Wtf. That was terrifying. I have listened to a lot of creepy pasta and this is up there as an all timer. Pure horror that’s left me feeling dread I forgot I could feel. Thank you 🙌❤️
I've been listening to creepypastas from this channel and the other great narrators for years - accumulating a collection of over 5,000 creepypasta videos (2012-present) saved to playlists... this was easily one of the scariest stories I've heard in a long time. I think it does so well because it touches on many primal fears like: 1. Fear of the uncanny (the dopplegangers that are off) 2. Fear of loved ones being murdered 3. Fear of loved ones cheating 4. Fear of social ostracization/isolation by loved ones and the helplessness that comes with that 5. Fear of gruesome violence and agony 6. Fear of insects 7. Fear of abandoned houses 8. Fear of the unclean and grotesque A truly great story akin to the creepypastas of old!
My first RUclips: jermaximus666 was Creeps' 31st subscriber. It's always good to see someone here who's been listening to these almost as long as I have.
@@EmilyXiong1999my favorite was when the protag realizes the doppelganger must be lying flat on the ground at the top of the stairs. The mental image this conjured was horrifying. 10/10
Man…. This one was built different…… wow is all I can say. 10/10. I was laughing so hard at the ending I was kinda working and not 100% focused so when she was like “it was my husbands doppelgänger” I was like duh….. like I knew that the moment he showed up….. but then when it was like “he was repeating my husbands last words” I was like wow I’m an idiot for not realizing. 😂 this one was amazing! Please more from this writer! I literally dropped my jaw like 3 times because I was totally captured by every detail of this story. I literally watched this movie play out in my head perfectly clear. There was no scene of this story where I didn’t watch it like a movie…. Perfect.
I have to agree that this story was well written. I actually visualised everything happening. Creeped me out,.this should be a movie lol. Thanks again for the upload creepy.
So it's been years since I've listened to a story that was legit terrifying or unpredictable. This one, however, is both. Love it. And the delivery? So good!
Bravo!!!! I am one of those people who usually guesses the plot/ending. There were a few times, especially at the end when the husband was dead, that i screamed out, "What?!?" My neighbor in my apartment building texted me to see if I was okay. Well done!!! I say. Hear hear. This was the first video I have watched from this channel and I am hooked!
The photos and note she got were still in her car. She never brought it up to her husband, so when he got the same things she shouldn’t have called. Just texted pics of the photos and note she got. Communication would’ve opened up immediately.
I like the MC's wit and humor, charming lady 19:04 This would be the point where you realize whatever is going on is seriously messed up and you need to leave Just finished, ok, time to relocate with the quickness 😅
This was a very good story for the wee hours of the morning, between 4:00 am and 5:00. I laid in my bed feeling the escalating tension this story ignited…
This story confused me Spoilers… Was she only alive because the neighbor got there before her doppelgänger was able to kill her? Were the two doppelgängers in it together? So now she will never be safe as her doppelgänger will be hunting for her?
Wish someone would shed some light too. Were there two doppelgangers playing some sort of game. Had she somehow killed her husband and couldn't face what she did. Did see see him get killed and the rest was her mind breaking up, especially when no one else in the hospital room noticed him?
My insomnia was a nightmare in itself. I’m cured now. I must say, I really enjoy my psychedelic dreams. I l👀k forward to revisiting my little parallel universe…it seems as though I have two different lives with two sets of friends and my home is the same but different decor and many people that I knew before they passed! There’s usually a friendly gathering or function where we talk about things, tell jokes, wear posh clothing, sometimes, I can’t find my top or my bottoms and walk around as a host as if everything is fine!! Hmmm🤔 One thing that niggles me in my dreams is always searching for my first beloved car, then when I find it, I can’t find the keys, or I can’t actually drive it if i do!!! 🫤 There’s a mystery guy who is so lovely and tries to hook up, but I’m aware that in my real life I’m married and can’t be unfaithful, even though I’m curious, I’ve never given in! We kissed once, just a lip peck and I felt exhilarated and even after I woke up, I kept thinking about it and had a great day! 🤭 Thanx for sharing your interesting and original work…I’ve always enjoyed reading literature on the eccentric side! 😁
As excellent a story as that was, and I really enjoyed it, for the protagonist to take that long to realize that her husband had been toast for awhile is a bit well, stupid. Of course he was. And that creature which I’ve heard similar tales of does it just for fun. Because when you can, why not?
