HOW NOT TO TAKE CRITICISM! (again)

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  • Опубликовано: 2 ноя 2024

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  • @milospollonia1121
    @milospollonia1121 3 года назад +1758

    To crawl over a green screen while wearing a beanie and screaming is a totally normal way to start a video Daniel

    • @DanielGreeneReviews
      @DanielGreeneReviews  3 года назад +364

      It's the brand

    • @milospollonia1121
      @milospollonia1121 3 года назад +93

      @@DanielGreeneReviews And a little ASMR session at the end, too. God I love this channel so much.

    • @andrea_766
      @andrea_766 3 года назад +27

      @@DanielGreeneReviews and that’s why we love you

    • @notchbeard9007
      @notchbeard9007 3 года назад +18

      @@DanielGreeneReviews Whenever you start with the greenscreen we know the vid gonna be great lol

    • @Qmister412
      @Qmister412 3 года назад +1

      I thought that you would do a list of authors comments and react to them.

  • @Wyncrer
    @Wyncrer 3 года назад +756

    These intros just keep getting weirder and I love it

    • @thegregnorton
      @thegregnorton 3 года назад +2

      Give the people what they want

    • @valor9370
      @valor9370 3 года назад

      Lmaoo

    • @sammcarthur864
      @sammcarthur864 3 года назад +3

      It's a survival instinct to get more viewers now that Brandon is also a book tuber. Author eat author world, baby.

    • @akrybion
      @akrybion 3 года назад

      Getting some serious hbomberguy vibes

    • @coburn8810
      @coburn8810 3 года назад

      Big Goblin Energy

  • @Calebgoblin
    @Calebgoblin 3 года назад +496

    "This sign can't stop me because I can't read."
    ~A lot of people, apparently

    • @DeeSnow97
      @DeeSnow97 3 года назад +7

      if they can write but cannot read it implies they never read their own work, which actually explains a lot

    • @JeRefuseDeBienPrononcerBaleine
      @JeRefuseDeBienPrononcerBaleine 3 года назад +1

      @@DeeSnow97 But if they can't read then how can they be sure they wrote what they wanted ?

    • @jlokison
      @jlokison 3 года назад

      @@JeRefuseDeBienPrononcerBaleine are you sure they do, I think a lot of them don't do that either.

  • @milospollonia1121
    @milospollonia1121 3 года назад +692

    When I watch a Daniel Greene video, I feel like I'm a National Geographic guy observing a natural phenomenon of positive madness in its natural habitat, and honestly I ain't even mad

    • @emmanuelboakye1124
      @emmanuelboakye1124 3 года назад +2

      👍👍

    • @shiitagi
      @shiitagi 3 года назад +4

      Remember that one Australian guy hanging around crocodiles? Yeah.

    • @myrojyn
      @myrojyn 3 года назад +4

      💯 watching a disheveled goblin in it's natural habitat

    • @DragonHeart613
      @DragonHeart613 2 года назад

      @@shiitagi RIP Steve Irwin🙏

  • @terragrahamthefirst
    @terragrahamthefirst 3 года назад +459

    Authors need to understand that they are inviting criticism by publishing their work… “To avoid criticism, say nothing, do nothing, be nothing,” as Elbert Hubbard said!

    • @ik1149
      @ik1149 3 года назад +3

      Thank you for that gem

    • @obiwanjacobi
      @obiwanjacobi 3 года назад

      .

    • @terragrahamthefirst
      @terragrahamthefirst 3 года назад +6

      I edited my comment to add a comma and the heart from Daniel disappeared 😭 That’s tragic.

    • @darkpixel1128
      @darkpixel1128 3 года назад +1

      @bluewater it's not meant to work, it's saying you can't ever avoid criticism. Obviously if you comprehend the words you aren't nothing.

    • @user-vy2hz6fl6x
      @user-vy2hz6fl6x 2 года назад

      The name “Elbert” tricked my peanut brain to think of Albert Einstein

  • @jayoctopus8832
    @jayoctopus8832 3 года назад +709

    I couldn’t imagine taking criticism toxicly. I just crumple into a little ball of panic when anyone even implies that I maybe might have just slightly offended someone.

    • @liamfairbanks4861
      @liamfairbanks4861 3 года назад +28

      And this right here is a good person

    • @2CSST2
      @2CSST2 3 года назад +46

      What you just said offended me deeply...

    • @yannickjohansson5631
      @yannickjohansson5631 3 года назад +34

      @@2CSST2 You being offended deeply offends me deeperly

    • @arturzinurov4781
      @arturzinurov4781 3 года назад +19

      I am offended that you are that weak.

    • @melanieventer3511
      @melanieventer3511 3 года назад +7

      I'm just offended by society

  • @0Arman0
    @0Arman0 3 года назад +259

    Roses are red, Daniels are green. Writers gets critiques, and their comments are mean.

    • @justagirl...
      @justagirl... 3 года назад +11

      Best comment ever

    • @subodhgarg5531
      @subodhgarg5531 3 года назад +5

      So much creativity!

    • @0Arman0
      @0Arman0 3 года назад

      @@justagirl... haha thanks!!

    • @0Arman0
      @0Arman0 3 года назад +1

      @@subodhgarg5531 x)!

  • @timfyuks2896
    @timfyuks2896 3 года назад +333

    I maintain that critics need to be able to handle criticism of their criticism. I also think authors can objectively look bad by being too touchy about criticisms. I think the author can gently address criticism without being disrespectful towards the critic

    • @DanielGreeneReviews
      @DanielGreeneReviews  3 года назад +58

      Yup!

