As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes): Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
My foundation studies program wants us to learn this but I don't understand what the teacher is saying after watching this video I get the idea of on how to paraphrase thx so much Mr Guy
Paraphrasing is the literary equivalent of trying to disarm an explosive device. Because if you don't do it properly, you could get written up for plagiarism. I know, it happened to me once.
Mr. Guy, that's the best lecture I have ever seen! I can see that you made a great efforts in this lecture, all the materials are well prepared. I viewed some videos , the lecturer just talk some fancy words to the viewers, which is not up to the academic level at all. thanks !!
Mr. Guy , Thanks for your response . A question bothers me for a long time, I hope you can help . for example : 1. I am very thirsty please get a bottle of water for me.. or I am parched and get a bottle of water for me. 2. I am so tired, I need a rest. or I am totally drained, I need a rest. I know the both sentence carries similar meaning, but the way of expression is different. my question is I have never seen any foreigner talking like that. Don't you think it is much better to keep your sentence simple and clear ? I am not sure if I should use the second way, please leave your valuable opinion. Many thanks for your time !
I am totally drained, I need a rest - This one seems quite reasonable. But the interesting aspect of choosing is in the differences in the word: "Drained" suggests that one has had a long day and/or process has made that person tired. I am parched and get a bottle of water for me -- this one does not really feel as authentic. "Parched" is a bit too formal. So, I think, overall, you are on the right track in that you have an ear for what seems natural. For me, simple and direct is always best. Clarity and simplicity rule the day! I hope that helped.
This is a very helpful video, and I'll direct my students to it for sure. Just one comment, however. I think it would be preferable for your final example, the paragraph-level paraphrase, to condense the original as well as changing grammar and vocabulary. That is, ideally your (or a student's) version would be shorter whilst still maintaining the essence of the original. Perhaps the three sentences in this paragraph could be condensed to two, or maybe even one? Something like: "Supported by substantial scientific evidence, The International Health Authority maintains that the long-term ingestion of the dangerous chemical BPA, via plastic molecules originating in food wrappings, has a cumulative and increasingly negative impact upon the body." What do you think? My intention here is not to outdo your very excellent paraphrase (though I AM rather pleased with my version!), but to propose that one possible goal of paraphrase is to abbreviate and distill, as well as to recast. I'd be very interested to know your views! Thank you again for an excellent pedagogical tool :-)
Hello, Stephen Thanks for your comments. I do like your paraphrase as it is quite sophisticated and succinct. However, my students at the time would never be able to produce that type of language. The video was done as a survival guide for my students, a step-by-step. So I would agree that a student with more linguistic skills would be able to take the spirit of the video and run with it. With this said, I have read several resources that state the paraphrase should be more or less the same length as the original whereas summaries are meant to be shorter versions. Thanks again for your comments and let me know what you think.
Ah, yes-the difference between summary and paraphrase. That’s a very helpful point indeed. And yes, upon reflection I am drawing on 20 years’ academic writing experience. It’s a timely reminder of the importance of meeting students where they are currently and helping them to move forward (though they never cease to amaze me from time to time!). Many thanks indeed for a very interesting and fruitful exchange!
it was a great job and a very clear, but one more thing, after you are changing and paraphrase in another shape but keep same meaning. the final step in research, for example, should we end any sentence of paraphrasing with footnote. If we supposed to use APA style. It was really helpful, but do you have more videos about how to reference it at the end of your research.
Hello, Sam I am glad that you found the video helpful. The key to your questions is what format you will be using, which is usually decided by the instructor or institution. APA and MLA are common. This resource, in my view. is one of the best. I hope it helps. owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01/
Dear sir. First. Thank you so much. Second. You can replace studies with works, I am an English teacher at a scientific college. I look at tens of theses and papers and I love your way of lecturing
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like "garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
Yes, I agree. Paraphrasing is a skill, so in the very beginning taking a break may help, but once you internalize the skill through practice, you can manage on the test easily.
Hi, I love your video and learned a lot from this video. I have a question, How could you get synonyms of the word after you click it? Can you tell me the way of setting?
Mark the word that you want a synonym for and then right-click. You should see a list of words if there are any available. Click on the word you think is best. Let me know if that works for you.
