It's a nice piece but the title just doesn't fit all that well. It's very reflective and calm. There's not enough passion behind it. It feels more like it's meant to be a hero reflecting on the themes of the story they're in and undergoing personal character changes--not just some romantic yearning. But maybe that's just me.
Very somber and emotional piece. It echoes feelings of realizing that you're fighting for something larger than yourself.
It's a nice piece but the title just doesn't fit all that well. It's very reflective and calm. There's not enough passion behind it. It feels more like it's meant to be a hero reflecting on the themes of the story they're in and undergoing personal character changes--not just some romantic yearning. But maybe that's just me.
thank you for the feedback! i definitely see your point.