This is beautiful, hits hard. Your rhythm is so natural and it flows so well it’s like you’ve tuned into a frequency, very poised and clear. The sound of the words and the ebb and the flow and the sheer soul you put into your writing amazes and inspires me
This is so beautiful, the acting, the wording, the facial expressions... I'm just... "How hard I fighted"... I wasn't expecting this to make me feel so... Lonely, nostalgic and sad looking back to those confused thoughts and... Oh I'm so in love with your poetry ❤️
I'll be honest, I'm a bit late to the party, but I'd just like to express how beautiful a heart tugging this poem is. It's a true piece of art and it's sad how few likes there are
Genuinely amazing. Thank you for putting these feelings into words, for vocalizing what it feels like to fall in love with someone that you were told you shouldn't.
This took me to flashbacks of my friend that I was madly in love with, how new it was for me and how impossible it seemed. All the times I tried to deny it, saying that it's only friendship and forever nothing more... It broke me. I felt more. She knew it too. How couldn't she? Saying I'm so great and caring, humble and kind. In her words I sounded like diamond and I couldn't help but to be overwhelmed with joy. Every time she told me she doesn't feel loved I waned to take her hand, look her in the eye and tell her how much I loved her. I loved her in a way she couldn't and it tored me apart. But... It was okay? She saw me as a friend and it was okay. I was hurt, but it was like a bruise from a long run - sign that I'm doing something with worth. Her being loved is all I waned and I gave it to her. I was in pain, but satisfied. (Sorry, I never told anyone and this poem just made me feel like that again.)
No-one tries to fall in love. Whether it's with a boy, girl, mix of both, neither or any combination of those things, or not at all, no love is on purpose and no love is wrong ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜
So well written and presented, thank you...I know you speak for a lot of young people...and as an old Lesbian who didn't know how to express these thoughts when I had them as a young person, I so appreciate you.
I just found out you have a RUclips channel and I love slam poems so I subscribed but this was amazing. So filled with emotions. I wish to one day be able to write like that and read like that
Hey, sorry I never saw this, I’ve been on the phattest hiatus ever finishing up college (but I’m about to graduate and I’m excited to get back to my personal creative work)! I’m gonna guess it’s probably too late for whatever you were wanting to use this for, but feel free! I just ask that if you use verbatim quotes that you accredit wherever possible ♡
I write poetry about women but I’ve never been with one I want to be with a woman for the rest of my life I’ve tried men but they are not into me and I’ve always admired the way a woman’s body looks boobs and all
This is beautiful, hits hard. Your rhythm is so natural and it flows so well it’s like you’ve tuned into a frequency, very poised and clear. The sound of the words and the ebb and the flow and the sheer soul you put into your writing amazes and inspires me
Thank you. Truly.
This is so beautiful, the acting, the wording, the facial expressions... I'm just... "How hard I fighted"... I wasn't expecting this to make me feel so... Lonely, nostalgic and sad looking back to those confused thoughts and... Oh I'm so in love with your poetry ❤️
I'll be honest, I'm a bit late to the party, but I'd just like to express how beautiful a heart tugging this poem is. It's a true piece of art and it's sad how few likes there are
Genuinely amazing. Thank you for putting these feelings into words, for vocalizing what it feels like to fall in love with someone that you were told you shouldn't.
This took me to flashbacks of my friend that I was madly in love with, how new it was for me and how impossible it seemed. All the times I tried to deny it, saying that it's only friendship and forever nothing more... It broke me. I felt more. She knew it too. How couldn't she? Saying I'm so great and caring, humble and kind. In her words I sounded like diamond and I couldn't help but to be overwhelmed with joy. Every time she told me she doesn't feel loved I waned to take her hand, look her in the eye and tell her how much I loved her. I loved her in a way she couldn't and it tored me apart. But... It was okay? She saw me as a friend and it was okay. I was hurt, but it was like a bruise from a long run - sign that I'm doing something with worth. Her being loved is all I waned and I gave it to her. I was in pain, but satisfied.
(Sorry, I never told anyone and this poem just made me feel like that again.)
This tho^^^^
No-one tries to fall in love. Whether it's with a boy, girl, mix of both, neither or any combination of those things, or not at all, no love is on purpose and no love is wrong ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜
So well written and presented, thank you...I know you speak for a lot of young people...and as an old Lesbian who didn't know how to express these thoughts when I had them as a young person, I so appreciate you.
As someone who’s realizing they’re bi. Thank you so much. Side note, it’s nice to see another Owl House fan
I looove Owl House, it's almost as cute as this poem... almost lol
THIS IS SO CUTE OMG just found you on Tiktok and already love your videos lol, keep it up queen
Love this! You said it with such raw emotion yet such smooth rhythm. Thank you for speaking what most of us can’t even form into words! ❤️
I just found out you have a RUclips channel and I love slam poems so I subscribed but this was amazing. So filled with emotions. I wish to one day be able to write like that and read like that
This is amazing!! Love the way you delivered it.
Gorgeously worded and recited! ❤
😭😭😭😩😩😩 crying like a floodgate just opened up
Found this bc of your tiktok and I am absolutely blown away thank you
I have felt the exact same.
I didn't mean to too...😔😔😔😔
can I use this as part of my poetry piece? I relate to this so much and I love it.
Hey, sorry I never saw this, I’ve been on the phattest hiatus ever finishing up college (but I’m about to graduate and I’m excited to get back to my personal creative work)! I’m gonna guess it’s probably too late for whatever you were wanting to use this for, but feel free! I just ask that if you use verbatim quotes that you accredit wherever possible ♡
Beautiful
This was amazing
Me who just gave my girlfriend my sweater....ye I’m prettttyyy sure I’m not “just confused” about being bi my dudes I’m not straight or gay
I write poetry about women but I’ve never been with one I want to be with a woman for the rest of my life I’ve tried men but they are not into me and I’ve always admired the way a woman’s body looks boobs and all
I didn't mean to too😔.....
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Beautiful 🥰
me to my bf lol