Should we name the site from where we were paraphrasing just like the source giving ? And in case of assignment writing, should I add that citation in the reference portion?
Hello. Thanks for the video! Here is a question. What if an author has shown when an idea appeared and how it was used throughout history in e.g. three pages and I want to paraphrase only parts that I need (e.g. not including all the periods the author mentions or all the points about these periods). And I want that the paraphrase be e.g. only one paragraph long.
That is a lot of paraphrasing. Usually we insert specific ideas from authors into our text. It is not typical to paraphrase that much information. I would run it by your teacher.
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Thank you for your helpful video but people from non-English backgrounds like me who are struggling to learn new language and have to do assessment for University need more helps or at least easier steps to learn "How to paraphrase".
i understand. Paraphrasing, actually, is such a big deal because our ability to do it well is representative of our overall language abilities because it requires good grammar and vocabulary skills. Also, the deeper we understand a text, the easier it is to paraphrase. So keep developing the overall language skills.
As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
Yes I agree. Thanks.
Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
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I am really suprised that over 300 views and don't like this video. Myself I'll give big like.
thanks Mr Guy.
I think some people dislike, because they really like to dislike because clicking is so easy. For me a BIG LIKE, too.
I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
Thanks. I am glad it helped. Any questions let me know.
The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
Awesome!
This is the first time where someone has explained this to me and it actually makes sense! Thank you for your help!
Great to hear!
Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
Jessica O'Brien
Thanks
Glad it helps!
if only i could go back to my elementary years, i could have mastered this by now
Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes):
Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
Nice effort!
That's much better than the original, which is repetitive, saying that NY is popular and people like to visit, which mean the same thing.
it wouldnt be so easy while doing it on scientific articles
@@pr7009 It is more of a challenge, but still very possible.
Who else watching this video in 2020?
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I like your style of teaching
That's awesome, thanks.
Omg1 I am happy to run across this video. i had two anxiety attacks for writing papers. You explain so clearly. Thank you so much!
you're welcome...enjoy your studies
A big big thank you. It's been days since i needed help..and was searching for an accurate video explanation. Rly thankful. I needed that.
Great news.
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
honestly... the best way of teaching... telling each and single point... please kindly share more video... Thank you
Glad it helped!
Thank you! This was extremely comprehensive and beneficial.
I learned a lot with your explanations because you have explained it in details. Thank you.
I am really glad the video helped. Thanks for letting me know.
Thank you. I am glad it helped.
Thank You for the video it really helped me out.
Thank you so much. It is a useful explanation! ❤️💕
My foundation studies program wants us to learn this but I don't understand what the teacher is saying after watching this video I get the idea of on how to paraphrase thx so much Mr Guy
Thanks. I hope all is going well in your program.
thnks a lot...wonderful video
I slowly understand this. Please make more video of this. I am studying at the university and most of my assignments are paraphrasing
Your video is so informative , thank you .
Really it was helpful thank you
Great news.
Please post more videos. You teach so beautifully D:
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I will try!
Yay! Thankyou! and thank you for your response :)
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I will as soon as I have some time. If you have ideas for good content. let me know.
Guy Stieglitz If I think of anything, I will DEFINITELY let you know!
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Thank you so much. I hope to but time for me is a real issue. I'll do my best.
Good teaching friend✍️
Paraphrasing is the literary equivalent of trying to disarm an explosive device. Because if you don't do it properly, you could get written up for plagiarism. I know, it happened to me once.
Mr. Guy, that's the best lecture I have ever seen! I can see that you made a great efforts in this lecture, all the materials are well prepared. I viewed some videos , the lecturer just talk some fancy words to the viewers, which is not up to the academic level at all. thanks !!
Thanks so much. I am glad you found it useful!
Very informative 👍🏻
Very helpful
You teach it very clear and easy to understand sir! Give a big like to you sir!😀
Thanks
I am glad it helped 😎
Great
Go away and take a break,
U must be genius if you discovered this. All items are nice but this is excellent.
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Thanks!
Awesome😊... Thank you so much😇❤
Thank you so much! Your video is helpful and easy to understand. It helps me a lot.
Awesome!
I am so much helped by this video. Thank you.
Enjoyed your explanation. Great!
