Complex conflicts covered so quickly. Well done. Keep the short form content coming and once you’ve established your channel move into the longer form content 👌
You wanted it that way... You should have made sure to always give the total number of victims. That didn't happen for the Mongol invasion, for example. The whole narrative is much too fast and is told in a completely toneless voice. Your maps are terrible and you should shed light on the further consequences after the wars ended. For example, you don't realize at all that the Thirty Years' War prevented the early formation of a German nation state. This had effects from Napoleon up to the two world wars. Overall, you did a rather sloppy job. To depict these conflicts, you should take a little more than 2 minutes per event. 12 minutes for a video like this is more than appropriate, not 5 wars in 6 minutes! The whole thing is very American...
Fair points. Although I must say the point of the video isn't to talk about the aftermaths of the conflict more give a short summary of each. Say something is "American" is quite interesting take and I can't see how that makes sense for a criticism, assuming you mean I don't understand history it's my most studied subject. You can criticize without coming off as being rude. But anyway thanks Ill try to improve on your points!
@@Kronearos Believe me, I was not rude at all. Being rude looks very different to me! And as for the American way... That was an allusion to typical American visits abroad. "See 12 cities in 7 days..." Nothing can come of that. There's no point in limiting yourself to these brief statements. In the end, there are more questions than answers. And that shouldn't be the case, should it? And I have not expressed any criticism of your professional competence. You have given me too little usable data in the video to be able to judge that... Best wishes from Europe
@@melchiorvonsternberg844 I agree with virtually everything you said it's just that right now I don't have a loyal subscriber base and since everyone has quite small attention spans, I try to keep it short until I get a loyal base to stick around and watch. Thank you for your words though!
@@Kronearos I understand what you mean! I have noticed myself that my interest in watching content that lasts longer than half an hour has decreased considerably over the years. On the other hand, I am a relatively old man who has been interested in politics, history, strategy and geography since the time when the American president was still "Tricky Dick" Nixon. I was still a child back then, of course. But it is precisely this long involvement with the topics that makes me quite intolerant of "rough" shortenings. I'm sure you understand that. In order not to alienate the "ordinary" viewer, I would suggest extending your clips to just under 9 minutes and then checking the effect. And just like with prices in the supermarket, make them 8:55 instead of 9:03... Good luck!
Not bad. I hope you get at least a solid B- on the assignment. Here's how to turn it into a B+: After the presentation, be sure to ask the teacher a concealed question about something directly stated in the presentation to test if they were paying attention and watch them get uncomfortable! never gets old! After class approach your crush and ask what she thought about the presentation, and remember: act cool
yo dog, keep doing this. this is great.
Complex conflicts covered so quickly. Well done. Keep the short form content coming and once you’ve established your channel move into the longer form content 👌
Thanks bro, I really appreciate that
You wanted it that way... You should have made sure to always give the total number of victims. That didn't happen for the Mongol invasion, for example. The whole narrative is much too fast and is told in a completely toneless voice. Your maps are terrible and you should shed light on the further consequences after the wars ended. For example, you don't realize at all that the Thirty Years' War prevented the early formation of a German nation state. This had effects from Napoleon up to the two world wars. Overall, you did a rather sloppy job. To depict these conflicts, you should take a little more than 2 minutes per event. 12 minutes for a video like this is more than appropriate, not 5 wars in 6 minutes! The whole thing is very American...
Fair points. Although I must say the point of the video isn't to talk about the aftermaths of the conflict more give a short summary of each. Say something is "American" is quite interesting take and I can't see how that makes sense for a criticism, assuming you mean I don't understand history it's my most studied subject. You can criticize without coming off as being rude. But anyway thanks Ill try to improve on your points!
@@Kronearos Believe me, I was not rude at all. Being rude looks very different to me! And as for the American way... That was an allusion to typical American visits abroad. "See 12 cities in 7 days..." Nothing can come of that. There's no point in limiting yourself to these brief statements. In the end, there are more questions than answers. And that shouldn't be the case, should it? And I have not expressed any criticism of your professional competence. You have given me too little usable data in the video to be able to judge that... Best wishes from Europe
@@melchiorvonsternberg844 I agree with virtually everything you said it's just that right now I don't have a loyal subscriber base and since everyone has quite small attention spans, I try to keep it short until I get a loyal base to stick around and watch. Thank you for your words though!
@@Kronearos I understand what you mean! I have noticed myself that my interest in watching content that lasts longer than half an hour has decreased considerably over the years. On the other hand, I am a relatively old man who has been interested in politics, history, strategy and geography since the time when the American president was still "Tricky Dick" Nixon. I was still a child back then, of course. But it is precisely this long involvement with the topics that makes me quite intolerant of "rough" shortenings. I'm sure you understand that. In order not to alienate the "ordinary" viewer, I would suggest extending your clips to just under 9 minutes and then checking the effect. And just like with prices in the supermarket, make them 8:55 instead of 9:03...
Good luck!
Yo dog, try something else. This is bad
Nah, Ima keep doing it and I'll keep improving you can share what you think is bad tho thanks!
Not bad. I hope you get at least a solid B- on the assignment. Here's how to turn it into a B+: After the presentation, be sure to ask the teacher a concealed question about something directly stated in the presentation to test if they were paying attention and watch them get uncomfortable! never gets old!
After class approach your crush and ask what she thought about the presentation, and remember: act cool