"Thank god for that caveman...He remembers the plan." Love that line so much. All he has left is the instincts he can hardly recall. Such good horror to remove every last thing you have at your disposal until you're left with only sheer instinct and hope.
This one’s going on my “FAVORITE HORROR STORIES” List, ASAP!!! - It’s got all the things I love: Ocean, Caves, Survival, and most importantly…THE HORROR 😳
it was an awesome story. claustrophobic, paranoid, rageful, mystic, and an unexplored deep lore. i hope there is a sequel to it. with the plot of hunted becomes the hunter and probably instead of killing it gets his pound of flesh back!
This is an amazingly written story! You narrate the emotion SO well! I listen to you regularly, along with a few other pages, and this is one of the best stories I've heard in ages. Thank you so much!!
Had a feeling this was Christian Wallis. Every time I hear a story on here and think to myself, “oh wow this is a good one,” I check the author and it’s always him
Really appreciate the frequent long stories. For a few months I’ve listened to plenty of your narrations almost everyday on Spotify and RUclips but they seem to never run out. I truly admire your decade long dedication to this channel ❤
I love being a Lovecraft fan and picking up on small details that the author leaves in the story. To everyone, else the angler fish mouth man symbolism must’ve been “oooo creepy sea deity” but to us I’m sure we all started thinking “DAGON DAGON DAGON…THATS TOOOOOTALLY DAGON” XD Keep it up man, loved ya narrations for years
Love the way you narrate stories and the fact your ambience music never uses sudden screamers, I can tune into any of your videos while doing stuff knowing I won't have a stupid jumpscare smacked out of nowhere and I really appreciate that.
Did this story make anyone else think of the movie "The Descent"? I kept picturing scenes from the movie in certain parts lol. Great story, because I loved that movie.
Oooh, that was a good one. I usually don't like the longer ones because they end up being hard to follow and a bunch of meandering between the start and end. But this one did a really good job having a full story. The end is one that gives you chills up your spine.
For a little while towards the end. All i could imagine with the anglerfish on the coins. Also the small tunnels. Was the merman from Cabin in the Woods.
Electrifying and viceral. So well explained that I pictured the whole story in my mind (lying in the dark at night) This would make a better movie then anything released this year.
I think it's hilarious he found gold and he's thinking in terms of Rent still. Home ownership is so hopefully expensive and out of reach that a treasure chest can't get us a house 😂.
A new story for my anniversary. Lol just what I love ......... Serious anxiety and shear terror. I can barely tolerate this kind of story, yet they are my favorite. Thanks for the years of entertainment. Truly enjoy your stories and the phenomenal delivery of your perfect narration. Bravo!!!!!
I loved this, extremely well-written and narrated story. Masterfully done-even! Fantastic atmosphere & music! Great fantasy, escapist fare! Love the Fantastic-looking Artwork cover Cave photo too! 4 Stars all around with this story, narration & artwork! KUDOS!
Imagine that. For the last couple of days I have been looking and thinking that I needed to hear something from you and BAM here you show up in my feed !! How’s that for manifesting ??
I never thought I was claustrophobic until I’ve heard tales like these…and til I went to have an MRI. That was feet first, not head in. I always thought I’d love to explore underwater caves. Thank you for allowing me to understand I may not be equipped. 😂
I really love your narrations brother. Thank so, so much for what you do. I don't know if you're aware of what your RUclips channel does for so many people all around the world but I assure you, you are a true gem amongst stones. Thank you and God bless you bro. 🙏🏼
I should have definitely not listened to this one at 2:30 am, while hanging my wet clothes on a dark hallway that stands between my patio and my garden and has no lightbulbs 😅
Wow, good thing you didn’t turn back in the face of possible death and risk getting your socks wet! That could’ve been embarrassing … to … somebody. Why would that be embarrassing? This chatacter’s logic is impressive.
GOD's I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your voice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Treasure seekers can't be bothered working for a living ! Why didn't he try binding his chest with those torn nets ??? Maybe they were torn to shreds ?????
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"Thank god for that caveman...He remembers the plan."
Love that line so much. All he has left is the instincts he can hardly recall. Such good horror to remove every last thing you have at your disposal until you're left with only sheer instinct and hope.
This one’s going on my “FAVORITE HORROR STORIES” List, ASAP!!!