    • @timfyuks2896
      @timfyuks2896 3 года назад +9

      @@DanielGreeneReviews you the man DG, keep up the good work and congrats on your book

  • @xensonar9652
    @xensonar9652 3 года назад +123

    I wish people disliked my book. Because that would mean I'd actually finished writing it at last.

    • @isaacm6052
      @isaacm6052 3 года назад +6

      Your book sucks because it’s not a complete book.

    • @atlantastark9470
      @atlantastark9470 3 года назад +8

      I feel personly attacked becuse I'm in this comment somewhere and I don't like it.

    • @ShadowsEternity
      @ShadowsEternity Год назад +1

      Oof 💀😂

  • @btbwilkinson
    @btbwilkinson 3 года назад +178

    "Just a personal thing, I don't think harassment is good."
    Blistering take, Daniel my man.

    • @AndrewHarten
      @AndrewHarten 3 года назад +1

      Lol, read it as it happened

  • @fardareismai4495
    @fardareismai4495 3 года назад +161

    The Goblin is strong in this intro. It's appreciated, great clan leader

  • @violetfactorial6806
    @violetfactorial6806 3 года назад +142

    Gotta distinguish between "taking actual criticism badly" from "lashing out at people who set out to hurt your feelings". Ideally we want to avoid both, but they're very different things.

    • @ianrose6218
      @ianrose6218 3 года назад +7

      I know this is probably controversial, but someone critiquing an aspect of a book is fine and good. Some reviewers can be a little harsh, but if you ask them to explain why they feel that way, you'll usually figure out whether they're doing it to spite you or because it's an actual issue. Then you can choose to walk away with the proper mindset.
      Now if someone attacks the author of a book they don't like rather than the work, that's where we need to draw lines. At least that's where I will. Call my future books what you will, but if you say that I'm a garbage author with no skill who should quit because my work is "awful and irredeemable" with no specific reasons, then that's just being rude.

  • @asw654
    @asw654 3 года назад +82

    Ahhh. i can't unsee your Adam's apple now. That criticism. It stings.

  • @nathanbuckley2136
    @nathanbuckley2136 3 года назад +69

    Hmmm we're criticizing an author criticizing his critics....I love this 😂

  • @zachryder3150
    @zachryder3150 3 года назад +68

    The perfect microphone stand

  • @joelleblanc8670
    @joelleblanc8670 3 года назад +42

    Remember that one author a month or two ago who flipped her lid on twitter when her new book 'only' got 4 stars on Goodreads? I lay awake and think about it sometimes.

    • @joelleblanc8670
      @joelleblanc8670 3 года назад +12

      If I remember correctly, she claimed people would only give her less than 5 stars because of ... misogyny

    • @avsambart
      @avsambart 3 года назад +2

      Don't we all.

  • @Ben-vf5gk
    @Ben-vf5gk 3 года назад +52

    I burst out laughing at "how did you get in touch with my family?" The timing, the delivery, and the face, it was all just perfect

  • @superluck4827
    @superluck4827 3 года назад +88

    Daniel's progressively getting weirder and more entertaining with his intros and outros and I'm here for it

    • @Cedarosaurus
      @Cedarosaurus 3 года назад

      We’re rapidly approaching hbomberguy territory...

  • @Cam_Wolfe
    @Cam_Wolfe 3 года назад +294

    I imagine it would have been hard as a book reviewer to, with a serious tone, provide literary criticism for Ernest Hemingway, knowing full well this is a man that stole a urinal from his local pub 😐

    • @DanielGreeneReviews
      @DanielGreeneReviews  3 года назад +109

      He was a strange person haha

    • @mischarowe
      @mischarowe 3 года назад +19

      Honestly, his take of criticism aside, his weirdness is the most interesting thing about him.

    • @maximeteppe7627
      @maximeteppe7627 3 года назад +3

      Imagine how humanity would have been elevated if Marcel Duchamp's "fontaine" had in fact been a urinal stolen from a pub by Ernest Hemingway?

    • @TheCrazyCanuck420
      @TheCrazyCanuck420 3 года назад +1

      Never heard that one before, kinda baller 😀

    • @wolftitanreading5308
      @wolftitanreading5308 Год назад

      @@DanielGreeneReviews let's be honest you have to be strange to be a mad genius and the guy was mad Ernest stole his favorite urinal

  • @beninebot1
    @beninebot1 3 года назад +82

    That outfit is perfect for this vid

  • @pemryjanes5789
    @pemryjanes5789 3 года назад +29

    There's something far worse to a writer than bad reviews. No reviews. That's like shouting into the void and not getting an echo.

  • @litcrit1624
    @litcrit1624 3 года назад +93

    The flip side of “taking criticism personally” is “making criticism personal” - not just like calling someone a moron, but also anchoring your arguments to statements like “…and if you don’t accept this, that’s on YOU.”

  • @sarahkendall5714
    @sarahkendall5714 3 года назад +32

    I am genuinely concerned for the wellbeing of your green screen, but still have to applaud your creativity to crawl over it!

  • @samuraijaco1
    @samuraijaco1 3 года назад +83

    DO NOT call your critics racist or sexist because they don't like your piece. This isn't just for books, but media in general.

    • @MeTaLISaWeSoMe95
      @MeTaLISaWeSoMe95 3 года назад +33

      The only time to do that is when theu are OPENLY racist or sexist. Interpreting all criticism of you as racist or sexist is the problem.