The husband wasn't dead for a long time. The "doppelganger" didn't have access to the husband so it went after the wife. It copied the wife in their encounters. The husband was replaced around the same time the wife was supposed to be. The husband called out "Get out of my room", which isn't something you yell at someone in your house. It makes more sense if he yelled it in a hotel room he was staying at after finding those photos. It showed up at the hospital as a farewell and to gloat. Key evidence is that the wife knew her husband's schedule was too tight for her to comprehend when he'd have time for an affair. That would mean if time was taken out of his schedule to be copied and replaced, then it would be noticed by her if not more people. The plan that unfolded divided the two up to permit near simultaneous replacement.
In the cloak of fog, the mistress of the night conceals her forbidden liaisons, a wraith-like enchantress whose secrets are written in the chilling breath of clandestine whispers.
I love this. At first, i thought it was a cereal killer husband. She could of been looking at previous wife photo. But eventually i realized it was a entity trying to get a victim. The moment the lady had bloodlust. That was the give away. I figured they pulled in husband. But i didn't know she use the same tactic.
Wow! Great story, Sir. Thank you sooo much. It's sad. I honestly feel for the lady. And her hubby loved her greatly. He died thinking she cheated on him and didn't love him anymore. 😢 Is there a second part? If there is , please see if you can read it to us. We hungrily await your storytelling, Sir.
"Almost 50 years before the world events that led to the formation of the Terran Federation, and 70 years before the invention of the Cherenkov Drive that gave us mastery over the vastness of interstellar space, the Arachnid invasion of Earth had already began", Colonel DuBois addressed the steel faced cadets of the Terran Mobile Infantry in the class. "They arrived here as spies and saboteurs, wreaking isolated havoc here and there. He picked up an old newspaper clipping that told the story of a doomed couple from 2022 who had their bodies taken over by Arachnid saboteurs. "This pair right here, after taking over and killing a couple living in California, attempted next to infiltrate an atomic research base of the former United States Air Force, where they were neutralized by members of the Department of Defense security forces. The meteor which had devastated Buenos Aires was sent by the Arachnid fleet only after they discovered that we possessed the Cherenkov Drive and were already building starships, so they attempted a full on invasion"...
This was awful and amazing! I was washing dishes but had to stop because the tingle going up my spine was too strong on 29:35 ! *SPOILERS* I love the feeling of being scared by scary stories and creepypastas, BUT just last week I came home, and there was big muddy shoeprints from entrance to kitchen and back so that part of the story REALLY got me giggle and wiggle! The scary thing is _I moved to live alone_ just few weeks ago, after living safely with someone for nine years.. I shall put bear traps on the doorway before leaving next time 😂
So the 2 dopplegangers must have slept together and got someone to take polaroids. That makes them dopplebangers
😂😂😂
😂😂😂 good one
i wish i could hear the husband s pov ....that would ve been such a mind bender....i got goosebumps on this 1
This was the first story in a while that has really scared me. Couldnt wait for it to be over but also couldnt stop listening. Great one.
I loved the way this was written. A narrative with humour! And the line along lines of "I make jokes when I'm nervous or upset".... yeah I felt that
Wtf. That was terrifying. I have listened to a lot of creepy pasta and this is up there as an all timer. Pure horror that’s left me feeling dread I forgot I could feel. Thank you 🙌❤️
It masterfully plays on a range of your emotions, grief, pity, fear, anger, relief, curiosity, anxiety...
Nah
Best story he's read in a while
“….Just the read of the title for me and I screamed out loud….”WTF”!!! “…..Now I’m going too have a listen”!!! G-MOMMEE
It's a good idea idea how many many years
I've been listening to creepypastas from this channel and the other great narrators for years - accumulating a collection of over 5,000 creepypasta videos (2012-present) saved to playlists... this was easily one of the scariest stories I've heard in a long time. I think it does so well because it touches on many primal fears like:
1. Fear of the uncanny (the dopplegangers that are off)
2. Fear of loved ones being murdered
3. Fear of loved ones cheating
4. Fear of social ostracization/isolation by loved ones and the helplessness that comes with that
5. Fear of gruesome violence and agony
6. Fear of insects
7. Fear of abandoned houses
8. Fear of the unclean and grotesque
A truly great story akin to the creepypastas of old!
Do you have a list of favourites? Some of them are misses but some like this are amazing.
