you didn't understand you either don't understand horror or didn't put attention, this comment wasnt necessary just check out the xomments or rewatch it
@@muffintime3688perhaps explain. I’ve watched it 5 times and yes I understand somewhat that nothing is in that room. But like. Is that it? Are we missing more. Otherwise still eerie in many aspects regardless of opinions
@@muffintime3688Actually about 12 of us watched this and 10 out of 12 said the same thing. "They didn't understand it" And these people are HUGE Halloween Scary Movie Fanatics There's not really much to understand
I love so many things about this. Sure, the cinematography, atmosphere, writing, editing, direction, but my goodness that camera work is just impeccable. The angles. The focus. The framing. It's like God himself came down from heaven and hit record. Seriously though, it's impressive what you managed to pull off with so many time constraints and no budget whatsoever. I can only imagine what you will be capable of given the chance.
@@willevertCan you make another one before Halloween? Like another scary Fan Film Not Michael Myers though.. there's many of those Halloween ones on RUclips
The feeling of dread when u hear the crying n voice distortion...omg. my blood ran cold. Well done. Maybe make a series out of this!? I want to see more of this story.
Yeah, me too. What I really appreciate is that unlike in most of such horrors/shorts this is not about awful main character's stupidity, selfishness and other bad virtues, there is a family bond, the main character wants to rejoin his family, which makes me to root for him.
Omg that scared the shit out of me when the baby started crying. And i got goosebumps when the voice started changing. Really scary and sad. Very good short film
Ok this is seriously well done! I looooooveeeee that you didn't go for the cliche scary creature jumpscare at the end. I could feel the tension through the whole thing. I got literal chills when the baby's crying became distorted, almost like a wailing old woman. It gives me skinwalker vibes. My only issue is that the woman talking on the phone call is hard to understand. I wasn't really able to tell fully what was being said during the conversation. But overall this is so well made! I hope this gets the attention it deserves!
Thank you! Nice to hear this worked for you. I think it is evident I messed up with the sound design in post since it's hard to understand the woman. But I'm very pleased to hear you liked it over all, and thanks for leaving a comment!
It was his imagination, but there is no way you could know that by watching the short. I could have been more clear about it. The film is really about anxiety and how dwelling in the past will stand in the way of feeling better again. The man's wife and daughter are missing and he is literally staring at the wall and expecting that to do something good. It sounds stupid by design, because anxiety (to me at least) is stupid, it's not anything rational or something I can get rid of just by thinking about it. But when you are anxious, it's also very hard to not focus on the shitty feeling. So this is a very literal expression of how just "staring at the problem" is not going to take you in a good place. Then again, you could easily turn this into something supernatural. That was not just my intention though.
@@willevert thanks for your explanation. It also happens to me regarding the "staring at the problem" and "dwelling in the past" part that's preventing me from going mentally to a better place. Thanks again.
At the start you hear a kid say 'Da da' before the door closes. Seems like weeks pass before he hears the cry and it sounds distorted. To me the crying is a demon luring him in or something.
That is what I thought too.......that a demon took his family & is mocking him by imitating the sound of his baby. Notice at NO time, regardless of how long he sat there, did anything Evil emerge. I think it wanted him.......to come to It.
Thank you. It's actually not "music", it's different sound effects put on top of each others. On the other hand, I guess that's what all music is, but what I'm trying to say, is that you cannot find this "song" from anywhere. I used Motion Array for all the sounds on this one.
@@willevert Awesome. Would love to know the specific ones you used as I'm currently gearing up for a short film in late January. Do you have an email I can reach you at?
I believe it could be interpreted in two ways: 1. The man has lost his wife & baby either because they left him (possibly because he is mentally-unstable and/or dangerous) or the wife decided to leave him, period & he has lost the remainder of his sanity. 2. His wife & baby were actually 'taken' by something Evil.....that truly IS in that room. A demon, perhaps. The room could be the gateway to wherever they....& It went. Either way, its a creepy short-film! But I do wish it was a bit longer.
I was wondering if you have ever seen the VHS horror films? Because me and my crew make low budget anthology horrors films just like it, that we put on youtube. We try to gather a bunch of small time youtubers, and make a movie together. Each person makes a 10 to 15 minute long short story. You have free reign, as long as it's found footage, and horror. No copywritten music, and appropriate for youtube. We'd love to have u on board
That sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately right now I don't have time, but I wish you guys all the best with the film and I look forward to seeing it when it's finished.
