Jesus is King! If you do not know Jesus as Savior please pray, “ Jesus save me. At this moment I choose to have faith that You gave Your life for me and rose from the dead. Doing this You defeated death, even though it meant You had to die. You surrendered Your life for me, so I chose to surrender my life to You. Forgive me Jesus, my God. Amen.” Jesus loves you so much. Please accept His love. I encourage you to read the Bible and pray. “For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only begotten Son into this world, that whoever believes that in him shall not perish but have eternal life.” John 3:16 🙏❤️🙏 Jesus is enough! Again I tell you, Jesus loves you!
How to write a WOW college essay 1. It's impressive 4:04 2. You value excellence 5:03 3. Tell a story 5:58 4. Should reveal something good about you 6:45 5. Highlights qualities that show your awesomeness 8:30 6. It reveals your values 9:10 7. Shows a sense of vision 10:38 8. It captures the zeitgeist 12:12 9. The power of your intellect 13:33 10. It takes the reader on your journey and provokes empathy 14:54
My son was recently admitted to Top 30 NU. I did not read his essay in detail and I told him I was a little disappointed about his essay because his topic was sports (I read many blogs and they all said sport was bad idea). After watching this video, I might change my mind because his stat was not competitive. He wrote about the day I gave him a ball and said someday, we would play football together. For few years, he was among the best soccer players in the city and chosen for a national competition. Then, he had difficult time, failing and losing all motivations in life. It was his last game in the secondary school and we have family team (fathers, students) against other classes. After the game, he realized he did not need to become a superstar to be happy. The game reminded him about the first day he got a ball from me and he felt connection between us. Those helped him to stand up and motivated him to involve in community and to make impact. I changed my mind, maybe I should tell him about how much I was proud of him.
Easy way I have found to begin an essay and get straight into it was using a personal anecdote. Tell a story about yourself briefly, could be one specific moment that caused you to introspect or great change etc. having this anecdote allowed me to branch off without getting off track and maintain a concise application
Christopher Ramos yeah the common app essay’s hitting hard. Months I’ve looked at my screen thinking of essay ideas to no avail. Let’s hope deadline pressure helps us all in a productive way!
“Wow” thank you so much for saying that you do not have to be wow to get into college. I have been stressing and stuck by thinking I have to make my essay perfect.
I'm literally keeping this video on replay trying to keep reemphasizing the ideas in my mind cus they are are so many good points they get lost along the way in the writing process. Its SUPER important to keep looking back and stay on track.
This is something that I do after I write my essay. I pull out all the keywords that she talked about and turn it into a rubric. When you read your essay try to check the box as many as you can. Good luck!
I think you gave various AWESOME advice!!!!! This is not an easy thing to really stand out and apply to college. You hit all the points I needed to hear, now I have a much clear direction!!!
Guys, I am an international student. And currently I'm working on my essay. It's about how I was miserable all the time moaning about my life. At that time there were happening lots of dreadful stuff. Diagnosed spine problems. My family was broke. And we did need to be frugal. And I was mournful and sometimes I wanted to commit suicide. But I overcome it by learning English, and that changed me. Because of English I stopped dwelling on problems around me and by the time they wore off. I discovered lot of things for myself as well. Learning gave me motivation to learn and do many other things. So now I am an upbeat person. So now I know Turkish. Also I am learning French. From English my multilingual way started. Now because of English I became better. What do you think about this essay?
For University Of Michigan's Math and Science Scholars, the prompt for the essay is "Personal Statement explaining why you believe you are well-suited for the MMSS program and how you hope to benefit from it." How do I go about writing this essay without being too cliche or too boring? Do you use a story for a personal statement? Any help would be really great!
I would love to see a video on the under qualified the ones whose schools didn’t at the time have them proper resources to accommodate that person, the schools didn’t offer any extra curricular activities other then Band or track and you had to compete for those limited spots aka a crappy public school system in a low income area.