Thank you sir.. it really help me alot
very informative..i really became ur fan after watching it....quality information......
Awesome. Glad you liked it.
Thanks you alot for posting this type of videos . It's very helpful for me .thanks again
Thank you, you presented this topic in a very good manner.
Thanks for the feedback. :)
You can change body with the word "system"
He could have changed slowly with gradually, also.
I am watching this video in 2020.... great explanation
Glad to hear it!
Great video. Handy knowing that synonymous option on Word. I will use that to rephrase my wording if I get stuck. Thanks again🤔
Thanks, I am glad you found the video helpful.
I am studying the Social work pathway
this was very good video and much useful, but the tool link isn't working ???
Wow it's too easy to understand!
Great video. It is very useful and the samples I thinks are awesome. Thanks.
It's very helpful and interesting...
Glad to hear it .
It's very easy way, thank you
Mr. Guy , Thanks for your response . A question bothers me for a long time, I hope you can help . for example : 1. I am very thirsty please get a bottle of water for me.. or I am parched and get a bottle of water for me. 2. I am so tired, I need a rest. or I am totally drained, I need a rest. I know the both sentence carries similar meaning, but the way of expression is different. my question is I have never seen any foreigner talking like that. Don't you think it is much better to keep your sentence simple and clear ? I am not sure if I should use the second way, please leave your valuable opinion. Many thanks for your time !
I am totally drained, I need a rest - This one seems quite reasonable. But the interesting aspect of choosing is in the differences in the word: "Drained" suggests that one has had a long day and/or process has made that person tired.
I am parched and get a bottle of water for me -- this one does not really feel as authentic. "Parched" is a bit too formal. So, I think, overall, you are on the right track in that you have an ear for what seems natural. For me, simple and direct is always best. Clarity and simplicity rule the day!
I hope that helped.
Plz post more videos,You’re the best.can you post a video on pharases and clauses
Sure. I need to find time to post. Thanks for the push!
It helped me so much.. Nice explain ation
Glad to hear it.
Thank you, this helps with my assignment.
so clear, so useful...many thanks!
You are welcome:)
i was going to fail on my test with out ur leason :D
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Thank you Mr Guy Stieglitz. This really helped me.
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Glad to hear it!
Good luck
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You are welcome for sure
Thanks
Superliked! Please post more examples
Anyone in 2021?
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2020
Thank you so much . this really helps me
Thank you find it so helpful
Thanks Guy. Nice to run into you here!
Hey, Umur, I hope all is well.
English is my second language and paraphrasing is my hardest part of writing!
I agree. It can be tough.
Thank you. Please upload more videos.
This is a very helpful video, and I'll direct my students to it for sure. Just one comment, however. I think it would be preferable for your final example, the paragraph-level paraphrase, to condense the original as well as changing grammar and vocabulary. That is, ideally your (or a student's) version would be shorter whilst still maintaining the essence of the original. Perhaps the three sentences in this paragraph could be condensed to two, or maybe even one? Something like:
"Supported by substantial scientific evidence, The International Health Authority maintains that the long-term ingestion of the dangerous chemical BPA, via plastic molecules originating in food wrappings, has a cumulative and increasingly negative impact upon the body."
What do you think? My intention here is not to outdo your very excellent paraphrase (though I AM rather pleased with my version!), but to propose that one possible goal of paraphrase is to abbreviate and distill, as well as to recast. I'd be very interested to know your views!
Thank you again for an excellent pedagogical tool :-)
Hello, Stephen
Thanks for your comments. I do like your paraphrase as it is quite sophisticated and succinct. However, my students at the time would never be able to produce that type of language. The video was done as a survival guide for my students, a step-by-step. So I would agree that a student with more linguistic skills would be able to take the spirit of the video and run with it. With this said, I have read several resources that state the paraphrase should be more or less the same length as the original whereas summaries are meant to be shorter versions. Thanks again for your comments and let me know what you think.
Ah, yes-the difference between summary and paraphrase. That’s a very helpful point indeed. And yes, upon reflection I am drawing on 20 years’ academic writing experience. It’s a timely reminder of the importance of meeting students where they are currently and helping them to move forward (though they never cease to amaze me from time to time!).
Many thanks indeed for a very interesting and fruitful exchange!
