Scholarship Essay: Format, Examples and Don'ts

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  • Опубликовано: 21 июл 2024
  • An excellent scholarship essay becomes a necessity and the key to winning the money. In this video, I’ll share with you some of my biggest “don’ts” when it comes to writing and where to find some scholarship essay examples!
    Scholarship application essays often carry a TON of weight when deciding who will receive the scholarship but it’s not always easy to stand out in a crowd of applications. Even if your student fits the scholarship criteria exactly, they’re still likely to be one of a number of applicants with similar grades, accomplishments, community involvements, and aspirations.
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    P.S. International Students - This information is meant for US citizens and/or residents in the United States. While many of the tips will be helpful for you (i.e. how to write a well-written essay), we are not specialized in international student scholarships.

Комментарии • 22

  • @hello-nr2jz
    @hello-nr2jz 7 месяцев назад +67

    1. Get emotional, but not too much.
    2. Meet requirements (aka word count, answer all questions, deadline)
    3. Don't talk about overdine words (Percevierance, resilience, hardworking)
    4. Don't use filler words. (Don't be wordy!)
    5. Remove dead words like (Clearly, Obviously, Perhaps, somewhat, I believe, I think)
    6. Remove unnecessary transitional words.
    7. Proof read the essay. Yourself, and other qualified people.

    • @Fartun20225
      @Fartun20225 5 месяцев назад

      This helps thank, bt why do u think I have to remove dead word

    • @ericgol7
      @ericgol7 3 месяца назад

      perseverance*

  • @allthingsdualenrollment_RN
    @allthingsdualenrollment_RN 10 месяцев назад +30

    Thank you so much I've been procrastinating on writing a scholarship essay for this particular scholarship and these tips are super useful to help me just get started in general I have one scholarships in the past but for some reason this scholarship that I'm proceeding to apply to it's just very intimidating😂❤😅

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  10 месяцев назад +5

      If you tell yourself that you'll work on the essay for 5 minutes, it won't seem so daunting. You may work on it longer, but 5 minutes gets you to at least look at it and brainstorm ideas. Once you create your first rough draft, it will be a lot easier to work with.

  • @tnyecampos6695
    @tnyecampos6695 6 месяцев назад

    Thanks so much i'll definitely use these tips!!

  • @noahmurtland
    @noahmurtland Месяц назад +1

    Applying for scholarships post high schools finally able to go back to school

  • @ninawatkins4741
    @ninawatkins4741 10 месяцев назад

    Hi is membership all through college?

  • @allthingsdualenrollment_RN
    @allthingsdualenrollment_RN 10 месяцев назад +6

    My essay don't is don't copy and paste the essay and put in another essay Yes you can reuse essays for what people forget to do is tweak it and edit it so that the old essay fits to do as a prompt and word requirements

  • @dylanpickIe
    @dylanpickIe 6 месяцев назад +1

    Hi, this video helped a lot and made me rethink on how to write my essay. I am writing an essay about, "How has catholicism impacted my life?" in 1000 words. Do I write it in MLA format? Am I also allowed to include type of like bible verses in my essay? Thank you very much.

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  6 месяцев назад

      When quotes are used it uses up many words of the essay. It's best to share and reflect your personal story rather than rely on quotes/versus. That will make for a much stronger and impactful essay.

  • @supermax5000
    @supermax5000 6 месяцев назад

    If we are doing an essay that requires research on a topic, do we have to include citations and works cited since we don't know it?

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  6 месяцев назад +1

      That would be the best practice, however, you may want to contact the scholarship organization for advice on how to cite resources as they may prefer a different format.

  • @casey5669
    @casey5669 2 месяца назад

    I have question is it okay if I use Grammarly for scholarship essay?

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  2 месяца назад

      Yes. To review misspellings and grammar, Grammarly is a great tool!

  • @tinanyarkoa3137
    @tinanyarkoa3137 7 месяцев назад +1

    Hi
    I have gained admission and funding is a challenge.
    I have been assigned about 30 essays to write and qualify to fund my education. Please help.

    • @TheScholarshipSystem
      @TheScholarshipSystem  7 месяцев назад

      Check out our article on re-using essays. This may be helpful: thescholarshipsystem.com/blog-for-students-families/how-to-reuse-scholarship-essays-the-right-way/

    • @sharonkemboi193
      @sharonkemboi193 3 месяца назад

      Even I just got admission at NYFA

  • @Fatima-ol4iy
    @Fatima-ol4iy 6 месяцев назад +1

    Hi. I have to write a scholarship essay of 500 words regarding medine. What should i do

    • @esoradrose
      @esoradrose 6 месяцев назад +1

      1. Do research about medicine
      2. Brainstorm ideas on a piece of paper
      3. Choose a topic
      4.structure the essay
      5. Write the essay
      6. Proofread and then submit

    • @esoradrose
      @esoradrose 6 месяцев назад

      Hope this helps