[SFM] Intruder
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- Опубликовано: 18 сен 2024
- These fellas were just minding their own business. And then he... showed up.
Discord: / discord
Music:
Tactical Stealth Music - • Tactical Stealth Music...
Tom Clancy's The Division Hunter - • Tom Clancy's The Divis...
Metro Exodus Yamantau Cannibals - • Yamantau Cannibals (fe...
Dying Light 1 School exploration theme - • Dying light: School ex...
Sites used for sound design
SoundJay - www.soundjay.com/
FreeSFX - www.freesfx.co...
Adobe - www.adobe.com/...
RUclips
and a few more that I can't think of right now
People that helped:
@WaylonTF2007 - Voice Actor
@Flynnimations - Dialog script assistant
@lolripk - Many tips and advice for the animation
@ColonelFanzipantzen - Many tips and advice for the animation
@Dominzki - Many tips and advice for the animation
@TheHypedScoot - Many tips and advice for the animation
Amadeus / amadeussfm - Some thumbnail help
#sfm #tf2 #teamfortress2 #sourcefilmmaker #animation #3danimation
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It finally feels great to not let all of you down when it came to a large project. And I'm proud that everyone now can see a story I created. Now I know that there are a lot of problems with this animation. Certain lighting issues, way too much echo for audio, lot's of audio cutoffs, etc. And I definitely agree that certain things are kinda annoying here and there, but I guess for a 1st project it works in a way.
Also for those who wanna join the Discord: discord.gg/yxr9Dbn3
none of those are too noticeable, and they seem few and far between. this is definitely the best thing I've seen made with sfm this whole year. keep up the good work.
I really didn’t notice anything wrong but I have 2 things I would change.
1. Why are you using pipe bombs as flash bangs
2. Make the characters longer steps
Other than that I like 👍
@@llamadollest9702 tbh there wasn't any flashbang model in TF2 style, plus during that time of searching for one I gave up and decided to use the pipe bomb in it's place. I'll definitely try doing longer steps
That makes sense
I feel like the echo makes it way better, since it actually feels more realistic
These gray and black henchmen men design, reminds me of the Incredibles
I'm pretty sure everyone does lmao
Well that makes sense. SFM was based on the animating software used by Pixar and was developed by some of the same people
I though I was the only one thinking that
I mean, the TF2 artstyle is based heavily on The Incredibles
Super tactical man vs army of Amazon workers 😎
You couldn't put this any better lmao
The first 2 guys were smarter than most evil henchmen.
Ngl they were
MVP goes to all the cans laying around the place
Good thing these morons are lazy and don’t clean up after themselves
Legit. Play of the game goes to all of them, but also to the henchmen that don't care about cleanliness
I love how all the guns look like they belong in the tf2 universe
Some of them do
STG44 def did not look like it was from tf2 universe, looked like it was imported from a CoD game.
i'd be weird if you had something straight from Fallout 4 in a TF2 character's hands
@@evagineer9165 the STG44 is in TF2 style
@@TheSlavGamer And the BAR too
I love the sound design, makes it sound like it actually should in the big rooms they fight in.
true, I do know I kinda overdid it but I think for a 1st time that it isn't horrible
“After so much time in development, hopefully it was worth the wait”
Beautiful animation
yeah I hope it was worth the wait lmao
The sound design really elevates this project fucking phenomenal.
I think for a 1st try it's definitely ok
@@TheSlavGamer FIRST TRY?! Hot damn well it was very immersive. I don't know jack when it comes to this stuff but good stuff nonetheless.
Im glad dominski posted about this cause i wouldnt have found this any other way
He's a real chad
It’s really great to see this in it’s complete form. The cinematography, choreography and sound design is immaculate. I know it’s the bare minimum to make a shootout engaging but man you really knocked it out the park! Best of luck for bigger and more ambitious projects!
@@ColonelFanzipantzen thanks a lot legend
I really felt bad for the first two guys who got killed, all they wanted was a drink.
I like how this has the right amount of humor and action mixed together, great work for a first big project. Keep it up 👍
Well at least the guy who was listening to music somewhat is okay?
@@WindiChilliwack He is, definitely
1 dude cleared a whole facility. Dang, last guy should've had that in the bag...
True
This gives INSANE Madness Combat vibes and I mean that in the absolute best way possible
10/10 man, very well done
ngl. From the Madness Combat vids I've seen I can tell where you're coming from with this lmao
This was amazing and definitely deserves more views! This was very well animated. Not bad voice acting, too. And this is just part 1? Can't wait to see more!