😂Im guessing his baby passed away in that room. Its spirit is crying, calling for him. To be together, join him, in life, afterlife. In his state of mind, depression, he shot himself to be together with his baby Im so smart ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Because it appears most people are struggling with what I thought was very clear. This is about a man who has lost his wife and child. Off camera, them man's wife and child were in the dark room and dissapeared/were taken by something. The man is set up waiting for whatever it was to come back. Mum calls and says that she saw a women and child that may have been the man's as mum believes the wife has run away with the child. The man knows. The man waits. The crying in the room starts, and he enters. The door slams.
Not bad. I'm currently working on a story I would love to turn into a short that has to do with similar themes. The whole are they or aren't they crazy or is it real arc. I guess you could say the story in my head is similar to It follows or Smile only focusing on something in the Peripheral vision. (shrug) You know how sometimes you feel there is just something to a story, but you aren't really sure what it is, because you haven't really got that far yet? I have that feeling.
Tension and suspense. Great build up. BUT ☝️ not enough of a payoff. Not quite sure about the ending. Nonetheless, make more and give us that haunting climax
Keep doing what your doing. A good mystery to be solved. Great suspense. Now thats a good short film. I got some great ideas for a horror short film if you want some.
From what i understand, the main character has a loved one that disappeared, seems to me like his wife and baby, might just be the baby though. Hes completely shut down and has developed delusions, one being that the loved one is in that room. So he sits and waits, im assuming thats his sister on the phone.
Hey Toaster-toad, I could not have said it any better myself.
@@willevert It's a nice change compared to modern horror, the buildup and increasing tension was great! I really like the fact that there wasn't a cheap jumpscare I look forward to more!
Thank you very much, I appreciate it!
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Or maybe he killed them and now they're haunting him that's why he's so sure it's not them in Germany
3:52 it’s horrifying when you don’t have a baby but you hear one in your house
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I love how the suspense builds in every clip. This is horror content done right
Didn't understand any of it.
The call makes the short self-explanatory unless you werent paying attention. If you didn't understand you either don't understand horror or didn't put attention, this comment wasnt necessary just check out the xomments or rewatch it
@@muffintime3688perhaps explain. I’ve watched it 5 times and yes I understand somewhat that nothing is in that room. But like. Is that it? Are we missing more.
Otherwise still eerie in many aspects regardless of opinions
@@muffintime3688Actually about 12 of us watched this and 10 out of 12 said the same thing.
"They didn't understand it"
And these people are HUGE Halloween Scary Movie Fanatics
There's not really much to understand
@@411managerNot much to understand
Pretty much exactly what you said
@@conservativeamber1216 I thought the phone call made it obvious, tho
I do wish there was a little more to the story, but this was excellent. The baby's crying turning into a man's crying was a really creepy touch.
i searched "horror" I clicked for the thumbnail too ngl,
and you find the individual pissing in a bottle at 1:45 and your day is done. mine too
This actually creeped me out, less than five minutes. I love it
this was reported for the individual pissing at 1:45 good you adore that scene
When the baby's crying was turning into a demon crying, i got scared 😭
Why is it that the short horror films are more scarier than the real ones
Short horror films are real movies.
Oh. And it's either "more scary" or "scarier."
@@Stratmanable 😆
That was Scary when the Baby Cries 😊❤
I love so many things about this. Sure, the cinematography, atmosphere, writing, editing, direction, but my goodness that camera work is just impeccable. The angles. The focus. The framing. It's like God himself came down from heaven and hit record.
Seriously though, it's impressive what you managed to pull off with so many time constraints and no budget whatsoever. I can only imagine what you will be capable of given the chance.
Toni Toni Toni. You are a lovely human being, as always. Thanks for doing this with me!
@@willevertthis is amazing! One of the best ones I’ve seen in some time. Thank you so much for creating and sharing!!
Thank you very much for watching and leaving a positive comment!
@@willevertCan you make another one before Halloween?
Like another scary Fan Film
Not Michael Myers though.. there's many of those Halloween ones on RUclips
The feeling of dread when u hear the crying n voice distortion...omg. my blood ran cold. Well done. Maybe make a series out of this!? I want to see more of this story.
Hey thanks, that's a huge compliment!
Yeah, me too. What I really appreciate is that unlike in most of such horrors/shorts this is not about awful main character's stupidity, selfishness and other bad virtues, there is a family bond, the main character wants to rejoin his family, which makes me to root for him.
Can someone explain the ending plz?
Omg that scared the shit out of me when the baby started crying. And i got goosebumps when the voice started changing. Really scary and sad. Very good short film
Thank you very much! Happy to hear it was not just scary but also sad.
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Same!