    • @gups4963
      @gups4963 3 года назад +2

      @@MeTaLISaWeSoMe95 But now you run into the problem with the definition of the word that a bunch of politically obsessed morons created. "Power plus privilege", which make no sense at all. Or hatred towards a person based on their race?

  • @jackiesliterarycorner
    @jackiesliterarycorner 3 года назад +2

    I would be too chicken to even call out someone, because of the backlash and people are scary on social media. Social Media just gives people too much of an opportunity to be an asshole to someone without having to face them and embarrassing someone in front of more people, even those you have no connection to whatsoever. I love your intros btw!

  • @jarltrippin
    @jarltrippin 3 года назад +42

    This is the most writery Daniel has ever looked.

    • @bigsiskrishere
      @bigsiskrishere 3 года назад

      He's giving me blonde Daniel Radcliffe in that one scene where Daniel Radcliffe is very disheveled in his bathrobe and slippers, holding a gun.

  • @adamjscholte583
    @adamjscholte583 3 года назад +1

    Totally agree with you, criticism is a part of writing. When I ask people to read my W.I.P I always ask for brutal honesty in their feedback.
    This is the only way for me to grow and build the character arcs, plotting and flow.

  • @beggingbugger
    @beggingbugger Год назад +4

    This video appeared as a result of me searching "Shadiversity is bad", I have no idea why but I don't regret pressing on it.

  • @ryanlol5786
    @ryanlol5786 3 года назад +21

    I’ve only just watched this once, but this is a S-Tier Daniel video in terms of energy.

  • @jjkthebest
    @jjkthebest 3 года назад +3

    "They don't get me!"
    Yeah but, as an author, aren't you supposed to make your audience get you?
    These people...

  • @christianschwietzke8959
    @christianschwietzke8959 3 года назад +41

    When you described that author´s reactions, that sounded so much like Terry Goodkind that I had to go check his Wikipedia page because I thought I remembered he had died.
    I did not enjoy the revelation that there is another person with an ego that big.

    • @liamfairbanks4861
      @liamfairbanks4861 3 года назад +2

      I second this

    • @mattheusfinco7050
      @mattheusfinco7050 3 года назад +7

      wait what terry goodkind died?????????????????????????????

    • @VicRibeiro777
      @VicRibeiro777 3 года назад +5

      @@mattheusfinco7050 yup... didn't you know?

    • @christianschwietzke8959
      @christianschwietzke8959 3 года назад +1

      @@mattheusfinco7050 - yeah, last September according to Wikipedia, no cause or circumstances given.

    • @mattheusfinco7050
      @mattheusfinco7050 3 года назад +4

      Damm
      Like, last week i was watching Daniel's video on him and laughing at his big ego and notable imaturity
      I feel kinda guilty now y'know
      The man died and will be remembered as the writer with 0 self awareness

  • @gatling216
    @gatling216 3 года назад +3

    I will say, I find it immensely enjoyable when an author savages a critic who didn't bother to read their book, but instead chose to make blanket assumptions based on the author's views and beliefs, or reads the book, but interprets it entirely through that lens. On the whole it's still not a good thing, but it can be entertaining as hell. One doesn't (typically) get published without being something of a wordsmith, and such takedowns are goldmines for clever insults.

  • @AverageAwesomeDude
    @AverageAwesomeDude 3 года назад +1

    Best response to criticism “ well it’s not like you were gonna buy multiple copies anyway. But hey check out the next book maybe I’ll have improved”

  • @thiagoh2005
    @thiagoh2005 3 года назад +12

    I wish I had the self-confidence of these authors to proclaim such thing

    • @squarecross7383
      @squarecross7383 3 года назад +2

      Be happy that you don’t. Its better to not be known, than to be known for the wrong reasons.

  • @jonathanstarr1104
    @jonathanstarr1104 3 года назад +21

    I feel like every video is just Daniel slowly moving closer and closer to insanity.

    • @SIS3W3N
      @SIS3W3N 3 года назад +5

      Sanity is highly overrated.

    • @aix83
      @aix83 3 года назад

      Ah come on he's just being himself and relaxing. For a Goblin this is relaxed.

    • @jonathanstarr1104
      @jonathanstarr1104 3 года назад +1

      @@aix83 Ah yes, you're right. For a goblin, this isn't insanity.

  • @TheBiggerBongo
    @TheBiggerBongo 3 года назад +11

    I will never grow up Daniel Greene and YOU CAN’T MAKE ME

  • @liamfairbanks4861
    @liamfairbanks4861 3 года назад +30

    At first I thought the microphone stand was a baseball bat…
    I have an idea for the next microphone stand

    • @redsands1001
      @redsands1001 3 года назад +1

      Then after your idea a sword mic

    • @liamfairbanks4861
      @liamfairbanks4861 3 года назад +1

      Yes but like a really long sword like a great sword

    • @wholesomeflix_
      @wholesomeflix_ 3 года назад +3

      @@liamfairbanks4861 How about the dragonslayer from berserk

    • @bigsiskrishere
      @bigsiskrishere 3 года назад

      @@liamfairbanks4861 How about a ridiculously large, Cloud of Final Fantasy sword? With the mic on the pommel so he has to tilt his head up each time he wants to talk into it.

    • @liamfairbanks4861
      @liamfairbanks4861 3 года назад

      @@bigsiskrishere yes

  • @asw654
    @asw654 3 года назад +14

    I'm terrible at taking criticism. I end up fuming all day and it ruins me. Then I start imagining scenarios where I own them some way or another. It ends up being super unproductive.
    But even I have the self-control not to engage with my critics, DM them, harass them, etc! That's a win for them and a loss for me!