@@gunpixelgun i would like to know too 👆🏾
My first RUclips: jermaximus666 was Creeps' 31st subscriber.
It's always good to see someone here who's been listening to these almost as long as I have.
I was listening to this before bed, and I was almost asleep until I got to the end. I'm wide awake now. Great story, really chilling
Sameee. Now i got to find another creppypasta to fall alseep to
this one was well-written, a really good story
Wow! This is the most interesting story I’ve listened to in a long time. Really original and unpredictable. Great writing! Thank you!
It was truly horrifying, especially the moments of realization.
@@EmilyXiong1999my favorite was when the protag realizes the doppelganger must be lying flat on the ground at the top of the stairs. The mental image this conjured was horrifying. 10/10
Man…. This one was built different…… wow is all I can say. 10/10. I was laughing so hard at the ending I was kinda working and not 100% focused so when she was like “it was my husbands doppelgänger” I was like duh….. like I knew that the moment he showed up….. but then when it was like “he was repeating my husbands last words” I was like wow I’m an idiot for not realizing. 😂 this one was amazing! Please more from this writer! I literally dropped my jaw like 3 times because I was totally captured by every detail of this story. I literally watched this movie play out in my head perfectly clear. There was no scene of this story where I didn’t watch it like a movie…. Perfect.
I have to agree that this story was well written. I actually visualised everything happening. Creeped me out,.this should be a movie lol.
Thanks again for the upload creepy.
Now I'm almost too scared to sleep . I haven't heard a story as great as this one in a while.
Lunchtime storytime! Hell yeah! Have a good day everybody! And thanks for the story Creeps!
" Closer to a commercial break 😅. "
So it's been years since I've listened to a story that was legit terrifying or unpredictable. This one, however, is both. Love it. And the delivery? So good!
How is this not a blumhouse movie already. We get stupid movies like slotherhouse but not this stuff.
I busted out laughing when she said she hates feet😂
She didn’t have enough common sense to show her husband the polaroids and explain thats why she got distant?
Wild story! Definitely wish we had another part to this! People are so creative. Giving me " Us" vibes
Bravo!!!! I am one of those people who usually guesses the plot/ending. There were a few times, especially at the end when the husband was dead, that i screamed out, "What?!?" My neighbor in my apartment building texted me to see if I was okay.
Well done!!! I say. Hear hear. This was the first video I have watched from this channel and I am hooked!
OMG, what a story! Very well written. I was on the edge of my seat. Bravo.
Perfect for my drive home from work!
Thank you Creeps MC pasta for the awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration, definitely a good one.🖤🖤🖤🖤
Maaaan, I know it's a creepypasta but I was really hoping for a happy ending.
Freaking brilliant! I got the goosebumps.
I really need a part 2. It can’t just end there 😮
I always fall asleep to these
Ikr? Soothing voice! But I can’t sleep on some stories as I’m too enthralled and NEED to hear the end before I can relax…hahaha😝😜
The photos and note she got were still in her car. She never brought it up to her husband, so when he got the same things she shouldn’t have called. Just texted pics of the photos and note she got. Communication would’ve opened up immediately.
you'd think so, but people are generally less intelligent in the moment than you give them credit for
Jeeeeez I never actually get scared from creepypastas, or it has happened maybe 2 times total, but this one reached all of my fears. Bravo👏👏
I like the MC's wit and humor, charming lady
19:04 This would be the point where you realize whatever is going on is seriously messed up and you need to leave
Just finished, ok, time to relocate with the quickness 😅
I have never heard of anything like this happening in the real world thankfully.
Awesome a new Creepypasta Story I would like to see new Creepypasta Christmas Specials too
Yessss! That would be awesome!
@@frankiebaby5770
Yeah I agree I love Creepypasta Christmas Specials I even draw The Creepypasta Characters and Holiday Specials with them
This was a very good story for the wee hours of the morning, between 4:00 am and 5:00. I laid in my bed feeling the escalating tension this story ignited…
I struggled to get through this. One of the most dreadful settings ive heard in a creepypasta
Rehousing spiders while listening 😊
🖤❤🕸🕷🕸❤🖤
@@kimicappiello5480got 16
Pets or unwanted house guests?
Where?
Your brave
This story confused me
Spoilers…
Was she only alive because the neighbor got there before her doppelgänger was able to kill her? Were the two doppelgängers in it together? So now she will never be safe as her doppelgänger will be hunting for her?