I scored 1290 on the SAT 710 math + 580 English I'm an international student and I was wondering if I score well in my IELTS will it make up for my English score on the SAT? I plan to study mechanical engineering Please recommend some universities in my score bracket
Also, is it possible to ask you a question about my essay privately? I have an idea, but not sure if I need to narrow down my essay to a more specific topic.
im not good at writing so I just wrote about the biggest hardship I went through in my life so it was really easy to write but I dont know if it was gonna enough lol
I just finished my essay, but I just don't feel it. It's a unique story but I would really appreciate it if someone can read it and give some advice. Thanks!
Im down, what if we do that! Let’s have each other’s instagram and create a group. Mine is @rimzaher I understand how lost we all feel and how some feedback would certainly help us! Comment down below your instagram user so i know who to add to the group ! Take care xx!!
I was bullied as a kid, but I dont want to make the person reading my essay feel bad for me. This experience help me became who I am so it is important. How can I do it??
Try to make sure that it is clear that you have gotten past the bullying and that it is clear that you have grown as a person because of it. Make the focus be on the your growth rather than the bullying itself.
For all my 4 UC personal insight questions, do you think that they all have to be narrative styled writing? Can I have only 2 be narrative style and the other 2 just be me looking back on things in the first person?
Is it a bad idea to write about my diagnosis of High functioning autism and being bullied then depressed but I come out on the bright side by proving people wrong with three labels and upholding leadership positions and wanting to now major in early education and special education to help kids with severe special needs
Question i want to be a Linguistics major would it be a good idea for me to start off by saying hello in 4 different languages (that i know) for a wow factor i really want to know because i wasnt sure if is a good idea
@@atrivyas8512 it was a good idea i actually got into all my colleges because of me knowing more languages at the beginning i "hello Merhaba Konichiwa bonjor you maybe be wondering what languages i am speaking" and then i went on from there on how much i loved lanuages
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Want to read instead of watch 👀supertutortv.com/videos/how-to-write-a-wow-college-essay-personal-statement/
essay writing this weekend amirite
YES!
big fax
Yktv
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)1
Anyone from Class of 2021 that didn’t start yet
Now is a good time to start that’s why I’m here
Lol already started out of excitement
Guilty
im staring today omg
yessssir
Senior stress season
yes indeed
Starting now lol
@@shuddup3618 Yup that’s me haha. Good luck you got this !
Ahhh
Jesus is King! If you do not know Jesus as Savior please pray, “ Jesus save me. At this moment I choose to have faith that You gave Your life for me and rose from the dead. Doing this You defeated death, even though it meant You had to die. You surrendered Your life for me, so I chose to surrender my life to You. Forgive me Jesus, my God. Amen.”
Jesus loves you so much. Please accept His love. I encourage you to read the Bible and pray.
“For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only begotten Son into this world, that whoever believes that in him shall not perish but have eternal life.”
John 3:16
🙏❤️🙏
Jesus is enough!
Again I tell you, Jesus loves you!
How to write a WOW college essay
1. It's impressive 4:04
2. You value excellence 5:03
3. Tell a story 5:58
4. Should reveal something good about you 6:45
5. Highlights qualities that show your awesomeness 8:30
6. It reveals your values 9:10
7. Shows a sense of vision 10:38
8. It captures the zeitgeist 12:12
9. The power of your intellect 13:33
10. It takes the reader on your journey and provokes empathy 14:54
Thank you
Thank you so much!
Not the hero we deserved, but the hero we needed.
Thanks :3
not all hero wear capes
Anyone else class of 2021?
indeed
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)1
I'm class of 2024😕
Good luck everyone! May u all get into ure top choice unis🙂
thank you! same to you :)
Yo thank you for the wishes
Thank you so much. Seeing that the comment is 9 months old I hope u got in where u belong
did you?
You too!
Perfect timing for these upcoming 5 days left...