  • @bigbangattack97
    @bigbangattack97 3 года назад +4

    You have quickly become one of my favorite people. I started reading again while in Hawaii last month; read beowulf while there. Got home read the hobbit now I'm 100 pages into dragonbone chair. You remind me a lot of Ethan Becker; aggressively wholesome is the game I like to be apart of.

  • @dylanthechillinvillain2488
    @dylanthechillinvillain2488 3 года назад +12

    There are so many good quotes in here that better become memes, if it doesn’t happen I’ll do it myself.

  • @mysterylife5998
    @mysterylife5998 3 года назад +11

    Daniel at the start of the video: *Reject humanity, return to goblin!*

  • @wendyheatherwood
    @wendyheatherwood 3 года назад +6

    I used to be a fairly active webcomic creator. I remember one negative review I got and I still to this day think they misunderstood what the comic was, assuming it had a much younger readership than it actually did.
    I was honestly a little annoyed, so I get where the frustration can come from, but I didn't try to argue with that reviewer. I thanked them for giving the time to go through my whole archive to write that review and then secretly hoped to myself that nobody would read it.
    The sites hosting both the comic and the review are long gone now, btw. I don't even remember the reviewer's name at this point, so I don't mind talking about it. At the time though? I kept those thoughts to myself and a couple of close friends I knew wouldn't do anything about it.

  • @melanieventer3511
    @melanieventer3511 3 года назад +7

    Daniel's intros are on a different level that none of us can ever hope to achieve

  • @justareader____
    @justareader____ 3 года назад +4

    Great video, HobGobDaniel!
    See, this is the wonderful balance between subjectivity and objectivity. People are allowed to feel (like or dislike) whatever story they want, but at the same time, a story’s quality will be a constant: it will always be as good or bad as it ever has been or ever will be. That should give writers both a sense of “let me work hard to write a good book,” and a sense of comfort!

  • @Nasser851000
    @Nasser851000 3 года назад +23

    0:00 The Goblin host just turned into the Spiderman host XD

  • @mwoodard7253
    @mwoodard7253 3 года назад +2

    Honestly I take any kind of criticism VERY personally and I feel really insecure when I’m criticized BUT I’ve learned to hold it together till I’m in private then I cry but I don’t say anything on social media or to that person’s face. My volleyball coach in eighth grade had a rule that if she did something you didn’t like or if you were cut wait 24 hours then contact her so you had time to relax and pull yourself together.

  • @storyspren
    @storyspren 3 года назад +1

    That point on negative reviews helping is so true! I've read reviews before that have been negative where the reviewer says they didn't like that the thing did, for example, some trope or another and I've looked at that thinking "this reviewer didn't like it but that trope is my jam I'd probably be interested."
    Or alternatively it's been something that I won't mind while the positive reviews point out things I'm interested in.

  • @XraynPR
    @XraynPR 3 года назад +3

    If someone is just insulting, without giving any worthwile critique (e.g. "this sucks, you am bad!") ... thosr people aren't worth your time.
    If they offer actual points ("you am bad, because this plot is cluttered and nonsensical"), then one can atleast start to get something out of it

  • @Elena-tz9ev
    @Elena-tz9ev 3 года назад +1

    Daniel coming closer to the screen and whispering/asking if I loved the video is EVERYTHING!!

  • @JSephH76
    @JSephH76 3 года назад +2

    My highest aspiration is to become successful enough that Daniel makes a video absolutely eviscerating me and my entire being.

  • @saadamansayyed
    @saadamansayyed 3 года назад +58

    Yep. Authors not taking criticism. Story for the ages, ain't it. /s

    • @SIS3W3N
      @SIS3W3N 3 года назад +5

      I found the comment to be poorly constructed and completely unnecessary.

    • @Halo_Legend
      @Halo_Legend 3 года назад +2

      To be fair, if you're bordering on or being full on insulting, then don't be suprised an author's gonna get defensive.
      People will not listen to you if you attack them. Same goes for debates.

    • @saadamansayyed
      @saadamansayyed 3 года назад

      @@Halo_Legend forgot the tone indicator. Author myself I was just fooling around. 😅

  • @LarryHasOpinions
    @LarryHasOpinions 3 года назад +29

    i stan the hat though

  • @CMAlongi
    @CMAlongi 2 года назад +1

    My mother is an NYT Bestselling romance author. Every time she gets a review of her book, she retweets it on Twitter, even if it's bad. Those tend to get a "Thank you for the review, sorry you didn't like it" type of caption, sometimes a "You'll probably prefer [book from different author], instead." Fans and other writers tend to really respect that attitude.

    • @zinkheroofyoutube8004
      @zinkheroofyoutube8004 Год назад

      That response or just saying nothing is probably the best way to handle it

  • @archaeologydad3761
    @archaeologydad3761 3 года назад +1

    i went and read that Amazon bio, and. oh boy. someone thought those words. with their brain. and then typed them. and hit 'publish'. what a world

  • @Effaly_
    @Effaly_ 3 года назад +1

    Same goes for TV show writers and movie writers - for *every writer* actually. 😒

  • @SentientSoup
    @SentientSoup 3 года назад +2

    Daniel! Man, you are hilarious. I like your delivery and I enjoy your content. Thank you for your art and your time.