Yup. Trust me I wanna go even bigger and better for the part 2
hmm one critic i can give is that, unless you plan on making the "intruder" a super solider, make him get hurt more so he is more relatable also give him some heavy breathing after intense combat. makes him more human.
That's definitely the plan for part II, he just has plot armor in the 1st part
Average GMod realism video:
Literally tho
ngl I do see it lmao
amazing animation man! I really like the lighting and the smoothness about the video
can't wait for part 2 :)
You will have to wait a while for it, but I'm pretty sure you're patient enough lol
This is an incredible piece of work that inspires greatly to strive for reaching your levels of lighting and cinematic skills, *especially* because it's your first big project. Congrats on completing this bro and can't wait for more!
Many thanks
I feel like there needs to be a team of these unofficial TF2 characters (The Deathmatch Mercenary, the Henchman, Agent Gunn, the Janitor, and now the Intruder) that work behind the scenes in the TF2 universe and the mercs have no idea about them, because these fan designs for TF2 classes/characters I'm seeing are impressive.
@@enclavehere.7995 true
Bro really used a pipebomb model from L4D2 for a flashbang instead of just using a CSGO one 💀
CSGO one imo would be a bit too much
It’s amazing art work I love it i have not seen a good military or anything like this kind of sfms
trust me, I wanna do my best to popularize this kind
I am very proud of you, man! Not many people can say they made a 8m animation and this was already very promissing. I'll look forward for more of your work! :D
thx man. If it weren't for you I think this wouldn't even exist
People don’t usually get muffle and reverb down on the same dialogue, and you’ve got it extremely crisp, well done
thx
A Tier Voice Acting
the VA did his absolute best, and he never dissapointed
Great job to you for your camera work and sounds, and to Waylonpk for his voice acting.
Waylon's the GOAT
Congrats Slavy, it was a nice experience following the behind the scenes development from the beginning. It turned out Superb for your level experience, I hope I will get a chance to participate with the next part when it comes out. And congrats with 1k Subs
Thanks a lot man
This was great, I can tell you worked on it for a long time. Hope it gets way more recognition.
Same
RUclips randomly recommended me this, I'll be following your career witb great interest.
RUclips the GOAT
I love how the 6 henchmen are using WW2 guns
@@CristianMonserrate-wo2rk there's a whole reason behind it, and part II is gonna uncover that
Damn, this reminds me Dominski's meet the Merc's animations where it was just the faceless grunts of bith factions duking it out. Got directed here by lolripk and you just earned anotha sub!
@@Ashraff-vt1kl i guess in a way you could say that video was an inspiration
@@TheSlavGamer As they say, keep on cooking man. You got potential
Super captivating and awesome! Cannot wait for part 2!
thx a bunch
I fear no man but that thing...
@@SealTf it SCARES me!
@@TheSlavGamer i think heavy could easily knockout him
@@TheSlavGamer yeah🔥
Average Trepang2 mission
Subject 106 rides again
I can tell what you mean lmao
This animation is like seeing my kids grow up, im proud of you keep going👍
thx
This is actually pretty good well done
thx
¡INTRUDER ALERT RED SPY IS IN THE BASE!!
except it's not a Spy lmao
Metro: Exodus music was really good here.
it was a MUST to use it. I didn't play all of the Metro games for nothing
Dude cooked for us and thought we wouldn't notice. New sub! Can't wait for more goated SFMs bro!
🤫, no one needs to know lmao. Also thx
goes hard, cant wait for the next one
Yup
the gun sounds are great
without them this animation wouldn't have a soul
some of the walking animations were a bit stiff but overall this is some high quality shit man. Ive never seen these human models used before, and the fact that you put in Actual Lucky Strike cigarettes is wild and funny lmao
Tbh this was my 1st time doing walking animations and overall action so it makes sense why it's just so, off. But still thanks for the compliment
@@TheSlavGamer first time doing any of this stuff? my brother in christ you are GOING places
Pretty good! Always awesome to see the grey henchman models get some love! Im definitely intrigued to see what part two brings!
I definitely wanna spread some love for those models
Great animation, good scripting, boundless potential. Only rough patch was the audio, which is to be fair one of the hardest parts. I might recommend giving more characters helmets/masks to explain the metallic echoing of the dialogue. Otherwise, great work! Keep it up!
There will be more behind the reason why some are with just their regular hats meanwhile others have helmets. Part 2 is definitely gonna tell you about it in some way
@@TheSlavGamer Can’t wait! Keep up the good work man, I am genuinely super excited!