Me :')
Upcoming 6 hours left 😩
@@MultiCrazybunch 5 hours left ;')
1 week left :(
Mood😭
My son was recently admitted to Top 30 NU. I did not read his essay in detail and I told him I was a little disappointed about his essay because his topic was sports (I read many blogs and they all said sport was bad idea). After watching this video, I might change my mind because his stat was not competitive. He wrote about the day I gave him a ball and said someday, we would play football together. For few years, he was among the best soccer players in the city and chosen for a national competition. Then, he had difficult time, failing and losing all motivations in life. It was his last game in the secondary school and we have family team (fathers, students) against other classes. After the game, he realized he did not need to become a superstar to be happy. The game reminded him about the first day he got a ball from me and he felt connection between us. Those helped him to stand up and motivated him to involve in community and to make impact. I changed my mind, maybe I should tell him about how much I was proud of him.
This is a wow piece, Dad. Best wishes to you and your children.
okay but how do i do that in 550-650 words
Have really good word economy. Don’t waste any space, be as efficient as possible
Avoid tautology
Easy way I have found to begin an essay and get straight into it was using a personal anecdote. Tell a story about yourself briefly, could be one specific moment that caused you to introspect or great change etc. having this anecdote allowed me to branch off without getting off track and maintain a concise application
Did you mean anecdote in the intro?
Can you give as an example, please?
Three minutes in, and "wow" doesn't even sound like a real word anymore
you aren't wrong
When the due date is in 6 days, and you still haven’t finished yet
Due date for what? Which universities?
@@ankitmehta4924 early admission/action
same but my dumbass forgot teacher recs existed and i haven’t even requested them. regular decision for me it is lol
Ezra Grant you can submit your apps without recommendations and your teachers can add them later as long as you assign them too the common app
@@ezragrant8710 ^^
I have been dying for last few months trying to write about myself
Christopher Ramos tbh deadlines are on Friday and my common app is still pending. This video came at the right time
Angela Wilson mine too. Still pending for essay :(
Angela Wilson LoL yep :)
Christopher Ramos yeah the common app essay’s hitting hard. Months I’ve looked at my screen thinking of essay ideas to no avail. Let’s hope deadline pressure helps us all in a productive way!
@@sidd8257 same
“Wow” thank you so much for saying that you do not have to be wow to get into college. I have been stressing and stuck by thinking I have to make my essay perfect.
watching this 4 hours before deadline
this channel is really helpful, you have shared many valuable insights. thank you
When the due date is in two days and you're starting 🤪
did u get in??
you got in?
Did u get in 😭😭
I'm literally keeping this video on replay trying to keep reemphasizing the ideas in my mind cus they are are so many good points they get lost along the way in the writing process.
Its SUPER important to keep looking back and stay on track.
This is something that I do after I write my essay. I pull out all the keywords that she talked about and turn it into a rubric. When you read your essay try to check the box as many as you can. Good luck!
Can you do a video about getting scholarships and more about financial aid and securing money for college?
Did u apply for fasfa
I’m starting today and I’m screwed
I’m just finishing up my personal statement but I stop and dropped after seeing you uploaded this video 😃
These tips are brutally honest and so useful especially when mine due tomorrow for early action
lol what?, how are you going to manage my man. well goodluck 🙄🙄
Brooke, do you recommend we use a narrative type essay for the “Why this college?” essay too?
It’s not something you need, but yes definitely (from my experience watching supertutor TV)
my college advisors wants it Friday, haven’t started... wish me luck! 😬
How'd it go?👀
I think you gave various AWESOME advice!!!!! This is not an easy thing to really stand out and apply to college. You hit all the points I needed to hear, now I have a much clear direction!!!
Absolutely love this video. For some weird reason i can understand every thing that she said.
I think it’s the best video on essay writing
You need to show that you're a skilled problem solver who's going to change the world.