  • @august3777
    @august3777 3 года назад +2

    Michael Crichton hated a critic so badly, he added the critic to a novel of his for the simple reason of making fun of him and insulting him. He got away with this without the critic suiting, because Michael Crichton made mention that the character had a small penis, and that prevented the critic from suiting because suiting him for adding him as a character in his book, would have forced the critic to admit that he in fact had a small penis. It was brilliant.

  • @altorins
    @altorins 3 года назад

    I learned a long time ago to not take criticism personally, regardless on how it's given. Criticisms are just opinions, some are valid, some may not be. I learned that if I look at criticism in an objective way I can often find ways to improve even from poorly delivered criticism. This of course means that alot of honest self reflection must be done.

  • @justaghostinthesea
    @justaghostinthesea Год назад

    As an aspiring writer, and one who suffers from RSD (Rejection Sensitivity Dysphoria) I'm terrified of having to deal with criticism. On one hand, I understand that part of being a writer means having your work critiqued, and that listening to criticism is the best way to improve. On the other hand, people on the internet are cruel and I get upset if I get even the sense that someone is remotely disappointed in me. It's a tightrope walk for sure.

  • @lethalantidote
    @lethalantidote 2 года назад +2

    You are an absolutely, unmitigated, uncontested - beyond a shadow of the deepest darkest hell of doubt - a wonderful guy. And I hope you fester away in a pool of never ending success.

  • @huro1845
    @huro1845 Год назад

    A few years too late, but thank you for this!
    Also, she feels hurt by a years old opinion bc she is in a bad place now? So, remember, kids: Always be extra nice to people bc they might have a bad day in about 5 years!

  • @waleedkhalid7486
    @waleedkhalid7486 3 года назад

    Facts. It’s never ok to throw your fans at critics. It’s unprofessional and devalues literature as a whole.

  • @sernoddicusthegallant6986
    @sernoddicusthegallant6986 3 года назад

    Im not just saying this because Im a Malazan fanboy but Erikson's "Rant" on characterization is probably the best example of an author responding to criticism that Im aware of, he may have come across as a little condescending during the post, but whats most important is that he focussed on the criticism, not the critics. So many people seem to develop a personal vindictiveness towards their critics whether its through generalizing anyone who dosent like their work or singling out and targeting individuals. It was great to see an author arguing against the actual points critics were trying to make rather than them as people.

  • @mmadsen
    @mmadsen 3 года назад

    Negative reviews as good publicly is so true. There are people who I only read things they don't like (and typically avoid things they like).
    You really need both positive and negative. That's what Good taught me ;)

  • @katymartin3924
    @katymartin3924 3 года назад +1

    The intro… the FIT! THIS is the Internet I signed up for!
    But yeah. I know the Internet is a different beast and people can be unnecessarily cruel with their critique, but I actually get a little anxious if I haven’t had ANY constructive criticism at work in a while. 🤷‍♀️

  • @maybebianca
    @maybebianca 3 года назад +16

    I think this is the best intro yet =)))

  • @everydaydissociation
    @everydaydissociation 3 года назад

    I live for this editing style don't stop Daniel

  • @codylakin288
    @codylakin288 3 года назад +2

    That opening caught me off guard and I laughed out loud so hard 😂 Thank goodness I have the house to myself today!

  • @yoavshamir9055
    @yoavshamir9055 3 года назад +7

    Very true! But criticism should also be respectful. Saying, 'I didn't like the book' or 'this plot element is a little weak' is a criticism that needs to be respected, even reflected upon. Saying 'this book is garbage from a terrible author' really isn't. It's just mean behaviour