Ok this is seriously well done! I looooooveeeee that you didn't go for the cliche scary creature jumpscare at the end. I could feel the tension through the whole thing. I got literal chills when the baby's crying became distorted, almost like a wailing old woman. It gives me skinwalker vibes. My only issue is that the woman talking on the phone call is hard to understand. I wasn't really able to tell fully what was being said during the conversation. But overall this is so well made! I hope this gets the attention it deserves!
Thank you! Nice to hear this worked for you. I think it is evident I messed up with the sound design in post since it's hard to understand the woman. But I'm very pleased to hear you liked it over all, and thanks for leaving a comment!
Absolutely, I hope to see more stuff from you in the future!
🤓
Skinwalker dont turn into humans
This made me feel so sad ngl great work!
WOW. i LOVED this film so much thank you for making this you are really talented
Thank you, very nice of you to say
This was so well done! The baby crying made me jump!
Awesome! Thanks :)
What was in the room exactly? Was it a figment of his imagination or creatures that he was the only one capable of perceiving?
It was his imagination, but there is no way you could know that by watching the short. I could have been more clear about it.
The film is really about anxiety and how dwelling in the past will stand in the way of feeling better again. The man's wife and daughter are missing and he is literally staring at the wall and expecting that to do something good. It sounds stupid by design, because anxiety (to me at least) is stupid, it's not anything rational or something I can get rid of just by thinking about it. But when you are anxious, it's also very hard to not focus on the shitty feeling. So this is a very literal expression of how just "staring at the problem" is not going to take you in a good place.
Then again, you could easily turn this into something supernatural. That was not just my intention though.
@@willevert thanks for your explanation. It also happens to me regarding the "staring at the problem" and "dwelling in the past" part that's preventing me from going mentally to a better place. Thanks again.
Of course. Whatever you are going through, I hope you get to a better place!
@@willevertwill your channel focus on horror/scary content?
@wefearthesethings-ty3lr Yes, at least for now.
At the start you hear a kid say 'Da da' before the door closes. Seems like weeks pass before he hears the cry and it sounds distorted. To me the crying is a demon luring him in or something.
That is what I thought too.......that a demon took his family & is mocking him by imitating the sound of his baby. Notice at NO time, regardless of how long he sat there, did anything Evil emerge. I think it wanted him.......to come to It.
I kind laughed when the babys cry went into a deeper voice.
Where did the music come from? Fits this short so well!
Thank you. It's actually not "music", it's different sound effects put on top of each others. On the other hand, I guess that's what all music is, but what I'm trying to say, is that you cannot find this "song" from anywhere. I used Motion Array for all the sounds on this one.
@@willevert Awesome. Would love to know the specific ones you used as I'm currently gearing up for a short film in late January. Do you have an email I can reach you at?
What is going on i didn't get it and where is thumbnail ghost
clock it
That you didn't get it and that you can't write a coherent sentence probably go hand in hand.
@@Stratmanable Do tell where the thumbnail ghost is.
Oh this was really good
Ohh... He was looking for his wife and his child in another dimension? What do you think? It could be so?
I believe it could be interpreted in two ways: 1. The man has lost his wife & baby either because they left him (possibly because he is mentally-unstable and/or dangerous) or the wife decided to leave him, period & he has lost the remainder of his sanity. 2. His wife & baby were actually 'taken' by something Evil.....that truly IS in that room. A demon, perhaps. The room could be the gateway to wherever they....& It went. Either way, its a creepy short-film! But I do wish it was a bit longer.
@taracollins5597 Thank's very much Tara!!
Very well done 👍, I literally could feel the tension and energy. Excellent work to all involved.
That's very nice to hear, thank you for your kind feedback!
I believe the scary music is from Smile 2 but I am not sure?
Please bro i wont ever get those 5 minutes of my life back
Just wasted 4 mins and 53 seconds of my life im over it..
cinematography was spot on! Keep it up🔥
Nice to hear, thank you!
Dispite other people's opinions, i personally really enjoyed this short and loved how i was left up to interpretation' 😊
Thank you Laura, happy to hear that!
this film was very good ! 👍
Thank you very much! As a fellow nu metal fan, I dig your name.
I loved this one. It's more sad than scary, however. Still amazing work. I subscribe
Thank you, much appreciated! I'm happy to hear you thought it was sad too.
i'm guessing this is filmed in norway, as i'm norwegian and recognize First Price.
@@peki.e Very close, this is filmed in Denmark.
@@willevert So, First Price is Danish?
