As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
+Guy Stieglitz I just checked the link and it works. However, to be honest, you don't need the site. It is just a tool to help in the early stages of learning. Once you know how to paraphrase, it all happens in your mind and you do it quickly and efficiently.
Hi!! I went to the page and put the original text and my own text, but I don't know if what a I wrote is correct or not. Can you explain me how to use the page in more detail?
Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes): Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
Mr. Guy, that's the best lecture I have ever seen! I can see that you made a great efforts in this lecture, all the materials are well prepared. I viewed some videos , the lecturer just talk some fancy words to the viewers, which is not up to the academic level at all. thanks !!
My foundation studies program wants us to learn this but I don't understand what the teacher is saying after watching this video I get the idea of on how to paraphrase thx so much Mr Guy
Hi, I love your video and learned a lot from this video. I have a question, How could you get synonyms of the word after you click it? Can you tell me the way of setting?
Mark the word that you want a synonym for and then right-click. You should see a list of words if there are any available. Click on the word you think is best. Let me know if that works for you.
Should we name the site from where we were paraphrasing just like the source giving ? And in case of assignment writing, should I add that citation in the reference portion?
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like "garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
+Muhammad Saddique Summary writing is simply capturing the main points of a text. The focus here is the MAIN points. The summary is usually shorter than the text that is being summarized because not all details make the summary. The summary should be in your own words. Here is something from OWL Perdue at owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/563/01/ Paraphrasing involves putting a passage from source material into your own words. A paraphrase must also be attributed to the original source. Paraphrased material is usually shorter than the original passage, taking a somewhat broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly. Summarizing involves putting the main idea(s) into your own words, including only the main point(s). Once again, it is necessary to attribute summarized ideas to the original source. Summaries are significantly shorter than the original and take a broad overview of the source material.
As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
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I am really suprised that over 300 views and don't like this video. Myself I'll give big like.
thanks Mr Guy.
I think some people dislike, because they really like to dislike because clicking is so easy. For me a BIG LIKE, too.
Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
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Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
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I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
Thanks. I am glad it helped. Any questions let me know.
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
if only i could go back to my elementary years, i could have mastered this by now
This is the first time where someone has explained this to me and it actually makes sense! Thank you for your help!
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A big big thank you. It's been days since i needed help..and was searching for an accurate video explanation. Rly thankful. I needed that.
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The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
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Omg1 I am happy to run across this video. i had two anxiety attacks for writing papers. You explain so clearly. Thank you so much!
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I will as soon as I have some time. If you have ideas for good content. let me know.
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Thank you so much. I hope to but time for me is a real issue. I'll do my best.
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+Guy Stieglitz
I just checked the link and it works. However, to be honest, you don't need the site. It is just a tool to help in the early stages of learning. Once you know how to paraphrase, it all happens in your mind and you do it quickly and efficiently.
@@diveinlearning It did not work with given the link, but I went to its homepage and then I found it and worked it as well.
@@Aaron-ej7im I am glad that it worked out. It is interesting because I checked it before I sent it. Either way, I wish you great paraphrasing.
Wow, this is a great tool and very helpful video. thanks a lot.
Hi!! I went to the page and put the original text and my own text, but I don't know if what a I wrote is correct or not. Can you explain me how to use the page in more detail?
Thank you so much . this really helps me
Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes):
Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
Nice effort!
That's much better than the original, which is repetitive, saying that NY is popular and people like to visit, which mean the same thing.
it wouldnt be so easy while doing it on scientific articles
@@pr7009 It is more of a challenge, but still very possible.
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Mr. Guy, that's the best lecture I have ever seen! I can see that you made a great efforts in this lecture, all the materials are well prepared. I viewed some videos , the lecturer just talk some fancy words to the viewers, which is not up to the academic level at all. thanks !!
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I slowly understand this. Please make more video of this. I am studying at the university and most of my assignments are paraphrasing
Thank you, this helps with my assignment.
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My foundation studies program wants us to learn this but I don't understand what the teacher is saying after watching this video I get the idea of on how to paraphrase thx so much Mr Guy
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Great video. Handy knowing that synonymous option on Word. I will use that to rephrase my wording if I get stuck. Thanks again🤔
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Hi, I love your video and learned a lot from this video. I have a question, How could you get synonyms of the word after you click it? Can you tell me the way of setting?
Mark the word that you want a synonym for and then right-click. You should see a list of words if there are any available. Click on the word you think is best. Let me know if that works for you.
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Should we name the site from where we were paraphrasing just like the source giving ? And in case of assignment writing, should I add that citation in the reference portion?
When yoy paraphrase, you still have to cite.
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like
"garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here
thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
Guy Stieglitz yes thanks!!
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Could you tell me where can i found the steps for summary writing?
Thanks
+Muhammad Saddique
Summary writing is simply capturing the main points of a text. The focus here is the MAIN points. The summary is usually shorter than the text that is being summarized because not all details make the summary. The summary should be in your own words.
Here is something from OWL Perdue at owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/563/01/
Paraphrasing involves putting a passage from source material into your own words. A paraphrase must also be attributed to the original source. Paraphrased material is usually shorter than the original passage, taking a somewhat broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly.
Summarizing involves putting the main idea(s) into your own words, including only the main point(s). Once again, it is necessary to attribute summarized ideas to the original source. Summaries are significantly shorter than the original and take a broad overview of the source material.
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It is good video. It would definitely increase my learning about paraphrasing. Thanks respected sir. God bless you!