Love the Wilhelm scream you snuck in there!
Super video brate, ja samo ovakve sfm skilove mogu da sanjam 😅
Ne brini, doci ce vrijeme
I feel bad, that that guys didn't go out for that drinks.
Same here, but as you can tell the Intruder at least tried to make them surrender, turns out they wouldn't
I don't know why, but the fact you gave one of the henchman using a Revolver a cowboy hate, sent my sides into orbit.
Well I thought I'd be funny, but it also has a key role in the story
You earned this sub. Keep up the good work 👏
thx friend
I love it! Amazing sounds and visuals. Hate that you blueballed us lol but oh well! Cant wait for part 2!
I hope you'll be patient enough for part 2 lmao
Love how they use every conceivable gun
Just some ideas, try working on easing in and out, especially with melees and movement.
Also maybe try making the deaths initially snappier, when headshoted a quick head snap back, followed by a slower fall to the ground.
Great animation man!
I'll definitely try to refine my animation for future projects, since it's my 1st time doing something huge like this
The History of One and Three Cans of Soda
Legit
10/10 animation
7/10 voice acting (Poor quality little variety)
10/10 SFX
I agree that there should've been more variety, but since I didn't have anyone else other than just 1 dude to voice act it became an issue, but still thx
Bro all the henchmens jaws are sharp.
@@KhurtTininggal what looksmaxxing looks like after 3 months of use
@@TheSlavGamer hahaha yes bro why are they all henchmen instead of being super models or actors.
Good stuff 👍
thx
Some real No One Lives Forever mob talk vibe
for the Intruder himself you mean?
This was really engaging! You did great!
The only real complaint I have aside from the voices is that some of the movements (like the Intruder smacking the headphones guard with the gun stock) felt like they didn’t have much impact/force. Despite that I thoroughly enjoyed your SFM! Well done good sir.
@@woolyhotcocoa i appreciate it! And yeah I get you, but that is due.to my lack of skill as of now and the 1st time doing such a big project like this
@@TheSlavGamer Well if your first project is this good, I’m bloody excited for the next one! Feel free to take as long as you need.
Great job!
This was awesome :)
Thx
I truly love these goons xD I feel so bad for them
Dw, some of them will get out alive
I think the cowboy henchman was my favourite honestly
I'd say so too
1:37 why is bro doing the slickback tho
@@Thousand_of_Good_Deeds because I suck at animating lmao
I like your animation so much, that I'll sub to you to see when the second part is made, or other good animations you make
I definitely appreciate it
Silky Smooth animations, okay choreography, okay script, voice lines need work, crispy sound design.
6 1/2 /10 Keep it up 👍
Trust me, for a 1st time it's always gonna be a hit or miss. I definitely plan on improving from this point forward
@@TheSlavGamer True enough! And I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
At least the intruder was kind to the dude who was jammin to beats, simply buttstock KO
he always tries to make people surrender, but for the most part they don't listen. The dude who was jamming got a free pass lmao
This should have more views
let's hope that YT will be kind enough
@@TheSlavGamer yeah
You ever need a voice actor for anything even dying voices I'd love to work with you. This came out great
It would be a pleasure
Ooo Metro music in an SFM animation, nice, also nice job tho sometimes the walking felt weird
Wanted to use that opportunity to use it so I did, also yeah ik that sometimes the walking is weird, but that's due to me doing the walking animations for the 1st time
@@TheSlavGamer Hey for the first time it ain't bad, keep going my man I bet you'll get better at it, this already looked amazing
That's Amazing Man!
thx
Lil bit choppy, but overall an amazing animation, good work dude.
Eh, to be expected being my 1st project. Still though, thx
I really want henchmen win they just finished their shift and ready to grab a drink
@@HappyLifeTurtle ikr? Don't worry though, lot's of these dudes are gonna be alive and not killed off. Not ofc the ones that are dead, but different ones
Intruder alert Red Spy in The Base
A red spy is in the base!?
Very epik, much nice 👍
thx a bunch
Very well done
thx
great... Now I feel bad for the company...
You'll only feel bad for these guys, the actual owner has a huge messed up mind
So underrated (you got a sub)
thx for the sub
Audio is great
I appreciate the compliment
you gotta chill on the convolution reverb but otherwise rlly good shit
Yeah ik that I kinda went overboard with the reverb
Intruder alert. A red spy is in the base
Jokes aside, really nice
thx
Nice shit dude!
thx
its really well one animation, i really enjoyed watch this.