  • @evi6629
    @evi6629 3 года назад +5

    For everyone not caught up on the drama and don't know who this video is about, here's the full amazon bio of the author in question. The whole thing. It's long, but worth it if you like having a good laugh. Probably more entertaining than anything else he's ever written. (all typos are his. not mine)
    "A note about the ongoing twitterstorm by intolerant, enraged cultural marxists--it was all triggered by using the word "eggplant" to describe a body part, because describing women in a sensual way is no longer "politically correct". Women are geniuses (Rey), they can do everything (Rey), but they are not to be described as sensual, ever. That's why they wants me censored or shut down. If it can happen to me, it can happen to you, my friends, and with the constantly shifting goalposts in political correctness, don't think it won't.
    An open letter to my fellow scifi/fantasy writers.
    Dear, dear friends:
    You are awful. All of you. (Yes, ALL OF YOU!)
    Please do not take it personally. But someone has to tell you this, and it might as well be me.
    You suffer from three key deficits: LACK OF IMAGINATION, LACK OF EMPATHY, and LACK OF SELF-AWARENESS.
    First, your lack of IMAGINATION.
    99% of scifi/fantasy novels can be categorized as follows:
    a) "Hip", "Modern Day" Fantasy: "diverse" teenagers with magical powers fighting vampires in urban settings.
    b) Teenagers suffering deprivation in a post-nuclear wasteland;
    c) The so-called "epic" fantasy novel, with "world building" expecting you to learn the history of hundreds of characters, castles, cities and taverns like a History of Art exam.
    d) Everyone fighting World War II again, in outer space; and
    e) "Hard" scifi, with 500 pages of hand wringing and mental _asturbation about a transmission from an alien sphere (or... if you're feeling imaginative... an alien cube!).
    Not only are these topics very, very trite, but your rendition of them is even worse. You're like a bad photocopy machine making worse and worse copies which themselves are bad copies of other copies.
    Furthermore, the very dim lightbulb in your head is only bright enough to generate one idea (at most). So if you start out writing stories about Unicorns refighting WW II in outer space, ALL your stories will undoubtedly be about Unicorns refighting WW II in outer space. But, to make it last, you chop it up into nine or ten books with numbers in the title, each of them 250 pages long in big double space print. Maybe in one novel the Unicorn will have a battleship instead of a battlecruiser. Maybe in another the Unicorn will be wearing a funky helmet. But at its base, it will all be the same story. Hence your LACK OF IMAGINATION.
    Now for your lack of EMPATHY.
    People are easy to please. Really easy. We are all wired to sympathize and empathize with others. That's why we get such a thrill over "shipping", stories of complete strangers having a romance with each other. All you have to do is create characters which are real, relatable, and interesting, and readers will be hooked. It's in our very nature; it's like shooting fish in a barrel.
    Unfortunately, you can't even find the barrel. Your characters are all two dimensional, put on this Earth to fulfill a quest. They are little more than video game avatars. Characters are defined by being multifaceted and their relationships to others. But you are clueless about this. You have no idea how to write characters that are interesting to people. All your characters are wooden, or worse, unpleasant, or EVEN WORSE, virtue whores. I'd love for my best friend to be very virtuous, kind, wise, and understanding. But I'd fall asleep reading a book about him. People don't want to read about kind best friends. They want to read about James Bond, Gandalf, and Mr. Spock, characters that are multifaceted and unusual. You don't even have the faintest idea how to create such characters.
    (relating back to your LACK OF IMAGINATION).
    Lastly, and most importantly, you lack SELF-AWARENESS. And what do I mean by that? You lack the self-awareness to write stories which are entertaining.
    If you were to verbally tell someone a story, would you spend ten minutes describing a house or a barn, or what a room full of people were wearing, eating or drinking? Probably not, but you do see pages and pages of this kind of drek in scifi/fantasy novels all the time. My eyes glaze over such things, and I suspect many readers' do too.
    The other most common sin writers are guilty of is character bloat, larding their stories with dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of characters, in the belief that populating their world so specifically makes their "world building" feel more "authentic".
    It doesn't. It only confuses your readers. But you don't have the self-awareness to realize it.
    Tell me, dear friends, when you write a page of dialog, do you ever go back and ask yourself if that page was entertaining, if people might ever want to reread that page even after reading it once? No, you never do. For you, dialog is simply something mechanical, to simply advance the plot, a means to an end rather than an end in itself. Or worse, for many of you, it's simply pages and pages of mindless small-talk, filler to reach your page count. And that's why your writing is painfully stiff and pedantic.
    So you write a story where nothing much happens, or maybe a lot happens, but either way you miss the primary point of the story itself--to show a series of dramatic effects on the main characters. Whether your story is "See Jim fly to the stars!" or "Watch Enrique and the Space Marines fight the aliens!" or "Sarah and Johnnie have to get back to the vault before the zombies wake up!", you miss the point of what makes a novel entertaining entirely. It's all about drama. Drama is not merely about things happening to characters, although things do happen to characters. Drama is where characters react to things happening to them in a way that provokes change and reaction from characters. But you can't understand that, because you lack self-awareness.
    Most of your books are about PROCESSES, as if you were writing a physics or sociology textbook. World building should be in service to character drama, not the other way around. Most of you spend so much time talking about the minutiae of "how" that you lose sight of drama between characters, which is what drives every story. We don't need to know how hyperdrive or the unicorn kingdom works, we just need to know enough to create a story for characters to interact in.
    Unfortunately, you have trained readers to expect bad writing. Readers now EXPECT they will have to plow through hundreds of pages of drek to get to a real story. You have TRAINED them to expect to struggle with your books to try to squeeze some relatable drama from it, and that is why I hate you the most, because you have crapified an entire field of literature. People have come to not only expect your drek, but to demand it!
    And so when people, exposed only to a lifetime of your drek, stumble across my books like desert travelers to an oasis, their first reaction is often to blink rapidly and say "What Dat?"
    Even from the covers, people can tell my books are different. They don't have meaningless one or two word titles like "Hard Impact" or "Final Conflict" and pictures of tiny stick figures in shadows that look like mannequins surrounded by random explosions. My book descriptions don't have any of the ten buzz phrases people are accustomed to seeing in a book description which say everything and nothing ("full of twists and turns which will keep you glued to your seat!")
    And my books are about many different topics. As a result, my books will never be as popular as yours. People want predictability. They want same-ness. They want books with numbers in the title. They feel a fantasy novel can only be "epic" if it's hard to understand and a struggle to read. They want their WW II stories to be filled with stories of grunting space marines firing laser machine guns and throwing laser grenades on enemy positions. They want to read story after story after story about America turned into a desert wasteland filled with zombie mutants.
    My stories, on the other hand, simply confuse them. They are about many different topics. There are no laser machine guns blazing away in page after page of meaningless battles between characters we have no reason to care about. My characters definitely are not politically correct. They may not even believe in man-made global warming or fifty four genders. Even WORSE, women are actually attracted to men in my stories and they are not always fighting gender wars with each other (which infuriates the cultural marxists, because to show a sensual woman, in their mind, is to degrade her--women are only to be portrayed from the neck up, in their new unbending manifesto).
    And that is why I will never sell as many books as you do.
    Thanks so much for that, by the way. You should feel proud that you have lowered an entire genre to mediocrity.
    It amazes me that I see all these things I describe above and none of you... none of you do. It's like living on a planet of blind painters, and I'm the only one whose noticed that you ran out of paint a long, long time ago."

