How to Write the PERFECT Why Our School Essay | Ivy League Supplemental Masterclass

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  • Опубликовано: 1 фев 2025

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  • @rainyyawnzzn
    @rainyyawnzzn 3 месяца назад +73

    bro could sense that i was procrastinating on my essays

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 месяца назад +12

      just a lil friendly motivation that's all (:

  • @elevatedschool
    @elevatedschool  3 месяца назад +31

    I totally goofed, at 0:13 I said the second essay was from Yale, but it's actually from Dartmouth... oh goodness how embarrassing...
    Anyways, I hope you guys find this video useful! Don't forget to like and subscribe

  • @rumblingsun
    @rumblingsun 2 месяца назад +17

    10:00 PM. 2 hours before one of my EA deadlines. Lets go.

  • @AzizMussilimov
    @AzizMussilimov 3 месяца назад +1

    Dude, thanks for doing this. I have 200 students that i am working with across Kazakhstan mostly and beyond (on their essays), and your insights really help. All the best!

  • @Averagestudent289
    @Averagestudent289 3 месяца назад +1

    This is super helpful! I have been struggling on this essay, Thank you!!

  • @staywithmenight
    @staywithmenight 3 месяца назад +1

    Hi Kevin! I'm a fellow QB NCM and I saw in the past videos that you and your team are doing the essay reviews for free in the fall. I'm wondering if that offer is still up :) Your videos have given me so much guidance and ideas on how to approach my essays and it has made the application process, especially for a low-income student like me, so much less daunting. Please keep up the great work!

    • @danielsolis5403
      @danielsolis5403 Месяц назад

      Honestly there is a few of u ! N d,s its

  • @somview
    @somview 3 месяца назад

    🎉I appreciated a lot!!
    ❤ Congratulations on your beautiful wedding ㅡ
    Kevin, you're the sweetest and warmest person, going to be the happiest man alive!
    - from someone who has watched ALL your videos 5 times.😊

  • @waterthecan
    @waterthecan 3 месяца назад +6

    i thought on the yale podcast they said they put "led" because they wanted to know about an actual moment in the past that made you want to apply, and that it's short because they don't want you to do the basic here's-what-i-did-->here's-what-you-have format...

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 месяца назад +2

      You're right! I've been studying the Yale transcript (a lot) recently, and what you said regarding "Here's what I did" is the same as "a moment in the past that made you want to apply". To answer your question, even though it's short, they still want you to follow the here's what you did -> here's what I'll do at Yale format (with slightly more emphasis on the first part)... lmk if that makes sense

  • @sanjanacm5082
    @sanjanacm5082 3 месяца назад +1

    You’re the best Kevin! 😊

  • @godblessyou4068
    @godblessyou4068 Месяц назад

    A gem for real

  • @imasd2075
    @imasd2075 3 месяца назад +2

    Hi Kevin, wonderful insights as always. I would like to ask if you and your team have any experience with transfer students because on the sites i haven't seen anything related to it. Thank you :)

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  3 месяца назад

      Yes we do! We help kids successfully transfer each year :)
      Feel free to fill out our form on our website: www.elevated.school/getstarted

  • @lynnebimrat
    @lynnebimrat 3 месяца назад +1

    thank you kevin 🙌

  • @Lucaa-uf8lh
    @Lucaa-uf8lh 3 месяца назад

    Great video Kevin! Thank you!Do you suggest a similar approach for the “how do you hope to use your Harvard education in the future?” Essay?

  • @AjokDaniel-ej8it
    @AjokDaniel-ej8it Месяц назад

    Kev the GOAT

  • @graceqiu9995
    @graceqiu9995 3 месяца назад

    What are your thoughts on the Stanford why us essay? It isn’t entirely like the other ones in your video in my opinion !

  • @physics_senior
    @physics_senior 3 месяца назад

    BrO, can I say that we want to continue a kind of project established in a particular uni. that I have mostly been interested in and have similar ECs

  • @andysheng1109
    @andysheng1109 3 месяца назад

    Oracle Zhen prevails once again

  • @marianokuot
    @marianokuot Месяц назад

    Hi, how do i get my essay review?

  • @danielsolis5403
    @danielsolis5403 Месяц назад +1

    Let's go 19 ! 🎉😢_________________

  • @samilatifi8178
    @samilatifi8178 2 месяца назад

    harvard ask me how will you use our education in the future. can somebody show me a video for that essay.
    kevin please instruct me i think i am only one who is applying from afghanistan.
    thanks

  • @sabalpoudel9331
    @sabalpoudel9331 3 месяца назад

    thanks

  • @vss318
    @vss318 3 месяца назад

    1 minute gang

  • @elma02530
    @elma02530 3 месяца назад +2

    what about AI involvement, like chat gpt

  • @elevatedschool
    @elevatedschool  3 месяца назад +1

    Over the last 3 years, we’ve edited thousands of college essays and helped hundreds of seniors from around the world gain more than 600+ acceptances to top 20 schools. If you’d like your essay professionally edited, we’d be honored to help!
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  • @AjokDaniel-ej8it
    @AjokDaniel-ej8it Месяц назад

    Kev the GOAT