Wish someone would shed some light too. Were there two doppelgangers playing some sort of game. Had she somehow killed her husband and couldn't face what she did. Did see see him get killed and the rest was her mind breaking up, especially when no one else in the hospital room noticed him?
I'm lost too! Creepy indeed but...🥴😊
My Ex-hubby said that "if a man wants to cheat, he will FIND the time and a way."
just starting this creepypasta, i’m 3:33 in and it’s just been hitting a little too close to home for me 😭 excited for it to get scary now wtf
Excellent 😊
Not gonna lie I paused it a few times as this was creepy.
This one was actually chilling! Haven’t heard a story like this is a while.
Just send him the photos of his doppelganger God its so easy.
Well it’s not because as soon as she realised that was the thing to do, he blocked her? I don’t see what you’re saying
this was spooky! omg
Great story. Great narration.
Been tryna fall asleep all night n now I finally can💜💜💜
Sleep, the unholy truce between consciousness and the abyss, where nightmares wear masks and the echoes of forgotten fears dance in the moonlight.
My insomnia was a nightmare in itself. I’m cured now. I must say, I really enjoy my psychedelic dreams. I l👀k forward to revisiting my little parallel universe…it seems as though I have two different lives with two sets of friends and my home is the same but different decor and many people that I knew before they passed! There’s usually a friendly gathering or function where we talk about things, tell jokes, wear posh clothing, sometimes, I can’t find my top or my bottoms and walk around as a host as if everything is fine!! Hmmm🤔
One thing that niggles me in my dreams is always searching for my first beloved car, then when I find it, I can’t find the keys, or I can’t actually drive it if i do!!! 🫤
There’s a mystery guy who is so lovely and tries to hook up, but I’m aware that in my real life I’m married and can’t be unfaithful, even though I’m curious, I’ve never given in! We kissed once, just a lip peck and I felt exhilarated and even after I woke up, I kept thinking about it and had a great day! 🤭
Thanx for sharing your interesting and original work…I’ve always enjoyed reading literature on the eccentric side! 😁
I love the details. Really submerges you into the house.
What a fucking good story. Thanks creeps
Great work
First one of yours I have listened to I really enjoyed it I subscribed straight away.
Huge fan of this one. Scared the shit out of me
This was amazing!!!
As excellent a story as that was, and I really enjoyed it, for the protagonist to take that long to realize that her husband had been toast for awhile is a bit well, stupid. Of course he was. And that creature which I’ve heard similar tales of does it just for fun. Because when you can, why not?
Beware the night, for it conceals more than just darkness.
@@SinisterShadows1
😮…no way!! It’s the poet again!
👏👏👏😁✌️
Maaan I was just 20 minutes in. You spoiled it big time
The husband wasn't dead for a long time. The "doppelganger" didn't have access to the husband so it went after the wife. It copied the wife in their encounters. The husband was replaced around the same time the wife was supposed to be. The husband called out "Get out of my room", which isn't something you yell at someone in your house. It makes more sense if he yelled it in a hotel room he was staying at after finding those photos. It showed up at the hospital as a farewell and to gloat. Key evidence is that the wife knew her husband's schedule was too tight for her to comprehend when he'd have time for an affair. That would mean if time was taken out of his schedule to be copied and replaced, then it would be noticed by her if not more people. The plan that unfolded divided the two up to permit near simultaneous replacement.
@@russiannpcbot6408
That’s very Matrixy!
Glitchy too!! 😲
😉✌️💖
One of the best stories I’ve heard in a long time. 👍🏽
Its usually a co-worker 😢 I detest cheaters. We shall see in this story.
I think this story was more of a fringe case, don't gotta worry about this happening to you too much.
@@-JaggedGrace-🤣🤣👏🤗
Don't tell my wife I'm sleeping with a woman in my office... I work from home.
@@russiannpcbot6408
Turn on the lights…I think she might be the one ☝️ you’re sleeping with!! Lols 😝✌️🤦♀️
Spoookeee wow who would’ve thought but then again how else could everything turn out 👏👏👏
In the cloak of fog, the mistress of the night conceals her forbidden liaisons, a wraith-like enchantress whose secrets are written in the chilling breath of clandestine whispers.
lol what
there is such a thing as using too many flowery words to describe things and this is it.
my lord. the ending gave me chills
spoilers
especially when she said that the thing was repeating his last words.
Studying for med assistant exam while listening 😊
Good luck with acing this!!! Well done, very admirable work.