    • @evi6629
      @evi6629 3 года назад +2

      Also want to make it clear that the part about eggplants is, in fact, about a passage in one of his books where he says that a lady's breasts have the shape of eggplants. Which is... not the first vegetable I would use to describe boobs? And also not the first sensual description using eggplants i would think of...

    • @Elena-tz9ev
      @Elena-tz9ev 3 года назад

      @UCMnuXOZP2UUxG4BBKLdqldg can you tell me the author's name, please?

    • @IsomerSoma
      @IsomerSoma 3 года назад

      @@evi6629 Was their actually outrage over his usage of "eggplant"?

    • @evi6629
      @evi6629 3 года назад

      @@IsomerSoma There were people on twitter making fun of his bad writing, basically.

    • @IsomerSoma
      @IsomerSoma 3 года назад +1

      @@evi6629 Well its a weird discription. Without your remark what it was referring to i was confused.

  • @mattheww9772
    @mattheww9772 2 года назад

    Again dropping prescient advice based on careful loving insight delivered out of the side of your mouth while restraining a scream, your passion is compelling Daniel and your content is substantial. Well said.

  • @thgrtedf
    @thgrtedf 3 года назад +2

    I love criticism. Hearing "it's good!" Doesnt help with my writing! Why is it good? Do you feel I could improve? Who, to you, should I read to help inspire such improvements? Give me good criticism. Not just say "oh wow it's really good", that ain't helping me! Well helps my ego but then I'll get lol'd in a false sense of confidence.

  • @IamMeHere2See
    @IamMeHere2See 3 года назад +1

    Helpful video, even for those not in publishing. I will make a suggestion: the number one rule should be to not threaten someone with severe bodily harm and/death. I know that can be folded into rule #2, "don't sic your audience on the critic," but I feel it's a significant enough difference to be it's own rule.

  • @Mikeztarp
    @Mikeztarp 3 года назад +5

    There is another time when "fuck those people" is the correct attitude: when a review attacks the author personally instead of the work. Of course, the author has to be able to identify those accurately and not take criticism of the work as personal.

    • @knz730
      @knz730 3 года назад +1

      This is actually a skill of the modern creative world, and not one everyone naturally has. Some psychologist could probably make a fortune creating a course to emotionally cope well while sorting useful criticism from personal attacks/feedback that can't be used constructively, because while I do think authors now have the responsibility to do this, oof, I get that it's hard.

  • @jaycren6888
    @jaycren6888 3 года назад +1

    As a Fanfic writer I encourage criticism of all kinds. Because their hatred makes me stronger.

    • @avsambart
      @avsambart 3 года назад +1

      Fanfic writers have more strength than actual authors. Y'all welcome critics and criticism and you all respond to nicely too.

    • @jaycren6888
      @jaycren6888 3 года назад +1

      @@avsambart I think you romanticize us too much, but thank you for the compliment. Some of us get really salty, but I don't take many things personally.

  • @SpookyyV
    @SpookyyV 3 года назад

    As someone who didn't love Breach of Peace as much as I hoped I would - every time I hear you talk about the response and how you are using that to improve, I cannot wait for book 2! Holy Run on sentence Batman

  • @bigsiskrishere
    @bigsiskrishere 3 года назад

    Daniels use of green screne is perfect. Beautiful. Masterful.

  • @rabidrivas
    @rabidrivas 3 года назад +19

    "Bad Criticism is free advertising " I might buy this book now

  • @pikablu_25
    @pikablu_25 3 года назад +9

    *whispers in a trance* : Imma give you a little like, cause I dont mind

  • @mms7151
    @mms7151 3 года назад +28

    I like to think that somewhere out there there’s an author that made a really complicated book and realized it’s really complicated/hard to understand so he/she spent a lot of time trying to clarify things and everyone’s just like “no no no. it’s all right, we just don’t get it”

    • @Cogu985
      @Cogu985 3 года назад

      The book isn't even that good, there's just a giant community who's trying really hard to make sense of everything happening.

    • @squarecross7383
      @squarecross7383 3 года назад

      @@Cogu985 Did someone say „The Last Jedi“?

  • @luxartist716
    @luxartist716 3 года назад

    I usually take criticism well, but sometimes I'm already exhausted and criticism makes me feel really bad, so I just cry a lot

  • @nicholasking6066
    @nicholasking6066 2 года назад

    I added this to my how to make RUclips vids playlist, how to edit, 3d and whiteboard animation etc. Just the basics of how to make vids before I start working on my channels, this seemed to be pretty important to have on that list lol.

  • @Funeral_Attire
    @Funeral_Attire 3 года назад

    Just because one person doesn't like a piece of literature doesn't mean others will feel the same. I personally really don't like Outlander, but I have a lot of family members and friends who became obsessed. I enjoy looking at negative reviews for books I love because it lets me look more critically at the book, and enjoy it that much more. Embrace the criticism, accept it, and grow! Writing in itself is a labor of love.

  • @nottherey4333
    @nottherey4333 3 года назад

    People in general not just authors can't stand critics against their favourite thing. I hate when people tell me "You don't understand the story". I understand but I don't like it and with reasons.

  • @burgerking3763
    @burgerking3763 3 года назад +1

    I love getting negative reviews on stuff I make. Because up until now Ive known about the people who left bad reviews, and I've known that they're material sucked too.
    For real tho, everyone has different tastes. I create to make something I myself enjoy. And I couldn't give two farts wether or not someone else likes it.

  • @brad5342
    @brad5342 3 года назад

    The intensity of this video is on a whole different level, I found myself furiously agreeing to everything while feeling very attacked at the same time. Not sure how I feel right now but I know I ain't mad lol.