You are welcome.
Wonderful explanation
Thanks!
Thank you so much! This is fantastic and is going to be so much help! ❤️
You are welcome. Glad it helped!
Can you upload more videos about how to write the perfect research papers😓?
Tell me about what concerns you and I will try.
Very useful, thank you!
Post more vid like this, big help. Thanks you
Sure. Tell me what you need. I will take note!
it was a great job and a very clear, but one more thing, after you are changing and paraphrase in another shape but keep same meaning. the final step in research, for example, should we end any sentence of paraphrasing with footnote. If we supposed to use APA style. It was really helpful, but do you have more videos about how to reference it at the end of your research.
Hello, Sam
I am glad that you found the video helpful. The key to your questions is what format you will be using, which is usually decided by the instructor or institution. APA and MLA are common. This resource, in my view. is one of the best.
I hope it helps.
owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01/
very helpful for my assignment..Thanks Mr. Guy!!... :)
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You are welcome
+Guy Stieglitz
Yes, you are welcome.
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much appreciated
it's very helpful...thanks alot
Good teaching and nice speaking
Thanks
Wonderful video!
Thank you :)
Your video is very helpful..Thank you so much Sir :)
You are welcome. Glad it helped.
Very useful video. Thanks sooooooooooooooooo much🙏
You are welcome!
Great video, helped out with my class :)
Great. Glad to hear it.
Hope this would help me to do my assignment in research.
Grd 7 here
Paraphrasing is very important. For sure.
It is good video. It would definitely increase my learning about paraphrasing. Thanks respected sir. God bless you!
Dear sir. First. Thank you so much. Second. You can replace studies with works, I am an English teacher at a scientific college. I look at tens of theses and papers and I love your way of lecturing
+Kenali Mali
You are welcome and thanks.
Anytime sir. I need your permission to use this material as a presentation that I will give to my students in Iraq at university please.
yes, of course feel free and I hope it helps.
it will Sir, thank you.
Hi,can you edit my journal that is rephrasing and without plagiarism for cost
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like
"garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here
thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
Guy Stieglitz yes thanks!!
you explain it very well. thank you
Thank you!
Meresahkan
Nice 👍
Very helpful video!
Bobby Amanek glad to hear it. Thanks
I'm not sure I could take a break in my test tbh😂
Yes, I agree. Paraphrasing is a skill, so in the very beginning taking a break may help, but once you internalize the skill through practice, you can manage on the test easily.
same 😂😂😂 n i hv an exam today
Hi, I love your video and learned a lot from this video. I have a question, How could you get synonyms of the word after you click it? Can you tell me the way of setting?
Mark the word that you want a synonym for and then right-click. You should see a list of words if there are any available. Click on the word you think is best. Let me know if that works for you.
Kindly share the link of website for paraphrasing in comment box
Should we name the site from where we were paraphrasing just like the source giving ? And in case of assignment writing, should I add that citation in the reference portion?
When yoy paraphrase, you still have to cite.
Hello. Thanks for the video! Here is a question. What if an author has shown when an idea appeared and how it was used throughout history in e.g. three pages and I want to paraphrase only parts that I need (e.g. not including all the periods the author mentions or all the points about these periods). And I want that the paraphrase be e.g. only one paragraph long.
That is a lot of paraphrasing. Usually we insert specific ideas from authors into our text. It is not typical to paraphrase that much information. I would run it by your teacher.
It is helpful, much appreicated
very helpful piece. thanks
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it helps me a lot. Tank you so much!
Glad to hear this:)
Thank you it was really usefull
I always struggle with paraphrase because of my teachers didn't teach me how to do properly.
Hope the video helped.
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The problem is that I cannot use the dictionary on the exam🙂😭😭😭
They want to test your vocabulary skills.
Amazing teacher!!! Thanks
Thank you for your helpful video but people from non-English backgrounds like me who are struggling to learn new language and have to do assessment for University need more helps or at least easier steps to learn "How to paraphrase".
i understand. Paraphrasing, actually, is such a big deal because our ability to do it well is representative of our overall language abilities because it requires good grammar and vocabulary skills. Also, the deeper we understand a text, the easier it is to paraphrase. So keep developing the overall language skills.