🤗👏👏🇦🇺💕
@@kathrynbillinghurst188 thank you !! ☺️
I love how the title isn't even a creepypasta and I know it's a bad idea but it's gonna be far worse than it seems
Wow! This was great.
This was so good. I cant sleep 😅
This author is amazing i absolutely love christians work
I love this. At first, i thought it was a cereal killer husband. She could of been looking at previous wife photo. But eventually i realized it was a entity trying to get a victim. The moment the lady had bloodlust. That was the give away. I figured they pulled in husband. But i didn't know she use the same tactic.
Love your narrations story was well written great job man
Excellent writing here. Not always the case.
Listening to this while working third alone in a big building feels horrifying lmao
That was disturbingly interesting, I like it, good and twisted, thanks Creeps I really enjoyed it!🤯😳🤪💯❤️
Nice one
the twist was amazing
This was super creepy 😮😮
Great story
Noo the husband😭
Good story
Love your stories. This one confused me
I think they both had doppelgängers, evil supernatural versions of themselves and they set each other up.
@@Amy-tg8spthat’s what i was thinking but at the end he says “my husband’s dying words” so like did the husband die?
I think the being went after the husband…. It “recorded” the husband before killing him and taking his body..
In the shadows of uncertainty, confusion breeds monsters that devour clarity, leaving only the bones of doubt behind.
Wow 👏👏🤗
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
Yah darn rite
Finally Im early for once!
But what is the reward?
Am I special now?
Very special
Hi, Musafirghayrmaeruf1, You have a very sultry, sexy, voice!!! What nationality are you?
26:34 it just got good :)
thank you sir this made me get up from attempting to sleep and sit on edge many times, terrifying fr holy 😂
Wow! Great story, Sir. Thank you sooo much. It's sad. I honestly feel for the lady. And her hubby loved her greatly. He died thinking she cheated on him and didn't love him anymore. 😢
Is there a second part? If there is , please see if you can read it to us. We hungrily await your storytelling, Sir.
Wtf great story for you so you spoilt it for everyone else?so he died and she didn't cheat? Smh
Damn that was scary. Subscribed
I have waaaaaaaaaaay more questions than answers 😂
Vicious and amazing
Jesus be a tap dancing flute player! SO EXCITED FOR THE NEW VIDEO! I love you friend. You are seriously my favorite!
That last part didn’t really need to be explained like it was, would’ve been better if it was just left unsaid
YES LOVE THIS!!!!!!
Been subed for years
I’m still shook-
That was goooood
I LOVE Doppelganger stories !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is scary af!! I had to take a break lol.
"Almost 50 years before the world events that led to the formation of the Terran Federation, and 70 years before the invention of the Cherenkov Drive that gave us mastery over the vastness of interstellar space, the Arachnid invasion of Earth had already began", Colonel DuBois addressed the steel faced cadets of the Terran Mobile Infantry in the class. "They arrived here as spies and saboteurs, wreaking isolated havoc here and there. He picked up an old newspaper clipping that told the story of a doomed couple from 2022 who had their bodies taken over by Arachnid saboteurs. "This pair right here, after taking over and killing a couple living in California, attempted next to infiltrate an atomic research base of the former United States Air Force, where they were neutralized by members of the Department of Defense security forces. The meteor which had devastated Buenos Aires was sent by the Arachnid fleet only after they discovered that we possessed the Cherenkov Drive and were already building starships, so they attempted a full on invasion"...
Este lugar emana una energía siniestra. Cada rincón cuenta una historia de horror. ¿Cuál es tu peor pesadilla? 💭😱
who else wants to hear creeps mcpasta do an updated jeff the killer story!!!
No one. That's a childish and stupid story. The Internet Historian did the best rendition.
bro that ending O_O
This was awful and amazing!
I was washing dishes but had to stop because the tingle going up my spine was too strong on 29:35 !
*SPOILERS*
I love the feeling of being scared by scary stories and creepypastas, BUT just last week I came home, and there was big muddy shoeprints from entrance to kitchen and back so that part of the story REALLY got me giggle and wiggle! The scary thing is _I moved to live alone_ just few weeks ago, after living safely with someone for nine years.. I shall put bear traps on the doorway before leaving next time 😂
Moral of the story? Confront your spouse with the "evidence" immediately
That was actually scary asf
this is so fucking scary😭😭😭😭
The monogs are at it again.
She needs to stop the cap ! Lol