Pls
Make a video about "How to get a full ride scholarship ? "
Loads of people have videos on this just search it up!!
such a great video. I will be using these tips for my college essay.
Guys, I am an international student. And currently I'm working on my essay. It's about how I was miserable all the time moaning about my life. At that time there were happening lots of dreadful stuff. Diagnosed spine problems. My family was broke. And we did need to be frugal. And I was mournful and sometimes I wanted to commit suicide. But I overcome it by learning English, and that changed me. Because of English I stopped dwelling on problems around me and by the time they wore off. I discovered lot of things for myself as well. Learning gave me motivation to learn and do many other things. So now I am an upbeat person. So now I know Turkish. Also I am learning French. From English my multilingual way started. Now because of English I became better. What do you think about this essay?
Sounds good dude. Best of luck!
@@takeinventory7837 Really? Thanks for your response, I needed it.
Good concept, definitely. Just focus on the writing! ;)
@@samleethepianoboy6482 Thanks dude. Your comment made my day!
This is awesome. Thank you!
I have a gpa of 4.3 and a 1130 sat, I need a wow essay 😔
4.3 sis???? that’s so good
4.3? You’re giving off pick me vibes 🙄
girl i felt that i have the same scores and the sat rlly bringing me down
Omg sameee
My gpa is a 2.9 ur chillin
i have no idea what to write about
I love her videos, but always see a lot of haters in comments. Why???
Already submitted most of my apps. Thanks for the advice though! 😊
class of 2021 with only two weeks left ;)))))))
Brooke the BEST!
Hello teacher, I'm student korea so your video very good and thanks.
For University Of Michigan's Math and Science Scholars, the prompt for the essay is "Personal Statement explaining why you believe you are well-suited for the MMSS program and how you hope to benefit from it." How do I go about writing this essay without being too cliche or too boring? Do you use a story for a personal statement? Any help would be really great!
It’s been 3 years. How did your application process go? What did you end up writing about?
11:51 She meant it from her heart lmao. U can see shes done with life.
was just bout to comment this
you are awesome!!!!
Great video and well explained👏👏 madam..I dunno why I was wasting ma tym on other channels 😤🤭...new subscriber here😍❤️
Very impactful video. Number 7 especially hit hard!
Class of 2022 where yall at?
Is there any way to get our essays reviewed from you
Excellent video on writing essays for admissions to a college.
Anyone taking the ACT tomorrow?
I would love to see a video on the under qualified the ones whose schools didn’t at the time have them proper resources to accommodate that person, the schools didn’t offer any extra curricular activities other then Band or track and you had to compete for those limited spots aka a crappy public school system in a low income area.
what do i do when i screwed up my junior year?
watching it when my essay is due midnight...................
Wish me luck .
How'd it go?!
6:49 That quote hit kinda different ngl
8:23 wholesome content alert!!!
I scored 1290 on the SAT
710 math + 580 English
I'm an international student and I was wondering if I score well in my IELTS will it make up for my English score on the SAT?
I plan to study mechanical engineering
Please recommend some universities in my score bracket
You could go to Penn state..if you're not seeking scholarship.
@@anijosheyy thanks for the info
Also, is it possible to ask you a question about my essay privately? I have an idea, but not sure if I need to narrow down my essay to a more specific topic.
Class of 2022?
I'm writing an essay to get into college comp and I'm not the best at writing yo my stress has never felt like this before.
How can I figure out what I have to offer the world?
im not good at writing so I just wrote about the biggest hardship I went through in my life so it was really easy to write but I dont know if it was gonna enough lol
Those were very good tips, thank you!
this is so helpful!!! I love this! Thx!!
Imagine being untouched by the hardships of reality
Can I write about my failure in my essay? And lesson learnt?
umang garg it May not stand out bec so many ppl seem to be writing about the same thing
Depends on what it is
But yes
Another way to rephrase #10 is "show, don't tell"
they r only abstract before writing. but once u have an essay, watch this video again to check if u r on the right rack
Is writing an essay related to MUN too cliche? Is it possible to stand out with it? Do lots of people write about it and how it changed them?