- It’s got all the things I love:
Ocean, Caves, Survival, and most importantly…THE HORROR 😳
it was an awesome story. claustrophobic, paranoid, rageful, mystic, and an unexplored deep lore. i hope there is a sequel to it. with the plot of hunted becomes the hunter and probably instead of killing it gets his pound of flesh back!
bros glazing
Yeah I too wish the protagonist gets back at the monster and tortures him to death
@@4460N bro has never heard of a review before
This is an amazingly written story! You narrate the emotion SO well! I listen to you regularly, along with a few other pages, and this is one of the best stories I've heard in ages. Thank you so much!!
Lmao I think bro squished the monster by falling on him. Probably broke his fall too. Hilarious, love it
Had a feeling this was Christian Wallis. Every time I hear a story on here and think to myself, “oh wow this is a good one,” I check the author and it’s always him
your pfp disturbed me until i worked out what it was 😂
Really appreciate the frequent long stories. For a few months I’ve listened to plenty of your narrations almost everyday on Spotify and RUclips but they seem to never run out. I truly admire your decade long dedication to this channel ❤
Thanks!
Reminds me of one of Lovecraft's stories. It's about a guy getting lost in a cave and hunted by something.
I love your stories and your style of bringing them to life! So excited for another one!
I love being a Lovecraft fan and picking up on small details that the author leaves in the story. To everyone, else the angler fish mouth man symbolism must’ve been “oooo creepy sea deity” but to us I’m sure we all started thinking
“DAGON DAGON DAGON…THATS TOOOOOTALLY DAGON” XD
Keep it up man, loved ya narrations for years
Love the way you narrate stories and the fact your ambience music never uses sudden screamers, I can tune into any of your videos while doing stuff knowing I won't have a stupid jumpscare smacked out of nowhere and I really appreciate that.
I'm claustrophobic & I could feel the panic it was torture I couldn't even fall asleep🥲. You sir are to good at what you do
The bad part is that it's not varied. It's just bleak with no mix of emotions.
Did this story make anyone else think of the movie "The Descent"? I kept picturing scenes from the movie in certain parts lol. Great story, because I loved that movie.
Hey, Creeps. I'm a huge fan of yours. I've been watching your videos for years and I'll support you forever! Keep being awesome! ✊️
its me, i am hunting the person in the cave
Oooh, that was a good one. I usually don't like the longer ones because they end up being hard to follow and a bunch of meandering between the start and end. But this one did a really good job having a full story. The end is one that gives you chills up your spine.
I have used this story to fall asleep every night for the past week. Something about it soothes me, the writing is fantastic.
This story is so damn good. It is very well written, I love the author's style.
This has got to be the best creepypasta I've ever listened to, hats off Mr. Creeps!
This one made me hold my breath. Really great find on this story. Thanks to you and the author
That was So. Freaking. Good. Great narration! 😊
With that ending, possibility of a pt2
For a little while towards the end. All i could imagine with the anglerfish on the coins. Also the small tunnels. Was the merman from Cabin in the Woods.
Ayyyy hapy to care a vid so early! Love your stuff man, your stories keep me company at work all night
Truly a great story and narration
Oh I'd be pissed lol
Electrifying and viceral.
So well explained that I pictured the whole story in my mind (lying in the dark at night)
This would make a better movie then anything released this year.
I think it's hilarious he found gold and he's thinking in terms of Rent still.
Home ownership is so hopefully expensive and out of reach that a treasure chest can't get us a house 😂.
I felt myself holding my breath 🫁, at the part about being upsidedown and wanting to pass out.
Love it. The end was super awesome.
Did he go back with a priest armed with a shotgun , 1 lantern and a pistol ? Find out in.....
Congrats! I became so claustrophobic listening to this that I couldn't finish it, and that's high praise. Excellent writing and oration!
25:54 with the captions got me to laugh harder then it should😂
This was amazing, props to the writer and narrator😊😊😊
halfway in i think this would make a really good short film
A new story for my anniversary. Lol just what I love ......... Serious anxiety and shear terror. I can barely tolerate this kind of story, yet they are my favorite. Thanks for the years of entertainment. Truly enjoy your stories and the phenomenal delivery of your perfect narration. Bravo!!!!!
Anxiety hitting me 😨
PLEASE let this story CONTINUE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT !
Amazing voice from our favorite british narrator!
Alex
Agreed
Monster wants to have another go, he got it on its off day
Great story Christian! Awesome narration Creeps! Love listening day or night!
I loved this, extremely well-written and narrated story. Masterfully done-even! Fantastic atmosphere & music! Great fantasy, escapist fare! Love the Fantastic-looking Artwork cover Cave photo too! 4 Stars all around with this story, narration & artwork! KUDOS!
Dude that was a fucking masterpiece
Probably the best story of the year so far, thank you!! Long time fan!!!
He didn't tell the police about all the clothes down there? Probably could have helped solve a few missing person cases.
I usually put these on to sleep but I listened too much and stayed up the whole time now I’m terrified
The creature did the buy now pay later scheme
The background music adds 2 the eerieness in the narration. Always have background music.
4:30 "6 month rent in my hand" Love that.
Omg a day ago! 😍 my heart is a flutter. Thank you
Amazing story, hope someone writes pt when he goes back and tries to kill him.
The claustrophobia was so well written that the monster almost pales in comparison.
Though the monster part was very good too.
hello from the tops casino in New vegas
That was a great story, the details, the horror, i lve your narration Creeps, thank you again 😳🤯🫶🫶👍💯
I just watched some videos about FNaF 2 theories, and boy have things changed!!!
Them gold shillings gonna get u in trouble everytime
Love this one dude thanks for making my day :D
Imagine that. For the last couple of days I have been looking and thinking that I needed to hear something from you and BAM here you show up in my feed !! How’s that for manifesting ??
I never thought I was claustrophobic until I’ve heard tales like these…and til I went to have an MRI. That was feet first, not head in. I always thought I’d love to explore underwater caves. Thank you for allowing me to understand I may not be equipped. 😂
He is angry not because of the angler entity.
But his greediness alone brought him there and caused all of it.
That creature is ducking rude.
I really love your narrations brother. Thank so, so much for what you do. I don't know if you're aware of what your RUclips channel does for so many people all around the world but I assure you, you are a true gem amongst stones.
Thank you and God bless you bro. 🙏🏼
I should have definitely not listened to this one at 2:30 am, while hanging my wet clothes on a dark hallway that stands between my patio and my garden and has no lightbulbs 😅
Oh hell yeah, a fresh story just in time for my bedtime routine! :D
edit: nevermind. didnt sleep ;-;
Couple of coins just don't feel worth it, gold or not
2:19 Did you help the man?
Wow, good thing you didn’t turn back in the face of possible death and risk getting your socks wet! That could’ve been embarrassing … to … somebody. Why would that be embarrassing? This chatacter’s logic is impressive.
Amazing story. ❤
Ah! I'm so happy! I memorise all the new ones! 🎉
Awesomeness as always CreepsMcPasta. Thanks for another awesome narration my Friend
Love your videos mate
I’m seriously creeped out right now, feels like someone’s standing behind me! 😱
3 Places You Can't Go, and the people who went there anyway.
I need more of this
Were the gold coins real? Or were they just an induced hallucination from the creature?
Powerful ending
Best I've heard lately!
Pro tip: if you find a coin with what is clearly a deep one on it, leave it the hell alone.
I ain't no taco man that's for sure
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Are you a Nacho man???
Why wouldn't you climb over the cave or crawl to shore.. urgh sso frustrating
These stories really help me while I work I love them
Ok this one was really good
great!
even after all this time i still have sweet nightmares listening to your voice..thank you foreverything creeps and to many more 🍻
GOD's I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your voice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Treasure seekers can't be bothered working for a living !
Why didn't he try binding his chest with those torn nets ??? Maybe they were torn to shreds ?????
Youre doing a lot of stories ,one after the other. Thanks ❤🎉
YOU NEED 600M SUBS!!!
Sorry guys it was just me
Well... what you all up in da cave fo?! ?!?!😂😅
Yogi the bear gone rabid
Had me on the edge of my seat!
Thank you CreepsMcPasta for the awesome pasta. Definitely a good one.🖤🖤
omg yes cave horror yeeessssss
This was great
keep up the good work🙌
Did get get out with the gold tho?
This one is good
This story makes me nervous and I'm not even there
Fish hooks and 1¢.
😎👍🏿