Just little bit sad, that Intruder doesnt get any hard, but i guess its cost more time on his wounded on him
Although, it is a fantastic sfm!
he will definitely deal with some wound later in part 2, not serious ones but still decent ones
The gas mask
If he used CS gas or something
They couldn't do anything
Any way... the janitar was spared his life
True, but he'd rather want for these dudes to surrender than use any form of gas
@@TheSlavGamer Ohhh I didn't expected you will comment
Thank you!!!
I love your movie!
Honeslty my only complain is the sound. You need to work on that, but else this is pretty good. Keep going man 👍
Well the 1st time doing anything in a big project is always gonna be kinda iffy so I understand yeah
@@TheSlavGamer Yeah I'm still there too
какая плавная анимация! надеюсь ты фидбека будет больше!!
I hope so too
shit lookin glorious
milina
Skill issue for the army
legit. Their training is weak
it feels like hunk from resivent evil 2
i'll say everything that i find quite bad
and all the good
for the good, the gun and all that's with it is great
i am bad at english so i prefer to not elaborate, but you know what i am talking about
for example 3:41
this can happen when a gun isn't uh..clean ..i hope its the right word for explaining it
the animation feels really soft, the dedication is good, it feels like a quite good story line and the main character presentation don't feels like he has complete god mode even tho he wasn't shot once..which could be okay but the time for example we're he wanted to use his radio and the shotgun guy shoot
6:29
it really feels like he would have shot him at last even just a scratch
remember also that gun make so much fkin noice, yet its also true that made a sfm with only those ennemy random jpeg guy scream would be annoying
yet for the bad
only 2 character, and one guy for the voice line is very womp womp
they don't feels like really human, like it feels more for the scenario of a scene, try to make some line with em and think "would that be legit if this story was real"
even tho the beggining was quite oke
1:18 a little bug on sound :(
1:30 i never had done animation and i know the suffering of walking animation, yet its a strange thing to say
but film yourself walking with shoes, like really, it help making you imagine how they could walk
animation is the same as any artist, its mostly imagination to creat something out of it
1:41 to 1:46 is good, like really, smooth
even the eyes, it feels human, cool to see those little thing
2:32 really feels like a movie stereotype
they could see him from a mile away so maybe he came from upside..but then why no sound, im just over complicating things, from a standpoint of badass entry its great
anyway music is good too
just minor fact and need more sprite here and there :>
you did good, be proud of yourself for making that sfm
Tbh lot's of this stuff that you numbered down mostly comes from the fact that this was my 1st big project. Yeah I definitely feel like the dialog and the echoy-ness and the animation as a whole could use some work, but bear in mind that prior to this I haven't done anything in this scope. But still I appreciate the critiques.
@@TheSlavGamer i am not here to say "hey your project is bad"
its very good, especially as you've probably learned a lot
in years for me i wanna make a video game, we all have our dream and story we want to tell
the only thing is to keep trying
good luck for your further project :>
and keep yourself well and safe
@@panillion it's all good dw
why does it sound like it was recorded in a bathroom
@@sdxq ngl i wish it was, but it's just that I put too much echo
@@TheSlavGamer oh... shit happens
Comment for the algorithm!
Heck yeah
:fire:
🔥🔥
Where did you get this intruder model, or did you make it yourself? It’s really cool. I also want to know what type of outfit this is.
@@ryanlim5940 it's on the SFM workshop
@@TheSlavGamer Thanks.
FAL, good choice
It's always a good choice, but not really the guy who was using it though...
If you ever need more voice actors lemme know, cuz id be interested 👀
Hop on my discord server and we might pull something up
Damn
truly
Comment cause ya I think this is really cool :3
well thank you
5:26 where did that shield come from?
Bruh, rewatch this thing again
Why does this look my character in roblox?
@@Gary-roninisme3 🤷♂️
Не Хейтер
В анимации много где не хватает инерции, и ходьба не выглядит как ходьба, а будто чел просто проигрывает анимации ходьбы и скользит по полу, звук я так понял специально сделан таким плоским, но кое-где это будто бы слишком
Но в целом очень даже хорошо
Tbh all of this comes down to me being still unexperienced and letting this project out doing EVERYTHING for the 1st time, so I definitely understand many of your critiques. Although I gotta thank you for them as well
@@TheSlavGamer ну да ты прав, всё приходит с опытом
This video contains a lot of stupid nonsense
like india movie
Honestly, on point description lmao