😬😬please tell me how this worked out if you did end up writing it
this is actually what i want to write about too did you ever write about MUN if so did you get into like your top schools with it?
Did it work?
@@nneomax9358 How did it go?
@@ukeera2549 perfectly got into schools like nyu,barnard,uni of rochester with that essay
Appreciate you teach’
if I took the lyrics in nf new song clouds and put them in my essay would that work
Thank you for this :)
taking attendance for class of 22
What if I'm already downtrodden?
Great video!
I just finished my essay, but I just don't feel it. It's a unique story but I would really appreciate it if someone can read it and give some advice. Thanks!
Vishwa Krishnan I would totally be down to do it if you want to
Agree, have the same problem
Vishwa Krishnan yo let’s read each other’s story
Vishwa Krishnan I’m down to give feedback and receive some!
Im down, what if we do that! Let’s have each other’s instagram and create a group.
Mine is @rimzaher
I understand how lost we all feel and how some feedback would certainly help us!
Comment down below your instagram user so i know who to add to the group !
Take care xx!!
Hello! Can you help me to write an essay with title "Science teaching and learning in school: implications for popular scientific communication.
Extremely helpful video. I would definitely try to incorporate these elements and make them dance harmonically in my essay!
11:51 Oop gotta rethink on that one.
my essay is told in a figurative voice-it’s like a motif almost
Lexi DeLorme risky, yet bold. I like it
Did it work?
I was bullied as a kid, but I dont want to make the person reading my essay feel bad for me. This experience help me became who I am so it is important. How can I do it??
Try to make sure that it is clear that you have gotten past the bullying and that it is clear that you have grown as a person because of it. Make the focus be on the your growth rather than the bullying itself.
When the due date is literally tomorrow
lmaoo yup
So, me
@@sidlalwani5926 indian
Brooke I have an important question with essays... is it stupid or too cliché to write about sexuality in them?
NathanRubin21 what about sexuality ??
If you are LGBTQ then that typically is life defining and worth discussing
Thank you for following up on my request Supertutor TV :)
wait do we pick one of those points or do you recommend doing all those things in one essay?
haven't started an it due today :(
Any of my comrades from the class of 2022 here?
Hi, can I email you my essay so that you can check it?
For all my 4 UC personal insight questions, do you think that they all have to be narrative styled writing? Can I have only 2 be narrative style and the other 2 just be me looking back on things in the first person?
I didn’t even consider writing an essay and now I’m freaking out
0/69 Not “World of Warcraft” acronym
I’m literally a freshman why am I causing myself unneeded stress by watching this.
sAme
Is it a bad idea to write about my diagnosis of High functioning autism and being bullied then depressed but I come out on the bright side by proving people wrong with three labels and upholding leadership positions and wanting to now major in early education and special education to help kids with severe special needs
7th point was like 'use your optimism to write good essays cause in the future life wont let you'
do these values and visions have to be necessarily true?
I’m a junior and already stressing over this🤦🏽♀️
Question i want to be a Linguistics major would it be a good idea for me to start off by saying hello in 4 different languages (that i know) for a wow factor i really want to know because i wasnt sure if is a good idea
What did you do and did it work out?
@@atrivyas8512 it was a good idea i actually got into all my colleges because of me knowing more languages at the beginning i "hello Merhaba Konichiwa bonjor you maybe be wondering what languages i am speaking" and then i went on from there on how much i loved lanuages
Can someone please review my essay😭??!!
Who’s here bc they’re getting an essay assignment after quarantine
Is there a form to respect ? intro, arguments...
Anyone here in class of 2021 and doesn't really plan on taking SATs?
They keep getting canceled over here
Yea lmaooo
I’m just gonna take it either way to show improvement
How do you guys apply?