  • @AliceDeBois
    @AliceDeBois 3 года назад

    One of two things I've noticed with insults from people in terms of criticism. The first one is people have baseless criticism because they are expressing their upset anger over something else and or they're trying to gain attention. And the second one is that they actually have a real criticism that can be addressed utilizing the material at hand whether or not someone understands something or if there's even a pothole the original author doesn't actually see because let's face it sometimes people think differently than others. In the first case being as I'm not an author but someone who has been on the receiving end of insults / criticism I like reading these from unintelligible to incredibly clever. The more clever someone is the more credit I give them. I make it a rule not to get into it in the comment section with people if they're in the unintelligible section. And I'm not above posting articles to people if they really want to get into a discussion about something. People can understand things better but a really clever criticism is just really funny and can actually brighten one's day if you break it down to what it really is.

  • @rashkae1
    @rashkae1 3 года назад

    I don't know why I missed this video back in June. I enjoy most of your releases and appreciate all of them. But I have to take umbrage with the loss of sanity points from looking up the referenced amazon Profile, (and the subsequent home page and book descriptions.)

  • @rambler209
    @rambler209 3 года назад

    So, I just read this guy's author bio on Amazon, and wow. Just wow. I don't know what I would do if I ever came across one of his books in print. I ended up searching for a way to blacklist an author, which I have never had reason to do before, and I hope to never have to do again.

  • @mikmik6158
    @mikmik6158 3 года назад

    my human behavior professor said in class "its not about what you meant, it's about what they understood"... this was in reference to office misunderstandings but I kinda see it applies to the topic at hand as well haha

  • @lazulenoc6863
    @lazulenoc6863 3 года назад +1

    I hate this channel because I can only subscribe once and can only place a single like per video. Otherwise, it's a majestic item of perfection on this platform.

  • @lordastrea2765
    @lordastrea2765 3 года назад

    People enjoy reading negative reviews. People will especially want to look at a story when some of the negative reviews are silly. Plenty of negative reviews out there with solid points and that are well-thought out. Others are just really really really really fun to read.
    It's like when I see a negative review from game journalists. A lot of times the reasons for detracting points make me want to try the game even more. :D

  • @itsadreamfrodo6461
    @itsadreamfrodo6461 3 года назад

    As a university professor. It’s quite disappointing that so many 18-25 year olds cannot take criticism when it comes to anything, whether it is writing, statistics, etc. even when I was industry and had to give verbal warnings or written warnings to staff that are coaching opportunities. It’s quite sad that in today’s society people are just awful and taking any time of constructive criticism or even just suggestion for edits in an ungraded rough draft.

  • @VocaloidThalia
    @VocaloidThalia 2 года назад +1

    I think authors should not respond to critics or reviewers PERIOD.
    Unless they thank the reviewers for reviewing or critiquing or something.
    Because at the end of they day they are just people on the internet and YOU are the one with the product, the fanbase, and the reputation to protect.

  • @christianshobbiblog1816
    @christianshobbiblog1816 3 года назад +3

    I like seeing Daniel holding a stick of dynamite while telling people how to be a respectable person XD

  • @annabanana7659
    @annabanana7659 3 года назад

    When I read the title, my mind immediately thought of Norman Boutin (author of the marvelous Empress Theresa).

  • @Raven_Konaim
    @Raven_Konaim 3 года назад +1

    Dude been watching your channel since 2018, and now to get see the "Real" Daniel come out is just pure gold 🤣

  • @SysterYster
    @SysterYster 3 года назад

    When criticism turns to personal insults and name-calling, one can stop listening. If they point out a problem you hadn't seen, you can listen and try to do better next time. :P But do TRY to see what they're showing you. There's no point in turning a blind eye either. Nobody's perfect.

  • @ReadyPlayerPiano
    @ReadyPlayerPiano 3 года назад +1

    Hey man, don't take it personally. For some of us, having our parents pretend to love us was the closest we ever got to parents. You don't get to choose your parents.
    Honestly though, I deeply appreciate what you do on this channel. Thank you, Daniel. Plenty of us choose to love you, and that means more.

    • @ChristmasLore
      @ChristmasLore 3 года назад

      My parents don't even pretend..

    • @ReadyPlayerPiano
      @ReadyPlayerPiano 3 года назад

      @@ChristmasLore I feel for you, they sound like garbage people. But we shouldn't put any stock in the people we get by genetic lottery. Nobody gets to choose their blood kin. The good news is that we do get to choose the people who are in our lives outside of them. We get to have a chosen family. Plus, we CAN (eventually) choose to NOT have them in our lives. I've claimed half a state as my territory and my blood kin are not allowed to live within it. I have found that having a buffer of a few hundred miles between us does wonders for my general enjoyment of life.

  • @Panarchy.
    @Panarchy. 3 года назад

    I do sometimes worry about very conscientious creators taking on board *too much* criticism. Well, it takes a lot of critical thinking to try and figure out why exactly someone doesn't like a book, and whether it is something that is worth changing, or whether it is really just an artistic choice and/or disagreement about what makes a story 'good' in the first place.
    When it comes to craft, there are probably still things you can learn, and it's well worth considering these criticisms and trying to understand where it comes from. But you'll also get criticism from people who weren't really part of your target audience to begin with. If you try to appeal to everyone, you may end up sacrificing more than you gain.
    I guess I'm worried that talented creators, in an effort to become more popular, might inadvertently water down the unique voice that could have brought them success.