@@peki.e I have no idea
Interesting
Brave soul right there 👏👏👏👏✊
Nice and keep making video 👍
What is that thing floating in the dark shaking around?
who made this
😂😂😂😂ts was asss
Toni Vesdream, Marianja Huber and I, Ville Rajala.
Det er danske varer!
Creepy hearing noises in your house and nobody's home
shut up
Watched it 5 X's still DO NOT EFFIN' GET IT!!!
This was very good 👏🏽
Can I re-upload this short film to a community channel I’m attempting to build?
Hi. No, Please don't.
Nice short movie though!!
We aint sleeping with this one🔥🔥
It had so much potential but then it just ends...
I was wondering if you have ever seen the VHS horror films? Because me and my crew make low budget anthology horrors films just like it, that we put on youtube. We try to gather a bunch of small time youtubers, and make a movie together. Each person makes a 10 to 15 minute long short story. You have free reign, as long as it's found footage, and horror. No copywritten music, and appropriate for youtube. We'd love to have u on board
That sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately right now I don't have time, but I wish you guys all the best with the film and I look forward to seeing it when it's finished.
Very interesting m, I will recommend it
This was surprisingly good. Love the concept and the fixed gaze - but the break at 2:05 irritates me.
@@TheFireline Thanks
TOP ! Love this type of horror
Dont gooo
excellent work
Thank you
LOL
😂Im guessing his baby passed away in that room. Its spirit is crying,
calling for him. To be together, join him, in life, afterlife. In his state of mind, depression, he shot himself to be together with his baby
Im so smart ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
No you're not
@gimmekromer1151 yes I am. And no you aint
Child @@raymondlin8728
Well,,,that was good really really good
Thank you!
Because it appears most people are struggling with what I thought was very clear.
This is about a man who has lost his wife and child. Off camera, them man's wife and child were in the dark room and dissapeared/were taken by something. The man is set up waiting for whatever it was to come back. Mum calls and says that she saw a women and child that may have been the man's as mum believes the wife has run away with the child.
The man knows. The man waits. The crying in the room starts, and he enters. The door slams.
Good build up of suspense. The ending makes me wonder what happened.
What's the name of the actor??
The voice over actor (woman on the phone) is Marianja Huber and the man in the video is me, Ville Rajala
Not bad. I'm currently working on a story I would love to turn into a short that has to do with similar themes. The whole are they or aren't they crazy or is it real arc. I guess you could say the story in my head is similar to It follows or Smile only focusing on something in the Peripheral vision. (shrug) You know how sometimes you feel there is just something to a story, but you aren't really sure what it is, because you haven't really got that far yet? I have that feeling.
Good work!
Starring the abyss, of course...
Amei! Ótimo trabalho, atmosfera e ambiente perfeito!
He face the fear
Tension and suspense. Great build up. BUT ☝️ not enough of a payoff. Not quite sure about the ending. Nonetheless, make more and give us that haunting climax
Thanks for the feedback.
@willevert you got what it takes. Hopefully someday you produce a feature.
he killed himself in that room
Don’t tell me what to do
As a production group ourselves, we call this a REAL short film. Nice work!
Thank you
I would've appreciated a larger payout for riding the tension but still well done 👍🏼👍🏼
Thanks for leaving a comment, I appreciate the feedback 👍
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
What's in the room???!!!
2:30 JUST LEAVE THE HOUSE
this is amazing
what is amazing?
@@e7danny7m the film :)
@@e7danny7m the film
THIS AINT SCARY. NO JUMPSCARES 2/10
i like horror short film 💀☠
Awesome 😎
i hear a finnish accent just asking are you finnish
Moro lusikka, joo oon suomalainen.
Im a bit lost in understanding.
Brilliant!
What makes this film so outstanding is that its always so much scarier when it makes no sense! Lol!!!
whata knockoff of the original korykenshin never reacting to this dog *(*
It was good
Nothing happened.
Very good-horrifying and sad at the same time
Won't get that time Back....
The cry sounds tho
Whoes that milk 😢
Crazy
OH OHH UMMMMMAAHHHHHH
Good
Good one i like this
Keep doing what your doing. A good mystery to be solved. Great suspense. Now thats a good short film. I got some great ideas for a horror short film if you want some.
Here before viral
Sweet :)
Freaked by this
Well great then! :)
Wow, i got scared
Happy to hear that!
Hello
Hello
This was......a video
👀
👻 BO
What happened
First
Please make clear horror stories with clear n simple ends not so ambiguous
@@AnupamaTripathi-m9e Sometimes horror is about that, no need to be so spicy about it
The woman on the phone 📱📞 is a ghost 👻👹 woman 😮👹 pretending with the voice